Romance भंवर (पूर्ण)

[nain11ster]

Running Story....

Read The Fantasy Drama Menia
Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai~Ajab Sa Risk Hai~Reload


Real All My Completed Stories....

Enjoy The Emotions And Thriller Journey..
100 Encounter:- The Journey Of An Innocent Girl

Read The Thrill In Romance...
Bhanvar

Read Crazy Fantasy Romance Drama
Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai..... Ajab Sa Risk Hai....​

 

[Aakash.]

Amy and Apasyu drown in a sea of love, well forgetting the chronic pain and become one. The wedding should be grand and only then will it be fun. With love, the plan is also being talked about, Vinnie and Krish are also going to be in a relationship, almost all the couples are ready, just Kunjal is alone.
As always the update was great, You are writing very, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
???​

 

[Black water]

Shandaar update bhai

 

[Mbindas]

Waiting bhai

 

[Adirshi]

Acha khasa romance chal raha tha dono premiyo ka inspector saab beech main hi aa gaye khair aa hi gaye to acha hi hua vinni aur krish ki baat bhi jama hi di baba apasyu ne aur jaise meine apne purane review main bhi kaha tha Amy= beauty+brain aur ye combination rare hai par ye megha ka to samajh aata hai shreya ka kya scene hai ab tak jitna uske bare main story main padha hai wo character sahi laga hai kahi uska bhi dushmano se koi link to nahi...
badhiya update

 

[rgcrazyboy]

charo updates main full drama tha.
bus bich drame ke bich kuch khas baate bhi kaha gaye
fear readers ko bolte ho sahe sawal pucho.
to bechare masoom reader kaha se sawal leke aaye
abhi is se jada likhane ki takat nahe hai

 

[nain11ster]

fear readers ko bolte ho sahe sawal pucho.

Log besharm ho gaye hain ... swal puchna to dur hain, aakar commnet karne ki bhi fursat nahi ... ab apan bhi aaram se once in a week update dunga ... next update aane wale sunday ko... wo kya hai na readers busy hain ... so padhne ke baad comment nahi kar pate ... kuch logon ko samjh me nahi aata ki comment me kya kahen... so itne gape me writer aur readers ki samsya ka samdhan ho jaye

 

[Samri]

पता नहीं क्यूँ लग रहा है कि बहुत सी बाकी कहानियों की तरह यह कहानी भी अधूरी रहेगी.... ऊपर से नैन भाई का कमेंट कि सप्ताह में एक ही अपडेट देंगे मेरे इस ख्याल को पुख़्ता सा कर रहा है...

 

[Arv313]

Teer-e-najar chalane ki hasrat na palo badale me chahe katal hi kar dalo .
lekin update dene me kotahi agar hui to fir rudra tandav ho jayega lala nain11ster .
Mazedar update bhai ji
Waiting for the next update.

 

[krish1152]

Mast update

 

[rgcrazyboy]

Log besharm ho gaye hain ... swal puchna to dur hain, aakar commnet karne ki bhi fursat nahi ... ab apan bhi aaram se once in a week update dunga ... next update aane wale sunday ko... wo kya hai na readers busy hain ... so padhne ke baad comment nahi kar pate ... kuch logon ko samjh me nahi aata ki comment me kya kahen... so itne gape me writer aur readers ki samsya ka samdhan ho jaye

kaha se utha ke lai ho ye line ne.
kuch bhi ho par ye idea acha na hai.

ye wala idea try karo
din main char pacha update do to reader or writer ki dono ki samasya khatam ho jai gi