Romance भंवर (पूर्ण)

[nain11ster]

Running Story....

Read The Fantasy Drama Menia
Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai~Ajab Sa Risk Hai~Reload


Real All My Completed Stories....

Enjoy The Emotions And Thriller Journey..
100 Encounter:- The Journey Of An Innocent Girl

Read The Thrill In Romance...
Bhanvar

Read Crazy Fantasy Romance Drama
Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai..... Ajab Sa Risk Hai....​

 

[Indrajeet]

Bahut hi shandar update bhai but aaj sirf itne se man nhi manega .....mujhe to ek aur update chahiye..aur aap wo de bhi rahe h

 

[rgcrazyboy]

chane ke jhad pe chadhake, jad sahit kaat dun ...na rahega baans, na bajegi bansuri.. kissa hi khatam kar deni hai

aye sa bhi kar sakti ho aap.
main masum itni gaharai tak nhi ja sakata kisi bhi baat ki

mere jese na samaj ko kaiko ko fasa rahe hai hai aap.

 

[rgcrazyboy]

Brilliant update... Great going

ye itana chota comment apun accept nhi kar sakata

mere copy aap sab log karne lage to main to rod par aaju ga

 

[Naina]

aye sa bhi kar sakti ho aap.
main masum itni gaharai tak nhi ja sakata kisi bhi baat ki

mere jese na samaj ko kaiko ko fasa rahe hai hai aap.

nat ju yaar ....
yeh jaal toh un sabhi kirdaaro ke liye hai joh tharki anty Pallavi aur Aarav ke bich aayega...

 

[-:AARAV143:-]

.. thode reserach ke sath dhyan se story padhne ka .. 1000 ke note kahan se aaye samjh jaoge ..
sachi is inspired by reel life .. bechari parde ke scene ko kuch jyada hi reality me le li

tum abhi bache ho isliye tum apni nadani me ye swal puch gaye .. thode bade ho jao samjh jaoge ... waise harry potter ka bahut pyara ye line tha ... scene pm kar ke puch lena bata dunga

thik hai..online rahi apun scene leke aata hu :

 

[rgcrazyboy]

kal tum ko rok na hota to tum ek or update de he dete or vo aadha update padha kar apni to raat ki nind he uda jati.

fear subha se tum hare update ka ntazar or vo kab aata ye to pata bhi nhi tha.

bach gaya main ☺

 

[-:AARAV143:-]

bechari .. waqt ki mari ko mar rahe aarav .. tumhara to pura ilaz karna hoga ... koi na krenge .. bade pyar se karenge

ab kya karne wale ho

 

[Naina]

ye itana chota comment apun accept nhi kar sakata

mere copy aap sab log karne lage to main to rod par aaju ga

itne achhe update ki koi shabd hi nahin hai.. ab kya sameeksha dun

 

[-:AARAV143:-]

yes .. abhi abhi apasyu ne .. sorry matlab kuch din pahle hi apasyu ne action ke shoes apne paun me pahne hain... aur pura dhamaal kar ju aa gaya ... is bar aarav ka paatta saaf ..

apun ka koi scene na aayenga action wala

 

[-:AARAV143:-]

Kahani me kahani us kahani me bhi ek kahani
Zindagi bahot kuch dikhati hai kuch accha kuch bura usme se kuch bura aisa hota hai jo zindagi bhar bhula na ja skata jo ki in kirdaro ke ghata hai
Inki kahani badi dukhdaye dikh rahi hai
Inka vyvhar bahot hi pasand aya mast maje kar rahe hai dukh ke baad aise maje kar rahe hai wah
Dukh bantne wala ho to bade bade dukh kam hojate hai
Arav ki to jo halat hone wali hai jo apsyu ne photo khich kar lavni ko send kiya hai matlab bhoochal ane wala hai
Ye sachi ke pass kaise pohoch gaya aur sachi towel pehne hai ye kuch alag hi level chal raha hai

tum kahe najar laga rahe ho