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Romance भंवर (पूर्ण)

nain11ster

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Aaj ka update to mina kumari ke dashak main chala gaya :D

vese is baar sab story ko mix karne ke satha satha bhuta sa confusion bhi dala rahai ho.

ab dekhana ye hai ki confusion story ko aage bhadahane ke liye he hai ya tum hara hila huaa dimaga jada hi hil gaya hai :D

kabhi dekha bhi hai maim ko perform karte ya bus aiwe hi likh rahe .. jakar dekho pahle meena kumari ko :declare:... aage ke vishay me no comment .... tumhe jo lagta hai post karte rahne ka .. apan yahan padh lega :D
 

nain11ster

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Bahot hi aala update diya hai bhai padh kar maza aa gaya
Woh action seen bahot sahi tha akhrot foot gaye bicharo ke aur yeh police wala ki kundli mein jaise apasyu fatli mar ke baith gaya hai
Sachii ke sath ki conversation bahot hi sahi thi bhai maza aa gaya woh padh kar apsyu apni galti ko bhi manane se piche nahi hatata hai
Ab sanchii kya bakheda khada karegi yeh dekhana hai hospital aa kar

police wale ka ilaz chal raha hai ... uska ilaz bhi kiya jana hai :D .. dont worry yahan sab ka hisab hone wala hai.. so wait and watch :hehe:.. wo to convo ki jhalkiyan thi bhai ... pura scene to abhi shuru bhi nahi hua hai.... ji bilkul dekhiye yadi aane wale update me dikh gaya to.. warna jab dikhe tab aise surwat kijiyega.. aaj dikh gaya .... :D
 

nain11ster

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Bahut hi aala darje ka update diya he bhai. Pehle fidous ki aisi tagdi pitayi ki. Haan pitayi hi kahunga kyuki ladayi to tab hoti jab dono mukabla karte. Bechara firdaus to aise react kar raha tha jaise school me master ji dande se pitayi kar rahe ho aur vidhyarthi unse bachne ke liye idhar udhar hil dul raha ho aur ek haat upper kar ke unhe mana kar raha ho marne ke liye.

Aur riki aur jais ko jis tarah se toda he wah kasam se maja aa gya. Dono ke sath thoda sa aur khelte to maja aata. Waise agar un pictures aur videos ka description dena chahiye tha jo unke waha se mili thi. Thoda masala mil jata kahani me.

To akhir kaar sachi ji ko guilty feel ho hi gayi. Lekin haye ri ye ladakiyon ki fitrat khud ki chahe kitani bhi badi galti ho lekin patch up ke time par apne ashiq ko usaki ek koi bhi galti yaad dilakar ki tumne bhi to mujhe aisa kaha tha wo us ashiq se bhi sorry bulwa hi leti he. Kyu ki yaha par ladkiyon wala atitude samne aata he ki me hi sorry kyu bolu, tum bhi bolo.
Chalo dekhte he ki pehle sachi hospital pahuchti he ya fir us inspector ka fon. Kyuki me to uske fon ka jyada intejaar kar riya hu.

Waiting 4 next update

haan wo pitai hi thi.. ladai piche hui thi firdaush ke aadmiyon ke khilaf.... ha ha ha .. aur kehlne ka matlab hota wahan ke scene ko khinch dena ... padhne me fir wo maza na deta ... :declare:

bada anubhaw hai aap ko sorry bolne aur bulwane don o wale me .. baat kya hai ;).. bada hi bhadak gaye hain Apasyu ke sorry par :D..

khair dekhiye aane wala update kya rang lata hai.. bus aise hi pratikriya dete rahiye :dost:
 

nain11ster

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तो सांची ने आखिरकार पहल कर ही दी।
अपस्यु का रौद्र रूप बड़ा ही खतरनाक है।
बहुत ही अच्छे से सबक सिखाया गुंडों को।
लगता है दोनों की नोक झोक मे मजा आने वाला है, अगले अपडेट में।

aap darshkon ki apar demand par ye pahal karwani hi pari warna mujhe mehsus ho raha tha ki kahin screen se jute chappal bahar na aa rahe ho :D... thankooo .. bada muskil hota hai heroic build up dena .. aap ko acha laga matlab likhna mera safal ho gaya :).. dekhiye ab aane wale update me kya hota hai... lekin jo bhi hoga apni pratikriya jaroor dete jayen :)
 

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Bhai aapne Apasyu ke hatho to bohot se logo ki band bajwai hai par koi esa paida hua h jo Apasyu ki or uske bhai ki band bajaye. :D Rahi sahi ek or tufani ko taiyar kar raha hai Apasyu :D

Dekhate hai ki aage kya hota hai.
 

nain11ster

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Chalo bada bhai hone ka farj nibhaya thoda thik charector dediya :yippi:
Waise pitai mast ki hai re bawa
Unka gharana age na badhega
Nautanki family drama mast
Sachi ne cl kiya dekhte hai inki story age badhegi ya nahi par ek baat hai sachi ka charector ko build na kiya ja raha
Aur ab lavni bhi gayab hai to heroines kya kuch khshanik samay ke liye ati jati rahegi kya
Unka accha scene dedo to unke patr ko accha build milega may be agle update me sachi ka scene clear hojayega
waise surwat dekh kar itna khush nahi hone ka .. kyonki yahan kahani lab palti maar de kise pata :D... tumhara hi suggestion tha aisa hi kuch .. maine yahan use apply kar diya :D.. charecter pura build up hai ... uske liye to surwaat ke pure pure update bhi de diye the... har update me har kisi ko dikhana possible nahi hai ... baki sab ke role pahle se decided hain so dont worry :)
 

nain11ster

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Apasyu is beating bad people like a hero at full speed, I liked this style. Wow! As Apasyu's anger grew, my fun doubled. The work is done and punished, just my heart is happy.
Don't take the tension of the policeman ... Ajinkya is my special friend. :D I was longing to see this smile of Kunjal. Saachi...:love:
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...

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Apasyu hero hi hai :dazed:.... waise aakash ko romance and action pasand hai aisa mujhe feel ho riya hai :).. ajinkya is your friend .. olagta hai tumhe us police wale ka role dena hoga jiske sath Apasyu gaya tha... :D.. baki thanks a lot for such a beautiful revoo :hug:
 

nain11ster

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Bhai aapne Apasyu ke hatho to bohot se logo ki band bajwai hai par koi esa paida hua h jo Apasyu ki or uske bhai ki band bajaye. :D Rahi sahi ek or tufani ko taiyar kar raha hai Apasyu :D

Dekhate hai ki aage kya hota hai.
aaj kal likes dete hi najar aa rahe .... ye social app fb aur utube wali aadat kahan se aa gayi :bat: .... commentwa kaun dega :?:

hero ki band baja de koi to hero ki image hi chali jayegi :hint: halanki ye pura action na tha aur nahi aapne inki puri taiyari dekhi hai... jab dono samne aayenge tab aap is baat ko ache se observe kar payenge ki dono ki kaun kaun band baja sakta hai :).. toofani ko traning di ja rahi hai but kya hota hai natija wo aane wala waqt hi batayega .. abhi kuch kaha nahi ja sakta :)..

ji dekhiye aage kya hota hai aur hume b bata kar jaya kijiye kya dekha ..:)
 
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