Romance भंवर (पूर्ण)

[nain11ster]

Running Story....

Read The Fantasy Drama Menia
Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai~Ajab Sa Risk Hai~Reload


Real All My Completed Stories....

Enjoy The Emotions And Thriller Journey..
100 Encounter:- The Journey Of An Innocent Girl

Read The Thrill In Romance...
Bhanvar

Read Crazy Fantasy Romance Drama
Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai..... Ajab Sa Risk Hai....​

 

[nain11ster]

Sagar sang kinare hain

Phoolon sang baharein hain

Ho sagar sang kinare hain

Phoolon sang baharein hain

Aise hi tum mere ho aur hum tumhare hain

Haan hum tumhare hain

Bas yahi kahna hai....??????

chintu bhai .. aisa kyon lag raha hai bada romantic romantic type feel kar rahe hain... baat kya hai

 

[nain11ster]

Superb Bro

yash bhai

 

[Chinturocky]

chintu bhai .. aisa kyon lag raha hai bada romantic romantic type feel kar rahe hain... baat kya hai

Romantic mud me to Saanchi hai.
Aap pyar bhara lamha rachane me lazawab hai, inhi lamho ki wajah se kirdaron se pyar ho jaata hai.
Inhi pyar bhare lamho ke karan gajani film me heroine ke Marne ka bahut dukh hota hai per Kite film ke hero heroine ke Marne per koi afsos nahi hota, kyoki waha pyar mahsus nahi hota.
Saanchi aur apasyu ka Khana khilane wala scene abhi tak is kahani ka sabse Achchha romantic scene hai, aur aap romance king hai.??

 

[SKYESH]

good one .......but chhota tha .....


waiting for more .............................................

 

[nain11ster]

भाई ओर्जिनल ?पार्टी था तो ? इसके लिए आप के
पार्टी को ज्वाइन नहीं कर सका
और इसके लिए में माफी चाहता हूं

mafi kahe mang rahe .... bas agli baar bhai ko chupke se nimantran bhej djiyega ... hum bhi aap ko join kar lenge ...

 

[Aakash.]

Aarav said rightly, bad things happen because of money but money is also necessary. Eventually the work was completely settled. ? The commissioner is very greedy, kept all the money. ? In truth, politics is a mess. ? Virbhadra is now a player of our team.
I understand the happiness of both brothers, but please let us know the pain of both of them. ?
Saachi is lost in Aarav's thoughts, Saachi is very sweet. Aarav is very naughty and he makes the story fun.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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[nain11ster]

Ek no. Guruji. Ab to ye janne ki icha utpann ho rahi ki akhir Bhushan aur Jamil se in dono bhaiyon ka kya lena dena tha aur in dono ka itihas kya hai, ummeed hai ki kahani ke agey badhte badhte saare raaz khulne lagenge. Ab shayad romance shuru hone wala hai?. Great going bro, keep posting

Yes ... Bahut sare raaj dhire dhire khulte chale jayenge .. aur kuch raaj aur bhi gahrate jayenge... Bus aap sath nibhate rahiye... Hum sari bhadhao par paar pa lenge....

Romance to pahle update se shuru tha... Haan lekin shayad mehfil ab lagegi ... So feel the romance aur aise hi comments karte rahe

 

[nain11ster]

Ek aur love story I am biggest fan of your love story. Keep posting

ji ... shukriya aap ka meri kahaniyon ko sarahne ke liye ... mam to "keep posting" ke mood se hi hun... aap apne comment se thread se raushan karte rahiyega.

 

[nain11ster]

mamala satela hogaya
ab lagata hai khani kuch alg mode legi.
aaj update dene main deri kiya or ek he updates diya tum ko sharam nhi aaye.
kuch to sharam karo nainu.

Kahani alag mod legi ya aage koi mod hi na bacha uski charcha to story me hoti rahegi... Pahle je batao ki 10 se 10.30 baje ke bich raat ko update aata hai... Fir deri kis baat ki .. .. aur rahi baat 1 hi update ki to 1 update likh paya de diya .. nahi likh pata to wo bhi na de pata ...

Bas likhne likhne ke upar hai rg ... Kisi din jyada likh liya to 2,3 update bhi post ho jate hain

 

[Yash420]

mafi kahe mang rahe .... bas agli baar bhai ko chupke se nimantran bhej djiyega ... hum bhi aap ko join kar lenge ...

भाई जरूर ??