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Fantasy Manhoos - Part 2 (completed)

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Lovingheart

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Intro


To Dosto m a new writer on xf xp ka purana writer hu xp gayi baat gayi
Yeh sirf meri ek koshish hai to plz sath dena aasha karta hu apko pasand ayegi yeh story
Ismein thoda sa powers ka use hoga thoda sa romance aur incest bhi ho sakta hai
to plz kisi ki agar incest vajha se bhavnao ko thes pohanchti ho plz ignore kar dena story ko
Iss kahani ke sare patar kalpnik hai agar kisi se mel khate hai to kripya panic mat hona woh sab ek itefak hai

Main Pehle kisi vajha se is story ko pura nahi kar paya pura karne ki Koshish karunga

Iss kahani mein sex bagera ko shayad hi mahatab diya jaye to yeh baat bhi note kar lena
Ek aur baat story shayad kisi aur story se thoda bohat matching ho sakti hai to plz isse pehle padhna fir us bare mein baat karna
Note:- updates ka locha rahega week mein 3 updates shayad daily bhi ho jaye so plz be co-orporative
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Update raat ko start ho jayenge


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Dev the lover

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Update 1st

Ek ladki bohat gusse mein thi aur sahmne khade ladke ko dant rahi thi
Woh kafi unche sawar mein chilla rahi thi
Esa lagta hai ki koi ghar mein nahi hai

Ladki - mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum itna gir jaoge aur itni ghatiya harkat karoge

Ladka -(rote hue) meri baat suno plz maine esa kuch nahi kiya

Ladki - mujhe kuch nahi sunna mujhe nahi pata tha tum mujhe mere pyar ka yeh sila doge ghinn ati hai mujhe tum per itni neech harkat karte hue tumhe jara c bhi sharam nahi ayi

Ladka - lekin maine esa kuch nahi kiya di

Tabhi chaaaatttaaakkkkk ki awaz ayi


Us ladki ne ladke khich ke tamacha mara

Ladki - mat keh mujhe apni gandi juban se di mar gya aaj se tu mere liye samjha

Aur isi ke sath woh us room se nikal gayi aur woh ladka use rokne ke liye uske piche gya par tab tak woh ladki apne room mein jake darwaza band kar chuki thi

Ladka bahar se use pukarta raha

Ladka - di meri baat suno plz
Di ek bar meri baat sunlo plz

Aur isi ke sath uski sanse ukhadne lagi
Aur woh lambi lambi sanse lene laga aur uski ankhen band hone lagi par pata nahi kaha se ek dam uske chehre pe pani ki bunde girne lagi aur uski band hoti ankhen khul gayi
Aur woh ek dam se uth ke baith gya

Woh is waqt apne room mein apne bed par tha
Tabhi uski nazar sahmne khadi ladki par padti hai

Ladki pyar se uske sar pe hath pherne lagi
Aur use gale laga liya

Ladki - phir se woh sapna aya tum bhul kyu ni jate woh sab woh sab beeti hui batein hai

(Note:- sapne wali ladki aur yeh hakikat wali ladki dono alag alag hai inke characters waqt ane pe pata chalenge)

Ladka - didi kya karu woh sab bhula hi ni jata di ki woh batein aaj bhi yaad ati hai aur mera dil cheer deti hai jab ki meri koi galti bhi nahi thi

Aur woh ladka rone laga

Ladki - betu chup hoja dekh rote nahi hai aur tune apni begunahi sabit kar di thi na fir kyu un sab baton ko yaad karte ho

Ladka - didi un logo ne ek bar bhi meri baat nahi suni thi aur jo jo batein unho ne kahi woh sab aaj bhi iss dil ko tar tar kar deti hai

Ladki - (baat badlte hue) chal chodh ready hoja mujhe bhi der ho rahi hai office jana hai

Ladka - ok di

Ladki - acha yeh bata aaj college jaoge ya office ana hai

Ladka - di aaj college jaunga do din ho gaye hai

Ladki ne pyar se uske hotho pe halke se chuma aur usse alag ho gayi

Ladka -(chidte hue) di apko kitni bar bola hai yahan pe kissi mat kiya karo

Ladki - kyu main karungi akhir mera itna cute sa bhai jo hai

Aur ek baar aur ek hotho ko pyar se chum liya
Is baar ladka ek takiya utha ke use marne hi wala tha ki woh ladki vahan se haste hue bhag gayi aur woh ladka bhi muskurate hue bathroom mein ghuss gya

Woh ladki niche jake kitchen mein ghus gayi aur nashte ki tyari karne lagi kuch der mein woh ladka bhi ready hoke aa gya Aur dinnig table ke pass ake chair pe baith gya

Kuch der mein woh ladki khana leke aa gayi ek plate mein khana serve karke woh us ladke ki goad mein hi baith gayi

Yeh inka roz ka tha phir woh apne hatho se us ladke ko khilane lagi aur woh ladka bhi kuch der mein un dono ka khana finish ho gya

Ladka - didi aap itni badi ho gayi ho fir bhi meri goad mein baith jati ho

Ladki - to kya hua meri marzi main chahe yahan bhi baithu tumhe isse kya

Ladka - plz ese mat kiya karo azeeb sa feel hota hai

Ladki uske face ke kreeb apna face lekar jate hue in sexy voice

Ladki - kya ajeeb sa feel hota hai jara mujhe bhi batao

Aur yeh bolke usne apne hoth kate jisse us ladke ki hawa tight ho gayi

Ladka - d..d..di...didi p.p..plz hame der ho ri hai

Aur woh jaldi se apni didi ko side karke bahar ki aur bhagne laga aur woh ladki vahan khade hoke jor se hasne lagi

Fir kuch der baad muskurate hue boli apne aap se

Ladki - bhai yahi vajha hai ki mere dil mein tumhare liye pyar din wa din badhta ja raha hai itni line dene ke baad bhi tumne ab tak mujh se esi vesi harkat karne ki sochi bhi nahi I Love You bhai I really Very Love you i will wait for you for my whole life

Aur yeh bolke woh bhi office ke liye nikal gayi
Aur in dono ke jane ke baad piche se nokar ake ghar ki saaf safayi bagera karne lage
Yeh unka roz ka routine tha raat ko sara kam nipta ke sare nokar servent quatars mein chale jate the aur subha in dono ke jane ke baad aa jate the

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Door kisi shehar mein 4 log dinnig table pe baithe the sab log shanti se khana kha rahe the in mein ek mard tha ek aurat aur do ladkia thi

Itne mein Aurat boli

Aurat - Meera beta Kishan se baat hui kya tumhari

Meera - han hui thi na kal raat ko hi hui thi aur aap ke liye ek buri khabar hai ki woh zinda hai

Dusri ladki - Meera badon se baat karne ka tareeka bhul gayi ho kya

Meera - ufffff haye dar gayi main to darasal baat yeh hai miss Megha Singhania main badon se baat ni kar rahi balki main to apne bhai ke gunhegaro se baat kar rahi hu

Megha - (gusse mein) bs bohat hua tumhara manti hu ki woh hamari galti thi par

Meera - (bhadkte hue uski baat vich mein katte hue) par kya? han par kya? Aap ko aaj bhi apni galti ka ehsas nahi hai ab to aap logo se mujhe baat karne ka bhi mann ni karta padhe likhe gawar

Aur itna bol ke woh vahan se uth gayi aur bahar nikal gayi vahan baithe bakki teeno Megha, aurat aur woh mard bs nam akhen liye baithe the Meera ki baaton ne unhe dard pohanchaya tha

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Intro time

Abhay Singhania - yeh india ke ek jane mane bussinessman hai hero Kishan ke papa

Avantika Singhania - yeh hero ko maa hai aur housewife hai

Megha Singhania - yeh Hero ki badi behan hai nature ki thodi se garam hai par aaj kal yeh apni ki gayi galti ki vajha se akeli si rehne lagi hai yeh is waqt M.B.A. last year mein hai

Kishan Singhania - yeh Hero shant subhaw ka par jab gussa ata hai out of control ho jata hai aur Aaj kal Yeh dusre city mein rehta hai ghar walo se naraz hai bas apni choti behan ko chodh ke aur woh iski jaan hai dono mein bohat pyar hai

Meera - yeh Hero ki choti behan hai ek dam cute aur natkhat par jab se Hero ne ghar chodha hai tab se isne shararate band kardi hai bas tab hi masti karti hai jab iska bhai iske pass hota hai

One more main character

Pihu Gupta - yeh vahi ladki hai jise Kishan didi bula raha tha yeh Kishan ki muh boli behan hai iska Kishan ke ilava duniya mein aur koi bhi nahi hai kuch saal pehle iske papa aur mummy ki death ho gayi thi tab Kishan ne hi ise sambhala tha han kuch rishtedar hai Pihu ke jo samay pe ayenge par Pihu ke bure waqt mein unho ne uska sath nahi diya tha bas ek cousin ko chodh ke




Bakki aur bohat se character hai jo age ayenge to sath bane rahe an give me support
Mast update hai yaar waise bhai tumhari story kaa thoda yeh chize bhaut mast lagati hai joh excitement phele update mai hota hai Aur charchters kaa detailing aur mast dhasu aata hai dekhate hai wajah kaya uss galati ki waise lagata hai kabhi padhi hai kahi par yeh story
 

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Komal ghar se nikal ke apni ek matar dost ke pass gayi uski aur Komal ki friendship market mein hui thi yeh middle class ghar se thi

Komal ne car se utar ke ghar ka darwaza khatkhataya under se ek ladki nikli usne Komal ko nahi pehchana kyu Komal ka pura rang dhang badal gya tha kaha woh fate purane kapdo wali Komal kahan yeh ache khase kapdo wali komal

Ladki - hanji kis se milna hai

Komal - (muskurate hue) ji mujhe Roop se milna hai

Ladki - hanji main hi Roop hu kahiye kya kam hai

Komal - are Roop tune mujhe nahi pehcana

Roop - nahi to aap kon ho maine to apko pehli bar dekha hai

Komal - are Roop main Komal hu

Roop - (shocked) kya such mein..?

Komal - han meri behan main Komal hi hu

Yeh bolke usne Roop ko jhappi daal li

Roop - kya such mein to Komal hai lekin kal tak to

Komal - han Roop kal tak to main fate purane kapdo mein ghum rahi thi aur aaj achanak ese kapdo mein suj dhaj ke ayi hu yahi na yahi puchna chahti hai na tu...?

Roop - han magar

Komal - chal ander chal yahi darwaze pe khada rakhogi kya ander chalo sab batati hu

Roop - han chalo main to bhul hi gayi thi

Komal ke piche piche bg bhi aa gayi Komal ne Roop se uska prichay karwata
Fir woh dono Roop ke room mein chali gayi

Roop - han ab bata yeh sab kya hai?

Komal - baat yeh hai ki maine tujhe bataya tha na ki mera ek aur bhai hai

Roop - han tune bataya tha

Komal - han woh kuch dino mein hi laut ke aa raha hai ghar pe aur yeh sab usi ne bheja hai mere liye

Roop - kya such mein...? Lekin tune to kaha tha ki woh bohat chota tha jab use ghar se kahi door fhenk diya gya tha fir woh vapis kese aya aur tum logo ko pehchana kese

Komal - woh to nahi malum Roop par han unko secratary ayi thi uski baton se pata chala hai ki bhai bohat bade bussiness man hai aur bussinessmans ke liye yeh sab choti batein hai

Aur Roop ko aaj ki sari batein bata di

Roop - han yeh to hai lekin main aaj ter liye bohat khush hu tujhe is saaf suthri halat mein dekh ke bohat khushi ho rahi hai

Yeh bolke Roop ne Komal ko hug kar liya itne mein aunty Room mein chali leke enter hui

Aunty - yeh lo bachio chai piyo (chai ke cup bed pe rakhte hue boli) are Roop tune apni nayi dost se mera intro ni karwaya

Aunty ke baat sun ke Komal aur Roop dono hasne lagi

Aunty - kya hua dono hasne kyu lagi maine koi joke sunaya kya

Komal - are Aunty apne mujhe suchi mein nahi pehchana kya

Aunty - awaaz to jani pehchani lag rahi hai (fir aunty ne Komal ko gaur se dekha) (shocked) Kooommaaallll


Komal - ji aunty


Aunty - (gale lagate hue) tujhe ese dekh ke pata hai mujhe kitna skoon mil raha hai tumhare ghar wale sudhar gye kya

Fir Komal ne aunty ko sari baat batayi jis se aunty khush ho gayi

Aunty - bohat khushi ki baat hai beta ki tumhara bhai vapis aa raha hai chalo ab dil ko shanti rahegi ki meri dusri beti bhi ab hassi khushi zindgi guzaregi

Komal - pata hai aunty aaj main bhi bohat khush hu achanak se bhai ki ane ki khabar ne meri zindgi hi badal di hai

Aunty - ese hi sada khush raho meri bachi

Komal - acha aunty main Roop ko apne sath le jau bahar khana khane

Aunty - beta main tumhe mana to nahi karungi par aaj rehne do tum bahar ka khana aaj main tum logo ke liye acha sa khana banati hu apne hatho se tum log kal kha lena bahar kyu ki mujhe pata hai yeh bhi tumhari hasrat hai ek bahar ka khana haina sahi bol rahi hu na main

Komal - han aunty apne sahi kaha bachpan se bas un logo ka bacha kucha khana hi khaya hai woh jab bhi bahar khana khane jate to dil mein hamesa tease uthti thi ki main kab ese bahar khana khaungi par aaj dekho bhai ne meri khawahish puri kardi

Aunty - han beta chalo main khana banati hu tab tak tum dono batein karo ok

Komal - ok aunty

Aunty ke jate hi Roop boli Komal se

Roop - acha Komal tune apne bhai se baat ki

Komal - nahi abi tak to nahi

Roop - kyu nahi ki yahan tak Readers ke mann mein bhi yahi sawal hoga ki ek pura din ho gya hath mein phone aye par apne bhai ko abi tak call nahi ki

Komal - are Roop readers samjhdar hai woh meri confusion samjh rahe honge tujhe pata hai maine apne bhai aaj tak dekha nahi hai na hi uske bare mein pura pata hai to main kya batein karungi unse han agar woh mere sahmne hote to hazro batein karti unse par abi phone pe kese baat karu na mujh se phone pe baat hogi abi

Roop - are Pagal ladki thodi c baat to kar call pe readers ke dil ko bhi shanti milegi

Yeh bol ke usne Komal se phone cheena aur Kishan jani ki mera number dial kar ke Komal ke kan pe laga diya

Komal - Roop samjh na tu meri baat

Isse pehle ki Roop kuch bolti maine call pich kar li

Main - hello Meri Pari

Komal ne kuch nahi kaha bs ek dam se shant ho gayi uski ankhon mein nami aa gayi pehli bar woh apne bhai ki awaaz sun rahi thi jiska intezar woh kitne hi waqt se kar rahi thi

Main - kya hua pari naraz ho kya

Komal kuch nahi boli bas uske muh se siski nikli

Main - are gudiya kya hua ro kyu rahi ho

Komal - bhaiyaa

Aur Komal ke muh se bs itna hi nikla aur woh rone lagi Roop ne use gale se laga diya

Main - shhhh mera bacha rona ni hai rone ke din gaye ab to hasne ke din hai kya samjho

Komal - (rote hue) bhaiya aap kab aa rahe ho

Main - jald hi gudiya par tu yeh pehle rona band kar

Komal - bhaiya Jaldi mere pass aa jao na

Main - han gudiya main jaldi hi tere pass aunga kuch jaruri kam hai woh pura hote hi tere sahmne aa jaunga main

Komal - pakka na

Main - han pakka gudiya chal ab rona band karde aur smile kar de

Komal - (siskate hue) bhaiya jaldi aa jao na

Main - han aaraha hu main gudiya pehle yeh tu rona band kar aur smile kar nahi to main nahi aunga

Ek dam se Komal ne ansun ponche aur smile ki

Komal - nahi nahi main nahi ro rahi par aap jaldi aa jao dekhi samile bhi kar rahi hu bs bhaiya aap naraz na hona mujh se

Main - nai hota naraz gudiya bs ese hi smile karti rehna chalo mujhe abi kam hai main baad mein call karta hu

Yeh bolke maine call cut kar diya kiya ki control to mujh se bhi nahi ho raha tha meri bhi ankhein nam thi apni behan se baar karke main bohat khush tha udhar Komal aur Roop

Roop ne abi bhi Komal ko hug ki hui thi Komal ke chehre pe smile bikhri hui thi abhi bhi

Roop - to meri banno kesa laga bhai se baat karke

Komal - main bata ni sakti Roop ki main kitni khushi hu

Roop - han woh to tera chehra bata raha hai

Komal - thank you Roop

Roop - are pagal tere liye jaan bhi hazir


Fir woh dono gappe ladane lagi
Fabulous update
 

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Pihu se bhag ke Kishan bahar ake jaldi se bike pe baith ke college ke liye nikal gya
Aur Pihu haste hue apne office ke liye chali gayi

Kishan apne college ki aur badha ja raha tha
Aur uske chehre pe ek badi wali smile thi
Aur woh khud se batein kar raha tha

Kishan - yeh didi bhi na hadd kar deti hai ese behave karti hai jese main unka bf hu har waqt kiss karne ka bahana dhundti hai unhe jyada gusse se kuch keh bhi nahi sakta kyu ki na to unka mere sivha koi aur hai aur na hi Meera aur didi ke ilava mera koi aur hai inke door jane ja ruthne ka main soch bhi nahi sakta

Aur kuch pal ke liye uske chehre pe sadness aa gayi par fir se usne in baton se khud ko nikala aur smile karne laga


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Idhar ek college mein kuch seniors freshers ki raging kar rahe the

Ek group mein abhi kafi jald bazi thi

L - are jaldi karo jitne logo ki raging kar sako karlo aaj Kishan aa raha hai college mein

Chamcha 1 - ane bhai use aap usse utna darte kyu

C2 - han bhai woh akela hai aur ham kitne hai

L - chup maro salo tum sab uske sahmne cheenti saman ho bhul gaye kya jab woh nya nya aya tha college mein to usne kis tarha Arvind ki band bajayi thi aur uske baad kabhi Arvind college mein nahi dikha

C3 - bhai woh din kese bhul sakte hai uske baad takreeban sabhi ki faat gayi thi koi bhi college mein galat kam nahi karta tha air aaj bhi sab ka vahi haal hai

C2 - bhai aap bade bhai se bolke luch karbao uska

Chhhhaaatttaaaakkkkkk


Leader ne use thapad mara aur bola


L - abe eda hai kya agar bhai ne kuch kiya to ham dono bhaio ka iss city se dana pani band ho jayeha samjha nikal ja ab hamre gand se chal bhaag


Itne mein ek dusra group ek ladki ki raging le raha tha iss group mein 5 boys the aur 3 girls

G1 - chalo ladki apna intro do

Ladki - (darte hue) ji mera name Mahi hai
Aur main iss college mein bca 1st year mein hu

Ladka 1 - what is your size?

Mahi - (gusse se) what rubbish? Tameez nahi hai kya

G2 - size hi to pucha hai ismein tameez wali baat kaha se ayi

Mahi - itna hi shonk hai to khud ko bata do ise

Ladka 2 - juban kuch jyada ni chalti tumhari

Mahi - hath bhi chalte hai chalau kya

Ladka 5 - (jo ki shayad leader tha inka) haye janeman teekhi mirchi ho chakhne ka maza ayega yeh ko mera address raat ko yahan pe aa jana fir puri raat jannat ki sair karvayenge

Itna bol woh aur uske sathi hasne lage
Aur Mahi ne gusse mein ladke 5 ke chehre pe chanta marna chaha par usne usse pehle hi hath pakad liya

Yeh scene kuch der pehle wala Leader aur uske chamche dekh rahe the


C1 - bhai yeh peetenge aaj

L - sahi kaha iss MLA ke londe mein kuch jyada hi akad hai aaj nikal jayegi iski sari hekdi ane use


Usne abhi itna hi bola tha ki gate se ek ladka chilaya

Ladka - Kishan aa raha hai sab log sahi se behave karo

Yeh khabar sunte hi jo log raging kar rahe the sab ache bache ban gaye par canteen tak yeh baat nahi pohnchi

Aur idhar Ladka 5 ne abi tak Mahi ka hath pakad rakha tha

G1 - Rahul chodh Kishan aa raha

Ladka 1 - to ane do aaj usse do do jath ho hi jayen

G2 - pagal ho gaye ho kya tum log bhul gaye kya usne Arvind uske chamcho aur Arvind ke bhai ki kya halat ki thi

Ladka 4 - hame sab kuch yaad hai par aaj ham usse uski aukat dikha ke rahenge


Tabhi college ke gate se Kishan ki aur uske bike ki entry hui

G3 use dekh ke apni dono sathi se

G3 - chalo ham teeno chalti hai in pancho se hospital mein mil lenge chalo jaldo verna hame bhi hospital mein jana padega kyu ki uske piche hi Esha aa rahi hai jaldi chalo

Uske baad woh teeno vahan se 9+2=11 ho gayi

Kishan ne bhi yeh sara scene door se hi dekh liya Kishan ne bike seedha us aur badha ki

(Bc lagta hai baap ka college hai sala compound mein bike ghusa li)

Kishan ne seedha jake vahan break lagaye aur utarte hi Rahul ko thappad pad gya aur woh Mahi ka hath chodh ke gir gya

Iss vajha se Kishan ki hassi chut gayi

Kishan - abe bc tu to ek hi thappad mein gir gya kya yaar ladki ka hath pakad abi tak to ek mard bana hua tha ab kya hua:lotpot:

Rahul - (khade hote hue) yeh tune acha nahi kiya Kishan mujhe thappad maar ke aaj tu nahi ja main nahi

Kishan - are o bable koi acha se dialogue mar yaar

Rahul - sale main dialogue nahi marunga sirf teri haddi pasli todunga

Kishan - to itni der se bakwas kyu kar raha hai seedha se fight kar deemag ka bhajipala kahe ko kar raha

Ladka 4 - tum kuch jyada hi uchal rahe ho jante ho iske pita ji kon hai

Kishan - vahi ghisa peeta dialogue janta hu iss aur iske baap ko iska name Rahul hai aur iska baap hai yahan ka Mojuda MLA...
Ab time waste mat karo action ka time ho raha hai aur han class ka bhi

Ladka 2 - bhai lagta hai usko iski aukat dikhani padegi

Kishan - to aaj jao yaar kitni bak bak karoge


Yeh sabhi ek dusre ki aur badhe hi the ki teen awazein ek sath ayi

"Time please listen"




Sawal - kon hai yeh teen log?
Kyu roka inho ne un sab ko?
Akhir kya vajha hai?
ess update sai aisa laga jaise koi superhero aa raha aur sabki gaand fat rahi ho Mast tha aur har story mai Mla ke chutiye jarur aate hai apni mai ched karwani dekhaate hai roaka kisnai hai ennko
 

Dev the lover

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Abhi Kishan aur Rahul aur uski team abi ek dusre ki taraf badhe hi the ki teen awaz ek sath ayi

"Time Please And Listen Please"

Woh sabhi kuch pal ke liye ruke
Aur awaz ki taraf dekha yeh awaaz thi Kishan ke teen dosto ki Arun Esha aur Nitin ki

Kishan - kya hua kyu roka yaar bohat din baad hath ki khujli mitane ko mili hai

Esha - are are sweat heart maine hamne kab roka?

Kishan - abi to roka yaar vich mein tapak ke

Nitin - are rukja tau woh to ham logo ne tere ko iss liye roka kyu ki yeh ladki yahan khadi hai kahi tum logo ke lafde mein is ko chot na lag jaye

Kishan - are baap re apun to yeh socha hi nahi

Arun - (ladki se) chaliye madam side mein khade hoke is scene ka maza lijiye (fir Kishan se) you please carry on

Aur woh teeno us ladki ko leke side ho gaye aur ek bench pe baith gaye aur Arun ne apne bag se popcorn nikal liye jo woh hamesha apne pass rakhta tha

Fir Kishan aur Rahul aur uski team ek sath bheed gaye ab Kishan Akela aur woh Panch

(Galat hai na yaar ek akele ke sath 5 log ab to sab ki maa chhooooo...

Kishan - abe oye ghunchu rukja kahe ko gali nikal ra maa bhen ki bhutni ke maa bhen sab ki ek hoti hai

Third person - sorry dude just mistaken

Kishan - ok ok chal bohat deemag kharab kar liya in logo ka chal abe scene dikha inko aur mera bhi mood mat kharab kar fighting ka chal re khujli ho rahi hai
Aaaahhhhhh abe sale marva diya na kute ne piche se mara re chal nikal yahan se main khud bataunga ab

Third person - main lout ke aunga

Kishan - han re main khud bula lunga chal nikal ab patli gali se


Now the point view of Kishan)

Main aur Rahul ki team bhid chuke the woh log hamla kiye ja rahe the aur main block kiye ja raha tha

Udhar se Nitin bola

Nitin - abe Kishan Jaldi khatam kar class ka waqt hone wala hai

Kishan - ok


Ab tak main normally chal rah tha per ab time ki shortage thi
Fir main ab attacking ke mode pe aa gya
Jisko jo chahiye woh diya jani ki laat ghusa

Sab se pehle ladka 1 gira fir no 4 uske baad no 2 ne dhul chati aur fir turn ayi No 3 ki aur iske jabde pe yeh padi ek jor dar laat:lotpot: sala do palti khake muh ke bal gira aur ab postion thi muh jameen pe aur pond(g**d) hawa mein jani ki doggy style

(Third person - koi ladko ka deewana hai to iski maar sakta hai:lotpot:

Kishan - tu fir se tapak gya bc maine kaha tha main tujhe khud bulaunga

Third person - ghanta bc sare action scrne ki maa behan ek kardi hat yahan se mujhe batane de xhutiya kahi ka

Kishan - fuck off:angry+:

Third person view)

sabhi uski halat pe hass rahe hai idhar Rahul aag babula ho raha tha kyu ki uski team ki waat lagi padi thi

Ab baat yahan izzat pe aa gayi thi to usne apni pocket se choti gun nikal li

(Ab bc MLA ka beta hai ese xhutiya khilone to rakhega hu but bull shit use na kar payega)

Aur Yeh padi uske jabde pe ek jordar laat aur Rahul sahib Dhool chat rahe hai hua yu ki jese hi usne apni pocket se gun nikali Kishan ne dekh liya aur Bijli ki furti se use ek spin kick lagayi jo ki thodi jor se lagi aur Rahul behosh

(Kaha tha na bc use na kar payega sala har kisi ke bas ka thodi na hai)

Kishan ne kisi ko phone kiya aur use kuch samjhaya fir woh apni team ke sath canteen ki aur chal diya

(Are ruko jyada neeche mat jana yahan ka ek scene bakki hai to padho)

Yeh log jese hi canteen ko chal pade to Rahul jo ki behosh hone ki acting kar raha tha usne sar utha ke dekha to Mahi ne peeche mud ke use thumbs up kiya aur Idhar se Rahul ne bhi use thumbs up kiya aur dono ke chehre pe ek smile thi

(Matlab bhisi koi plan bnaya tha kya in logo ne
Aur iss Kishan ko pata bhi nahi chala abe Kishan Chehra padh Mahi ka abe sun

Lo bhaio yeh na sunne wala jab kameene ko jhagdna hota hai aa jata hai)

Canteen mein abi tak bahar ke jhagde ki bhanak tak na lagi thi aur yahan bhi ragging chalu thi aur entry hui Esha aur Kishan ki first table pe jo ki gate ke pass hi tha uspe ek ladki ladko raging kar rahi thi

Esha ne uske sar pe tapli mar ke apne hath ki khujli mitayi bs itna kafi tha ki vahan raging karne walo ko apne hatho aur peron(feets) ki pad gayi aur sabhi jo seniors the apne apne jutte sar pe rakh ke bhagne lage sirf ache seniors ko chodh ke

Aur sabhi juniors khush ho gaye yeh pancho bhi apni table pe baith gaye jaa kar
Pehle yeh 4 logo ka table hota tha aaj panch logo ka hai kyu ki Mahi bhi baithi hai
fight update badhiyaa thaaa woh phele pta chal gya thaaa
 

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Mast update hai yaar waise bhai tumhari story kaa thoda yeh chize bhaut mast lagati hai joh excitement phele update mai hota hai Aur charchters kaa detailing aur mast dhasu aata hai dekhate hai wajah kaya uss galati ki waise lagata hai kabhi padhi hai kahi par yeh story
Thanks bhai
Tumhe achi lagi to aur kya chahiye
 
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