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Kah do usse Jo aaya hai vo Jayega
Phir Phir Jeevan Payega,

Tere Tan ke Dhaanche Par
Amaratva Prapt Baithi Ek Chidiya Daal Hilate Ud Jayegi

Chhod Sunahre Aamo ki Bagiya,

Phir Jo Lout ke Ayegi
Vilag Roop Dhang Payegi
Apno ko na Pahchanegi
Hosh Gawan ke Ayegi,

Nar me Nark, Nark me Nar Hain
Tar me Tark, Tark me Tar Hain
Sukh me Swarg, Swarg me Sukh Hain
Gyan heen Prani me Dukh Hain,

Sukh Dukh ke do Pahlu Se
Jisne Khushiyo ko Cheen Liya
Sagar ki Gahrayee me Jakar
Usne Moti Been Liya,

Kar Le Karma Nek is Jag Mein
Bhar Le Tijori Eshwar ke Ghar Mein
Moh Maya Bas Rakh Itna
Chahe Koyi Sant Jitna,

Na Lekar Aaya Tha Kuch
Na Hi Kuch Lekar Jayega
Kal ko Tera Apna Hi
Tujh ko Mitti Mein Dafanayega,

Khadi Haweli Rupaye Paise
Sau Acad Jamin Rah Jayegi
Bas Teri Lambayi Barabar
Jamin Tere Hisse Ayegi,

Phir Jo Lout ke Ayega
Vilag Roop Dhang Payega
Apno ko Na Pahchanega
Hosh Gawan ke Ayega
kya panktiya likhi hai aapne...mantramugdh kar diya lajawab....
 

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UPDATE*72

Mere ghar se chale jane ke baad vaha kuch samay tak sannata chhaya raha….mummy apne room me chali gayi aur andar se door lock kar liya

Margret apne ghar chali gayi….sonalika ko bhi shree ne parilok chale jane ko kah diya, lihaja vo bhi pari lok chali gayi, lekin chitra uska koi pata nahi kaha hai…dikhti to vo kisi ko thi nahi to uske bare me kuch bhi malum nahi chal paya

Shree apne kamre me jakar rone lagi….use bhi shayad adi ki vajah se dukh pahucha tha….kafi der tak bistar me let kar vo roti rahi

Shree (mann me)—maine tumhe kya samjha tha adi…..tumne aisa kyo kiya….? Main tumhare liye tumhara address na malum hone ke bavjud india se yaha tak chali aayi, kewal tumhara pyar pane….lekin tum mere us pyar ke kabil nahi nikle….mujhe tabhi samajh jana chahiye tha jab maine tumhe india ke hotel me margret aur sona ke sath bina kapdo ke sote huye range hath pakda tha….meri mati mari gayi thi jo maine phir bhi tujhe pyar kiya…teri salamti ke liye bhagwan se vinti karti rahi…..mera dil tod kar tujhe kya mila,adi…..?

Aise hi rote rote shree sochti rahi aur phir so gayi….shaam me need khuli to use urmila ki chinta huyi…turant bistar se uth kar urmila ka door knock karne lagi

Shree (knock karte)—mousi, darwaja kholo

Magar koyi awaz nahi aayi…shree ne bahut baar knock kiya, awaz lagayi kintu andar se urmila ki koyi prati kriya nahi hote dekh kar vo behad ghabra gayi

Usne turant apne mousa anand ko office call lagaya sath me sanjay ko bhi jo ki anand ke hi sath ghumne gaya hua tha…shree ka call dekh kar na chahte huye bhi anand ne call pick kar liya…lekin shree ki awaz me ghabrahat mahsus karte hi turant serious ho gaya

Anand—hello

Shree –mousa ji…vo mousi darwaja nahi khol rahi hain

Anand—kyo….?

Shree—pata nahi…subah se andar hi hain…koyi awaz bhi nahi aa rahi unki

Anand—theek hai, main abhi pahuchta hu

Anand aur sanjay jaldi hi office se nikal gaye…idhar shree lagatar door knock karti rahi….akhir badi der baad urmila ne door open kiya

Uski ankhe poori lal aur suji huyi dikh rahi thi….lagta hai shayad vo subah se roti hi rahi hain…unhe dekhte hi shree lipat gayi

Shree—kya mousi main kab se knock kar rahi hu….? Aapne aaj kuch khaya bhi nahi hai subah se…..Aur ye aapne apni kya halat bana li hai….?

Urmila (udas )—main theek hu

Shree—chaliye main khana lagati hu….pahle khana khao aap baad me baat karna

Urmila—adi ne kha liya…..?

Shree—adi....... ?

Achanak shree ko yaad aaya ki adi to uske baad ghar hi nahi aaya....ab usko bhi chinta huyi ki kahi sach me to kahi na chala gaya ghar chhod kar.... ?

Urmila—tumne bataya nahi.... ? Adi ne khana kha liya....... ?

Shree (hich kichate huye)—mousi.....vo....vo...adi to tab se ghar...hi...nahi...aaya...ha

Urmila (pareshan)—kyaaaa..... ? kaha gaya hoga... ? ye ladka bhi na....subha se kuch khaya bhi nahi hai vo

Shree—aap chinta mat karo mousi.....vo bhukha nahi hoga...kisi hotel me kha chuka hoga vo aur vahi kisi hotel me ruka bhi hoga aiyyashi karte

Urmila—kaise chinta na karu... ? maa hu uski.....jab tu maa banegi tab samjhegi ye baat..

Shree—aap chalo khao....vo kha liya hoga

Urmila—main kaise kha lu….? Vo kuch bhi nahi khaya hai main janti hu

Shree—poora din thodi bhukha rahega vo mousi

Urmila—vo mera beta hai, main use achche se janti hu….ki aaj vo bahut dukhi hai….maine kabhi use jor se daanta tak nahi aur aaj ……(rone lagti hai) …aur…aaj…maine…use..itni jor…jor…se…maara……vo mujhse….naraz..ho gaya hai……vo nahi…khayega…shree…main janti hu adi ko………jab tak main….khud…apne…hatho …se…nahi khilaungi vo nahi khayega……chahe jitne din…bhukha rah le……pata….nahi…..kaha….bhatak…raha…hoga…meraaa….bachchaaaa

Shree (mann me)—agar aapneye kaam bahut pahle kiya hota to aaj ye din hi nahi aata, mousi

Tabhi anand ki gadi enter huyi….vo turant bhagte huye andar aaya urmila ke room me…..use door khula dekh rahat huyi lekin agle hi pal urmila ko rote dekh phir pareshan ho gaya

Anand—urmi…kya hua….? Tum ro kyo rahi ho….?

Sanjay—ha…mousi kya hua ….?

Urmila (anand ko dekh aur jor se rote huye)—meraa…..aadii…mujhe…chhod ke chala…gaya

Anand (shocked)—kyaaa adiii….? Kya hua adi ko….? Mujhe batao urmi…kya hua adi ko….? Kaha hai mera adi…? Urmi batao mujhe

Urmila (rote huye)—maine adi ko….,,,,aaj maine apne adi ko….bahut mara…aur use ghar se nikal diya…..

Anand (shocked)—whatttt...tumne mara..vo bhi adi ko.... ? ye kaise ho sakta hai….tum to uski thodi si chot par hi pagal ho jati ho….tum kaise adi par hath utha sakti ho….? Mujhe batao…poori baat batao mujhe…

Urmila (rote huye)—vo aaj subah…….(urmila ne rote rote sab bata diya jo kuch hua tha aaj)

Anand (shocked)—whatttttt….? Impossible…hai ye

Shree—mousa ji,…adi ne khud hi accept kiya hai sab kuch

Anand (chillate huye)—jhuth hai sab…….aleeza ke father albert ke sath to meri meeting thi aaj…unhone mujhe bataya tha ki adi aaj subah unke sath unke ghar me hi tha…unhone khud adi ko milne bulaya tha apne ghar

Urmila (rote huye)—mere adi ko dhoond ke le aao…..vo nahi ayega…..

Shree—vo kal tak aa jayega mousi

Urmila (rote huye)—vo nahi ayega, shree….maine use apni kasam di hai…..tu nahi janti adi mujhe bahut chahta hai……vo mar jayega lekin meri kasam tootne nahi dega…..vo mujhse ankh mila ke kabhi jhuth nahi bolta, shree

Shree—vo to maine aaj dekh liya mousi…..lekin adi ko ghar chhod ke nahi jana tha

Anand (mann me)—ye sab in dono manhus ke aane se hua hai….isliye hi maine aaj tak adi ko ajeet aur megha ke pariwar se dur rakha tha, lekin ye manhus yaha bhi aa gaye…mere adi ko mujhse chheenne….main janta hu..adi aisa kabhi nahi kar sakta……main bhi asli baat ka pata laga kar rahunga ab

Urmila (rote huye)—anand pls…jao…mere adi ko lekar aao…jao…mera bachcha aaj taklif me hai

Shree bhi ab pareshan ho gayi thi adi ko lekar…..bahar se majbut dikhne ki koshish to kar rahi thi lekin urmila aur anand ki bate sun kar use bhi ab kisi anhoni ke hone ka darr mann hi mann satane laga tha

Usne pooja wale room me jakar sandhya vandan ke liye deepak jalane lagi lekin vo bujh gaya…usne kayi bar jalaya kintu har bar vo jalte hi bujh gaya…ab shree ke dil me kisi anhoni ka darr aur bhi gahra ho gaya

Shree (mann me)—ye deepak kyo nahi jal raha hai…? Khidki, darwaje to sab band hain,hawa bhi nahi aa rahi..phir bhi bujh ja raha hai……hey bhagwan adi ki raksha karna…..kahi vo kuch kar na baithe…?

Vahi dusri taraf munish ne gurudev ashtavakra ko yaad kiya …to vo uske samne aa gaye…munish ne unhe pranam kiya

Ashtavakra—kalyan ho vats

Munish—gurudev….adi phir se apne marg se bhatak gaya hai, vo meri bato ko nakaratmak najariye se dekhta aur sochta hai, phir karta bhi vaisa hi hai

Ashtavakra—nahi vats,…pahli bar vo apni pahchan talashne nikla hai

Munish—magar jis marg me vo ja raha hai…vaha se usko apni pahchan kaise milegi gurudev…? Usne yog ki bajay bhog ka rasta apna liya hai

Ashtavakra—vats usko jakar mera ye sandesh de do

Kah do usse Jo aaya hai vo Jayega
Phir Phir Jeevan Payega,

Tere Tan ke Dhaanche Par
Amaratva Prapt Baithi Ek Chidiya Daal Hilate Ud Jayegi

Chhod Sunahre Aamo ki Bagiya,

Phir Jo Lout ke Ayegi
Vilag Roop Dhang Payegi
Apno ko na Pahchanegi
Hosh Gawan ke Ayegi,

Nar me Nark, Nark me Nar Hain
Tar me Tark, Tark me Tar Hain
Sukh me Swarg, Swarg me Sukh Hain
Gyan heen Prani me Dukh Hain,

Sukh Dukh ke do Pahlu Se
Jisne Khushiyo ko Cheen Liya
Sagar ki Gahrayee me Jakar
Usne Moti Been Liya,

Kar Le Karma Nek is Jag Mein
Bhar Le Tijori Eshwar ke Ghar Mein
Moh Maya Bas Rakh Itna
Chahe Koyi Sant Jitna,

Na Lekar Aaya Tha Kuch
Na Hi Kuch Lekar Jayega
Kal ko Tera Apna Hi
Tujh ko Mitti Mein Dafanayega,

Khadi Haweli Rupaye Paise
Sau Acad Jamin Rah Jayegi
Bas Teri Lambayi Barabar
Jamin Tere Hisse Ayegi,

Phir Jo Lout ke Ayega
Vilag Roop Dhang Payega
Apno ko Na Pahchanega
Hosh Gawan ke Ayega

Munish—kintu iska matlab kya hai gurudev….?

Ashtavakra—mera ye sandesh adi ko de do…vo sab samajh jayega ki usko kya karna hai…

Munish—theek hai gurudev

Idhar leeza ne mujhe jaise hi awaz dekar bulaya to maine dekha ki vo top less khadi hai meri taraf pith kiye huye..niche sirf ek panty type half pant pahne

Leeza—gaand phat Raha haai, jaldi se gaand (ganth) maro, humko late hota haai

Ganpat Rai—nahi...nahi mem sb....agar maine aisa kiya to sahab humko kachcha kha kayenge

Leeza—Gaand Phat Rahaay, agar tumne jaldi se hamari gaand nahi mara to hum tumko kachcha kha jayega

Ganpat Rai—theek hai mem sb, jo hukum...aaiye main apki gaand maar deta hu

Leeza-gaand phat rahaay, jaldi maro hamari gaand, phir abhi tumko humko college me bhi le jakar chodna padega

Leeza ki baat sunte hi mera dimag kharab ho gaya…maine ek jhatke me uski panty niche khiska ke bed par dhakka dekar gira diya….aur aav dekha na taav ek hi jhatke me apna musal thoons diya leeza ki gand me

Leeza (chillate huye)—Gand Phat Rahay……Gand Phat Rahay….Gand Phat Rahay

Ganpat Rai—mem sb…Gand marayega to gand phatega hi

Leeza (chillate rote huye)—Gand Phat Rahay…tum humko chodo….dadddyyyyy pls save me

Ganpat Rai—chod to raha hu, mem sb….daddy ko kyo bula rahi ho

Leeza (chillate huye)—Gan Phat Rahay….humko chod do…..ohhhh…daddddd

Ganpat Rai—chod raha hu mem sb….bas aaj bhar gand phatega…kal se size ka ho jayega

Tabhi vaha uske dad smith aa gaya….aur ganpat ko apni beti ke sath sex karte dekh chillane laga jor jor se

Smith (jor se)—Ye Gand Phat Rahay…Leeza ko chod do

Ganpat Rai—aap chinta mat karo sb….mai leeza mem sb. ko tarike se chod dunga

Smith—i will kill you…

Smith gusse me apni army gun le aaya aur ek fire kar diya lekin ganpat bach gaya….leeza ab tak behosh ho chuki thi…..uski gand se khoon bah raha tha…..smith ke hath me gun dekh ganpat ne uske pet me ek laat maar kar bahar bhaga…smith bhi banduk liye uska picha karne laga

Ganpat Rai (mann me)—kaisa admi hai….pahle to khud chodne ko bolta hai aur phir goli marta hai

Lekin ganpat vaha se tezi se bhag kar bahar nikal gaya….aur bhagta hi raha….ki tabhi vaha munish aa gaya…usko dekhte hi mera gussa aur badh gaya

Munish—kaha bhag rahe ho dost

Adi—aa ja aaj teri bhi maar deta hu

Munish—chal bhag le beta…ye to bhog me pagal ho gaya hai…..adi ye le isme tere liye gurudev ka sandesh likha hai, padh lena

Adi jaise hi munish ko pakadne douda vo turant gayab hoke bhag gaya…..uske bhagte hi ek ped ke niche baith gaya aur gurudev ka patra me likha sandesh padhne laga ….kuch der sochne ke baad khatra ko bulaya

Adi—khatra..ab kaisi tabiyat hai us ladki ki….?

Khatra—kal uska operation ho jayega

Adi—theek hai….uske baad tum azad ho khatra…apne jinn lok chale jana…apni jindgi gujarna

Khatra—nahi malik…mai apko nahi chhodunga

Adi—tum mere gulam nahi ho khatra.....main kisi ko apna gulam nahi banata.....beech beech me agar ho sake to meri maa ka dhyan dete rahna…..vo mujhe bahut chahti hai….main janta hu unhone khana bhi nahi khaya hoga aaj tum unhe kisi bhi tarah se khila dena

Khatra—aap aisi bate kyo karte hain malik

Adi—pata nahi....tumhe jo kaha hai utna kar lena....ye meri tumse vinti hai

Khatra—aisa na kahe malik

Adi—theek hai ab tum jao...yaha se..us ladki ka dhyan rakhna

Khatra—ji malik

Adi (mann me)—ab main kaha jau... ? ghar to ja nahi sakta...mummy ne apni kasam di hai...yaha rahne se sab kabhi na kabhi dhoond hi lenge mujhe....phir se wahi phaltu ki kich pich chalu ho jayegi....ye kaam karta hu... india chala jata hu...yahi sahi rahega

Vahi dusri jagah par kuch log baith kar bate kar rahe hain apas me......aisa lagta hai kisi gambhir vishay par charcha chal rahi hai

‘’Malik vo aa raha hai.....aap kaho to main use khatam karwa du’’ unme se ek shakhs ne kaha

‘’hahahahahaha….aane do..use….uska hi to main kab se intazar kar raha hu…..mere sine me jo aag sadiyo se jal rahi hai, ab jake uski mout se hi thandi hogi….ab mera intaqam poora hoga…hahahaha…’’

Main adrishya hokar india aa gaya…halanki yaha abhi din ka samay tha….maine himalaya me jakar tapasya karne ki sochi aur himalaya ke jungle me pahuch gaya

Barish ke karan ganga nadi poore ufaan par chal rahi thi….maine vahi gangotri ke kinare dhyan lagane ki sochne laga….lekin lagatar ho rahi barish se dhyan to nahi laga magar thandi jarur lagne lagi thi

Upar se bhukh alag lagi thi….maine bhigte huye vaha par kuch phal wale ped dhoondne laga…lekin vo bhi aise mousam me mushkil hi tha

Yaha ganga nadi ki bahut gahri khayi hai….magar badh ke karan pata nahi chal raha tha….main abhi ek ped me lage kuch phal dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi kisi ne mere sir me jor se kisi dhardar hathiyar se vaar kiya

Maine dono hatho se apne sar ko pakad kar piche palta hi tha ki is bar kisi ne pet me talwar ghusa di….main apna balance nahi bana paya aur piche ki taraf jhuk kar full ufaan par chal rahi ganga me ja gira

‘’adiiiiiiiiiiii......nahiiiiiii’’ chillate huye kuch logo ki need toot gayi

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End Of Chapter First

Next Chapter : Now It’s the Time …. For the Entry of Main Villain & Main Heroine of the Story
main heroine ki entry very interesting

sath me villain bhi aaraha more interesting..
 
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