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Aapka sabse favourite female character?

  • Kajal

    Votes: 204 60.2%
  • Rashmika

    Votes: 108 31.9%
  • Anu

    Votes: 42 12.4%
  • Kriti

    Votes: 68 20.1%
  • Krithi

    Votes: 49 14.5%
  • Rashi

    Votes: 49 14.5%
  • Anupama

    Votes: 41 12.1%
  • Sriya

    Votes: 41 12.1%
  • Shivangi

    Votes: 33 9.7%
  • Divya

    Votes: 29 8.6%
  • Shreya

    Votes: 33 9.7%
  • Nadhiya

    Votes: 32 9.4%
  • Ravina

    Votes: 97 28.6%
  • Nayanthara

    Votes: 43 12.7%
  • Anushka

    Votes: 36 10.6%

  • Total voters
    339

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Le bhai Ganna lenay ki tayyaria shuru ho gayi hai ganne ke khet me. Ab ganne ke ras ki doodh ke sath kheer banayega apna Arjun.
Ab kya kar sakte hain, ye ek incest sex story hai toh aisa ek baar nahi baar baar hoga.
 

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(Previously)

Krithi: Ab hume wapas chalna chahiye.

Arjun: Hum abhi nahi ja sakte hain.

Krithi: Wo kyun bhala???

Arjun: Aap apni nazar utha kar toh dekhiye.

Krithi aur Dhruv ne Arjun ki point ki hui finger ki aur dekha, jahan ek sath kai Bears aur Monkeys kai sare fruits lekar aa rahe the.

Teeno ko ab tak ye baat samajh aa chuka tha ki wo sabhi fruits inn teeno ke liye hi hai.

Ab Arjun, Krithi aur Dhruv ke paas ek sath Banana, Apples, Grapes, Blackberry aur pineapple ke sath kai aur fruits tha.

Arjun, Dhruv aur Krithi teeno ne sabhi Monkeys aur Bears ke sath mil kar sabhi fruits aapas mein ek dusre ke sath share kar kha liya.

Arjun, Dhruv aur Krithi teeno ne sabhi Monkeys aur Bears ko itne sare swadisht fruits ke liye apna hand shake karke dhanyawaad diya.

Arjun ne sabhi animals ko wapas apni jagah jaane ke liye ishara kiya.

Arjun ke ek ishare par sabhi animals wapas apne apne ghar ko laut gaye.

Arjun ne Krithi ko ek baar phir se apni gaud mein utha liya, teeno ab ghar ke liye nikal pade.


Story Continues…)))

[Nayanthara Home
Friday, A Few Hours Ago,]


Geetanjali aur Nayanthara dono Nayna ke kamre mein thi, Nayna ne apni bestie Raveena ko call laga kar phone ko loudspeaker mode par daal diya.

Raveena jo apne ghar par Seetha ke paas baithi hui thi, usne apni sakhi ka phone utha kar phone ko loudspeaker mode par daal diya.


[[Phone Conversations]]

Raveena: Hello sakhi, how are you???

Nayanthara: Hello Raveena! Are you alone there???

Raveena: No! Seetha mom mere paas hain, bolo kya baat hai jo tum sirf mujhse karna chahti ho?

Nayanthara: I want to talk to you about some private stuff, kya tum Seetha ji se thodi der ke liye dur ja sakti ho, please???

Raveena ne Seetha ki aur dekha, Seetha ne dhire se Raveena ko kaha ki wah apni room mein chali jaye, usko koi aitraaz nahi hai.


[[Some Moments Later]]

Raveena ab apne kamre mein aa chuki thi.

Raveena: Bolo sakhi kya baat hai?? Ab main apne kamre mein akeli hoon.

Nayanthara: Tumne Arjun ke baare mein mujhse kya kya chhupa kar rakha hua hai sakhi?

Raveena: Kya tumhe Rashmika aur Kajal ne Arjun ke baare mein nahi bataya hai???

Nayanthara: Kajal aur Rashmika dono ne mujhe sab kuchh bata diya hai, lekin main tumse sab kuchh janna chahti hoon Arjun ke baare mein.

Raveena: Yadi maine tumhe phone par se bataya toh tumhe theek se samajh nahi aayega.

Nayanthara: Aaj mujhe koi bhi bahana nahi chahiye, bas abhi mujhe sabhi baatein janna hai Arjun ke baare mein jo tumne mujhse aur baki sabhi se chhupa kar rakha hai.

Raveena: Okay! Main call cut kar rahi hoon, bas kuchh hi der mein tumhe sab kuchh puri tarah se samajh aa jayega.

Nayanthara: Kaise mujhe pata chalega yadi tum call disconnect kar dogi toh???

Raveena: Kya tumhe apni sakhi par bharosa nahi raha hai jo tum aisa bol rahi ho???

Nayanthara: Okay! Main call cut kar rahi hoon, lekin tumne jaisa kaha hai waisa nahi hua phir dekh lena, main tumse pata nahi kitni din tak baat nahi karungi.

Raveena: Aisa kuchh bhi nahi hone wala hai, trust me, tum call ko cut kar sakti ho.

Aage dono aur se koi jawab nahi aaya aur call disconnect ho gaya.

Call jaise hi disconnect hua, Raveena ne Priya se mann hi mann request kiya ki wo Arjun ka sach Nayanthara aur Geetanjali dono ko bata de.

Priya ne Raveena ki request ko swikar kar liya aur agle hi pal wah Nayanthara ke room mein prakat ho gayi.

Priya dono ke bich mein bed par baithi thi aur dono ko dekh kar smile kar rahi thi.

Nayanthara aur Geetanjali dono hi Priya ko dekh kar puri tarah se surprise ho gayi ki Priya achanak se dono ke bich kaise aur kahan se aa gayi hai.

Dono ko believe nahi ho raha tha jo wo dono apne samne dekh rahi thi.

Dono ko ye baat samajh nahi aa raha tha ki ye koi sapna hai, ya phir ye koi unn dono ki eyes ka sirf ek illusion matr hai.

Finally Geetanjali jo apni aankh se dekh rahi thi usko confirm karne ke liye Geetanjali ne kaha.

Geetanjali: Priya! Kya tum sach mein hum dono ke paas yahan par ho???

Priya: Aap mujhe touch karke dekh lo aur khud hi sach ka pata kar lo.

Nayanthara aur Geetanjali dono ne Priya ko touch kar dekha, tab dono ko apni aankh par yakeen ho gaya ki Priya sach mein bed par dono ke bich baithi hui hai.

Nayanthara: Lekin…, lekin tum yahan par kaise aa gayi achanak se Priya, tum toh apni mom ke sath ghumne ke liye gayi ho na??

Priya: Main aap dono ke mann mein jo sawal chal raha hai, unn sabhi sawal ka jawab dene aayi hoon Nayna mami.

Nayanthara: But how???

“Hehehe!”

Geetanjali: Tum aise kyun hans rahi ho Priya beti???

Priya: Kya aap dono ko yaad hai ki maine aap dono se kya kaha tha, jab hum sab pahli baar mile the Arjun ke ghar par???

Nayanthara: Yeah! Mujhe yaad hai ki tumne hum sabhi se kaha tha ki tumne hum sabhi par koi jadoo kiya hua hai.

Priya: Isliye main aaj aap dono ko uss jadoo ka sirf ek chhota sa namuna dikhana chahti hoon.

Nayanthara: Hum dono ko koi bhi jadoo nahi dekhna hai Priya, balki hum dono ko Arjun ke baare mein sab kuchh janna hai jo Raveena mujhe batana chahti thi.

Priya: Koi baat nahi, main abhi aap dono ko Arjun ke baare mein bata deti hoon jitna ki abhi tak Raveena mom ko bhi nahi pata hai.

Agle hi pal Priya ka body bed se dur hokar room mein hawa mein swimming karne laga.

Ek baar phir se Nayanthara aur Geetanjali dono ke mann mein kai tarah ke sawal ghumne laga, jiska jawab dono ko sirf Arjun ki shakti swaroopa Priya se hi mil sakta tha.

Priya: Aap dono meri aankhon mein dekhiye, aap dono ko sabhi sawal ka jawab mil jayega jo aap dono Arjun ke baare mein janna chahti hain.

Nayanthara aur Geetanjali dono ke paas Priya ki baat ko accept karne ke alawa koi dusra option tha hi nahi, isliye dono hi Priya ki aankhon mein dekhne lagi.

Arjun ki sabhi incidents jo Arjun ki gopiyon ke sath judi hui thi ek, ek kar Nayanthara aur Geetanjali dono apne samne kisi film ki tarah live dekh pa rahi thi.

Kaise Arjun aur Srinidhi dono ke bich ek chhota sa vivad hua aur phir sab kuchh jaise change ho gaya.

Kaise uss chhoti si vivad ki wajah se Arjun ke sath sath sabhi ke life ka goal ekdum se change ho gaya hamesha ke liye.

Kaise Arjun ki sabhi gopiyon ne apne King Arjun ke liye apni prem ki pariksha diya.

Arjun ki Flute ki dhun sun kar kaise wo sabhi aag ki dariya ko paar kar gaye the, bina kisi lok laaz ki chinta kiye huye.

Kyun sabhi ladies ek, ek karke Arjun ke sath physical relation bana rahi hain.

Kyun Arjun sabhi ladies ke dil mein bas jata hai, ab Nayanthara aur Geeta dono ko ye baat bahut hi achhi tarah se samajh aa gaya tha.

Kaise Shaurya, Arjun aur Srinidhi dono ka VAHAN bana aur kyun wah Manihari Jungle ko protect karne ke liye aaya tha.

Nayanthara aur Geetanjali dono ko ab ye baat bahut hi achhi tarah se samajh aa gaya tha ki kyun SHAURYA aur Arjun dono ke bich aapas mein koi bhi fight nahi hua tha aur SHAURYA Jungle chhod kar chala gaya tha.

Kyun SHAURYA(LION) ne Arjun ko King kaha tha.

Arjun aur Srinidhi dono kaun hain aur kyun unn dono ne Raveena ki putra aur putri ke roop mein janam liya hai.

Priya khud kaun hai aur kyun wo Arjun se dur ho gayi hai.

Priyanshu aur Dhruv ka aapas mein kya rishta hai.

Ye baat bhi dono ko pata chal gaya jo ab tak Raveena, Kajal, Anu ya phir kisi dusre ko bhi nahi pata tha.

Priyanshi kaun hai aur wo Arjun ke liye kya importance rakhti hai.

Agle janam mein Priyanshi aur Kalpana ka Arjun ki life mein kaun sa rishta hone wala hai, ye baat bhi dono ke samne aa gaya tha.

Rashi aur Rohan dono kaun hain aur kyun wo dono Arjun ke liye sab kuchh kar jaana chahte hain, kyun Rohan khud ko Arjun ka SHADOW bolta hai, jabki kyun Arjun ka lagav Rashi ki aur bahut jyada hai.

Geetanjali aur Nayanthara dono ko ye baat bhi samajh aa gaya ki kyun Raveena ne dono se kaha tha ki Rashi ka bilkul waise hi khayal rakhna jaise ki wo dono Arjun ka rakhne wali hain.

Kyun Arjun ki semen mein change aaya hai jiski wajah se uska ek ladke ka baap banne ki probability almost zero ho chuki hai.

Matlab ki yadi ek normal male 1000 putra ka pita banta hai, tab Arjun sirf 1 putra ka pita ban sakta hai.

Jab Priya ko laga ki dono ko ab aage kuchh aur batana sahi nahi hai, tab Priya ne dono se kaha.

[Kya ab bhi aap dono ko Arjun ke baare mein kuchh aur bhi janna hai, ya phir aap dono ko apne sabhi sawal ka jawab mil gaya hai??]

Nayanthara aur Geetanjali dono ne ek sath Priya ko jawab diya.

[Hum dono ko jitna janna tha wo hum dono jaan chuke hain Priya, ab tum apni iss jadoo ko band kar sakti ho.]

Priya: Achhi baat hai, phir ab main chalti hoon.

Dono ne apna sar hila kar “YES” bol diya aur agle hi pal Priya dono ki aankhon ke samne se gayab ho gayi.

Priya jab room se dono ki aankhon ke samne se gayab ho gayi toh Nayanthara ke mind mein bicharon ka ek toofan chal raha tha jo uske dil aur dimag dono ko bechain karne laga.

Nayanthara ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki wah kaise apne pati Jogendra ko cheat kar Arjun ke sath apne incest rishte ko aage badha payegi.

Kyunki Jogendra ne koi bhi galat kaam nahi kiya hai, sath hi sath na hi usme koi kami hai jisse wo aasani se Arjun ko accept kar le aur usko koi bhi pachtava na ho Arjun ke sath aage badhne ke liye.

Ye soch kar hi Nayanthara ki aankhon se aansu ki boond nikal kar jameen ko geela karne lagi.

Jabki dusri aur Geetanjali ka dil bhi dukh se bhar gaya ki usne apne Arjun ke liye apni prem ki pariksha kyun nahi diya, jab sabne Arjun ke liye apne prem ko sabit kiya tha.

Geetanjali samajh sakti thi ki iss waqt Nayanthara ke mann mein kya chal raha hai, isliye Geetanjali ne khud ko shant kar Nayanthara se kaha.

Geetanjali: Nayna, main samajh sakti hoon ki iss waqt tumhare mann mein ek toofan macha hua hai, magar tum ek baar Raveena se baat kar lo, kya pata tumhe tumhari problem ka koi solution mil jaye.

Kyunki Raveena ka haal bhi bilkul tumhari tarah hai, jaise Jogendra bhaiya mein koi bhi dosh nahi hai, theek usi tarah se Mahendra bhaiya mein bhi koi dosh nahi hai.

“Shayad tum theek bol rahi ho Geetanjali, mujhe Raveena se iss baare mein baat karna chahiye.”

Nayanthara ne apni aankhon se bah rahe aansu ki boond ko saaf karte huye kaha.

Geetanjali: Ab khud ko shant kar lo aur sabhi ke paas wapas chalte hain, tum Raveena se iss baare mein kabhi baad mein aaram se baat kar lena.

Nayanthara: Okay! Chalo sabhi ke paas chalte hain.

Geetanjali: Nods!


[[Some Moments Later]]

Geetanjali aur Nayanthara jab room se bahar aayi toh Kajal aur baki sabhi bhi sabhi ke paas wapas aa chuke the.

Rashmi: Nayna mami, ab kya karna hai???

Nayanthara: Aaj hum sabhi koi game nahi khelne wale hain.

Rashmi: Phir hum kya karenge??

Geetanjali: Tum sabhi girls bahar garden mein jakar fruit aur thandi thandi hawa ka maza lo aur Arjun, Krithi aur Dhruv ke wapas aane ka intezaar karo.

Sri Leela: Okay Nayna mami, let's go girls.

Aage sabhi girls Kriti, Sri Leela, Rashi, Rashmi, Pinki, Nivetha aur Anupama garden ki aur chali gayi.

Ab kamre mein sirf Divya, Pavitra, Rashmika, Kajal, Nayanthara, Geetanjali, Suman aur Kusum rah gayi thi.

Divya: Kajal ab batao, tumhe Sri Leela, Kriti aur Anupama se kya baat karna tha jo teeno ko akele kamre mein lekar chali gayi thi??

Kajal ki request par Rashmika ne sabhi ko Arjun ki semen mein jo bhi change aaya hai wo bata diya.

Divya: Arey isme itna tension lene ki kya baat hai?? Main khud 2 girls ki maa hoon, problem tab hota jab Arjun kisi bachhe ka pita nahi ban sakta tha.

Divya ne sabhi ko thodi himmat dene ke liye ye baat kaha tha.

Lekin sach toh ye hai ki khud uska bhi mann thoda dukh se bhar gaya tha.

Kusum: Aapne bilkul sahi kaha Divya maa ji, balki Arjun ka potency toh 99% hai jo kisi bhi lady ko ek baar mein hi pregnant kar sakta hai. Arjun se jo bhi girls shaadi karegi wo bahut hi jyada khush rahegi apni puri life mein.

Kusum ki iss baat par sabhi ne usko ghur kar dekha, tab usko ye ehsaas hua ki usne abhi abhi wo bol diya hai jo usko nahi bolna chahiye tha.

Kusum: I am sorry, pata nahi mere muh se ye baat kaise nikal gaya ki Arjun ki potency rate 99% hai jo ki kisi bhi lady ko ek baar mein hi pregnant kar sakta hai.

“Oops sorry! Again slip of tongue.”

Pata nahi mere muh se phir se kaise ye baat nikal pada.

Geetanjali: It's okay Kusum baby, kabhi kabhi aisa ho jata hai, tumne jo bhi kaha hai wo puri tarah se sach hi kaha hai, isliye tumhe guilty feel karne ki koi bhi jarurat nahi hai, koi bhi tumse naraz nahi hai.

Kusum: Thank you Geetanjali didi.

Geetanjali: Ab hum sabko kya karna chahiye Divya maa ji, aap hi koi decision lijiye???

Divya: Hum sab total 8 ladies hain, hum 4, 4 ka 2 group bana kar Ludo khel sakte hain.

Nayanthara(Sad): Lekin, ghar par sirf ek hi Ludo hai Divya maa ji.

Kajal: It's okay Nayna didi, kya carrom board hai ghar par???

Nayanthara: Yeah!

Rashmika: Phir hum sabka kaam ho gaya.

Aage 4, 4 ka 2 group bana kar sabhi 8 ladies Carrom aur Ludo khelne mein busy ho gayi.

20 Minutes baad hi inn sabhi ki kaan mein Arjun ki Flute ki dhun sunayi diya jisse mantra mugdh hokar ye sabhi Arjun ki bansuri ki dhun mein kho gaye.

Jahan sabhi ladies apni chetna mein wapas aaye toh sabhi ko aisa feel hua jaise wo sabhi neend se so kar uthe hain.

Geetanjali aur Nayanthara ne ek baar phir se Arjun ka wo dhun suna jo kuchh der pahle dono ne Priya ki wajah se suna tha.

_______


[[At The Garden]]

Kriti, Sri Leela, Rashi, Rashmi, Nivetha, Anupama aur Pinki sabhi ek aam ke ped ke niche baith kar tasty tasty aam ka maja le rahi thi.

Rashi aur Anupama ne sabhi ke liye ped se aam ka phal tod diya tha.

Lagbhag 30 Minutes ke baad inn sabhi ke kaan mein Arjun ki Flute ki dhun sunayi diya jisse sabhi apna apna aam khana chhod kar Arjun ki Flute ki madhur dhun mein kho gaye.

Kuchh der baad jab Arjun ne Flute bajana band kar diya, tab sabhi girls apne hosh mein aa gayi.

Kriti: Wow! Kitna pyara dhun tha, kaun baja raha tha ye Flute jo sidha mere dil ko touch kar rahi thi???

Rashi: Kyun mam, kahin aapko Arjun ko chhod kar iss Bansuri wale ki dhun se pyar toh nahi ho gaya hai na???

Nivetha: Rashi! Majak karna band karo, sach mein ye bansuri jo bhi baja raha tha wo bahut hi jyada pyara tha.

Kriti: Sach kaha tumne Rashi, mujhe iss Bansuri wale ki dhun se pyar ho gaya hai.

Rashi: Oh ho, matlab ki aap Arjun ko chhod kar jaane ka plan bana rahi hain kya mam???

Kriti: Nahi main soch rahi hoon ki kash Arjun mere liye bhi aisi hi bansuri baja raha hota.

Sri Leela: Mujhe toh iss dhun par nritya karne ka mann kar raha tha.

Anupama: Mujhe bhi nritya karne ka mann kar raha tha.

Rashi: Ye bansuri ki dhun meri aatma ki gaharai tak ja rahi thi, mujhe aisa feel ho raha tha jaise ki main iss dhun ko pahle bhi kai baar sun chuki hoon.

Pata nahi kyun mujhe aisa feel ho raha hai, kuchh samajh mein nahi aa raha hai.

Ye dhun ab bhi meri aatma ko thoda thoda sukh aur thoda thoda peeda de rahi hai.

Pinki: Ab iss Bansuri wale ke baare mein baat karna band karo aur chalo hum sabhi apna apna Aam samapt karke yahin par Hide And Seek ka game khelte hain.

Rashmi: Main bhi kuchh aisa hi soch rahi hoon Pinki didi.

_______


[(In The Evening)]

Surya lagbhag ast hone ka tha, Arjun ne Krithi ko apni gaud mein utha rakha tha aur wah ghar ki aur aage badh raha tha.

Dhruv apne bhai Arjun ke pichhe pichhe chala aa raha tha.

Jis jis bhi ladies ki drishti Arjun aur Krithi par pad rahi thi, wo sabhi apne mann mein sirf 2 hi baat soch rahi thi.

1)) Haye Arjun aur Krithi dono ki jodi kitni pyari hai, God inn dono ko hamesha aise hi ek dusre ke karib rakhe.

2)) Kash! Mere husband bhi Arjun jaisa hi mujhe apni bahon mein utha kar le chalte toh kitna maja aata.

Kya hua Krithi jo tum Arjun ki bahon mein aa rahi ho, kahin tumne bhi Anupama ki tarah apne hi bhai Arjun se pyar toh nahi ho gaya hai, ek lady ne kaha jo rishte mein Krithi ki bhabhi lagti thi??

Krithi(Smiles): Aisi koi baat nahi hai Rani bhabhi, wo mere paon mein kaanta chubh gaya hai, isliye bhai ne mujhe apni bahon mein utha kar rakha hai.

Rani: Haye mere Arjun devar ji mein badi takat hai jo ye tumhe Manihari Jungle se apni gaud mein utha kar le aaye hain, kash mera marad bhi aisa hi takatwar hota jo mujhe aise hi apni bahon mein utha kar rakhta toh jeevan safal ho jata.

Krithi: Phir mere bhai ko hi kuchh der ke liye apna marad bana lo Rani bhabhi, mera bhai aapki ye wish ko jarur puri kar dega.

Arjun aur Rani dono ko believe nahi hua ki, Krithi kabhi kisi ko aisa jawab bhi de sakti hai.

Lekin Krithi ne ab apne mann mein decision le liya tha ki, usko apne bhai ke kareeb hona hai toh usko apne bhai ke samne Rashi jaisi ek bindass ladki banna hoga.

Tabhi Arjun usko apna raaj bata payega, apne dil ki har baat ko uske sath share kar payega jaisa ki wah Nivetha, Rashi aur baki sabhi ke sath share karta hai.

Rani: Oh ho, kya baat hai Krithi?? Aaj se pahle toh tum kabhi aisi baat nahi karti thi.

Lekin mujhe tumhara ye naya roop bahut hi jyada pasand aaya hai.

Krithi: Samay kab badal jata hai kisi ko pata nahi chalta hai Rani bhabhi, ye sab kuchh samay ka khel hai.

Krithi ne Arjun ki aankhon mein dekhte huye kaha.

Arjun ko samajh aa gaya ki uski badi bahan Krithi aisa kyun kar rahi hai.

Arjun ko samajh aa gaya hai ki uski badi bahan Krithi usse naraz hai ki wo apna koi secret uske sath share nahi karta hai.

Lekin Arjun bhi janta tha ki wah aisa nahi kar sakta hai.

Rani: Phir main Arjun devar ji ko kuchh der ke liye apna marad banane ke liye taiyaar hoon. Lekin kya Arjun devar ji mujhe kuchh der ke liye apni lugai banane ke liye taiyaar hai??

Arjun: Mujhe bhala kya problem ho sakti hai bhabhi ji, lekin aapko kahin aapke pati ghar se bahar na nikaal de.

Rani: Arey nahi devar ji, mere pati ko tumse koi bhi problem nahi hogi, ye offer sirf tumhare liye hai.

Lekin tum apna dekh lo, kahin Kriti aur Anupama naraz na ho jaye tumse.

Arjun: Ooo sab main handle kar launga, aapko iss baat ke liye pareshan hone ki koi jarurat nahi hai.

Rani: Phir dekhte hain, tum mujhe apni bahon mein utha pate ho bhi ya nahi.

Arjun: Okay! Lekin aapne tent par kaha tha ki aapke khet mein bahut mithe ganne hain, wo mujhe kab khila rahi hain aap???

Rani: Kya baat hai devar ji, tumne ek baar mein hi mujhe pahchan liya.

Khair jab tum mere khet mein akele aaoge, tabhi main tumhe apna ganna khane ke liye dungi.

Kyunki main tumhe ghar lakar ganna bilkul bhi nahi dene wali hoon.

Arjun(Smiles): Arey! Lekin maine aapka khet nahi dekha hai na.

Rani: Isme kaun si badi baat hai, main tumhe khud apne sath apna khet lekar chalungi.

Arjun: Okay Rani bhabhi, ab aap mujhe ghar ke andar jaane ki permission dijiye.

Rani: Theek hai Arjun devar ji baad mein baat karte hain, abhi mujhe bhi thoda sa jaruri kaam pura karna hai.

“Bye Arjun dever ji.”

Aage Arjun ne koi jawab nahi diya aur wah ghar ke garden ki aur chal diya jahan sabhi girls Arjun ke wapas aane ka hi wait kar rahi thi.

Chunki evening ho chuka tha toh ladies team bhi garden mein hi Arjun ka wait kar rahi thi.

Krithi: Bhai, ab mujhe niche utaar do.

Arjun ne Krithi ko niche jameen par utaar diya.

Dhruv aur Krithi dono ne mil kar sabhi ko Manihari Jungle mein jo incident hua tha wo ek, ek karke batane lagi.

Jaise jaise sabhi ladies incidents ko sun rahi thi wo sabhi ascharya chakit hoti ja rahi thi, sirf Nayna aur Geetanjali dono ko chhod kar, kyunki dono Arjun ke baare mein Priya se bahut kuchh jaan chuki thi.

Anupama: Krithi, mujhe believe nahi ho raha hai ki aaj tumne nritya kiya hai.

“How can it be possible???”

Krithi: Lekin yahi sach hai didi.

Rashi: Kriti mam wo Bansuri wala toh apna Arjun hi nikla, jiski dhun se aapko pyar ho gaya hai.

Kriti: Love! Tumne aaj se pahle hum sabhi ke liye bansuri kyun nahi bajaya?? Ye baat tumne ab tak hum sabhi se kyun chhupa rakha tha???

Arjun: Love! Main sach bol raha hoon, aaj hi maine pahli baar kisi Flute ko touch kiya hai.

Nivetha: Phir tumne itni achhi bansuri kaise baja liya betu???

Dhruv: Shayad isliye, kyunki wo Bansuri bhaiya ko SHAURYA ne diya tha jiski dhun sun kar mujhe bahut hi achhi neend aa gayi thi.

Kriti: Arjun, kya tum mere liye bhi ek baar aisi Bansuri bajaoge???

Arjun: Love! Mere hath Bansuri par khud chal rahe the, shayad isliye ki wo koi magical Flute tha.

Kajal: Arjun! Krithi ko ek baar phir se apni gaud mein utha lo aur ghar ke andar chalo, hum iss baare mein baad mein baat karte hain.

Arjun: Okay chachi.

***


[[3 Hours Later,
Inside The Home]]


Pura family ek sath dinner kar ek sath baitha hua tha.

Jogendra: Arjun jaisa tumne kaha hai, sab kuchh waisa hi KAAL aur Charan ne milkar arrange kar diya hai.

Arjun: Okay mamaji, aap mere call kar wait kijiyega.

Jogendra: Okay Arjun, good night everybody.

Aage KAAL, Charan aur Gajodhar bhi apne apne kamre mein chale gaye.

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[[Anupama Room]]

Nivetha, Rashi, Anupama aur Pinki charo aaj phir se ek sath so rahi thi.

Rashi: Anupama bhabhi wo lady kaun thi garden ke bahar jo Arjun se hans hans kar baatein kar rahi thi???

Anupama: Kyun?? Kya hua??

Rashi: Mujhe uska irada kuchh theek nahi lag raha hai.

Anupama: Uss lady ka naam Rani hai, wo rishte mein Arjun aur hum sabhi ki bhabhi lagti hai.

Rashi: Oh! Kya aapko pata hai Arjun uss din jab tent par sabhi ko health ke subject par lecture de raha tha, tab bhi wo lady bol rahi thi ki uske khet mein ganne bahut mithe hain???

Anupama: Haan toh usne sach hi kaha tha, really uske khet ka ganna bahut hi mitha hota hai.

Rashi: Oh ho Anupama bhabhi, aap ab bhi nahi samajh rahi hain baat ko.

Rani bhabhi ganne ka bahana bana karke apne Arjun se double meaning mein baat kar rahi thi, shayad evening mein bhi kuchh aisa hi baat kar rahi thi wo apne Arjun se.

Anupama: Aisa kya? Rani bhabhi toh badi fast daud rahi hain.

Rashi: Yes!

“Ring…ring”

Aage koi kuchh bolta usse pahle hi Anupama ka phone baj utha jo ki ek unknown number tha.

Anupama ne call receive kar phone ko loudspeaker mode par daal diya.


[[Phone Conversations]]

Anupama: Hello kaun???

Arey Anupama main tumhari Rani bhabhi bol rahi hoon, tumne ab tak mera number save nahi rakha hai, very bad.

Anupama: Sorry! Okay, boliye aapne itni raat ko kaise call kiya hai???

Rani: Mujhe tumse Arjun devar ji ka number chahiye.

Anupama: Pahle aap bataiye ki aap Arjun ke sath kya baat kar rahi thi evening mein???

Rani ne Anupama ko apne aur Arjun ke bich ki baat ko bata diya.

Anupama: Rani bhabhi, mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai ki aap Arjun ko khet mein ganna khilane nahi le jaana chahti hain, balki aapko khud mere marad Arjun ka ganna khana hai.

Rani: Main sirf usko apna ganna khilana chahti hoon, mujhe aisa lagta hai ki Arjun devar ji ke paas bahut lamba aur mota ganna hoga jo sirf tumhari jaisi ladki ki khet mein hi achhi tarah se andar ja sakta hai.

Main Arjun ka ganna nahi le paungi apni chhoti si khet mein.

Anupama: Haan ye baat bhi sahi hai, lekin kya pata aap mere hone wale marad ko apni jaal mein phasa lo???

Rani: Aisa main kuchh bhi nahi karungi, trust me.

Anupama: Okay! Lekin yadi aapko mere marad Arjun ka lamba aur mota ganna khane ka mann kare toh aap kha sakti hain, meri aur se aapko puri permission hai iske liye.

Rani: Na baba na, mujhe bada darr lagta hai, Arjun dever ji ka ganna bahut hi mota aur lamba hoga, sach sach batana tumhe meri kasam hai.

Tumne ab tak Arjun dever ji ka lamba aur mota ganna kitni baar le liya hai apni khet mein???

Anupama: Arey Rani bhabhi maine Arjun ko aaj tak theek se kiss bhi nahi kiya hai, phir bhala mujhe kaise pata chalega ki uska ganna kitna lamba aur mota hai, lene ki toh bahut dur ki baat hai.

Rani: Phir toh main aisa bilkul bhi nahi kar sakti hoon, kyunki uss par pahla adhikar tumhara hai, baad mein mera number aa sakta hai.

Anupama: Aap meri tension mat lijiye Rani bhabhi, aap sirf apne baare mein sochiye.

Arjun toh mere paas hamesha rahta hai, lekin wo yahan sirf kuchh din ke liye hi aaya hai, iss baare mein jara vichar karna.

Rani: Phir apne marad Arjun ko bacha kar rakho, yahan ki kai ladies Arjun ka ganna apne khet mein lene ke liye mar rahi hain.

Anupama: Koi baat nahi Rani bhabhi, Arjun iss gaon ka King hai aur King par apne sabhi praja ka pura pura adhikar hota hai.

Rani: Aisa kya???

Anupama: Yes! Kya aapka dudh ab bhi aata hai Rani bhabhi???

Rani: Haan aata toh hai, lekin ab mere bacche ne pina band kar diya hai aur mere marad toh bilkul bhi nahi pite hain.

Anupama: Phir aap mere hone wale marad ko apna dudh pila dena, maine suna hai ki Arjun ko dudh pina bahut achha lagta hai, mujhe bilkul bhi bura nahi lagega.

Rani: Lekin Kriti didi ko bura lag gaya toh???

Anupama: Kriti mam ko main handle kar lungi, isliye aap iski chinta mujh par chhod dijiye.

Rani: Okay! Dekhti hoon phir wo mera dudh pita hai ya nahi, tum bas mujhe Arjun ka number de do.

Anupama: Okay! Good night Rani bhabhi, main aapke number par Arjun ka number send kar deti hoon, sath hi sath aapka number bhi SAVE kar leti hoon.

Aapko iss tarah bura feel karne ki jarurat nahi hai.

Rani: Thank you and good night Anupama.


[[Call Disconnected]]

Nivetha: Anupama! Mujhe tumse aisi umeed nahi thi ki tum aise kisi se baat kar sakti ho, lekin achha laga, aise hi kisi se hasi majak baat kar liya karo.

Anupama: Ye sab aap sabke sath rahne ka mujh par effect ho raha hai Nivetha di.

Rashi: Maine toh pahle hi kaha tha ki, uss lady ka irada bilkul bhi nek nahi hai apne Arjun ke liye.

Anupama: Haan! Dekhte hain Rani bhabhi kis had tak Arjun ke sath ja sakti hai.

Rashi: Yadi Rani bhabhi ne Arjun ko koi mauka diya toh, Arjun usko wahin khet par patak kar pel dega.

Nivetha: Rashi! Aisi gandi baat nahi, yahan par Pinki darling bhi hai hamare sath.

Pinki: Koi baat nahi Nivetha didi, Rashi ne bilkul sach hi kaha hai, Arjun bhai ki yahi destiny hai.

Ye baat mujhe ab achhi tarah se samajh aa gaya hai.

Rashi: Okay girls, let's end our topic, ab so jate hain.

Aage sabhi ne ek dusre ko good night kaha aur neend ki haseen wadiyon mein chale gaye.


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The update comprises 5.0k words and with this I bring the curtain down for today, we'll meet soon in the next episode till then bye bye and take care of yourself.
Awesome update
 

RAAZ

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Story adhura rahne ka matlab writer nahi balki readers hote hain, jab ek writer story likhta hai tab readers kaan mein tel laga kar sote hain.

Jab ek writer ko readers se support ki jarurat hoti hai, tab readers log kaan mein tel laga kar sote hain.

Jab writer update deta hai tab readers kaan mein tel laga kar sote hain, readers ko aisa lagta hai jaise wo ek comment aur like karke writer par koi ehsaan kar raha hai.

Readers ko kya pata hai ki ek writer kaun kaun si mental situation se guzar raha hota hai jab readers ka response nahi aata hai.

Readers ko kya pata hota hai ki wo apna 8 to 10 hours ka kimti samay dekar ek update pura karta hai, aur badle mein ek readers kya karta hai, comment karne ka chhodo ek like bhi nahi kar pata hai.

Isliye ye jo readers baar baar ye likhte hain na ki story jab complete nahi karna tha toh upload hi kyun karte ho, toh iska dosh sirf 1000 mein se 999 baar readers jimmedar hota hai.

Readers ko isse koi fark nahi padta ki koi writer apni job aur study chhod kar story likh raha hota hai.

Readers ko kya pata hota hai ki jab 60 likes se sirf 10 likes aaye, tab kaisa feel hota hai.

Readers ko kya pata hota hai ki jab 30+ comment ke jagah par sirf 10 comment aata hai, tab kaisa feel hota hai.

Jab ek writer inn sabhi mental situation se guzar raha hota hai, tab readers log apne kaan main tel laga kar sote hain.

Isliye meri story par agli baar koi aisa comment karne se 1000 baar soch lena ki story pura hona chahiye.

Yadi mujhe story incomplete chhodna hoga toh main yahi par bol ke chhod dunga, aur koi bhi kuchh nahi bol payega, kyunki readers ko kya pata hota hai ki ek writer ko kitni raat apna neend khona padta hai tab ek update pura hota hai.

Mobile ko family wale se bacha kar rakhna, kisi ko ye na pata chalne dena ki ladka sirf mobile mein kya karta rahta hai.

Soch ke dekho jab uski family ko ye pata chal jayega ki wo sirf ek sex story likh raha hai, wo bhi free ka apni career ka valuable time wo sirf dusre ke liye de raha hai.

Har app ko password laga kar, hide kar rakhna, koi itna bhi easy nahi hota hai.

Isliye yadi koi mujhse ye accept karta hai ki main story complete karunga toh wo aisa bilkul bhi mat sochna.

Aap story ko apne risk par padhna, yahan main kisi ko guarantee nahi dene wala hoon ki, main story ko pura karunga.

Logo ki priority change hoti rahti hai, kya pata meri bhi priority change ho jaye, jis din meri priority change ho jayegi, main bhi story ko incomplete chhod dunga, yahin forum par rahunga, lekin story likhna band kar dunga.

Readers ko kya pata hota hai ki maine ye story ko band karne ke liye ab tak 2000 baar se bhi jyada baar socha hai, lekin phir bhi likh raha hoon.

Sirf ginti ke 10 readers honge jo hamesha apna reply dete hain, sirf ek [[nice update]] hi mere liye kaphi hai, isliye bas ab tak story likh raha hoon.
Koi nahi bhai aapka khana sahi hai magar itna react nahi karey koi nahi jis ne apni shanka dikhai hai usay bhi aapki story me anand aaya hoga aur woh usko khona nahi chahta.
But readers ko bhi writer ka POV sochan chahiye sath me aisay writers ko bohat support karna chahiye jo regular updates de rahey hai. End of the day it is writer and readers relationship that's make this forum flourished.
Hum sab ko ek doosre ko mutual respect deni hogi. Aur bharosa rakhay writer agar 2000 times soch kar bhi story band nahi kar raha hai to woh aapke sath is journey ko complete karega aur jab woh apna 100% de raha hai to aap sab bhi apna pura sahyog and writer ko protsahan kijiye. Arey agar aapko koi angle bura bhi lag raha hai to comment kar ke pooch lijiye magar dosh mat nikaliye. Discuss karey sab theek hoga.
And bro apni mohabbat se hum log aap se story puri likhawat ker hi manege.
Apna khayal rakhiye aur wapas aaye jaldi se ek taka tak update ke sath. Coz abhi safar bohat lamba hain.
 

dhalchandarun

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Jabardast story hai padh kar maza aa gaya story jarur Puri honi chahiye
Sorry brother!
waiting for the next update....
Jaldi hi aa jayega.
Koi nahi bhai aapka khana sahi hai magar itna react nahi karey koi nahi jis ne apni shanka dikhai hai usay bhi aapki story me anand aaya hoga aur woh usko khona nahi chahta.
But readers ko bhi writer ka POV sochan chahiye sath me aisay writers ko bohat support karna chahiye jo regular updates de rahey hai. End of the day it is writer and readers relationship that's make this forum flourished.
Hum sab ko ek doosre ko mutual respect deni hogi. Aur bharosa rakhay writer agar 2000 times soch kar bhi story band nahi kar raha hai to woh aapke sath is journey ko complete karega aur jab woh apna 100% de raha hai to aap sab bhi apna pura sahyog and writer ko protsahan kijiye. Arey agar aapko koi angle bura bhi lag raha hai to comment kar ke pooch lijiye magar dosh mat nikaliye. Discuss karey sab theek hoga.
And bro apni mohabbat se hum log aap se story puri likhawat ker hi manege.
Apna khayal rakhiye aur wapas aaye jaldi se ek taka tak update ke sath. Coz abhi safar bohat lamba hain.
Jab safar bahut lamba hota hai tab mann idhar udhar bhatak jata hai, tabhi readers ka response hi writer ko story likhne ke liye motivate karta hai. Ye ek fact hai thode samay ke baad writer ka mann dhire dhire story se kam hone lagta hai.
Fantastic update bro
Thanks!
 
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