Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

[ayush01111]

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उम्मीद पर तो ब्रह्मांड अटका पड़ा है मित्र.... किन्तु ...
यहां का वो पर्यावरण अब कहीं दूर.... छूट चुका ...
जब VJ जैसा लेखक, समय न निकाल पाए , तब हाँ ...
हम मानेंगे कि अब उम्मीद.... टूट चुका ...

आखिर परिवार ही अंततः सब को प्रिय है , आपकी , हमारी, और लेखक महोदय , सबकी ..... ये मजबूरी तो कतई नहीं है...

बस ये न समझना vj4u कि, तुम्हारी लेखनी का कायल हम पाठक .... तुम से .... रूठ चुका ।
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Ab to ashwathama ji ne bhi keh diya yani story ka ant hai

 

[Saiyan]

Still waiting for Veronica death Revenge

 

[Golu]

Sir darshan aapke ko trash gye hai

 

[Golu]

Darshan to de dijiye km se km kuch to bta dijiye bahut samay ho gya hai

 

[Aakash.]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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"Chance to win prizes Worth up to Rs 15000"
Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 2 April ko open ho chuka hai aur aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 25th April 2026, 11:59 PM tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	6000 Rupees + Award + 10000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	2500 Rupees + Award + 7000 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	1000 Rupees + 5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP	5 Months Prime membership + 3000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader (Top3 )	3 Months Prime Membership each + Award + 3000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	500 Likes for each report

Regards :- XForum Staff

 

[Alok]

vj4u bhai ab toh lagta hai iss story ke update hume aagle janam mein hi milega.....

 

[Silent lover]

vj4u bhai ab toh lagta hai iss story ke update hume aagle janam mein hi milega.....

Yaar week me ek din me jarur chek krta yha ke kuch new halchal hui but nai pata nai kitna time lagega vj4u bhai ko story me comeback k liye

 

[Saiyan]

Yaar week me ek din me jarur chek krta yha ke kuch new halchal hui but nai pata nai kitna time lagega vj4u bhai ko story me comeback k liye

Same here iss kahani k jese koi aur kahani nahi

 

[vj4u]

Hey guyzz.. kaise hain aap sab...??? I guess , kahani ki situation ko lekar thode naraaz, thode frustrated honge par phir bhi ek ummid ki shayad, dobara shuru hoga ye safar....

Pichle 3 saal mere liye bhi kisi kahani se kam nahi guzre hain... Aise mod woh bhi lagatar aayen hai meri life me ki kabhi kabhi lagta hai, sapna hai, aankh khulegi aur wapas sab pehle jaisa ho jaayega...

Khair, achi baat ye hai ki 3 saal ke unimaginable struggle ke baad finally life wapas track par aane lagi hai...

Kuch dino baad se waqt rahega mere haath me jo mai apni is kahani ke ab tak ke safar ko ek baar phirse padhne aur samajhe me lagaunga...

Waise toh puri kahani ka ek rough draft pehle hi ready tha mere dimag me par har chiz sahi tarah se perfect sync me rahe,uske liye mujhe wapas padhna padega..

In teen saalon ke gap me waise ek chiz bohot achi hui hai...

Kyunki mai proffesionally bhi writer hi hun isiliye apne kaam ke liye bohot se research karne padte hain mujhe .

Un researchs ke dauran apni kahani ke aage ke safar ke liye bohot si aisi cheezen jo bas sochi thi maine,uske liye pointers mil gaye hain mujhe.. naam mil gaye hain, twists mil gaye hain jo bohot kaam aayenge mere...

So hopefully,jald hi milte hain "GALATH " me...

 

[Rahul sood]

Hey guyzz.. kaise hain aap sab...??? I guess , kahani ki situation ko lekar thode naraaz, thode frustrated honge par phir bhi ek ummid ki shayad, dobara shuru hoga ye safar....

Pichle 3 saal mere liye bhi kisi kahani se kam nahi guzre hain... Aise mod woh bhi lagatar aayen hai meri life me ki kabhi kabhi lagta hai, sapna hai, aankh khulegi aur wapas sab pehle jaisa ho jaayega...

Khair, achi baat ye hai ki 3 saal ke unimaginable struggle ke baad finally life wapas track par aane lagi hai...

Kuch dino baad se waqt rahega mere haath me jo mai apni is kahani ke ab tak ke safar ko ek baar phirse padhne aur samajhe me lagaunga...

Waise toh puri kahani ka ek rough draft pehle hi ready tha mere dimag me par har chiz sahi tarah se perfect sync me rahe,uske liye mujhe wapas padhna padega..

In teen saalon ke gap me waise ek chiz bohot achi hui hai...

Kyunki mai proffesionally bhi writer hi hun isiliye apne kaam ke liye bohot se research karne padte hain mujhe .

Un researchs ke dauran apni kahani ke aage ke safar ke liye bohot si aisi cheezen jo bas sochi thi maine,uske liye pointers mil gaye hain mujhe.. naam mil gaye hain, twists mil gaye hain jo bohot kaam aayenge mere...

So hopefully,jald hi milte hain "GALATH " me...

Welcome back bro