Adultery Meri fantasy ( Adultery/Romance)

[avkas]

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[yenjvoy]

Flymovers777 Bhai Mera khayal hai ki Kahani me itna buildup hai, aur ravi-deepa ki itne salon ki shared history hai, ki end me Thoda anticlimax wali feeling naturally aayegi. Chudai to chudai Hoti hai, to us ka description Kitne alag Andaz me koi kar Sakta hai aakhir?! In the end, the act of fucking is more or less mechanical - litaya, chumma Liya, upar dabaya choosa, neeche sahlaya, chaata aur ghusaya, dhakke lagaye aur bas ho gya. The real magic is in the feelings, emotions and dialog. Aapki lekhni ki sab se Badi khoobi isi me hai.
You write for yourself. Every good writer writes only for an audience of one - khud k Liye. Achhe lekhak k andar Kahani ek unborn fetus k samaan Hoti hai - bechaini lagi rahti hai jab tak bahar na aajaye. Aur logo ko Pasand Aaye wo byproduct hai, kyuki asli goal hota hai khud k khayal ko apne mann k mafiq express kar Pana. Aap is me kaafi hadd tak safal hue Hain.
Rahi baat readers k pressure ki, to wo to sabhi creative cheezo me hota hi hai. Jab virat Kohli ya Dhoni ground me hota hai to stadium me ek lakh log "we want sixer" har ball par chillate Hain. Commentator bolte Hain ye shot Galat khela etc. sab Pressurehi to hai ye. Parantu soch samajh kar, APNA time le kar, Sahi ball par Sahi shot lagana, lakho karodo k pressure k bawjood - wohi to asli art hai. Aap pressure loge, to pressure Hoga. Log to cheekhte chillate rehte hain. Logo ka Kya hai. Gully cricket me zero par out Honewala bhi Kohli ko sikhana Chahta hai ki kis ball ko kaise khelnachahiye. Is pressure ko block out Karna zaruri hai. Sachin ka interview hai na, ki opposition sledging kar rha tha, par jab zone me hota tha to sunai hi NAHI deta kikaun Kya bola. Mai ne aap ko prhle bhi KAHA tha ki is site ka format kharab hai serious writer k liye, because log Kahani k beech me comment karte Hain, farmaishen karte Hain, jaldi jaldi karne ko uksaate Hain. Aap SE request Kiya tha agar yaad ho, ki padho hi mat comments. Useless Hain. Tareef bhi, alochana bhi aur farmaish bhi. Pregnant maa Janta se feedback thodi na leti hai ki bachcha ladka ho ladki na ho, gora ho kaala na ho etc. - bachcha to jaisa Hoga waisa hi Hoga. Thoda sa faltu noise ko ignore kar k Apne mann ki Karna Sahi rehta hai, yahi aagrah hai AAP se.

 

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Flymovers777 Bhai Mera khayal hai ki Kahani me itna buildup hai, aur ravi-deepa ki itne salon ki shared history hai, ki end me Thoda anticlimax wali feeling naturally aayegi. Chudai to chudai Hoti hai, to us ka description Kitne alag Andaz me koi kar Sakta hai aakhir?! In the end, the act of fucking is more or less mechanical - litaya, chumma Liya, upar dabaya choosa, neeche sahlaya, chaata aur ghusaya, dhakke lagaye aur bas ho gya. The real magic is in the feelings, emotions and dialog. Aapki lekhni ki sab se Badi khoobi isi me hai.
You write for yourself. Every good writer writes only for an audience of one - khud k Liye. Achhe lekhak k andar Kahani ek unborn fetus k samaan Hoti hai - bechaini lagi rahti hai jab tak bahar na aajaye. Aur logo ko Pasand Aaye wo byproduct hai, kyuki asli goal hota hai khud k khayal ko apne mann k mafiq express kar Pana. Aap is me kaafi hadd tak safal hue Hain.
Rahi baat readers k pressure ki, to wo to sabhi creative cheezo me hota hi hai. Jab virat Kohli ya Dhoni ground me hota hai to stadium me ek lakh log "we want sixer" har ball par chillate Hain. Commentator bolte Hain ye shot Galat khela etc. sab Pressurehi to hai ye. Parantu soch samajh kar, APNA time le kar, Sahi ball par Sahi shot lagana, lakho karodo k pressure k bawjood - wohi to asli art hai. Aap pressure loge, to pressure Hoga. Log to cheekhte chillate rehte hain. Logo ka Kya hai. Gully cricket me zero par out Honewala bhi Kohli ko sikhana Chahta hai ki kis ball ko kaise khelnachahiye. Is pressure ko block out Karna zaruri hai. Sachin ka interview hai na, ki opposition sledging kar rha tha, par jab zone me hota tha to sunai hi NAHI deta kikaun Kya bola. Mai ne aap ko prhle bhi KAHA tha ki is site ka format kharab hai serious writer k liye, because log Kahani k beech me comment karte Hain, farmaishen karte Hain, jaldi jaldi karne ko uksaate Hain. Aap SE request Kiya tha agar yaad ho, ki padho hi mat comments. Useless Hain. Tareef bhi, alochana bhi aur farmaish bhi. Pregnant maa Janta se feedback thodi na leti hai ki bachcha ladka ho ladki na ho, gora ho kaala na ho etc. - bachcha to jaisa Hoga waisa hi Hoga. Thoda sa faltu noise ko ignore kar k Apne mann ki Karna Sahi rehta hai, yahi aagrah hai AAP se.

Flymovers777 Bhai Mera khayal hai ki Kahani me itna buildup hai, aur ravi-deepa ki itne salon ki shared history hai, ki end me Thoda anticlimax wali feeling naturally aayegi. Chudai to chudai Hoti hai, to us ka description Kitne alag Andaz me koi kar Sakta hai aakhir?! In the end, the act of fucking is more or less mechanical - litaya, chumma Liya, upar dabaya choosa, neeche sahlaya, chaata aur ghusaya, dhakke lagaye aur bas ho gya. The real magic is in the feelings, emotions and dialog. Aapki lekhni ki sab se Badi khoobi isi me hai.
You write for yourself. Every good writer writes only for an audience of one - khud k Liye. Achhe lekhak k andar Kahani ek unborn fetus k samaan Hoti hai - bechaini lagi rahti hai jab tak bahar na aajaye. Aur logo ko Pasand Aaye wo byproduct hai, kyuki asli goal hota hai khud k khayal ko apne mann k mafiq express kar Pana. Aap is me kaafi hadd tak safal hue Hain.
Rahi baat readers k pressure ki, to wo to sabhi creative cheezo me hota hi hai. Jab virat Kohli ya Dhoni ground me hota hai to stadium me ek lakh log "we want sixer" har ball par chillate Hain. Commentator bolte Hain ye shot Galat khela etc. sab Pressurehi to hai ye. Parantu soch samajh kar, APNA time le kar, Sahi ball par Sahi shot lagana, lakho karodo k pressure k bawjood - wohi to asli art hai. Aap pressure loge, to pressure Hoga. Log to cheekhte chillate rehte hain. Logo ka Kya hai. Gully cricket me zero par out Honewala bhi Kohli ko sikhana Chahta hai ki kis ball ko kaise khelnachahiye. Is pressure ko block out Karna zaruri hai. Sachin ka interview hai na, ki opposition sledging kar rha tha, par jab zone me hota tha to sunai hi NAHI deta kikaun Kya bola. Mai ne aap ko prhle bhi KAHA tha ki is site ka format kharab hai serious writer k liye, because log Kahani k beech me comment karte Hain, farmaishen karte Hain, jaldi jaldi karne ko uksaate Hain. Aap SE request Kiya tha agar yaad ho, ki padho hi mat comments. Useless Hain. Tareef bhi, alochana bhi aur farmaish bhi. Pregnant maa Janta se feedback thodi na leti hai ki bachcha ladka ho ladki na ho, gora ho kaala na ho etc. - bachcha to jaisa Hoga waisa hi Hoga. Thoda sa faltu noise ko ignore kar k Apne mann ki Karna Sahi rehta hai, yahi aagrah hai AAP se.

Bilkul sahi kaha bhai

 

[vijay19884verma]

Wait for next update bro isliye keh rha hoon taki ismai un dono ki married life bi dikhao bhai wait eagerly deepika ravi ki next day in family love to see u in ur words love u bro keep it bro

 

[Rohan B]

Waise ek cheez or hai na..

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Flymovers777 Bhai kam se kam aapaki story pr index to bana do.... Me new Reader hoon update dhundane me bohot takalif hoti he yar

 

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