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Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

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Update 37 The Last Day & Night In Ruhi’s Aangan​

Wednesday 24th December – Christmas Eve.

Abhi ne iss din ke liye apni diary mein likha hai:

It has been the last and worst day and night in Ruhi’s yard.

Subha subha Ruhi ki maa Abhi ke saath hanss rahi thi. Aur Abhi ko Ruhi nazar aayi kitchen ke andar. Aaj Ruhi ek nayi nightdress mein thi. Ek khubsurat nightdress jo safed thi aur uss par bade bade red, black aur green dots the. Ruhi dada ji ke armchair par baithi hui thi.

Abhi ne usski maa se baat ki. Aur uss aurat ne iss baar kaha,

“Sorry Abhi, Ruhi ke papa ne ussko iss baar apne saath Saudi Arabia lejaane ka faisla kiya hai!!”

Abhi ko itna ghussa aya ke usska mann kiya ke ussko gaaliyon se nehla de ussi waqt. Abhi ne socha issi liye wo kal hi Ruhi ke baap se bat karna chahta tha iss se pehle ke Ruhi ki maa khud koyi bahana bana kar apne pati ke munh mein koyi baat khud nah daal de…. Abhi samajh gaya ke kal raat ko Ruhi ki maa ne khud sab kuch bata diya hoga apne pati ko ke Abhi Ruhi se pyar karta hai magar ussko Rishta nahin passand kyunke ussko Abhi ka kaam nahin passand, to apne pati se keh diya hoga ke aaj wo ladka aap se Ruhi ka haath mangega to aap mana kar dena…..

Abhi issi liye nahin chahta tha ke koyi aur Ruhi ke pita se baat kare issi liye wo sabse pehle baat karna chahta tha Ruhi ke pita se kal raat ko…..

Abhi sab kuch apne dimaagh mein rewind karte hue soch raha tha aur samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha ke jiss din Ruhi gayi thi apne nani ke ghar tabhi se Ruhi berukhi se pesh ane lagi Abhi ke saath, aur kal raat ko isi baat ke liye Ruhi ke papa ko bhi legaye sab wahan aur issi baare mein baat kiye gaye honge aur sabne milkar decide kiya hoga ke Abhi ko yeh jawaab de diya jaaye ke Ruhi ke pita Ruhi ko apne saath lekar jaa raha hai iss baar….. Abhi ko puri film dikh gayi usske dimaagh mein… to Abhi ne Ruhi ki maa se kaha,

“koyi mujhko laakhon rupay bhi dede nah to main yakeen nahin karunga? Saudi Arabia mein koyi apni beti ko lejata hai? Ladki ko? Unn vehshi, tharki Arab logon ke beech? Aap mujhko ullo samajhte ho nah aunty? Thik hai wohi samajhiye aap mujhe….”

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“tum khud puchlo agar yakeen nahin hai to!”

Abhi: “puchunga to ab wo to yehi kahega nah? sab mile hue hein iss mein koyi shak nahin, jo aap ne ussko kehne ko kaha wohi kahega wo…. Zaahir si baat hai.”

Din bhar Abhi ranjh o ghum mein raha. Usski maansik stithi normal nahin raha din bhar….. ussko saans lene mein takliff hota raha baar baar….. Ruhi dikhi ussko kayi baar magar baat karna naamumkin tha….

Aur din ke 2.30 ko Abhi ko pata chala ke Ruhi ki badi behen ussko apne saath lekar jaa rahi hai, Ruhi apni behen ke ghar kuch dinon ko beetaane ke liye jaa rahi thi…. Abhi ko zabardast jhatka laga ye khabar sunkar…. Usska uss aangan mein aakhri din tha aur wo chahta tha ke Ruhi ko wo jee bhar ke dekhe aur mauka milne par uss se baat kare apna pyar ka waasta de Ruhi ko…. Magar jab suna ke Ruhi jaa rahi hai to Abhi jaise tut gaya… Farzina ne Abhi ko bataya ke Ruhi apni badi behen ke saath jaa rahi hai, ab pata nahin ke Ruhi ne khud farzinah ko yeh kehne liye bheja tha ya nahin, Abhi ko shak tha ke khud Ruhi ne hi Farzinah ko kaha tha Abhi ko jaakar bataane ke liye ke wo jaa rahi hai…. Abhi ko shcok laga, shock par shock, dard par dard, Abhi ki sehen shakti kum hote dikhaayi diye….magar ussko abhi aur bhi bada shock jhelna baaki tha…

Bus ke andar se Ruhi ki khidki dikhta tha, aur Ruhi baal banaate hue dikh rahi thi, jaise Ruhi jaan bujh kar Abhi to dikha rahi thi taake Abhi ko pata chale ke wo jaa rahi hai. Abhi ke paas ek hi mauka aur ek hi raasta tha ke wo wahan jaaye uss khidki ke paas aur ek AAKHRI baar wahan se Ruhi se baat kare…

Abhi ne kaam ko maara goli aur gaya Ruhi ke khidki ke paas…. Ussne dekha Ruhi ne uss yellow suit ko pehna hua tha jiss mein uss din apni maa ke saath apni nani ke yahan gayi thi, halki si make mein thi aur kayamat lag rahi thi… usski maa wahin thi aur Ruhi khudko aine mein dekh rahi thi baal banaate hue…. Abhi ne ek book diya tha Ruhi ko koyi 20 din pehle, to Abhi ne kaha,

“hey Ruhi, mera kitab….” Abhi ki awaaz nahin nikal rahi thi… Ruhi ne nahin suna aur usskki maa ne Ruhi se kaha,

“Wo apna kitab mang raha hai Ruhi”

Ruhi ne thoda chahunkte hue kaha,

“Are haan, main to bilkool hi bhool gayi thi ke ek aap ki kitaab mere paas hai itne dinon se, sorry abhi laayi!”

Ruhi ne uss book ko Abhi ko wapas kiya.

Abhi bahot bahot udaas tha,wo kamzor dikh raha tha, lagta tha bimaar hai. Phir bhi Abhi ne pucha,

“Ruhi kia decide kiya tumne?!”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“Be Patient Abhi!”

Abhi ne ek gehri saans lete hue kaha,

“Abhi issi waqt tum mujhse aise baat kar rahi ho jaise hum ajnabee hein, tum jaise badal gayi ho, jaise tum meri Ruhi nahin koyi aur ho, kyun Ruhi, kal to itna royi thi jab mujhe choat lagi thi nah, tab bhi tum nahin samjhi mere dil ka haal Ruhi?”

Ruhi zor se hanssi…. Wo ek hanssi nahin thi kuch aur tha, wo Abhi ko aur ziada hurt karne ki ek tamacha tha Abhi ke gaal par.

Ruhi ne tab ek chewing gum ke do tukde kiye aur ek tudka Abhi ko diya aur dusra tukda apne munh mein le liya….. wo chewing wo tha jo Ruhi chabaati thi jab Abhi ko piche kiss karne jaati thi…. ek din Ruhi ek chewing chabah rahi thi aur Ruhi ko kiss karte waqt, Abhi ne Ruhi ke munh se usski chewing gum ko apne munh mein le liya tha….. uss roz donon ne phir chewing gum par baat kiye the aur uss din ko bhi Ruhi ne aise hi ek tudka chewing gum diya tha Abhi ko….. aur aaj apni maa ke saamne ussne wohi kiya…… kyun aisa kiya tha Ruhi ne? kyun puraane yaadon ko taaza kar rahi thi ab?! Magar Abhi ko passand aya tha ke Ruhi ne ussko aadha chewing gum diya….

Abhi ka Ruhi ke saath yeh akhri conversation ho raha tha. Abhi ke samajh mein nahin araha tha ke ab wo Ruhi se kia kahe. Sab kuch jaise ulat phulat ho gaya tha, sab bigar gaya tha, jo kuch Abhi ne socha tha kuch bhi veisa nahin ho raha tha sirf iss liye ke Ruhi to jaa rahi thi…. Ulta Abhi ne socha tha aaj wo khud jaega, aaj usska last din hoga wahan aur ussne bahot kuch socha tha ke kaam finish karne ke baad wo Ruhi se baat karne jaega chaahe ghanton bhar hi kyun nah sahhi magar aaj wo apne dil ka haal bayan karta Ruhi se, uske parents se, sab se rokar Ruhi ka haath maangta magar ab Ruhi hi nahin rahegi to kia karega…. Abhi ke paas ab shabd nahin baaki tha kehne ke liye….

Abhi soch raha the ke sirf Ruhi yeh keh deti ke wo Abhi se pyar karti hai aur uss se shaadi karna chahti hai to koyi inkaar nahin karte. Magar ab to lag aisa raha tha ke Ruhi khud nahin chahti thi kyukne wo buss wo buss “NAHIN, NO,” kehti jaa rahi thi.

Abhi ne Ruhi se kaha,

“Ab ‘NO’ keh rahi ho Ruhi, kia Christmas ka tohfa diya aaj tumne mujhko Ruhi!”

Ruhi ne chehre par bina koyi afsos ya ghum dikhaate hue kaha,

“I am very sorry for you Abhi”

Abhi ne kaha,

“kia tum apne papa se nahin keh sakti ke tum bhi mujhe chahti ho?!”

Ruhi ne fake Muskaan mein jawaab diya,

“magar main khud desh chorr rahi hoon nah Abhi!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Okay main intezaar karunga tumhare lautne ka.”

Tab Ruhi ki badi behen ne kaha,

“kab tak? Aap kab tak intezaar karoge isska?”

Abhi: “100 saalon tak!”

Badi behen khamosh ho gayi.

Abhi ne Ruhi ki maa se Ruhi ki father ko bulane ko kaha. Ruhi ki maa ne usse bulaya, baap aaya aur sach mein ek hasmukh chehre wala insaan tha, wo aakar Ruhi ki bed par baitha Abhi ko dekhte hue, aur Abhi ne ussko samjhaya, ke wo aur Ruhi kitna ek dusre se pyar karte hein….. jab Abhi sab keh raha tha Ruhi ke pita se uss waqt Ruhi aine ke saamne khadi khud ko sanwaar rahi thi magar baar baar Abhi ko bhi dekh rahi thi ussko usski pita se baat karte hue….

Ruhi ke pita ne Abhi ko jo jawaab diya wo 100% fake tha, jissko sunkar Abhi samajh gaya ke wo saare baatein banawati the aur Ruhi ki maa ne wo sab kehne ke liye kaha tha ussko. Baap ne Abhi se kaha,

“Dekho main pehle se plan kar chuka hoon ke Ruhi ko apne saath leja raha hoon iss baar, aur phir uss ladke ko hum ne zuban de diya hai wo France mein hai aur wapas aakar Ruhi ko lejaega!”

Tab Ruhi ne Abhi ke taraf dekhte hue kaha,

“Dekha? Main ne kaha tha magar aap yakeen nahin kar rahe the!”

Abhi ne apne dil ke andar khud se kaha,

“Tu bhi jhooti hai Ruhi, jiss din tumne apni virginity wali baat bataayi thi tab to kaha tha ke wo saare abroad wale ladke wali baatein jhoot the, aur ab keh rahi ho ke sach hai…”

Phir Abhi ne Ruhi ke pita se kaha,

“Dekhiye agar main aap se kahun ke main wait karunga, ke iss baar jab aap Ruhi ke saath wapas aao tab aunga, chahe aur 3 saal lag jaye main Ruhi ka intezaar karunga to?”

Baap ne kaha,

“Magar Ruhi ko wo France se lene aega nah, hum ne ussko pehle zuban de diye hain!”

Ruhi ne tab Abhi se apne donon eyebrows uchkaaya kuch iss tarah ke jaise Abhi haar gaya aur wo aur usske pita jeey gaye, aur phir Ruhi ne kaha,

“Dekho Abhi, aap ko bahot saare khubsurat ladkiyan mil jaenge, aap handsome ho, intelligent ho, tez ho, main koyi rani maharani nahin, mujh mein kuch aisa nahin hai ke aap ko sirf main hi chahiye, main bahot buri hoon pucho meri maa se ke main kitni buri ladki hoon!”

Ruh ki maa ne turant Ruhi ki baat par haami bharte hue kaha,

“haan Ruhi bahot hi buri ladki hai”

Abhi ne ussko turant jawaab diya,

“main Ruhi ko kissi tarah se bhi accept karta hoon!”

Usski badi behen ne kaha,

“aap wait karte karte thak jaoge, bore ho jaoge aur aap ko koyi aur mil jaegi dekh lena!”

Abhi ke honth thartharaane lage the kyunke ussko ab dikh gaya tha ke Ruhi to haath se gayi ab…. Usske aankhon se paani behne hi wala tha, ke Abhi ne sar niche jhukaya…. Ruhi ko pata chal gaya ke Abhi ab rone wala hai, to usski bhi aankhen badh aayi, maa, baap, badi behen sab Aabhi ke chehre mein khamosh ghaur se dekh rahe the, sab ko pata tha wo tut chuka hai aur ab ro padega…

Abhi ne sar jhukaaye hue hi kaha,

“okay”

Aur mudh gaya jaane ke liye, to Ruhi ki maa ne ussko awaaz di, Abhi wapas mudha, apne chehre ko uss kitab se chhupaate aur aankh ponchte hue,

Ruhi ke papa ne kaha,

“ghussa mat hona, sorry.”

Abhi ne kaha,

“koyi baat nahin”

Sab ke nazrein Abhi ke chehre par the, sab ko pata tha Abhi ko jhatka laga hai aur ussko bahot dard ho raha hoga, sab ko Abhi ke chehre mein wo ghum, wo dukh dikh raha tha, sab ko pata tha Abhi ke aakhen bhar aaye hein, aur sab ko yeh bhi pata tha ke Abhi apne emotions ko chhupaane ki koshish kar raha hai aur book se apna munh chhupa raha hai….. Ruhi ka brother-in-law khud Abhi ko uss tarah se tutte hue dekh kar heyraan tha aur Abhi ke chehre mein bahot dard bhare chehre se dekhe jaa raha tha….. Ruhi ki badi behen ke aankhen bhar aaye, Ruhi ki maa ke aankhen bhar aaye…. Magar iss baar Ruhi ki aankhen nahin bari thi, aur Ruhi ne Abhi se kaha,

“LOOK ABHI, I AM REALLY VERY SORRY FOR YOU, I MEANT IT, MY HEART FEELS IT FOR YOU ABHI. WISH YOU MUCH COURAGE AND PATIENCE ABHI.”

Abhi ne Ruhi ko halki si Muskaan se dekha aur tapakte aansoowon se usske chehre mein dekhte hue kaha.

“The deception does exist right? So, its okay, never mind Ruhi, you be happy always, that’s all I can wish for you!”

Abhi wapas bus mein jaa baitah aur rone laga, rokna namumkin tha….. ek baar to zor se roya…. Bus ke sabhi kaam karne waale Abhi ke paas aa gaye, koyi usske sar thapthapa, koyi usske peeth par haatyh ferrta, koyi ussko paani deta, sab ussko shant karaane mein lage hue tha…. Mehboob bhi wahin tha, aur wo bhi Abhi ko support karne ka dhong kar raha tha….. Abhi khud ko rokne ki koshish mein laga hua tha magar nahin kar paa raha tha, rona ruk hi nahin raha tha usska

Koyi 30 mins baad Abhi chhup hua aur jo kaam karna baaki tha uss mein lag gaya phir bhi baar baar ro deta tha kaam karte hue…. Pata nahin kia kia soch soch kar rone lagta…..

Aur aayi wo waqt jo Abhi ke liye kayamat se kum nahin tha….

To be continued in the next post immediately….
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Update 38 Ruhi Leaves – Completion Of The Bus​

Ruhi aur baaki ke jaane wale log ghar se nikle; usski badi behen, behnoy, unnke do bache….. Ruhi bus ke paas se guzarte hue teen baar bus ke andar Abhi ko dhunda apne nazron se… bus mein karib 10 log the uss waqt to Ruhi ko dhundna para, aur jab usski nazar Abhi par pari to ussne turant sar niche jhuka liya. Usski haath mein ek halki si bag thi aur kaandhe par usskki handbag.... Abhi se dekha nahin jaa raha tha, usske dil par uss waqt kia guzar raha tha bayaan karna mushkil tha….

Ruhi ki badi behen aur behnoy bachchon ke saath ruk gaye kissi se baat karne ko, aur Ruhi apni cousin ke ghar tak reach hui thi aur ruk kar apne badi behen ka wait karne lagi…. Uss waqt Ruhi ki nazrein bus mein Abhi ko dhund rahe the; aur Abhi ne khud ko sunil ke piche chhupaye hue Ruhi ko dekh raha tha, Sunil ne kaha,

“Abhi wo tumko dhund rahi hai saamne to aa!”

Abhi ne Sunil ke piche se kaha,

“kia faeda yaar?!”

Sunil: “are yaar kia pata ussko kuch kehna hai idhar aa”

Aur Sunil hatt gaya taake Ruhi Abhi ko dekh sake, ab donon aamne saamne the… Abhi ka chehra utra hua tha, aankhen sujh gaye, saaf dikh raha tha… Ruhi bahot udaas chehre se Abhi ke chehre mein dekhti rahi, phir Ruhi se dekha nah gaya, ussne aasmaan mein dekha, phir nazrein niche kar liya aur usske aansoo behne lage Abhi ke liye…. Abhi Ruhi ko nahin dekh paa raha tha agar dekhta rehta to khud rone lagta to Abhi ne chehre mudh liya, aur khud ko phir se Sunil ke piche kar liya tab dekha Ruhi ke taraf to dekha ke Ruhi ussko phir dhund rahi hai rote hue….. Abhi ne sunil se pucha,

“main jaun uss se puchne ke ab kyun ro rahi hai jab mujhko thukda diya?!”

Sunil ne kaha,

“haan ja, ja Abhi aur thoda suna de ussko jaane se pehle”

Aur Abhi bus ke piche wale door se jump mara aur Ruhi ke paas pahuncha, Ruhi ne apna chehra dusri taraf mod liya jab dekha ke Abhi usske taraf badh raha hai….

Sirf koyi 3 minats mila Abhi ko Ruhi se baat karne ki kyunke tab tak Ruhi ki behen aur behnoy ne dekh liya ke Abhi Ruhi ke paas gaya hai to weh log badhne lage donon ke taraf aur Ruhi ki maa bhi aane lagi thi Abhi aur Ruhi ke taraf…… jo Abhi ne kiya uss waqt kissi ne bhi socha nahin tha ke wo sabke saamne open mein weisa karega… aur Ruhi ne bhi virodh nahin kiya aur Abhi ko karne diya jo wo karna chahta tha, magar sirf 3 minat mein sab hua…. Aisa laga ke jaise 3 seconds mein sab kuch ho gaya jaise ek pal mein sab hua….

Abhi ne pehle Ruhi ka haath thaama, wo ro rahi thi, bina kuch kahe Abhi ne Ruhi ke donon bazu ko usski bag sameth apne kaandhe par kiya, Ruhi ne apne baahon ko lapet liya Abhi ke kaandhe par aur Abhi ne ruhi se kaha,

“I want to hug you for a last time, don’t stop me please, send all others to hell, live this moment for me for a last time I beg of you Ruhi, if you ever loved me for one second don’t stop me….”

Ruhi roti gayi aur Abhi ne Ruhi ko zor se apne baahon mein jakra, aur bus se aur Ruhi ke family members se peeth kar liya Ruhi ko baahon mein jakre hue aur Ruhi ke thudi ko apne chehre ke taraf uthaya Abhi ne, uss pal ko Ruhi ne khudko completely samarpan kar diya Abhi ko aur apne aakhon ko band kar liya…. Ruhi ke aansoowon ne behte hue usski gaal par ek lakeer jaise khinch chuki thi, Abhi ne Ruhi ke honton par apna honth rakha aur donon ne ek dusre ko kiss kiya sare aam sabke saamne, yahan tak ke main road se koyi jaa raha tha to sab dekha hoga ke ek ladka aur ladki khada kiss kar rahe hein…..

Magar ek baat thi, buss mein se kissi ko wo kiss nazar nahin ayaa nah hi Ruhi ke kissi bhi parent ko kiss karte hue dikhe. Wo iss liye ke Abhi oonche kad ka tha aur ussne peeth kar liya tha unn sab logon se aur usska sar jhuka hua tha Ruhi ke chehre par buss piche se sirf aisa lag raha tha ke Abhi Ruhi ko baahon mein bhar ke hug kar raha hai…..

Kiss karte waqt Abhi ke munh mein Ruhi ke aansoo bhi jaa rahe the aur ussko namkeen taste ho raha tha aur Ruhi Abhi ke aanso taste kar rahi thi, donon ek dusre ke aansoo pee rahe the uss pal ko….Abhi ne unn sab ke paas aate hue kadmon ko sun raha tha to jaise jaise unn sab ke chalte hue kadam paas aane lage to Abhi ne kiss rok diya, aur sab saamne aaye to donon sirf ek dusre ke baahon meikn jakre hue the….

Jiss waqt Ruhi ka jeeb Abhi ke munh mein agaya tha, Ruhi ka rona stop ho gaya tha bilkool, aur wo Abhi ka kiss enjoy karne lagi thi aur ussne khud Abhi ko apne baahon mein bhar liya tha.

Magar jab Ruhi ki badi behen paas aagayi, aur Ruhi ki ma bhi paas aayi aur kaha,

“Ruhi tu itni besharam kaise ho sakti hai chorr ussko!”

Ruhi jaise kuch nahin sunn rahi thi, aur usske aankhon se phir aansoo behne lage to Abhi ne usske chehre mein dekhte hue dhire se kaha,

“This was your Christmas gift, you will remember this on ALL the next Christmas which will come in your life, and I know that you love me a lot but something is hindering you to accept my love… do not forget you will receive a new year card from me before the new year, I will no longer be here after today, its my last day here…. So please be back before 30th to receive my letter with the postman. I love you and will always do till the end of my life never forget that. Even if you get married to someone else my love for you will remain the same – even if I get married to someone else still my love for you will NEVER change, always remember this Ruhi. Farewell my love, don’t know if I will ever see you again, but I pray I do! Bye Ruhi”

Jab Abhi apna last, line bol raha tha usske aankkhon se thamne ka naam nahin le raha tha, abi ke honth thartharaa rahe the aur ruhi bhi jhar jhar behte aansoo se Abhi ke chehre mein dekhte hue ussko sun rahi thi…. Aur usski badi behen donon ke baahon ko ek dusre se chhurra rahi thi yeh kehte hue,

“chorro nah ek dusre ko dekho sab log dekh rahe hein kyun aise tamasha bana rahe ho tum donon!!”

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“kia film ki shooting chal rahi hai yahan?!”

Aur Ruhi boli… Abhi ne nahin socha tha ke wo kuch jawaab degi; Ruhi ne apne aankh ko ponchte hue apni maa ko ek teerchi nazar se dekhte hue kaha,

“haan shooting chal rahi thi, aap ne nahin dekha?!”

Tab tak donon ek dusre ke baahon se alag ho gaye the magar donon ek dusre ke nazron ki gehraayi mein dekh rahe the aur phir Ruhi ki aankhen bhar aayi aur kaampte hue honthon se Ruhi ne bilak bilak kar Abhi se kaha,

“Bye Abhi, merry Christmas and happy new year to you, and I am really very very sorry for you, my heart will cry for you Abhi bye I am going Abhi!!”

Ruhi bahot zor se rote hue chal kar main road ke taraf badhi aur Abhi wahin baith gaya zameen par rote hue apne chehre ko apne haath mein thaam kar, aur jab bhi Ruhi mudhkar Abhi ko dekhti to wo aur zor se roti gayi….

Abhi ko aisa feel ho raha tha ke Ruhi bhaag kar wapas usske paas aegi, Abhi soch raha tha ke kyun Ruhi weisa nahin kar rahi, Abhi last moment tak ek aas lagaaye baitha raha ke Ruhi wapas aegi, nahin jaegi apne behen ke saath…. Magar Abhi ne tab khud se kaha ke yeh kissi movie ki climax scene nahin hai jo Ruhi bhaag kar usske paas wapas aati, yeh hakikat tha, aur Ruhi bilkool wapas nahin aayi balke chali gayi bus mein apni behen ke saath, usske ghar jisska pata Abhi ko bilkool nahin tha….

Abhi ne tab socha ke jaan bujh kar usske ghar walon ne ussko kaahin aur bhej diya varna Ruhi tut jaati Abhi ke pyar mein, agar wo yaha rehti to Abhi ussko convince kar leta aur sabko mana leta haan karne ke liye…..

Abhi kaam nahin kar paa raha tha, ussne Saeed se kaha ke ussko rest lena hoga wo kamzor feel karne laga tha, to saeed ne ussko jaa kar bus ke andar ek seat par araam karne ko kaha.

Sunil ne pucha,

“Abhi usske pita ne ki kaha tumse? Tum uss se baat karne gaye the nah kuch der pehle?”

Abhi ne apne sar ko thaame hue dabe awaaz mein jawaab diya,

“Ruhi ko apne saath lekar jaega S.Arabia”

Sunil ne kaha,

“namumkin, nahin ho sakta, jhoot kaha uss ne tumse.”

Abhi:”mujhe pata hai sab jhoot kaha yaar, kal usski maa ne yeh sab kaha tha mujhe, issi liye kal mujhe nahin milne diya Ruhi ke baap se taake weh log ussko seekha sake ke ussko kia bolna hai mujhe. Matlab saaf hai ke mujhko inkaar karna tha so kar diya sab ne Ruhi ke ilawa!!! Agar Ruhi mujhse pyar nahin karti to abhi uss tarah se mujhse sabke saamne lipat kar nahin roti, mujhe kiss nahin karti open mein aise!”

Tab sunil ne kaha,

“Ek baat bolun bhai, yeh family aise hi hein, khaas kar Ruhi ki maa, mere time mein bhi usne yehi kiya tha, yahan se Ruhi ki behen ko bhej diya tha apni nani ke yahan, usska mangitar uss se wahan milne jata tha yahan nahin…. Ruhi ki maa kissi par bharosa nahin karti, ussko darr thi ke kahin main Ruhi ki behen ko uda na le jaun kabhi! Ab dekho ussne tumse Ruhi ko bhi alag kar diya, yahan se door kar diya taake tum ussko aur nah apne pyar mein jakar sako. Isska matlab saaf hai ke Ruhi tumse pyar karti hai aur ghar mein Ruhi ne awaaz uthaayi hogi aur kaha hoga ke wo tumse shaadi karegi issi liye usski maa ne usko yahan se hatta diya!”

Baithe baithe Abhi Ruhi ko yaad karte hue phir rone laga…. Saeed ne aur baaki ke logon ne dekha, sab udaas the, sabko khush hona chahiye ta kyunke aakhri din tha kaam par, sab Khushi ke saath finish karna tha magar Abhi ke rone se, aur Ruhi ke chale jaane se ek maatam jaisa chhah gaya tha wahan….. jiss din se uss bus mein kaam shuru hua uss din se Abhi Ruhi ki love story shuru hui…. Jaise jaise bus banta gaya weise weise Abhi Ruhi ka pyar badhta gaya bus ke saath… hona yeh chahiye the ke jab bus ban gayi tab Abhi aur Ruhi ki mangni ya shaadi honi chahiye the matlab donon ka pyar official hona chahiye tha – yeh Abhi ne aisa hi likha tha apne diary mein.

Saeed ne Abhi ko phir rote suna to kaha, “Abhi phir se? are ruk ja dekh sab log tumko dekh rahe rahe hein, idhar aa meri madad kar issko fix karne mein… yaar aaj bhi late raat tak kaam karna hai kia, chal aa khatam karte hein nah!”

Mehboob ne kaha,

“are mujhe nahin pata tha tu to bada rotlu nikla Abhi, main tujhe mard samajhta tha!”

Abhi ko Mehboob se nafrat ho gaya tha jab se Ruhi ne ussko bataya tha ke wo usske pyar ke khilaaf hai, to Mehboob ko Abhi ne jawaab diya,

“kyun mard ko dard nahin hota? Mard ke aansoo nahin hote to ankhen fodh dena chahiye bina aansoo ke aankh hein to!!”

Ruhi chali gayi, Abhi ki khushiyon ko apne saath lekar, aur chorr gayi thi Abhi ke liye, dard, udaasi, gham, tanhaayi, akelapan, aur aansoo.

Abhi ko kaam jaari rakhna tha aur asaan nahin tha usske liye uss haal mein kaam karna, uss haalaat ko face karna…. Abhi ne khud ko bahot mushkilon se sambhaalte hue apne kaam mein dhyan diya, kaam karna shuru to kiya magar reh reh kar Ruhi ki yaadon mein chalajata aur achanak se ro padhta…. Ussne uss din ko achanak yaad kiya jiss din Ruhi ke chaati mein apne sar daalkar usski khushbhoo sungh raha tha, ab bhi ussko Ruhi ki wo khushbhoo mehek rahe the… hamara zehen bhi ajib o gharib computer hai jo sab apne memory mein save rakhta hai yahan tak ke ek khushbhoo jo kitne din piche naak se sungh kar zehen mein gaya tha aaj bhi yaad karne se wo khushbhoo yaad ata hai…. Sirf Ruhi ki jism ki uss khushbhoo ko yaad karke Abhi ro baitha…. Phir sambhala khudko aur kaam karne laga…..

Ruhi ki maa ko afsos ho raha tha Abhi ke liye. Wo abhi ko kaafi der se dekh rahi thi, aur wo khud emotional ho gayi thi Abhi ko dekh kar aur usske dard ko samajh kar…. wo jaanti thi ke Abhi iss waqt kiss dard se guzar raha hoga…..

Shaam ke 6 baj chuke the, kaam jaari tha, Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi se pucha,

“Naaraaz ho?

Abhi ne kaha,

“bilkool nahin, udaas hoon haan, ghum mein dooba hua hoon haan magar naraz nahin hoon”

Aur Ruhi ki maa ne kuch aise baatein kahe Abhi se jiss se Abhi ko thoda sukoon mila, ussko ek umeed ki kiran phir se dikhaayi diye…

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“Hum ne khaas kar iss liye aap ki proposal ko accept nahin kiya kyun ke aap jo kaam kar rahe ho yeh permanent kaam nahin hai, yeh kaam aaj hai to kal nahin, aaj yahan se kaam end hoga to kia karoge? Jab tak dusra kaam nahin milta bekaar rahoge nah? issi liye! Mere cousins aur nephews hein jo yeh kaam karte hein aur aksar bekaar rehte hein, unemployed hein, mujhe apni Ruhi ki fikar hai Abhi.”

Abhi ne heirat se ussko dekha aur kaha,

“Oh my God! Yehi vajah thi ki aap ne accept nahin kiya?”

Ruhi ki maa: “haan Abhi buss issi liye”

Abhi ke dimaagh mein kuch chal raha tha uss waqt aur ussne pucha,

“Aur agar main kal koyi aur behtar kaam kar raha hunga tab?!”

Ruhi ki maa: “dekho Abhi, kal ko agar tum koyi behtar kaam kar rahe ho aur tab tak Ruhi ki shadi nahin hui hogi tab hum zaroor consider karenge tumhare proposal ko!”

Abhi ko bahot araam mila aur pucha,

“Ruhi aaj wapas nahin aegi?”

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“Nahin wo apne chacha ke ghar rahegi aur supermarket mein help karegi kyunke tumko pata hi hoga ke sheher mein kitne bhidh baadh hote hein Christmas aur new year ke mauke par, late night shopping hote hein to kaam bahut ziada hote hein to Ruhi help karegi apne chacha ko, Manoj bhi wahin kaam karta hai nah har roz…”

Abhi ne yaad kiya ke haan ek baar Manoj ne usse bataya tha ke wo ek supermarket mein kaam karta hai, ek chhota sa self service tha naam tha supermarket. To Abhi ne pucha,

“To Ruhi kab ghar wapas aegi ab?”

Jawaab diya usski maa ne,

“Sunday ko aegi, magar New Year ko wahin rahegi shayad.”

Abhi ne tab pucha,

“Aur wo supermarket kidhar hai exactly?”

Ruhi ki maa ne exact address de diya ke Royal cinema ke paas hai….

Ab wo sheher Abhi ke ghar se ziada door nahin tha aur Abhi udhar aksar jata tha aur ussko exactly pata tha royal cinema kahan hai kyunke uss cinema hall mein Abhi kayi baar movie dekhne gaya hai, Abhi uss jagah ko bahot achhi tarah pehchaanta tha…

Abhi ne socha ke kyun Ruhi ki maa ne ussko saare information de diye Ruhi ke baare mein ke kahan reh rahi hai, kahan supermarket hai, matlab wo chahti hai ke abhi uss se udhar milne jaaye…. Jab usski beti aur Abhi milkar rone lage the to uss se dekha nah gaya aur shayad ab pachta rahi thi donon ko juda karke aur ab chahhti thi ke Abhi uss se udhar jaa kar mile….

Abhi bahot khush hua aur ab relax feel karne laga tha. To phir Abhi ab normal kaam karne laga.

Aaj bhi kal raat ki tarah Mehboob ke ghar dinner kiya gaya. Abhi kitna chahta tha ke Ruhi wahan hoti, kal bhi raat ko dinner kiye the sab to Ruhi nahin thi aur aaj bhi nahin hai….

Jab Abhi washroom jaa raha tha wash karne dinner se pehle to Mahesh ne Abhi ko awaaz diya,

“hey Abhi?!”

Abhi ne mudhkar dekha to Mahesh ne kaha,

“udhar andhera hai idhar aao hamare kitchen ke basin ke paas haath dho lo”

Magar Abhi ne kaha ke thik hai chalta hai, par Mahesh ne zid kiya ke wo wahan aakar haath dhoe… to Abhi gaya Ruhi ki kitchen mein aaj dusri baar gaya tha, magar aaj Ruhi ke bina gaya tha wahan… basin ke paas saboon se apne haath dhoya Abhi ne, aur khayaalon mein sochne laga ke kitne baar ussne Ruhi ko uss basin ke paas bartan dhote hue dekha hai… kitna khush hota wo agar aaj Ruhi yahin hoti, to kitni khush wo bhi hoti Abhi ko apne kitchen mein ek baar aur dekh kar….

Haath dhone ke baad Abhi ne uss table ko kiss kiya aur table se baat kiya, ek sandesha chorra Abhi ne uss table se ke wo Ruhi ko bata de ke Abhi aya tha idhar aur ussko kiss send kiya hai.

Dinner ke baad kaam chalu raha aur Abhi Ruhi ko bahot miss karne laga…. Raton mein iskh ka bhoot ziada chadhta hai, kal raat bhi Ruhi nahin thi aaj bhi nahin aur Abhi par ishk ka bhoot sawaar tha…tadap raha tha wo Ruhi ko yaad karte hue….

Jab se Abhi Christmas eve ki night celebrate karna shuru kiya hai doston ke beech aaj pehli baar tha ke iss raat ko Abhi kaam kar raha tha jiss waqt ussko sheher mein ghumna, mauj masti karna chahiye tha…. aur Abhi ne socha iss waqt Ruhi supermarket mein hogi kyunke late night shopping hota tha iss raat ko….

Raat ko 12 baje kaam finish hua… bus COMPLETE HO GAYA… aur start kiya gaya aur khud Mehboob ne drive kiya… George saath tha, sunil, aur baaki ke sab saath the bus mein….

Abhi ne Rahima ke paas ek message chorra Ruhi ke liye, Abhi ne Rahima se kaha,

“pleae Ruhi ko mera sandesha pahucha dena, kehna ke main ne ussko merry xmas wish kiya aur kehna ke jaise ke ussne mujhe kaha main bahot patience rakhunga”

Manoj wapas agaya tha kaam se, aur wo bhi bus mein aya. Abhi ko aur 40 bus ke photos diye…., Abhi ne ussko pay kiya… Aur road par bus ki kayi aur photos liya ussne jo Abhi ko baad mein dega ussne kaha.

Mehboob khud drive karte hue Abhi ke team ko wapas ghar chorrne ja raha tha, bus almost bhara hua tha, bus mein Rahima, Farzina, Reza, sunil, George, sunil ka assistant, Manoj, Mahesh, George ka apprentice, aur Reza ke behnein bhare hue the Sirf Ruhi ki kami thi bus mein…. Kamaal hai Abhi ne socha, agar aaj wo hoti to wo bhi saath baithti Abhi ke saath bus mein wahan se 40 kms tak drive karte hue Abhi ke ghar tak jaati aur Abhi ka ghar bhi dekh leti….. magar afsos!

Jab bus Abhi ke ghar ke saamne ruka to Mehboob aur Reza ne kaha

“Achah to Abhi yahan rehta hai wo raha usska ghar… hmmm!!”

Subha ke 1 baj chuka tha jab Abhi ne apna diary khola aur likhna shuru kiya….. phir sone gaya to usska takiya bheeg gaya itna wo ro raha tha Ruhi ko sochte hue ……

To be continued….. (5700 words from both updates)
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casi bhai bahut hi dard bhara update hai yaar
aansoo ko rok nahin paya main padhte hue apne aap nikal gaya
bhai Ruhi to bahut pyar karti hai abhi se magar kia baat hai jo Ruhi itni bedard ban gayi Abhi ke saath
kaun rok raha hai ruhi ko yaar?
sirf maa baap to nahin rok rahi ussko mujhe to kuch aur hi lagta ai
kahion ruhi ki koyi husband to nahin hai kahin?
aisa to nahin ke usski husband hai aur wo jail mein hai?
ya kahin kissi majboori se saamne nahin aa sakta?
kahi wo koyi mafia vaghaira to nahin usska husband?
koyi to aisi baat ai jiss se ruhi darr rahi hai magar pyar to zaroor karti hai abi se varna ruk kar usske gale nahin lagti aur itna roti nahin jaate hue...
khiar pata nahin aap ko hi sab pata ai bhai sab thik kar dena casi bhai
bahut shaandaar , lajawaab aur betareen likha hai aap ne
itni badi mega update ke liye bahut bahut shukriya bhai :yourock:
 
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Amity said:
Fantastic update casinar ji. Although it is painful and very sad, despite that it moistened my eyes and fastened my heartbeat, even it made me feel deeply for Abhi, still the update is worth a read.
Hats off to the patience of Abhi. A true lover nerver gives up.
As I said in my previous comment, as a girl I can understand and feel and cry for Ruhi also. She must be equally suffering. I am SURE of that, but she is STRONG. She can hide her feelings and she knows how to make Abhi have disgust for her.
Great going my dear. I am eager to read the LAST day Abhi works at that place and want to know what happens then.
Thank you casinar ji for this wonderful story. :applause: :applause: :applause:
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You said as a girl you can understand and feel RUHI'S pain also.....good....

But In my point of view this is not love.....we can say....hmmmmm...MIND GAMES....

What if.....she likes someone else.....what if.....the feelings she had for him....they just.....like some kinda attractions.... for some time.....
What if....she found Abhi.....more desirable and sensuas......at the time....

Aapne kaha ak ladki hee samajh sakti hai.....lekin aapko pata ho to.....

Ak ladki relationship ke iss stage par iss tarah ki baate tab hee karti hai.....

Jab wo ak saath kai jagah lagi ho.....

Ya phir use naya mil gaya ho or pahle waale ko ditch karna ho.....OR iss breakup ki wajah bhi saamne waale ko thehra na ho.....

Thanks......
 
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Casinar said:
Update 37 The Last Day & Night In Ruhi’s Aangan​

Wednesday 24th December – Christmas Eve.

Abhi ne iss din ke liye apni diary mein likha hai:

It has been the last and worst day and night in Ruhi’s yard.

Subha subha Ruhi ki maa Abhi ke saath hanss rahi thi. Aur Abhi ko Ruhi nazar aayi kitchen ke andar. Aaj Ruhi ek nayi nightdress mein thi. Ek khubsurat nightdress jo safed thi aur uss par bade bade red, black aur green dots the. Ruhi dada ji ke armchair par baithi hui thi.

Abhi ne usski maa se baat ki. Aur uss aurat ne iss baar kaha,

“Sorry Abhi, Ruhi ke papa ne ussko iss baar apne saath Saudi Arabia lejaane ka faisla kiya hai!!”

Abhi ko itna ghussa aya ke usska mann kiya ke ussko gaaliyon se nehla de ussi waqt. Abhi ne socha issi liye wo kal hi Ruhi ke baap se bat karna chahta tha iss se pehle ke Ruhi ki maa khud koyi bahana bana kar apne pati ke munh mein koyi baat khud nah daal de…. Abhi samajh gaya ke kal raat ko Ruhi ki maa ne khud sab kuch bata diya hoga apne pati ko ke Abhi Ruhi se pyar karta hai magar ussko Rishta nahin passand kyunke ussko Abhi ka kaam nahin passand, to apne pati se keh diya hoga ke aaj wo ladka aap se Ruhi ka haath mangega to aap mana kar dena…..

Abhi issi liye nahin chahta tha ke koyi aur Ruhi ke pita se baat kare issi liye wo sabse pehle baat karna chahta tha Ruhi ke pita se kal raat ko…..

Abhi sab kuch apne dimaagh mein rewind karte hue soch raha tha aur samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha ke jiss din Ruhi gayi thi apne nani ke ghar tabhi se Ruhi berukhi se pesh ane lagi Abhi ke saath, aur kal raat ko isi baat ke liye Ruhi ke papa ko bhi legaye sab wahan aur issi baare mein baat kiye gaye honge aur sabne milkar decide kiya hoga ke Abhi ko yeh jawaab de diya jaaye ke Ruhi ke pita Ruhi ko apne saath lekar jaa raha hai iss baar….. Abhi ko puri film dikh gayi usske dimaagh mein… to Abhi ne Ruhi ki maa se kaha,

“koyi mujhko laakhon rupay bhi dede nah to main yakeen nahin karunga? Saudi Arabia mein koyi apni beti ko lejata hai? Ladki ko? Unn vehshi, tharki Arab logon ke beech? Aap mujhko ullo samajhte ho nah aunty? Thik hai wohi samajhiye aap mujhe….”

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“tum khud puchlo agar yakeen nahin hai to!”

Abhi: “puchunga to ab wo to yehi kahega nah? sab mile hue hein iss mein koyi shak nahin, jo aap ne ussko kehne ko kaha wohi kahega wo…. Zaahir si baat hai.”

Din bhar Abhi ranjh o ghum mein raha. Usski maansik stithi normal nahin raha din bhar….. ussko saans lene mein takliff hota raha baar baar….. Ruhi dikhi ussko kayi baar magar baat karna naamumkin tha….

Aur din ke 2.30 ko Abhi ko pata chala ke Ruhi ki badi behen ussko apne saath lekar jaa rahi hai, Ruhi apni behen ke ghar kuch dinon ko beetaane ke liye jaa rahi thi…. Abhi ko zabardast jhatka laga ye khabar sunkar…. Usska uss aangan mein aakhri din tha aur wo chahta tha ke Ruhi ko wo jee bhar ke dekhe aur mauka milne par uss se baat kare apna pyar ka waasta de Ruhi ko…. Magar jab suna ke Ruhi jaa rahi hai to Abhi jaise tut gaya… Farzina ne Abhi ko bataya ke Ruhi apni badi behen ke saath jaa rahi hai, ab pata nahin ke Ruhi ne khud farzinah ko yeh kehne liye bheja tha ya nahin, Abhi ko shak tha ke khud Ruhi ne hi Farzinah ko kaha tha Abhi ko jaakar bataane ke liye ke wo jaa rahi hai…. Abhi ko shcok laga, shock par shock, dard par dard, Abhi ki sehen shakti kum hote dikhaayi diye….magar ussko abhi aur bhi bada shock jhelna baaki tha…

Bus ke andar se Ruhi ki khidki dikhta tha, aur Ruhi baal banaate hue dikh rahi thi, jaise Ruhi jaan bujh kar Abhi to dikha rahi thi taake Abhi ko pata chale ke wo jaa rahi hai. Abhi ke paas ek hi mauka aur ek hi raasta tha ke wo wahan jaaye uss khidki ke paas aur ek AAKHRI baar wahan se Ruhi se baat kare…

Abhi ne kaam ko maara goli aur gaya Ruhi ke khidki ke paas…. Ussne dekha Ruhi ne uss yellow suit ko pehna hua tha jiss mein uss din apni maa ke saath apni nani ke yahan gayi thi, halki si make mein thi aur kayamat lag rahi thi… usski maa wahin thi aur Ruhi khudko aine mein dekh rahi thi baal banaate hue…. Abhi ne ek book diya tha Ruhi ko koyi 20 din pehle, to Abhi ne kaha,

“hey Ruhi, mera kitab….” Abhi ki awaaz nahin nikal rahi thi… Ruhi ne nahin suna aur usskki maa ne Ruhi se kaha,

“Wo apna kitab mang raha hai Ruhi”

Ruhi ne thoda chahunkte hue kaha,

“Are haan, main to bilkool hi bhool gayi thi ke ek aap ki kitaab mere paas hai itne dinon se, sorry abhi laayi!”

Ruhi ne uss book ko Abhi ko wapas kiya.

Abhi bahot bahot udaas tha,wo kamzor dikh raha tha, lagta tha bimaar hai. Phir bhi Abhi ne pucha,

“Ruhi kia decide kiya tumne?!”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“Be Patient Abhi!”

Abhi ne ek gehri saans lete hue kaha,

“Abhi issi waqt tum mujhse aise baat kar rahi ho jaise hum ajnabee hein, tum jaise badal gayi ho, jaise tum meri Ruhi nahin koyi aur ho, kyun Ruhi, kal to itna royi thi jab mujhe choat lagi thi nah, tab bhi tum nahin samjhi mere dil ka haal Ruhi?”

Ruhi zor se hanssi…. Wo ek hanssi nahin thi kuch aur tha, wo Abhi ko aur ziada hurt karne ki ek tamacha tha Abhi ke gaal par.

Ruhi ne tab ek chewing gum ke do tukde kiye aur ek tudka Abhi ko diya aur dusra tukda apne munh mein le liya….. wo chewing wo tha jo Ruhi chabaati thi jab Abhi ko piche kiss karne jaati thi…. ek din Ruhi ek chewing chabah rahi thi aur Ruhi ko kiss karte waqt, Abhi ne Ruhi ke munh se usski chewing gum ko apne munh mein le liya tha….. uss roz donon ne phir chewing gum par baat kiye the aur uss din ko bhi Ruhi ne aise hi ek tudka chewing gum diya tha Abhi ko….. aur aaj apni maa ke saamne ussne wohi kiya…… kyun aisa kiya tha Ruhi ne? kyun puraane yaadon ko taaza kar rahi thi ab?! Magar Abhi ko passand aya tha ke Ruhi ne ussko aadha chewing gum diya….

Abhi ka Ruhi ke saath yeh akhri conversation ho raha tha. Abhi ke samajh mein nahin araha tha ke ab wo Ruhi se kia kahe. Sab kuch jaise ulat phulat ho gaya tha, sab bigar gaya tha, jo kuch Abhi ne socha tha kuch bhi veisa nahin ho raha tha sirf iss liye ke Ruhi to jaa rahi thi…. Ulta Abhi ne socha tha aaj wo khud jaega, aaj usska last din hoga wahan aur ussne bahot kuch socha tha ke kaam finish karne ke baad wo Ruhi se baat karne jaega chaahe ghanton bhar hi kyun nah sahhi magar aaj wo apne dil ka haal bayan karta Ruhi se, uske parents se, sab se rokar Ruhi ka haath maangta magar ab Ruhi hi nahin rahegi to kia karega…. Abhi ke paas ab shabd nahin baaki tha kehne ke liye….

Abhi soch raha the ke sirf Ruhi yeh keh deti ke wo Abhi se pyar karti hai aur uss se shaadi karna chahti hai to koyi inkaar nahin karte. Magar ab to lag aisa raha tha ke Ruhi khud nahin chahti thi kyukne wo buss wo buss “NAHIN, NO,” kehti jaa rahi thi.

Abhi ne Ruhi se kaha,

“Ab ‘NO’ keh rahi ho Ruhi, kia Christmas ka tohfa diya aaj tumne mujhko Ruhi!”

Ruhi ne chehre par bina koyi afsos ya ghum dikhaate hue kaha,

“I am very sorry for you Abhi”

Abhi ne kaha,

“kia tum apne papa se nahin keh sakti ke tum bhi mujhe chahti ho?!”

Ruhi ne fake Muskaan mein jawaab diya,

“magar main khud desh chorr rahi hoon nah Abhi!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Okay main intezaar karunga tumhare lautne ka.”

Tab Ruhi ki badi behen ne kaha,

“kab tak? Aap kab tak intezaar karoge isska?”

Abhi: “100 saalon tak!”

Badi behen khamosh ho gayi.

Abhi ne Ruhi ki maa se Ruhi ki father ko bulane ko kaha. Ruhi ki maa ne usse bulaya, baap aaya aur sach mein ek hasmukh chehre wala insaan tha, wo aakar Ruhi ki bed par baitha Abhi ko dekhte hue, aur Abhi ne ussko samjhaya, ke wo aur Ruhi kitna ek dusre se pyar karte hein….. jab Abhi sab keh raha tha Ruhi ke pita se uss waqt Ruhi aine ke saamne khadi khud ko sanwaar rahi thi magar baar baar Abhi ko bhi dekh rahi thi ussko usski pita se baat karte hue….

Ruhi ke pita ne Abhi ko jo jawaab diya wo 100% fake tha, jissko sunkar Abhi samajh gaya ke wo saare baatein banawati the aur Ruhi ki maa ne wo sab kehne ke liye kaha tha ussko. Baap ne Abhi se kaha,

“Dekho main pehle se plan kar chuka hoon ke Ruhi ko apne saath leja raha hoon iss baar, aur phir uss ladke ko hum ne zuban de diya hai wo France mein hai aur wapas aakar Ruhi ko lejaega!”

Tab Ruhi ne Abhi ke taraf dekhte hue kaha,

“Dekha? Main ne kaha tha magar aap yakeen nahin kar rahe the!”

Abhi ne apne dil ke andar khud se kaha,

“Tu bhi jhooti hai Ruhi, jiss din tumne apni virginity wali baat bataayi thi tab to kaha tha ke wo saare abroad wale ladke wali baatein jhoot the, aur ab keh rahi ho ke sach hai…”

Phir Abhi ne Ruhi ke pita se kaha,

“Dekhiye agar main aap se kahun ke main wait karunga, ke iss baar jab aap Ruhi ke saath wapas aao tab aunga, chahe aur 3 saal lag jaye main Ruhi ka intezaar karunga to?”

Baap ne kaha,

“Magar Ruhi ko wo France se lene aega nah, hum ne ussko pehle zuban de diye hain!”

Ruhi ne tab Abhi se apne donon eyebrows uchkaaya kuch iss tarah ke jaise Abhi haar gaya aur wo aur usske pita jeey gaye, aur phir Ruhi ne kaha,

“Dekho Abhi, aap ko bahot saare khubsurat ladkiyan mil jaenge, aap handsome ho, intelligent ho, tez ho, main koyi rani maharani nahin, mujh mein kuch aisa nahin hai ke aap ko sirf main hi chahiye, main bahot buri hoon pucho meri maa se ke main kitni buri ladki hoon!”

Ruh ki maa ne turant Ruhi ki baat par haami bharte hue kaha,

“haan Ruhi bahot hi buri ladki hai”

Abhi ne ussko turant jawaab diya,

“main Ruhi ko kissi tarah se bhi accept karta hoon!”

Usski badi behen ne kaha,

“aap wait karte karte thak jaoge, bore ho jaoge aur aap ko koyi aur mil jaegi dekh lena!”

Abhi ke honth thartharaane lage the kyunke ussko ab dikh gaya tha ke Ruhi to haath se gayi ab…. Usske aankhon se paani behne hi wala tha, ke Abhi ne sar niche jhukaya…. Ruhi ko pata chal gaya ke Abhi ab rone wala hai, to usski bhi aankhen badh aayi, maa, baap, badi behen sab Aabhi ke chehre mein khamosh ghaur se dekh rahe the, sab ko pata tha wo tut chuka hai aur ab ro padega…

Abhi ne sar jhukaaye hue hi kaha,

“okay”

Aur mudh gaya jaane ke liye, to Ruhi ki maa ne ussko awaaz di, Abhi wapas mudha, apne chehre ko uss kitab se chhupaate aur aankh ponchte hue,

Ruhi ke papa ne kaha,

“ghussa mat hona, sorry.”

Abhi ne kaha,

“koyi baat nahin”

Sab ke nazrein Abhi ke chehre par the, sab ko pata tha Abhi ko jhatka laga hai aur ussko bahot dard ho raha hoga, sab ko Abhi ke chehre mein wo ghum, wo dukh dikh raha tha, sab ko pata tha Abhi ke aakhen bhar aaye hein, aur sab ko yeh bhi pata tha ke Abhi apne emotions ko chhupaane ki koshish kar raha hai aur book se apna munh chhupa raha hai….. Ruhi ka brother-in-law khud Abhi ko uss tarah se tutte hue dekh kar heyraan tha aur Abhi ke chehre mein bahot dard bhare chehre se dekhe jaa raha tha….. Ruhi ki badi behen ke aankhen bhar aaye, Ruhi ki maa ke aankhen bhar aaye…. Magar iss baar Ruhi ki aankhen nahin bari thi, aur Ruhi ne Abhi se kaha,

“LOOK ABHI, I AM REALLY VERY SORRY FOR YOU, I MEANT IT, MY HEART FEELS IT FOR YOU ABHI. WISH YOU MUCH COURAGE AND PATIENCE ABHI.”

Abhi ne Ruhi ko halki si Muskaan se dekha aur tapakte aansoowon se usske chehre mein dekhte hue kaha.

“The deception does exist right? So, its okay, never mind Ruhi, you be happy always, that’s all I can wish for you!”

Abhi wapas bus mein jaa baitah aur rone laga, rokna namumkin tha….. ek baar to zor se roya…. Bus ke sabhi kaam karne waale Abhi ke paas aa gaye, koyi usske sar thapthapa, koyi usske peeth par haatyh ferrta, koyi ussko paani deta, sab ussko shant karaane mein lage hue tha…. Mehboob bhi wahin tha, aur wo bhi Abhi ko support karne ka dhong kar raha tha….. Abhi khud ko rokne ki koshish mein laga hua tha magar nahin kar paa raha tha, rona ruk hi nahin raha tha usska

Koyi 30 mins baad Abhi chhup hua aur jo kaam karna baaki tha uss mein lag gaya phir bhi baar baar ro deta tha kaam karte hue…. Pata nahin kia kia soch soch kar rone lagta…..

Aur aayi wo waqt jo Abhi ke liye kayamat se kum nahin tha….

To be continued in the next post immediately….
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I won't say much about this update but I knew this was about to happen
So I just have to praise your writing and the way you narrated and described all the events of that day.
it's obvious that Ruhi's parents are lying and just getting rid of Abhi.
they do not want the union of Abhi and Ruhi as they should have other plans for their daughter.
but I wonder why Ruhi played with the heart of Abhi? why she asked her to stay the night with her, why she approached Abhi that much etc...
Yes the update made me cry as I put myself in the shoes of Abhi when I read this story so I felt I was facing all that and it's such a hard hit when the girl you love replies like that in front of her parents and then leaves you alone
great writing casi bro :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause:
 
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Update 38 Ruhi Leaves – Completion Of The Bus​

Ruhi aur baaki ke jaane wale log ghar se nikle; usski badi behen, behnoy, unnke do bache….. Ruhi bus ke paas se guzarte hue teen baar bus ke andar Abhi ko dhunda apne nazron se… bus mein karib 10 log the uss waqt to Ruhi ko dhundna para, aur jab usski nazar Abhi par pari to ussne turant sar niche jhuka liya. Usski haath mein ek halki si bag thi aur kaandhe par usskki handbag.... Abhi se dekha nahin jaa raha tha, usske dil par uss waqt kia guzar raha tha bayaan karna mushkil tha….

Ruhi ki badi behen aur behnoy bachchon ke saath ruk gaye kissi se baat karne ko, aur Ruhi apni cousin ke ghar tak reach hui thi aur ruk kar apne badi behen ka wait karne lagi…. Uss waqt Ruhi ki nazrein bus mein Abhi ko dhund rahe the; aur Abhi ne khud ko sunil ke piche chhupaye hue Ruhi ko dekh raha tha, Sunil ne kaha,

“Abhi wo tumko dhund rahi hai saamne to aa!”

Abhi ne Sunil ke piche se kaha,

“kia faeda yaar?!”

Sunil: “are yaar kia pata ussko kuch kehna hai idhar aa”

Aur Sunil hatt gaya taake Ruhi Abhi ko dekh sake, ab donon aamne saamne the… Abhi ka chehra utra hua tha, aankhen sujh gaye, saaf dikh raha tha… Ruhi bahot udaas chehre se Abhi ke chehre mein dekhti rahi, phir Ruhi se dekha nah gaya, ussne aasmaan mein dekha, phir nazrein niche kar liya aur usske aansoo behne lage Abhi ke liye…. Abhi Ruhi ko nahin dekh paa raha tha agar dekhta rehta to khud rone lagta to Abhi ne chehre mudh liya, aur khud ko phir se Sunil ke piche kar liya tab dekha Ruhi ke taraf to dekha ke Ruhi ussko phir dhund rahi hai rote hue….. Abhi ne sunil se pucha,

“main jaun uss se puchne ke ab kyun ro rahi hai jab mujhko thukda diya?!”

Sunil ne kaha,

“haan ja, ja Abhi aur thoda suna de ussko jaane se pehle”

Aur Abhi bus ke piche wale door se jump mara aur Ruhi ke paas pahuncha, Ruhi ne apna chehra dusri taraf mod liya jab dekha ke Abhi usske taraf badh raha hai….

Sirf koyi 3 minats mila Abhi ko Ruhi se baat karne ki kyunke tab tak Ruhi ki behen aur behnoy ne dekh liya ke Abhi Ruhi ke paas gaya hai to weh log badhne lage donon ke taraf aur Ruhi ki maa bhi aane lagi thi Abhi aur Ruhi ke taraf…… jo Abhi ne kiya uss waqt kissi ne bhi socha nahin tha ke wo sabke saamne open mein weisa karega… aur Ruhi ne bhi virodh nahin kiya aur Abhi ko karne diya jo wo karna chahta tha, magar sirf 3 minat mein sab hua…. Aisa laga ke jaise 3 seconds mein sab kuch ho gaya jaise ek pal mein sab hua….

Abhi ne pehle Ruhi ka haath thaama, wo ro rahi thi, bina kuch kahe Abhi ne Ruhi ke donon bazu ko usski bag sameth apne kaandhe par kiya, Ruhi ne apne baahon ko lapet liya Abhi ke kaandhe par aur Abhi ne ruhi se kaha,

“I want to hug you for a last time, don’t stop me please, send all others to hell, live this moment for me for a last time I beg of you Ruhi, if you ever loved me for one second don’t stop me….”

Ruhi roti gayi aur Abhi ne Ruhi ko zor se apne baahon mein jakra, aur bus se aur Ruhi ke family members se peeth kar liya Ruhi ko baahon mein jakre hue aur Ruhi ke thudi ko apne chehre ke taraf uthaya Abhi ne, uss pal ko Ruhi ne khudko completely samarpan kar diya Abhi ko aur apne aakhon ko band kar liya…. Ruhi ke aansoowon ne behte hue usski gaal par ek lakeer jaise khinch chuki thi, Abhi ne Ruhi ke honton par apna honth rakha aur donon ne ek dusre ko kiss kiya sare aam sabke saamne, yahan tak ke main road se koyi jaa raha tha to sab dekha hoga ke ek ladka aur ladki khada kiss kar rahe hein…..

Magar ek baat thi, buss mein se kissi ko wo kiss nazar nahin ayaa nah hi Ruhi ke kissi bhi parent ko kiss karte hue dikhe. Wo iss liye ke Abhi oonche kad ka tha aur ussne peeth kar liya tha unn sab logon se aur usska sar jhuka hua tha Ruhi ke chehre par buss piche se sirf aisa lag raha tha ke Abhi Ruhi ko baahon mein bhar ke hug kar raha hai…..

Kiss karte waqt Abhi ke munh mein Ruhi ke aansoo bhi jaa rahe the aur ussko namkeen taste ho raha tha aur Ruhi Abhi ke aanso taste kar rahi thi, donon ek dusre ke aansoo pee rahe the uss pal ko….Abhi ne unn sab ke paas aate hue kadmon ko sun raha tha to jaise jaise unn sab ke chalte hue kadam paas aane lage to Abhi ne kiss rok diya, aur sab saamne aaye to donon sirf ek dusre ke baahon meikn jakre hue the….

Jiss waqt Ruhi ka jeeb Abhi ke munh mein agaya tha, Ruhi ka rona stop ho gaya tha bilkool, aur wo Abhi ka kiss enjoy karne lagi thi aur ussne khud Abhi ko apne baahon mein bhar liya tha.

Magar jab Ruhi ki badi behen paas aagayi, aur Ruhi ki ma bhi paas aayi aur kaha,

“Ruhi tu itni besharam kaise ho sakti hai chorr ussko!”

Ruhi jaise kuch nahin sunn rahi thi, aur usske aankhon se phir aansoo behne lage to Abhi ne usske chehre mein dekhte hue dhire se kaha,

“This was your Christmas gift, you will remember this on ALL the next Christmas which will come in your life, and I know that you love me a lot but something is hindering you to accept my love… do not forget you will receive a new year card from me before the new year, I will no longer be here after today, its my last day here…. So please be back before 30th to receive my letter with the postman. I love you and will always do till the end of my life never forget that. Even if you get married to someone else my love for you will remain the same – even if I get married to someone else still my love for you will NEVER change, always remember this Ruhi. Farewell my love, don’t know if I will ever see you again, but I pray I do! Bye Ruhi”

Jab Abhi apna last, line bol raha tha usske aankkhon se thamne ka naam nahin le raha tha, abi ke honth thartharaa rahe the aur ruhi bhi jhar jhar behte aansoo se Abhi ke chehre mein dekhte hue ussko sun rahi thi…. Aur usski badi behen donon ke baahon ko ek dusre se chhurra rahi thi yeh kehte hue,

“chorro nah ek dusre ko dekho sab log dekh rahe hein kyun aise tamasha bana rahe ho tum donon!!”

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“kia film ki shooting chal rahi hai yahan?!”

Aur Ruhi boli… Abhi ne nahin socha tha ke wo kuch jawaab degi; Ruhi ne apne aankh ko ponchte hue apni maa ko ek teerchi nazar se dekhte hue kaha,

“haan shooting chal rahi thi, aap ne nahin dekha?!”

Tab tak donon ek dusre ke baahon se alag ho gaye the magar donon ek dusre ke nazron ki gehraayi mein dekh rahe the aur phir Ruhi ki aankhen bhar aayi aur kaampte hue honthon se Ruhi ne bilak bilak kar Abhi se kaha,

“Bye Abhi, merry Christmas and happy new year to you, and I am really very very sorry for you, my heart will cry for you Abhi bye I am going Abhi!!”

Ruhi bahot zor se rote hue chal kar main road ke taraf badhi aur Abhi wahin baith gaya zameen par rote hue apne chehre ko apne haath mein thaam kar, aur jab bhi Ruhi mudhkar Abhi ko dekhti to wo aur zor se roti gayi….

Abhi ko aisa feel ho raha tha ke Ruhi bhaag kar wapas usske paas aegi, Abhi soch raha tha ke kyun Ruhi weisa nahin kar rahi, Abhi last moment tak ek aas lagaaye baitha raha ke Ruhi wapas aegi, nahin jaegi apne behen ke saath…. Magar Abhi ne tab khud se kaha ke yeh kissi movie ki climax scene nahin hai jo Ruhi bhaag kar usske paas wapas aati, yeh hakikat tha, aur Ruhi bilkool wapas nahin aayi balke chali gayi bus mein apni behen ke saath, usske ghar jisska pata Abhi ko bilkool nahin tha….

Abhi ne tab socha ke jaan bujh kar usske ghar walon ne ussko kaahin aur bhej diya varna Ruhi tut jaati Abhi ke pyar mein, agar wo yaha rehti to Abhi ussko convince kar leta aur sabko mana leta haan karne ke liye…..

Abhi kaam nahin kar paa raha tha, ussne Saeed se kaha ke ussko rest lena hoga wo kamzor feel karne laga tha, to saeed ne ussko jaa kar bus ke andar ek seat par araam karne ko kaha.

Sunil ne pucha,

“Abhi usske pita ne ki kaha tumse? Tum uss se baat karne gaye the nah kuch der pehle?”

Abhi ne apne sar ko thaame hue dabe awaaz mein jawaab diya,

“Ruhi ko apne saath lekar jaega S.Arabia”

Sunil ne kaha,

“namumkin, nahin ho sakta, jhoot kaha uss ne tumse.”

Abhi:”mujhe pata hai sab jhoot kaha yaar, kal usski maa ne yeh sab kaha tha mujhe, issi liye kal mujhe nahin milne diya Ruhi ke baap se taake weh log ussko seekha sake ke ussko kia bolna hai mujhe. Matlab saaf hai ke mujhko inkaar karna tha so kar diya sab ne Ruhi ke ilawa!!! Agar Ruhi mujhse pyar nahin karti to abhi uss tarah se mujhse sabke saamne lipat kar nahin roti, mujhe kiss nahin karti open mein aise!”

Tab sunil ne kaha,

“Ek baat bolun bhai, yeh family aise hi hein, khaas kar Ruhi ki maa, mere time mein bhi usne yehi kiya tha, yahan se Ruhi ki behen ko bhej diya tha apni nani ke yahan, usska mangitar uss se wahan milne jata tha yahan nahin…. Ruhi ki maa kissi par bharosa nahin karti, ussko darr thi ke kahin main Ruhi ki behen ko uda na le jaun kabhi! Ab dekho ussne tumse Ruhi ko bhi alag kar diya, yahan se door kar diya taake tum ussko aur nah apne pyar mein jakar sako. Isska matlab saaf hai ke Ruhi tumse pyar karti hai aur ghar mein Ruhi ne awaaz uthaayi hogi aur kaha hoga ke wo tumse shaadi karegi issi liye usski maa ne usko yahan se hatta diya!”

Baithe baithe Abhi Ruhi ko yaad karte hue phir rone laga…. Saeed ne aur baaki ke logon ne dekha, sab udaas the, sabko khush hona chahiye ta kyunke aakhri din tha kaam par, sab Khushi ke saath finish karna tha magar Abhi ke rone se, aur Ruhi ke chale jaane se ek maatam jaisa chhah gaya tha wahan….. jiss din se uss bus mein kaam shuru hua uss din se Abhi Ruhi ki love story shuru hui…. Jaise jaise bus banta gaya weise weise Abhi Ruhi ka pyar badhta gaya bus ke saath… hona yeh chahiye the ke jab bus ban gayi tab Abhi aur Ruhi ki mangni ya shaadi honi chahiye the matlab donon ka pyar official hona chahiye tha – yeh Abhi ne aisa hi likha tha apne diary mein.

Saeed ne Abhi ko phir rote suna to kaha, “Abhi phir se? are ruk ja dekh sab log tumko dekh rahe rahe hein, idhar aa meri madad kar issko fix karne mein… yaar aaj bhi late raat tak kaam karna hai kia, chal aa khatam karte hein nah!”

Mehboob ne kaha,

“are mujhe nahin pata tha tu to bada rotlu nikla Abhi, main tujhe mard samajhta tha!”

Abhi ko Mehboob se nafrat ho gaya tha jab se Ruhi ne ussko bataya tha ke wo usske pyar ke khilaaf hai, to Mehboob ko Abhi ne jawaab diya,

“kyun mard ko dard nahin hota? Mard ke aansoo nahin hote to ankhen fodh dena chahiye bina aansoo ke aankh hein to!!”

Ruhi chali gayi, Abhi ki khushiyon ko apne saath lekar, aur chorr gayi thi Abhi ke liye, dard, udaasi, gham, tanhaayi, akelapan, aur aansoo.

Abhi ko kaam jaari rakhna tha aur asaan nahin tha usske liye uss haal mein kaam karna, uss haalaat ko face karna…. Abhi ne khud ko bahot mushkilon se sambhaalte hue apne kaam mein dhyan diya, kaam karna shuru to kiya magar reh reh kar Ruhi ki yaadon mein chalajata aur achanak se ro padhta…. Ussne uss din ko achanak yaad kiya jiss din Ruhi ke chaati mein apne sar daalkar usski khushbhoo sungh raha tha, ab bhi ussko Ruhi ki wo khushbhoo mehek rahe the… hamara zehen bhi ajib o gharib computer hai jo sab apne memory mein save rakhta hai yahan tak ke ek khushbhoo jo kitne din piche naak se sungh kar zehen mein gaya tha aaj bhi yaad karne se wo khushbhoo yaad ata hai…. Sirf Ruhi ki jism ki uss khushbhoo ko yaad karke Abhi ro baitha…. Phir sambhala khudko aur kaam karne laga…..

Ruhi ki maa ko afsos ho raha tha Abhi ke liye. Wo abhi ko kaafi der se dekh rahi thi, aur wo khud emotional ho gayi thi Abhi ko dekh kar aur usske dard ko samajh kar…. wo jaanti thi ke Abhi iss waqt kiss dard se guzar raha hoga…..

Shaam ke 6 baj chuke the, kaam jaari tha, Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi se pucha,

“Naaraaz ho?

Abhi ne kaha,

“bilkool nahin, udaas hoon haan, ghum mein dooba hua hoon haan magar naraz nahin hoon”

Aur Ruhi ki maa ne kuch aise baatein kahe Abhi se jiss se Abhi ko thoda sukoon mila, ussko ek umeed ki kiran phir se dikhaayi diye…

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“Hum ne khaas kar iss liye aap ki proposal ko accept nahin kiya kyun ke aap jo kaam kar rahe ho yeh permanent kaam nahin hai, yeh kaam aaj hai to kal nahin, aaj yahan se kaam end hoga to kia karoge? Jab tak dusra kaam nahin milta bekaar rahoge nah? issi liye! Mere cousins aur nephews hein jo yeh kaam karte hein aur aksar bekaar rehte hein, unemployed hein, mujhe apni Ruhi ki fikar hai Abhi.”

Abhi ne heirat se ussko dekha aur kaha,

“Oh my God! Yehi vajah thi ki aap ne accept nahin kiya?”

Ruhi ki maa: “haan Abhi buss issi liye”

Abhi ke dimaagh mein kuch chal raha tha uss waqt aur ussne pucha,

“Aur agar main kal koyi aur behtar kaam kar raha hunga tab?!”

Ruhi ki maa: “dekho Abhi, kal ko agar tum koyi behtar kaam kar rahe ho aur tab tak Ruhi ki shadi nahin hui hogi tab hum zaroor consider karenge tumhare proposal ko!”

Abhi ko bahot araam mila aur pucha,

“Ruhi aaj wapas nahin aegi?”

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“Nahin wo apne chacha ke ghar rahegi aur supermarket mein help karegi kyunke tumko pata hi hoga ke sheher mein kitne bhidh baadh hote hein Christmas aur new year ke mauke par, late night shopping hote hein to kaam bahut ziada hote hein to Ruhi help karegi apne chacha ko, Manoj bhi wahin kaam karta hai nah har roz…”

Abhi ne yaad kiya ke haan ek baar Manoj ne usse bataya tha ke wo ek supermarket mein kaam karta hai, ek chhota sa self service tha naam tha supermarket. To Abhi ne pucha,

“To Ruhi kab ghar wapas aegi ab?”

Jawaab diya usski maa ne,

“Sunday ko aegi, magar New Year ko wahin rahegi shayad.”

Abhi ne tab pucha,

“Aur wo supermarket kidhar hai exactly?”

Ruhi ki maa ne exact address de diya ke Royal cinema ke paas hai….

Ab wo sheher Abhi ke ghar se ziada door nahin tha aur Abhi udhar aksar jata tha aur ussko exactly pata tha royal cinema kahan hai kyunke uss cinema hall mein Abhi kayi baar movie dekhne gaya hai, Abhi uss jagah ko bahot achhi tarah pehchaanta tha…

Abhi ne socha ke kyun Ruhi ki maa ne ussko saare information de diye Ruhi ke baare mein ke kahan reh rahi hai, kahan supermarket hai, matlab wo chahti hai ke abhi uss se udhar milne jaaye…. Jab usski beti aur Abhi milkar rone lage the to uss se dekha nah gaya aur shayad ab pachta rahi thi donon ko juda karke aur ab chahhti thi ke Abhi uss se udhar jaa kar mile….

Abhi bahot khush hua aur ab relax feel karne laga tha. To phir Abhi ab normal kaam karne laga.

Aaj bhi kal raat ki tarah Mehboob ke ghar dinner kiya gaya. Abhi kitna chahta tha ke Ruhi wahan hoti, kal bhi raat ko dinner kiye the sab to Ruhi nahin thi aur aaj bhi nahin hai….

Jab Abhi washroom jaa raha tha wash karne dinner se pehle to Mahesh ne Abhi ko awaaz diya,

“hey Abhi?!”

Abhi ne mudhkar dekha to Mahesh ne kaha,

“udhar andhera hai idhar aao hamare kitchen ke basin ke paas haath dho lo”

Magar Abhi ne kaha ke thik hai chalta hai, par Mahesh ne zid kiya ke wo wahan aakar haath dhoe… to Abhi gaya Ruhi ki kitchen mein aaj dusri baar gaya tha, magar aaj Ruhi ke bina gaya tha wahan… basin ke paas saboon se apne haath dhoya Abhi ne, aur khayaalon mein sochne laga ke kitne baar ussne Ruhi ko uss basin ke paas bartan dhote hue dekha hai… kitna khush hota wo agar aaj Ruhi yahin hoti, to kitni khush wo bhi hoti Abhi ko apne kitchen mein ek baar aur dekh kar….

Haath dhone ke baad Abhi ne uss table ko kiss kiya aur table se baat kiya, ek sandesha chorra Abhi ne uss table se ke wo Ruhi ko bata de ke Abhi aya tha idhar aur ussko kiss send kiya hai.

Dinner ke baad kaam chalu raha aur Abhi Ruhi ko bahot miss karne laga…. Raton mein iskh ka bhoot ziada chadhta hai, kal raat bhi Ruhi nahin thi aaj bhi nahin aur Abhi par ishk ka bhoot sawaar tha…tadap raha tha wo Ruhi ko yaad karte hue….

Jab se Abhi Christmas eve ki night celebrate karna shuru kiya hai doston ke beech aaj pehli baar tha ke iss raat ko Abhi kaam kar raha tha jiss waqt ussko sheher mein ghumna, mauj masti karna chahiye tha…. aur Abhi ne socha iss waqt Ruhi supermarket mein hogi kyunke late night shopping hota tha iss raat ko….

Raat ko 12 baje kaam finish hua… bus COMPLETE HO GAYA… aur start kiya gaya aur khud Mehboob ne drive kiya… George saath tha, sunil, aur baaki ke sab saath the bus mein….

Abhi ne Rahima ke paas ek message chorra Ruhi ke liye, Abhi ne Rahima se kaha,

“pleae Ruhi ko mera sandesha pahucha dena, kehna ke main ne ussko merry xmas wish kiya aur kehna ke jaise ke ussne mujhe kaha main bahot patience rakhunga”

Manoj wapas agaya tha kaam se, aur wo bhi bus mein aya. Abhi ko aur 40 bus ke photos diye…., Abhi ne ussko pay kiya… Aur road par bus ki kayi aur photos liya ussne jo Abhi ko baad mein dega ussne kaha.

Mehboob khud drive karte hue Abhi ke team ko wapas ghar chorrne ja raha tha, bus almost bhara hua tha, bus mein Rahima, Farzina, Reza, sunil, George, sunil ka assistant, Manoj, Mahesh, George ka apprentice, aur Reza ke behnein bhare hue the Sirf Ruhi ki kami thi bus mein…. Kamaal hai Abhi ne socha, agar aaj wo hoti to wo bhi saath baithti Abhi ke saath bus mein wahan se 40 kms tak drive karte hue Abhi ke ghar tak jaati aur Abhi ka ghar bhi dekh leti….. magar afsos!

Jab bus Abhi ke ghar ke saamne ruka to Mehboob aur Reza ne kaha

“Achah to Abhi yahan rehta hai wo raha usska ghar… hmmm!!”

Subha ke 1 baj chuka tha jab Abhi ne apna diary khola aur likhna shuru kiya….. phir sone gaya to usska takiya bheeg gaya itna wo ro raha tha Ruhi ko sochte hue ……

To be continued….. (5700 words from both updates)
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REally ver emotional update and I wept again reading this especially the part where Abhi jumps out of the back door to take Ruhi in his arms and both cried like kids.
Now, why did Euhi accept to hold and kiss Abhi if she does not love him?
she proved that she loves him but there is a hindrance somewhere which is not letting her come to the surface. she is hiding something, or she is just obeying her parents for some reasons we are not aware of.
Only when the parts from Ruhi's side will be told that we will come to understand what was going on with her.
Casi bro this a wonderful writing, marvellous story, great storytelling, superb narration and impeccable script.
just amazing. hats off my friend. appreciate your work very much.
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Casinar said:
Update 34 Monday Continued….​
Soch raha tha kal shayad aakhri din hoga Ruhi ke aangan mein aur ussko pata tha ke kal Ruhi ke pita aane wala tha, to ussko dikh gaya ke kal ka din aur bura hoga kyunke ruhi apne pita ke wapas aane ki khushi mein ussko aur bhi ziada ignore karegi…. Phir bhi abhi ne soch liya tha ke apne taraf se jo ussko karna hai wo kar ke rahega, ruhi ke pita se baat zaroor karga yeh tey tha abhi ke taraf se….

Ab aaguey
Subha ko Ruhi kitchen ke paas nazar aayi. Abhi usski maa se baat karne gaya. Magar bina kuch kahe hi usski maa ne Abhi se kaha,

“nahin nahin kuch nahin ho sakta hai!”

Abhi heyrani se ussko dekhte hue kaha,

“kyun? Kia nahin ho sakta? Kia keh rahi ho aap?”

Ruhi wahin khadi sun rahi thi bina Abhi ke taraf dekhe…

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“mujhe pata hai tum Ruhi ke liye aaye ho nah? wo nahin maan rahi hai hum kia kar sakte hein ab?!”

Abhi ka munh sukh gaya, ussko jaise paani pine ki zaroorat mehsoos hui, aur kaha,

“What? Yeh kaise ho sakta hai? Main nahin manta….”

Phir Abhi Ruhi ke taraf dekhte hue usski maa se kaha,

“Magar wo khud kyun nahin keh rahi hai mujhe? Kyun khamosh hai agar aisi baat hai to?!”

Tab Ruhi ki mummy ne hansste hue jaise Abhi ko encourage karte hue kaha,

“Magar kuch bhi ho humko tumhare parents se to milna hoga nah Abhi?!”

Jab usski maa ne yeh kaha to Ruhi ne muskuraate hue Abhi ko dekha….

Magar Abhi bahot serious tha aur Ruhi ko gambhirta ke saath dekha. Aur usski mummy ko jawaab diya,

“haan beshak donon taraf ke parents ko milna hoga.”

Tab Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi se kaha,

“Haan to isske pita ko aajane do aaj arahe hein wo tab dekha jaega”

Ab inn baton se Abhi ka hausla to badhega hi nah?

Phir Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi se kaha ke jo kaam wo karta hai wo kuch dhang ka nahin hai.

Abhi ne Sunil ko socha aur usske saath jo hua tha usske baare mein socha Abhi ne.

Abhi ne pucha,

“kyun yeh kaam dhang ka nahin hai?”

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“Meri maa jahan rehti hai wahan kayi aise log hein jo bekaar rehte hein kyunke weh log car repair karte hein aur unnko kabhi kaam milta hi nahin…. Kia hoga agar tumhare paas regular basis par kaam nahin hoga? Tumko pata hai Ruhi mujhe meri jaan se bhi pyari hai main usske liye bahot fikar karti hoon, main apni badi beti se itni attached nahin thi, magar meri Ruhi…. ”

Abhi ne jawaab diya,

“Car ke body repair karna aur mera kaam do bilkool alag baat hai, car ki tin repair karne wale ko panel beater kehte hein bus ki body ko banane wale ko Coach builder kehte hein do bilkool hi alag kaam hote hein, hum wo gas wala welding bilkool istemaal nahin karte, hum aluminium se kaam karte hein uss tin se nahin jo car repair karne wale istemaal karte hein….”

Tab Abhi ne socha ke unn logon ko pata hi nahin ke bus ki coach building kia hota hai…. Weh log car ki tin repair karne wala samajh rahe the Abhi ko! Magar Abhi ko wo karna bilkool bhi nahin ata tha wo ekdum se alag kaam tha…. Aur Abhi samajhne laga ke usski Naukri ki vajah se Ruhi ke nani ke yahan baat chali hogi issi liye nani walon ne, mamou, mami, maasi, sabne Ruhi ki maa aur Ruhi ko mana kiya hoga iss rishte ko aaguey badhaane ke liye, Ruhi ko unn logon ne discourage kiya hoga, issi liye uss din se Ruhi weise behave karne lagi thi aur doorie rakhne lagi thi Abhi se….. aisa Abhi soch raha tha….

Abhi soch raha tha ab Ruhi ke pita ke aane ke baad, Ruhi ko usske maa baap ke saamne bitha kar apne kaam ke baare mein sab samjhega, tab apna proposal rakhega. Weh log shayad soch rahe the ke jo kaam Abhi kar raha hai uss se Abhi unke beti ko khush nahin rakh paega, unnke beti ko saari suvidhaayein nahin de paega Abhi. Yehi soch the shayad Ruhi ki maa ki. Aur Abhi Sunil ki kahi hui baat ko sochne laga ke usske saath bhi yehi kiya tha inn logon ne!

Abhi ne phir Ruhi ki maa se kaha,

“Aap zara sochiye main kaise Ruhi ko takliff de sakta hoon? Aap ke khayal se jiss se main itna pyar karta hoon ussko kissi kissam ki taklif hone dunga? Agar khuda nah khaasta mere paas yeh kaam nahin raha to aap kia samajhti ho Ruhi ke liye main kuch aur nahin karunga? Aisa to ho hi nahin sakta… aap fikar nah karein nah!”

To Ruhi ki maa hanssne lagi aur kaha,

“Thik hai phir usske pita ko aajane do. Dhiraj rakho, aaj wo aane wala hai shaam ko.”

Abhi ko lag raha tha ke sab thik ho jaega, kal jo khat likhe tha Ruhi ko Abhi ne uss mein Ruhi ko sab kuch samjha diya tha ke ussko apne pita se keh dena chahiye ke wo bhi Abhi se pyar karti hai, tab Abhi ko asaani hogi apne taraf se baat karne ko….

Ab Abhi Ruhi se baat karna chahta tha iss baare mein iss se pehle ke usska baap wapas aaye. Abhi sab kuch araam se Ruhi ko samjhana chahta tha taake Ruhi bhi samjhe. To Abhi ne Ruhi ki maa se kaha ke wo Ruhi se ussko kuch der baat karne dein, Ruhi ko bulaane ko kaha. Ruhi ki maa ne Ruhi ko bulaya. Khidki ke paas, usski maa thi aur andar se Ruhi aayi…..

Aur aaj itne dinon mein pehli baar Abhi ne Ruhi ko usse ek ajeeb nazron se dekhte hue dekha, jaise ussko koyi interest nahin thi Abhi se baat karne ke liye, Ruhi ne frown karte hue Abhi ke taraf dekhte hue kaha,

“kia hai? Ab kia kehna hai aap ko aur?!”

Ruhi ki uss tarah se baat karne se Abhi ko mann kiya ke turant wahan se wapas nikal jaaye, ussko laga ke bekaar mein baat karega….. Abhi ko wapas apne ghar turant chale jaane ka mann kiya…. Ussko jaise Ruhi ki nazron mein usske liye NAFRAT dikha…. Magar aisa bhi kia ho gaya ke nafrat dikh gayi Abhi ko Ruhi ki nazron mein…. Abhi samajh nahin paa raha tha ke ab Ruhi se kaise baat kare aur kia kahe ussko jiss tarah se wo Abhi ko dekh rahi thi jaise Abhi ussko disturb kar raha tha ussko bula kar.

Jiss chehre par itne dinon se Abhi ne sirf pyar dekha tha, jiss Ruhi ke chehre par hamesha ek pyari si Muskaan hua karti thi, jiss mein Abhi ne sirf aur sirf pyar dekha tha apne liye aaj uss chehre mein ek karwahat dekha Abhi ne. Abhi Ruhi ko itna chahta tha ke usski ek ek rag se wakif tha, usski har ek adaa, usski har ek chehre ki badlaav ko pehchaanta tha magar jo aaj Abhi ne dekha tha Ruhi ke chehre par wo Abhi ne kabhi nahin dekha tha itne dinon mein, aur Abhi ko wo bilkool bhi passand nahin tha. Uss Ruhi ki roop ko describe karna mushkil hai aur usska Abhi par jo assar hua wo bhi bayan karna mushkil hai…. Phir bhi Abhi baat karna chahta tha to himmat karke kiya baat ussne. Kyunke donon English mein baat karte the hamesha to Abhi ne English mein sabse pehle kaha,

“Why are you giving such a look? Why you are so serious, not a single smile on the face? Did I disturb you by calling you here?”

Ruhi ke munh mein jo ata tha wohi bak deti thi, ussne Abhi ko jawaab mein buss itna kaha,

“I must be serious in life that’s why!”

Yeh bhi koyi jawaab tha? Abhi udaas tha, pareshaan tha wo usske chehre par saaf dikhaayi de raha tha, aur Ruhi ko bhi pata tha; Abhi ne apne sayyam rakhte hue kaha,

“Look Ruhi, I am suffering… yes I am suffering and it’s because of you my dear…”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“Do you think I AM NOT SUFFERING?!”

To Abhi ne kaha,

“Then talk to you father, We can be successful Ruhi, from my part I will do all to convince him, but if you do not play your role I won’t be able to do it alone isn’t it?!”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“I can’t. My life IS NOT MINE”

Abhi ko ghussa aane laga tha usski behuda jawaab se. Kia bakwaas jawaab de rahi thi!

Agar wo bhi suffer kar rahi thi to kia solution tha suffering ko end karne ki, wo tha donon ka milan….

Tab tak Mehboob tea serve kar raha tha, aur Mehboob ne Abhi ke taraf aakar tray ko ussko dikhaate hue kaha,

“Hey Abhi!”

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“jao apna chai lelo Abhi.”

Abhi ne kaha,

“wait.”

To Ruhi ne fikarmand dikhte hue kaha,

“Oh my god wo hum logon ko hi dekh raha hai aap jao nah!”

Abhi ne Ruhi se kaha,

“magar ussko sab pata hai nah yaar!”

Tab Ruhi ne kaha

“nahin ussi ne hmm hmm hmm hmmm” yeh kehte hue Ruhi muskuraayi

To Abhi ne pucha,

“kia hmm hmm hmm? HE WILL NOT ACCEPT?”

Ruhi: “NO.”

Abhi: “okay meet me at lunch time.”

Tab Ruhi aur usski mummy donon ne kaha

“nahin nahin bilkool nahin”

Abhi ne zid kiya, zor diya ke lunch time mein Ruhi uss se mile. Magar Ruhi ne kaha,

“BE PATIENT”

Aur usski maa ne repeat kiya,

“BE PATIENT”

Abhi ne kaha,

“That’s what I am doing!”

Phir Abhi ne aur kaha,

“Dekho Ruhi ho sakta hai aaj yahan mera aakhri din hai kaam karne ka…. Aur agar kaam pura nahin hua shaam tak to kal aakhri din hoga, mujhe tumse bahot zaroori baat karni hai”

Ruhi ne bus ek halki si mukurahat se Abhi ko dekha aur ab chehre mein thoda sa badlaav aur narmi dikhayai diya Abhi ko, aur Abhi wahan se wapas bus mein chala gaya.

Koyi ek ghante baad Ruhi ki maa phir baat kar rahi thi Abhi ke saath. Ussne Abhi se kaha,

“Aur yahan par kissi ne yeh bhi kaha ke tum sirf yahan har roz kaam karne aate ho varna har jagah kaam se bahot absent rehte ho, har roz kaam nahin karte ho, samajh rahe ho nah wo lazy type log jaise….”

Abhi ko zabardast jhatka laga wo baat sunke aur pucha ke kiss ne ussko wo baat bataya, kia Mehboob ne wo sab kaha uss se? To Ruhi ki maa ne kaha ke nahin Mehboob ne nahin. To Abhi ke kaha to phir Reza ne kaha hoga kyunke wo shuru se hi mujhse jalta hai, ussko nahin passand ke main Ruhi se pyar kar raha hoon wo pata nahin kyun hamesha mere piche pada hota hai… mere aur Ruhi ke beech ek deewar ki tarah bana rehta hai…”

Abhi ne Ruhi ki maa se kaha ke jo kuch bhi ussko bataya gaya sab sarasar JHOOT hai.

Jabse Abhi ne 12th chorra tab se aaj tak lagatar kaam karte aaya hai, kahbi yahan kabhi wahan kabhi yeh kaam kabhi wo kaam, kisaan ka beta mazdoori bhi kiya, ganne ke khet mein bhi kaam kiya, yeh kabhi nahin kaha ke padha likha hai to koyi office mein ya koyi bhi white collar job karega magar jo mila jaise mila kaam karta gaya aur yahan kissi lalloo ne keh diya ke Abhi kaam nahin karta dhang se! kamaal hai Abhi sar hillate hue khud hanssne laga….

Kuch der bad Abhi ne Ruhi ko kitchen wale stair par khadi dekha, to usske toda paas jaakar, 1 metre ki distance se kaha,

“Tumhara photo kab dogi mujhko? Mujhe chahiye at least 1 photo of yours please, ziada mile to behtar hoga.”

Badle mein Ruhi ne jawaab to nahin diya magar apne donon haahon ko ek camera ki tarah kar ke Abhi ke taraf kiya aur jaise ek click kiya Abhi ki photo ko aur hanssne lagi. (aaj ke din hote to mobile se kitne saare photos Abhi ne le liya hota Ruhi ki?!”)

Aur tabhi kissi ne Ruhi ko bulaya baahar Main road ke taraf, shayad Ruhi ke papa ka phone aya tha udhar. Aaj usska papa wapas aane wala tha… to jab Ruhi gayi call lene to Abhi ke paas se guzar kar gayi, aur jab wapas aane lagi to Abhi ne ussko rukne ko kaha magar Ruhi ne uss hisse ko daud kar tey kiya jahan Abhi tha wahan se usski kitchen tak taake Abhi ussko nahin roke, aur jab Ruhi daudte hue apni kitchen ke stairs par reach hui to palat kar Abhi ko dekha apne munh mein apne jeeb se apne gaal ko fullaate hue ek muskurahat ke saath….

Aur phir kuch der baad Ruhi apni cousin ke ghar gayi aur wapas aate waqt Abhi ne uss se kaha,

“Ruhi, ruko nah sunon to please…”

Ruhi ne kuch darrte hue expression mein Abhi ko dekhte hue kaha,

“Mujhse aise baat mat kijiye aap”

Aur wo bhaag kar chali gayi apni kitchen mein.

Aur ek baar Ruhi ne Abhi se kaha,

“Aap ab mujhe bhool jao!”

Aur Abhi ne replay kiya,

“THAT’S IMPOSSIBLE”

Aur tab Ruhi hanssi thi.

Ek baar phir phone call aya aur Ruhi phir gayi, aur jab wapas aa rahi thi to Abhi ne phir ussko rukne ke liye kaha, aur iss baar Ruhi ne jhoot mooth ke jhuk kar ek paper ka tukda uthaane ka bahana karte hue ruki aur Abhi se kaha,

“kia hai?”

Abhi usske karib hua aur kaha,

“Uss din jab tumne ne kaha tha ke tum virgin nahin ho, to main ne kaha tha ke tum mujhko itna pyar karogi ke wo tumhara pyar saare beech ke issues khatam kar dega, virginity ya kuch bhi ho beech mein sab mit jaega tum mujhko itna pyar karogi, aur tumne haan kaha tha Ruhi yaad bhi hai ke nahin?”


Abhi ne yeh sab kaha Ruhi ko apne kahi hui baat ko yaad dilaane ke liye, ussko yaad dilaane ke liye ke ussne kaha tha ke wo Abhi ko bahot pyar karegi…. Abhi ne Ruhi ko usska pyar yaad karaya, to Abhi yeh umeed kar raha tha ke Ruhi sharminda hogi ya apni kahi hui baat ko yaad karegi magar jo jawaab diya Ruhi ne usski zaroorat hi nahin thi, wo baat hi nahin ho rahi thi…. Ruhi ne kaha,

“Well I am not a virgin that does not mean anything to you?”

Abhi ne gambhirta se Ruhi ke aankhon mein dekhte hue reply kiya,

“No that makes no difference to me because I LOVE YOU DAMN IT, do you understand? I am suffering damn it!! Do you have a heart to feel what I am going through, mere andar dard ho raha hai Ruhi, main tadap raha hoon tumko nahin dikh raha kia?”

Abhi ke baton ka jaise Ruhi par koyi assar nahin ho raha tha, wo apne pita ke wapas aane ki Khushi mein gum thi shayad uss waqt. Abhi ne sahi mauka nahin use kiya tha ussko apne dil ki baat kehne ke liye, aur Ruhi ne Abhi se kaha,

“I am no a V, this should have affected you!”

Aur Ruhi ne yeh kaha tab,

“Mujhe ek promise kijiye abhi issi waqt, ke agar hamari shaadi nahin bhi hui to aap kabhi bhi kissi se bhi meri V wali baat nahin bataoge.”

Abhi ne PROMISE kiya turant. Abhi ko uss pal jaise comfirm hua ke Ruhi usski kabhi nahin banegi issi liye Ruhi ne Abhi se wo promise liya. To Abhi ne kaha,

“Agar humko nahin milna hai, agar juda hi ho jana hai to please ek photo dedo mujhe main umar bhar teri tasveer se hi sahi pyar karta rahunga, ek tasver dede please Ruhi”

Ruhi ne nah kaha aur dekha ke Mehboob araha tha to Ruhi bhaagne ki raah dekh rahi thi to last mein Abhi ne pucha,

“Wo V kiss ne kiya tere saath?”

Ruhi ne jaate jaate jawaab mein yeh kaha Abhi ko,

“Nahin, main to kabhi nahin bataungi, magar aap ho sake to khud pata laga lena!”

Aur Ruhi chali gayi.

To be continued….(2778words)
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Hmmmm Good update.....
And A little suspicious....

Sach kahu to mujhe ye wala update kuch kuch jagah se funny laga....OR padhkar hansi bhi aayi.....

To kuch jagah se gussa bhi aaya.....

Ha to pahle ham baat karte hai abhi ki.....

Abhi ka pain sahi hai.......OR uska gussa bhi....lekin abhi shaayad ye nahi samajh paa raha hai ki wo log use kis nazar se dekh rahe hai.....
Unn logo ke hisaab se Abhi ak mazdur hai.....jiski ki koi auk aati nahi....jiske ki kaam ka koi bharosa nahi aaj hai kal nahi.....
OR uss samay ke hisaab se bhi Ruhi or uski family ka standard kaafi achcha hai....unhe middle class ya upper middle maan sakte hai....
Lekin Wo log abhi ko ak lower clas ka maan rahe hai.....maan kya rahe hai.....maan chuke hai.....OR usko usi criteria me rakh kar court kar rahe hai....har tarah se....
OR Ruhi bhi iss chij se dur nahi hai.....Ruhi ne to starting me hee Abhi se iss kaam ko chhodne ko kaha tha.....
Kyoki wo khud bhi iss kaam ko chhota ya niche level ka samjhti hai.....

OR aakhir samjhega bhi kyo nahi....aakhir uska khud ka baap Saudi Arabia me hai.....
Ab bhale hee wo wanha par Street cleaning ki nokri karta ho......(yaad rahe yanha me kisi bhi kaam ko chhota ya bada nahi bol raha hu......bas ak example de raha hu)....
Lekin Ruhi ke baaki ghar waalo ke liye to wo videsh me gaya hua hai.....to iss baat se wo log apna level kaafi upar samjhte hai.....

Ha ak bar Abhi ke puchne par ki kya Ruhi ko videsh me ghumna.....Bangla gaadi.....etc chahiye.....
Tab Ruhi ne kaha tha....ki ....use ye sab me se kuch bhi nahi chahiye.....OR uss time Ruhi ki ye baat achchi bhi lagi.....

Lekin.......lekin.........
Jaisa ki maine pahle bhi kaha hai.....insaan ke muh se nikli kisi bhi baat ke do pahlu hote hai.....real or psychological.....

Ruhi ne aha tha ki use ye sab nahi chahiye.....but as I said .....usne bas KAHA THA.....
Uske mind me kya tha uss chij ko bas wo hee jaanti hai....

Ise ham aise samajh sakte hai ki.....
Jab koi hamse....bhale hee wo hamara dost ho.....
Wo hamse hamaari aadato....ya desires ke baare mai ya fantasies ke baare me puchta hai.....tab hame usually negative answers dete hai.....

Sirf hamaare dil me ya dimaag me hee uska sahi answer hota hai.....thik usi tarah Ruhi ne kiya.....

OR aisi baato me agar ham ya koi aur agar sachchai.....Jan na chahe to uska bas 2 raaste hote hai....
Pahla baat karte time bolne waale ki aankhe.....OR face expression.....
Dusra waqt or halaat.....

Abhi waale case me Ruhi ki kahi baat ko waqt or haalat ne galat saabit kar diya.....

OR Ruhi ko ab interest nahi hai.....ya koi or mil gaya hai.....iss baat ko sach khud Ruhi ne kar diya.....
Jab usne kaha ki virginity waali baat kisi ko na kahna....

Iss se ye to pata chal hee gaya ki....current time ka to pata nahi.....lekin according to Ruhi.....uske future me kaafi scenes ban sakte hai.....kai logo ke saath....
OR wo nahi chahti ki virginity waali baat jyada fele.....
Taaki uske future me hone waale scenes me koi dikkat na ho....

Ab ye to confirm he ki Ruhi bilkul bhi farak nahi padta Abhi ke hone ya na hone se.....



Ruhi ki maa ne pahle to kaha.....ki nahi ab kuch nahi ho sakta.....

Iss baat ke bhi 2 reason hai....
I uska matlab ho ki Ruhi ke nanihal waalo ne saaf in kar kar diya ho.....OR unke dabaav me Ruhi or uski maa bhi give up de chuki ho.....

OR dusra reason hai.....OR jo ki mujhe sahi lagta hai.....ki
Ruhi ke nanihal waalo ne use Abhi or uske kaam uske level ke liye kaha ho....OR ye bhi bataya ho ki abhi ke saath Ruhi ke koi future nahi hai.....unke hisaab se....

To Ruhi ko unki baat sahi lagi ho.....OR wo khud iss baat par agree karti ho.....
Is se pichle update me Ruhi ki kahi hui hard line.....jisme ki usne Abhi se shaadi na karne ko kaha tha.....

Isi baat ko prove karti hai......

Phir Ruhi ki maa ne kaha ki abhi ke parents se baat karegi......ya phir family meet.....

Mere hisaab se sirf bahana hai abhi ko behlaane ka.....
Kyoki agar family meet tak hee baat pahuch jaati to Ruhi or uski maa aise behav nahi karti......



Ab Ruhi Abhi se bach rahi hai.....dur bhaag rahi hai....pahle jin logo ke saamne ishaare or mocking aadi hoti thi aaj unhi logo ke dekhne se darr rahi hai.....

Ise ham Ruhi ka darr nahi....wo abhi se khud hee apni married se dur ho rahi hai.....
Kyoki agar villain wala jaise ki Manoj.....Reza ya saeed wala koi scene hota to.....qo sab chije iss baat ko bhi affect karti.....
Jab Ruhi or uski maa dono saath Abhi se baat karte hai.....

Lekin Wo bhi sahi chal rahi hai.....


At last....
Very good update...
Thanks....
 
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Vikram singh rana said:
You said as a girl you can understand and feel RUHI'S pain also.....good....

But In my point of view this is not love.....we can say....hmmmmm...MIND GAMES....

What if.....she likes someone else.....what if.....the feelings she had for him....they just.....like some kinda attractions.... for some time.....
What if....she found Abhi.....more desirable and sensuas......at the time....

Aapne kaha ak ladki hee samajh sakti hai.....lekin aapko pata ho to.....

Ak ladki relationship ke iss stage par iss tarah ki baate tab hee karti hai.....

Jab wo ak saath kai jagah lagi ho.....

Ya phir use naya mil gaya ho or pahle waale ko ditch karna ho.....OR iss breakup ki wajah bhi saamne waale ko thehra na ho.....

Thanks......
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hello, thanks,
I said only of love, feelings and emotions perspectives.
but your points are valid and they can be that also.
I did not go through those aspects as I only based my reply regarding the way Ruhi proved her love for Abhi.
let us see later could be you are right.
thanks again.
 
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