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Update 36 Eve Of The Last Day
Abhi ne socha sirf pita ke lautne ki vajah se ro rahi hai ya Abhi ko bhi yaad kar rahi hai , abhi se juda hone ke ghum mein bhi ro rahi hai….. aur Abhi ne dekha Ruhi apne pita ke seene se lagi hui to thi magar kum se kum 7 baar Ruhi ki nazrein Abhi par gaye the uss dauraan….
Ab aaguey….
Ruhi ka rona jaise rona nahin tha, Abhi ne socha ke agar wo Ruhi ki jagah hota to itna rota apne pita se 3 saal baad milne par ke rukta hi nahin, aur Ruhi ki uss tarah se rone se Abhi ko lag gaya ke Ruhi uss se bahut kum emotional hai, Abhi ruhi se bahut ziada emotional aur sentimental tha Abhi ne khud se kaha.. magar phir Abhi ne yaad kiya ke kitna royi thi uss in Ruhi jab Abhi ne ussko baahon mein bhada tha….. aur abhi kuch der pehle jab Mehboob ne danta tha donon ko tab kitna royi thi fut fut kar Abhi ke saath… to aaj pita se milne ke baad kyun wo nahin royi? Haan shayad bahot ro chuki thi kuch der pehle Abhi ke saath aur wapas ghar men bhag gayi to jaakar khub royi hogi, saare ansoo sukh gaye honge….
Aur thodi der baad jab Ruhi ke father ghar ke andar chala gaya to Abhi ne dekha ke Ruhi ussko dekh rahi hai terrace par khadi, usski badi behen usske saath thi. Abhi ne socha ab kaise usske paas khadi hai? Socha ke shaayad usski badi behen saath hai iss liye, Abhi ke paas aagayi hai…. Aur achanak Ruhi ki badi behen ne Abhi ko ishara kiya…. Abhi nahin samjha to pucha kia keh rahi hai to badi behen ne kaha ussko matlab Ruhi ko kuch kehna hai… Abhi bahot khush hua aur terrace par gaya puchne ke Ruhi kia keh rahi hai. Ruhi ne normal tarike se kaha,
“Aaj last din hai aap ka yahan ya kal phir ana hoga!”
Abhi ko ek baat yaad aayi aur kaha,
“kyun bala tal jaega agar mera ana end hua to?!”
Ruhi ne kaha,
“Aapne aaj tak uss baat ko dil se lagaya hua hai Abhi?”
Abhi ne ek gahri saans lete hue kaha,
“Tumhari kaun si baat ko main ne dil se nahin lagaya hai Ruhi? Kissi din tumko dikhaunga ya padhne ko dunga tab padh lena ke tumhare kiss kiss chiz ko main ne dil se lagaya hua hai”
Ruhi ki badi behen Abhi ko upar se niche dekh rahi thi bina muskurahat ke, bina kissi bhi feeling ya emotion ke, lagta tha wo samajhne ki koshish kar rahi hai ke Abhi sahi ladka hai ya nahin Ruhi ke liye. To Ruhi mudh kar apni badi behen ko dekhte hue uss se kaha,
“Dekha na di, aise hi baat karta hai, itna tez hai ke pucho mat, maa bhi innse kabhi nahin jeet sakti, he is too intelligent.”
To Abhi ne Ruhi se kaha,
“Achah thodi der mein tumhare papa se baat karne aunga, kaam end hone ke baad, wash kar lunga tab okay… tum sath dogi nah, kahin tumhare papa yeh nah samjhe ke mera pyar ek tarfa hai kaha tha nah main ne khat mein?!”
Ruhi pehle apni behen ko dekh kar muskuraayi, tab Abhi ko dekh kar hanssi, phir apne chehre par ek sikanjh late hue kaha,
“uff issi liye main puchne aayi ke aaj kaam end hoga ya nahin, no, Abhi mere papa se kuch nahin kehna hai, main nahin chahti ke aap uss se abhi kuch bhi kaho!”
Abhi puchne hi jaa raha tha ke kyun tab tak Ruhi ki badi behen ne Abhi se kaha,
“Wo abhi abhi aaye hein thake honge aur itni badi baat unn se kehna achah nahin lagega, kal aap baat kar lena!”
Abhi ne kaha,
“aur agar aaj kaam end ho gaya, to main kal sirf unn se milne ke liye aa sakta hoon nah?!”
Ruhi ne khud kaha,
“yes of course aap aa sakte ho kiss ne mana kiya aap ko?!”
Abhi ne turant kaha,
“YAAD RAKHUNGA ISS BAAT KO”
Ruhi ne hanss diye tab Abhi ne phir kaha,
“Ab agle 24 hours ke beech tumhare papa ke kaan bhare jaa sakte hein mere khilaaf, to agar ussko accept bhi karna hota tab na karega, aur agar abhi iss se pehle ke usse koyi kuch kahe, main seedha jaa kar baat kar lun to bahut behtar hoga mere khayal se…”
Ruhi ki badi behen ne kaha,
“aap ne kia ghalat kiya hai jo koyi aap ke khilaaf kuch kahega? Kia aap ne koyi ghalat kaam kiya hai? Nahin nah? To kaun kuch bhi keh sakta hai mere papa ko aap ke khilaaf?!”
Abhi ne kuch nahin kaha tab tak Tony ne Abhi ko help ke liye bulaya to ussko jaana pada aur donon andar chale gaye.
Magar Abhi ko sahi nahin lag raha tha ke kal tak baat ko roke, wo Ruhi ke father se issi waqt baat karna chahta tha, iss liye kuch der baad Ruhi ki maa dikhi to Abhi uss se puchne gaya aur kaha,
“main ab ata hoon Ruhi ke papa se baat karne aaun kia?!”
Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,
“Are hum log Ruhi ki nani ke yahan jaa rahe hein wo bimaar hai nah, Ruhi ke papa ussko dekhne jaa rahe hein abhi issi waqt.”
Raat 7.30 ko extention electric wire mein bulb lagaa kar kaam kar rahe the Abhi aur team. Sab samajh rahe the ke raat ke barah baje tak sab kaam end ho jayenge iss liye complete karna chahte the. Ye pehli baar tha ke itna der raat ko bhi kaam jaari tha bus mein. Aur Abhi ne dekha ke Ruhi ka baap aur baaki ke log jaa rahe hein usske nani ke ghar car mein. Ruhi bhi jaa rahi thi. Ussne ek nayi dress pehni thi jissko aaj pehli baar Abhi dekh raha tha, iss se pehle Ruhi ne kabhi nahin pehni thi wo dress. Kamaal ki khubsurat dikh rahi thi, kayamat lag rahi thi aur Abhi paagal hone laga tha ussko uss tarah dekh kar…. Ruhi ne jaate jaate kayi baar Abhi ke taraf dekha, varna ussko pata tha shayad ke Abhi baad mein kehta ke tumne jaate hue mujhko ek nazar bhi nahin dekha. Abhi bhi ussi ko ghurre jaa raha tha, phir zor se Abhi “pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna” whistle karne laga.
Phir bus ke andar Manoj paint kar raha tha chhote chhote jagahon par ek paint brush se. Sunil ne ussko wo karne ko kaha tha, jiss jiss jagah par air holes jo ceilings mein hota hai, Abhi fix kar raha tha, sabhi unn jagahon ke niche Manoj paint kar raha tha, iss liye Manoj aur Abhi ek saath kaam kar rahe the. Itni jaldi thi sab kuch finish karne ke liye family ke saare log help kar rahe the…To Abhi ne Manoj se pucha,
“tum apne nani ko dekhne nahin gaye?”
Manoj ne muskuraate hue kaha,
“nahin main nahin gaya, meri maa, papa aur behen gaye…”
Jab ‘behen’ word kaha Manoj ne to hansste hue Abhi ke chehre mein dekha tab kaha, “Ruhi gayi hai saath”
Abhi ne muskurate hue socha,
“saale ko pata hai ke main Ruhi ko chahta hoon issi liye hanss kar Ruhi ka naam alag se liya behen kehne ke baad”
Tab Abhi ne pucha,
“kaafi door gaye hein nah? bahut late wapas ayenge nah?”
Manoj ne phir hansste hue kaha,
“nahin ziada late nahin ayenge, tum yahin honge, unn se mil paoge, weh log wapas ajayenge dekh lena…”
Abhi ko pakka yakeen ho gaya ke Manoj ko sab kuch pata hai Ruhi aur usske baare mein.
Aur Manoj ne yeh bhi kaha Abhi se,
“main ne baaki ke rolls develop karne ko de diya hai, kal photos mil jaenge wo tumko de dunga kal hi, okay, aur akhri ekaat pics jo lunga road par wo phir kabhi kissi tarah tum tak pahuncha dunga.”
Dinner Mehboob ke ghar kiya Abhi aur team ne. Aur raat ko kaam jaari raha bus mein. Abhi pray karne laga ke Ruhi wapas aajaye Abhi ke wapas jaane se pehle…. Raat ko aaj tak kabhi kaam nahin kiya tha uss aangan mein Abhi ne…. Aur mahaul kuch aisa tha ke Abhi ko wo raat yaad ane lagi jiss raat ko wo Ruhi ke ghar par ruka tha…. iss aangan mein iss bus ke piche kiss kiye the donon ne eisi hi raat ke andhere mein…. Wohi fiza thi, wohi khusbhoo thi baahar ke hawaaon mein, aur Abhi ko Ruhi ki baahon ki khushbhoo yaad aayi, usski jakar mein jo komalta tha wo yaad aya, kiss tarah uss raat ko Ruhi ne kapde change kiye the usske samne wo yaad aya Abhi ko aur wo tadapne laga Ruhi ke liye…..
Abhi Ruhi ko dekhna chahta tha, ussko baahon mein phir bharne ki chaah jagi Abhi ke andar, usska dil Ruhi ko yaad karne laga aur Abhi ne asmaan ke taraf sar utha kar kaha,
“Ey upar waale, ey zameen aasmaan banana wale, ey chand sitaare banaane wale, bhej de meri Ruhi ko mera paas, mera dil machalne laga hai ussko dekhne ke liye”
Duah turant kubool hui aur car ne aangan mein entry li, Ruhi car se utri apne parents ke saath. Raat ke 10.30 hue the. Car thik Abhi ke bagal mein ruki, aur jiss jagah Ruhi ko car se utarna tha wo thik Abhi ke side mein tha…. kyunke Andhera tha, kissi ko dikhta nahin to Abhi ne Ruhi ka haath pakar liya…. Ruhi chhuraane ki koshish kar rahi thi magar Abhi chorr nahin raha tha iss liye Ruhi ko khamosh wahi khada rehna pada varna koyi bhi dekh leta ke wo Abhi ke haath se apna haath chhura rahi hai, magar yeh sirf koyi 15 seconds tak hua kyunke tab tak usski maa bhi car se nikli aur Abhi ko Ruhi ka haath chorrna pada….
Assal mein Abhi ne socha tha sabke saamne Ruhi ko apne baahon mein kasske bhar lene ko, sabke saamne, Mehboob ke, usski maa ke, Ruhi ke pita ke, Manoj ke, Mahesh ke, Ruhi ki behen aur behnoy ke saamne Ruhi ko kaske apne bahon bharkar eylaan karne ko ke wo Ruhi se beinteha pyar karta hai aur aaj issi waqt usske pita se usska haath mangta hai shaadi ke liye…. Abhi ek vision jaise kar raha tha, jaise filmon mein flashback aate hai nah, weise Abhi khud uss scene ko apne khayaalon mein dekh raha tha uss waqt Ruhi ka haath chorrne ke baad.
Aur jab Ruhi ka haath chorr diya Abhi ne, tab tak usski maa nikli car se, Ruhi ne apni kalaayi massalte hue Abhi ko teerchi nazar se dekha aur ussko jeeb se chidhaate hue ghar ke taraf jaane lagi, aur Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi se kaha,
“Abhi itna late kaam kar rahe ho aaj? Finish nahin hua kia?”
Abhi ne jawaab diya,
“haan dekha nah raat ke 11 bajne ko hai aur kaam kar raha hoon aur pata nahin kaun aap ke kaan bhar rahe hein ke main nikkamma hoon… nahin finish nahin hua lagta hai kal bhi ana padega, aur kal pakka LAST day hoga iss bus mein kaam ki!!”
Abhi ko to bahot Khushi ho rahi tha ke ussko aur ana padega us aangan mein kaam karne ko kal bhi.
Ruhi ki maa ne terrace par rukte hue Abhi ko haath ke ishare se bulaya, wo gaya uss se baat karne aur bus ke andar se Manoj apni maa ko Abhi se baat karte hue dekh kar hanss raha tha, aur Ruhi lounge mein kadhi dekh rahi thi ab tak apne kalaayi ko massalte hue jahan Abhi ne zor se ussko pakra tha jab wo car se nikli thi to, aur Abhi ko ishaare se dikha rahi thi ke Abhi ke panje ka nishaan ban gaya hai Ruhi ki kalaayi par, Ruhi ne munh banaate hue apni kalaayi Abhi ko dikhaya aur jaise apne nazron se keh rahi thi, “dekho tumne mere kalaayi par nishaan bana diya apne panje ka, kitna zor ke pakra tha meri kalaayi ko!”
Aur Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi se kaha,
“Abhi mujhe afsos hai ke main tumko NAH kehti hoon ab Ruhi ke liye final word hai NO!”
Abhi ki awaaz nahin nikli…. Wo khamosh raha aur Ruhi ko dekhta raha lounge mein, full lights the Ruhi par, chamak rahi thi apni nayi dress mein, chehre par jaise ek noor thi Ruhi ke, aur Abhi uskso dekhte hue soch raaha tha ke kia yeh hoor, yeh pari meri nahin hogi? Aisa ho nahin sakta, kal to isske papa se main baat karke hi rahunga chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye.”
Kaam jaari raha raat ke 00.30 tak. Abhi raat ko bhi Ruhi ke ghar ke taraf dekh raha tha, aur apne gaane ki tune ki seeti baja raha tha, iss umeed se ke Ruhi soyi nahin hogi, iss liye ke wo iss waqt tak kaam raha the aur Ruhi sunein aur baahar aakar ussko dekhe….. magar wo to sapnon mein Abhi ko seeti bajaate hue dekh rahi hogi uss waqt.
Subha ke 1 baje Abhi aur team ko ek car ghar wapas chorrne gaya, car ko Mehboob ne rent kiya tha.
Subha 3 baje tak Abhi ne sab kuch likha apne diary mein aur last line ko bold mein yeh likh kkar diary ko band kiya,
“TOMORROW IS THE LAST DAY I WILL WORK THERE. I HOPE TO COME BACK HERE TOMORROW AND WRITE THAT RUHI’S PARENTS ACCEPTED AND NOW RUHI IS MINE.”
To be continued….
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Awesome updateUpdate 36 Eve Of The Last Day
Abhi ne socha sirf pita ke lautne ki vajah se ro rahi hai ya Abhi ko bhi yaad kar rahi hai , abhi se juda hone ke ghum mein bhi ro rahi hai….. aur Abhi ne dekha Ruhi apne pita ke seene se lagi hui to thi magar kum se kum 7 baar Ruhi ki nazrein Abhi par gaye the uss dauraan….
Ab aaguey….
Ruhi ka rona jaise rona nahin tha, Abhi ne socha ke agar wo Ruhi ki jagah hota to itna rota apne pita se 3 saal baad milne par ke rukta hi nahin, aur Ruhi ki uss tarah se rone se Abhi ko lag gaya ke Ruhi uss se bahut kum emotional hai, Abhi ruhi se bahut ziada emotional aur sentimental tha Abhi ne khud se kaha.. magar phir Abhi ne yaad kiya ke kitna royi thi uss in Ruhi jab Abhi ne ussko baahon mein bhada tha….. aur abhi kuch der pehle jab Mehboob ne danta tha donon ko tab kitna royi thi fut fut kar Abhi ke saath… to aaj pita se milne ke baad kyun wo nahin royi? Haan shayad bahot ro chuki thi kuch der pehle Abhi ke saath aur wapas ghar men bhag gayi to jaakar khub royi hogi, saare ansoo sukh gaye honge….
Aur thodi der baad jab Ruhi ke father ghar ke andar chala gaya to Abhi ne dekha ke Ruhi ussko dekh rahi hai terrace par khadi, usski badi behen usske saath thi. Abhi ne socha ab kaise usske paas khadi hai? Socha ke shaayad usski badi behen saath hai iss liye, Abhi ke paas aagayi hai…. Aur achanak Ruhi ki badi behen ne Abhi ko ishara kiya…. Abhi nahin samjha to pucha kia keh rahi hai to badi behen ne kaha ussko matlab Ruhi ko kuch kehna hai… Abhi bahot khush hua aur terrace par gaya puchne ke Ruhi kia keh rahi hai. Ruhi ne normal tarike se kaha,
“Aaj last din hai aap ka yahan ya kal phir ana hoga!”
Abhi ko ek baat yaad aayi aur kaha,
“kyun bala tal jaega agar mera ana end hua to?!”
Ruhi ne kaha,
“Aapne aaj tak uss baat ko dil se lagaya hua hai Abhi?”
Abhi ne ek gahri saans lete hue kaha,
“Tumhari kaun si baat ko main ne dil se nahin lagaya hai Ruhi? Kissi din tumko dikhaunga ya padhne ko dunga tab padh lena ke tumhare kiss kiss chiz ko main ne dil se lagaya hua hai”
Ruhi ki badi behen Abhi ko upar se niche dekh rahi thi bina muskurahat ke, bina kissi bhi feeling ya emotion ke, lagta tha wo samajhne ki koshish kar rahi hai ke Abhi sahi ladka hai ya nahin Ruhi ke liye. To Ruhi mudh kar apni badi behen ko dekhte hue uss se kaha,
“Dekha na di, aise hi baat karta hai, itna tez hai ke pucho mat, maa bhi innse kabhi nahin jeet sakti, he is too intelligent.”
To Abhi ne Ruhi se kaha,
“Achah thodi der mein tumhare papa se baat karne aunga, kaam end hone ke baad, wash kar lunga tab okay… tum sath dogi nah, kahin tumhare papa yeh nah samjhe ke mera pyar ek tarfa hai kaha tha nah main ne khat mein?!”
Ruhi pehle apni behen ko dekh kar muskuraayi, tab Abhi ko dekh kar hanssi, phir apne chehre par ek sikanjh late hue kaha,
“uff issi liye main puchne aayi ke aaj kaam end hoga ya nahin, no, Abhi mere papa se kuch nahin kehna hai, main nahin chahti ke aap uss se abhi kuch bhi kaho!”
Abhi puchne hi jaa raha tha ke kyun tab tak Ruhi ki badi behen ne Abhi se kaha,
“Wo abhi abhi aaye hein thake honge aur itni badi baat unn se kehna achah nahin lagega, kal aap baat kar lena!”
Abhi ne kaha,
“aur agar aaj kaam end ho gaya, to main kal sirf unn se milne ke liye aa sakta hoon nah?!”
Ruhi ne khud kaha,
“yes of course aap aa sakte ho kiss ne mana kiya aap ko?!”
Abhi ne turant kaha,
“YAAD RAKHUNGA ISS BAAT KO”
Ruhi ne hanss diye tab Abhi ne phir kaha,
“Ab agle 24 hours ke beech tumhare papa ke kaan bhare jaa sakte hein mere khilaaf, to agar ussko accept bhi karna hota tab na karega, aur agar abhi iss se pehle ke usse koyi kuch kahe, main seedha jaa kar baat kar lun to bahut behtar hoga mere khayal se…”
Ruhi ki badi behen ne kaha,
“aap ne kia ghalat kiya hai jo koyi aap ke khilaaf kuch kahega? Kia aap ne koyi ghalat kaam kiya hai? Nahin nah? To kaun kuch bhi keh sakta hai mere papa ko aap ke khilaaf?!”
Abhi ne kuch nahin kaha tab tak Tony ne Abhi ko help ke liye bulaya to ussko jaana pada aur donon andar chale gaye.
Magar Abhi ko sahi nahin lag raha tha ke kal tak baat ko roke, wo Ruhi ke father se issi waqt baat karna chahta tha, iss liye kuch der baad Ruhi ki maa dikhi to Abhi uss se puchne gaya aur kaha,
“main ab ata hoon Ruhi ke papa se baat karne aaun kia?!”
Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,
“Are hum log Ruhi ki nani ke yahan jaa rahe hein wo bimaar hai nah, Ruhi ke papa ussko dekhne jaa rahe hein abhi issi waqt.”
Raat 7.30 ko extention electric wire mein bulb lagaa kar kaam kar rahe the Abhi aur team. Sab samajh rahe the ke raat ke barah baje tak sab kaam end ho jayenge iss liye complete karna chahte the. Ye pehli baar tha ke itna der raat ko bhi kaam jaari tha bus mein. Aur Abhi ne dekha ke Ruhi ka baap aur baaki ke log jaa rahe hein usske nani ke ghar car mein. Ruhi bhi jaa rahi thi. Ussne ek nayi dress pehni thi jissko aaj pehli baar Abhi dekh raha tha, iss se pehle Ruhi ne kabhi nahin pehni thi wo dress. Kamaal ki khubsurat dikh rahi thi, kayamat lag rahi thi aur Abhi paagal hone laga tha ussko uss tarah dekh kar…. Ruhi ne jaate jaate kayi baar Abhi ke taraf dekha, varna ussko pata tha shayad ke Abhi baad mein kehta ke tumne jaate hue mujhko ek nazar bhi nahin dekha. Abhi bhi ussi ko ghurre jaa raha tha, phir zor se Abhi “pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna” whistle karne laga.
Phir bus ke andar Manoj paint kar raha tha chhote chhote jagahon par ek paint brush se. Sunil ne ussko wo karne ko kaha tha, jiss jiss jagah par air holes jo ceilings mein hota hai, Abhi fix kar raha tha, sabhi unn jagahon ke niche Manoj paint kar raha tha, iss liye Manoj aur Abhi ek saath kaam kar rahe the. Itni jaldi thi sab kuch finish karne ke liye family ke saare log help kar rahe the…To Abhi ne Manoj se pucha,
“tum apne nani ko dekhne nahin gaye?”
Manoj ne muskuraate hue kaha,
“nahin main nahin gaya, meri maa, papa aur behen gaye…”
Jab ‘behen’ word kaha Manoj ne to hansste hue Abhi ke chehre mein dekha tab kaha, “Ruhi gayi hai saath”
Abhi ne muskurate hue socha,
“saale ko pata hai ke main Ruhi ko chahta hoon issi liye hanss kar Ruhi ka naam alag se liya behen kehne ke baad”
Tab Abhi ne pucha,
“kaafi door gaye hein nah? bahut late wapas ayenge nah?”
Manoj ne phir hansste hue kaha,
“nahin ziada late nahin ayenge, tum yahin honge, unn se mil paoge, weh log wapas ajayenge dekh lena…”
Abhi ko pakka yakeen ho gaya ke Manoj ko sab kuch pata hai Ruhi aur usske baare mein.
Aur Manoj ne yeh bhi kaha Abhi se,
“main ne baaki ke rolls develop karne ko de diya hai, kal photos mil jaenge wo tumko de dunga kal hi, okay, aur akhri ekaat pics jo lunga road par wo phir kabhi kissi tarah tum tak pahuncha dunga.”
Dinner Mehboob ke ghar kiya Abhi aur team ne. Aur raat ko kaam jaari raha bus mein. Abhi pray karne laga ke Ruhi wapas aajaye Abhi ke wapas jaane se pehle…. Raat ko aaj tak kabhi kaam nahin kiya tha uss aangan mein Abhi ne…. Aur mahaul kuch aisa tha ke Abhi ko wo raat yaad ane lagi jiss raat ko wo Ruhi ke ghar par ruka tha…. iss aangan mein iss bus ke piche kiss kiye the donon ne eisi hi raat ke andhere mein…. Wohi fiza thi, wohi khusbhoo thi baahar ke hawaaon mein, aur Abhi ko Ruhi ki baahon ki khushbhoo yaad aayi, usski jakar mein jo komalta tha wo yaad aya, kiss tarah uss raat ko Ruhi ne kapde change kiye the usske samne wo yaad aya Abhi ko aur wo tadapne laga Ruhi ke liye…..
Abhi Ruhi ko dekhna chahta tha, ussko baahon mein phir bharne ki chaah jagi Abhi ke andar, usska dil Ruhi ko yaad karne laga aur Abhi ne asmaan ke taraf sar utha kar kaha,
“Ey upar waale, ey zameen aasmaan banana wale, ey chand sitaare banaane wale, bhej de meri Ruhi ko mera paas, mera dil machalne laga hai ussko dekhne ke liye”
Duah turant kubool hui aur car ne aangan mein entry li, Ruhi car se utri apne parents ke saath. Raat ke 10.30 hue the. Car thik Abhi ke bagal mein ruki, aur jiss jagah Ruhi ko car se utarna tha wo thik Abhi ke side mein tha…. kyunke Andhera tha, kissi ko dikhta nahin to Abhi ne Ruhi ka haath pakar liya…. Ruhi chhuraane ki koshish kar rahi thi magar Abhi chorr nahin raha tha iss liye Ruhi ko khamosh wahi khada rehna pada varna koyi bhi dekh leta ke wo Abhi ke haath se apna haath chhura rahi hai, magar yeh sirf koyi 15 seconds tak hua kyunke tab tak usski maa bhi car se nikli aur Abhi ko Ruhi ka haath chorrna pada….
Assal mein Abhi ne socha tha sabke saamne Ruhi ko apne baahon mein kasske bhar lene ko, sabke saamne, Mehboob ke, usski maa ke, Ruhi ke pita ke, Manoj ke, Mahesh ke, Ruhi ki behen aur behnoy ke saamne Ruhi ko kaske apne bahon bharkar eylaan karne ko ke wo Ruhi se beinteha pyar karta hai aur aaj issi waqt usske pita se usska haath mangta hai shaadi ke liye…. Abhi ek vision jaise kar raha tha, jaise filmon mein flashback aate hai nah, weise Abhi khud uss scene ko apne khayaalon mein dekh raha tha uss waqt Ruhi ka haath chorrne ke baad.
Aur jab Ruhi ka haath chorr diya Abhi ne, tab tak usski maa nikli car se, Ruhi ne apni kalaayi massalte hue Abhi ko teerchi nazar se dekha aur ussko jeeb se chidhaate hue ghar ke taraf jaane lagi, aur Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi se kaha,
“Abhi itna late kaam kar rahe ho aaj? Finish nahin hua kia?”
Abhi ne jawaab diya,
“haan dekha nah raat ke 11 bajne ko hai aur kaam kar raha hoon aur pata nahin kaun aap ke kaan bhar rahe hein ke main nikkamma hoon… nahin finish nahin hua lagta hai kal bhi ana padega, aur kal pakka LAST day hoga iss bus mein kaam ki!!”
Abhi ko to bahot Khushi ho rahi tha ke ussko aur ana padega us aangan mein kaam karne ko kal bhi.
Ruhi ki maa ne terrace par rukte hue Abhi ko haath ke ishare se bulaya, wo gaya uss se baat karne aur bus ke andar se Manoj apni maa ko Abhi se baat karte hue dekh kar hanss raha tha, aur Ruhi lounge mein kadhi dekh rahi thi ab tak apne kalaayi ko massalte hue jahan Abhi ne zor se ussko pakra tha jab wo car se nikli thi to, aur Abhi ko ishaare se dikha rahi thi ke Abhi ke panje ka nishaan ban gaya hai Ruhi ki kalaayi par, Ruhi ne munh banaate hue apni kalaayi Abhi ko dikhaya aur jaise apne nazron se keh rahi thi, “dekho tumne mere kalaayi par nishaan bana diya apne panje ka, kitna zor ke pakra tha meri kalaayi ko!”
Aur Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi se kaha,
“Abhi mujhe afsos hai ke main tumko NAH kehti hoon ab Ruhi ke liye final word hai NO!”
Abhi ki awaaz nahin nikli…. Wo khamosh raha aur Ruhi ko dekhta raha lounge mein, full lights the Ruhi par, chamak rahi thi apni nayi dress mein, chehre par jaise ek noor thi Ruhi ke, aur Abhi uskso dekhte hue soch raaha tha ke kia yeh hoor, yeh pari meri nahin hogi? Aisa ho nahin sakta, kal to isske papa se main baat karke hi rahunga chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye.”
Kaam jaari raha raat ke 00.30 tak. Abhi raat ko bhi Ruhi ke ghar ke taraf dekh raha tha, aur apne gaane ki tune ki seeti baja raha tha, iss umeed se ke Ruhi soyi nahin hogi, iss liye ke wo iss waqt tak kaam raha the aur Ruhi sunein aur baahar aakar ussko dekhe….. magar wo to sapnon mein Abhi ko seeti bajaate hue dekh rahi hogi uss waqt.
Subha ke 1 baje Abhi aur team ko ek car ghar wapas chorrne gaya, car ko Mehboob ne rent kiya tha.
Subha 3 baje tak Abhi ne sab kuch likha apne diary mein aur last line ko bold mein yeh likh kkar diary ko band kiya,
“TOMORROW IS THE LAST DAY I WILL WORK THERE. I HOPE TO COME BACK HERE TOMORROW AND WRITE THAT RUHI’S PARENTS ACCEPTED AND NOW RUHI IS MINE.”
To be continued….
Update 36 Eve Of The Last Day
Abhi ne socha sirf pita ke lautne ki vajah se ro rahi hai ya Abhi ko bhi yaad kar rahi hai , abhi se juda hone ke ghum mein bhi ro rahi hai….. aur Abhi ne dekha Ruhi apne pita ke seene se lagi hui to thi magar kum se kum 7 baar Ruhi ki nazrein Abhi par gaye the uss dauraan….
Ab aaguey….
Ruhi ka rona jaise rona nahin tha, Abhi ne socha ke agar wo Ruhi ki jagah hota to itna rota apne pita se 3 saal baad milne par ke rukta hi nahin, aur Ruhi ki uss tarah se rone se Abhi ko lag gaya ke Ruhi uss se bahut kum emotional hai, Abhi ruhi se bahut ziada emotional aur sentimental tha Abhi ne khud se kaha.. magar phir Abhi ne yaad kiya ke kitna royi thi uss in Ruhi jab Abhi ne ussko baahon mein bhada tha….. aur abhi kuch der pehle jab Mehboob ne danta tha donon ko tab kitna royi thi fut fut kar Abhi ke saath… to aaj pita se milne ke baad kyun wo nahin royi? Haan shayad bahot ro chuki thi kuch der pehle Abhi ke saath aur wapas ghar men bhag gayi to jaakar khub royi hogi, saare ansoo sukh gaye honge….
Aur thodi der baad jab Ruhi ke father ghar ke andar chala gaya to Abhi ne dekha ke Ruhi ussko dekh rahi hai terrace par khadi, usski badi behen usske saath thi. Abhi ne socha ab kaise usske paas khadi hai? Socha ke shaayad usski badi behen saath hai iss liye, Abhi ke paas aagayi hai…. Aur achanak Ruhi ki badi behen ne Abhi ko ishara kiya…. Abhi nahin samjha to pucha kia keh rahi hai to badi behen ne kaha ussko matlab Ruhi ko kuch kehna hai… Abhi bahot khush hua aur terrace par gaya puchne ke Ruhi kia keh rahi hai. Ruhi ne normal tarike se kaha,
“Aaj last din hai aap ka yahan ya kal phir ana hoga!”
Abhi ko ek baat yaad aayi aur kaha,
“kyun bala tal jaega agar mera ana end hua to?!”
Ruhi ne kaha,
“Aapne aaj tak uss baat ko dil se lagaya hua hai Abhi?”
Abhi ne ek gahri saans lete hue kaha,
“Tumhari kaun si baat ko main ne dil se nahin lagaya hai Ruhi? Kissi din tumko dikhaunga ya padhne ko dunga tab padh lena ke tumhare kiss kiss chiz ko main ne dil se lagaya hua hai”
Ruhi ki badi behen Abhi ko upar se niche dekh rahi thi bina muskurahat ke, bina kissi bhi feeling ya emotion ke, lagta tha wo samajhne ki koshish kar rahi hai ke Abhi sahi ladka hai ya nahin Ruhi ke liye. To Ruhi mudh kar apni badi behen ko dekhte hue uss se kaha,
“Dekha na di, aise hi baat karta hai, itna tez hai ke pucho mat, maa bhi innse kabhi nahin jeet sakti, he is too intelligent.”
To Abhi ne Ruhi se kaha,
“Achah thodi der mein tumhare papa se baat karne aunga, kaam end hone ke baad, wash kar lunga tab okay… tum sath dogi nah, kahin tumhare papa yeh nah samjhe ke mera pyar ek tarfa hai kaha tha nah main ne khat mein?!”
Ruhi pehle apni behen ko dekh kar muskuraayi, tab Abhi ko dekh kar hanssi, phir apne chehre par ek sikanjh late hue kaha,
“uff issi liye main puchne aayi ke aaj kaam end hoga ya nahin, no, Abhi mere papa se kuch nahin kehna hai, main nahin chahti ke aap uss se abhi kuch bhi kaho!”
Abhi puchne hi jaa raha tha ke kyun tab tak Ruhi ki badi behen ne Abhi se kaha,
“Wo abhi abhi aaye hein thake honge aur itni badi baat unn se kehna achah nahin lagega, kal aap baat kar lena!”
Abhi ne kaha,
“aur agar aaj kaam end ho gaya, to main kal sirf unn se milne ke liye aa sakta hoon nah?!”
Ruhi ne khud kaha,
“yes of course aap aa sakte ho kiss ne mana kiya aap ko?!”
Abhi ne turant kaha,
“YAAD RAKHUNGA ISS BAAT KO”
Ruhi ne hanss diye tab Abhi ne phir kaha,
“Ab agle 24 hours ke beech tumhare papa ke kaan bhare jaa sakte hein mere khilaaf, to agar ussko accept bhi karna hota tab na karega, aur agar abhi iss se pehle ke usse koyi kuch kahe, main seedha jaa kar baat kar lun to bahut behtar hoga mere khayal se…”
Ruhi ki badi behen ne kaha,
“aap ne kia ghalat kiya hai jo koyi aap ke khilaaf kuch kahega? Kia aap ne koyi ghalat kaam kiya hai? Nahin nah? To kaun kuch bhi keh sakta hai mere papa ko aap ke khilaaf?!”
Abhi ne kuch nahin kaha tab tak Tony ne Abhi ko help ke liye bulaya to ussko jaana pada aur donon andar chale gaye.
Magar Abhi ko sahi nahin lag raha tha ke kal tak baat ko roke, wo Ruhi ke father se issi waqt baat karna chahta tha, iss liye kuch der baad Ruhi ki maa dikhi to Abhi uss se puchne gaya aur kaha,
“main ab ata hoon Ruhi ke papa se baat karne aaun kia?!”
Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,
“Are hum log Ruhi ki nani ke yahan jaa rahe hein wo bimaar hai nah, Ruhi ke papa ussko dekhne jaa rahe hein abhi issi waqt.”
Raat 7.30 ko extention electric wire mein bulb lagaa kar kaam kar rahe the Abhi aur team. Sab samajh rahe the ke raat ke barah baje tak sab kaam end ho jayenge iss liye complete karna chahte the. Ye pehli baar tha ke itna der raat ko bhi kaam jaari tha bus mein. Aur Abhi ne dekha ke Ruhi ka baap aur baaki ke log jaa rahe hein usske nani ke ghar car mein. Ruhi bhi jaa rahi thi. Ussne ek nayi dress pehni thi jissko aaj pehli baar Abhi dekh raha tha, iss se pehle Ruhi ne kabhi nahin pehni thi wo dress. Kamaal ki khubsurat dikh rahi thi, kayamat lag rahi thi aur Abhi paagal hone laga tha ussko uss tarah dekh kar…. Ruhi ne jaate jaate kayi baar Abhi ke taraf dekha, varna ussko pata tha shayad ke Abhi baad mein kehta ke tumne jaate hue mujhko ek nazar bhi nahin dekha. Abhi bhi ussi ko ghurre jaa raha tha, phir zor se Abhi “pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna” whistle karne laga.
Phir bus ke andar Manoj paint kar raha tha chhote chhote jagahon par ek paint brush se. Sunil ne ussko wo karne ko kaha tha, jiss jiss jagah par air holes jo ceilings mein hota hai, Abhi fix kar raha tha, sabhi unn jagahon ke niche Manoj paint kar raha tha, iss liye Manoj aur Abhi ek saath kaam kar rahe the. Itni jaldi thi sab kuch finish karne ke liye family ke saare log help kar rahe the…To Abhi ne Manoj se pucha,
“tum apne nani ko dekhne nahin gaye?”
Manoj ne muskuraate hue kaha,
“nahin main nahin gaya, meri maa, papa aur behen gaye…”
Jab ‘behen’ word kaha Manoj ne to hansste hue Abhi ke chehre mein dekha tab kaha, “Ruhi gayi hai saath”
Abhi ne muskurate hue socha,
“saale ko pata hai ke main Ruhi ko chahta hoon issi liye hanss kar Ruhi ka naam alag se liya behen kehne ke baad”
Tab Abhi ne pucha,
“kaafi door gaye hein nah? bahut late wapas ayenge nah?”
Manoj ne phir hansste hue kaha,
“nahin ziada late nahin ayenge, tum yahin honge, unn se mil paoge, weh log wapas ajayenge dekh lena…”
Abhi ko pakka yakeen ho gaya ke Manoj ko sab kuch pata hai Ruhi aur usske baare mein.
Aur Manoj ne yeh bhi kaha Abhi se,
“main ne baaki ke rolls develop karne ko de diya hai, kal photos mil jaenge wo tumko de dunga kal hi, okay, aur akhri ekaat pics jo lunga road par wo phir kabhi kissi tarah tum tak pahuncha dunga.”
Dinner Mehboob ke ghar kiya Abhi aur team ne. Aur raat ko kaam jaari raha bus mein. Abhi pray karne laga ke Ruhi wapas aajaye Abhi ke wapas jaane se pehle…. Raat ko aaj tak kabhi kaam nahin kiya tha uss aangan mein Abhi ne…. Aur mahaul kuch aisa tha ke Abhi ko wo raat yaad ane lagi jiss raat ko wo Ruhi ke ghar par ruka tha…. iss aangan mein iss bus ke piche kiss kiye the donon ne eisi hi raat ke andhere mein…. Wohi fiza thi, wohi khusbhoo thi baahar ke hawaaon mein, aur Abhi ko Ruhi ki baahon ki khushbhoo yaad aayi, usski jakar mein jo komalta tha wo yaad aya, kiss tarah uss raat ko Ruhi ne kapde change kiye the usske samne wo yaad aya Abhi ko aur wo tadapne laga Ruhi ke liye…..
Abhi Ruhi ko dekhna chahta tha, ussko baahon mein phir bharne ki chaah jagi Abhi ke andar, usska dil Ruhi ko yaad karne laga aur Abhi ne asmaan ke taraf sar utha kar kaha,
“Ey upar waale, ey zameen aasmaan banana wale, ey chand sitaare banaane wale, bhej de meri Ruhi ko mera paas, mera dil machalne laga hai ussko dekhne ke liye”
Duah turant kubool hui aur car ne aangan mein entry li, Ruhi car se utri apne parents ke saath. Raat ke 10.30 hue the. Car thik Abhi ke bagal mein ruki, aur jiss jagah Ruhi ko car se utarna tha wo thik Abhi ke side mein tha…. kyunke Andhera tha, kissi ko dikhta nahin to Abhi ne Ruhi ka haath pakar liya…. Ruhi chhuraane ki koshish kar rahi thi magar Abhi chorr nahin raha tha iss liye Ruhi ko khamosh wahi khada rehna pada varna koyi bhi dekh leta ke wo Abhi ke haath se apna haath chhura rahi hai, magar yeh sirf koyi 15 seconds tak hua kyunke tab tak usski maa bhi car se nikli aur Abhi ko Ruhi ka haath chorrna pada….
Assal mein Abhi ne socha tha sabke saamne Ruhi ko apne baahon mein kasske bhar lene ko, sabke saamne, Mehboob ke, usski maa ke, Ruhi ke pita ke, Manoj ke, Mahesh ke, Ruhi ki behen aur behnoy ke saamne Ruhi ko kaske apne bahon bharkar eylaan karne ko ke wo Ruhi se beinteha pyar karta hai aur aaj issi waqt usske pita se usska haath mangta hai shaadi ke liye…. Abhi ek vision jaise kar raha tha, jaise filmon mein flashback aate hai nah, weise Abhi khud uss scene ko apne khayaalon mein dekh raha tha uss waqt Ruhi ka haath chorrne ke baad.
Aur jab Ruhi ka haath chorr diya Abhi ne, tab tak usski maa nikli car se, Ruhi ne apni kalaayi massalte hue Abhi ko teerchi nazar se dekha aur ussko jeeb se chidhaate hue ghar ke taraf jaane lagi, aur Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi se kaha,
“Abhi itna late kaam kar rahe ho aaj? Finish nahin hua kia?”
Abhi ne jawaab diya,
“haan dekha nah raat ke 11 bajne ko hai aur kaam kar raha hoon aur pata nahin kaun aap ke kaan bhar rahe hein ke main nikkamma hoon… nahin finish nahin hua lagta hai kal bhi ana padega, aur kal pakka LAST day hoga iss bus mein kaam ki!!”
Abhi ko to bahot Khushi ho rahi tha ke ussko aur ana padega us aangan mein kaam karne ko kal bhi.
Ruhi ki maa ne terrace par rukte hue Abhi ko haath ke ishare se bulaya, wo gaya uss se baat karne aur bus ke andar se Manoj apni maa ko Abhi se baat karte hue dekh kar hanss raha tha, aur Ruhi lounge mein kadhi dekh rahi thi ab tak apne kalaayi ko massalte hue jahan Abhi ne zor se ussko pakra tha jab wo car se nikli thi to, aur Abhi ko ishaare se dikha rahi thi ke Abhi ke panje ka nishaan ban gaya hai Ruhi ki kalaayi par, Ruhi ne munh banaate hue apni kalaayi Abhi ko dikhaya aur jaise apne nazron se keh rahi thi, “dekho tumne mere kalaayi par nishaan bana diya apne panje ka, kitna zor ke pakra tha meri kalaayi ko!”
Aur Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi se kaha,
“Abhi mujhe afsos hai ke main tumko NAH kehti hoon ab Ruhi ke liye final word hai NO!”
Abhi ki awaaz nahin nikli…. Wo khamosh raha aur Ruhi ko dekhta raha lounge mein, full lights the Ruhi par, chamak rahi thi apni nayi dress mein, chehre par jaise ek noor thi Ruhi ke, aur Abhi uskso dekhte hue soch raaha tha ke kia yeh hoor, yeh pari meri nahin hogi? Aisa ho nahin sakta, kal to isske papa se main baat karke hi rahunga chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye.”
Kaam jaari raha raat ke 00.30 tak. Abhi raat ko bhi Ruhi ke ghar ke taraf dekh raha tha, aur apne gaane ki tune ki seeti baja raha tha, iss umeed se ke Ruhi soyi nahin hogi, iss liye ke wo iss waqt tak kaam raha the aur Ruhi sunein aur baahar aakar ussko dekhe….. magar wo to sapnon mein Abhi ko seeti bajaate hue dekh rahi hogi uss waqt.
Subha ke 1 baje Abhi aur team ko ek car ghar wapas chorrne gaya, car ko Mehboob ne rent kiya tha.
Subha 3 baje tak Abhi ne sab kuch likha apne diary mein aur last line ko bold mein yeh likh kkar diary ko band kiya,
“TOMORROW IS THE LAST DAY I WILL WORK THERE. I HOPE TO COME BACK HERE TOMORROW AND WRITE THAT RUHI’S PARENTS ACCEPTED AND NOW RUHI IS MINE.”
To be continued….
Bhai jabardast update hai. Conversations mein Abhi ke lines beautiful aur strong hein.
Dard badhta jaa raha hai Abhi ke liye last mein jo Ruhi ki maa ne no kaha uss se Abhi par kia bita hoga upar se Ruhi chali gayi.
Bahut difficult situation mein fanssa hua hai Abhi. Afsos ho raha hai usske liye.
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Update 36 Eve Of The Last Day
Abhi ne socha sirf pita ke lautne ki vajah se ro rahi hai ya Abhi ko bhi yaad kar rahi hai , abhi se juda hone ke ghum mein bhi ro rahi hai….. aur Abhi ne dekha Ruhi apne pita ke seene se lagi hui to thi magar kum se kum 7 baar Ruhi ki nazrein Abhi par gaye the uss dauraan….
Ab aaguey….
Ruhi ka rona jaise rona nahin tha, Abhi ne socha ke agar wo Ruhi ki jagah hota to itna rota apne pita se 3 saal baad milne par ke rukta hi nahin, aur Ruhi ki uss tarah se rone se Abhi ko lag gaya ke Ruhi uss se bahut kum emotional hai, Abhi ruhi se bahut ziada emotional aur sentimental tha Abhi ne khud se kaha.. magar phir Abhi ne yaad kiya ke kitna royi thi uss in Ruhi jab Abhi ne ussko baahon mein bhada tha….. aur abhi kuch der pehle jab Mehboob ne danta tha donon ko tab kitna royi thi fut fut kar Abhi ke saath… to aaj pita se milne ke baad kyun wo nahin royi? Haan shayad bahot ro chuki thi kuch der pehle Abhi ke saath aur wapas ghar men bhag gayi to jaakar khub royi hogi, saare ansoo sukh gaye honge….
Aur thodi der baad jab Ruhi ke father ghar ke andar chala gaya to Abhi ne dekha ke Ruhi ussko dekh rahi hai terrace par khadi, usski badi behen usske saath thi. Abhi ne socha ab kaise usske paas khadi hai? Socha ke shaayad usski badi behen saath hai iss liye, Abhi ke paas aagayi hai…. Aur achanak Ruhi ki badi behen ne Abhi ko ishara kiya…. Abhi nahin samjha to pucha kia keh rahi hai to badi behen ne kaha ussko matlab Ruhi ko kuch kehna hai… Abhi bahot khush hua aur terrace par gaya puchne ke Ruhi kia keh rahi hai. Ruhi ne normal tarike se kaha,
“Aaj last din hai aap ka yahan ya kal phir ana hoga!”
Abhi ko ek baat yaad aayi aur kaha,
“kyun bala tal jaega agar mera ana end hua to?!”
Ruhi ne kaha,
“Aapne aaj tak uss baat ko dil se lagaya hua hai Abhi?”
Abhi ne ek gahri saans lete hue kaha,
“Tumhari kaun si baat ko main ne dil se nahin lagaya hai Ruhi? Kissi din tumko dikhaunga ya padhne ko dunga tab padh lena ke tumhare kiss kiss chiz ko main ne dil se lagaya hua hai”
Ruhi ki badi behen Abhi ko upar se niche dekh rahi thi bina muskurahat ke, bina kissi bhi feeling ya emotion ke, lagta tha wo samajhne ki koshish kar rahi hai ke Abhi sahi ladka hai ya nahin Ruhi ke liye. To Ruhi mudh kar apni badi behen ko dekhte hue uss se kaha,
“Dekha na di, aise hi baat karta hai, itna tez hai ke pucho mat, maa bhi innse kabhi nahin jeet sakti, he is too intelligent.”
To Abhi ne Ruhi se kaha,
“Achah thodi der mein tumhare papa se baat karne aunga, kaam end hone ke baad, wash kar lunga tab okay… tum sath dogi nah, kahin tumhare papa yeh nah samjhe ke mera pyar ek tarfa hai kaha tha nah main ne khat mein?!”
Ruhi pehle apni behen ko dekh kar muskuraayi, tab Abhi ko dekh kar hanssi, phir apne chehre par ek sikanjh late hue kaha,
“uff issi liye main puchne aayi ke aaj kaam end hoga ya nahin, no, Abhi mere papa se kuch nahin kehna hai, main nahin chahti ke aap uss se abhi kuch bhi kaho!”
Abhi puchne hi jaa raha tha ke kyun tab tak Ruhi ki badi behen ne Abhi se kaha,
“Wo abhi abhi aaye hein thake honge aur itni badi baat unn se kehna achah nahin lagega, kal aap baat kar lena!”
Abhi ne kaha,
“aur agar aaj kaam end ho gaya, to main kal sirf unn se milne ke liye aa sakta hoon nah?!”
Ruhi ne khud kaha,
“yes of course aap aa sakte ho kiss ne mana kiya aap ko?!”
Abhi ne turant kaha,
“YAAD RAKHUNGA ISS BAAT KO”
Ruhi ne hanss diye tab Abhi ne phir kaha,
“Ab agle 24 hours ke beech tumhare papa ke kaan bhare jaa sakte hein mere khilaaf, to agar ussko accept bhi karna hota tab na karega, aur agar abhi iss se pehle ke usse koyi kuch kahe, main seedha jaa kar baat kar lun to bahut behtar hoga mere khayal se…”
Ruhi ki badi behen ne kaha,
“aap ne kia ghalat kiya hai jo koyi aap ke khilaaf kuch kahega? Kia aap ne koyi ghalat kaam kiya hai? Nahin nah? To kaun kuch bhi keh sakta hai mere papa ko aap ke khilaaf?!”
Abhi ne kuch nahin kaha tab tak Tony ne Abhi ko help ke liye bulaya to ussko jaana pada aur donon andar chale gaye.
Magar Abhi ko sahi nahin lag raha tha ke kal tak baat ko roke, wo Ruhi ke father se issi waqt baat karna chahta tha, iss liye kuch der baad Ruhi ki maa dikhi to Abhi uss se puchne gaya aur kaha,
“main ab ata hoon Ruhi ke papa se baat karne aaun kia?!”
Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,
“Are hum log Ruhi ki nani ke yahan jaa rahe hein wo bimaar hai nah, Ruhi ke papa ussko dekhne jaa rahe hein abhi issi waqt.”
Raat 7.30 ko extention electric wire mein bulb lagaa kar kaam kar rahe the Abhi aur team. Sab samajh rahe the ke raat ke barah baje tak sab kaam end ho jayenge iss liye complete karna chahte the. Ye pehli baar tha ke itna der raat ko bhi kaam jaari tha bus mein. Aur Abhi ne dekha ke Ruhi ka baap aur baaki ke log jaa rahe hein usske nani ke ghar car mein. Ruhi bhi jaa rahi thi. Ussne ek nayi dress pehni thi jissko aaj pehli baar Abhi dekh raha tha, iss se pehle Ruhi ne kabhi nahin pehni thi wo dress. Kamaal ki khubsurat dikh rahi thi, kayamat lag rahi thi aur Abhi paagal hone laga tha ussko uss tarah dekh kar…. Ruhi ne jaate jaate kayi baar Abhi ke taraf dekha, varna ussko pata tha shayad ke Abhi baad mein kehta ke tumne jaate hue mujhko ek nazar bhi nahin dekha. Abhi bhi ussi ko ghurre jaa raha tha, phir zor se Abhi “pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna” whistle karne laga.
Phir bus ke andar Manoj paint kar raha tha chhote chhote jagahon par ek paint brush se. Sunil ne ussko wo karne ko kaha tha, jiss jiss jagah par air holes jo ceilings mein hota hai, Abhi fix kar raha tha, sabhi unn jagahon ke niche Manoj paint kar raha tha, iss liye Manoj aur Abhi ek saath kaam kar rahe the. Itni jaldi thi sab kuch finish karne ke liye family ke saare log help kar rahe the…To Abhi ne Manoj se pucha,
“tum apne nani ko dekhne nahin gaye?”
Manoj ne muskuraate hue kaha,
“nahin main nahin gaya, meri maa, papa aur behen gaye…”
Jab ‘behen’ word kaha Manoj ne to hansste hue Abhi ke chehre mein dekha tab kaha, “Ruhi gayi hai saath”
Abhi ne muskurate hue socha,
“saale ko pata hai ke main Ruhi ko chahta hoon issi liye hanss kar Ruhi ka naam alag se liya behen kehne ke baad”
Tab Abhi ne pucha,
“kaafi door gaye hein nah? bahut late wapas ayenge nah?”
Manoj ne phir hansste hue kaha,
“nahin ziada late nahin ayenge, tum yahin honge, unn se mil paoge, weh log wapas ajayenge dekh lena…”
Abhi ko pakka yakeen ho gaya ke Manoj ko sab kuch pata hai Ruhi aur usske baare mein.
Aur Manoj ne yeh bhi kaha Abhi se,
“main ne baaki ke rolls develop karne ko de diya hai, kal photos mil jaenge wo tumko de dunga kal hi, okay, aur akhri ekaat pics jo lunga road par wo phir kabhi kissi tarah tum tak pahuncha dunga.”
Dinner Mehboob ke ghar kiya Abhi aur team ne. Aur raat ko kaam jaari raha bus mein. Abhi pray karne laga ke Ruhi wapas aajaye Abhi ke wapas jaane se pehle…. Raat ko aaj tak kabhi kaam nahin kiya tha uss aangan mein Abhi ne…. Aur mahaul kuch aisa tha ke Abhi ko wo raat yaad ane lagi jiss raat ko wo Ruhi ke ghar par ruka tha…. iss aangan mein iss bus ke piche kiss kiye the donon ne eisi hi raat ke andhere mein…. Wohi fiza thi, wohi khusbhoo thi baahar ke hawaaon mein, aur Abhi ko Ruhi ki baahon ki khushbhoo yaad aayi, usski jakar mein jo komalta tha wo yaad aya, kiss tarah uss raat ko Ruhi ne kapde change kiye the usske samne wo yaad aya Abhi ko aur wo tadapne laga Ruhi ke liye…..
Abhi Ruhi ko dekhna chahta tha, ussko baahon mein phir bharne ki chaah jagi Abhi ke andar, usska dil Ruhi ko yaad karne laga aur Abhi ne asmaan ke taraf sar utha kar kaha,
“Ey upar waale, ey zameen aasmaan banana wale, ey chand sitaare banaane wale, bhej de meri Ruhi ko mera paas, mera dil machalne laga hai ussko dekhne ke liye”
Duah turant kubool hui aur car ne aangan mein entry li, Ruhi car se utri apne parents ke saath. Raat ke 10.30 hue the. Car thik Abhi ke bagal mein ruki, aur jiss jagah Ruhi ko car se utarna tha wo thik Abhi ke side mein tha…. kyunke Andhera tha, kissi ko dikhta nahin to Abhi ne Ruhi ka haath pakar liya…. Ruhi chhuraane ki koshish kar rahi thi magar Abhi chorr nahin raha tha iss liye Ruhi ko khamosh wahi khada rehna pada varna koyi bhi dekh leta ke wo Abhi ke haath se apna haath chhura rahi hai, magar yeh sirf koyi 15 seconds tak hua kyunke tab tak usski maa bhi car se nikli aur Abhi ko Ruhi ka haath chorrna pada….
Assal mein Abhi ne socha tha sabke saamne Ruhi ko apne baahon mein kasske bhar lene ko, sabke saamne, Mehboob ke, usski maa ke, Ruhi ke pita ke, Manoj ke, Mahesh ke, Ruhi ki behen aur behnoy ke saamne Ruhi ko kaske apne bahon bharkar eylaan karne ko ke wo Ruhi se beinteha pyar karta hai aur aaj issi waqt usske pita se usska haath mangta hai shaadi ke liye…. Abhi ek vision jaise kar raha tha, jaise filmon mein flashback aate hai nah, weise Abhi khud uss scene ko apne khayaalon mein dekh raha tha uss waqt Ruhi ka haath chorrne ke baad.
Aur jab Ruhi ka haath chorr diya Abhi ne, tab tak usski maa nikli car se, Ruhi ne apni kalaayi massalte hue Abhi ko teerchi nazar se dekha aur ussko jeeb se chidhaate hue ghar ke taraf jaane lagi, aur Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi se kaha,
“Abhi itna late kaam kar rahe ho aaj? Finish nahin hua kia?”
Abhi ne jawaab diya,
“haan dekha nah raat ke 11 bajne ko hai aur kaam kar raha hoon aur pata nahin kaun aap ke kaan bhar rahe hein ke main nikkamma hoon… nahin finish nahin hua lagta hai kal bhi ana padega, aur kal pakka LAST day hoga iss bus mein kaam ki!!”
Abhi ko to bahot Khushi ho rahi tha ke ussko aur ana padega us aangan mein kaam karne ko kal bhi.
Ruhi ki maa ne terrace par rukte hue Abhi ko haath ke ishare se bulaya, wo gaya uss se baat karne aur bus ke andar se Manoj apni maa ko Abhi se baat karte hue dekh kar hanss raha tha, aur Ruhi lounge mein kadhi dekh rahi thi ab tak apne kalaayi ko massalte hue jahan Abhi ne zor se ussko pakra tha jab wo car se nikli thi to, aur Abhi ko ishaare se dikha rahi thi ke Abhi ke panje ka nishaan ban gaya hai Ruhi ki kalaayi par, Ruhi ne munh banaate hue apni kalaayi Abhi ko dikhaya aur jaise apne nazron se keh rahi thi, “dekho tumne mere kalaayi par nishaan bana diya apne panje ka, kitna zor ke pakra tha meri kalaayi ko!”
Aur Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi se kaha,
“Abhi mujhe afsos hai ke main tumko NAH kehti hoon ab Ruhi ke liye final word hai NO!”
Abhi ki awaaz nahin nikli…. Wo khamosh raha aur Ruhi ko dekhta raha lounge mein, full lights the Ruhi par, chamak rahi thi apni nayi dress mein, chehre par jaise ek noor thi Ruhi ke, aur Abhi uskso dekhte hue soch raaha tha ke kia yeh hoor, yeh pari meri nahin hogi? Aisa ho nahin sakta, kal to isske papa se main baat karke hi rahunga chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye.”
Kaam jaari raha raat ke 00.30 tak. Abhi raat ko bhi Ruhi ke ghar ke taraf dekh raha tha, aur apne gaane ki tune ki seeti baja raha tha, iss umeed se ke Ruhi soyi nahin hogi, iss liye ke wo iss waqt tak kaam raha the aur Ruhi sunein aur baahar aakar ussko dekhe….. magar wo to sapnon mein Abhi ko seeti bajaate hue dekh rahi hogi uss waqt.
Subha ke 1 baje Abhi aur team ko ek car ghar wapas chorrne gaya, car ko Mehboob ne rent kiya tha.
Subha 3 baje tak Abhi ne sab kuch likha apne diary mein aur last line ko bold mein yeh likh kkar diary ko band kiya,
“TOMORROW IS THE LAST DAY I WILL WORK THERE. I HOPE TO COME BACK HERE TOMORROW AND WRITE THAT RUHI’S PARENTS ACCEPTED AND NOW RUHI IS MINE.”
To be continued….
very nice gong Casi bro
interesting update and still the pains of Abhi is growing I can see...
wen Abhi wanted to talk to her father why did Ruhi and her sister stop Abhi?
I believe it was the right time to talk to him before anyone tells him anything
Abhi is right to think that later her mother or anyone else can talk negatively of the relationship between Abhi and Ruhi
The moment Ruhi was not there and Abhi prayed to the sky to get her back and the car h=got in the yard was very beautifully told. I liked that bit very much it was poetic!
Anr the moment Ruhi mother's told Abhi the answer was no was torturing for Abhi.... every time that they are back from her grandmothers there is something negative for Abhi, Abhi is right to think that from her grandmother's place that there is maybe a remote control playing with Ruhi and Abhi
the last lines in bold by Abhi is too good.
superb update bro waiting to see how he ends work there one day remains!!
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Hmmmm.........Update 31 The Distance….
Ek haffta aise hi guzra, Saturday ko Ruhi apni tuition ke liye jaati, aur uss waqt sabhi ke nazrein Ruhi par hoti kyunke wo ek apsara lagti thi jab bhi saj sanwar kar nikalti thi. Had se ziada khubsurat dikhti thi, ussko paane ke liye koyi bhi diwana hota uss roop mein Ruhi ko koyi bhi dekhta to.
Sunil ne Abhi ko chedhte hue kaha,
“Abhi dekh, tujhko jalan nahin hoti jab Ruhi eise ban than ke nikalti hai to? Zara dekh to sab ki nazar ussi par tike hue hein, dekh dekh sabko….. ab pata nahin jahan jaa rahi hai wahan uss sheher ke kitne log abhi usske piche padenge….”
Abhi ne buss muskuraate hue Sunil se kaha,
“yaar agar yeh kaam last phase par nahin hota to main ne soch liya tha ke ek Saturday ko main leave leta aur usske saath jata bus mein, aise mujhe pata chal jata ke wo kahan jaati hai sweing course ke liye.”
Sunil: “Isski kia zaroorat hai, usske pita ke aane ke baad usska haath to mang raha hai nah tu? Tab usske baad koyi nahin rokega tumko Ruhi ke saath kahin bhi jaane ke liye tab chale jana araam se!”
Abhi ne khush hote hue kaha,
“bhai issi liye to dhiraj rakh rakha hua hai aaj tak!”
Sunil ne kaha,
“yeh aise din hote hein jo tumhari life ke sabse haseen din honge Abhi, ek ladki ko shaadi se pehle court karna, usske ghar har hafte ko ana , usske liye chocolates vaghaira laana usske parents se milna, lunch ya dinner apne in-laws ke saath karna, jab tak shaadi ke din nah aajaaye… shaadi ke pehle wale life ke behtareen din hote hein wo mere bhai, khub jee bhar ke enjoy karna unn dinon ko!”
Abhi ne kaha,
“Sunil bhai aur in dinon ke baare mein kia khayal hai aap ka? Jab se yahan kaam shuru kiya hoon, jiss din se ussko dekha pehli baar, tabse aaj tak laga hua hon usske piche, ussko apna pyar dikhaya, apne pyar ko kabool karwaya, ussko bhi pyar hua hi hai nah? To mere liye yeh din bahot important hein bhai… maana ke jinn dinon ko aap keh rahe ho wo bhi utna hi zaroori hoga aur beshak unn dinon ka bhi intezaar hai mujhe ke sab official ho jaega tab baat aur hogi, jaise ke license mil jaega, aur abhi bina license ke chala raha hoon apni pyar ki gadi ko, ishk alag hi maza hai bhai… aur main hamesha aisa hi pyar chahta tha, ke khud kissi se pyar ho jaaye mujhe aur ussi ke saath sagaayi, phir shadi karun…… it’s a dream come true sunil bhai… magar abhi is dream ko true hone mein kuch time baaki hai“
Sunil ne tab kaha,
“Samajhta hoon bhai main bhi guzar chuka hoon nah iss phase se Ruhi ke sister ke saath…. Magar main kaamyaab nahin hua apne dream ko true karne mein…. Tum zaroor dream ko true karna bhai!”
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Ab dekhte hein 10 aakhri dinon ko jo Abhi ne guzara uss aangan mein. Kyunke har roz same chizein hote rahe to bahot repetition jaisa lagega aur boredom feel hone lagega, except last 10 dinon mein bade differences aaye….. phir Abhi ka wahan kaam khatam karne ke baad kitna kuch hua wo sab dekhna baaki hein, aur bahot kuch hua tha, bahot kuch.
To har subha Abhi ka wahan jana, Ruhi se milna, pyar karna, ghar ke piche wale hisse par apne kone mein jana kiss karna sab chalta raha. Uss aangan ke sabhi logon ka pata chalna, majority ko Abhi aur Ruhi ke pyar ko support karna sab bilkool sahi chalta raha.
Mahesh apne nani ke ghar se wapas agaya tha. Usski dosti Abhi ke saath mast tha aur ussko sab pata tha ke Ruhi aur Abhi ek dusre se pyar karte hein. Wo chota bhai tha to ussko koyi problem nahin thi balke Mahesh ne jaise Abhi ko apna brother-in-law maan liya tha unn dinon ko. Jab Ruhi aur Abhi ghar ke piche milte to Mahesh ko pata hota aur koyi uss taraf ata to wo oonche awaaz mein Ruhi aur Abhi ko bata deta tha, matlab Mahesh donon ko support karta tha.
10 din kaam end karne se pehle, malab 15th December ka din tha. Shaam ko ghar jaane se pehle jab Abhi Ruhi se mila to Ruhi ne pyar se abhi se kaha,
“kal main apne nani ke ghar jaungi mummy ke saath”
Abhi ko shock laga aur pucha ke usska kia hoga, to Ruhi ne kaha ke shaam ko wapas ajaegi. To Abhi ne pucha kitne baje ghar se niklegi jaane ko? Ruhi ne kaha subha ko, to Abhi ne kaha usske aane se pehle to hargiz nahin jana jab wo yahan aa jaaye tab ghar se nikalne ko. Ruhi ne kaha ke haan wo Abhi ka wait karegi jab ajaega tab ghar se niklegi apni mummy ke saath. Aur wohi hua…..
Ruhi apni maa ke saath apni nani ke ghar jaa rahi thi subha 8 baje. Abhi ne ussko goodmorning kaha, Ruhi ne nah Abhi ke taraf dekha nah reply kiya, na muskuraayi, sar jhukaaye aaguey badhti gayi. Abhi ko bahot embarrass feel hua. Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi ko dekha aur muskuraayi uss se. Din bhar Abhi sochta raha ke Ruhi ne kyun ajeeb behave kiya tha subha ko jaate waqt. Kehne ki zaroorat nahin ke wo kitni khubsurat dikh rahi thi naye llibaas mein aur kiss tarah se usski khubsurti nikhar kar aa rahi thi, upar se usski jaan lewa adaaein….
Aur din mein Reza ne Abhi se kaha ke Ruhi ki maa ne uss se kaha ke wo kabhi bhi Abhi ka Rishta Ruhi ke liye accept nahin karegi. Yeh baat ne Abhi ko din bhar bahut torture kiya.
Shaam 3 baje Abhi Ruhi ki raah dekhne laga, wo Ruhi ko bahot miss karne laga tha, ussko dekhna chahta tha, usski smile dekhna chahta tha, usski awaaz sunna chahta tha. khud se Abhi ne kaha, “OH MY GOD!!”
Shaam ko 3.30 baje jab Ruhi wapas aayi apne nani ke yahan se to usski rawayya Abhi ke taraf thoda different tha. Wo uss shaam ko Abhi se nahin mili aur Abhi wahan se ghar udaas gaya bina Ruhi se mile, bina kiss kiye jo Abhi ke liye ek pahaad ke ziada bhari wazan ki tarah tha usske seene par.
Raat ko apne diary mein Abhi ne likha ke kia usske nani ke yahan Abhi aur Ruhi ki baat hui aur unhon ne kahin inkaar to nahin kiya iss rishte ko? Aur Abhi ne yaad kiya ke wo Amit jisske baare mein pehle baat kiya gaya tha wo usski nani ke sheher ka hi rehne wala tha. To Abhi sochne laga ke kahin jab Ruhi wahan gayi to wo baat phir se nah chidh gayi ho Ruhi ki mummy aur Ruhi ke saath??!
Abhi ne yeh bhi yaad kiya ke jab Ruhi ne ussko apni virginity wali baat batayi thi tab Abhi ne yeh bhi pucha tha ke Amit wali baat jhoot thi to Ruhi ne kaha tha ke haan sab naatak tha. Magar Ruhi ki maa ne kaha tha ke baat sach thi ke Amit ne shadi ka proposal bheja hai Ruhi ke liye wo jab France se aega to Ruhi ko lekar jaega.
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Agle din Abhi kaam par pahuncha to Ruhi nahin dikhi har subha ki tarah, khidki ke paas nahin thi. Abhi ne apna geet seeti bajaate hue 6 baje se 7 baje tak whistle kiya, magar Ruhi nahin nikli, usski khidki band thi.
Jiss time ko wo terrace aur lounge mein jhadu deti thi wo bhi nahin kiya Ruhi ne, nazar aayi to 11 baje ke karib aur ulta lounge ke saare parde ko bandh rakha Ruhi ne jo kabhi nahin hota tha, sab open hote the aur andar Ruhi har roz nazar aati thi. Magar iss subha ko sab ulta ho raha tha….
Abhi par kia guzar raha tha yeh bayaan ke baahar tha. Suffocation, ghutan, saans lene mein takliff dil ki dhadkanon ka tez badhna, yeh sab ho raha tha Abhi ke saath aur kaam aur bhi ziada mushkil hote jaa raha tha finishing karne ki…..
Lunch time mein bhi Ruhi nahin mili Abhi se. khidki ke paas Abhi wait karta raha magar khidki band rakha Ruhi ne, aur usski maa bhi nahin dikh rahi thi aur nah Mahesh aya tha baahar. Lagta tha sab Abhi ko escape kar rahe the.
Aur shaam ko jab Abhi ne kitchen ke chaukath par dekha tab Ruhi ki ek jhalak dikhaayi diya Abhi ko. Ussne abhi abhi nahaya hua tha, usski baal khule aur bheege hue the jo nazar araha tha.
Jab Abhi washroom ja raha tha khud ko wash karne aur change karne ko to Ruhi kitchen ke stair par khadi Abhi ke taraf dekhte hue muskura rahi thi…… Aisa lag raha tha aaj pehli baar wala moment phir se recreate ho raha tha, lagta tha donon ajnabee hein aur aaj pehli baar ek dusre ko dekh rahe the.
Abhi ko thodi si Khushi hui ke kum se kum usske taraf Ruhi ne dekha to, muskuraayi to! Aur Abhi ne haath ke ishaare se pucha ke kia hua kyun nahin dikhi din bhar aur Ruhi ne bhi ishaare se kuch kaha jo Abhi nahin samjha…. To Abhi ne thoda karib jaate hue dobara kehne ko kaha Ruhi se, to Ruhi ne apne seene par apne haath ko rakha aur phir uss haath ko Abhi ke taraf kiya aur munh se bina awaaz ke kaha, “I LOVE YOU!” usske honton ke movements se padhna asaan tha ke 'I love You' hi pronounce kiya Ruhi ne!
Abhi ki Aankhen bhar aayi aur kaampte hue honth se pucha,
“kyun tadpa rahi ho? kyun milne nahin aayi aaj?!”
Ruhi ne haath ke ishaare se nah kiya.
Abhi paagal hota jaa raha tha ke kia keh rahi hai kyun nah keh rahi hai phir bi I love you keh rahi hai kia baat hai, kyun weisa behave kar rahi hai!!
Aabhi ka jaane ka time ho gaya tha to Ruhi ko khidki ke paas aane ko kaha magar Ruhi ne phir nah kaha.
To Abhi usske kitchen ke paas hi gaya, Ruhi muskura to rahi thi, magar ek baar baahar dekha phir apne kadam ko do kadam piche kar liya Ruhi ne, aisa lagta tha ke kissi se darr rahi hai, jais kissi ne ussko abhi se baat karne ke liye mana kiya hua hai, wo to baat karna chahti hai magar kissi ka darr tha ussko, to Abhi ne buss itna kaha,
“kamaal karti ho yaar, subha jab jaa rahi thi to mujhko dekha bhi nahin aur goodmorning ko reply bhi nahin kiya tumne kia yaar!”
Ruhi ne hassnte hue kaha,
“uff main kaise aap ke taraf dekhti, sabhi ke nazar mujh par the, sab mujhi ko dekh rahe the mujhe bahot embarrass feel ho rahi thi issi liye nahin dekha tha aap ko, aap bhi to mujhko hi dekh rahe the nah!..... Ab jao please main andar jaa rahi hoon bye!”
Abhi ko wapas jaana pada, dusra din tha bina mile wapas ghar gaya, magar Ruhi ki “I LOVE YOU “kehne wali baat ko soch kar jaise Abhi ko tassalli ho raha tha.
Ghar jaakar diary mein likha ke kia ab Ruhi ke nani walon ne Abhi aur Ruhi ki baat ko official karne ka faisla kar liya iss liye Ruhi ko Abhi se milne ya baat karne se mana kiya hai? Kia ab jab tak sagayi nahin hogi tab tak kia Ruhi Abhi se baat nahin karegi? Kia unn logon ka koyi rasm riwaj tha kia ke ladke ladki ko mangni se pehle nah milne diya jaaye nah baat karne diya jaaye? Kia yehi baat thi kia?! Abhi yeh sab apni diary mein likhte hue pagla raha tha!!
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Inn last dinon mein ek Saturday tha, 20th December. 19th ko Ruhi ke pita nahin aya, news mili ke wo 23rd ko araha hai flight postpone kiya gaya tha usska. To iss Saturday ko, subha ko jab Abhi wahan reach hua, to Ruhi ko kitchen mein dekha, apne dada ki armchair par apni yellow nightdress mein rest karti hui. 15th se 20th tak ek subha ko bhi Ruhi khidki ke paas nazar nahin aayi, usski khidki bandh rehti thi subha ko ab…. Inn 5 dinon mein Abhi ka dil jaise tukde tukde hue the Ruhi ki distance se… aakhir kyun wo doorie rakh rahi thi Abhi samajh nahin paa raha tha…
Khair iss subha ko jab Abhi ne Ruhi ko kitchen mein dekha to wo Abhi se muskuraayi mudh kar usse dekhte hue. Ajeeb baat yeh laga tha Abhi ko ke usski maa saare kitchen ke kaam kar rahi thi jabke Ruhi armchair par baithi hui thi, to Abhi ne socha shayad Ruhi ki tabiyat thik nahin hogi.
Din ke 10 baje kaam zoron se chal raha tha bus mein aur Abhi ne Ruhi ko lounge mein jhadu lagaate hue dekha, parde ko hattaya Ruhi ne aur bus ke andar Abhi ko dekha. Abhi iss intezaar mein tha ke Ruhi terrace par jhadu lagaane aaye to wo uss se baat karne ki koshish karega…. pichle 5 dinon ko to Ruhi ne ek bhi mauka nahin diya Abhi ko, saamne aayi hi nahin thi pata nahin kyun halaan ke jab aamne saamne hote tab Ruhi muskuraati thi Abhi se.
Aur darwaza khula aur Ruhi terrace par aayi jhadu maarne, to Abhi ne bus ke andar se Ruhi se pucha ishaaron se ke aaj wo apni tuition ko nahin jaegi. Ruhi ne bus ek smile diya Abhi ko, donon ek dusre ko bade pyar se dekh rahe the bina koyi baat kiye.
Usske baad Ruhi nazar aayi apni maa ke paas ek chhoti si chair par baithi jab usski maa kapde dho rahi thi. To ishaare se Abhi ne Ruhi se pucha kia wo bimaar hai? Ruhi nahin samjhi ke Abhi kia keh raha tha to pucha, “WHAT” to Abhi ne haath se wait karne ka ishara kiya aur apne notebook se ek page liya aur uss par likha:
“NOW I LOVE YOU MORE AND MORE THAN I EVER LOVED YOU BEFORE. IN MY LIFE I HAVE NEVER LOVED ANYONE AS MUCH AS I LOVE YOU” signed – Abhi.
Aur uss note ko lekar Abhi wahan gaya Ruhi ke paas jahan kapde dhoti hai hamesha, aur jaise wahan reach hua to Ruhi kuch fikarmand dikhne lagi aur kaha,
“Aap ko yahan nahin ana chahiye tha, dekho sab log idhar dekh rahe hein” magar yeh sab kehte hue Ruhi hanss rahi thi.
Abhi ussko wo note de raha tha magar Ruhi ne nahin liya aur uss kagaz ko khidki ke paas rakh dene ko kaha. Aur Abhi ko ussko ziada dekhne se mana kiya yeh kehte hue ke sab log dekhte hein donon ko. Abhi ne note ko usski khidki ke paas rakh diya aur wapas chala gaya bus ke andar.
Ab Abhi soch raha tha ke yeh sab kia naatak hai, itne dinon se khule aam donon milte aur baat karte the to ab kyun Ruhi kehne lagi ke log donon ko dekhte hein ussko ziada nahin dekhne ko kaha vaghaira vaghaira….
Abhi bus ke andar se wait karne laga ke kab Ruhi wo note padhegi, aur jab Ruhi ne note ko liya, ek nazar Abhi ko dekha bus ke andar aur read kiya….. read karne ke baad Ruhi ne Abhi ko bade pyar bhade nazron se khade hokar dekha, aur Abhi sirf uss se muskuraya. Phir turant Abhi whistle karne laga “pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna” Ruhi ke chehre mein seriously dekhte hue. Ruhi ne note ko dobara padha phir se Abhi ko dekha aur kaha, “mujhko aise mat dekha kijiye please….” Magar Abhi ruka nahin balke fix dekhta raha Ruhi ke chehre mein, to Ruhi hanss padi aur uss note ko lekar ghar ke andar bhaag gayi.
Ruhi ne aur ek baat phir se kaha tha Abhi ko jiss waqt wo note ussko dene gaya tha, kaha tha, “ke haan kitne cigarette pee rahe ho aap sab dekh rahi hoon main” aur Abhi ne ussko jawaab diya ke “buss condition wala din to aane do sab rok dunga wada hai mera.”
Aur Abhi ko thoda ghussa aane laga tha ke kyun ab Ruhi uss se bhaag rahi thi, ab kia ho gaya tha ke logon ki parwah karne lagi thi, itne dinon se to sab khulam khula ho raha tha…. kyun ab Ruhi logon ke saamne Abhi se baat nahin karna chahti thi iss se Abhi ko takliff hone laga tha, ussko baaki mauka hi kahan milega Ruhi se milne aur baat karne ki agar sabke saamne nahin kiya to? Ab jab kuch din reh gaye the kaam ko end karne ke liye to change karna mushkil tha Abhi ke liye, balke ab to Abhi aur bhi ziada Ruhi se baat karna aur milna chahta tha…. Abhi ko bilkool achcha nahin lag raha tha jaise sab kuch hone laga tha ab. Bahut badlaav agaya tha Ruhi ki rawaiye mein…. Abhi ko yeh sab bahot disturb karne laga tha, ussko chain nahin tha, pareshan rehta tha…. usska dimaagh kaam nahin kar raha tha ke ab kaise Ruhi se contact kare.
Shaam ko phone aya S.Arabia se Ruhi ki maa gayi phone lene, tab Ruhi terrace par khadi usski wait kar rahi thi Abhi ko dekhte hue. To Abhi ne uss se pucha ke kia uss note ka koyi reply nahin degi to Ruhi ne sirf nah mein sar hillayi muskuraate hue. Abhi ko ghussa aya. Ruhi Abhi ke kaafi paas aakar khadi hui jahan Abhi kaam kar raha tha. yeh sab chhoti chhoti chizein Abhi ghaur se notice karta tha aur raat ko apne diary mein sab likhta tha. kyun Ruhi sabke saamne ab Abhi se baat karne se inkaar kar rahi thi phir bhi kyun Abhi ke itna karib aakar khadi ho rahi thi yeh Abhi ke samajh mein nahin araha tha.
Usski maa phone par baat karke agayi thi aur kaha ke 23rd ko Ruhi ke pita ajaega. Ab Ruhi aur usski maa donon Abhi ke bilkool paas khade the, to iss baar Abhi jaan bujh kar wahan se hatt gaya aur bus ke dusre hisse par chala gaya Ruhi se door. Abhi thoda naraaz tha uss waqt kyunke Ruhi ne jiss tarah se inkaar kiya tha ussko note ki reply dene ke liye, uss se Abhi ko ghussa aya tha. To jab Abhi door chala gaya Ruhi se, uss waqt Ruhi Abhi ko ghurr rahi thi, shayad Ruhi samajh gayi thi ke Abhi uss se naraz hai, to Ruhi Abhi ke ghusse ko shayad dekhna chahti thi… Ab Abhi ko ghussa iss liye bhi araha tha kyunke Saturday tha aur shaam ke 4 baj gaye the phir bhi kaam jaari tha…. aur kaam complicated stage par tha, Abhi nervous usski vajah se bhi ho raha tha upar se Ruhi ki berukhi….
4.30 ko Abhi saare tools ko rakhne gaya washroom mein aur khud ko wash karne gaya to Ruhi ussko ghurre jaa rahi thi, Ruhi ko pata tha ke Abhi ghussa hai. Ruhi ne kabhi bhi Abhi ko uss se ghussa hote nahin dekha tha, yeh pehli baar tha, to Ruhi Abhi ko ghaur se dekh rahi thi, Abhi ko pata tha ke Ruhi ki nazrein ussi par tikke hue the….
Phir jaane ka waqt hua to Abhi ne Ruhi ko apni kitchen mein bartan dhote hue dekha aur ishaare se pucha,
“TV par film arahi hai you are not watching?”
To Ruhi ne unn bartanon ko dikhaaya Abhi ko. Matlab saaf thi ke usskko bartan dhona hai to kaise film dekhegi, sab ishare se baatein ho rahe the, Abhi ne Ruhi se kaha ke jab wo jaane lage to wo yahin khadi rahe stairs par, ke achanak Rahima aayi aur dekha ke Abhi ishaare se kissi se baat kar rahi hai, wo muskuraayi, aur jab udhar se Ruhi ne Rahima ko dekha to aur zor se hanssne lagi….. iss liye ke Abhi aur Ruhi ki chorri chorri baatein karna pakri gayi thi Rahima se….
Jab abhi tayaar hokar nikla to Ruhi ab kitchen mein nahin thi, Abhi samajh gaya ke wo TV dekhne chali gayi, to Abhi ne khud se kaha thodi der mera wait nahin kar sakti thi!
Abhi jaane laga to Ruhi ke khidki ke taraf dekha to usski maa ko dekha khidki ke paas, Abhi ne uss se pucha ke Ruhi kidhar hai to maa ne jawaab diya “TELEVISON” phir Abhi ne usse Ruhi ko bulaane ko kaha. To Ruhi ki maa gayi Ruhi ko bulaane aur Abhi ko khidki ke paas aane ko kaha tab tak…. Magar jab Abhi khidki ke paas reach hua khush hote hue ke aakhir ab Ruhi se kuch baatein kar paega, magar maa akeli lauti andar se aur kaha,
“Nahin Ruhi nahin aegi kyunke usska Mehbob chacha baahar hai wo Ruhi par chillaega, sorry Abhi!”
Abhi ko phir bina Ruhi se mile wapas jaan pada. Bahot ghusa aya Abhi ko. Soch raha tha kia ho raha hai yeh sab ab? Kyun Mehboob bahar hai to nahin baat karegi Abhi se? Itne dinon se to baat karti aayi hai halaan ke Mehboob saamne hota tha, shuru mein mana kiya tha magar phir baat karti thi Mehboob ke hote hue to ab kia ho gaya hai….. yeh sab sochte Abhi apna sheher reach hua aur sheher mein chaaron taraf Christmass aur New year ka mahaul bana hua tha, saare shops mein tarah tarah se rang birange chizein maujood the, bahot saare bhid the charon taraf…. Saal ke ant ka mahaul tha chaaron taraf…. Aur Aise mein jab Abhi baaki ladkon ko ladkiyon ke saath dekh raha tha to sochta ke kyun iss waqt wo Ruhi ka haath thaame sheher mein ek shop se dusre shop mein ghum nahin sakta, kab usski baari aegi?
To be continued… (3700 words)
Very good update.......
Sunil ki baat sahi hai.....
Us situation ka.....us time period ka alag hee maza hota hai....ak azib see excitement hoti hai....use dekhne ka....us se baat karne ka.....use court karne ka dil karta hai.....ak alag hee enjoyment hoti hai.......
Lekin Wo sab tab hota hai jab ki sab kuch set hota hai......jaise ki ladka ladki ke family members raazi ho.....OR dono ki engagement ya shaadi fix ho jaati hai ya hone waali hoti hai.....
Lekin abhi ke saath aisa nahi hai......uske case me to Abhi ka Rishta bas ak taraf se confirm hua hai.....OR wo hai....
Abhi ki side se......
Ruhi ki side effects rishta to dur Abhi to ye hee confirm nahi hai ki wo khud kya chahti hai.....
Usne iss relation ko complicate kar diya hai.....OR chahe wo relation ho ya kuch aur....complicated chije kharaab hee rahti hai......
To Abhi uss situation ko enjoy to kar nahi sakta.....OR jaisa aaj ke update me Ruhi or uski maa ka behaviour dikhaya hai us se to mujhe lagta nahi ki aage jo kuch hoga wo abhi ke liye jyada favourable hoga.....
Ab baat kare abhi ke reply ki.....to waise to Abhi ne reply to ak dum sagi diya.....lekin jaisa ki abhi ne kaha ki uss situation nahi lekin dusri chije....like.......
Jo bhi Abhi ke saath 1st day se ab tak hui hai......
Wo unhe enjoy kar raha hai.....lekin kya waakai......reallyy...??...
Abhi ke saath aisa hota aaya hai.....ki wo khud apne hee mind me situations jo create karta aaya hai.....
OR phir Ruhi jo bhi kare.....ya use mock ya ishaare kare......
Un sab signs ko wo apne mind me banaayi situation se job kar.....khud ko satisfy karta aaya hai......OR inn sab chijo ko hee enjoy karta aaya hai.....
Ab baat kare baaki update ki to......
Ruhi ka character kabhi bhi stable nahi raha hai......pahle bhi kabhi pass aana....kabhi dur jana......
Kabhi khud baat karna....kabhi bilkul hee ignore maar dena.....
To ye Ruhi ke liye koi Nayi baat nahi hai.....ha iska reason ye bhi ho sakta hai.....OR jaisa Abhi sochta hai ki.....
KI MAY BE USKI NAANI KE GHAR UN DONO KE RISHTE KI BAAT HUI HO....OR UNKE DWARA HEE RUHI SE ABHI SE THODA DISTANCE MAINTAIN KARNE KO KAHA GAYA HO.....JAISE KI NORMALLY SABHI GHARON ME LADKA LADKI KI SHAADI SE PAHLE HOTA HAI......
OR USKE ABHI KO ACCEPT KARNE YA NAA KARNE KI BAAT TO AATI HEE NAHI JABKI USKI MAA KHUD RAAZI HAI OR RUHI KO CONFIDENCE HAI KI WO APNE BAAP KO BHI MANA LEGI......
LEKIN.....LEKIN......jaisa ki maine pahle bhi kaha hai.....
Ye situation Abhi ki khud ki hee create ki hui hai.....apne mind mai......to aisa hone ke chances kam hai.....
Mere hisaab se Ruhi ka ye behaviour Abhi ko ignore karne ke liye nahi use baichen karne ke liye tha......
Jaise Ruhi ak jhalak dikhaayi are phir gaayab ho rahi hai uss hisaab se to mujhe aisa hee lag raha hai......
Baaki ye jo puri situation aapne banaayi hai wo sab aane waale updates ke liye hype create karne ke liye hai.....OR jo ki kaafi achchi tarah apna kaam bhi kar rahi hai.....
Dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai.....
Anyways
Very good update
Thanks
Update 36 Eve Of The Last Day
Abhi ne socha sirf pita ke lautne ki vajah se ro rahi hai ya Abhi ko bhi yaad kar rahi hai , abhi se juda hone ke ghum mein bhi ro rahi hai….. aur Abhi ne dekha Ruhi apne pita ke seene se lagi hui to thi magar kum se kum 7 baar Ruhi ki nazrein Abhi par gaye the uss dauraan….
Ab aaguey….
Ruhi ka rona jaise rona nahin tha, Abhi ne socha ke agar wo Ruhi ki jagah hota to itna rota apne pita se 3 saal baad milne par ke rukta hi nahin, aur Ruhi ki uss tarah se rone se Abhi ko lag gaya ke Ruhi uss se bahut kum emotional hai, Abhi ruhi se bahut ziada emotional aur sentimental tha Abhi ne khud se kaha.. magar phir Abhi ne yaad kiya ke kitna royi thi uss in Ruhi jab Abhi ne ussko baahon mein bhada tha….. aur abhi kuch der pehle jab Mehboob ne danta tha donon ko tab kitna royi thi fut fut kar Abhi ke saath… to aaj pita se milne ke baad kyun wo nahin royi? Haan shayad bahot ro chuki thi kuch der pehle Abhi ke saath aur wapas ghar men bhag gayi to jaakar khub royi hogi, saare ansoo sukh gaye honge….
Aur thodi der baad jab Ruhi ke father ghar ke andar chala gaya to Abhi ne dekha ke Ruhi ussko dekh rahi hai terrace par khadi, usski badi behen usske saath thi. Abhi ne socha ab kaise usske paas khadi hai? Socha ke shaayad usski badi behen saath hai iss liye, Abhi ke paas aagayi hai…. Aur achanak Ruhi ki badi behen ne Abhi ko ishara kiya…. Abhi nahin samjha to pucha kia keh rahi hai to badi behen ne kaha ussko matlab Ruhi ko kuch kehna hai… Abhi bahot khush hua aur terrace par gaya puchne ke Ruhi kia keh rahi hai. Ruhi ne normal tarike se kaha,
“Aaj last din hai aap ka yahan ya kal phir ana hoga!”
Abhi ko ek baat yaad aayi aur kaha,
“kyun bala tal jaega agar mera ana end hua to?!”
Ruhi ne kaha,
“Aapne aaj tak uss baat ko dil se lagaya hua hai Abhi?”
Abhi ne ek gahri saans lete hue kaha,
“Tumhari kaun si baat ko main ne dil se nahin lagaya hai Ruhi? Kissi din tumko dikhaunga ya padhne ko dunga tab padh lena ke tumhare kiss kiss chiz ko main ne dil se lagaya hua hai”
Ruhi ki badi behen Abhi ko upar se niche dekh rahi thi bina muskurahat ke, bina kissi bhi feeling ya emotion ke, lagta tha wo samajhne ki koshish kar rahi hai ke Abhi sahi ladka hai ya nahin Ruhi ke liye. To Ruhi mudh kar apni badi behen ko dekhte hue uss se kaha,
“Dekha na di, aise hi baat karta hai, itna tez hai ke pucho mat, maa bhi innse kabhi nahin jeet sakti, he is too intelligent.”
To Abhi ne Ruhi se kaha,
“Achah thodi der mein tumhare papa se baat karne aunga, kaam end hone ke baad, wash kar lunga tab okay… tum sath dogi nah, kahin tumhare papa yeh nah samjhe ke mera pyar ek tarfa hai kaha tha nah main ne khat mein?!”
Ruhi pehle apni behen ko dekh kar muskuraayi, tab Abhi ko dekh kar hanssi, phir apne chehre par ek sikanjh late hue kaha,
“uff issi liye main puchne aayi ke aaj kaam end hoga ya nahin, no, Abhi mere papa se kuch nahin kehna hai, main nahin chahti ke aap uss se abhi kuch bhi kaho!”
Abhi puchne hi jaa raha tha ke kyun tab tak Ruhi ki badi behen ne Abhi se kaha,
“Wo abhi abhi aaye hein thake honge aur itni badi baat unn se kehna achah nahin lagega, kal aap baat kar lena!”
Abhi ne kaha,
“aur agar aaj kaam end ho gaya, to main kal sirf unn se milne ke liye aa sakta hoon nah?!”
Ruhi ne khud kaha,
“yes of course aap aa sakte ho kiss ne mana kiya aap ko?!”
Abhi ne turant kaha,
“YAAD RAKHUNGA ISS BAAT KO”
Ruhi ne hanss diye tab Abhi ne phir kaha,
“Ab agle 24 hours ke beech tumhare papa ke kaan bhare jaa sakte hein mere khilaaf, to agar ussko accept bhi karna hota tab na karega, aur agar abhi iss se pehle ke usse koyi kuch kahe, main seedha jaa kar baat kar lun to bahut behtar hoga mere khayal se…”
Ruhi ki badi behen ne kaha,
“aap ne kia ghalat kiya hai jo koyi aap ke khilaaf kuch kahega? Kia aap ne koyi ghalat kaam kiya hai? Nahin nah? To kaun kuch bhi keh sakta hai mere papa ko aap ke khilaaf?!”
Abhi ne kuch nahin kaha tab tak Tony ne Abhi ko help ke liye bulaya to ussko jaana pada aur donon andar chale gaye.
Magar Abhi ko sahi nahin lag raha tha ke kal tak baat ko roke, wo Ruhi ke father se issi waqt baat karna chahta tha, iss liye kuch der baad Ruhi ki maa dikhi to Abhi uss se puchne gaya aur kaha,
“main ab ata hoon Ruhi ke papa se baat karne aaun kia?!”
Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,
“Are hum log Ruhi ki nani ke yahan jaa rahe hein wo bimaar hai nah, Ruhi ke papa ussko dekhne jaa rahe hein abhi issi waqt.”
Raat 7.30 ko extention electric wire mein bulb lagaa kar kaam kar rahe the Abhi aur team. Sab samajh rahe the ke raat ke barah baje tak sab kaam end ho jayenge iss liye complete karna chahte the. Ye pehli baar tha ke itna der raat ko bhi kaam jaari tha bus mein. Aur Abhi ne dekha ke Ruhi ka baap aur baaki ke log jaa rahe hein usske nani ke ghar car mein. Ruhi bhi jaa rahi thi. Ussne ek nayi dress pehni thi jissko aaj pehli baar Abhi dekh raha tha, iss se pehle Ruhi ne kabhi nahin pehni thi wo dress. Kamaal ki khubsurat dikh rahi thi, kayamat lag rahi thi aur Abhi paagal hone laga tha ussko uss tarah dekh kar…. Ruhi ne jaate jaate kayi baar Abhi ke taraf dekha, varna ussko pata tha shayad ke Abhi baad mein kehta ke tumne jaate hue mujhko ek nazar bhi nahin dekha. Abhi bhi ussi ko ghurre jaa raha tha, phir zor se Abhi “pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna” whistle karne laga.
Phir bus ke andar Manoj paint kar raha tha chhote chhote jagahon par ek paint brush se. Sunil ne ussko wo karne ko kaha tha, jiss jiss jagah par air holes jo ceilings mein hota hai, Abhi fix kar raha tha, sabhi unn jagahon ke niche Manoj paint kar raha tha, iss liye Manoj aur Abhi ek saath kaam kar rahe the. Itni jaldi thi sab kuch finish karne ke liye family ke saare log help kar rahe the…To Abhi ne Manoj se pucha,
“tum apne nani ko dekhne nahin gaye?”
Manoj ne muskuraate hue kaha,
“nahin main nahin gaya, meri maa, papa aur behen gaye…”
Jab ‘behen’ word kaha Manoj ne to hansste hue Abhi ke chehre mein dekha tab kaha, “Ruhi gayi hai saath”
Abhi ne muskurate hue socha,
“saale ko pata hai ke main Ruhi ko chahta hoon issi liye hanss kar Ruhi ka naam alag se liya behen kehne ke baad”
Tab Abhi ne pucha,
“kaafi door gaye hein nah? bahut late wapas ayenge nah?”
Manoj ne phir hansste hue kaha,
“nahin ziada late nahin ayenge, tum yahin honge, unn se mil paoge, weh log wapas ajayenge dekh lena…”
Abhi ko pakka yakeen ho gaya ke Manoj ko sab kuch pata hai Ruhi aur usske baare mein.
Aur Manoj ne yeh bhi kaha Abhi se,
“main ne baaki ke rolls develop karne ko de diya hai, kal photos mil jaenge wo tumko de dunga kal hi, okay, aur akhri ekaat pics jo lunga road par wo phir kabhi kissi tarah tum tak pahuncha dunga.”
Dinner Mehboob ke ghar kiya Abhi aur team ne. Aur raat ko kaam jaari raha bus mein. Abhi pray karne laga ke Ruhi wapas aajaye Abhi ke wapas jaane se pehle…. Raat ko aaj tak kabhi kaam nahin kiya tha uss aangan mein Abhi ne…. Aur mahaul kuch aisa tha ke Abhi ko wo raat yaad ane lagi jiss raat ko wo Ruhi ke ghar par ruka tha…. iss aangan mein iss bus ke piche kiss kiye the donon ne eisi hi raat ke andhere mein…. Wohi fiza thi, wohi khusbhoo thi baahar ke hawaaon mein, aur Abhi ko Ruhi ki baahon ki khushbhoo yaad aayi, usski jakar mein jo komalta tha wo yaad aya, kiss tarah uss raat ko Ruhi ne kapde change kiye the usske samne wo yaad aya Abhi ko aur wo tadapne laga Ruhi ke liye…..
Abhi Ruhi ko dekhna chahta tha, ussko baahon mein phir bharne ki chaah jagi Abhi ke andar, usska dil Ruhi ko yaad karne laga aur Abhi ne asmaan ke taraf sar utha kar kaha,
“Ey upar waale, ey zameen aasmaan banana wale, ey chand sitaare banaane wale, bhej de meri Ruhi ko mera paas, mera dil machalne laga hai ussko dekhne ke liye”
Duah turant kubool hui aur car ne aangan mein entry li, Ruhi car se utri apne parents ke saath. Raat ke 10.30 hue the. Car thik Abhi ke bagal mein ruki, aur jiss jagah Ruhi ko car se utarna tha wo thik Abhi ke side mein tha…. kyunke Andhera tha, kissi ko dikhta nahin to Abhi ne Ruhi ka haath pakar liya…. Ruhi chhuraane ki koshish kar rahi thi magar Abhi chorr nahin raha tha iss liye Ruhi ko khamosh wahi khada rehna pada varna koyi bhi dekh leta ke wo Abhi ke haath se apna haath chhura rahi hai, magar yeh sirf koyi 15 seconds tak hua kyunke tab tak usski maa bhi car se nikli aur Abhi ko Ruhi ka haath chorrna pada….
Assal mein Abhi ne socha tha sabke saamne Ruhi ko apne baahon mein kasske bhar lene ko, sabke saamne, Mehboob ke, usski maa ke, Ruhi ke pita ke, Manoj ke, Mahesh ke, Ruhi ki behen aur behnoy ke saamne Ruhi ko kaske apne bahon bharkar eylaan karne ko ke wo Ruhi se beinteha pyar karta hai aur aaj issi waqt usske pita se usska haath mangta hai shaadi ke liye…. Abhi ek vision jaise kar raha tha, jaise filmon mein flashback aate hai nah, weise Abhi khud uss scene ko apne khayaalon mein dekh raha tha uss waqt Ruhi ka haath chorrne ke baad.
Aur jab Ruhi ka haath chorr diya Abhi ne, tab tak usski maa nikli car se, Ruhi ne apni kalaayi massalte hue Abhi ko teerchi nazar se dekha aur ussko jeeb se chidhaate hue ghar ke taraf jaane lagi, aur Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi se kaha,
“Abhi itna late kaam kar rahe ho aaj? Finish nahin hua kia?”
Abhi ne jawaab diya,
“haan dekha nah raat ke 11 bajne ko hai aur kaam kar raha hoon aur pata nahin kaun aap ke kaan bhar rahe hein ke main nikkamma hoon… nahin finish nahin hua lagta hai kal bhi ana padega, aur kal pakka LAST day hoga iss bus mein kaam ki!!”
Abhi ko to bahot Khushi ho rahi tha ke ussko aur ana padega us aangan mein kaam karne ko kal bhi.
Ruhi ki maa ne terrace par rukte hue Abhi ko haath ke ishare se bulaya, wo gaya uss se baat karne aur bus ke andar se Manoj apni maa ko Abhi se baat karte hue dekh kar hanss raha tha, aur Ruhi lounge mein kadhi dekh rahi thi ab tak apne kalaayi ko massalte hue jahan Abhi ne zor se ussko pakra tha jab wo car se nikli thi to, aur Abhi ko ishaare se dikha rahi thi ke Abhi ke panje ka nishaan ban gaya hai Ruhi ki kalaayi par, Ruhi ne munh banaate hue apni kalaayi Abhi ko dikhaya aur jaise apne nazron se keh rahi thi, “dekho tumne mere kalaayi par nishaan bana diya apne panje ka, kitna zor ke pakra tha meri kalaayi ko!”
Aur Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi se kaha,
“Abhi mujhe afsos hai ke main tumko NAH kehti hoon ab Ruhi ke liye final word hai NO!”
Abhi ki awaaz nahin nikli…. Wo khamosh raha aur Ruhi ko dekhta raha lounge mein, full lights the Ruhi par, chamak rahi thi apni nayi dress mein, chehre par jaise ek noor thi Ruhi ke, aur Abhi uskso dekhte hue soch raaha tha ke kia yeh hoor, yeh pari meri nahin hogi? Aisa ho nahin sakta, kal to isske papa se main baat karke hi rahunga chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye.”
Kaam jaari raha raat ke 00.30 tak. Abhi raat ko bhi Ruhi ke ghar ke taraf dekh raha tha, aur apne gaane ki tune ki seeti baja raha tha, iss umeed se ke Ruhi soyi nahin hogi, iss liye ke wo iss waqt tak kaam raha the aur Ruhi sunein aur baahar aakar ussko dekhe….. magar wo to sapnon mein Abhi ko seeti bajaate hue dekh rahi hogi uss waqt.
Subha ke 1 baje Abhi aur team ko ek car ghar wapas chorrne gaya, car ko Mehboob ne rent kiya tha.
Subha 3 baje tak Abhi ne sab kuch likha apne diary mein aur last line ko bold mein yeh likh kkar diary ko band kiya,
“TOMORROW IS THE LAST DAY I WILL WORK THERE. I HOPE TO COME BACK HERE TOMORROW AND WRITE THAT RUHI’S PARENTS ACCEPTED AND NOW RUHI IS MINE.”
To be continued….
I hv personally gone through such separation in my life and I can relate to what Abhi is going through.
Those painful moments are very tough and hard to bear really.
Very nicely written and narrated bro.
Asif khan
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