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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery
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Bhai ek dam katayi jordar or dhamakedar update diya ha bhai
1. Idhar shreya ke mata pita to bhai veer ko shreya ke liye pasand kar bethe han is bat se anbhigya ki veer to nidhi se pyar karta ha lekin yah future kisne dekha ha waise 99 percent to future sas sasur hi han veer ke chahe aise ya chahe waise ya fir dono taraf se baki 1 percent pata nahi kya ho jaye aage kyonki kal kisne dekha ha hoga to wahi jo werefolf sir ne soch rakha ha
2. Idhar ye jai wahi ha jisne trisha ko jankari di thi slogan ke case ki jisse ki trisha madam hath dhoker balhar ke pichhe padi thi waise to wo uska kuchh bigad nahi payi lekin jisne bhi ye karwaya tha jai ke dwara uska maksad to kamyab ho gaya balhaar ko veer se dur karne ka jisse ki wo veer ke uper dhyan na de paye or veer ke pariwarwalon ki security kam ho jaye natija aaj yarnia ka launch event barbad ho gaya sab plan karke kiya ha jisne bhi kiya ha
3. Lekin balhar veer per shak kar raha ha lekin shak to sidha demian per ha wo hi mask lagaker jai ko wo jankari de gaya tha shayd usne hi sari planing rachhi ha shayd
4. Ab aya nik wala scene bhai sach me maja aa gaya kya bend bajayi ha nik ki is bar divya ke samne hi dho dala use sala kuchh bhi kaho maja aa gaya is scene ko dekhker wo to divya bich me aa gayi na to aaj to sara mamla idhar hi dafan kar dena tha veer ne lekin lagta ha divya legaly nik se nipatna chahti ha isliye usne roka veer ko kher hame to intejar ha ki divya kab is nik ke changul se ajad hogi
5. Ab aise hi veer us susri ke gaurav ki band baja de jisne suhana ko barbad kiya tha waise to veer ne niharika ke dwara to gaurav ki company ko barbad karne ka plan to racha hi hua ha lekin jaise nik ko suta tha usse kahin jyada gaurav ki sutayi honi chahiye jisse suhana bhi uske changul se ajad ho jaye or uski or veer ki story track per aa jaye
6. [System ke baare me kisi ko nahi pata chalna chahiye, Master. *mutters* At least for now...!!]
Ab ye pari ke bol matlab kuchh to khichdi pak rahi ha pari ke darmiyan bhi jo wo samne nahi laa rahi kuchh to aisa ha wo jo veer se chhipa rahi ha iska to yahi matlab hua ki abhi nahi to bad me to pata chal hi jayega system ke bare me logon ko kabhi kabhi to lagta ha ki last me aker pari betrey na kar de veer ko iski baton se kabhi kabhi aisa lagta ha
7. Sonia ko kuchh to ahsas hua hoga kaera ki mojudgi se ki veer kitna important ha or kitna age badh sakta ha kyonki kaera idhar ayi ha to matlab ki kuchh to bat hogi na usme ye bas friendly to nahi kuchh or ha jo sonia samajh nahi paa rahi shayd age samajh jaye
8. Idhar kaera ko bilkul sahi salah di ha julia ne ki ki usko approach karna chahiye veer ko na ki veer uske pichhe aye aisa sochker bethe to ho gaya kalyan aise to veer hath nahi ayega veer uske kyonki already bahut lambi line lagi hui ha or sabhi ne apna sampurn sahyog de rakha ha veer ke prati to ye veer ko pane ki battle bahut tuff hone wali ha sabke liye sabse jyada tuff to veer ke liye kyonki aisa koi bhi nahi ha jisne apna pyar sabit na kiya ho
9. Fir aya sabse sad scene yarnia ka launch event ka tabah hona jo pichhle do tin updates se sab khush the sabki khushi ko ek hi bar me tabah kar diya rajat or dexter ne bechare veer ke pariwar wale kitne khush the sab kitna dil se tayaar kiya tha unhone sare emotions jhonk diye the unhone is event me ki jisne un sabke liye itna sab kiya ha wo is bar uske liye ye launch event grand banayenge lekin ant me sab tahas nahas sabse jyada to lagta ha tej ka dil tutega ki wo badi behen hote hue bhi apne chhote bhai ke dwara di gayi jimmedari sambhal nahi payi bhale hi veer ko us event se jyada sabki safety ki parwah ho kyonki uske liye event se jyada pariwar mayne rakhta ha lekin tej lagta ha dil per le legi bat
10. Idhar ava ne apni jimmedari bakhubi nibhayi or jo veer ne us per bharosa jataya tha us per khari to utri wo kyonki tej pe ane wali goli ko apne uper le gayi or tej kitni importance rakhti ha veer ke liye agar use kuchh ho jata to kya hota veer ka ye ham sabhi jante han to isse ava ne veer ka bharosa bhi jit liya or bharosa hi nahi lagta ha premikaon ki list me chalang bhi mar di ha or top waliyon ke aspas aa gayi ha kaera ke as pas aisa lagta ha
11. Idhar lagta ha rinsu and team aa pahunchi ha jaise ki kavya ko bachaya kisi ne or dexter ko bhi nipta diya ava ke pahunchne se pehle or ava ko hhi rescue kar liya ab kavya ko bachane wala ya to groffano ho sakti ha ya rinshu jabki dexter ko to lagta ha erica ya groffano me se kisi ne tapkaya ha kyonki dead silence donon ke pas hi ha jisse dexter ko pata hi nahi pada ki kon uske pichhe aa gaya or usko tapka gaya lekin jyada chances erica ke han kyonki metality wali skil erica ke pas ha groffano ke pas nahin
12. Idhar last me veer ko dar ka ahsas hua ha wo itna to ju long se nahi dara hoga jitna juhi ke kidnap hone se dar gaya or udhar sidha pranjal ko thokne wala tha matlab ki veer ko vishwas ha ki pranjal jindagi me kabhi sahi kam nahi kar sakta waise to vishwas hame bhi nahi hua tha lekin kya karen pehli bar pranjal ne koi dhang ka kam kiya tha or madhuri bhi defend kar rahi thi use shayd madhuri ke prabhav se pranjal me change aa jaye
13. Idhar system ka ek or feature samne aya ki tracker phone ke dwara bhi lagaya ja sakta ha abhi bhi system ke bahut se feature jinka veer ko to kya pari ko bhi nahi pata shayd pata nahi age or kya kya dekhne lo mile lekin isse juhi ki location to pata pad gayi ye jane anjane me kiya gaya kam veer ke liye kisi vardan se kam sabit nahi hua is bar
14. And last me yeah finally veer aa pahuncha ha us psycho ke adde per or use bhi pata chal gaya ha ki veer aa gaya ha ab hoga dhamaal jiska sabse jyada intejar tha is mad scientist ka naam bhi reveal hoga or uska maksad bhi ab or proper frame me bhi dikhega bahut dinon se chipa hua tha or veer bhi lagta ha is bar to alag hi mood me ha jaise ki uska reaction ha kyonki is bar kisi ne uski family per najar dali ha or uski pyari juhi ko nuksan pahunchane ki jarurat ki ha or abhi bhi safe nahi hui ha juhi to veer full range mode me ha is bar to or jaise kag raha ha mujhe ye pagal doctor akela to nahi ha isne kuchh to tayaar kar rakha ha jo ab reveal hoga kher madad karne ke kiye renshu and team bhi aa sakte han but yeah fight tagdi wali honi chahiye
15. Lekin ek bat ha demian ne in sabko ek pawn ki tarah use kiya ha chahe rajat ho dexter ho ya adesh ho agar ise veer ki family ko harm hi pahunchana tah to ye khud bhi kar sakta tha kyonki veer har jagah mojud to nahi rah sakta na lekin lagta ha planning to kuchh or hi ha us X ki pata nahi veer ko usme aisa kya interest ha ki aisa tough situation create kar diya uske liye ye jo koi bhi ha isko veer se jarur kuchh chahiye ya fir uske system se kyonki ise veer ke bare me sab pata ha lekin veer ko kuchh nahi jisse ye suspence or jyada badhata ha
Waise sk bat mere dil me ayi ki kahin main villain wo na ho jise veer shur se janta ho or hum sab bhi or uski apperance se sabke rongte khade ho jayen
16. Lekin ek bat to kehna chahunga sir ji Har ek minute ko aise describe kiya ja raha ha ki usse anxiety level badhta ja raha ha ki pata nahi kya hoga age 31st ha ki khatm hone ka naam nahi ke raha aisa to konsa manhus din aa gaya veer ki jindagi me jo aisi situation dikha raha ha use sabse tuff time ha uske liye is bar or abhi bhi din baki ha 9: 15 pm hue han or 2 ghante or 45 minute baki han abhi bhi jo ki bahut important ha veer ke liye kyonki penalty hi wo chija ha jisne romanch 4 guna kar rakha ha
Agle update ki pratiksha rahegi sir ji
1. Idhar shreya ke mata pita to bhai veer ko shreya ke liye pasand kar bethe han is bat se anbhigya ki veer to nidhi se pyar karta ha lekin yah future kisne dekha ha waise 99 percent to future sas sasur hi han veer ke chahe aise ya chahe waise ya fir dono taraf se baki 1 percent pata nahi kya ho jaye aage kyonki kal kisne dekha ha hoga to wahi jo werefolf sir ne soch rakha ha
2. Idhar ye jai wahi ha jisne trisha ko jankari di thi slogan ke case ki jisse ki trisha madam hath dhoker balhar ke pichhe padi thi waise to wo uska kuchh bigad nahi payi lekin jisne bhi ye karwaya tha jai ke dwara uska maksad to kamyab ho gaya balhaar ko veer se dur karne ka jisse ki wo veer ke uper dhyan na de paye or veer ke pariwarwalon ki security kam ho jaye natija aaj yarnia ka launch event barbad ho gaya sab plan karke kiya ha jisne bhi kiya ha
3. Lekin balhar veer per shak kar raha ha lekin shak to sidha demian per ha wo hi mask lagaker jai ko wo jankari de gaya tha shayd usne hi sari planing rachhi ha shayd
4. Ab aya nik wala scene bhai sach me maja aa gaya kya bend bajayi ha nik ki is bar divya ke samne hi dho dala use sala kuchh bhi kaho maja aa gaya is scene ko dekhker wo to divya bich me aa gayi na to aaj to sara mamla idhar hi dafan kar dena tha veer ne lekin lagta ha divya legaly nik se nipatna chahti ha isliye usne roka veer ko kher hame to intejar ha ki divya kab is nik ke changul se ajad hogi
5. Ab aise hi veer us susri ke gaurav ki band baja de jisne suhana ko barbad kiya tha waise to veer ne niharika ke dwara to gaurav ki company ko barbad karne ka plan to racha hi hua ha lekin jaise nik ko suta tha usse kahin jyada gaurav ki sutayi honi chahiye jisse suhana bhi uske changul se ajad ho jaye or uski or veer ki story track per aa jaye
6. [System ke baare me kisi ko nahi pata chalna chahiye, Master. *mutters* At least for now...!!]
Ab ye pari ke bol matlab kuchh to khichdi pak rahi ha pari ke darmiyan bhi jo wo samne nahi laa rahi kuchh to aisa ha wo jo veer se chhipa rahi ha iska to yahi matlab hua ki abhi nahi to bad me to pata chal hi jayega system ke bare me logon ko kabhi kabhi to lagta ha ki last me aker pari betrey na kar de veer ko iski baton se kabhi kabhi aisa lagta ha
7. Sonia ko kuchh to ahsas hua hoga kaera ki mojudgi se ki veer kitna important ha or kitna age badh sakta ha kyonki kaera idhar ayi ha to matlab ki kuchh to bat hogi na usme ye bas friendly to nahi kuchh or ha jo sonia samajh nahi paa rahi shayd age samajh jaye
8. Idhar kaera ko bilkul sahi salah di ha julia ne ki ki usko approach karna chahiye veer ko na ki veer uske pichhe aye aisa sochker bethe to ho gaya kalyan aise to veer hath nahi ayega veer uske kyonki already bahut lambi line lagi hui ha or sabhi ne apna sampurn sahyog de rakha ha veer ke prati to ye veer ko pane ki battle bahut tuff hone wali ha sabke liye sabse jyada tuff to veer ke liye kyonki aisa koi bhi nahi ha jisne apna pyar sabit na kiya ho
9. Fir aya sabse sad scene yarnia ka launch event ka tabah hona jo pichhle do tin updates se sab khush the sabki khushi ko ek hi bar me tabah kar diya rajat or dexter ne bechare veer ke pariwar wale kitne khush the sab kitna dil se tayaar kiya tha unhone sare emotions jhonk diye the unhone is event me ki jisne un sabke liye itna sab kiya ha wo is bar uske liye ye launch event grand banayenge lekin ant me sab tahas nahas sabse jyada to lagta ha tej ka dil tutega ki wo badi behen hote hue bhi apne chhote bhai ke dwara di gayi jimmedari sambhal nahi payi bhale hi veer ko us event se jyada sabki safety ki parwah ho kyonki uske liye event se jyada pariwar mayne rakhta ha lekin tej lagta ha dil per le legi bat
10. Idhar ava ne apni jimmedari bakhubi nibhayi or jo veer ne us per bharosa jataya tha us per khari to utri wo kyonki tej pe ane wali goli ko apne uper le gayi or tej kitni importance rakhti ha veer ke liye agar use kuchh ho jata to kya hota veer ka ye ham sabhi jante han to isse ava ne veer ka bharosa bhi jit liya or bharosa hi nahi lagta ha premikaon ki list me chalang bhi mar di ha or top waliyon ke aspas aa gayi ha kaera ke as pas aisa lagta ha
11. Idhar lagta ha rinsu and team aa pahunchi ha jaise ki kavya ko bachaya kisi ne or dexter ko bhi nipta diya ava ke pahunchne se pehle or ava ko hhi rescue kar liya ab kavya ko bachane wala ya to groffano ho sakti ha ya rinshu jabki dexter ko to lagta ha erica ya groffano me se kisi ne tapkaya ha kyonki dead silence donon ke pas hi ha jisse dexter ko pata hi nahi pada ki kon uske pichhe aa gaya or usko tapka gaya lekin jyada chances erica ke han kyonki metality wali skil erica ke pas ha groffano ke pas nahin
12. Idhar last me veer ko dar ka ahsas hua ha wo itna to ju long se nahi dara hoga jitna juhi ke kidnap hone se dar gaya or udhar sidha pranjal ko thokne wala tha matlab ki veer ko vishwas ha ki pranjal jindagi me kabhi sahi kam nahi kar sakta waise to vishwas hame bhi nahi hua tha lekin kya karen pehli bar pranjal ne koi dhang ka kam kiya tha or madhuri bhi defend kar rahi thi use shayd madhuri ke prabhav se pranjal me change aa jaye
13. Idhar system ka ek or feature samne aya ki tracker phone ke dwara bhi lagaya ja sakta ha abhi bhi system ke bahut se feature jinka veer ko to kya pari ko bhi nahi pata shayd pata nahi age or kya kya dekhne lo mile lekin isse juhi ki location to pata pad gayi ye jane anjane me kiya gaya kam veer ke liye kisi vardan se kam sabit nahi hua is bar
14. And last me yeah finally veer aa pahuncha ha us psycho ke adde per or use bhi pata chal gaya ha ki veer aa gaya ha ab hoga dhamaal jiska sabse jyada intejar tha is mad scientist ka naam bhi reveal hoga or uska maksad bhi ab or proper frame me bhi dikhega bahut dinon se chipa hua tha or veer bhi lagta ha is bar to alag hi mood me ha jaise ki uska reaction ha kyonki is bar kisi ne uski family per najar dali ha or uski pyari juhi ko nuksan pahunchane ki jarurat ki ha or abhi bhi safe nahi hui ha juhi to veer full range mode me ha is bar to or jaise kag raha ha mujhe ye pagal doctor akela to nahi ha isne kuchh to tayaar kar rakha ha jo ab reveal hoga kher madad karne ke kiye renshu and team bhi aa sakte han but yeah fight tagdi wali honi chahiye
15. Lekin ek bat ha demian ne in sabko ek pawn ki tarah use kiya ha chahe rajat ho dexter ho ya adesh ho agar ise veer ki family ko harm hi pahunchana tah to ye khud bhi kar sakta tha kyonki veer har jagah mojud to nahi rah sakta na lekin lagta ha planning to kuchh or hi ha us X ki pata nahi veer ko usme aisa kya interest ha ki aisa tough situation create kar diya uske liye ye jo koi bhi ha isko veer se jarur kuchh chahiye ya fir uske system se kyonki ise veer ke bare me sab pata ha lekin veer ko kuchh nahi jisse ye suspence or jyada badhata ha
Waise sk bat mere dil me ayi ki kahin main villain wo na ho jise veer shur se janta ho or hum sab bhi or uski apperance se sabke rongte khade ho jayen
16. Lekin ek bat to kehna chahunga sir ji Har ek minute ko aise describe kiya ja raha ha ki usse anxiety level badhta ja raha ha ki pata nahi kya hoga age 31st ha ki khatm hone ka naam nahi ke raha aisa to konsa manhus din aa gaya veer ki jindagi me jo aisi situation dikha raha ha use sabse tuff time ha uske liye is bar or abhi bhi din baki ha 9: 15 pm hue han or 2 ghante or 45 minute baki han abhi bhi jo ki bahut important ha veer ke liye kyonki penalty hi wo chija ha jisne romanch 4 guna kar rakha ha
Agle update ki pratiksha rahegi sir ji
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kingkhankar
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Wonderful Update.
A lot of events are taking place simultaneously and what is going to be certain is that our uncle will surely rescue the cutie (hopefully in the month of Feb).
Valentine season is here and it is expected that the next episode should be Valentine day special!
A lot of events are taking place simultaneously and what is going to be certain is that our uncle will surely rescue the cutie (hopefully in the month of Feb).
Valentine season is here and it is expected that the next episode should be Valentine day special!
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Niyimat samay par...!Arey bhai koi khatam nahi ho rahi. Itna Darr kyu rahe ho?Chinta nahi karne ka... Complete hogi ye kahani aur bemisal dhang se hogi. Apne niyamit samay par...!!!
Par koi Samay bhi niyimat huwa hai.... Aisaaa kya!
Apne ko pata nhi chala.... Hum to bas flow k saath chal rhe....
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Readers Party Zindabaad...Kabhi baki stories pe nazar maar lia karo...Aapko pta chal jaega ki comments kam aa rhe h ya zyada... Itne pages to aur kisi story me nhi bharte ek update aane k baad...
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Deewangi ka dusra naam Rihanaa hey aaj pata chala!Readers Party Zindabaad...
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Great and thrilling update. vakai me Pandemonium Broke out.
Pehle toh jis tarah se Shreya tayyar huyi, uske chehre ki chamak aur chhipi huyi muskurahat ko dekh kar uske bhole-bhale maa-baap Veer me apna damad dekhne lage. Unko kya pata ki yahan Veer ke liye kitna kathin competition chal raha hai aur Veer to unki badi divorcee beti ko dil se chahta hai.
Idhar Balhaar ko apne hi ghar ke bhedi ka pata lag gaya aur usne kuch jyada hi dimaag laga liya, jo kismat se Veer ke hitt me ho gaya. Great story writing, bigadti sthiti ko kaise mod kar sambhala jaye, what creativity...
Udhar Nik babu pehle to apni hi dhun me akade huye the, phir bouncers ki dhulai dekh kar kuch kaampne lage. Pehli goli se Veer apni 'Probability Manupulation' se bach gaya aur dusri goli chalane ka mauka nahi diya. Weh to Divya ne rok diya nahi to juta aisi munh par chaap chhodta ki shayad bach bhi nahi paate. Ek baat acchi huyi, Tinkerbell ne theek samay par Veer ko warn kar diya nahi to 'Beowulf's Blessings' ki vajah se huyi laal aankhein Veer ka raaz khol sakti hain ki Veer me kuch toh aam aadmi se alag hai. Shayad System ki jaankari leak ho jati.
Hotel Prestige, yeh is update ka best part tha. VIPs, Celebrities, Influencers se bhare huye hotel ki bhavyata nirali thi. Aur jab vahan par Kaera, Suhana aur Sonia ki entry huyi, tab to maza aa gaya. Tejal, Bhumika aur Louis ki besabri aur phir pure program ko sambhalna bahut hi interesting tha. Har ek member ki bechaini padhne layak thi. Sab se acchi baat to tab huyi jab Tej ne apni jealousy ke baad bhi Suhana se program ko delay karne ki request ki aur Suhana ne usko turant maan bhi liya. Aakhir baat Veer ki thi. Sonia ne sabka dhyan apni taraf kerke bade hi aaram se program ko 15 minute delay karva diya. Phir Tej ne aur uske baad Louis ne morcha sambhal liya.
Sab Accha ja raha tha jab Rajat ne main hall per bomb fehk diya. Yahan security ka lapse tha. Ek sandhingn vyakti ko itne paas aane nahi dena tha. Udhar Balhaar ke ladke bhi theek samay par aa gaye aur Dhananjay ke aadmiyon se bhid gaye. Lekin sabse jyada nuksaan to Dexter ne kiya. Ab aage pata lagega ki Veer ke pariwar ka kaunse sadasya pehli goli se maara gaya hai, ya keval ghayal hua hai. Aur sab members ka bhagte huye jikra aaya hai, lekin Manohar party ka koi jikr nahi hua. Usi me se koi maara gaya hoga. Kahin Vivek to nahi hai.
Shayad Trisha ma'am ko kuch akal aa jaye ki jab apno par aa padti hai, to unko bachana sabse bada kartavya hota hai.
Ava ne apni jaan par khel kar Tej aur Kavya ko bacha liya aur phir Dexter ke peeche bhaagi. Par wahan to Dexter ka kalyan kisi aur ne kar diya. Lagta to hai ki weh Garofano hogi. Veer ne usase promise liya tha ki weh Yarnia ki marketing karegi. Toh usko bulaya bhi hoga. Dusra Damien bhi ho sakta hai. Jis tarah se Mr X ne Rebecca ke dwara Australian Girl (Captain) ko apni taraf karne ki koshish ki thi, ho sakta hai usi tarah se Veer aur Ava ko bhi apni taraf karne ki koshish kare. Pehle bhi weh Ava ko apni taraf karne ki koshish kar chuka hai, lekin tab weh usko majboor kar raha tha, Crimson ko bhi apni taraf karne ki koshish ki thi. Par chances Garofano ke hi jyada hain.
Juhi ko Tag laga diya tha, uski wajah se Veer turant hi us Pagal system holder ke paas pahunch gaya jisne Juhi aur Pihu ko kidnap kiya hua hai. Ab do baatein huyi hain,
<Uski aankhon se aasu unn komal gaalo se fisal ke nadi ki tarah beh rahe the. Jaise hi uski nazar Veer par padi, andar se jaise koi dorr toot gayi. Woh aage badhi, aur seedhe aake uski chhaati se takrayi, apni baaho ko uske sarr ke chaaro orr lapet li, aur itni kass kar lapeti ki Veer ki jagah agar koi aam insaan hota toh use dard mehsoos ho jaata.>
Pehli huyi hospital me, kis tarah se Nidhi Veer par bharosa karti hai, yeh in dono ko kareeb le aayega.
Dusri...
<?? : Well... My food got delivered already. Ahahahahahaha!!! The main dish has come-!!!>
Kya Pagal Doctor Veer ko expect kar raha tha... Kya weh Mr X se mila hua hai...
Ohhhh... mera message nahi ja raha tha, limit 7200. Tab original message ke header ko chhod kar sab delete kiya, tab gaya hai.
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