Fantasy PANDIT ..THE BLOOD HUNTER...(.ACTION THRILLER SUSPENSE)

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Meri new thread .....
Pandit...ye ek aisa nam hai....jis se mujhe mere dost mujhe bulate hai aur yhi nam mere story ke leader ka hai ..maine ise hero isliye nahi bola ...kyoki...villan mere liye hero se jyada matter krta hai ....are chodo is bakchodi ko....aate hai sidhe mudde par...to mudda yeh hai ki meri thread oar viewers nhi milte mujhe ...kyoki apun slow pace story likhta hai...jisme action kum hota tha...but av apun ne apna mind setup change kiya hai isme action ka aisa tadka milega ki kya kehne av kahoge ki apni tarif khud kar rha hu ...av aisa karunga nhi to tum logo ko btaunga kaise ki..story kaisi hai
..av chodo bhut rayta faila liya maine thode dair mai ek chota sa prologue deta hu phir agla update..aj rat se dunga...daily updates ..aate rahenge..aur agar koi chutiyapa nhi hua to ..regular bhi rahunga ..jav tak story complete na ho...
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:congrats: For starting new thread
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  • Hope this story will touch our hearts :heart:
Bahut bahut badhaiyan ki aap ek nayi kahani shuru kar rahe ho. Or iske liye Shubhkamnaye bhi meri taraf se.

Aasha hai ki hame daily update milenge aur ek behtareen kahani padhne ko milegi.

Keep going
We will wait for the first update
 

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Prologue
Sirf 19 saal ki umra ka tha Pandit ...jab us se pura..underworld kaapne lga tha....jav usne China ki intelligence agency ke andar ghuskar...mout ka wo kophnak khela tha...



Aur jav khel kar wapas aaya tha....to sabne use ek hi nam diya the blood hunter........


Agla update kuch hi dair mai
 
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Update 1


Pandit.....Pandit...Pandit.

Yeh ek aisa nam tha jo ek anaconda ki trah Chang ke pure dimag mai ghum rha tha..jo reh reh kar usko dus rha tha...Chang ke chehre par tension ki lakire bdi asani se dekhi ja sakti thi balki chang wo aadmi tha jise china mai log The killer ke nam se jante the..
.har thodi dair per uske aankho ke aage us 19saal ke lounde. Ke dwara machaya hua tabahi dikhayi de rha...tha....wo saitan ka sabse khoufnak rrop..badle ki aag mai dehkta Pandit.....Chang ke aankho ke aage Lucifer..ki laash ghoom gayi..
Lucifer torcher dene wala ek bhayanak habsi jallad...usko kitni khoufnak mout di thi .ki ache ache logo ki ruh bhi fna ho jaye. Jungli bhediye bhi dahal uthe...darinde aur rakshak bhi dar kar muh fer le...

Abhi tak Chang ko wo scene yad tha jav wo us kamre mai gya tha jisme Pandit ko kaid kar ke rakha gya tha...
Us waqt chang dar je kaamp gya tha jab usne kamre ke andar khoon ki barish dekhi thi...


Pure kamre mai khoon ki jaise badh aa gyi thi aur wakai mai khun ki barish ho bhi rahi thi...
Yeh dekh kar Chang ka khun sukh gya tha..lucifer chat par lage fan par ulta latka hua tha uske dono hath pair kate hue the..pura nanga sarir jispe hazaro cut the...kati hui jibh..aur sir ke bicho bich maans kat kar blade se likha hua PANDIT..

Pankha teji se ghoom rha tha...aur sath hi uspar ghum rha lucifer ki laash sarrir ke cuts aur sir per bne pandit rupi chot se khoon ki baarish ho rahi thai...
Chang ki aankho ke aage se sav ghum gya.. Lucifer ke bad 70 sainiko ki laashe ...kisi ka hath gayab tha to kisi ka pair ..
Pandit ke gale mai latki chote se chandi ke hanuman ji gade ka karishma
..vah bhi chang ko ache se yad tha...pandit ne us chote se gade se na jane kitne saniko ki aankhe fod dali thi...

Yad krte krte Chang ka khun khoul utha..dahak kar bhayank jasus ki aankhe..aag ke angaro ka rup lene lagi....mout ke saaye uski aankho mai najar aane lge...
Na jane uske kitne hi saathiyo ko Pandit ne bde hi khoufnak aur bhayav tarike se mout ke ghat utar diya tha...Chang badle ki aag mai bhadak rha tha..use Pandit se badla chahiye tha kisi bhi kimat par...


Par use sab kuch yad tha ki kaise Pandit ne unka purana head quarter ..dekhte dekhte pura headquarter ek pure khandhar mai tabdeel ho gya tha....itne bhyanak busfot hue the..jaise hazaro tanks ne ek sath attack kiya ho...aag ka wo manjar sayad hi kisi ne dekha tha...
Petrol par doudti aag jav tak barrod le pas pahucho rav tak kan ke parde hila dene wala bhayank bisfot ke sath pura headquarter ud gya tha...
Sab kuch jal kar rakh ho gya tha...Headquarter mai jitne bhi log the sav jalkar swaha ho gye the..
Kitne hi data ud gya tha..kitni machinery tabah ho gyi thi...pura headquater khandhar mai bdalne ke bad bhi..dhu dhu kar ke jal rha tha..

Sainiko ne Pandit ka picha bhi kiya tha..
Pandit bhagta hua ek cinema mall ke pas gayab ho gya tha...us cinema mall ke bathroom tak check oiye gye par wo rakshak unhe khi bhi dikhayi nhi diya. Hal mai dudha wha bhi koi nhi.
Use sari rat chini sainik pure Beijing mai dhudte rhe par Chinise govt ki gan markar unka itna adhik loss krane wala Pandit gayab tha......
 
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