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Update 10: Love - Hate

Ab tak:
Wo bole jaa rahi thi kuch na kuch aankhe bandh krke or uchalte hue or mai bas usko hi dekh rahaa tha kaise abhi thodi der pehle ankho mai itna dard or abhi jaise wo sab kuch bhul chuki thi or bas majaa le rahi thi abhi mai bhi usko niche se shot lagaa rahaa tha to or bhi bhisan yudh ho rahaa tha chut or lund k bich or thodi hi der mai wo fir jhadh gayi or mere upar let gayi abhi mera baaki tha to maine use palat k apne niche liya or tabadtod shot maarne lagaa..or thodi hi der me mai bhi past ho gayaa uski chut mai hi or uske upar let gayaa ab hum dono bas ek dusre ki baaho mai sukun se let gaye…


Aage:
Half an hour baad sanjana uthi or jab apni halat dekhi or paya k wo daksh ki chest pai soyi hai to pehle to sharmaa jaati hai fir uthti hai or apne kapde dhudhne lagti hai wo ast vyast pade the tshirt kahi or shorts kahi or ye dekh k jaise hi bed se utarne ko hoti hai to use dard hota hai to wo chikh padti jisse meri aankhe khulti hai..

Me: Kya hua?

Sanjana: Dard ho rahaa hai.

Me: Kahaa? Kese?

Sanjana: Khud dard dete ho aur puchte ho kahaa kaise.

Me: Shararat krte hue maine kab dard diya tumhe meri jaan…

Sanjana: Room ki halat dikhaate hue to ye kya koi bhut krne aaya tha…

Me: Ohhhh….Ye kab hua maine to sirf tumse pyaar kiya…

Sanjana(sharmaate hue): Usi pyaar ka karnama hai ye or muje dard ho rahaa hai alag se tumhaare pyaar k chkkar mai huhhh..thoda nakli gussa dikaate hue…

Me: To kya sirf maine kiya..to wo kon kar rahaa tha...sanjana ki nakal krte hue aaaahhhhh...jor se...or jorrr… seee fuck harder…

Sanjana: Ye sun k gandee kahi k...or maarne waali hoti hai mere shoulder par to mai uska haath pakad leta hu or usko apni taraf khich leta hu or mere aage god mai bitha leta hu dono k paanv lambe or wo mere aage bethi hui meri baaho mai fir wo chat pataati hai pr mere majbuti se usko pakadne pr wo apna sar meri chest pai rkh deti hai…

Me: Kon kiske pyaar k chakkar mai ye hua..ye mai uske kaan k paas sarghosi si awaaz mai bolta hu...jiski wajah se uske gale pai bhi meri saanso ka takraav ho rahaa tha...ye sun wo apni aankhe band kr leti pr jawaab nhi diya or fir maine pucha achaa bataao majaa aya ya nahi sacchi bataao or uske gaal pai kiss kr liya..sanjana bhi ab thoda relax hoke meri baaho mai beth gayi...or aage se hi piche meri aankho mai dekhte hue...Thank you for this pleasure my Love I have no words to describe this, I Love you a lot thodi aankho mai nami aa gyi thi sanjana k...Ye dekh k me thoda serious ho jata hu…

Me: I know tum mujse kitna pyaar krti ho kaash mai bhi utna kr pata tumhe but mai uske bina nhi reh sktaa wrnaa jitna pyaar tum mujhse krti ho utna to shayad hi koi is duniya mai mujse pyaar krtaa ho...mere liye tumne apna pyaar kurbaan kr diya to mai soch sktaa hu ki tum muje kitna pyaar krti ho...Wo bhale hi mujse ktni bhi nafrat krti ho par fir bhi she is my love of life...Ye kehk meri aankho mai bhi aansoo aa jaate…

Sanjana: Aansoo dekh k meri taraf mudkar meri aankho se aansoo saaf krte hue nhi my love nhi please mai tumhaare aankho mai aansoo nhi dekh skti or muje gale lagaati hui tum jitna muje pyaar krte ho utna kaafi hai itne pyaar se to mai apni das zindagi nikaal du or aaj jo tumne muje pyaar diya wo to meri life k sbse behtreen pal hai or humesha rahenge or mai kbhi bhi tumhaare pyaar k bich nhi aaungi ye maine pehle bhi kahaa hai...or mere lips pai chota sa kiss kr deti hai or gale lag jaati hai...or fir mere kaan mai bolti hai Ab jo andar aapne 6odha hai uska ilaaj kre wrnaa mai dhire dhire har mahine moti hoti jaaungi ye sun mere chehre pai thodi smile aati hai

Me: Tum fresh ho jaao mai tumhe davaayi deta hu...fir jab utarne waali hui to dard hua to fir maine use apne god mai uthaya to wo muje kiss krne lagi maine bhi uska pura saath diya baathroom tk pahochte or phir uske bathroom mai bathtub mai sula diya or garam paani chalu kr diya or usko kiss krke bahaar aa gayaa or fir sab room mai sahi krne lagaa.

Sanjana: Towel dona bahaar se aur mere kapde bhi ab thoda mai thik ho gayaa phir masti suji…

Me: Ye lo to usne apne haath bahaar ab sab ho gayaa tha to fir sharam aa rahi thi..usne haath mai towel pakdaa pr wo darwaza bandh bndh krti usse pehle mai khud darwaaza khol k andar chlaa jata hu..

Tum bathroom mai kyu aaye jaao bahaar muje fresh hona hai towel se apne aapko dhakte hue… na mai to nhi jaraha one kiss fir mai chalaa jaaunga...nhi na..haa naa...mai uski taraf bdhte hue or diwaar se takraa jaati hai or mai diwaal pai uske dono side haath rkhke khadaa ho jaata hu or uski aankhe bndh ho jaati hai use bhi malum tha k kiss liye bina to mai jaaunga nhi wo wait hi kr rahi thi or mai bas khade khade use dekh rahaa tha fir thodi der jab kuch nhi hua to usne apni aankhe kholi or maine bas uske hotho ek dum paas ho gayaa pehle hotho pai jib firaayi to uski aankhe fir bndh ho gayi to mai phir se use dekhne lagaa..fir kuch nhi hua to usne aankhe khol k aankho se pucha kya hua to maine sirf ek hotho se hotho ko chu k hataa diya aur bahaar jaane lagaa darwaaza kholta usse pehle sanjana ne muje gumaya or darwaaze pai tika k passionately kiss krne lagi or maine bhi usme pura saath diya or wo pure time meri aankho mai aankhe daalte hue hi kiss kr rahi thi jarraa bhi hum dono ki palke nhi jhuki or jab saanse bhaari hone tab jaake humaari kiss tooti or sanjana mere chest pai apna sar rkh k apni saanso ko durust krne lagi or mai uske sar ko bas sehla rahaa tha fir thodi der baad mujse door hoke chalo ab bahaar jaao mai taiyaar hoke aayi.. Mai bhi chupchaap bahaar aa gayaa…

Me: Lo ye dawaayi isse kha lo isse pair bhaari nhi hoga.

Sanjana: Hattt...gande jaao bahaar jaao mere room se or muje dhakaa dene lagi mai bhi bahaar nikalne lagaa

Me: Waah ab gandaa ho gayaa.. Tab to bade bol rhe the sanjana ki nakal krte hue….aaaaahhhhhhh….Fuck Harder...Fuck harder... sanjana muje kandhe pr thapki maarte hue ssshhhhh… or mai bhi haste hue drawing room mai chalaa jata hu.

Sanjana: Btw maine tumse pucha hi nhi tumhaare exams kaise gaye or aage kahaa konsi college mai jaane ka socha…

Me: Exams to achi gayi or College ka to Matlab Aisa Bilkul Immediate Nahi Soche Hein….Sochenge

Me: watch Mai time dekhte hue oh shit 4:00 baj gaye...ab muje jana hoga...hum milte kal shaamko terrace pai aaj to shayad tum na aa paao😉 warnaa sbko Kya jawaab dogi aise langdaake Kyu chal rahi ho...😀 yeh kehk Mai khadaa ho jata hu…

Sanjana: shhhh...chiiii…kandhe pr thpki maarte hue.

jaise hi Mai darwaza k paas pahochta hu

Sanjana: DK…

Me: palatte hue Kya hua?

Sanjana mere gale lagte hue thank you so much for everything I love you my love or ye keh mere hotho Pai chota kiss kr deti mai bhi return mai forehead Pai kiss krta hu or byeee...milte kal shaam ko

Me aaram se bina kisi ki nazar Mai aaye 8th floor ki sidhi chadte hue uppar jata hu or jese ninth floor cross krta to Mera dhyaan nhi rehta or takra jata hu kisise jisse saamne waale k haath mai Jo bhi hota hai wo gir jata hai or mai saamne waale ko or khud ko girne se bachaane k chakkar usko pakad leta hu to hum dono hi gir jaate hai Mai uske upar or wo mere niche fir jese hi uski aankho se meri aankhon ki mulakat hoti hai to mai bas usi mai kho jata hu..uski pehle to dard waali cheekh nikli fir jesi hi humaari nazare mili wo kuch na kuch bolti jaa rahi thi gusse Mai or mai bas uski aankho mai hi khoya hua that wo Kya bol rahi thi muje kuch samajh nhi aa rahaa tha..Mai hosh Mai tab aaya jab usne muje jor se dhakka mara or Mai side mai gir gayaa or fir jese hi hum dono khade hue uske muh se fool barasne lage..

Ladki(gusse Mai): How dare you to touch me..tumhaari himmat kese Hui muje haath lagaane ki..tum smajhte Kya ho apne aapko jab dekho tab mujse takra jaate ho dhyaan Kahaa rehta hai tumhara..

Me: Mai smile krte hue bas tumhpe hi mera sara dhyaan rehta hai...btw you are looking beautiful today..wo ladki jeans top Mai thi pink color ka top and sky blue color ki jeans..uppar se chehre pr jamaane bhar ka Noor puri society ki sbse khoobsurat ladki pr mere liye to pure universe mai sbse khubsoorat yahi hai ye hai is story ki lead heroine naam hai Charmi Shah in the same class with me 9th floor D block Mai rehti hai.

Father's Name: Chetan Shah
(Character: Simple bandaa hai Cosmetics & artificial jewellery ka business hai wo kehte hai na opposite attracts vesa hi character hai Inka or inki wife ka)

Mother's Name: Sharmili Shah (Character: naam se bilkul viprit modern, open minded, friendly, attitude to bhar bhar k love marriage hai Chetan k saath kaafi faisonable bhi hai jesi maa vesi hi beti hai to ye society ki sab se khubsoorat lady hai 36-24-36...inke saath Meri kaafi healthy flirting vghere hoti rehti hai)

Brother's Name: Ansh Shah (Character: Jyada role nhi hai but ye bande ki wajah se hi apni setting hogi iski sister se 10 yrs. ka hai 5th class Mai padhta hai)

Charmi: Shut-up bakwaas bndh Karo apni...you senseless mindless…

Me(Smile krte hue): Tum saamne ho to fir Kahaa sense Kahaa mind sab to freeze ho jata hai..btw tum gusse mai or bhi jyada cute lagti ho)

Charmi: Shut-up...just shuttt...up muh tod dungi tumhara..

Me: Hum to tumhaare liye jaan dene ko taiyaar hai or tum muh todne ki baat krte ho my jaan…

Charmi pair patakte hue kehtu hai disgusting fellow or mud k nikal jaati hai..

Me(piche se smile krtue hue): haaayeeee…(heart Pai haath rkhte hue) Mai Mar jaawaa tumhaari is adaa pai...dhire se palat...palat...palat...jese hi gali Mai mudne waali hoti hai H block Mai jaane k liye jahaa iski friend rehti hai (Payal) Jo meri bhi bachpan ki dost hai (pr abhi thodi misunderstanding ho gayi hai meri or uske bich to pichle 6-8 mahino se baat nhi hui) gusse Mai muje ek baar dekhti hai or fir Chali jaati hai..

Or me bs smile or Dil Mai thoda dard liye wahi khadaa rehta hu..or fir apna sir jhatak k gaate hue (Tera picha na Mai 6odna soniyo le chale chaaahe jail Mai...le chale chaaahe jail Mai...) Ghar ki taraf rawana ho jata hu.
beshkimti update bhai
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Update 11: Didi ka Gussa

Ab tak:
Or me bs smile or Dil Mai thoda dard lie wahi khadaa rehta hu..or fir apna sir jhatak k gaate hue (Tera picha na Mai 6odna soniyo le chale chaaahe jail Mai...le chale chaaahe jail Mai...) Ghar ki taraf rawana ho jata hu.

Aage:
Ab to bhagwaan hi bachaaye didi k kahar se kyunki pichle 5 ghante se mai bahaar tha or ek do phone bhi aaye the pr maine uthaya nahi tha mai apne aapko ready kr rahaa darwaza knock krne se pehle...knock...knock…

Jaise darwaza khula or muje dekhte hi didi ka pyaar mujhpe baras pada…
Didi(gusse mai): Kahaa tha tu...itni der se...or agar phone uthana nhi to rkhta kyu hai..aane de mummy ko aaj teri achi khabar leti hu..bahot bigad gayaa hai tu...aur aise bahot sa pyaar barsaa rahi thi or muje kuch bolne ka moka hi nhi de rahi thi...

Ladki: Are ise kuch bolne to de wo kabse bolne ki try kar rahaa hai or tu hai ki bolne hi ni de rahi…

Jaise hi ye awaaz suni maine awaaz ki taraf dekha to ek ladki khadi thi jo didi ki bachpan ki dost hai or meri bhi kaafi achi bonding hai inki saath.

Me(Shockingly smile dete hu): Are didi aap kab aayi shimla se...aap to shimla gye the na trip pai ye keh k mai unke gale lag jata hu (kuch aisa vesa mat smjhna just a friendly hug).

Ladki: Alag hote hue haa kal raat hi lauti hu…kesa hai tu or kaise exams vghere…

Me: Bdhiyaa...aapke saamne hu..and exams bi mst gye specially physics jo aapne important bataya tha usi mai se aaya tha to bahot hi mst gayaa..

Ladki: Achaa thats nice…

Me: Or kya laaye mere liye shimla se…

Ladki: Oh shitt...wo ghar pai padi hai tum dono k liye kuch laayi thi mai…

Me: koi baat nhi...vese kya laaye ho…

Ladki: wo to surprise hai...mai jab laaungi tab dekh lena…

Me: chalo aao idhar behte hai bahot kuch jaanna muje aapse aapki trip k baare mai

Idhar mai ye bhul gayaa tha k abhi didi gusse mai or hum log humaari baato mai lag gaye to isse didi aur gusse ho gayi..

Didi(gusse mai): haa karo tum log baate...or Prachi tum bhi to daksh se naraz thi tabhi to bahot bol rahi thi haa aane do aaj to mai bhi baat nhi krungi daksh se...Ab kya hua..

Prachi: Oh sorry...Isne itne pyaar se mujhe hug kiya to mai sab bhul gayi or meri taraf jhutha gussa dikhaate hue kahaa tha tu itni der, mai ek ghante se tera wait kr rahi thi or tu phone bhi nhi utha rahaa tha..

Me: Areee...palti...abhi to itne pyaar se mujse baate kr rah…..

Prachi: Shhhhh...muje kuch nahi sunna mai tujhse naraz hu or face banaake sofe pai beth jaati hai…

Mai didi ki taraf dekhta hu to didi huhhh..krke face banaake sofe pai beth jaati hai..

Me: Are mai mere dost k yahaa PC pai game khelne beth gaya tha headphone lagaa k to phone ki awaaz nhi sunaayi di sorry…

Prachi & Didi: Wo hume kuch nahi pataa…

Me: Achaa...sorry aage se aisa nahi hoga….

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Kuch sochte hue kitchen mai jata hu or freeze mai do chocolates padi thi wo utha leta hu or bahaar aa jata hu

Me: I am saying last time...I am sorry baba

Didi: last time ya first time we are forgiving you.

Me: pakki baat hai..thik hai to aaj jo mai silk laya tha wo khud hi kha leta hu..

Ye dono ki favourite chocolate hai kisiko share bhi na kare utni favourite chocolate hai...kitni baar to didi gusse ho jaati jab unki chocolate kha leta hu mai to..

Jab mai silk ka bola dono meri taraf dekhne lagi or mai ek ka wrapper khol rahaa tha…

Prachi or Didi dono ek dusre ki taraf dekhti or fir ek saath bolti hai Bhaiyu….(jab pyaar se bulana hota to dono aise hi bulati hai mujhe)sun na humne tujhe maaf kiya chocolate dena..

Me: pakki baat hai maaf kiya..

Prachi & Didi: Ha ha done done…

Ye sun k mai unko chocolates de deta hu or bolta hu mujhe bhi dena thodi

To dono chocolates wrap off krti hai to jo pieces k nishaan bane hue hote hai usme se ek piece deti hai dono..

Mai dono ki weird sa muh banaa k dekhta hu pr wo ab khaane lag jaati hai chocolates ja khaake khtm hota hai to meri taraf dekhti hai to maine abhi bhi do tukde haath mai pakde hue the..

Didi: Khaa lena kya hua..

Me(jhutta Naraz wala face banaate hue): Nahi khaani muje aapne to puri puri kha li or muje bas itni si or ab muhh fer k beth jata hu

Dono ek dusre ki taraf dekhti hai or didi kehti hai are bhaiyu sun na freeze mai vese bhi do padi mai ek to share kr hi skti hu tere liye..

Jaise hi didi ne ye bola mai unki taraf dekhne wala or man mai(lag gaye) muje to lagaa tha thodi der jhuti narazgi dikhaaunga to dono wk do baar sorry bolegi or mai maan jaaunga ye to pasa ulta pad gayaa…

Ab didi kitchen ki taraf jaati hai to mera heart beat fast ho jata hi lag gaye ab to mai khada hua or dhire se khisak liya wahaa se prachi kya dhyaan didi ki taraf tha to unko pataa nahi chalaa mai balconuy ka darwaza khol k apne room mai chalaa jata hu or jaise hi darwaza bndh krne ko hota udharr se jorrr se awaaz aati hai didi ki...Dakshhhhhh...Aaj to tu gayaa meri hi chocolate muje chipka di jaise hi didi bahaar aati hai to muje apne room k paas paati to mai bhi fatafat apna darwaza bndh kr letaa…

Didi: Youuu….ruk ja kahaa ja rahaa hai pr mai to gayaab darwaza bndh krke…

Prachi(Jor se haste hue).....hahahahah

Didi: Prachi ko haste hue dekhte hue..tu kya has rahi hai

Prachi thodi silent hoti hai phir waapis jorrr se hasne lag jaati hai…

Or didi gusse mere room k door pai knock..knock…

Didi: Bahaar nikal tu aaj to nhi chodungi tujhe…
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Update 12: Kalpana & Aarushi Bhabhi

Ab tak:
Didi: Youuu….ruk ja kahaa ja rahaa hai pr mai to gayaab darwaza bndh krke…

Prachi(Jor se haste hue).....hahahahah

Didi: Prachi ko haste hue dekhte hue..tu kya has rahi hai

Prachi thodi silent hoti hai phir waapis jorrr se hasne lag jaati hai…

Or didi gusse mere room k door pai knock..knock…

Didi: Bahaar nikal tu aaj to nhi chodungi tujhe…

Aage:
Didi thodi der knock krti rehati hai jab mai gate nahi kholta hu to fir thak haar kar prachi k paas beth jaati hai…

Prachi: Kya hua ho gayaa...Chal aa beth yahaa wo ab darwaza nahi kholne wala..

Prachi or Didi idhar udhar ki baate krte hue didi k room mai chale jaati hai

Or mai apne room thodi der rest krne lag jata hu..

Ek ghante sone k baad mai uth jata hu kyunki abhi abhi phone ki ring baji…

Me(Phone pai): Haa..hello kon hai..

Ladki: Kya kon hai number bhi save nahi kr rkha kya mera…

Me: Phone pai naam dekhte hue...Wo nind mai tha or turant phone uthaya to naam nhi dekha tha bhabhi..

Kalpana Bhabhi: Achaa achaa thik hai...utho ab or terrace pr aao mai wait kr rahi hu tumhara akele akele walk krne mai majaa nahi aa rahaa

Me: Haa wait aata hu..
Muh haath dhoke taiyaar hoke room se bahaar nikalta hu to kisi ko drawing room mai na paakar didi k room k side jata wahaa se awaaz aati prachi or didi ki..abhi dono pichli pyaari nok jhok bhul jaate hai..

Me: Darwaza khol ke dono ko mai terrace pr jaa rahaa hu tahelne koi aa rahaa hai.

Didi & Prachi: Nahi hum nhi aa rahe tum jaao..

Abhi terrace pr pahochta hu to saamne Kalapana ki saas bethi hui thi..

Me: Hello aunty kese ho aap..paanv mai kesa hai ab walking vghere kr rhe ho ya nahi..

Kalapana Saas: smile dete hue haa beta abhi thoda relax hai tbhi dekho aaj terrace pr aayi hu tahelne…

Me: to yahaa kyu bethe ho phir walk karo…

Kalapana Saas: Aadha ghante upar hua terrace pr aaye hue abhi chal hi rahi thi ab thak gayi hu to bethi hu...Tumhaari madam bhi aayi hai piche tahel rahi hai…

Me: Oh achaa.. Chalo mai bhi thoda tahelta hu madam se milke aata hu.. Jaise maine bataya tha terrace kaafi badaa hai or bich mai badi si paani ki tanki hai to terrace k aage k bhaag se piche koi dekh nhi skta agar koi tanki k diwaal k sahaare ho.

Me thodi right mai jaata hu to kalpana bhabhi dikhti hai...to mai bataa du k mai biology mai thoda week tha to mai bhabhi k yahaa padhne jata tha or kalapana bhabhi 1-10th tak k bacho ko padhaati bhi hai ghar pai hi to kalapana ki saas k saath thodi bahot bonding ho gayi thi to hi hello ho jaati hai kalpana ki saas k saath..Kalpana ki saas k saamne mai madam hi bolta hu pr akele mai ya kisi or k saamne mai bhabhi bulata hu..

Me: Hello Madam, aankh maarte hue Kese ho aap..

K Bhabhi: Bas achi hu tum kese ho.. Abhi thoda loudly bol rahe the taaki uski saas ko sunaayi de or thodi der hum dono bakchodi krte hue tahelte hai kalpana ki saas ko dikhaane k liye or thodi der baad jaise hum log tanki k side diwaal se thoda dur chalte hai to ab koi hume dekh nhi skta aage se maine kalpana bhabhi ko pakda or diwaal se lagaa diya or uske gale k dono side diwaal pai haath rakh khade ho jata hu or kalpana ki aankho mai dekhta hu or wo achanak hue humle se ghbraake aaju baaju dekhne lag jaati hai or jab meri taraf meri aankho mai dekhti hai…

To uske hotho se apne hotho ko jod leta hu or kiss krne lag jata hu pehle to kalapana chatpatati hai pr phir darr khatm krke dhire dhire mera saat dena shuru hi krti hai k mai kiss tod deta hu or vese hi naughty si smile dete hue uski aankho mai dekhta hu to pehle thoda apne saanson ko kaabu mai laiti hai or kehti hai….Ruk kyu gaye..

Me: Bas aise hi ho gayaa kahi tumhaari saas na aa jaaye idhar ye kehke mai mudne wala hota hu ki kalpana meri mundi pakad k apni side krti hai or kiss krne lag jaati mai to yahi chahta tha to ho gayi shuru humaari passionate kiss mai uske nichle hotho ko chus rahaa tha to wo mere uppar waale hotho ko, dono k bich jaise kiss sphradhaa(competition) ho vaise ek dusre ko kiss kr rahe the abhi mere dono haath uske kulhe pr lata hu or diwaar k sahaare dono kulho ko pakad k utha leta hu to wo abhi apne mere kamar se lapetkar kiss krne lag jaati hai or idhar mera ek haath uske kulhe ko pakadne vyast tha to dusra boobs dabaane mai vyast tha or idhar thodi der kiss chalti or mai apni jibh ko uske muh mai gusata hu to use wo lollypop ki tarah chusne lag jaati hai same mai bhi uske jibh k saath krta hu..aise hi hum dono kuch 10 mins se lage hue the or ab mai uske gale pai kiss krta hu or jibh firata hu dhire dhire niche aate hue uske thode se nange dikh rahe boobs ko chus rahaa hota hu to kabhi jibh firata hu aise humara oral kuch 15 mins chlta hai to udhar se awaaz aati hai kalpanaaa...ye awaaz uski saas ki hoti hai jo aage se bula rahi thi or idhar left side se do aankhe hume dekh rahi thi pr uski aankho gussa nahi tha uski aankho mai kahi halki si dabi hui hawas thi jo ki uski haatho ki movement bataa rahi thi jo usne apni yoni pai rakha hua tha…

Jaise hi ye awaaz sunte hai to hum pehale ek dusre ko dekhte or phir right mai dekhte hai ek dusre se alag ho jaate hai or apna huliya or dress thik krte hai…

Abhi hum chalte hai kuch der pahele jab maine kalapana ko diwaar pai tikaya tha ye jaanne ki ye aankhe kiski hai…

Gate se ek ladki terrace pr aati hai to saamne kalapana ki saas ko paati hai Kalpana or Ladki dono ek hi floor pai rehte hai to ache se jaante hai ek dusre ko..

Ladki: Kesi ho aunty aap abhi tabiyet kaisi hai aapki kuch dino se aay hi nahi paayi aapke ghar…

K Saas: Koyi baat nahi aarushi beta..mai thik hu bas thoda bahot paanv mai dard hai ab wo bhi ha jaayega jldi hi thik..

Aarushi: Aap akele uppar kaise aaye matlab koyi aaya nhi aapke saath

K Saas: Are nhi wo kalpana k sahaare aayi hu uppar thoda tahelne..wo piche tahel rahi hai uske ek student k saath...wo kya naam hai uska ha Daksh..

Mera naam sunke aarushi chehre pai thodi smile subah ka vakya yaad krke..

Aarushi: Ohhh...lekin Kalpana to 1-10th tk hi padhaati hai or jahaa tak mujhe pata Daksh itna chota nahi hai..

K Saas: Are wo koi vishay mai week hai jisme kalapana ne top kiya hai wo konsa vishay hai..thoda haklaate hue Bio…

Aarushi: achaa Biology..Oh ye to achi baat hai

Aarushi: Achaa mai milke aati hu kalpana se or usi k saath thoda tahel bhi leti hu

K Saas: Thik hai beta..

Or ye keh k aarushi humaari taraf aati hai..or mai idhar kalpana ko god mai uthata hu or jab aarushi left se aati hai usko aahate sunaayi deti hai to wo chupke se aati hai or jaise hi hume dekhti ek dusre mai duba hua wo achaanak chup jaati hai or hume dekhti hai or hum yahaa lage pade the ye soche bina ki hum kahaa hai..

Back to current time hum apne aapko thik krke right side se aage jaate hai jisse hum aarushi ko dekh nahi paate..

K Saas: Chal beta ab tere papaji ka dawayi ka time ho gayaa hai or unko kuch chahiye bhi hoga..aarushi ko humaare saath na dekhkar achaa wo aarushi kahaa gayi abhi piche aayi na tumse milne…

Ye sun k hum dono hi ek dusre se ghabhraayi hui nazar se dekhte hai or tabhi aarushi ki awaaz aati hai humaare saamne se kyunki wo left side se waapis idhar aayi thi..

Aarushi: Mai yahaa hu aunty or thoda ajib si nazar se humaari taraf dekhte hue...or idhar humari sitti pitti gul hum ye soch rahe the ki ye kalapan ki saas ko kuch keh ne de to achaa..

Aarushi: Wo mai wahaa piche ek podha hai na wahaa do phoolon ek dusre se lipte hue dekha(dhire se) to wahi dekhne rook gayi thi..

Idhar humaari halat or kharaab kalapana ki saas ki nazar aarushi ki taraf thi to hum aarushi jo ye bolk humaari taraf dekh rahi thi uske mundi naa mai hila k iltzaa kr rhe the please kuch mat bolo...or idhar kalapana ki to aankhe nam hone lagi kyunki kahi aarushi ne bataya diya uski saas ko to shaamat aa jaayegi meri bhi halat kuch aisi hi thi..

K Saas: Kya dekh rahi thi thik se sunaayi nahi diya…

Aarushi: Wo kuch nhi bas aise hi..

Kalpana & Me: Aankho se hi thanks or sorry kehte hue..

K Saas: Chal beta ab chalte hai..

Kalpana: Jaate hu ek baar piche aarushi ko dekhti hai or thank you kehk chali jaati pr darr uski aankho darr abhi bhi clear dekh sktaa tha mai..

Aarushi(Meri taraf thodi gusse mai dekhte hue): To kya chal rahaa tha ye sab.. Wo bhi ek shadi shuda ladki k saath jo tumse badi hai..chiii..tumse ye expected nahi tha mai to tumhe achaa shariff ladka smjhti thi pr ye...chiii…

Me: Mai bas mundi niche kiye sun rahaa tha kyunki kahi wo jo keh rahi thi wo sach bhi tha…

Aarushi: Kuch jawaab do abhi..wo to kalpana ka chehra dekh k mai uski saas kuch nahi kahaa..mai bol deti to usko kya kuch nahi sehna pdtaa iska koi idea hai ye to chalo mai thi pr agar uski saas hi aa jaati to..kya yahi tumhaari upbringing(parvarish) hai..

Parvarish sunk mere aankho mai thodi nami aa jaati hai or thoda gussa bhi.

Me: Mai thoda apne aapko sambhaalte hue...Aap jo keh rahi kahi na kahi wo sach bhi hai pr pura sach ye nahi hai…

Tabhi Aarushi ka phone bajtaa hai..kuch baat krke..

Aarushi: Abhi to mai jaa rahi hu pr muje jaanna hai ki sach kya hai jo tum or kalpana bhabhi aise sharam lihaaj chodh k aise open mai ye sab...jahaan tak mujhe pataa kalpana aisi ladki nahi hai or tum bhi nahi lage the pehli nazar mai..

Me: Please ye baat kisiko batana nahi, I promise tumhe puri baat bataaunga…

Aarushi: Thik hai or gusse mai niche chali jaati hai..
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Update 13: Yaari - Dosti

Ab tak:
Aarushi: Abhi to mai jaa rahi hu pr muje jaanna hai ki sach kya hai jo tum or kalpana bhabhi aise sharam lihaaj chodh k aise open mai ye sab...jahaan tak mujhe pataa kalpana aisi ladki nahi hai or tum bhi nahi lage the pehli nazar mai..

Me: Please ye baat kisiko batana nahi, I promise tumhe puri baat bataaunga…

Aarushi: Thik hai or gusse mai niche chali jaati hai..

Aage:

Aarushi ke jaane ke baad mai terrace par hi soch hi rahaa tha k kaise kya kahani banaya jaaye aarushi ko bataane k liye…or call aata hai phone pai naam dekhta hu to Bakchod likha hua hai ye mera dost hai bahot hi bakchodi krta hai…

Me(on call): ha kya hua…

Bakchod: kahaa hai bey bhopdike tu

Me: Upper terrace pr aaja..

To iss bakchod ka naam hai Ravi jo ki 7th Floor pr rehta hai same class mai...bachpan ka dost

Ravi: Upper akele akele kya kr rahaa hai bey..koi aaya nhi abhi tak..

Me: Aate hi honge…tu kahaa gayaa tha exam k baad se hi gayab tha..

Ravi: are wo papa k saath kaam se gayaa tha…tu kya kr rahaa tha bey itne din se muje pataa laga ki maximum log nhi the exam k baad se…

Me: Kuch nahi bey..bas idhar udhar bakchodi ki teri tarah or kya..

Itne mai mere dusre or 5 dost aate hai jinka naam kuch is tarah hai aise to kaafi badaa group hai humara jisme Didi, Prachi, Riddham, Ansh, Payal or bhi dost hai wo waqt aane pai pataa chalega pr ek dusre k close hum 9 bachpan k dost hai..jo school mai bhi saath mai hai..

Ravi - Bakchod, Irritating...na jyada body na kam medium bandaa hai

Aakash - Chashmis Shaant dev manus...pr jab kisi apne pai aaye to fod daalta hai saamne waale ko..cricket ka master blaster ye jam gayaa agar batting pai to koi maykalaal isko out nahi kr sktaa..

Eshan - Mastikhor, Prankster...height mai sab doston se chota hai but daring kaafi hai...athlete(sprinter) bhaagne mai maahir

Uday - Aggressive...Body banaa banaa k tagdaa ho gayaa..pure area mai iske aggressive nature k charche hai pr kuch galat hota dikhta tabhi iska para garam warna bahot chilled out bandaa hai, State Level Boxing Champion hai..

Rashi - Chasmis, Sweet, Cute, Sporting, Intelligent, ek hi sapna want to become a doctor (Uday ko pasand hai Rashi ko bhi Uday pasand hai pr kabhi kabhi darr lagtaa hai usse, dono ne ek dusre kabhi jataya nhi k ek dusre ko psnd krte hai) Uday sher hai to rashi bakri ka memna lagti hai maximum salvar suit mai rehti hai.

Saloni - Mature, Thodi Pagal, Open-Minded, Hot hai sabse freely baat krti hai gussa aata hai to gaaliyaa bhi gajjab deti hai or saamne waale ki waat lagaa deti hai western dresses jyada psnd hai..photos ki diwaani, dance krnaa bahot psnd hai hip-hop queen bahot se awards & rewards mile hai uske liye, muje bahot psnd krti hai pr meri esi koi feeling nahi hai meri taraf se we are just best friends. 8th floor pr jo uncle khade the jab mai sanjana k ghar jaa rahaa tha ye unhi ki daughter hai.

Sanjana - Jisse aap pehle hi mil chuke ho jo abhi terrace pr nahi hai kis wajah se wo aap log pehle hi jaante hai pr wo bhi iss group ki member hai. Sanjana and Saloni are best friends cum sisters sab baate ek dusre ko share krti hai fir kesi bhi ho...Sanjana or Saloni dono ko ek dusre ka pataa hai ki wo muje like krti hai…

Ek or hai jo kaafi interesting character hai mera jigri jo abhi mojud nahi hai yahaa...

Eshan: mujse gale milte hue or jhandu kya haal hai tere..

Me: mai to thik hu chutiye tu kahaa gaand maraane gayaa tha bey exam k baad se dikha hi nahi

Eshan: Are wo mera cousin hai na wo mere mausi ka ladkaa uska accident ho gayaa tha to bs usse milne gayaa tha..chutiye ne kisi ladki ko dekhne k chakkar mai ek gaadi waale ko thok di to lag gaye lode…

Me: Aakash k gale lagte hue tu kahaa gayaa tha bey lodu tu bhi exam k baad se gayab hai..kisine maar li thi kya teri…

Aakash: Are nahi bey wo mere ek dur k cousin ki shaadi mai gayaa tha...kaafi bore hua yrr mai udhar mummy jabardasti leke chali gayi thi…

Me: Rashi se gale milate hue or meri chashmis tu kahaa gayi thi...kahi phirse class mai second na aa jaaye uska sadmaa to nahi lag gayaa thaa…

Rashi: Wo to muje pataa hai tu muje kabhi first nahi aane dega mai kitni bhi koshish kr lu pataa nahi kya krta hai pure saal masti krta hai to sochti iss baar to mai hi first aaungi or tu sab kabada kr deta hai…

Abhi hum gale lagte hue hi Baate kar the the ki Uday ne muje picha piche khich liya or bolta hai...or kitna lagega bhaai thoda jealous k bhaav Mai…

Me: Arreee mere bhaai tu Kahaa chalaa gayaa thaa bey...Tu chalaa gayaa thaa to bahot Shanti thi bhaai pure society Mai..warnaa saale tu to sabki shaanti bhagaa le jata hai…

Uday: Tu bhul gayaa na bhosdiwaale saale Mera boxing ka match thaa state level ka…

Me: Are haa re ye to mere dimaag se hi nikal gayaa thaa..to kesa gayaa bhaai mere…

Uday: Kya hona hai fod diya saamne waale ko har baar ki tarah usko maarne ka moka hi nahi diya… ab to tera bhaai national khelega..

Sab: Oooo Kya baat kr rahaa sahi mai... Congratulations..ab to party banti hai...Party….Party…Party...

Me: To Kahaa party de rahaa hai phir…

Uday: Apne wahi puraane adde pai krte hai..Kya bolte sab log..

Sab: Done done..kaafi sahi idea bahot time ho gayaa wahaa Gaye hue..

Me: Last Mai saloni ki aur dekhte hue...or meri jaan tere kyaa haal hai gale lagte hue…

Saloni: Dur hatt mujse...abhi milne ka time mil rahaa hai do din se phone bhi nahi utha rahaa or mila bhi nahi..or abhi haal chaal puch rahaa hai huhh…

Me: Abe bhullakkad...tujhe bola to tha ki mera phone tut gayaa hai to kal hi raat ko to nayaa leke aaya hu...ye dekh

Saloni: Ooo bc...ye to mera favourite phone hai muje lena tha...mere taraf attitude na bolte hue bhul ja ab to tu phone ko ae chashmis chal to apne photos lete isme…

Ye bol k wo terrace k dusri taraf chali jaati hai jahaa lights thodi achi aa rahi thi..

Chashmis apne sir pai haath maarte hue..ye kabhi nahi sudharne waali or saloni k piche ho leti hai

Eshan: Abe jhandu log kal apne bhaai ki birthday hai kya plan hai...kese waat lagaani hai aaj raat uski...saale ko aaj to dhounga barobar meri bahot kutaai ki thi…

Ravi: hai dedhphutiya lekin baate to dekho bc...lode teri maar k rakh dega wo bhopdike…

Eshan: E jyada na bol fodd k rakh dunga or tune bhosdike 5 phutiya hoke kya ukhaad liya…

Ravi: Ruk tu saale…

Ravi and Eshan ka 36 ka aankda hai..

Ravi usko maarne k liye pakadta hai pr eshan apna bhaagne mai master wo pakd mai nahi aata ravi bhi uske piche maarne dodta hai dodte dodte eshan saloni ko guma k piche se nikal leta hai or ravi bhi use piche hi tha to saloni k gumne ki wajah se ravi k pero k bich mai saloni ka paanv aa jata hai to wo gir jaati hai…or saath mai ravi ka bhaagne ki wajah se gulaati maar k thoda dur girta hai

Hum Sab: oopss...haste hue Lag gaye lode ravi k..

Rashi: Ooops...

Saloni: jab smajh aata hai kya hua to khadi hoti hui chillate hue are ooo lodu kahaa dekh k bhaag rahaa hai aankhe hai k Button...dandaa kidhar hai bey aaj to dande se iski gaand maarungi...bc harbaar pareshaan krtaa hai..

Eshan ye dekh k rukta hai or jab scene smjh aata hai to hasne lag jata hai...or jab sunta ki saloni danda dhundh rahi hai to uske paas mai hi milta hai to wo dandaa saloni ki taraf kr deta hai

Eshan: Aaj to maar le iski gaand sala bahot bakchodi krta hai…

Ravi bhi smajh jata hai gayi bhens paani mai...eshann..tujhe to mai baad mai dekh ta hu pehle is maa channddi se bachne de...or bhaagta hai…

Abhi saloni ravi k piche bhaagti hai danda leke..ruk tu kahaa bhaag rahaa hai aaj to teri gaand tod k rahungi..

Saloni ab pakad nhi paati to danda phenkti hai ravi k uppar dodte dodte hi..pr by luck ravi bach jata hai or aakash ko piche se pakadte hue bhaai bachaa le..ruk tu fattu aakash k piche kya chup rahaa hai or dono aakash k aage piche ghumte hai aakash ko pakadte..aakash bichaara aise hi bich mai fas jata jab saloni haath se maarne waali hoti hai to ek do baar aakash baaju pai lag jaati hai…

Aakash: are pr muje kyu maar rahi hai tu…

Saloni: To hatt na bich mai se..

Aakash thode piche dhakkaa maarta hai to ravi niche gir jaata hai or saloni ko aage danda bhi padaa hua mil jaata hai..

Aur hum log bas hase jaa rahe the..

Ravi: Saalo kamino kya has rahe ho bachaao..nahi to ye aaj to mere anchar panchar dhile kr degi…

Fir Saloni jaise hi maarne waali hoti hai ki mai usko piche se pakad leta hu phir phi mujhse chuth kr ravi ko maarne ki jaddo jahad krti hai.. Pr meri pakad se nikal nahi...paati

Saloni: Chodh muje aaj to isko mai nahi 6odhungi..

Me: Bas bas meri jaansi ki rani...ruk jaa ruk jaa tu..lag jaayeda dande se..

Saloni phir bhi maarne ki koshish krti to us koshish mai chikh nikal jaati hai or saloni ko chodh deta hu kyunki usne jab maarne k liye dandaa piche kiya to mere sar pai lag gayi bhul se…

Saloni ko jab pata chalaa ki mujhe lag gayi to wo shaant ho gayi…

Me: Kya krti hai saloni..dard mai sir pakadte hue jab ki mujhe itna khaas lagaa nahi tha pr saloni ko shaant krne ka yahi ek tarika tha..

Rashi mere paas aati hui...oh shit kahaa lagi daksh dikha jara..pr mai side se aankh maar deta hu to wo samajh jaati hai or dusre bhi dekh lete hai muje to wo bhi samajh jaate hai

Saloni mere paas aake mere sar pai dekhti hui...oooo sorry sorry daksh wo bhul se lag gayi...I am so sorry dikha mujhe kahaa lagi..

Pr mai sir pai haath rakh k beth jata hu or chikhta hu jaise muje sahi mai badi jorr ki lagi or chkkar aane ki acting krta hu..aayyyiiiiiii…..

Mera natak chaalu hi tha to abhi saloni ki aankho mai nami aa jaati hai muje dard mai dekhte hue..

Saloni: Batana kahaa lagi hai..thodi ruaani si aawaz mai…

Ye dekh k abhi natak bandh krta hue or haath hataa ta hu..

To uski mere sir pai nazar jaati hai jahaa dard ka bahana kr k haath rakhaa hua tha..agar direct meri aankho dekhti to smajh jaati mai natak kr rahaa tha pr uski nazar gayi nahi..

Or dard waali jagah pai jaise usne haath rakhaa check krne k liye mai thoda dard se aaahhh bhari..

To saloni mujhe dard mai dekh k sahi mai rone lagi meri aankho mai dekhte hue..Ab thoda jyada ho gayaa…

To mai use gale lagaa lete hue...are are are….kuch nahi hua muje mai thik hu mai majaak kr rahaa tha...are bas bas bas...mai majaak kr rahaa tha or uski aankho se aansoo saaf kiye..

Saloni: Nahi tum thik nahi tumhe lagi thi dande se...

Me: Are haa lagi thi pr sirf touch hua itni nahi lagi...Aise to bruce lee ki naani bane firti hai sabki taraf dekhte hue jo hume round krk dekh rahe the..or abhi dekho

Sab hasne lag jaate hai...

Saloni mere baaju pai pyaar se thappad lagaati hai..or sab ki taraf dekhte hue tum logo ko to mai baad mai dekh lungi..or hum dono uth jaate hai..

Saloni: Ravi ki taraf dekhte hue teri to last warning hai abhi teri wajah se kuch hua na muje to tera sar phodh dena hai maine…

Me: Achaa abhi sab log suno aaj raat 11 baje sab log 10th floor k passage milenge bhaai ki birthday ka planning krne k liye cake ka order maine already de diya hai…ravi tu soft-drinks chips vghere le aana apne hisaab se...Eshan tu apnewala saman le aayenga haina..

Saloni: Eshan Mere liye lana nahi bhulna pichli baar ki tarah nhi to fodd dena maine tujhe...

Me: Thik hai to chalo phir milte hai..raat ko

Sab log kuch idhar udhar ki baate krte hue apne ghar k liye nikal lete hai..

Ghar pai pahochta hu to prachi or didi darwaaze pr hi thi prachi jaa rahi thi..

Me: Prachi tum aaogi party mai aaj raat ko 12 baje…

Prachi: Nahi yrr aaj to nahi aaungi pr kal agar kuch plan hai to mai aa jaaungi..

Me: thik hai..

Prachi: chalo ab mai chalti hu kaafi der ho gayi aaj mummy daantegi…

Me: Are aap kahaa ruko thodi der saath mai hi chalte hai muje bhi tumhaare ghar ki side jana hai gift lene to 6odh dunga mai...
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Update 14: Showroom

Ab tak:
Me: Prachi tum aaogi party mai aaj raat ko 12 baje…

Prachi: Nahi yrr aaj to nahi aaungi pr kal agar kuch plan hai to mai aa jaaungi..

Me: thik hai..

Prachi: chalo ab mai chalti hu kaafi der ho gayi aaj mummy daantegi…

Me: Are aap kahaa ruko thodi der saath mai hi chalte hai muje bhi tumhaare ghar ki side jana hai gift lene to 6odh dunga mai...

Aage:
Me: thodi der baad...prachi ko dekhte hue chalo chalte hai..

Flat k niche pahoch k bike nikaalta hu or prachi piche beth jaati hai..

Prachi: Wo apna mall hai na wahaa chalna hai muje kuch shopping krni hai fir muje ghar 6odh dena…

Me: Wo to dur hai vaapis raat bhi ho rahi hai aane mai late ho jaayega...aunty daantegi nahi

Prachi: Chalna yarr muje rickshaw mai jaana padega nahi to or usme jyada late ho jaayega..or mummy ko maine already bol diya hai k tum mere saath ho..

Me: Chalo thik hai pr raaste mai mummy ko showroom pai bolte chalenge or tum kahogi k tumhaare kaam k liye jaa rahe hai..

Prachi: Thik hai...chalo

Bike chalu krke hum nikal lete thoda aage chalte hai to wahaa humaara showroom aata hai jo itna badaa to nahi hai pr 3 shops jitna badaa hai mummy ne hi mere or didi k bachpan se mehnat kr kr ke showroom set kiya jisme mere mama(Introduction later) bhi partner hai didi k 10 saal k hone tak wo isi city mai rehte the phir wo dusre city chale gaye dusra branch jamaane k liye abhi us branch mai jo bhi profit loss hota hai wo mere mama ka or humaari branch mai jo bhi profit loss hota hai wo humara

To chalte hai showroom ki taraf jahaa gate k uppar ek board hai jisme harek akshar white light wala hai and uske piche yellow color k light ka shadow hai jahaa likha hai Priya Jewelllers or niche ek choti line likhi hui hai आपका अपना प्रिय ज्वैलर्स..niche gate pai do security guards hai jo kisiko check kare bina andar jaane nahi deta pr jaise hi mai gate pai aata hu to dono guards muje salute krte hai...mai bhi unhe smile krta hu or andar chalaa jata hu andar pure showroom mai u shape mai kaanch k counter lage hue hai jiske piche salesman/woman khade hai unke piche kaanch ki almaariyaan bani hui hai jahaa alag alag gold and diamond k ornaments hai customer k khade rehne ki jagah pai kahi kahi chairs lagi hui jahaa customer bethe hai to kahi customers khade hai...idhar koi apni wife ko chain pehna k dikha rahaa hai k kaisa hai or wife k chehre pai alag hi ronak hai..to koi maa apni beti k liye earrings kharid rahi hai..to koi bhaav taal kr rahaa hai to koi gold bechne aaya hai paiso ki jarurat ki wajah se…

To showroom mai total 8 saleswoman and 3 salesman hai jo kuch 22-30 saal k bich ke hai or ek showroom ka manager jo tab se work kr rahe hai jab se mummy ne ye business chaalu kiya hai bahut bharosemand uncle..isiliye bill counter pr yahi bethte hai..

Or ek taraf ek cabin banaa hua hai jahaa mummy kuch kaam kr rahi hai..

Mai manager uncle ko smile deta hu to wo bhi return mai smile krte hai or customer k bill banaane lagte hai kyunki wahaa 2-3 customers apne bill ka wait kr rahe hai...kuch 5 salesperson hai jinko mai saalo se jaanta hu or 3 ko mai 2-3 saal se jaanta hu kuch 2-3 naye salesman hai jinko mai nahi jaanta wo sab muje dekh k smile krte hai idhar ek nayi salesgirl jo thi wo mujhe nahi jaanti thi to usne muje dekh k bola…

Salesgirl: Yes, Sir how may I help you?

Tabhi ek dusri salesgirl usse kuch bolne jaati hai to Mai use aankho se rok deta hu…

Me: I want to buy a diamond necklace for her

Salesgirl: Yes, sure sir how much budget do you have.

Me: Don't worry about the budget.

Salesgirl: ok, sir I will show you the best piece of showroom, BTW your girl friend is very pretty..

Me: Ye sun mai jhenmp gayaa..or bola...She is...abhi Maine itna hi bola thaa ki prachi me Mera hath press kr diya or aankho se chup rehna ka ishara kiya..

Salesgirl: Sir ye dekhiye, ye saare best pieces hai trending mai bhi hai or aapki gf pai suit bhi karega…

Phir hum thoda natak krne lage dekhne ka thodi der baad..

Me: Nahi kuch aur dikhaao ye humko pasand nahi aaye…

Salesgirl confuse kyunki usne showroom k best pieces dikhaaye the phir bhi usne chehre pai kuch show nahi kiya..

Salesgirl: Sure sir…

Phir wo leke aayi or pieces usme bhi humne manaa kr diya nahi kuch aur dikhaao...aise hi humne 5-6 baar kiya kam se kam bhi counter pai kuch 40 pieces pade the jinme se humne ek bhi pasand nahi kiye…

Salesgirl ab thodi frustrate ho gayi kyunki sab mai hum kuch na kuch kamiyaan nikaal rahe the…

Salesgirl: Pr abhi bhi usne show nhi kiya ki frustrate ho gayi..or bola Sir, what are your requirements aapko kesa chaahiye, kuch references hai to bataaiye to mai aapko vesa bataa saku…

Abhi maine pehle hi already is bich message kr diya yahaa k puraane saleswoman ko ki muje ese best piece and high budget necklace ka photo bhejo Jo abhi filhaal stock mai nahi hai…to maine wo photo nikala aur salesgirl ko dikhaya ki esa necklace chahiye…

Aur salesgirl ka pehla experience thaa sale krne ka kyunki abhi 1 mahina hi hua use join kiye hue to experience saleswoman k saath work krk Sikh hi rahi thi or hum uske liye first customers the jinko wo akele handle kr rahi thi..

Abhi Maine Jo photo dikhaya to salesgirl ko pataa nahi tha ki wo stock Mai nahi hai pr usne necklace dekha jarur thaa..
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Salesgirl: Sure, Sir this is available I will be back in a minute

To wo dhundne lagi necklace bahaar saare counters and cupboard Mai usne check kr liya use nahi mila fir wo Jo display k alawa boxes pade the wahaa dekhne lagi to use dhundne Mai kaafi time ho jata hai to usko sunaayi de vese bolta hu

Me: Madam I am getting late thoda rudely kesa showroom hai itna time koi customers ko wait karaate hai kya..I am very disappointed I will never come to this showroom again…

Abhi saleswoman us salesgirl k paas jaati hai to wo use daantti hai..

Saleswoman: kese kaam kar rahi ho Ritika tum aaj din tak koi customer ese disappoint nahi hua humaari service se or tumhe abhi Tak ek necklace nahi mila to jab aur jyada customers aayenge to Kya karogi..1 mahine mai ye sikha tumne

Ritika: Sorry Sarita mam, wo necklace nahi mil rahaa jo Maine abhi 2 din pehle yahaa display Mai dekha tha..

Sarita: thoda jorr se konsa necklace…

Ritika jab necklace ka description Diya to…
Sarita: ye necklace stock Mai hi nhi hai..Bhul gayi tum do din pehle hi humne last piece Mr. Roy ko becha tha...aise bhul jaaogi to kaam kese chalega aise to tum ghata karaa dogi..Really I am very disappointed with you Ritika, I thought you are trained now..but sorry you are fired..

Abhi Ritika k aankho Mai nami aa jaati hai kyunki uska pehla experience hi esa rahaa..

Ritika: Rote hue no mam please esa mat kariye agli baar se esa nahi hoga…

Abhi muje thoda bhura lagaa to Mai ye sab rokne hi jaa rahaa tha ki

Muje pataa nhi chalaa mummy kab Apne cabin se bahaar aayi inki Baate sun rahi thi..to mummy ko pataa chal gayaa k ye Meri karastaani hai..or mummy ko psnd nahi that unka koi employee pareshaan ho bina galti k..saare employees ko apna maanti hai bhale wo purana ho ya nayaa

Cabin thoda side Mai tha jise Mai dekh nahi paya..to mummy ne mere kaan marode or bola

Mummy: Tu yahaa kya kr rahaa hai..aaya to thik Meri bachi ko rulaya kyu...pichli baar bhi tune ye Mishti ko rulaya thaa..

Me: Sorry sorry Mom, kaan to 6odhiye Mai batata hu..wo inko Mai customer lagaa to Mai bas unka test le rahaa tha..

Mummy ritika k paas jaate hue to may beta uske pahochte hue ro mat beta..tuje koi nahi nikaal rahaa or tu Sarita tu bhi iske saath mili hui thi..

Sarita: sorry mam wo sir ne bola to..I am sorry..

To bataao Ritika tumse kya galti hui..ritika ab shaant ho gayi jab use pataa chalaa k mai to bas test le rahaa tha..

To Ritika ne sara vaakya bataya…

Mummy: beta Ritika galti to tumse hui hai but I am impressed tumne 1 month mai kaafi achaa sikha..Mishti ki to bichaari isse bhi buri halaat hui thi..Mishti ki taraf dekha to usne bas smile kiya..this was for your own good..

Mummy ne Meri taraf smile kiya or bola Chalo sorry bolo or Kahaa iski galti hui bataao or cabin mai milo mujhse..or Prachi tum kab aayi Shimla se or Prachi ko leke cabin mai chali gayi..

Sarita: aapne to Meri hi band bajaa di..har baar Mai hi milti hu aapko fasaane k liye..abhi Mai kabhi aapki baato mai nahi aane waali..nahi to ek din Mera hi pattaa kat Jana hai is showrrom see..or dusri taraf chali gayi customer dekhne…

Ye sab hum ek taraf kr rahe the saare employees and customers ka dhyaan kabhi humaari taraf aa rahaa tha pr employees apna kaam bhi sahi tarike se kr rhe the..to jyada customer ko kuch samajh nhi aaya..

Mai thoda has diya..

Me: I am sorry Ritika mera esa koi intention nahi tha Mai to bas..

Ritika: smile se No no sir it's ok you are the owner you have rights to test me.

Ritika dikhne mai pure showroom Mai sabse khoobsurat or young hai, abhi to usne showroom ka dress code pehna hai
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jisme Ritika bahot hi khoobsurat dikha uppar se usne chasma bhi lagayaa hua hai or hotho k niche thoda side mai ek chota sa teel hai jisse uske chehre pai ek alag hi cuteness waali smile dikhti hai..slim hai kuch 32-24-32 ka figure hai..

Me: I like your voice its so beautiful..so whenever you speak you attracts customers and approach is also good but the thing is first of all in starting, you ask all the requirements of customer then show them our products don't show like this 40 boxes..and if customer doesn't have any requirement then show them maximum 10 boxes..not more than that and not in one go show them first two then two likewise..isse Kya ki unko confusion nahi hoga choice krne mai..and try Karo ki customers se continuously baate karo product ki khubiyon k baare mai usse customer bore bhi nahi honge or unko time ka pataa bhi nahi chalega but give them there space also when they decide anything…

And stock humesha yaad rakho ki kya hai kya nahi..agar stock Mai nahi hai to clear bataa do customer ko and bolo if you want 1-2 din Mai aapko mil jaayegi after confirming with your senior..Understood Ritika

Idhar Ritika mai Jo bol rahaa tha usi mai kho gayi thi aur bas muje hi dekhe ja rahi thi or kuch soch rahi thi..

Me: Ritika..Ritika..muh k aage chutki bajaate hue Ritikaaaa

Ritika: You are so handsome (ek dam dhire se Jo Maine sun liya)...

Me: smile krte hue what…?

Ritika: (hosh Mai aate hue) O..O..I mean Thank you sir, Mai humesha ye yaad rakhunngi and will never repeat this again..

Me: Apna haath aage krke smile krte hue..ok, Ritika nice to meet you btw my name is Daksh..so don't call me sir only Daksh..and she was not my gf just a friend...

Ritika: Nice to meet you too sir..and thank you once again.

Mai smile krte hue mummy ki cabin ki taraf chalaa jata hu jahaa Prachi apna Shimla ka experience share kr rahi thi…

Me: Wo mom Prachi ko mall Jana tha..or muje gift bhi lena tha Maine aapko kal bataya thaa na..

Mummy: Ha wo muje bataya Prachi ne..dhyaan se jana..or aaram se aana, paise to Haina Tere paas..

Me: Ha ha hai mom don't worry..Chalo Prachi..

Prachi: ok aunty chalti hu Mai kal milte hai aapke liye Shimla se kuch laayi bhi hu aapko pasand aayega...

Mummy: Smile krte hue achaa thik hai..
 
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Update 14: Showroom

Ab tak:
Me: Prachi tum aaogi party mai aaj raat ko 12 baje…

Prachi: Nahi yrr aaj to nahi aaungi pr kal agar kuch plan hai to mai aa jaaungi..

Me: thik hai..

Prachi: chalo ab mai chalti hu kaafi der ho gayi aaj mummy daantegi…

Me: Are aap kahaa ruko thodi der saath mai hi chalte hai muje bhi tumhaare ghar ki side jana hai gift lene to 6odh dunga mai...

Aage:
Me: thodi der baad...prachi ko dekhte hue chalo chalte hai..

Flat k niche pahoch k bike nikaalta hu or prachi piche beth jaati hai..

Prachi: Wo apna mall hai na wahaa chalna hai muje kuch shopping krni hai fir muje ghar 6odh dena…

Me: Wo to dur hai vaapis raat bhi ho rahi hai aane mai late ho jaayega...aunty daantegi nahi

Prachi: Chalna yarr muje rickshaw mai jaana padega nahi to or usme jyada late ho jaayega..or mummy ko maine already bol diya hai k tum mere saath ho..

Me: Chalo thik hai pr raaste mai mummy ko showroom pai bolte chalenge or tum kahogi k tumhaare kaam k liye jaa rahe hai..

Prachi: Thik hai...chalo

Bike chalu krke hum nikal lete thoda aage chalte hai to wahaa humaara showroom aata hai jo itna badaa to nahi hai pr 3 shops jitna badaa hai mummy ne hi mere or didi k bachpan se mehnat kr kr ke showroom set kiya jisme mere mama(Introduction later) bhi partner hai didi k 10 saal k hone tak wo isi city mai rehte the phir wo dusre city chale gaye dusra branch jamaane k liye abhi us branch mai jo bhi profit loss hota hai wo mere mama ka or humaari branch mai jo bhi profit loss hota hai wo humara

To chalte hai showroom ki taraf jahaa gate k uppar ek board hai jisme harek akshar white light wala hai and uske piche yellow color k light ka shadow hai jahaa likha hai Priya Jewelllers or niche ek choti line likhi hui hai आपका अपना प्रिय ज्वैलर्स..niche gate pai do security guards hai jo kisiko check kare bina andar jaane nahi deta pr jaise hi mai gate pai aata hu to dono guards muje salute krte hai...mai bhi unhe smile krta hu or andar chalaa jata hu andar pure showroom mai u shape mai kaanch k counter lage hue hai jiske piche salesman/woman khade hai unke piche kaanch ki almaariyaan bani hui hai jahaa alag alag gold and diamond k ornaments hai customer k khade rehne ki jagah pai kahi kahi chairs lagi hui jahaa customer bethe hai to kahi customers khade hai...idhar koi apni wife ko chain pehna k dikha rahaa hai k kaisa hai or wife k chehre pai alag hi ronak hai..to koi maa apni beti k liye earrings kharid rahi hai..to koi bhaav taal kr rahaa hai to koi gold bechne aaya hai paiso ki jarurat ki wajah se…

To showroom mai total 8 saleswoman and 3 salesman hai jo kuch 22-30 saal k bich ke hai or ek showroom ka manager jo tab se work kr rahe hai jab se mummy ne ye business chaalu kiya hai bahut bharosemand uncle..isiliye bill counter pr yahi bethte hai..

Or ek taraf ek cabin banaa hua hai jahaa mummy kuch kaam kr rahi hai..

Mai manager uncle ko smile deta hu to wo bhi return mai smile krte hai or customer k bill banaane lagte hai kyunki wahaa 2-3 customers apne bill ka wait kr rahe hai...kuch 5 salesperson hai jinko mai saalo se jaanta hu or 3 ko mai 2-3 saal se jaanta hu kuch 2-3 naye salesman hai jinko mai nahi jaanta wo sab muje dekh k smile krte hai idhar ek nayi salesgirl jo thi wo mujhe nahi jaanti thi to usne muje dekh k bola…

Salesgirl: Yes, Sir how may I help you?

Tabhi ek dusri salesgirl usse kuch bolne jaati hai to Mai use aankho se rok deta hu…

Me: I want to buy a diamond necklace for her

Salesgirl: Yes, sure sir how much budget do you have.

Me: Don't worry about the budget.

Salesgirl: ok, sir I will show you the best piece of showroom, BTW your girl friend is very pretty..

Me: Ye sun mai jhenmp gayaa..or bola...She is...abhi Maine itna hi bola thaa ki prachi me Mera hath press kr diya or aankho se chup rehna ka ishara kiya..

Salesgirl: Sir ye dekhiye, ye saare best pieces hai trending mai bhi hai or aapki gf pai suit bhi karega…

Phir hum thoda natak krne lage dekhne ka thodi der baad..

Me: Nahi kuch aur dikhaao ye humko pasand nahi aaye…

Salesgirl confuse kyunki usne showroom k best pieces dikhaaye the phir bhi usne chehre pai kuch show nahi kiya..

Salesgirl: Sure sir…

Phir wo leke aayi or pieces usme bhi humne manaa kr diya nahi kuch aur dikhaao...aise hi humne 5-6 baar kiya kam se kam bhi counter pai kuch 40 pieces pade the jinme se humne ek bhi pasand nahi kiye…

Salesgirl ab thodi frustrate ho gayi kyunki sab mai hum kuch na kuch kamiyaan nikaal rahe the…

Salesgirl: Pr abhi bhi usne show nhi kiya ki frustrate ho gayi..or bola Sir, what are your requirements aapko kesa chaahiye, kuch references hai to bataaiye to mai aapko vesa bataa saku…

Abhi maine pehle hi already is bich message kr diya yahaa k puraane saleswoman ko ki muje ese best piece and high budget necklace ka photo bhejo Jo abhi filhaal stock mai nahi hai…to maine wo photo nikala aur salesgirl ko dikhaya ki esa necklace chahiye…

Aur salesgirl ka pehla experience thaa sale krne ka kyunki abhi 1 mahina hi hua use join kiye hue to experience saleswoman k saath work krk Sikh hi rahi thi or hum uske liye first customers the jinko wo akele handle kr rahi thi..

Abhi Maine Jo photo dikhaya to salesgirl ko pataa nahi tha ki wo stock Mai nahi hai pr usne necklace dekha jarur thaa..
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Salesgirl: Sure, Sir this is available I will be back in a minute

To wo dhundne lagi necklace bahaar saare counters and cupboard Mai usne check kr liya use nahi mila fir wo Jo display k alawa boxes pade the wahaa dekhne lagi to use dhundne Mai kaafi time ho jata hai to usko sunaayi de vese bolta hu

Me: Madam I am getting late thoda rudely kesa showroom hai itna time koi customers ko wait karaate hai kya..I am very disappointed I will never come to this showroom again…

Abhi saleswoman us salesgirl k paas jaati hai to wo use daantti hai..

Saleswoman: kese kaam kar rahi ho Ritika tum aaj din tak koi customer ese disappoint nahi hua humaari service se or tumhe abhi Tak ek necklace nahi mila to jab aur jyada customers aayenge to Kya karogi..1 mahine mai ye sikha tumne

Ritika: Sorry Sarita mam, wo necklace nahi mil rahaa jo Maine abhi 2 din pehle yahaa display Mai dekha tha..

Sarita: thoda jorr se konsa necklace…

Ritika jab necklace ka description Diya to…
Sarita: ye necklace stock Mai hi nhi hai..Bhul gayi tum do din pehle hi humne last piece Mr. Roy ko becha tha...aise bhul jaaogi to kaam kese chalega aise to tum ghata karaa dogi..Really I am very disappointed with you Ritika, I thought you are trained now..but sorry you are fired..

Abhi Ritika k aankho Mai nami aa jaati hai kyunki uska pehla experience hi esa rahaa..

Ritika: Rote hue no mam please esa mat kariye agli baar se esa nahi hoga…

Abhi muje thoda bhura lagaa to Mai ye sab rokne hi jaa rahaa tha ki

Muje pataa nhi chalaa mummy kab Apne cabin se bahaar aayi inki Baate sun rahi thi..to mummy ko pataa chal gayaa k ye Meri karastaani hai..or mummy ko psnd nahi that unka koi employee pareshaan ho bina galti k..saare employees ko apna maanti hai bhale wo purana ho ya nayaa

Cabin thoda side Mai tha jise Mai dekh nahi paya..to mummy ne mere kaan marode or bola

Mummy: Tu yahaa kya kr rahaa hai..aaya to thik Meri bachi ko rulaya kyu...pichli baar bhi tune ye Mishti ko rulaya thaa..

Me: Sorry sorry Mom, kaan to 6odhiye Mai batata hu..wo inko Mai customer lagaa to Mai bas unka test le rahaa tha..

Mummy ritika k paas jaate hue to may beta uske pahochte hue ro mat beta..tuje koi nahi nikaal rahaa or tu Sarita tu bhi iske saath mili hui thi..

Sarita: sorry mam wo sir ne bola to..I am sorry..

To bataao Ritika tumse kya galti hui..ritika ab shaant ho gayi jab use pataa chalaa k mai to bas test le rahaa tha..

To Ritika ne sara vaakya bataya…

Mummy: beta Ritika galti to tumse hui hai but I am impressed tumne 1 month mai kaafi achaa sikha..Mishti ki to bichaari isse bhi buri halaat hui thi..Mishti ki taraf dekha to usne bas smile kiya..this was for your own good..

Mummy ne Meri taraf smile kiya or bola Chalo sorry bolo or Kahaa iski galti hui bataao or cabin mai milo mujhse..or Prachi tum kab aayi Shimla se or Prachi ko leke cabin mai chali gayi..

Sarita: aapne to Meri hi band bajaa di..har baar Mai hi milti hu aapko fasaane k liye..abhi Mai kabhi aapki baato mai nahi aane waali..nahi to ek din Mera hi pattaa kat Jana hai is showrrom see..or dusri taraf chali gayi customer dekhne…

Ye sab hum ek taraf kr rahe the saare employees and customers ka dhyaan kabhi humaari taraf aa rahaa tha pr employees apna kaam bhi sahi tarike se kr rhe the..to jyada customer ko kuch samajh nhi aaya..

Mai thoda has diya..

Me: I am sorry Ritika mera esa koi intention nahi tha Mai to bas..

Ritika: smile se No no sir it's ok you are the owner you have rights to test me.

Ritika dikhne mai pure showroom Mai sabse khoobsurat or young hai, abhi to usne showroom ka dress code pehna hai
71484d1e92a19998d2d9b10fe325c1d780f46e5e.jpg

jisme Ritika bahot hi khoobsurat dikha uppar se usne chasma bhi lagayaa hua hai or hotho k niche thoda side mai ek chota sa teel hai jisse uske chehre pai ek alag hi cuteness waali smile dikhti hai..slim hai kuch 32-24-32 ka figure hai..

Me: I like your voice its so beautiful..so whenever you speak you attracts customers and approach is also good but the thing is first of all in starting, you ask all the requirements of customer then show them our products don't show like this 40 boxes..and if customer doesn't have any requirement then show them maximum 10 boxes..not more than that and not in one go show them first two then two likewise..isse Kya ki unko confusion nahi hoga choice krne mai..and try Karo ki customers se continuously baate karo product ki khubiyon k baare mai usse customer bore bhi nahi honge or unko time ka pataa bhi nahi chalega but give them there space also when they decide anything…

And stock humesha yaad rakho ki kya hai kya nahi..agar stock Mai nahi hai to clear bataa do customer ko and bolo if you want 1-2 din Mai aapko mil jaayegi after confirming with your senior..Understood Ritika

Idhar Ritika mai Jo bol rahaa tha usi mai kho gayi thi aur bas muje hi dekhe ja rahi thi or kuch soch rahi thi..

Me: Ritika..Ritika..muh k aage chutki bajaate hue Ritikaaaa

Ritika: You are so handsome (ek dam dhire se Jo Maine sun liya)...

Me: smile krte hue what…?

Ritika: (hosh Mai aate hue) O..O..I mean Thank you sir, Mai humesha ye yaad rakhunngi and will never repeat this again..

Me: Apna haath aage krke smile krte hue..ok, Ritika nice to meet you btw my name is Daksh..so don't call me sir only Daksh..and she was not my gf just a friend...

Ritika: Nice to meet you too sir..and thank you once again.

Mai smile krte hue mummy ki cabin ki taraf chalaa jata hu jahaa Prachi apna Shimla ka experience share kr rahi thi…

Me: Wo mom Prachi ko mall Jana tha..or muje gift bhi lena tha Maine aapko kal bataya thaa na..

Mummy: Ha wo muje bataya Prachi ne..dhyaan se jana..or aaram se aana, paise to Haina Tere paas..

Me: Ha ha hai mom don't worry..Chalo Prachi..

Prachi: ok aunty chalti hu Mai kal milte hai aapke liye Shimla se kuch laayi bhi hu aapko pasand aayega...

Mummy: Smile krte hue achaa thik hai..
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Update 14: Showroom

Ab tak:
Me: Prachi tum aaogi party mai aaj raat ko 12 baje…

Prachi: Nahi yrr aaj to nahi aaungi pr kal agar kuch plan hai to mai aa jaaungi..

Me: thik hai..

Prachi: chalo ab mai chalti hu kaafi der ho gayi aaj mummy daantegi…

Me: Are aap kahaa ruko thodi der saath mai hi chalte hai muje bhi tumhaare ghar ki side jana hai gift lene to 6odh dunga mai...

Aage:
Me: thodi der baad...prachi ko dekhte hue chalo chalte hai..

Flat k niche pahoch k bike nikaalta hu or prachi piche beth jaati hai..

Prachi: Wo apna mall hai na wahaa chalna hai muje kuch shopping krni hai fir muje ghar 6odh dena…

Me: Wo to dur hai vaapis raat bhi ho rahi hai aane mai late ho jaayega...aunty daantegi nahi

Prachi: Chalna yarr muje rickshaw mai jaana padega nahi to or usme jyada late ho jaayega..or mummy ko maine already bol diya hai k tum mere saath ho..

Me: Chalo thik hai pr raaste mai mummy ko showroom pai bolte chalenge or tum kahogi k tumhaare kaam k liye jaa rahe hai..

Prachi: Thik hai...chalo

Bike chalu krke hum nikal lete thoda aage chalte hai to wahaa humaara showroom aata hai jo itna badaa to nahi hai pr 3 shops jitna badaa hai mummy ne hi mere or didi k bachpan se mehnat kr kr ke showroom set kiya jisme mere mama(Introduction later) bhi partner hai didi k 10 saal k hone tak wo isi city mai rehte the phir wo dusre city chale gaye dusra branch jamaane k liye abhi us branch mai jo bhi profit loss hota hai wo mere mama ka or humaari branch mai jo bhi profit loss hota hai wo humara

To chalte hai showroom ki taraf jahaa gate k uppar ek board hai jisme harek akshar white light wala hai and uske piche yellow color k light ka shadow hai jahaa likha hai Priya Jewelllers or niche ek choti line likhi hui hai आपका अपना प्रिय ज्वैलर्स..niche gate pai do security guards hai jo kisiko check kare bina andar jaane nahi deta pr jaise hi mai gate pai aata hu to dono guards muje salute krte hai...mai bhi unhe smile krta hu or andar chalaa jata hu andar pure showroom mai u shape mai kaanch k counter lage hue hai jiske piche salesman/woman khade hai unke piche kaanch ki almaariyaan bani hui hai jahaa alag alag gold and diamond k ornaments hai customer k khade rehne ki jagah pai kahi kahi chairs lagi hui jahaa customer bethe hai to kahi customers khade hai...idhar koi apni wife ko chain pehna k dikha rahaa hai k kaisa hai or wife k chehre pai alag hi ronak hai..to koi maa apni beti k liye earrings kharid rahi hai..to koi bhaav taal kr rahaa hai to koi gold bechne aaya hai paiso ki jarurat ki wajah se…

To showroom mai total 8 saleswoman and 3 salesman hai jo kuch 22-30 saal k bich ke hai or ek showroom ka manager jo tab se work kr rahe hai jab se mummy ne ye business chaalu kiya hai bahut bharosemand uncle..isiliye bill counter pr yahi bethte hai..

Or ek taraf ek cabin banaa hua hai jahaa mummy kuch kaam kr rahi hai..

Mai manager uncle ko smile deta hu to wo bhi return mai smile krte hai or customer k bill banaane lagte hai kyunki wahaa 2-3 customers apne bill ka wait kr rahe hai...kuch 5 salesperson hai jinko mai saalo se jaanta hu or 3 ko mai 2-3 saal se jaanta hu kuch 2-3 naye salesman hai jinko mai nahi jaanta wo sab muje dekh k smile krte hai idhar ek nayi salesgirl jo thi wo mujhe nahi jaanti thi to usne muje dekh k bola…

Salesgirl: Yes, Sir how may I help you?

Tabhi ek dusri salesgirl usse kuch bolne jaati hai to Mai use aankho se rok deta hu…

Me: I want to buy a diamond necklace for her

Salesgirl: Yes, sure sir how much budget do you have.

Me: Don't worry about the budget.

Salesgirl: ok, sir I will show you the best piece of showroom, BTW your girl friend is very pretty..

Me: Ye sun mai jhenmp gayaa..or bola...She is...abhi Maine itna hi bola thaa ki prachi me Mera hath press kr diya or aankho se chup rehna ka ishara kiya..

Salesgirl: Sir ye dekhiye, ye saare best pieces hai trending mai bhi hai or aapki gf pai suit bhi karega…

Phir hum thoda natak krne lage dekhne ka thodi der baad..

Me: Nahi kuch aur dikhaao ye humko pasand nahi aaye…

Salesgirl confuse kyunki usne showroom k best pieces dikhaaye the phir bhi usne chehre pai kuch show nahi kiya..

Salesgirl: Sure sir…

Phir wo leke aayi or pieces usme bhi humne manaa kr diya nahi kuch aur dikhaao...aise hi humne 5-6 baar kiya kam se kam bhi counter pai kuch 40 pieces pade the jinme se humne ek bhi pasand nahi kiye…

Salesgirl ab thodi frustrate ho gayi kyunki sab mai hum kuch na kuch kamiyaan nikaal rahe the…

Salesgirl: Pr abhi bhi usne show nhi kiya ki frustrate ho gayi..or bola Sir, what are your requirements aapko kesa chaahiye, kuch references hai to bataaiye to mai aapko vesa bataa saku…

Abhi maine pehle hi already is bich message kr diya yahaa k puraane saleswoman ko ki muje ese best piece and high budget necklace ka photo bhejo Jo abhi filhaal stock mai nahi hai…to maine wo photo nikala aur salesgirl ko dikhaya ki esa necklace chahiye…

Aur salesgirl ka pehla experience thaa sale krne ka kyunki abhi 1 mahina hi hua use join kiye hue to experience saleswoman k saath work krk Sikh hi rahi thi or hum uske liye first customers the jinko wo akele handle kr rahi thi..

Abhi Maine Jo photo dikhaya to salesgirl ko pataa nahi tha ki wo stock Mai nahi hai pr usne necklace dekha jarur thaa..
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Salesgirl: Sure, Sir this is available I will be back in a minute

To wo dhundne lagi necklace bahaar saare counters and cupboard Mai usne check kr liya use nahi mila fir wo Jo display k alawa boxes pade the wahaa dekhne lagi to use dhundne Mai kaafi time ho jata hai to usko sunaayi de vese bolta hu

Me: Madam I am getting late thoda rudely kesa showroom hai itna time koi customers ko wait karaate hai kya..I am very disappointed I will never come to this showroom again…

Abhi saleswoman us salesgirl k paas jaati hai to wo use daantti hai..

Saleswoman: kese kaam kar rahi ho Ritika tum aaj din tak koi customer ese disappoint nahi hua humaari service se or tumhe abhi Tak ek necklace nahi mila to jab aur jyada customers aayenge to Kya karogi..1 mahine mai ye sikha tumne

Ritika: Sorry Sarita mam, wo necklace nahi mil rahaa jo Maine abhi 2 din pehle yahaa display Mai dekha tha..

Sarita: thoda jorr se konsa necklace…

Ritika jab necklace ka description Diya to…
Sarita: ye necklace stock Mai hi nhi hai..Bhul gayi tum do din pehle hi humne last piece Mr. Roy ko becha tha...aise bhul jaaogi to kaam kese chalega aise to tum ghata karaa dogi..Really I am very disappointed with you Ritika, I thought you are trained now..but sorry you are fired..

Abhi Ritika k aankho Mai nami aa jaati hai kyunki uska pehla experience hi esa rahaa..

Ritika: Rote hue no mam please esa mat kariye agli baar se esa nahi hoga…

Abhi muje thoda bhura lagaa to Mai ye sab rokne hi jaa rahaa tha ki

Muje pataa nhi chalaa mummy kab Apne cabin se bahaar aayi inki Baate sun rahi thi..to mummy ko pataa chal gayaa k ye Meri karastaani hai..or mummy ko psnd nahi that unka koi employee pareshaan ho bina galti k..saare employees ko apna maanti hai bhale wo purana ho ya nayaa

Cabin thoda side Mai tha jise Mai dekh nahi paya..to mummy ne mere kaan marode or bola

Mummy: Tu yahaa kya kr rahaa hai..aaya to thik Meri bachi ko rulaya kyu...pichli baar bhi tune ye Mishti ko rulaya thaa..

Me: Sorry sorry Mom, kaan to 6odhiye Mai batata hu..wo inko Mai customer lagaa to Mai bas unka test le rahaa tha..

Mummy ritika k paas jaate hue to may beta uske pahochte hue ro mat beta..tuje koi nahi nikaal rahaa or tu Sarita tu bhi iske saath mili hui thi..

Sarita: sorry mam wo sir ne bola to..I am sorry..

To bataao Ritika tumse kya galti hui..ritika ab shaant ho gayi jab use pataa chalaa k mai to bas test le rahaa tha..

To Ritika ne sara vaakya bataya…

Mummy: beta Ritika galti to tumse hui hai but I am impressed tumne 1 month mai kaafi achaa sikha..Mishti ki to bichaari isse bhi buri halaat hui thi..Mishti ki taraf dekha to usne bas smile kiya..this was for your own good..

Mummy ne Meri taraf smile kiya or bola Chalo sorry bolo or Kahaa iski galti hui bataao or cabin mai milo mujhse..or Prachi tum kab aayi Shimla se or Prachi ko leke cabin mai chali gayi..

Sarita: aapne to Meri hi band bajaa di..har baar Mai hi milti hu aapko fasaane k liye..abhi Mai kabhi aapki baato mai nahi aane waali..nahi to ek din Mera hi pattaa kat Jana hai is showrrom see..or dusri taraf chali gayi customer dekhne…

Ye sab hum ek taraf kr rahe the saare employees and customers ka dhyaan kabhi humaari taraf aa rahaa tha pr employees apna kaam bhi sahi tarike se kr rhe the..to jyada customer ko kuch samajh nhi aaya..

Mai thoda has diya..

Me: I am sorry Ritika mera esa koi intention nahi tha Mai to bas..

Ritika: smile se No no sir it's ok you are the owner you have rights to test me.

Ritika dikhne mai pure showroom Mai sabse khoobsurat or young hai, abhi to usne showroom ka dress code pehna hai
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jisme Ritika bahot hi khoobsurat dikha uppar se usne chasma bhi lagayaa hua hai or hotho k niche thoda side mai ek chota sa teel hai jisse uske chehre pai ek alag hi cuteness waali smile dikhti hai..slim hai kuch 32-24-32 ka figure hai..

Me: I like your voice its so beautiful..so whenever you speak you attracts customers and approach is also good but the thing is first of all in starting, you ask all the requirements of customer then show them our products don't show like this 40 boxes..and if customer doesn't have any requirement then show them maximum 10 boxes..not more than that and not in one go show them first two then two likewise..isse Kya ki unko confusion nahi hoga choice krne mai..and try Karo ki customers se continuously baate karo product ki khubiyon k baare mai usse customer bore bhi nahi honge or unko time ka pataa bhi nahi chalega but give them there space also when they decide anything…

And stock humesha yaad rakho ki kya hai kya nahi..agar stock Mai nahi hai to clear bataa do customer ko and bolo if you want 1-2 din Mai aapko mil jaayegi after confirming with your senior..Understood Ritika

Idhar Ritika mai Jo bol rahaa tha usi mai kho gayi thi aur bas muje hi dekhe ja rahi thi or kuch soch rahi thi..

Me: Ritika..Ritika..muh k aage chutki bajaate hue Ritikaaaa

Ritika: You are so handsome (ek dam dhire se Jo Maine sun liya)...

Me: smile krte hue what…?

Ritika: (hosh Mai aate hue) O..O..I mean Thank you sir, Mai humesha ye yaad rakhunngi and will never repeat this again..

Me: Apna haath aage krke smile krte hue..ok, Ritika nice to meet you btw my name is Daksh..so don't call me sir only Daksh..and she was not my gf just a friend...

Ritika: Nice to meet you too sir..and thank you once again.

Mai smile krte hue mummy ki cabin ki taraf chalaa jata hu jahaa Prachi apna Shimla ka experience share kr rahi thi…

Me: Wo mom Prachi ko mall Jana tha..or muje gift bhi lena tha Maine aapko kal bataya thaa na..

Mummy: Ha wo muje bataya Prachi ne..dhyaan se jana..or aaram se aana, paise to Haina Tere paas..

Me: Ha ha hai mom don't worry..Chalo Prachi..

Prachi: ok aunty chalti hu Mai kal milte hai aapke liye Shimla se kuch laayi bhi hu aapko pasand aayega...

Mummy: Smile krte hue achaa thik hai..


prachi ka cake katne wala hai ab ....:wink:
 
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