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kaha ho ......mahoday ?????????????????????????????

Ek update kal raat ko aayega...pr fir thoda vilamb ho sktaa hai kyunki Mai abhi Jo contest ho rahaa hai uske liye bhi story likh rahaa hu..
 
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Update 23: Ritika Se Dosti

Ab tak:
Sharmili: Haste hue fir ek dum serious lehje mai Shut-Up ok meri best friend hai wo..

Mere expression pichke hue aam jaise ho jata hai to...Sharmili aunty fir se haste hue..that was funny..

Aur fir mai ghar aa jata hua..

Mom: Aa gayaa tu...chal ab taiyaar hoja aur mere saath shop pai chal kuch kaam hai..

Me: Didi kahaa gayi..
Mom: Are aaj wo uske college mai kuch kaam hai to wahi gayi hai..

Aage:
To mai mom k saath hi showroom pai jata hu..

Manager uncle ki taraf dekhte hue: Kaise ho kaka, sab bdhiya..

Kaka: Ha beta sab achaa hai..

Aise hi ek do jano ko Hi bolta jo puraane hai...Abhi koi customers nahi hai, or kuch employee bhi abhi tak nahi aaye the and fir Ritika ki taraf dekh k bolta hu Hi Ritika...to wo smile deti hui Hi kehti hai pr mujhe uski smile jhuthi lagi jaise apna kuch dard chupaa k smile kr rahi ho..

Phir mai or mom, mom ki cabin ki taraf chale jaate hai..

Me: Ha mom bataaiye kya kaam hai..

Mom: Mujhe urgently ek dealer se meeting hai..kisi misunderstanding se usne supply rok diya hai to usi k silsile mai baat krne jaa rahi hu... tab tak ye kuch papers hai usko sahi tarike se pdhkar sign kr dena or Kaka ko de dena..

Me: Kis chiz k papers hai..

Mom: Kuch stocks, kuch bank related, kuch showroom related papers hai..

Me: ok…

Aur mom nikal jaati hai aur mai wo saare paper pdhne lag jata hu...kuch half an hour mai sara kaam complete krta hu..aur cabin se bahaar aake dekhta hu to abhi saare employees aa gaye the saare kuch na kuch kr rahe the or kuch customer bhi the…

Me: Kaisi ho Sarita..wo abhi kuch samaan hi jamaa rahi thi..

Sarita: Mai thik hu Daksh, tum kaise aaj yahaa kaise…

Me: Wo mom ka kuch kaam tha to..aur mishti aur kya chal rahaa hai Shaadi kab hai tumhaari..

Mishti: 2 mahine baad hai..

Me: Oh nice..tabhi kuch customer aate hai to dono unko handle krne chal padte hai..humaari jab ye conversation chal rahi thi tab se Ritika kuch samaan set kr rahi thi…

Me: Hi Ritika kesi ho tum..

Ritika: Oh..Hi mai thik hu tum kaise ho..

Me: Tumhaare saamne hu..(to wo smile krne lagi) btw tum bahot kam age mai kaam krne aa gayi studies vghere nahi ki kya?

Ritika: Ye sun k ritika k chehre pai maayusi dekhta hu pr wo apne aap ko sambhalti huyi..Nahi studies chaalu hai thodi economic condition ki wajah se Externally taiyaari kr rahi hu…

Me: Oh I see...Tum kuch pareshaan si dekh rahi ho any problem.

Ritika: Hadbadhaate hue Nahi...nahi to I am fine..aapko esa kyun lagaa..

Me: Mai logo ki aankhe pdhna janta hu specially ladkiyon ki…

Ritika: To aapne galat pdhi aankhe..mai to thik hu mujhe koi pareshaani nahi hai..

Me: Pakki baat hai…

Ritika: Haa..nazare churaate hue..

Me: Abhi bhi kuch chupa rahi thi..pr maine ignore kiya..Achaa vese kahaa pai rehti ghar pai kese aati jaati ho..

Ritika: Local Bus mai..bus ka naam aate hi firse kuch sad hone lagi lagi pr usne show nahi kiya..

Me: Achaa tum pehle se hi itni khubsoorat ho ya..makeup ka kamaal hai..

Ritika: Ese sawaal ki umeed nahi thi..pehle to aankhe badi ho gayi..phir sharmaane lagi, mai makeup nahi lagaati(sharmaate hue hi boli).

Me: Oh achaa..Ye dekho isko mishti ki taraf dikhaate hue kitna makeup lagaa k aati hai..Kyu sahi bol rahaa hu na mishti..

Mishti: Ha ha..ek dum sahi..

Usko pataa bhi nhi humaari kya baate ho rahi bas ha mai haa milaadi.

Idhar hum dono hasne lage..to mishti confuse ho gayi esa to kya bola usne..

Abhi ritika has rahi thi to mai usi ko dekh rahaa tha..ek dum cute lag rahi thi..jab ritika ko lagaa ki mai usi ko dekh rahaa hu to ek dum chup ho gayi aur sharmaane lagi..tabhi ek customer aata hai...do khoobsurat or educated auntiyaan thi..Yes mam how may I help you

Aunty-1: I want to buy a necklace or usse match hoti hui earrings..

Me: Kya budget hai aapka..

Aunty-1: Dont worry about budget..

Me: Tab to aapko yahaa se achi quality kahi nahi milegi..ritika zaraa wo solitaire mai new design aaye hai wo nikaalna..

Me: Ye dekhiye auntyji humaare showroom k best 3 pieces hai ye..jaise aunties ne ye dekha..

Aunty-1: unki aankhe dekh k hi pataa chal gayaa unko ye psnd aa gaye hai..wo log pahen k dekhte hai kuch 10-15 min discuss krte hai fir bolte hai mujhe ye dono pieces de do..kuch discount milega..

Me: Best choices hai mam jitne aap dono beautifull ho utne hi beautifull choices hai aapki, ye sun dono thoda sharmaane lag jaate hai, Chalo aapne do psnd kiye hai to aapke liye 5% discount. Dono necklace kuch 3-3.5L k aas paas k necklace the

Aunty-1: Thank You, Pehle bhi ek do baar aayi thi kharidne pr itne jldi kabhi choice nahi kr paayi variety itni aapke paas to..

Me: Thank You, Mam aayiega fir se, Wahaa pai aapko bill pay krna hoga..Kaka..5 ishaare krke kaka ko bataa diya ki inka 5% discount lagaana hai..

Ritika: Waah sir itni jldi maine kabhi customer ko satisfy hoke jaate hue nahi dekha..
Me: Apna apna talent hai bhai..

Ritika thoda hasne lagi..

Me: Chalo ab mai chaltaa hu, phir milenge, Friends…? Ritika ki taraf haath badhaate hue..Ritika bhi smile krke mujhse haath milaati hai..

Aur phir mai whaa se nikal jata hu aur piche jabtak mai Ritika k aankho se ojhal nhi ho ho gayaa tab tak meri taraf dekhti hi rahi..

Mai flat pai pahochta hu to jahaa bike park krta hu wahi paas mai hi sanjana bhi apni activa park kr rahi hoti hai..

Me: Hi kesi ho..dard kesa hai

Sanjana(sharmaate): Oh shut up...btw kal ki party kesi rahi

Me: Bahot bdhiya..we missed you..

Sanjana: Awww..

Ese hi idhar udhar ki baate kr ke hum lift k paas pahochte hai..jaise hi hum lift mai jaate..mujhe kuch shararat sujhti hai to pehle to mai dekhta koi floor pai rookne to nahi waali lift..wo mere thoda piche khadi kuch baat kr rahi thi..jaise hi lift uppar jaane lagi to turatn piche mud k sanjana ko lift k corner pai lagaaya or kiss krne lagaa.. Pehle to wo ek dum shock ho gayi apne aapko chudaane lagi pr phir wo bhi mera saath dene lagi..humaara kiss wild hone lagaa..hum dono ek dusre hotho ko chus rahe the..ki tabhi lift ruki 7th floor pr to hum turant alag ho gaye pr kisi ne bahaar se darwaza nahi khola..to fatafat apne aapko sahi kiya..or 8th floor pai ruki lift..to sanjana ek baar fataafat mere hotho pai hoth chuaa k nikal gayi...shaam ko milte hai..

Mai smile krte hue darwaza bndh krta hu aur ghar pai chalaa jata hu...
 

Ankitshrivastava

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Many-Many :congrats: For new story......


I hope ki story sabka dil bahlaygi.....


Baki time milne par padhta hu....fir hi kuch boluga..ok..

Keep rocking frnd......
 
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Many-Many :congrats: For new story......


I hope ki story sabka dil bahlaygi.....


Baki time milne par padhta hu....fir hi kuch boluga..ok..

Keep rocking frnd......

Thank You Ankit Bhai...I can wait for your valuable comments...
 

Nevil singh

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Update 23: Ritika Se Dosti

Ab tak:
Sharmili: Haste hue fir ek dum serious lehje mai Shut-Up ok meri best friend hai wo..

Mere expression pichke hue aam jaise ho jata hai to...Sharmili aunty fir se haste hue..that was funny..

Aur fir mai ghar aa jata hua..

Mom: Aa gayaa tu...chal ab taiyaar hoja aur mere saath shop pai chal kuch kaam hai..

Me: Didi kahaa gayi..
Mom: Are aaj wo uske college mai kuch kaam hai to wahi gayi hai..

Aage:
To mai mom k saath hi showroom pai jata hu..

Manager uncle ki taraf dekhte hue: Kaise ho kaka, sab bdhiya..

Kaka: Ha beta sab achaa hai..

Aise hi ek do jano ko Hi bolta jo puraane hai...Abhi koi customers nahi hai, or kuch employee bhi abhi tak nahi aaye the and fir Ritika ki taraf dekh k bolta hu Hi Ritika...to wo smile deti hui Hi kehti hai pr mujhe uski smile jhuthi lagi jaise apna kuch dard chupaa k smile kr rahi ho..

Phir mai or mom, mom ki cabin ki taraf chale jaate hai..

Me: Ha mom bataaiye kya kaam hai..

Mom: Mujhe urgently ek dealer se meeting hai..kisi misunderstanding se usne supply rok diya hai to usi k silsile mai baat krne jaa rahi hu... tab tak ye kuch papers hai usko sahi tarike se pdhkar sign kr dena or Kaka ko de dena..

Me: Kis chiz k papers hai..

Mom: Kuch stocks, kuch bank related, kuch showroom related papers hai..

Me: ok…

Aur mom nikal jaati hai aur mai wo saare paper pdhne lag jata hu...kuch half an hour mai sara kaam complete krta hu..aur cabin se bahaar aake dekhta hu to abhi saare employees aa gaye the saare kuch na kuch kr rahe the or kuch customer bhi the…

Me: Kaisi ho Sarita..wo abhi kuch samaan hi jamaa rahi thi..

Sarita: Mai thik hu Daksh, tum kaise aaj yahaa kaise…

Me: Wo mom ka kuch kaam tha to..aur mishti aur kya chal rahaa hai Shaadi kab hai tumhaari..

Mishti: 2 mahine baad hai..

Me: Oh nice..tabhi kuch customer aate hai to dono unko handle krne chal padte hai..humaari jab ye conversation chal rahi thi tab se Ritika kuch samaan set kr rahi thi…

Me: Hi Ritika kesi ho tum..

Ritika: Oh..Hi mai thik hu tum kaise ho..

Me: Tumhaare saamne hu..(to wo smile krne lagi) btw tum bahot kam age mai kaam krne aa gayi studies vghere nahi ki kya?

Ritika: Ye sun k ritika k chehre pai maayusi dekhta hu pr wo apne aap ko sambhalti huyi..Nahi studies chaalu hai thodi economic condition ki wajah se Externally taiyaari kr rahi hu…

Me: Oh I see...Tum kuch pareshaan si dekh rahi ho any problem.

Ritika: Hadbadhaate hue Nahi...nahi to I am fine..aapko esa kyun lagaa..

Me: Mai logo ki aankhe pdhna janta hu specially ladkiyon ki…

Ritika: To aapne galat pdhi aankhe..mai to thik hu mujhe koi pareshaani nahi hai..

Me: Pakki baat hai…

Ritika: Haa..nazare churaate hue..

Me: Abhi bhi kuch chupa rahi thi..pr maine ignore kiya..Achaa vese kahaa pai rehti ghar pai kese aati jaati ho..

Ritika: Local Bus mai..bus ka naam aate hi firse kuch sad hone lagi lagi pr usne show nahi kiya..

Me: Achaa tum pehle se hi itni khubsoorat ho ya..makeup ka kamaal hai..

Ritika: Ese sawaal ki umeed nahi thi..pehle to aankhe badi ho gayi..phir sharmaane lagi, mai makeup nahi lagaati(sharmaate hue hi boli).

Me: Oh achaa..Ye dekho isko mishti ki taraf dikhaate hue kitna makeup lagaa k aati hai..Kyu sahi bol rahaa hu na mishti..

Mishti: Ha ha..ek dum sahi..

Usko pataa bhi nhi humaari kya baate ho rahi bas ha mai haa milaadi.

Idhar hum dono hasne lage..to mishti confuse ho gayi esa to kya bola usne..

Abhi ritika has rahi thi to mai usi ko dekh rahaa tha..ek dum cute lag rahi thi..jab ritika ko lagaa ki mai usi ko dekh rahaa hu to ek dum chup ho gayi aur sharmaane lagi..tabhi ek customer aata hai...do khoobsurat or educated auntiyaan thi..Yes mam how may I help you

Aunty-1: I want to buy a necklace or usse match hoti hui earrings..

Me: Kya budget hai aapka..

Aunty-1: Dont worry about budget..

Me: Tab to aapko yahaa se achi quality kahi nahi milegi..ritika zaraa wo solitaire mai new design aaye hai wo nikaalna..

Me: Ye dekhiye auntyji humaare showroom k best 3 pieces hai ye..jaise aunties ne ye dekha..

Aunty-1: unki aankhe dekh k hi pataa chal gayaa unko ye psnd aa gaye hai..wo log pahen k dekhte hai kuch 10-15 min discuss krte hai fir bolte hai mujhe ye dono pieces de do..kuch discount milega..

Me: Best choices hai mam jitne aap dono beautifull ho utne hi beautifull choices hai aapki, ye sun dono thoda sharmaane lag jaate hai, Chalo aapne do psnd kiye hai to aapke liye 5% discount. Dono necklace kuch 3-3.5L k aas paas k necklace the

Aunty-1: Thank You, Pehle bhi ek do baar aayi thi kharidne pr itne jldi kabhi choice nahi kr paayi variety itni aapke paas to..

Me: Thank You, Mam aayiega fir se, Wahaa pai aapko bill pay krna hoga..Kaka..5 ishaare krke kaka ko bataa diya ki inka 5% discount lagaana hai..

Ritika: Waah sir itni jldi maine kabhi customer ko satisfy hoke jaate hue nahi dekha..
Me: Apna apna talent hai bhai..

Ritika thoda hasne lagi..

Me: Chalo ab mai chaltaa hu, phir milenge, Friends…? Ritika ki taraf haath badhaate hue..Ritika bhi smile krke mujhse haath milaati hai..

Aur phir mai whaa se nikal jata hu aur piche jabtak mai Ritika k aankho se ojhal nhi ho ho gayaa tab tak meri taraf dekhti hi rahi..

Mai flat pai pahochta hu to jahaa bike park krta hu wahi paas mai hi sanjana bhi apni activa park kr rahi hoti hai..

Me: Hi kesi ho..dard kesa hai

Sanjana(sharmaate): Oh shut up...btw kal ki party kesi rahi

Me: Bahot bdhiya..we missed you..

Sanjana: Awww..

Ese hi idhar udhar ki baate kr ke hum lift k paas pahochte hai..jaise hi hum lift mai jaate..mujhe kuch shararat sujhti hai to pehle to mai dekhta koi floor pai rookne to nahi waali lift..wo mere thoda piche khadi kuch baat kr rahi thi..jaise hi lift uppar jaane lagi to turatn piche mud k sanjana ko lift k corner pai lagaaya or kiss krne lagaa.. Pehle to wo ek dum shock ho gayi apne aapko chudaane lagi pr phir wo bhi mera saath dene lagi..humaara kiss wild hone lagaa..hum dono ek dusre hotho ko chus rahe the..ki tabhi lift ruki 7th floor pr to hum turant alag ho gaye pr kisi ne bahaar se darwaza nahi khola..to fatafat apne aapko sahi kiya..or 8th floor pai ruki lift..to sanjana ek baar fataafat mere hotho pai hoth chuaa k nikal gayi...shaam ko milte hai..

Mai smile krte hue darwaza bndh krta hu aur ghar pai chalaa jata hu...
nice update bhai
 
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