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I know bahot wait karaya but workload kaafi thaa...

Guys please let me know ye agent names (Phoenix, Knight, etc.) mai confusion to nahi ho rahi...if ho rahi hai to Mai Jo unke asli naam hai wahi use karunga.

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Update 20: Team Caught

Ab tak:
Daksh(Team k satellite phone k channel pai): Alert! Or bande aa rahe hai abhi abhi or cellular phones k traces mile hai.

Flash & Shadow: Who was that phoenix?

Sonic: What the fuck...how he joined our private channel?

Aage:

Secret Base

Idhar mai bas wait kr rahaa tha or wait krte krte meri aankh lag gayi and tabhi firse red alert hua kyunki computer pr maine esa program banaya tha ki jo area maine mark kiya hua hai usme agar or koi naye phone k traces enter krte hai to mujhe alert dega to wahaa or 10-15 phone k traces mile jo shayad kisi vehicle mai Factory ki taraf hi jaa rahe the.

To maine sidha phone lagaya Roy sir ko

Me: Sir team is in danger aur bando ko jaate hue dekha maine factory side we need to inform the team about it, any idea they are active on which radio frequency.

Roy: De to dunga but its very protected tum pahoch nahi paaoge channel tk.

Me: Sir humaare paas koi aur options nahi hai to warn them let me try and also I think we have to give them a backup.

Roy: ok, will get back to you.

Or phone cut ho jata hai...or kuch 5 minute mai mere paas frequency aa jaati hai. To mai pehle to normally connect krne ki koshish krta hu to koi chinese k bolne ki aawaz aati to waapis cut krke try krta hu to abhi koi russian awaaz aati hai to aise hi alag alag tarike se try krta hu but hr baar signal bounce ho rahaa tha..ye sab mai pehle cyber rules k andr rehk try kr rahaa tha but usme kamyaab nahi ho paya to mujhe thode rules break krne pade or hack krne ki try krne lagaa kuch 15 min jaise lage mujhe code taiyaar krne mai or phir maine trace kiya to abhi bhi bounce ho raha tha but abhi sirf india mai ho rahaa tha to maine kuch changes kiye or fir connect kiya to is baar perfectly connect hua to kuch firewall bich mai aagaya but thats not big deal usko toda or connect kr k bola.

Me: Alert! Or bande aa rahe hai abhi abhi or cellular phones k traces mile hai.
Itna bola or connection tut gayaa pataa nhi kya bich mai aaya or fir try kiya connect krne ka to mai connect nhi kr paya ulta mera code corrupt ho gayaa.

Me(apne aap se): OMG that was insane this much security. Milna padega isse jisne ye code banaya.

Me(Phone pr): Sir maine msg to pahocha diya what about backup.

Roy: I am going in, Do you want to join?

Me(Chair pr se khade hote hue): Wait what really, say it ki ye koi mazaak nahi hai.

Roy: No I am serious.

Me: I have been waiting for this for a long time.

Roy: You can access the red room, wahaa se jo bhi jaruri hai wo lelo and meet me at jungle.

Me: What really...ok I will be there.

So red room wahi hai jahaa pai mujhe jaane ka access nahi hai or mujhe pataa bhi nahi hai ki andar kya hai to chalo chalte hai red room ki taraf.

“Knock Knock D is here” ye bolte hi red room k door ka lock open hone ki awaaz aayi to door khola to andhera tha pr jaise ek paanv andar rakhaa room thak thak krte hue room ki saari lights chaalu hui to meri aankhe khuli ki khuli reh gayi….

Chaaro taraf wall pai showpiece ki tarah armours & weapons lage hue the alag alag type k or ek taraf side mai corner pai ek mannequin(dummy) pr kuch black color ki tshirt thi uske uppar leather jacket, black jeans muh pai lagaane wala kuch mask jaise tha inshort assasin and agent ka mishran jaisa kuch suit tha upper se assasin jaise feeling aa rahi thi niche se agent waali. Or ek bike bhi thi dikhne mai sports bike thi pr usme kuch alag type k buttons bhi the jo kya work krte hai no idea.

Pehle to maine wo kapde pehne fir kuch do guns li jo maine ek belt pehna tha usme do compartment the wahaa rkhi fir ek knife maine pant pr ek jagah thi wahaa lagaaya fir kuch magazine(bullets) rkhi usi belt mai ek compartment tha wahaa rakhi or fir jacket pehna to abhi sab dhak chuka tha abhi jacket andar ki side kuch bomb rkhne ki jagajh thi dono side to maine wahaa 2 smoke bomb daale. Fir ek bag liya jisme maine kuch rifle guns li or kuch bombs liye and then bike pr betha or start ki to awaaz hi itni mst thi uski mai kuch seconds vroom vroom krke uski awaaz hi sun rahaa tha pr fir bike chlaayi or usko leke piche se ek raasta tha usme badhaa ye ek khufiya raasta hai andar jo thoda dur khulta hai wo maine rasta kbhi try nahi kiya tha kyunki aaj pehli baar mai field pai jaa rahaa tha or wo rasta password se hi khulta hai to jaise mai darwaza se bahaar nikla to tunnel jaisa kuch tha to maine kuch meter wo tunnel cross kiya or phir ek darwaza aaya or side mai ek screen lagi hui thi jahaa se darwaaze k piche ka pataa chal rahaa tha..mtlb agar koi ho to bahaar nahi nikal na hai aise viraan hai pr kua pataa by mistake koi aa jaaye to..to abhi clear tha bahaar ka view to mai nilkla jungle ki taraf jahaa team thi abhi us bike pai choti screen jaisa kuch lagaa hua tha jispr maine pehle hi coordinates set kiya to us screen pai google map jaise rastaa bataa rahaa tha...abhi mai screen pai buttons dekh rahaa tha usme fire ka symbol tha to maine wo ek baar try krne k liye press kiya to bike mai dono side se kuch gun jaise niklne lagaa to maine use stop kr diya to fir andar chalaa gaya or ek symbol kuch nitro boost ka tha to ye to mujhe pataa tha kya hota to maine wo press kiya bhaagi bike full speed mai kuch 10 minutes mai jungle k paas waale area mai tha abhi wahaa pahocha jahaa sir k coordinates the to maine kuch ek minute wait kiya or tabhi sir bhi nazar aaye ek car mai jinhone ek baar mujhe dekh k ek taraf ishara to mai bhi us taraf bdh gayaa…

Abhi chalte hai fir se team k paas maine unko warn kiya uske baad

Me: Alert! Or bande aa rahe hai abhi abhi or cellular phones k traces mile hai.

Flash & Shadow: Who was that phoenix?

Sonic: What the fuck...how he joined our private channel?

Phoenix: Abhi yeh important nahi Sonic trace karo it should be you to find these things not him.

Sonic: Sorry Phoenix, yes I have found some traces.

Phoenix: ok, Sonic you and Flash stay wherever you are and handle them we need to go for Knight.

Sonic: Yes

Thodi der baad

Phoenix: Flash & Sonic can you see the factory from your location

Flash: Yes

To abhi kuch aisi position thi ki factory k bahaar pehra ek dam kadak tha sb factory k aage k raaste pai hi pehra de rahe the jo side hum the or kisi ki nazar idhar udhar nahi ho rahi thi means agar thodi bhi movement hoti hai to puri factory ko pataa chal jaayega but ab jo hai wo hai pr abhi inki reinforcement nahi aaye thi to that was good kuch 20 log the factory mai bahaar 6 the or bache hue andar.

Phoenix: Beast you and me will shoot jo gate k paas pehra de rahe hai unko, Shadow you hide and jab hum shoot kr rhe ho andhadhoon to tum bhi shoot krna but without revealing your location agar situation out of control ho jaaye then only act accordingly and Flash on 3 2 1 shoot the snipers jitne ho ske utne without revealing your location, Flash you have to distract bande jo abhi or aane waale hai piche se and Sonic if situation goes fully out of control call for the reinforcement.

Phoenix: 3 2 1

Flash pehle 1 bande ko udata hai with silencer to kisi goli chalne ka pataa nahi chalta pr jab roof wala 1 bande ko goli lagti hai to wo samjh jaate hai pr jaise uske paas wala dusra kuch act krne ki koshish krta hai tb tk wo bhi ram pyara ho jata hai or phir baaki 3 apna cover lete hai but tab tk ek bande k or goli lagti but luckily bach jata hai kynki suke kandhe pai lagti hai

Or idhar phoenix or beast ak47 leke aage bdhte hue tut padte hai andhaadhoon to saamne kuch samaj paate usse pehle to 4 dher ho jaate hai ek side mai bhaagta cover lene to use shadow shoot krti hai or idhar 6th bandaa cover lene mai kaamyab ho jata hai pheonix ko ek goli chuke nikal jaati hai and ab uppr se bhi goliyaan baras ti hai to beast cover le leta hai or ek upper waala banda jo cover mai tha flash k pr abhi beast ko angle mil chuka tha to usne shoot kr diya idhar jaise upper ek bande ko lagti hai jo cover mai tha to ek bandaa jo us taraf hi tha usko lagtaa cover blow to wo dusra cover hone k liye jaise hi nikalta flash ki goli usko bhi dher kr deti hai ab upper bhi ek bachaa tha niche bhi ek or sab cover mai the but unko pheonix and beast ki location hi pataa thi and flash k paas already angle nhi tha shoot krne ka to shadow ne pehle chupte hue angle liya or niche jo bandaa tha uske kandhe pai lagi to wo ek taraf gira jisse shadow ko fir se angle nahi mila to idhar se beast ne uski khopdi khol di...Bichara kuch samajh hi nahi paya kya hua ab bachaa tha ek jisko only flash hi sambhaal sktaa tha kunki wo jis position pai tha wahaa niche se angle nhi mil sktaa tha.

Pheonix: Flash & Shadow cover us we are going in..

Abhi jaise phoenix nikalne ki koshish krta hai to upper se goli chalti hai to pheonix fir se cover mai ho jata hai or udhar flash ko jaise angle mila usne shoot kiya but miss ho gayaa or wo abhi bhi bacha hua tha but abhi flash and shadow constant uske aas paas goli chalaa rahe the or idhar phir se pheonix and beast factory ki taraf bdhte hai or is baar factory k aaju baju diwaal k sahare khade ho jaate hai..abhi sab goliyaan chalni bndh ho gayi to upper waale bande ne thoda jaankh ne ki koshish ki to usko koi nahi dikha to wo thodi der or wait krta hai jab use koi nahi dikhta to wo angle change krke dekhne ki koshish krta hai or boom idhar mil jata hai flash ko angle and 11 down ab bache hai 12.

Flash: Phoenix incoming, kuch 4 gaadiyaan hai.

Phoenix: Keep them busy factory tak aane na paaye it's your responsibility, Shadow tum factory k piche ya side se koi dusra rasta hoga jahaa se Knight gayaa ho wahaa se gusne ki koshish karo pr kisi ko pataa na chale and do not take action jahaa tak situation out of control na ho.

Flash & Shadow: ok.

Phoenix: Break the door.

Beast ne kuch C-4 Explosive door pai lagaaye or hum dono thoda piche ho gaye and booooommmmm…Jaise hi darwaza tuta goliyaan chalni shuru ho gayi to dono ne thoda wait kiya or jab wo log reload krne lage to dono ne turant andhadhoon firing krte hue apni position exchange ki sirf ek ko goli haath pai chu k nikli kyunki saare cover mai the

Abhi factory k andar ki thodi position bataa du to kuch 6-7 jitne log darwaaze k saamne cover mai apni bandook taane khade hai.

Shreekanth: Aap nikaliye Bhaai piche k raaste se mai handle kar loonga in logo ko..and maine aur bando ko bhi bula liya hai to koi chinta ki baat nahi hai

Boss(Gusse mai): Malik hu mai malik, Sab ka bas ek hi maalik wo hai malik ghantaa koi kuch nahi bigaad sktaa mera

Shreekanth: Bhaai aapki baat sahi hai abhi wkht nahi aaya k aap apni identity release kare…

Malik: Shreekanth ka galaa pakad te hue...Muje mat sikha kya krna kya nahi..

Shreekanth (Atakte hue): Ji...jiji bhaai….or khaansne lag jata hai, Mai sab thik kr dunga bhaai aapka mission fail nahi hoga mera vada hai pr aap abhi niklo yahaa se mission jyada important hai in logon ko to mai dekh lunga…or agar kuch hota hai mujhe to aap ise contact kr lena sab arrange krvaa dega..

Malik: Tu jiye mare mujhe koi lena dena nahi pr agar mission ko kuch bhi huva...to tera pura khandan kothe pai nazar aayega soch lena…

Shreekanth: Ji Ji bhaai..(or Malik nikal jata hai) apne dusre bandon ko kehte hue hosh mai aaya ya nahi wo kutta…

Bhaai hosh mai to aa gayaa pr abhi kuch bol nahi rahaa sirf maar khaa rahaa or us saand ko maar ki koi asar hi nahi ho rahi.

Mai dekhta hu usko chal..ye log ground floor pai ek room mai baate kr rahe the...Abhi ye log baat kr hi rahe the ki tabhi first floor pai goliyaan chalni lagi or 2 log maare gaye or sabhi ne apni cover position le li pr do bande first floor k hi dusre room se nikle or Shadow pai goli chalaane lage to shadow cover k liye fir se room mai gus gayi jahaa se Knight ne entry li thi factory mai...To is golibaari mai ground floor pr jo bande the unka dhyaan first floor ki taraf tabhi…
Phoenix and Beast ne entry maari or firing krte hue cover le liya jisme 3 bande or dher ho gaye or idhar shreekant sidhiyon k paas tha to wo bachne k liye sidhiyon se first floor pr chlaa gayaa jahaa Knight ko rakhaa hua tha..

Idhar fir se ground floor goliyaan chalti hai jisme Beast ko or Pheonix ko dono ko goli lagti hai pr isme unka ek aur bandaa mara gayaa.

Shreekanth(Jor se chilaate hue): Ab koi bhi apni jagah se nahi hilega nahi to Knight ko thok dungaa haath upper krke bahaar niklo saare…

Ye sunte hi Beast phoenix ki taraf dekhta..phoenix thoda sochta hai kuch aur possibility k liye..Tabhi fir se awaaz aati Mai sirf teen tak ginunga…

1…..2…..

Phoenix: ruko kuch mat karna Knight ko..

Shreekant: Boys take their guns and bluetooth bhi nikaal do in dono k Phoenix or Beast ki taraf point krte hue or iska bluetooth nikaal k mujhe do..

Or abhi teeno ground floor pr gunpoint Pai haath upper krte hue khade the...
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Update 21: Shreekant Down

Ab tak:
Phoenix: ruko kuch mat karna Knight ko..

Shreekant: Boys take their guns and bluetooth bhi nikaal do in dono k Phoenix or Beast ki taraf point krte hue or iska bluetooth nikaal k mujhe do..

Or abhi teeno ground floor pr haath upper krte hue khade the…

Aage:
Shreekant(Bluetooth pr): Shushant & Nazma lower your guns mujhe pataa hai tum log bhi yahi ho...Come to factory in max. 5 mins. otherwise team will die one by one.

Chalo chalte hai hum udhar jab dusra convoy aa rhaa hota hai 4 six-seater gaadiyan back to back aa rahi thi ek line mai..

Flash ka nishana ab convoy ki taraf hi tha first nishana usne sniper se first gaadi pai tier pai nishana lagaya to gaadi ek dum second gaadi waala sambhal pata usse pehle first waale se takkar ho gayi ye piche aa rahi dono gaadiyone break mara to thodi slip hui third gaadi aadi ho gyi or 4th waali sidhi..or jaise third waali gaadi aadi hui flash ek aur goli chalata hai jo sidha gaadi k baaju waala jo tha uski khopdi chirte hue driver k kandhe pai lagti hai jaise hi ye hota 4th wala reverse leke dusre side ko nikal jata hai ye kuch thodi duri pai ho rahaa tha 300-350 m dur Flash se to third wala abhi gaadi bhagaane ko hota hai ki ek aur goli lagti hai jo third gaadi k driver k haath ko lagti hai..idhar abhi teeno gaadi se bande bahaar nikalte hai aur idhar udhar dhundhte hai ki kahaa se goliyaan aa rahi tabhi ek phone nikaal ke phone krne ko hota uska phone dur gir jata hai ye goli maari thi Sonic ne ye gaadi waalo paas aa gayi thi Flash ne distraction hi isiliye kiya tha ki factory thoda se thoda dur ye log ruk jaaye or tab tak rokke rakhe jab tak Sonic inke paas na pahoch jaaye..fir Sonic bhi shuru huyi M16 se firing krna jisse kam se kam do bande gaye or baaki ab ped ka ya gaadi ka cover leke goli chlaa rahe the abhi goli chalaa rahi hoti hai k ek gaadi boom krke blast hoti hai kyunki Sonic ne ek goli maari thi first gaadi k petrol tank pr jisse uss gaadi k paas jo 2 bande cover le rahe the wo bhi saath mai ude or idhar Sonic ko bhi kandhe pai ek goli lagi to wo jo cover mai thi ped k piche ab wo puri tarah chup jaati hai or idhar se ye log usi ped k aas paas goli chlaa rahe the tabhi in logo pai chali piche se goliyaan jo maari flash ne kyunki wo bhi ab yahaa aa gayaa tha to in gundo ko kuch samajh nahi aaya to or 3 bande gaye aur udhar se fir se Sonic ne goliyaan chalaayi to ab jo bande jahaa cover liye hue the wahi chup jaate hai…

Flash(Sonic se ishare mai): Hold fire and take cover thodi der wahaa mahol shaant ho jata hai...to gunde nikal k jo dono ped the unpai fire krne lage..

To flash jo ped k piche chupa hua tha wo pehle niche beth ta hai or gaadi k petrol tank pai goli maarne k liya angle dhundhta hai jo use mil jata hai kyunki gunde uppar goli chalaa rahe the to unko flash k beth ne k pataa nahi chaltaa hai to wo bahar nikal sidha shoot krta hai 3rd gaadi k petrol tank pr or phir se cover mai or jo third gaadi k paas 3 bnde cover liye khade the unme se 2 boom krte hue ude or ek banda door fenkaya pr use sirf chot lagi. Abhi bache the 8 bande. Pr koi bhi ab koi bevkoofi nahi kr rahaa tha or koi bhi 2nd gaadi k paas nahi khadaa tha tabhi jo gaadi reverse gayi thi wo opposite side se aati mtlb jidhar Sonic khadi thi udhar se or sidha shoot krti hai sonic pai pr wo pehle hi samajh jaati hai ki piche se koi gaadi aa rahi hai to kud jaati pr fir bhi use paanv pai goli lagti hai or kisi patthar se sonic ka sir takrata hai…

Flash(Bluetooth pr): Sonic are you ok...Sonic are you ok…

Sonic tuti huyi awaaz mai yes I am ok.

Flash: Take cover sonic, I will handle this bastards. Or gusse mai bahaar nikal daudta hua firing krta hai kyunki ab dhyaan sabka bhatka tha 4th gaadi aayi uspai to abhi 1 bandaa or gayaa or dusre ped ka cover le leta hai Flash pr fir kuch kr nahi pata kyunki ab sab gunde sync mai cover se bahaar nikal k ak47 se andhadhoon flash pai goliyaan chalaa rahe the jisse flash ko moka hi nahi mil rahaa tha kuch krne ka tabhi ek Bike full speed mai flash k side aati hai or us bike ki side se banduk nikli huyi thi jahaa se goliyaan chal rahi thi ye kisi ko expect nahi tha to sab bike pr goliyaan chlaane lage pr mujhe rk bhi nahi chuyi usme hi 4 bande ko bike ne hi bhoond diya kyunki abhi sab log cover se bahaar nikal kr goliyaan chalaa rhe the or baaki bache logo ne cover le liya tha...idhar Flash ye dekh k hakka bakka reh jata hai…

To aur thoda flashback mai chalte hai aur jab Roy sir ki gaadi or meri bike jungle mai saath saath team ko dhoondhne k liye bdh rahe the ki tabhi car blast hone ki awaaz hoti hai to roy or mai us taraf jaate jahaa se awaaj aayi thi slowly bdh rahe the ki tabhi koi nazar aata hai jo gusse mai daudte hue goliyaan chalaa rhaa tha aur dusre ped pai cover le leta hai..

Roy(Bluetooth pr mujhse): Yahi rok do aur mai jaisa kehta hu vesa karo..

Me: ok Sir.

Roy: Tumhe full speed mai bike ko unki taraf daudana hai or bike k aage jo fire ka nishaan wala button hai wo dabana hai pr usse pehle abhi bike pr aage jo shield ka button hai wo press karo..

Jab maine wo press kiya to bike pr piche se kuch shield jesa nikalta hai jo bulletproof hai puri bike aage tak dhak jaati hai convertible car mai jaise nikalta hai bilkul vese pr sirf upper se dhakta hai aaju baaju open rickshaw jaise.

Jaise hi tum jaaoge tum bhi kisi ped ka cover le lena fir jaise hi wo log tum dono pr goli barsaayenge piche se mai full race mai gaadi ko leke sidha us second waali gaadi pr takraaunga or jaise hi ye ho tum unpr fir se goliyaan chala na jisse mai gaadi se bahaar nikal saku..

Me: Done sir nice plan.

To same aisa hi execute hota hai mai bhi ek ped ka cover le leta hu or jo ek aur bandaa mujhe ped cover lete hue dikhta hai use bhi shoot kr deta hu ab bache the fir se 8. Aur idhar ab hum dono pr flash or mujhpr goliyaan chalti hai ki ek aur gaadi aati hai full speed mai aur sidha slip maarti second gaadi k pass aur khidki se ek haath nikaalte hue Roy sir goliyaan chalaa rahe the to fir se unko kuch smaj pata usse pehle unke 2 bande goli se gaye aur 1 slip maarte samay bich mai aaya to wo udta hua gira to maraa to nahi pr kuch krne layak bhi nahi bachaa. Jaise hi gaadi rukti hai mai unpe goliyaan barsaane lagtaa hu or Roy sir gaadi se bahaar nikalkar daudte hue cover mai aate hai ab humaare paas teen angle the or wo abhi bhi 5 the..

Flash to abhi kya hua wahi analyze kr rahaa tha ki Roy sir ko dekha sab samajh aa gayaa or wo bhi ab goli maarne lagaa isi shooting mai 2 log maare jaate hai pr usme Flash ko ek aur goli lagti hai aur tabhi Sonic bhi hosh mai aati hai to wo kuch samjh ne ki koshish krti phir use uske thodi duri ek bandaa shooting krta hua nazar aata hai to wo apne paas se ek chaaku nikaal ti hai sidha jaake uske gale pai lagtaa hai...or tabhi wo kisi pure kaale kapde pehne hue kisiko chup chup k goliaan chlaate dekhti abhi uske paas kuch nahi tha to chupte chupaate uske piche gale pai ek chop maarti hai to wahi behosh ho jata hai aur fir wo uski gun leke 2 or gundo ko tapka deti hai…

Sonic(Bluetooth pr): All dead.

Flash: Roy sir all dead.

Roy: Where is other team?

Flash: Sir wo log factory ki taraf gaye hai Knight ko bachaane..Knight ko un logo ne pakad liya hai..

Flash: Sir wo dusra ladkaa kahaa gayaa jo aapke saath aaya tha…

Roy: Are ha..D...D...kahaa gaye..Oh no kahi kuch ho to nahi gayaa aaj uska pehla mission tha. Flash & Sonic find him…D...D….

Me: Sir mai yahaa hu dard mai sir pr haath rakhte hue…

Roy: Sir pataa nahi kisi ne piche haath se kuch mara to behosh ho gayaa..

Sonic confusion mai kabhi mujhko to kabhi Roy sir ko dekhte hue..abhi maine apni shakal nahi dikhaayi thi kyunki uspe abhi bhi mask lagaa hua tha or full black kapdo mai khdaa..

Sonic: Who is he sir..?

Roy: Meet Agent D...meri tarf ishara krte hue and then sonic ki taraf ishara krte hue Meet Agent Sonic and he is Agent Flash..

Main dono se haath milaate hue nice to meet you…

Sonic: Sorry sir wo maine hi D ko mara mujhe lagaa ye bhi un logo k saath hai..to meri taraf dekhte Sorry D…

Me: Wo to achaa hua koi weapon nahi tha aapke paas nahi to Aaj mere pehle din pr hi kat liya hota mai..

Sonic thodi sharmida si smile krte hue..

Tabhi Flash and Sonic k bluetooth pr awaaz aati hai..Shreekanth aur flash chilata hai...Bastard…..

Roy: Kya hua flash..

Flash: Sir unhone puri team ko pakad liya agar 10 minute mai factory k paas nahi pahoche to wo maar dega sab ko..

Roy: Don’t worry, mujhe pataa chal gayaa tha aisa kuch hoga..

Roy: Here is plan tum and Sonic dono van leke aage chaloge tum D bike leke inke exact piche ese chaloge jaise unhe lage ki sirf van aa rahi or kuch nahi.. Ek sniper and gun mujhe do if anything goes wrong I will back you up. Jaise hi van factory k gate k andar jaane ko ho tum turant bike bahaar nikaal k firing shuru karoge..to wo log bokhla jaayenge and then rest you guys know. Common hurry move move…

Fir vese Sonic and Flash van leke aage chalte hai mai unse exact piche lag k bike chalaa rahaa tha...fir jaise hi saamne factory ka tuta hua gate dikhta hai wahaa andar clear dikh rahaa tha gate ek dum saamne 3 bande bandook taane khade the 3 team pr bandook taane khade the and 1 Knight pr taane khadaa tha and Shreekant betha tha ek chair pr…

To jaise van gate ka paas pahoch ti ha mai nikal ta hu side se firing shuru kr deta hue jisme 2 bande jo saaamne khade the wo dher ho jaate hai ek dusri taraf kudta hai pr tabhi flash apni speed badhaate hue jo bandaa kuda uspe chadaa deta hai and Pheonix, Shadow and Beast pehle to ye dekh k shock ho jaate hai pr apne aap ko normal krk turant wo bhi gulati maar k teeno k paanv khich dete hai jinse teeno dham kr ke girte hai or bandook bhi door pheka jaati hai un logo ki aur idhar Knight ko thoda bahot hosh tha to wo bhi situtation samajh k jo bandaa uske piche bandook taane khadaa tha usko jor se sar piche ki side krke uske gote pai maarta hai kyunki haath bandhe hue the..pr abhi bhi shreekant haar nahi maan rahaa tha thehra to NIA agent hi na.. To wo ek aur goli maarta hai Knight k pero pai…

Shreekanth (sabko jor se chilla k): ruk jaao nahi to agli goli sidhi iske sir ke aar paar hogi...sab fir se rook jaate hai pr jo bache bande the wo to uthne k haalat mai hi nahi the..kyunki jo teen the unka abhi bhi sar chakraa rahaa tha jor se pair khiche jaane ki wajah sir k bal gire the..or knight wala bandaa to apne gote pakad k bethaa tha..

To shreekant Knight ko khich k car ki taraf bdhta hai or jaise gaadi ka darwaza kholne ko hota hai ki ek goli sidhi uske khopdi k aar paar..

Kaise..? to hua ye ki car gate k saamne hi thi and Roy sir sniper gate k taraf hi taane the jaise shreekant ko jaate hue dekha sidha shoot kr diya..

Phoenix, Shadow and Beast fir shock…

Shadow: Iski maa ka ye ho kya rahaa hai..

Phoenix: Language shadow..

Shadow: Sorry phoenix muh se nikal gayaa..

Roy: Mai bataa ta hu...Pehle Sonic Knight ko dekho is he fine..Beast in bache logo ko baandh do..

To fir Roy sir ne sab bataya, kese maine phone kiya, kaise team k private channel pai msg bheja, kaise dusre convoy ko khatam kiya..

Phoenix: Nice work D..First mission and you have done much good work..Hope will work more together..

Me: Sure sir, Thank you..

Shadow: Apni shakal to dikhaao D…

Roy: No Shadow abhi nahi ye to emergency thi isiliye maine saath liya or koi bandaa nahi tha...to abhi iski identity chupi rahe usi mai achaa hai…

Me: Sir where is my informer and Malik.

Phoenix: Un bache hue logo se..kahaa hai wo bandaa jisko ye shreekant leke aaya tha..

Aadmi1: Wo us room mai hai, ab tak to mar bhi gayaa hoga…

Phoenix: Shadow dekho to…and bataa Malik kahaa hai..

Aadmi1: Kon Malik sahaab, hum kisi malik ko nahi jaante..

Fir phoenix maarte maarte puchta hai fir kuch nahi bolte to…aadmi1 ko shoot kr dete hai..fir aadmi2 se abhi bataayega kahaa malik

Shadow: sir critical hai jaldi hospital le jana hoga…

Roy: Shadow, Sonic Knight and isko leke Headquarter pahocho...D you also go home subah hone aayi hai..will take care of your informer...Beast and Flash take care of these bodies.

Me: ok, sir.

Aadmi2: Sahaab nahi pataa hum...or boom kopdi khul jaati hai..

Tisre se tu bataayega kuch...abhi trigger dabaane waale hi hote..

Aadmi3: Sahaab wo pehle hi chalaa gayaa…

Phoenix: Kahaa chalaa gayaa..

Aadmi3: Wo nahi maalum..abhi phir se phoenix gun point krta hai to..Sahaab mai sach keh rahaa hu mujhe nahi maalum..

Phoenix: Achaa thik hai..Kyu aaya wo yahaa pai..

Aadmi3: Sahaab wo summit summit kuch kr rahaa tha..isse jyada mujhe kuch nahi pataa sahaab..aur phoenix dono bache logo ko shoot kr deta hai.

Abhi Beast, Flash, Phoenix, Roy sab bodies factory mai rkhte and puri facory k aas paas rdx fit krte hai (jo ki factory mai hi milta hai bahot sara usi pataa chaltaa hai ki Malik ka kitna badaa plan hai) or sab log factory se bahaar nikal k boooommmm..factory ko uda dete hai..

Idhar mai bhi subah 6 bajne se pehle hi ghar pahoch jata hu...
 

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Update 21: Shreekant Down

Ab tak:
Phoenix: ruko kuch mat karna Knight ko..

Shreekant: Boys take their guns and bluetooth bhi nikaal do in dono k Phoenix or Beast ki taraf point krte hue or iska bluetooth nikaal k mujhe do..

Or abhi teeno ground floor pr haath upper krte hue khade the…

Aage:
Shreekant(Bluetooth pr): Shushant & Nazma lower your guns mujhe pataa hai tum log bhi yahi ho...Come to factory in max. 5 mins. otherwise team will die one by one.

Chalo chalte hai hum udhar jab dusra convoy aa rhaa hota hai 4 six-seater gaadiyan back to back aa rahi thi ek line mai..

Flash ka nishana ab convoy ki taraf hi tha first nishana usne sniper se first gaadi pai tier pai nishana lagaya to gaadi ek dum second gaadi waala sambhal pata usse pehle first waale se takkar ho gayi ye piche aa rahi dono gaadiyone break mara to thodi slip hui third gaadi aadi ho gyi or 4th waali sidhi..or jaise third waali gaadi aadi hui flash ek aur goli chalata hai jo sidha gaadi k baaju waala jo tha uski khopdi chirte hue driver k kandhe pai lagti hai jaise hi ye hota 4th wala reverse leke dusre side ko nikal jata hai ye kuch thodi duri pai ho rahaa tha 300-350 m dur Flash se to third wala abhi gaadi bhagaane ko hota hai ki ek aur goli lagti hai jo third gaadi k driver k haath ko lagti hai..idhar abhi teeno gaadi se bande bahaar nikalte hai aur idhar udhar dhundhte hai ki kahaa se goliyaan aa rahi tabhi ek phone nikaal ke phone krne ko hota uska phone dur gir jata hai ye goli maari thi Sonic ne ye gaadi waalo paas aa gayi thi Flash ne distraction hi isiliye kiya tha ki factory thoda se thoda dur ye log ruk jaaye or tab tak rokke rakhe jab tak Sonic inke paas na pahoch jaaye..fir Sonic bhi shuru huyi M16 se firing krna jisse kam se kam do bande gaye or baaki ab ped ka ya gaadi ka cover leke goli chlaa rahe the abhi goli chalaa rahi hoti hai k ek gaadi boom krke blast hoti hai kyunki Sonic ne ek goli maari thi first gaadi k petrol tank pr jisse uss gaadi k paas jo 2 bande cover le rahe the wo bhi saath mai ude or idhar Sonic ko bhi kandhe pai ek goli lagi to wo jo cover mai thi ped k piche ab wo puri tarah chup jaati hai or idhar se ye log usi ped k aas paas goli chlaa rahe the tabhi in logo pai chali piche se goliyaan jo maari flash ne kyunki wo bhi ab yahaa aa gayaa tha to in gundo ko kuch samajh nahi aaya to or 3 bande gaye aur udhar se fir se Sonic ne goliyaan chalaayi to ab jo bande jahaa cover liye hue the wahi chup jaate hai…

Flash(Sonic se ishare mai): Hold fire and take cover thodi der wahaa mahol shaant ho jata hai...to gunde nikal k jo dono ped the unpai fire krne lage..

To flash jo ped k piche chupa hua tha wo pehle niche beth ta hai or gaadi k petrol tank pai goli maarne k liya angle dhundhta hai jo use mil jata hai kyunki gunde uppar goli chalaa rahe the to unko flash k beth ne k pataa nahi chaltaa hai to wo bahar nikal sidha shoot krta hai 3rd gaadi k petrol tank pr or phir se cover mai or jo third gaadi k paas 3 bnde cover liye khade the unme se 2 boom krte hue ude or ek banda door fenkaya pr use sirf chot lagi. Abhi bache the 8 bande. Pr koi bhi ab koi bevkoofi nahi kr rahaa tha or koi bhi 2nd gaadi k paas nahi khadaa tha tabhi jo gaadi reverse gayi thi wo opposite side se aati mtlb jidhar Sonic khadi thi udhar se or sidha shoot krti hai sonic pai pr wo pehle hi samajh jaati hai ki piche se koi gaadi aa rahi hai to kud jaati pr fir bhi use paanv pai goli lagti hai or kisi patthar se sonic ka sir takrata hai…

Flash(Bluetooth pr): Sonic are you ok...Sonic are you ok…

Sonic tuti huyi awaaz mai yes I am ok.

Flash: Take cover sonic, I will handle this bastards. Or gusse mai bahaar nikal daudta hua firing krta hai kyunki ab dhyaan sabka bhatka tha 4th gaadi aayi uspai to abhi 1 bandaa or gayaa or dusre ped ka cover le leta hai Flash pr fir kuch kr nahi pata kyunki ab sab gunde sync mai cover se bahaar nikal k ak47 se andhadhoon flash pai goliyaan chalaa rahe the jisse flash ko moka hi nahi mil rahaa tha kuch krne ka tabhi ek Bike full speed mai flash k side aati hai or us bike ki side se banduk nikli huyi thi jahaa se goliyaan chal rahi thi ye kisi ko expect nahi tha to sab bike pr goliyaan chlaane lage pr mujhe rk bhi nahi chuyi usme hi 4 bande ko bike ne hi bhoond diya kyunki abhi sab log cover se bahaar nikal kr goliyaan chalaa rhe the or baaki bache logo ne cover le liya tha...idhar Flash ye dekh k hakka bakka reh jata hai…

To aur thoda flashback mai chalte hai aur jab Roy sir ki gaadi or meri bike jungle mai saath saath team ko dhoondhne k liye bdh rahe the ki tabhi car blast hone ki awaaz hoti hai to roy or mai us taraf jaate jahaa se awaaj aayi thi slowly bdh rahe the ki tabhi koi nazar aata hai jo gusse mai daudte hue goliyaan chalaa rhaa tha aur dusre ped pai cover le leta hai..

Roy(Bluetooth pr mujhse): Yahi rok do aur mai jaisa kehta hu vesa karo..

Me: ok Sir.

Roy: Tumhe full speed mai bike ko unki taraf daudana hai or bike k aage jo fire ka nishaan wala button hai wo dabana hai pr usse pehle abhi bike pr aage jo shield ka button hai wo press karo..

Jab maine wo press kiya to bike pr piche se kuch shield jesa nikalta hai jo bulletproof hai puri bike aage tak dhak jaati hai convertible car mai jaise nikalta hai bilkul vese pr sirf upper se dhakta hai aaju baaju open rickshaw jaise.

Jaise hi tum jaaoge tum bhi kisi ped ka cover le lena fir jaise hi wo log tum dono pr goli barsaayenge piche se mai full race mai gaadi ko leke sidha us second waali gaadi pr takraaunga or jaise hi ye ho tum unpr fir se goliyaan chala na jisse mai gaadi se bahaar nikal saku..

Me: Done sir nice plan.

To same aisa hi execute hota hai mai bhi ek ped ka cover le leta hu or jo ek aur bandaa mujhe ped cover lete hue dikhta hai use bhi shoot kr deta hu ab bache the fir se 8. Aur idhar ab hum dono pr flash or mujhpr goliyaan chalti hai ki ek aur gaadi aati hai full speed mai aur sidha slip maarti second gaadi k pass aur khidki se ek haath nikaalte hue Roy sir goliyaan chalaa rahe the to fir se unko kuch smaj pata usse pehle unke 2 bande goli se gaye aur 1 slip maarte samay bich mai aaya to wo udta hua gira to maraa to nahi pr kuch krne layak bhi nahi bachaa. Jaise hi gaadi rukti hai mai unpe goliyaan barsaane lagtaa hu or Roy sir gaadi se bahaar nikalkar daudte hue cover mai aate hai ab humaare paas teen angle the or wo abhi bhi 5 the..

Flash to abhi kya hua wahi analyze kr rahaa tha ki Roy sir ko dekha sab samajh aa gayaa or wo bhi ab goli maarne lagaa isi shooting mai 2 log maare jaate hai pr usme Flash ko ek aur goli lagti hai aur tabhi Sonic bhi hosh mai aati hai to wo kuch samjh ne ki koshish krti phir use uske thodi duri ek bandaa shooting krta hua nazar aata hai to wo apne paas se ek chaaku nikaal ti hai sidha jaake uske gale pai lagtaa hai...or tabhi wo kisi pure kaale kapde pehne hue kisiko chup chup k goliaan chlaate dekhti abhi uske paas kuch nahi tha to chupte chupaate uske piche gale pai ek chop maarti hai to wahi behosh ho jata hai aur fir wo uski gun leke 2 or gundo ko tapka deti hai…

Sonic(Bluetooth pr): All dead.

Flash: Roy sir all dead.

Roy: Where is other team?

Flash: Sir wo log factory ki taraf gaye hai Knight ko bachaane..Knight ko un logo ne pakad liya hai..

Flash: Sir wo dusra ladkaa kahaa gayaa jo aapke saath aaya tha…

Roy: Are ha..D...D...kahaa gaye..Oh no kahi kuch ho to nahi gayaa aaj uska pehla mission tha. Flash & Sonic find him…D...D….

Me: Sir mai yahaa hu dard mai sir pr haath rakhte hue…

Roy: Sir pataa nahi kisi ne piche haath se kuch mara to behosh ho gayaa..

Sonic confusion mai kabhi mujhko to kabhi Roy sir ko dekhte hue..abhi maine apni shakal nahi dikhaayi thi kyunki uspe abhi bhi mask lagaa hua tha or full black kapdo mai khdaa..

Sonic: Who is he sir..?

Roy: Meet Agent D...meri tarf ishara krte hue and then sonic ki taraf ishara krte hue Meet Agent Sonic and he is Agent Flash..

Main dono se haath milaate hue nice to meet you…

Sonic: Sorry sir wo maine hi D ko mara mujhe lagaa ye bhi un logo k saath hai..to meri taraf dekhte Sorry D…

Me: Wo to achaa hua koi weapon nahi tha aapke paas nahi to Aaj mere pehle din pr hi kat liya hota mai..

Sonic thodi sharmida si smile krte hue..

Tabhi Flash and Sonic k bluetooth pr awaaz aati hai..Shreekanth aur flash chilata hai...Bastard…..

Roy: Kya hua flash..

Flash: Sir unhone puri team ko pakad liya agar 10 minute mai factory k paas nahi pahoche to wo maar dega sab ko..

Roy: Don’t worry, mujhe pataa chal gayaa tha aisa kuch hoga..

Roy: Here is plan tum and Sonic dono van leke aage chaloge tum D bike leke inke exact piche ese chaloge jaise unhe lage ki sirf van aa rahi or kuch nahi.. Ek sniper and gun mujhe do if anything goes wrong I will back you up. Jaise hi van factory k gate k andar jaane ko ho tum turant bike bahaar nikaal k firing shuru karoge..to wo log bokhla jaayenge and then rest you guys know. Common hurry move move…

Fir vese Sonic and Flash van leke aage chalte hai mai unse exact piche lag k bike chalaa rahaa tha...fir jaise hi saamne factory ka tuta hua gate dikhta hai wahaa andar clear dikh rahaa tha gate ek dum saamne 3 bande bandook taane khade the 3 team pr bandook taane khade the and 1 Knight pr taane khadaa tha and Shreekant betha tha ek chair pr…

To jaise van gate ka paas pahoch ti ha mai nikal ta hu side se firing shuru kr deta hue jisme 2 bande jo saaamne khade the wo dher ho jaate hai ek dusri taraf kudta hai pr tabhi flash apni speed badhaate hue jo bandaa kuda uspe chadaa deta hai and Pheonix, Shadow and Beast pehle to ye dekh k shock ho jaate hai pr apne aap ko normal krk turant wo bhi gulati maar k teeno k paanv khich dete hai jinse teeno dham kr ke girte hai or bandook bhi door pheka jaati hai un logo ki aur idhar Knight ko thoda bahot hosh tha to wo bhi situtation samajh k jo bandaa uske piche bandook taane khadaa tha usko jor se sar piche ki side krke uske gote pai maarta hai kyunki haath bandhe hue the..pr abhi bhi shreekant haar nahi maan rahaa tha thehra to NIA agent hi na.. To wo ek aur goli maarta hai Knight k pero pai…

Shreekanth (sabko jor se chilla k): ruk jaao nahi to agli goli sidhi iske sir ke aar paar hogi...sab fir se rook jaate hai pr jo bache bande the wo to uthne k haalat mai hi nahi the..kyunki jo teen the unka abhi bhi sar chakraa rahaa tha jor se pair khiche jaane ki wajah sir k bal gire the..or knight wala bandaa to apne gote pakad k bethaa tha..

To shreekant Knight ko khich k car ki taraf bdhta hai or jaise gaadi ka darwaza kholne ko hota hai ki ek goli sidhi uske khopdi k aar paar..

Kaise..? to hua ye ki car gate k saamne hi thi and Roy sir sniper gate k taraf hi taane the jaise shreekant ko jaate hue dekha sidha shoot kr diya..

Phoenix, Shadow and Beast fir shock…

Shadow: Iski maa ka ye ho kya rahaa hai..

Phoenix: Language shadow..

Shadow: Sorry phoenix muh se nikal gayaa..

Roy: Mai bataa ta hu...Pehle Sonic Knight ko dekho is he fine..Beast in bache logo ko baandh do..

To fir Roy sir ne sab bataya, kese maine phone kiya, kaise team k private channel pai msg bheja, kaise dusre convoy ko khatam kiya..

Phoenix: Nice work D..First mission and you have done much good work..Hope will work more together..

Me: Sure sir, Thank you..

Shadow: Apni shakal to dikhaao D…

Roy: No Shadow abhi nahi ye to emergency thi isiliye maine saath liya or koi bandaa nahi tha...to abhi iski identity chupi rahe usi mai achaa hai…

Me: Sir where is my informer and Malik.

Phoenix: Un bache hue logo se..kahaa hai wo bandaa jisko ye shreekant leke aaya tha..

Aadmi1: Wo us room mai hai, ab tak to mar bhi gayaa hoga…

Phoenix: Shadow dekho to…and bataa Malik kahaa hai..

Aadmi1: Kon Malik sahaab, hum kisi malik ko nahi jaante..

Fir phoenix maarte maarte puchta hai fir kuch nahi bolte to…aadmi1 ko shoot kr dete hai..fir aadmi2 se abhi bataayega kahaa malik

Shadow: sir critical hai jaldi hospital le jana hoga…

Roy: Shadow, Sonic Knight and isko leke Headquarter pahocho...D you also go home subah hone aayi hai..will take care of your informer...Beast and Flash take care of these bodies.

Me: ok, sir.

Aadmi2: Sahaab nahi pataa hum...or boom kopdi khul jaati hai..

Tisre se tu bataayega kuch...abhi trigger dabaane waale hi hote..

Aadmi3: Sahaab wo pehle hi chalaa gayaa…

Phoenix: Kahaa chalaa gayaa..

Aadmi3: Wo nahi maalum..abhi phir se phoenix gun point krta hai to..Sahaab mai sach keh rahaa hu mujhe nahi maalum..

Phoenix: Achaa thik hai..Kyu aaya wo yahaa pai..

Aadmi3: Sahaab wo summit summit kuch kr rahaa tha..isse jyada mujhe kuch nahi pataa sahaab..aur phoenix dono bache logo ko shoot kr deta hai.

Abhi Beast, Flash, Phoenix, Roy sab bodies factory mai rkhte and puri facory k aas paas rdx fit krte hai (jo ki factory mai hi milta hai bahot sara usi pataa chaltaa hai ki Malik ka kitna badaa plan hai) or sab log factory se bahaar nikal k boooommmm..factory ko uda dete hai..

Idhar mai bhi subah 6 bajne se pehle hi ghar pahoch jata hu...
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Update 22: Confrontation

Ab tak:
Abhi Beast, Flash, Phoenix, Roy sab bodies factory mai rkhte and puri facory k aas paas rdx fit krte hai (jo ki factory mai hi milta hai bahot sara usi pataa chaltaa hai ki Malik ka kitna badaa plan hai) or sab log factory se bahaar nikal k boooommmm..factory ko uda dete hai..

Me: Idhar mai bhi subah 6 bajne se pehle hi ghar pahoch jata hu...

Aage:
Ghar pahoch ta hu to mom jagi hui thi

Mom: Ab aa rahe ho ghar...kis k ghar pai the raat bhar

Me: Aur kiske ghar Saurabh k ghar tha..achaa mai abhi jata hu exercise krne aapne shake banaake rakhaa hai na..

Mom: Haa kitchen se lele..

Me: Maine kapde change kiya or sando and track pahen k terrace pr aa jata hu...abhi kuch 1 ghantaa exercise krtaa hu ki Aarushi ki entry hoti..Aaj thoda jldi hi aa jaati hai.. Or mai idhar pasina mai bhiga hua tha jisse mere bicep chamak rahe the meri puri body expose ho rahi thi kyunki ek dum fitting waale kapde the..thode tight ho gaye the to..

Aarushi: Hi DK kaise ho..

Mai abhi thoda haanf rahaa tha to usko usi tone mai Hello Bhabhi..

Aarushi: Fir bhabhi..call me Aaru..

Me(mai smile krte hue): What?

Aarushi: I mean call me Aarushi.

Me: ok Aaru..thodi angdaayi lete hue..Aaj jldi kaise...

Jab angdaayi leta hu to aarushi pura upper se niche mujhe checkout krti hai..to maine jo bola wo uska sunaayi deta..to mai uske chutki bajaate hue..

Aaru: hadbadaate hue...Huh..kya?

Me: Maine bola aaj jldi kaise..

Aaru: Bas aise hi jldi uth gayi thi to aa gayi..

Me: Let's talk while jogging…

Aaru: Sure

Aur hum dono terrace ka pura chakkar lagaane lag jaate hai…

Me: Btw what you were before marriage..I mean what was your goals

Aaru: Oh I wanted to become a Fashion Designer..Course bhi kiya tha maine...but maire in laws thode conservative and upper se typical rajasthani family hai to they dont allow to do jobs..

Me: Oh...thats bad..pr to phir shaadi kyu ki..

Aaru: thodi mayus swar mai...wo papa ne arrange marriage krvaadi but Sanjay is too good he is very caring and nice but inka event management ka buisness hai to jyadatar bhaar hi rehte hai and btw starting mai to sirf saadi hi pahen ne dete the ghar mai but fir mere sasur chal base fir maine saas ko convince kiya dresses and all pahen k liye to tab jaake maane..

Me: Oh...btw you look much beautiful in saree..maine 2-4 baar dekha tha aapko..

Aaru: Oh..really..

Me: Maine jab saree mai dekha tha I have imagined in shiffon ki saree badi jachegi aap pai..flow flow mai mai bol to gayaa..

Aaru(sharmate hue ek jagah stop ho jaati hai): What?

Me: Nothing aur meri jogging chhalu hi hoti hai…

Aise hi idhar udhar baate krte krte hum 5 terrace k round kr lete hai and jab hum rukte hai to mai thoda haanf lag jata hu to shake ki bottle lete hu or pine lagta hu..or aaru bhi paani piti hai to uske hotho se ek paani line uske cleavage ki side jaa rahi hoti..ye kaafi hot moment tha mai ek aankh se ye dekhte hue shake pi rahaaa thaa..

But uska dhyaan nahi tha meri taraf aur fir usne turant swaal pucha..To Kal kya ho rahaa tha Kalpana aur tumhaare bich haa...meri taraf dekhta jab..

Jab ye sunta hu to shake muh se bahaar nikal ne ko hota pr use kaise bhi krke control kr leta hu to gale mai kuch fruit ya ingrdient tha wo fas jata hai to khaans ne lag jata hu..jab khaans leta hu to kehta hu..

Me: Oh mujhe late ho rahaa hai mai tumse baad mai milta hu..or turant mai nikal leta hu..niche..or abhi jldi niche utra hi tha k kisi se takraa jataa hu sidhi se utarte hi..to wo koi lady hoti hai to unko kamar se pakad k bachaa leta hu..as unhone saree pehni hoti hai or kamar ki jagah nangi thi to mere thode pasine se wet waale haath uspai lag jaate hai..and unhone sleveless and backless blouse pehna tha and baal bhi gile the to kaafi hot lag rahi thi..to guys ye thi Sharmili Aunty meri wanna be hone waali saas..Or abhi aise hi khade hue hi unki taarif kr deta hu..”Oh what a beauty aaj to mera din bahot achaa gujarne wala aapke darshan krke” to Sharmili aunty sharmaa jaati hai..

Sharmili Aunty: Oh kuch bhi..ab kya aise pakde rakhoge khdaa kro mujhe..

Me: Roz roz esi beauty ko pakdu aise moke thodi aate..

Sharmili: Mujhe dhakke dete hue khud sahi ho jaati hai..chal hat badmaash..Subah se aur koi nahi mila kya tujhe..

Me: Ab aap mil gayi to isse achi subah aur kya ho skti hai..

Tabhi ek ladki ki 9th floor se awaaz aati hai..Mummy..Mummy..

Me: Lo aa gayi hitler ki awaaz..

Sharmili: Shut-up wo koi hitler nahi..pataa nahi kya problem hai meri bachi se..

Me: Mujhe problem nahi hai aapki bachi se...aapki bachi ko problem hai mujhse..pataa nhi kya hai..

Sharmili: Oh tumhaare chakkar mai bhul hi gayi kyu aayi thi mai 10th floor pai..Hato mai jaraa Savita se milke aati hu..10th floor se chillaake beta aa rahi hu do minute..

Me: jaate jaate achaa kon wo khadoos aunty..Jo baat baat pai bolti hai uske jaise thodi acting krte hue...Kalmuho..Kide Pade tum logo pr

Sharmili: Haste hue fir ek dum serious lehje mai Shut-Up ok meri best friend hai wo..

Mere expression pichke hue aam jaise ho jata hai to...Sharmili aunty fir se haste hue..that was funny..

Aur fir mai ghar aa jata hua..

Mom: Aa gayaa tu...chal ab taiyaar hoja aur mere saath shop pai chal kuch kaam hai..

Me: Didi kahaa gayi..

Mom: Are aaj wo uske college mai kaam hai to wahi gayi hai..
 

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Update 22: Confrontation

Ab tak:
Abhi Beast, Flash, Phoenix, Roy sab bodies factory mai rkhte and puri facory k aas paas rdx fit krte hai (jo ki factory mai hi milta hai bahot sara usi pataa chaltaa hai ki Malik ka kitna badaa plan hai) or sab log factory se bahaar nikal k boooommmm..factory ko uda dete hai..

Me: Idhar mai bhi subah 6 bajne se pehle hi ghar pahoch jata hu...

Aage:
Ghar pahoch ta hu to mom jagi hui thi

Mom: Ab aa rahe ho ghar...kis k ghar pai the raat bhar

Me: Aur kiske ghar Saurabh k ghar tha..achaa mai abhi jata hu exercise krne aapne shake banaake rakhaa hai na..

Mom: Haa kitchen se lele..

Me: Maine kapde change kiya or sando and track pahen k terrace pr aa jata hu...abhi kuch 1 ghantaa exercise krtaa hu ki Aarushi ki entry hoti..Aaj thoda jldi hi aa jaati hai.. Or mai idhar pasina mai bhiga hua tha jisse mere bicep chamak rahe the meri puri body expose ho rahi thi kyunki ek dum fitting waale kapde the..thode tight ho gaye the to..

Aarushi: Hi DK kaise ho..

Mai abhi thoda haanf rahaa tha to usko usi tone mai Hello Bhabhi..

Aarushi: Fir bhabhi..call me Aaru..

Me(mai smile krte hue): What?

Aarushi: I mean call me Aarushi.

Me: ok Aaru..thodi angdaayi lete hue..Aaj jldi kaise...

Jab angdaayi leta hu to aarushi pura upper se niche mujhe checkout krti hai..to maine jo bola wo uska sunaayi deta..to mai uske chutki bajaate hue..

Aaru: hadbadaate hue...Huh..kya?

Me: Maine bola aaj jldi kaise..

Aaru: Bas aise hi jldi uth gayi thi to aa gayi..

Me: Let's talk while jogging…

Aaru: Sure

Aur hum dono terrace ka pura chakkar lagaane lag jaate hai…

Me: Btw what you were before marriage..I mean what was your goals

Aaru: Oh I wanted to become a Fashion Designer..Course bhi kiya tha maine...but maire in laws thode conservative and upper se typical rajasthani family hai to they dont allow to do jobs..

Me: Oh...thats bad..pr to phir shaadi kyu ki..

Aaru: thodi mayus swar mai...wo papa ne arrange marriage krvaadi but Sanjay is too good he is very caring and nice but inka event management ka buisness hai to jyadatar bhaar hi rehte hai and btw starting mai to sirf saadi hi pahen ne dete the ghar mai but fir mere sasur chal base fir maine saas ko convince kiya dresses and all pahen k liye to tab jaake maane..

Me: Oh...btw you look much beautiful in saree..maine 2-4 baar dekha tha aapko..

Aaru: Oh..really..

Me: Maine jab saree mai dekha tha I have imagined in shiffon ki saree badi jachegi aap pai..flow flow mai mai bol to gayaa..

Aaru(sharmate hue ek jagah stop ho jaati hai): What?

Me: Nothing aur meri jogging chhalu hi hoti hai…

Aise hi idhar udhar baate krte krte hum 5 terrace k round kr lete hai and jab hum rukte hai to mai thoda haanf lag jata hu to shake ki bottle lete hu or pine lagta hu..or aaru bhi paani piti hai to uske hotho se ek paani line uske cleavage ki side jaa rahi hoti..ye kaafi hot moment tha mai ek aankh se ye dekhte hue shake pi rahaaa thaa..

But uska dhyaan nahi tha meri taraf aur fir usne turant swaal pucha..To Kal kya ho rahaa tha Kalpana aur tumhaare bich haa...meri taraf dekhta jab..

Jab ye sunta hu to shake muh se bahaar nikal ne ko hota pr use kaise bhi krke control kr leta hu to gale mai kuch fruit ya ingrdient tha wo fas jata hai to khaans ne lag jata hu..jab khaans leta hu to kehta hu..

Me: Oh mujhe late ho rahaa hai mai tumse baad mai milta hu..or turant mai nikal leta hu..niche..or abhi jldi niche utra hi tha k kisi se takraa jataa hu sidhi se utarte hi..to wo koi lady hoti hai to unko kamar se pakad k bachaa leta hu..as unhone saree pehni hoti hai or kamar ki jagah nangi thi to mere thode pasine se wet waale haath uspai lag jaate hai..and unhone sleveless and backless blouse pehna tha and baal bhi gile the to kaafi hot lag rahi thi..to guys ye thi Sharmili Aunty meri wanna be hone waali saas..Or abhi aise hi khade hue hi unki taarif kr deta hu..”Oh what a beauty aaj to mera din bahot achaa gujarne wala aapke darshan krke” to Sharmili aunty sharmaa jaati hai..

Sharmili Aunty: Oh kuch bhi..ab kya aise pakde rakhoge khdaa kro mujhe..

Me: Roz roz esi beauty ko pakdu aise moke thodi aate..

Sharmili: Mujhe dhakke dete hue khud sahi ho jaati hai..chal hat badmaash..Subah se aur koi nahi mila kya tujhe..

Me: Ab aap mil gayi to isse achi subah aur kya ho skti hai..

Tabhi ek ladki ki 9th floor se awaaz aati hai..Mummy..Mummy..

Me: Lo aa gayi hitler ki awaaz..

Sharmili: Shut-up wo koi hitler nahi..pataa nahi kya problem hai meri bachi se..

Me: Mujhe problem nahi hai aapki bachi se...aapki bachi ko problem hai mujhse..pataa nhi kya hai..

Sharmili: Oh tumhaare chakkar mai bhul hi gayi kyu aayi thi mai 10th floor pai..Hato mai jaraa Savita se milke aati hu..10th floor se chillaake beta aa rahi hu do minute..

Me: jaate jaate achaa kon wo khadoos aunty..Jo baat baat pai bolti hai uske jaise thodi acting krte hue...Kalmuho..Kide Pade tum logo pr

Sharmili: Haste hue fir ek dum serious lehje mai Shut-Up ok meri best friend hai wo..

Mere expression pichke hue aam jaise ho jata hai to...Sharmili aunty fir se haste hue..that was funny..

Aur fir mai ghar aa jata hua..

Mom: Aa gayaa tu...chal ab taiyaar hoja aur mere saath shop pai chal kuch kaam hai..

Me: Didi kahaa gayi..

Mom: Are aaj wo uske college mai kaam hai to wahi gayi hai..
behtreen updaye mitr
 

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Hello Everyone :hello:

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of Xforum "The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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Good luck 4 ur 1st story.....

I wish everyone will like ur creatibity....

Keep going frnd.....
 
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