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Thriller WLHTA - The Serpent Of Underworld.

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Guys as you all know main jald he waapsi karne waala hun story pe but i need some help from you guys, itane din baad likhna thoda complicated hota hai kyunki itane din loop se bahaar tha main so agar tumlog Mein se koi free hai toh mujhe iss part ka ek overview chaahiye like pehle update se 281 update takk ka keval is part ka. Karna keval ye hai ki harr 30 Updates ka ek overview banao ki 1 se 30 updates k bich ye ye hua mota mota jo main cheejein hui hain unke baare Mein likho and then 30 se 60 Mein ye hua or aage 281 takk(keval iss part k baaki stories k nahi chahiye mujhe) . Agar koi ye kar lega toh mujhe thodi aasaani hogi likhne mein and main jaldi likh paaunga. Agar koi ye karna chaahta hai toh mujhe message karo Personal and batao mujhe ASAP, yahaan story pe post nahi karna only in messages. Thanks in advance..
 

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Humlog 15 minutes mein hospital pohanchey Ruhi mujhe gate par he milli..


Ruhi - What the fuck happened to you??Chaaku tumhe he laga tha??


Main - Yeah..


Ruhi - Shit.. Come in jaldi aa jaldi aa..


Main Ruhi k cabin mein aaya jo ground floor par he tha or wahaan aai meri yahaan ki favorite doctor, jo harr injury k baad mera ilaj karti hai yahaan.. Supriya naam tha uska..


Main-Waah madam long time no see..


Supriya - Toh achi baat haina, doctors jitana kam dikhein utana he acha hai..


Main-True..


Suriya - (Hanske) Knife??


Main-Oh yeah..


Supriya - Sit..


Main wahaan baitha tshirt uppar ki maine, ek nurse sab equipments le aai and suru hua mera treatment, ghaav saaf kiya usne pehle toh jisme bhenchod bhayanak pain hua mujhe.. Kya jalan hui hai bc... Mera phone iss bich baja jo Jiya ka tha..


Main-Yeah..


Jiya- Boss woh ladke k ghar par hun main yahan gaon mein, yahan uski maa hai bus usne bataya woh or uske Papa bike se hospital gaye hain, Dhiraj k cocaine treatment k liye..Aunty Bolrahi ki aapne he bola tha unko..


Main-Yeah, Ruhi k hospital.. Shit doctor aaram se..


Jiya - You good boss??


Main-Yeah minor injury.. I am fine tu bol


Jiya-Yes toh maine abhi uncle k pass call kiya toh unhone bataaya ki hospital pohanchney he waale hain wohlog just..


Main-Good.. Chal main dekhlunga tu wahin reh..


Call disconnected..


Main-Bike parking camera on kar toh..


Ruhi ne apni screen par parking camera on kiya..


Main - Yahin rehney dey..


Supriya - Jyaada deep cut nahi hai thankfully, blood bhi jyaada nahi lost hua thankfully.. Dawaai lagaake hard patti lagaa deti hun main 3-4 din jyaada heavy work nahi karna hai warna blood nikalega and firse same process karni padegi or fir staples lagaane padenge..


Main-Sure..


Supriya - Sure bola bola hai mujhe pata hai tumhe tikk k toh baithana he nahi hai...


Main-Kya karun yaar kaam he ye hai..


Rohit - Woh aagaya Dhiraj..


Maine screen par dekha toh Dhiraj ne bike park ki uncle uske sath they unhone guard se parking slip lee..


Main-Chalo, Ruhi ye ladka haina..


Ruhi-Cocaine?


Main-Yeah..


Ruhi - Samjh gayi.


Main-Main aaj Vinny se baat karke hospital k liye 15-20 guards arrange karwaadunga, temporarily.. Jarurat padegi tujhe inko kaabu rakhne k liye aise he bahot saare patients aane waale hain.


Ruhi-Koi na space he space hai apne pass, we can take care of them..


Main-Madam kya dawaai hai ye?? Itani jallan?? Fuckkkkk..


Supriya - It's good for you.. Yelo almost done..


Ruhi - Whats that.. What the fuck..?


Maine screen par dekha toh Dhiraj or uncle front door par they or kareeb 7-8 bandey fully masked Dhiraj ko pakkadke lejaane ki koshish kar rahe they, uncle k sath 2 Guards bhi bhaage bich bachaav mein lekin tabhi piche se or 4 bandey aaye jinhone guards or uncle ko piche fainka or unke uppar guns taan di..


Meri patti hui bhi nahi thi or main 1000 ki speed se bhaaga bahaar.. Front gate se kuddta hua nikala toh udhar se wohlog bahaar nikale or idhar parking side se Jatin uska bhai Chotu or 2-3 bandey or aarahe they..


Jatin - Bhai main aapko he phone ...


Main-Bhag maadarchod.. Bahaar.. Woh londey ko bacha..


Jatin or wohlog mere piche bhaage saamne 3 gaadiyaan thi unki, gaadi takk pohanchey se pehle maine ek ko pakkada Jatin wagairaah bhi tutt paddey..


Maine piche se uss bandey ki passli mein he punch maara, punch lagtey he woh mudda pistol liye hath mein lekin maine uske hath par he maara punch or pistol jhatke se ek side kardi usase and laat maari uske lawde k uppar woh niche girra or dusara banda uske Uppar se meri taraf jhapta maine usko bhi punch jadda munh k uppar ussne chaaku nikaala toh maine uska hath pakkada or usko apni taraf khincha or apna sir maara uske munh k uppar jisase woh pura chakra gaya toh maine maari laat usko jisase woh piche gaadi se takraaya tabtak unhone Dhiraj ko ek gaadi mein daal liya tha or woh gaadi nikali toh main uske piche bhaaga. Speed pakkad nahi paai woh gaadi because traffic tha toh main just uske piche he tha lekin tabhi sunroof se ek banda nikala pistol leke or bhenchod ne meri taraf aim kiya issliye main ek side kudd gaya..Woh nikal he jaatey lekin tabhi saamne se ek gaadi ne unko head on takkar maari.. Or woh sunroof waala banda saamne girra jaake front bonut k uppar .. Takkar maarne waali gaadi Jack ki thi usne mujhe dekh liya tha I guess..

Jack you are a God.. Holy shit..

Ab uss gaadi ki back seat par Dheeraj k alawa 2 bandey or they jinmein se ek toh sunroof se seedha bahaar nikal gaya tha or dusara bhi accident k impact se fans gaya tha, front waale dono bandey airbags open hone ki wajah se fans gaye they issliye maine turant khidki kholi or khinch k Dhiraj ko bahaar laaya, uske piche piche dusare bandey ne bhi bahaar aana caaha lekin maine Dhiraj ko nikaaltey he khidki ko maari laat or khdiki uss bandey ki khopdi mein lagi or main Dhiraj ko piche ki side le aaya Jack gaadi se uttara air bag se deal karke idhar wohlog bhi bahaar nikale or nikaltey he firing suru hogayi maine Dhiraj ko hospital k side mein bane ek juice corner k piche fainka or khud cover mein aaya.. Dusari taraf Jatin or uske bandon ne bhi firing suru kardi thi suru waale bando k uppar lekin wohlog bhaagne lage they, udhar Jack un gaadi waalon par firing kar raha tha..


Main-(Chilaake) Jatin.. Oh bhosdk jaane dey.. Jaane dey piche mattt jaa maadarchod.... Jaane dey.. Jack.. Jack.. Jack.. Bhaagne dey.. Jack.. Let them go..


Yahaan public bahot thi or wohlog bhaagna caah rahe they toh maine jaane diya unko main yahaan shootout nahi caahta tha kyunki mujhe jo caahiye tha woh ye ladka tha.. Meri baat sunke Jatin or baaki sabne firing roki waise hum easily jeet jaatey kyunki wohlog road par open mein they or humlog k pass cover tha lekin main logon ki life k sath nahi khelna caah raha tha or naa he mere pass gun thi..


Wohlog 2 gaadiyon mein he latak patak k gaye teesri gaadi Jack ne damage kardi thi, Jack ki Range Rover ko minor scratches he lage honge udhar inki sedan thi jo total hogayi thi..


Unke jaatey he maine Dhiraj ko uthaaya or usko hospital k main gate k andar laaya jahaan Ruhi Sam Ravi Rohit and doctor Supriya khaddey they..


Main-Sorry doctor.. Doobara patti karni padegi..


Supriya - You are insane you know that??


Main-Oh yeah totally..


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So guys as you all know this has been a crazy month in terms of updates, pichle 26 din mein maine 31 updates dediye hain that's like 8 updates per week so obviously uska main reason tha first main April mein 10 - 12 din updates nahi diye second or jo important reason maine bataya tha woh tha ki mere exams aane waale hain jo suru hone he waale hain and July First week takk chalenge so in 35 din k andar main updates kam he dunga, kaafi kam. So jabtak aarahe hain updates tabtak theek hai, lekin jab rukk jaaein toh samjh jaana main gayab hogaya. Main baar baar koi information post nahi karta toh khud samjh jaana updates nahi aaein toh ki i am busy..
So uske baad July mein humlog waapis focus karenge updates k uppar.

Obviously quota main pura kar he dunga so woh issue nahi hai.

Keep Supporting As always.

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Gajab Update AP Bhai
Literally kal se wait kar rha tha ke kia ho ga AP ka ab ja ke saans aya
To be Honest mereko lag rha hai ke Sandhya aur wo Pallavi dono Apni jo yeh Villian is ke sath Directly Involve hain like they are girls She is also a girl manta hoon yeh koi sahi logic nahi hai but I am getting a felling
 
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Humlog 15 minutes mein hospital pohanchey Ruhi mujhe gate par he milli..


Ruhi - What the fuck happened to you??Chaaku tumhe he laga tha??


Main - Yeah..


Ruhi - Shit.. Come in jaldi aa jaldi aa..


Main Ruhi k cabin mein aaya jo ground floor par he tha or wahaan aai meri yahaan ki favorite doctor, jo harr injury k baad mera ilaj karti hai yahaan.. Supriya naam tha uska..


Main-Waah madam long time no see..


Supriya - Toh achi baat haina, doctors jitana kam dikhein utana he acha hai..


Main-True..


Suriya - (Hanske) Knife??


Main-Oh yeah..


Supriya - Sit..


Main wahaan baitha tshirt uppar ki maine, ek nurse sab equipments le aai and suru hua mera treatment, ghaav saaf kiya usne pehle toh jisme bhenchod bhayanak pain hua mujhe.. Kya jalan hui hai bc... Mera phone iss bich baja jo Jiya ka tha..


Main-Yeah..


Jiya- Boss woh ladke k ghar par hun main yahan gaon mein, yahan uski maa hai bus usne bataya woh or uske Papa bike se hospital gaye hain, Dhiraj k cocaine treatment k liye..Aunty Bolrahi ki aapne he bola tha unko..


Main-Yeah, Ruhi k hospital.. Shit doctor aaram se..


Jiya - You good boss??


Main-Yeah minor injury.. I am fine tu bol


Jiya-Yes toh maine abhi uncle k pass call kiya toh unhone bataaya ki hospital pohanchney he waale hain wohlog just..


Main-Good.. Chal main dekhlunga tu wahin reh..


Call disconnected..


Main-Bike parking camera on kar toh..


Ruhi ne apni screen par parking camera on kiya..


Main - Yahin rehney dey..


Supriya - Jyaada deep cut nahi hai thankfully, blood bhi jyaada nahi lost hua thankfully.. Dawaai lagaake hard patti lagaa deti hun main 3-4 din jyaada heavy work nahi karna hai warna blood nikalega and firse same process karni padegi or fir staples lagaane padenge..


Main-Sure..


Supriya - Sure bola bola hai mujhe pata hai tumhe tikk k toh baithana he nahi hai...


Main-Kya karun yaar kaam he ye hai..


Rohit - Woh aagaya Dhiraj..


Maine screen par dekha toh Dhiraj ne bike park ki uncle uske sath they unhone guard se parking slip lee..


Main-Chalo, Ruhi ye ladka haina..


Ruhi-Cocaine?


Main-Yeah..


Ruhi - Samjh gayi.


Main-Main aaj Vinny se baat karke hospital k liye 15-20 guards arrange karwaadunga, temporarily.. Jarurat padegi tujhe inko kaabu rakhne k liye aise he bahot saare patients aane waale hain.


Ruhi-Koi na space he space hai apne pass, we can take care of them..


Main-Madam kya dawaai hai ye?? Itani jallan?? Fuckkkkk..


Supriya - It's good for you.. Yelo almost done..


Ruhi - Whats that.. What the fuck..?


Maine screen par dekha toh Dhiraj or uncle front door par they or kareeb 7-8 bandey fully masked Dhiraj ko pakkadke lejaane ki koshish kar rahe they, uncle k sath 2 Guards bhi bhaage bich bachaav mein lekin tabhi piche se or 4 bandey aaye jinhone guards or uncle ko piche fainka or unke uppar guns taan di..


Meri patti hui bhi nahi thi or main 1000 ki speed se bhaaga bahaar.. Front gate se kuddta hua nikala toh udhar se wohlog bahaar nikale or idhar parking side se Jatin uska bhai Chotu or 2-3 bandey or aarahe they..


Jatin - Bhai main aapko he phone ...


Main-Bhag maadarchod.. Bahaar.. Woh londey ko bacha..


Jatin or wohlog mere piche bhaage saamne 3 gaadiyaan thi unki, gaadi takk pohanchey se pehle maine ek ko pakkada Jatin wagairaah bhi tutt paddey..


Maine piche se uss bandey ki passli mein he punch maara, punch lagtey he woh mudda pistol liye hath mein lekin maine uske hath par he maara punch or pistol jhatke se ek side kardi usase and laat maari uske lawde k uppar woh niche girra or dusara banda uske Uppar se meri taraf jhapta maine usko bhi punch jadda munh k uppar ussne chaaku nikaala toh maine uska hath pakkada or usko apni taraf khincha or apna sir maara uske munh k uppar jisase woh pura chakra gaya toh maine maari laat usko jisase woh piche gaadi se takraaya tabtak unhone Dhiraj ko ek gaadi mein daal liya tha or woh gaadi nikali toh main uske piche bhaaga. Speed pakkad nahi paai woh gaadi because traffic tha toh main just uske piche he tha lekin tabhi sunroof se ek banda nikala pistol leke or bhenchod ne meri taraf aim kiya issliye main ek side kudd gaya..Woh nikal he jaatey lekin tabhi saamne se ek gaadi ne unko head on takkar maari.. Or woh sunroof waala banda saamne girra jaake front bonut k uppar .. Takkar maarne waali gaadi Jack ki thi usne mujhe dekh liya tha I guess..

Jack you are a God.. Holy shit..

Ab uss gaadi ki back seat par Dheeraj k alawa 2 bandey or they jinmein se ek toh sunroof se seedha bahaar nikal gaya tha or dusara bhi accident k impact se fans gaya tha, front waale dono bandey airbags open hone ki wajah se fans gaye they issliye maine turant khidki kholi or khinch k Dhiraj ko bahaar laaya, uske piche piche dusare bandey ne bhi bahaar aana caaha lekin maine Dhiraj ko nikaaltey he khidki ko maari laat or khdiki uss bandey ki khopdi mein lagi or main Dhiraj ko piche ki side le aaya Jack gaadi se uttara air bag se deal karke idhar wohlog bhi bahaar nikale or nikaltey he firing suru hogayi maine Dhiraj ko hospital k side mein bane ek juice corner k piche fainka or khud cover mein aaya.. Dusari taraf Jatin or uske bandon ne bhi firing suru kardi thi suru waale bando k uppar lekin wohlog bhaagne lage they, udhar Jack un gaadi waalon par firing kar raha tha..


Main-(Chilaake) Jatin.. Oh bhosdk jaane dey.. Jaane dey piche mattt jaa maadarchod.... Jaane dey.. Jack.. Jack.. Jack.. Bhaagne dey.. Jack.. Let them go..


Yahaan public bahot thi or wohlog bhaagna caah rahe they toh maine jaane diya unko main yahaan shootout nahi caahta tha kyunki mujhe jo caahiye tha woh ye ladka tha.. Meri baat sunke Jatin or baaki sabne firing roki waise hum easily jeet jaatey kyunki wohlog road par open mein they or humlog k pass cover tha lekin main logon ki life k sath nahi khelna caah raha tha or naa he mere pass gun thi..


Wohlog 2 gaadiyon mein he latak patak k gaye teesri gaadi Jack ne damage kardi thi, Jack ki Range Rover ko minor scratches he lage honge udhar inki sedan thi jo total hogayi thi..


Unke jaatey he maine Dhiraj ko uthaaya or usko hospital k main gate k andar laaya jahaan Ruhi Sam Ravi Rohit and doctor Supriya khaddey they..


Main-Sorry doctor.. Doobara patti karni padegi..


Supriya - You are insane you know that??


Main-Oh yeah totally..


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Ek ladki gun point kar gayi doosri ladki chali thok gayi. Missing 2.0? Ab dekhtey hai Dhiraj se kiya khabar milegi ab us ladki ka pakda Jana bhi zaroori hai shayd usse koi khabar nikal jaye.
 
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