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Itachi_Uchiha

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Mai puri kosis karunga ki 1 Tarik Tak naya Update post kar du.
Ab naye update se story puri mere hisab se chlegi. To ab se week me ek hi update aaya karega. Kosis karunga ki Kam din me bhi update de du.
Aur sbs important baat is story me actual me sex nahi hai. To mi aap logo se puchna chta hu ki kya mi story me sex add Karu ya jise story chal Rahi hai waise chlne du.
nd ab se mujhe apne update par Kam se Kam 60 likes cahiye hi cahiye.
 
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UPDATE NO - 12
( MONEY AT THE DOOR STEP )


NEXT MORNING,


‘Restoration Pill with 100% effectiveness for sale today’

Mayor ke is notice ne puri Fragrant Sky City mein toofan sa laa diya tha. Notice publish hone ke half hour mein hi puri City mein ye news fail gayi thi.


“ Mayor 100% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills Sell karna chahta hai. Kya ye sach hai ? ”


“ Mujhe nahi lagta ye fake news hai, Mayor kabhi bhi fake news spread thodi karenge. Agar wo aisa karte hai to unki reputation ko hi nuksaan hoga. Kuch din pehle JADHAV Family ne 70% effectiveness wali Pills sell karna start kar di thi aur ab Mayor ki Pill Shop ne 100% effectiveness wali Pill sell karna start kardi hai. Dono Family ke bich kabhi bhi War start ho sakti hai. ”


“ Main aaj tak koi Restoration Pill nahi dekhi hai jo 100% effectiveness wali ho. Maine suna hai ki ye sirf strong power hi contain nahi karti balki isme koi impurities bhi nahi hoti. Har warrior ka dream hota hai aisi Pills consume karne ka. ”


“ Chalo chalke dekhte hai. Agar ye sach hai to kya pata humey us Great Alchemist ko dekhne ka mauka bhi mil jaaye. ”


Mayor ki taraf se ek single announcement ne puri City mein aag laga di thi. Logo mein tarah tarah ki baate hone lagi thi. Almost har koi Mayor ki Pill Shop ki taraf jaa raha tha. Inme se kayi log to aise they jo is Pill ko afford nahi kar sakte they lekin fir bhi sirf ek baar Pill ke darshan ho jaye wo bhi bahut they inlogo ke liye. Mayor Family aur JADHAV Family ke bich ka competition bhi ek reason tha jis liye log jaa rahe they.


Crowd Mayor ki Pill Shop ke bahar ikahta ho gaya tha. Jyada der na karte huye, ek lambi wooden table ko Pill Shop ke bahar rakh diya gaya. Us table ke piche fat old man ek peacefull look ke sath baith gaya. Chang ne Entrance ke bahar ek bada sa board laga diya aur jor se chillaya jisse puri crowd ko uski awaz sun gayi.


Chang “ Jo log Restoration Pills kharidna chahte hai, wo isey dhyan se padhe. ”


Jaise hi Chang ki baat khatam huyi waise hi Crowd ek dum saant ho gayi aur board ko padhne lagi.



{100% Effectiveness Restoration Pill – 4 Gold Coins}

{two 60% Effectiveness Restoration Pill + 3 Gold Coins = one 100% effectiveness Restoration Pill}
{3 Pills Per Person Everyday}


Board pe saaf tarike se Restoration Pill buy karne ke rules they. Restoration Pill buy karne ke liye money chahiye hota hai. Aur jab aap Money bhi de rahe ho tab bhi aapko rule follow karna padega. Ye Fragrant Sky City mein pehli baar ho raha tha.


Halanki, Restoration pill itni attractive thi ki log buying condition pe koi complain nahi kar rahe they. Normal warriors ko ye decision sahi lag raha tha, nahi to baaki Rich Families ek bhi Pill nahi chorti in logo ke liye.


“ 100% effectiveness ki Restoration Pill 4 Gold Coin mein, ye pichli Restoration Pill se 4 times jyada Price hai. ”


“ Price ek dum fair hai. In pills ki value previous Pills se nahi ki jaa sakti. Cultivate karne mein already dikkat hoti hai aur Restoration Pills ko consume karte huye unki impurities ko bhi sath-2 nikalna bahut time kharab karta hai. Lekin agar hamare paas 100% effectiveness wali Pills ho to humey impurities ki koi chinta nahi hogi, hamara time bhi bachega. ”


Pill Shop ke bahar hi Crowd aapas mein Board aur Pills ko leke discuss kar rahi thi. Jo trade rules they unhone successfully ek large amount mein logo ko attract kar liya tha. Agar Mayor Family sach mein 100% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills provide karti hai to kon bewkoof JADHAV Family ki Pill Shop se Pills lega.


“ kya sach mein yaha 100% effectiveness wali Restoration Pill milti hai ? ”


Kisi ne Crowd mein se chillake pucha.


Chang “ Hesitation band karo, agar Pill buy karni hai to line banao nahi to bhaag jaao yaha se. ”


Chang ne apni finger Crowd pe point karte huye kaha. Uske Face pe ab ek arrogant look tha.


“ Mujhe ek Pill kharidani hai, ye rahe 4 Gold Coin. "


Crowd mein se ek Fat man nikal ke aaya jisne fancy kapde pehne they, usne 4 Gold Coins table pe rakhte huye ye baat boli. Ye fatty bhi Fragrant Sky City ke kuch rich persons mein se ek tha. Ye abhi 7th level QI JING Realm ke peak pe tha. Agar ye ek 100% effectiveness wali Restoration Pill consume kar leta hai to 8th level mein breakthrough aram se kar lega.


4 Gold Coin Fragrant Sky City mein koi choti amount nahi thi. Kayi normal Families ye bhi afford nahi kar sakti thi yaha. Is World mein ek saying hai, ‘Cultivation ke path pe sirf Talent hi matter nahi karta, money bhi talent ke jitna hi matter karta hai.’ Agar koi person talented hai aur uske paas money nahi hai to uska cultivation 10 times jyada different ho jaata hai rich logo se.


“ Alright, ye rahi tumhari Restoration Pill, thik se pakdo. ”


Fat old man ne ek palm size ka box us fatty ko dete huye kaha. Us fat man ne bhi jaldi se box khola aur Pill ko bahar nikal liya.


“ Ye sach mein 100% effectiveness wali Restoration pill hai. Hahaha, 4 Gold Coins iske mukable kuch bhi nahi hai. ”


Fat man ne excitement mein chillate huye kaha. Jo waha pe crowd thi unhone ne bhi pill dekhi aur uska color dekha jo unhone pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. Saari Crowd jaan gayi thi ek pill ek dum excellent hai. Aur isi ke sath Crowd mein jitne bhi log Pills buy karne mein interested they unhone bahut jaldi se line bana li kahi Pill khatam na ho jaaye. Fat Old man jor se hasne lag gaya tha. Pills bhi excellent thi aur public bhi interested thi. Pills ki demand bhut jyada thi wo log jald hi out of stock hone wale they. Lekin unhone aaj aaj mein hi 2 Month jitna profit kama liya tha.


“ Shit, ye log 100% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills buy kar rahe hai apne Cultivation ke liye. Jo ye 70% wali Pills maine buy ki thi kal ye ek dum trash hai inke saamne. Mujhe in Pill ko trade kar dena chahiye. ”


Ek warrior ne aage aake two 70% wali Restoration Pills nikali aur 3 Gold Coins jo 100% wali restoration Pill mein exchange karne ke liye they.


“ Hum JADHAV Family ki Pill Shop ki Pills ko trade nahi karte. ”


Fat old man ne bina hesitation ke ye baat bol di. Har Pill Shop ki Pills pe ek unique logo hota hai jisse koi bhi bata sakta hai ki ye Pill kaha se buy ki gayi hai. Aur filhaal is City mein sirf JADHAV Family hi 70% wali Restoration Pills produce kar rahi thi.


Wo warrior pehle to thoda gussa hua. Lekin fir usey jaldi hi Mayor Family aur JADHAV Family ke bich ki rivalary ka realization ho gaya.


Chang “ Sabhi log dhyan se suno hum log JADHAV Family ki Pills ke sath trade nahi karte hai. Agar JADHAV Family ki Pills hai to unhe wapis kar aao fir yaha aana. ”


Jaise hi Chang ne ye chillake kaha waise hi kayi logo ko dukh hone laga jinhone kal hi JADHAV Family se Pills kharidi thi.


Next 3 din tak Mayor ki Pill Shop ne bhut acha perform kiya. Inki pills ki deman bhut jyada thi ye baar baar out of stock ho jaa rahe they. In 3 dino mein Jai, Skinny old man aur Atharva kaafi busy they. Jai aur skinny old man 60% wali pill produce kar rahe they aur Atharva unhe merge karta jaa raha tha. Ye uske liye bhut asan kaam tha bilkul pani pine jaisa, bus usey ek dikkat thi ki uska time waste ho raha tha.


In 3 dino mein famous JADHAV Family ki Pill shop pe ek single Customer nahi aaya tha. Fragrant Sky City mein jo Pill ka business tha wo ek tarfa Mayor Family ka ho gaya tha, yaha tak ki jo Families JADHAV Family ke support mein thi wo bhi Mayor Family ki Pill Shop se Pills buy kar rahe they. Humans bhut realistic hote hai. Jab baaki sab 100% wali pills ke sath Cultivate kar rahe aur wo khud 70% wali Pills ke sath to wo obviously piche reh jaayenge baaki sab se. Aur is Cultivation World mein koi kisi se ek din bhi piche nahi rehna chahta, ek din ke gap mein to enemy saamne wali ko jad se ukhaad de.


Fourth day ki Morning ko Mayor Family ke paas bahut saari 100% effectiveness wali Pills ho gayi jo 1 Month tak bhi khatam na ho aur ye sirf Atharva ki wajah se ho Paaya tha jo din raat Pills merge kar raha tha. Is subah pill shop ki entrance pe table ke piche 4 chairs thi ek pe Fat Old Man baitha tha aur doosri pe Atharva aur unke bagal mein hi skinny old man aur Jai baithe they. Atharva ke thik Piche Chang khada tha kisi bodyguard ki tarah.


Chang “ Young Master, in dono hamara business aasmaan chuu raha hai. ”


Atharva “ not bad. ”


Kuch hi der mein Pills sell hona start ho gayi aur 1 hour ke baad hi Atharva ko waha baithe-2 aalas aane lage. Usi time Counter pe do warrior aaye jinhone black dress pehna hua tha aur sir pe ek bamboo hat pehen rakha tha jisse unke face thik se nahi dikh rahe they. In dono Warriors ne ek dum se Atharva ki attraction khich li thi.


“ Mujhe 3 Restoration Pills chahiye, ye rahe 12 Gold Coins. ”


Jo bamboo hat ke niche se voice aayi thi wo kafi loud aur arrogant thi aur voice se bhi kisi young man ki lag rahi thi. Atharva ne Glance mein pata kar liya ki ye young man QI JING Realm ke 9th level pe hai aur doosra warrior Early QI HAI Realm mein.


Atharva “ Apni bamboo hat utaro. ”


Atharva ne ek lazy voice mein ye bola.


“ Maine yaha sirf Restoration Pills buy karne aaya hu. Tumhe kyu meri bamboo hat se problem hai ? ”


Usi Young man ne doobara jawab diya lekin is baar uski voice mein arrogance aur badh gayi thi.


Atharva “ Kyuki Fragrant Sky City ki situation ke hisaab se agar tum apni identity chupa ka Pills buy kar rahe to tum JADHAV Family se belong karte ho. ”


Atharva ne face pe smile liye ye baat boli. Wo asani se bata sakta tha ye kon hai kyuki wo log apni identity hide karke pills buy karke buy kar rahe they. Doosri City ke warrior yaha aate nahi kyuki ye sabse small City hai aur is City ke Warrior ko apni identity chupane ki jaroorat nahi agar tum JADHAV Family ka hissa na ho to.


“ humph ”


Young man ne ek cold humph kiya aur jaise hi wo apni hat nikalne ko hua to doosre person ne usko rok liya.


“ Second Uncle, ab disguise ki koi jarurat nahi hai. Waise bhi inhe pata to lag hi chukka hai. ”


Us young man ne apni bamboo hat utar di. Wo ek handsome 18 years ka young man tha. Jiske face pe ek arrogant look tha jaise wo paida hi is look ke sath hua ho. Doosre ne bhi ek sigh ke sath apni hat utar di wo ek 50 year ka old man tha aur ek strong QI uski body se sense ki jaa sakti hai.


Atharva ne us Young man ki taraf dekha aur apni memory mein search kiya ki ye kon hai ?
Ye JADHAV Family ke Gyan ka beta hai, jo ek Genius hai, wo 18 ki age mein QI JING Realm kr peak mein pahuch gaya tha aur kisi bhi time QI HAI Realm mein breakthrough kar sakta tha. Aise person ko arrogant hone ka pura hak hai, lekin ye bhut bura tha ki wo galat time pe, galat jagah pe aut galat person ke saamne arrogance dikha raha tha.


“ Humph, First Son. Tum jaroor yaha pareshani khadi karne aaye ho na ? ”


Jai ne cold look ke sath us young man ko dekhte huye kaha, aur table se wo Coins uthake faikne ko hua lekin Atharva ne rok liya.


Atharva “ Uncle Jai, jo hamare door step pe money aaya hai usey kyu faikna chahte ho ? "
" Yaha se aaj koi waapis nahi jaayega. ”









TO BE CONTINUED……..
Money making update bhai
Kuchh gold coins hame bhi dedo 😃😃😃
 

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Money making update bhai
Kuchh gold coins hame bhi dedo 😃😃😃
Are bhai mai likh raha hu to mujhe to mil nahi rahe ju ko kaha se de du. :laugh:
Fantastic update bro lage raho
Aapka sukriya Rohit1988 bhai.
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Nice update bro keep updating the post
Aapka sukriya అరుణ్ కుమార్ bhai.
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Nice update bro weting for next update bro
Aapka sukriya piredeep singh Meena bhai.
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Aapka sukriya Smith_15 bhai.
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Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Itachi_Uchiha bhai....
Nice and lovely update....
Aapka sukriya parkas bhai.
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Yea achhi deal he
Ab kuch to naya karna hi padega bhai.iske liye kam se kam koi mere ko to late update dene ko blam nahi karega.
Nice update
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Nice update
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UPDATE NO - 12
( MONEY AT THE DOOR STEP )


NEXT MORNING,


‘Restoration Pill with 100% effectiveness for sale today’

Mayor ke is notice ne puri Fragrant Sky City mein toofan sa laa diya tha. Notice publish hone ke half hour mein hi puri City mein ye news fail gayi thi.


“ Mayor 100% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills Sell karna chahta hai. Kya ye sach hai ? ”


“ Mujhe nahi lagta ye fake news hai, Mayor kabhi bhi fake news spread thodi karenge. Agar wo aisa karte hai to unki reputation ko hi nuksaan hoga. Kuch din pehle JADHAV Family ne 70% effectiveness wali Pills sell karna start kar di thi aur ab Mayor ki Pill Shop ne 100% effectiveness wali Pill sell karna start kardi hai. Dono Family ke bich kabhi bhi War start ho sakti hai. ”


“ Main aaj tak koi Restoration Pill nahi dekhi hai jo 100% effectiveness wali ho. Maine suna hai ki ye sirf strong power hi contain nahi karti balki isme koi impurities bhi nahi hoti. Har warrior ka dream hota hai aisi Pills consume karne ka. ”


“ Chalo chalke dekhte hai. Agar ye sach hai to kya pata humey us Great Alchemist ko dekhne ka mauka bhi mil jaaye. ”


Mayor ki taraf se ek single announcement ne puri City mein aag laga di thi. Logo mein tarah tarah ki baate hone lagi thi. Almost har koi Mayor ki Pill Shop ki taraf jaa raha tha. Inme se kayi log to aise they jo is Pill ko afford nahi kar sakte they lekin fir bhi sirf ek baar Pill ke darshan ho jaye wo bhi bahut they inlogo ke liye. Mayor Family aur JADHAV Family ke bich ka competition bhi ek reason tha jis liye log jaa rahe they.


Crowd Mayor ki Pill Shop ke bahar ikahta ho gaya tha. Jyada der na karte huye, ek lambi wooden table ko Pill Shop ke bahar rakh diya gaya. Us table ke piche fat old man ek peacefull look ke sath baith gaya. Chang ne Entrance ke bahar ek bada sa board laga diya aur jor se chillaya jisse puri crowd ko uski awaz sun gayi.


Chang “ Jo log Restoration Pills kharidna chahte hai, wo isey dhyan se padhe. ”


Jaise hi Chang ki baat khatam huyi waise hi Crowd ek dum saant ho gayi aur board ko padhne lagi.



{100% Effectiveness Restoration Pill – 4 Gold Coins}

{two 60% Effectiveness Restoration Pill + 3 Gold Coins = one 100% effectiveness Restoration Pill}
{3 Pills Per Person Everyday}


Board pe saaf tarike se Restoration Pill buy karne ke rules they. Restoration Pill buy karne ke liye money chahiye hota hai. Aur jab aap Money bhi de rahe ho tab bhi aapko rule follow karna padega. Ye Fragrant Sky City mein pehli baar ho raha tha.


Halanki, Restoration pill itni attractive thi ki log buying condition pe koi complain nahi kar rahe they. Normal warriors ko ye decision sahi lag raha tha, nahi to baaki Rich Families ek bhi Pill nahi chorti in logo ke liye.


“ 100% effectiveness ki Restoration Pill 4 Gold Coin mein, ye pichli Restoration Pill se 4 times jyada Price hai. ”


“ Price ek dum fair hai. In pills ki value previous Pills se nahi ki jaa sakti. Cultivate karne mein already dikkat hoti hai aur Restoration Pills ko consume karte huye unki impurities ko bhi sath-2 nikalna bahut time kharab karta hai. Lekin agar hamare paas 100% effectiveness wali Pills ho to humey impurities ki koi chinta nahi hogi, hamara time bhi bachega. ”


Pill Shop ke bahar hi Crowd aapas mein Board aur Pills ko leke discuss kar rahi thi. Jo trade rules they unhone successfully ek large amount mein logo ko attract kar liya tha. Agar Mayor Family sach mein 100% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills provide karti hai to kon bewkoof JADHAV Family ki Pill Shop se Pills lega.


“ kya sach mein yaha 100% effectiveness wali Restoration Pill milti hai ? ”


Kisi ne Crowd mein se chillake pucha.


Chang “ Hesitation band karo, agar Pill buy karni hai to line banao nahi to bhaag jaao yaha se. ”


Chang ne apni finger Crowd pe point karte huye kaha. Uske Face pe ab ek arrogant look tha.


“ Mujhe ek Pill kharidani hai, ye rahe 4 Gold Coin. "


Crowd mein se ek Fat man nikal ke aaya jisne fancy kapde pehne they, usne 4 Gold Coins table pe rakhte huye ye baat boli. Ye fatty bhi Fragrant Sky City ke kuch rich persons mein se ek tha. Ye abhi 7th level QI JING Realm ke peak pe tha. Agar ye ek 100% effectiveness wali Restoration Pill consume kar leta hai to 8th level mein breakthrough aram se kar lega.


4 Gold Coin Fragrant Sky City mein koi choti amount nahi thi. Kayi normal Families ye bhi afford nahi kar sakti thi yaha. Is World mein ek saying hai, ‘Cultivation ke path pe sirf Talent hi matter nahi karta, money bhi talent ke jitna hi matter karta hai.’ Agar koi person talented hai aur uske paas money nahi hai to uska cultivation 10 times jyada different ho jaata hai rich logo se.


“ Alright, ye rahi tumhari Restoration Pill, thik se pakdo. ”


Fat old man ne ek palm size ka box us fatty ko dete huye kaha. Us fat man ne bhi jaldi se box khola aur Pill ko bahar nikal liya.


“ Ye sach mein 100% effectiveness wali Restoration pill hai. Hahaha, 4 Gold Coins iske mukable kuch bhi nahi hai. ”


Fat man ne excitement mein chillate huye kaha. Jo waha pe crowd thi unhone ne bhi pill dekhi aur uska color dekha jo unhone pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. Saari Crowd jaan gayi thi ek pill ek dum excellent hai. Aur isi ke sath Crowd mein jitne bhi log Pills buy karne mein interested they unhone bahut jaldi se line bana li kahi Pill khatam na ho jaaye. Fat Old man jor se hasne lag gaya tha. Pills bhi excellent thi aur public bhi interested thi. Pills ki demand bhut jyada thi wo log jald hi out of stock hone wale they. Lekin unhone aaj aaj mein hi 2 Month jitna profit kama liya tha.


“ Shit, ye log 100% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills buy kar rahe hai apne Cultivation ke liye. Jo ye 70% wali Pills maine buy ki thi kal ye ek dum trash hai inke saamne. Mujhe in Pill ko trade kar dena chahiye. ”


Ek warrior ne aage aake two 70% wali Restoration Pills nikali aur 3 Gold Coins jo 100% wali restoration Pill mein exchange karne ke liye they.


“ Hum JADHAV Family ki Pill Shop ki Pills ko trade nahi karte. ”


Fat old man ne bina hesitation ke ye baat bol di. Har Pill Shop ki Pills pe ek unique logo hota hai jisse koi bhi bata sakta hai ki ye Pill kaha se buy ki gayi hai. Aur filhaal is City mein sirf JADHAV Family hi 70% wali Restoration Pills produce kar rahi thi.


Wo warrior pehle to thoda gussa hua. Lekin fir usey jaldi hi Mayor Family aur JADHAV Family ke bich ki rivalary ka realization ho gaya.


Chang “ Sabhi log dhyan se suno hum log JADHAV Family ki Pills ke sath trade nahi karte hai. Agar JADHAV Family ki Pills hai to unhe wapis kar aao fir yaha aana. ”


Jaise hi Chang ne ye chillake kaha waise hi kayi logo ko dukh hone laga jinhone kal hi JADHAV Family se Pills kharidi thi.


Next 3 din tak Mayor ki Pill Shop ne bhut acha perform kiya. Inki pills ki deman bhut jyada thi ye baar baar out of stock ho jaa rahe they. In 3 dino mein Jai, Skinny old man aur Atharva kaafi busy they. Jai aur skinny old man 60% wali pill produce kar rahe they aur Atharva unhe merge karta jaa raha tha. Ye uske liye bhut asan kaam tha bilkul pani pine jaisa, bus usey ek dikkat thi ki uska time waste ho raha tha.


In 3 dino mein famous JADHAV Family ki Pill shop pe ek single Customer nahi aaya tha. Fragrant Sky City mein jo Pill ka business tha wo ek tarfa Mayor Family ka ho gaya tha, yaha tak ki jo Families JADHAV Family ke support mein thi wo bhi Mayor Family ki Pill Shop se Pills buy kar rahe they. Humans bhut realistic hote hai. Jab baaki sab 100% wali pills ke sath Cultivate kar rahe aur wo khud 70% wali Pills ke sath to wo obviously piche reh jaayenge baaki sab se. Aur is Cultivation World mein koi kisi se ek din bhi piche nahi rehna chahta, ek din ke gap mein to enemy saamne wali ko jad se ukhaad de.


Fourth day ki Morning ko Mayor Family ke paas bahut saari 100% effectiveness wali Pills ho gayi jo 1 Month tak bhi khatam na ho aur ye sirf Atharva ki wajah se ho Paaya tha jo din raat Pills merge kar raha tha. Is subah pill shop ki entrance pe table ke piche 4 chairs thi ek pe Fat Old Man baitha tha aur doosri pe Atharva aur unke bagal mein hi skinny old man aur Jai baithe they. Atharva ke thik Piche Chang khada tha kisi bodyguard ki tarah.


Chang “ Young Master, in dono hamara business aasmaan chuu raha hai. ”


Atharva “ not bad. ”


Kuch hi der mein Pills sell hona start ho gayi aur 1 hour ke baad hi Atharva ko waha baithe-2 aalas aane lage. Usi time Counter pe do warrior aaye jinhone black dress pehna hua tha aur sir pe ek bamboo hat pehen rakha tha jisse unke face thik se nahi dikh rahe they. In dono Warriors ne ek dum se Atharva ki attraction khich li thi.


“ Mujhe 3 Restoration Pills chahiye, ye rahe 12 Gold Coins. ”


Jo bamboo hat ke niche se voice aayi thi wo kafi loud aur arrogant thi aur voice se bhi kisi young man ki lag rahi thi. Atharva ne Glance mein pata kar liya ki ye young man QI JING Realm ke 9th level pe hai aur doosra warrior Early QI HAI Realm mein.


Atharva “ Apni bamboo hat utaro. ”


Atharva ne ek lazy voice mein ye bola.


“ Maine yaha sirf Restoration Pills buy karne aaya hu. Tumhe kyu meri bamboo hat se problem hai ? ”


Usi Young man ne doobara jawab diya lekin is baar uski voice mein arrogance aur badh gayi thi.


Atharva “ Kyuki Fragrant Sky City ki situation ke hisaab se agar tum apni identity chupa ka Pills buy kar rahe to tum JADHAV Family se belong karte ho. ”


Atharva ne face pe smile liye ye baat boli. Wo asani se bata sakta tha ye kon hai kyuki wo log apni identity hide karke pills buy karke buy kar rahe they. Doosri City ke warrior yaha aate nahi kyuki ye sabse small City hai aur is City ke Warrior ko apni identity chupane ki jaroorat nahi agar tum JADHAV Family ka hissa na ho to.


“ humph ”


Young man ne ek cold humph kiya aur jaise hi wo apni hat nikalne ko hua to doosre person ne usko rok liya.


“ Second Uncle, ab disguise ki koi jarurat nahi hai. Waise bhi inhe pata to lag hi chukka hai. ”


Us young man ne apni bamboo hat utar di. Wo ek handsome 18 years ka young man tha. Jiske face pe ek arrogant look tha jaise wo paida hi is look ke sath hua ho. Doosre ne bhi ek sigh ke sath apni hat utar di wo ek 50 year ka old man tha aur ek strong QI uski body se sense ki jaa sakti hai.


Atharva ne us Young man ki taraf dekha aur apni memory mein search kiya ki ye kon hai ?
Ye JADHAV Family ke Gyan ka beta hai, jo ek Genius hai, wo 18 ki age mein QI JING Realm kr peak mein pahuch gaya tha aur kisi bhi time QI HAI Realm mein breakthrough kar sakta tha. Aise person ko arrogant hone ka pura hak hai, lekin ye bhut bura tha ki wo galat time pe, galat jagah pe aut galat person ke saamne arrogance dikha raha tha.


“ Humph, First Son. Tum jaroor yaha pareshani khadi karne aaye ho na ? ”


Jai ne cold look ke sath us young man ko dekhte huye kaha, aur table se wo Coins uthake faikne ko hua lekin Atharva ne rok liya.


Atharva “ Uncle Jai, jo hamare door step pe money aaya hai usey kyu faikna chahte ho ? "
" Yaha se aaj koi waapis nahi jaayega. ”









TO BE CONTINUED……..
Superb Update 😍
 

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“ Atharva, ye money lo aur abhi humey Pills do. ”


First son ne arrogant tone mein kaha.


Atharva “ Humari Family ki Pills sirf humans ko milti hai animals ko nahi. Abhi mera mood acha hai isliye ye money yahi chodke nikal lo yaha se. ”


“ Atharva tum animal kise keh rahe ho ? ”


First son ko ab gussa aane laga tha. Wo JADHAV Family ka number one Genius tha aur aaj tak uske sath kisi ne bhi is tone mein baat nahi ki thi. Kuch din pehle jab Atharva ne iske chote bhai ko pitta tha tab se Atharva se fight karna chahta tha lekin usne ye kabhi nahi soch tha ki wo Atharva se is condition mein milega.


Chang “ Mere master tumhari insult kar rahe hai. Kisi pagal ko bhi ye pata hogi ki inka matlab kya hai. Tumhare ears mein jaroor kuch bhara hua hai. ”

“ useless slave, kon ho tum? "
" Tumhari himmat kaise huyi mujhse aise baat karne ki. ”


First son ne awaz unchi karke kaha. Atharva ke face pe ek smile aa gayi ye sunke. Ye young man itna arrogant hai ki ye bilkul bhul gaya hai ki wo kiske area mein khada hai. Aur ye bhi bhul gaya hai ki Mayor Family aur JADHAV Family ab ek doosre ki enemies hai.


Atharva “ Shut Up. ”


Atharva ne apne palm ko zor se table pe maara aur apni seat se khada ho gaya.


Atharva “ Is JADHAV Family ke Dog ko koi Manners nahi aate. Iski himmat kaise huyi humari territory mein aane ki aur bhaukne ki. Isko apni gufa se bahar nahi aana chahiye tha. Guards Isko yahi capture kar lo. ”


Sabhi Guards Atharva ki awaz sunke aage aaye aur us young man aur old man ko charo taraf se gher liya. Baaki people jo Pills buy karne aaye they wo ek dum se piche hoke dekhne lage, unhone ye kabhi except nahi kiya tha ki itni jaldi ek ‘good show’ dekhne ko milega.


“ Tum mere young master ko chuna chahte ho. ”


Old man ne apni awaz unchi karte huye kaha.


Atharva “ Tum sirf QI HAI Realm mein ho aur tumhari himmat kaise huyi itna arrogantly baat karne ki. Fist son ke dog ke paas bhi koi manners nahi hai, isey ye bhi nahi pata ki yaha aise act karega to kya hoga. Uncle Jai please mere liye is Old Dog ko Cripple kar dijiye. ”


Jai “ Yes, Young Master. ”


Jaise hi jai ne apni baat khatam ki wo siddha jump karke aage aa gaya aur apni Body se ek strong QI release kar di. Waha pe kaafi logo ko pressure feel hone lag gaya tha kayi ke face ek dum peele pad gaye they kaiyo ko saans aana band ho gaya tha.


“ Ye JADHAV Family ka First son sach mein arrogant hai, finally aaj ye ek thik opponent se mila hai. Young Master Atharva pehle ke jaise useless person nahi hai ab. ”


“ Sahi kaha, JADHAV Family aur Mayor Family ek doosre ke Mortal enemies hai. Lekin ye first son fir bhi Mayor Family ki Pill Shop pe aake trouble create kar raha hai. ”


Kayi logo ne apas mein discussion start kar diya tha. Jyadatar logo ne dekha tha kaise Atharva ne behave kiya tha kuch din pehle. Usne yaha tak ki JADHAV Family ke leader Karamchand ki bhi insult kar di thi aur to sirf uska beta hai.



Humph !!

“ Atharva, ek thug ki tarah act karne mein koi point nahi hai. Agar tumhare andar guts hai to mujhse akele fight karo. Dekhte hai Fragrant Sky City ka number one Genius kon hai. ”


JADHAV Family ke first son ne jabde bhichte huye kaha. Atharva ko realize ho gaya tha ki jabse Suraj ne JADHAV Family ki reputation ghatayi hai to JADHAV Family doobara apni reputation gain karne ki kosis karegi. Fact ye hai ki JADHAV Family ka number one Genius Atharva se milna chahta tha, jo ek dum se useless se kisi Genius mein badal gaya hai. Agar aaj Atharva isey provoke bhi nahi karta to bhi ye kisi na kisi method se Atharva se fight karta hi.


Atharva “ Guts! Of course mere pass Guts hai. Mujhe koi fark nahi padta is choti si Fragrant Sky City mein kon top Genius hai ? "
" Lekin agar tum fight karna chahte ho to main taiyar hu. Baki sab piche ho jaao. ”


Atharva ne baat bolte hi us young man ki taraf chalna suru kar diya tha. Aaj wo chahta tha ki is so called top Genius ko yaha aane pe regret ho aur JADHAV Family pe bhi ek deep wound chodna chahta tha. Jo gurads JADHAV Family ke in do bando ko ghere huye they wo bhi piche ko hat gaye they aur unhone fight karne layak jagah chhod di thi. Jai us Old Man ke saamne khada tha taaki ye bich mein interfere na kar sake aur us old man ke face pe chinta ki lakire saaf dikh rahi thi. Usey dar tha agar Karamchand ke bete ko kuch ho gaya to wo uski jaan khud le lega.


“ Uncle, aap bhi piche ho jaaiye aur dekhiye main is arrogant brat ko kaise sabak sikhata hu. ”


First son ne apne hath mein jo fan pakda hua tha usey andar rakha aur ek evil smile ke sath ye baat boli.


“ please be careful master. ”


Us old man dheere se ye word bole aur thoda piche ho gaya, lekin wo ekdum alert tha jaise hi kuch galat ho to wo jab ki jab act kar paaye.


“Atharva, dikhao mujhe tum mein kitna dum hai. Aur baad mein mere paas complain karne mat aane ki main tumhe bully kar raha hu. Main tumhe first strike karne ka mauka deta hu. ”


Atharva “ Agar tum mujhe first strike karne ka mauka dena chahte ho to kam se kam 10 strike ka mauka to do. Agar tum mujhe pehle 10 strike ka mauka nahi de sakte to aisi useless baate mat kiya karo. ”


Atharva ne jor se haste huye kaha. Is baaat se young man bilkul provoke ho gaya tha. Usne apni jagah se hilte huye apni QI release kar di, puri surrounding mein ek Yuan force kisi wave ki tarah faill gaya.


Jai “ Ye Karamchand ka beta sach mein Genius hai, ye sirf QI JING Realm ke 9th level pe hai lekin iska yuan force bhut powerful hai. "
" Kya Young Master isko handle kar payenge ? ”


Jai, Atharva ke liye chintit tha, lekin jaise hi usne Atharva ke face ki taraf dekha to Atharva ke face pe ek confident smile thi.


Atharva “ Stop, jab tak kuch stake pe na laga ho tab tak fight karne ka kya maja. Lets have a Bet. ”


Atharva ne ek evil smile ke sath kaha.


“ Alright, batao kispe Bet lagaye ? ”


Atharva “ Agar tum jeet jaate ho aaj to main tumhe bina koi nuksaan ke yaha se jaane dunga, aur agar main jeet jaata hu to tum ek cheez yahi chod ke jaaoge. Tension na lo aaj mera mood acha hai main tumhe jaan se nahi maarunga. ”


“ Ye Bet fair nahi lag rahi. Main jeet gaya to mujhe kya milega. ”


Karamchand ke first sun ne ye baat kahi.


Atharva “ Joke mat maar, tujhe kya lagta hai main tum dono ko abhi ke abhi nahi maar sakta wo bhi ek single order se. maine tujhe ek chance de diya yaha se jinda jaane ka tujhe to mere Pair padne chahiye. ”


Atharva ki baat sunke usko aur gussa aa gaya, usne wahi khade khade ek powerful punch Atharva ki taraf hawa mein maara.


Bang !!


Ek loud bang ke sath uske saamne ek bada sa green color ka punch form ho gaya aur wo full pressure ke sath Atharva ki taraf badhne laga. Ye punch ek High Mortal level Combat Skill thi jo JADHAV Family se belong karti hai.


Atharva “ Too Weak. ”


Atharva ne apna sir hillaya aur uske punch ko apne tak aane diya taki wo is punch ko apne force se punch kar sake.


Bang !


Atharva ki aur us Young Man ke punch ek doosre se takraye wo bhi ek thundering sound create karte huye. Is scene ko dekh ke sabhi shock ho gaye they.


Crack!
AHHH!



Ek haddi tutne ki awaz ke sath ek chikh suni jaa sakti thi. Aur uske baad ek human figure udte huye piche ko gir gaya.


Jahir si baat hai ye Atharva nahi tha jo udte huye gira ho. Wo young man udte huye 3 meter piche land hua uski taange jor se kaamp rahi thi. Wo khud ko ground pe girne se rokne ke liye apna pura zor laga raha tha.


Har koi is time us Young man ko ghoor rahe they aur uska muda hua hath dekhke ke surprise ho gaye they. Atharva ke Powerful Punch ne uske left hand ki sabhi bone ko destroy kar diya tha, uska left hand cripple ho chukka tha jiska wo kabhi use nahi kar paayega.



“ Impossible, ye itna Powerful kaise ho sakta hai ? ”


Wo pura pasine se bheeg gaya tha. Atharva ko ghurte huye uske face ka rang ek dum peela pad gaya tha. Wo akela hi surprise nahi tha puri crowd bhi surprise ho gayi thi. Atharva ne is young man ko sirf ek strike se hara diya tha wo bhi bina koi Combat Skill use kiye. Ye us time se bilkul alag tha jab Atharva ne Suraj ko haraya tha.


Skinny old man aur Fat old man ne ek dusre ki taraf dekh ke sir hillaya. Unka Young Master na sirf Alchemy mein Genius tha balki wo ek strong Warrior bhi tha. Crowd mein Atharva ko leke kaafi baate hone lagi thi lekin wo sab abhi bhi wahi khade they kyuki unhe pata tha asli show to ab suru hoga.









TO BE CONTINUED….
[ Note :- Jaisa ki maine aapse promise kiya hai dosto. Last updated par 15 like pure hone par mai next Update post kar dunga.
To promise ke hisab se maine naya update post kar diya hai. Ab is UPADTE par bhi 15 like jldi se pure kijiye aur naya update read kijiye. ]

 

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UPDATE NO - 13
( Only One Strike )





“ Atharva, ye money lo aur abhi humey Pills do. ”


First son ne arrogant tone mein kaha.


Atharva “ Humari Family ki Pills sirf humans ko milti hai animals ko nahi. Abhi mera mood acha hai isliye ye money yahi chodke nikal lo yaha se. ”


“ Atharva tum animal kise keh rahe ho ? ”


First son ko ab gussa aane laga tha. Wo JADHAV Family ka number one Genius tha aur aaj tak uske sath kisi ne bhi is tone mein baat nahi ki thi. Kuch din pehle jab Atharva ne iske chote bhai ko pitta tha tab se Atharva se fight karna chahta tha lekin usne ye kabhi nahi soch tha ki wo Atharva se is condition mein milega.


Chang “ Mere master tumhari insult kar rahe hai. Kisi pagal ko bhi ye pata hogi ki inka matlab kya hai. Tumhare ears mein jaroor kuch bhara hua hai. ”

“ useless slave, kon ho tum? "
" Tumhari himmat kaise huyi mujhse aise baat karne ki. ”


First son ne awaz unchi karke kaha. Atharva ke face pe ek smile aa gayi ye sunke. Ye young man itna arrogant hai ki ye bilkul bhul gaya hai ki wo kiske area mein khada hai. Aur ye bhi bhul gaya hai ki Mayor Family aur JADHAV Family ab ek doosre ki enemies hai.


Atharva “ Shut Up. ”


Atharva ne apne palm ko zor se table pe maara aur apni seat se khada ho gaya.


Atharva “ Is JADHAV Family ke Dog ko koi Manners nahi aate. Iski himmat kaise huyi humari territory mein aane ki aur bhaukne ki. Isko apni gufa se bahar nahi aana chahiye tha. Guards Isko yahi capture kar lo. ”


Sabhi Guards Atharva ki awaz sunke aage aaye aur us young man aur old man ko charo taraf se gher liya. Baaki people jo Pills buy karne aaye they wo ek dum se piche hoke dekhne lage, unhone ye kabhi except nahi kiya tha ki itni jaldi ek ‘good show’ dekhne ko milega.


“ Tum mere young master ko chuna chahte ho. ”


Old man ne apni awaz unchi karte huye kaha.


Atharva “ Tum sirf QI HAI Realm mein ho aur tumhari himmat kaise huyi itna arrogantly baat karne ki. Fist son ke dog ke paas bhi koi manners nahi hai, isey ye bhi nahi pata ki yaha aise act karega to kya hoga. Uncle Jai please mere liye is Old Dog ko Cripple kar dijiye. ”


Jai “ Yes, Young Master. ”


Jaise hi jai ne apni baat khatam ki wo siddha jump karke aage aa gaya aur apni Body se ek strong QI release kar di. Waha pe kaafi logo ko pressure feel hone lag gaya tha kayi ke face ek dum peele pad gaye they kaiyo ko saans aana band ho gaya tha.


“ Ye JADHAV Family ka First son sach mein arrogant hai, finally aaj ye ek thik opponent se mila hai. Young Master Atharva pehle ke jaise useless person nahi hai ab. ”


“ Sahi kaha, JADHAV Family aur Mayor Family ek doosre ke Mortal enemies hai. Lekin ye first son fir bhi Mayor Family ki Pill Shop pe aake trouble create kar raha hai. ”


Kayi logo ne apas mein discussion start kar diya tha. Jyadatar logo ne dekha tha kaise Atharva ne behave kiya tha kuch din pehle. Usne yaha tak ki JADHAV Family ke leader Karamchand ki bhi insult kar di thi aur to sirf uska beta hai.



Humph !!

“ Atharva, ek thug ki tarah act karne mein koi point nahi hai. Agar tumhare andar guts hai to mujhse akele fight karo. Dekhte hai Fragrant Sky City ka number one Genius kon hai. ”


JADHAV Family ke first son ne jabde bhichte huye kaha. Atharva ko realize ho gaya tha ki jabse Suraj ne JADHAV Family ki reputation ghatayi hai to JADHAV Family doobara apni reputation gain karne ki kosis karegi. Fact ye hai ki JADHAV Family ka number one Genius Atharva se milna chahta tha, jo ek dum se useless se kisi Genius mein badal gaya hai. Agar aaj Atharva isey provoke bhi nahi karta to bhi ye kisi na kisi method se Atharva se fight karta hi.


Atharva “ Guts! Of course mere pass Guts hai. Mujhe koi fark nahi padta is choti si Fragrant Sky City mein kon top Genius hai ? "
" Lekin agar tum fight karna chahte ho to main taiyar hu. Baki sab piche ho jaao. ”


Atharva ne baat bolte hi us young man ki taraf chalna suru kar diya tha. Aaj wo chahta tha ki is so called top Genius ko yaha aane pe regret ho aur JADHAV Family pe bhi ek deep wound chodna chahta tha. Jo gurads JADHAV Family ke in do bando ko ghere huye they wo bhi piche ko hat gaye they aur unhone fight karne layak jagah chhod di thi. Jai us Old Man ke saamne khada tha taaki ye bich mein interfere na kar sake aur us old man ke face pe chinta ki lakire saaf dikh rahi thi. Usey dar tha agar Karamchand ke bete ko kuch ho gaya to wo uski jaan khud le lega.


“ Uncle, aap bhi piche ho jaaiye aur dekhiye main is arrogant brat ko kaise sabak sikhata hu. ”


First son ne apne hath mein jo fan pakda hua tha usey andar rakha aur ek evil smile ke sath ye baat boli.


“ please be careful master. ”


Us old man dheere se ye word bole aur thoda piche ho gaya, lekin wo ekdum alert tha jaise hi kuch galat ho to wo jab ki jab act kar paaye.


“Atharva, dikhao mujhe tum mein kitna dum hai. Aur baad mein mere paas complain karne mat aane ki main tumhe bully kar raha hu. Main tumhe first strike karne ka mauka deta hu. ”


Atharva “ Agar tum mujhe first strike karne ka mauka dena chahte ho to kam se kam 10 strike ka mauka to do. Agar tum mujhe pehle 10 strike ka mauka nahi de sakte to aisi useless baate mat kiya karo. ”


Atharva ne jor se haste huye kaha. Is baaat se young man bilkul provoke ho gaya tha. Usne apni jagah se hilte huye apni QI release kar di, puri surrounding mein ek Yuan force kisi wave ki tarah faill gaya.


Jai “ Ye Karamchand ka beta sach mein Genius hai, ye sirf QI JING Realm ke 9th level pe hai lekin iska yuan force bhut powerful hai. "
" Kya Young Master isko handle kar payenge ? ”


Jai, Atharva ke liye chintit tha, lekin jaise hi usne Atharva ke face ki taraf dekha to Atharva ke face pe ek confident smile thi.


Atharva “ Stop, jab tak kuch stake pe na laga ho tab tak fight karne ka kya maja. Lets have a Bet. ”


Atharva ne ek evil smile ke sath kaha.


“ Alright, batao kispe Bet lagaye ? ”


Atharva “ Agar tum jeet jaate ho aaj to main tumhe bina koi nuksaan ke yaha se jaane dunga, aur agar main jeet jaata hu to tum ek cheez yahi chod ke jaaoge. Tension na lo aaj mera mood acha hai main tumhe jaan se nahi maarunga. ”


“ Ye Bet fair nahi lag rahi. Main jeet gaya to mujhe kya milega. ”


Karamchand ke first sun ne ye baat kahi.


Atharva “ Joke mat maar, tujhe kya lagta hai main tum dono ko abhi ke abhi nahi maar sakta wo bhi ek single order se. maine tujhe ek chance de diya yaha se jinda jaane ka tujhe to mere Pair padne chahiye. ”


Atharva ki baat sunke usko aur gussa aa gaya, usne wahi khade khade ek powerful punch Atharva ki taraf hawa mein maara.



Bang !!


Ek loud bang ke sath uske saamne ek bada sa green color ka punch form ho gaya aur wo full pressure ke sath Atharva ki taraf badhne laga. Ye punch ek High Mortal level Combat Skill thi jo JADHAV Family se belong karti hai.


Atharva “ Too Weak. ”


Atharva ne apna sir hillaya aur uske punch ko apne tak aane diya taki wo is punch ko apne force se punch kar sake.



Bang !


Atharva ki aur us Young Man ke punch ek doosre se takraye wo bhi ek thundering sound create karte huye. Is scene ko dekh ke sabhi shock ho gaye they.


Crack!
AHHH!



Ek haddi tutne ki awaz ke sath ek chikh suni jaa sakti thi. Aur uske baad ek human figure udte huye piche ko gir gaya.


Jahir si baat hai ye Atharva nahi tha jo udte huye gira ho. Wo young man udte huye 3 meter piche land hua uski taange jor se kaamp rahi thi. Wo khud ko ground pe girne se rokne ke liye apna pura zor laga raha tha.


Har koi is time us Young man ko ghoor rahe they aur uska muda hua hath dekhke ke surprise ho gaye they. Atharva ke Powerful Punch ne uske left hand ki sabhi bone ko destroy kar diya tha, uska left hand cripple ho chukka tha jiska wo kabhi use nahi kar paayega.



“ Impossible, ye itna Powerful kaise ho sakta hai ? ”


Wo pura pasine se bheeg gaya tha. Atharva ko ghurte huye uske face ka rang ek dum peela pad gaya tha. Wo akela hi surprise nahi tha puri crowd bhi surprise ho gayi thi. Atharva ne is young man ko sirf ek strike se hara diya tha wo bhi bina koi Combat Skill use kiye. Ye us time se bilkul alag tha jab Atharva ne Suraj ko haraya tha.


Skinny old man aur Fat old man ne ek dusre ki taraf dekh ke sir hillaya. Unka Young Master na sirf Alchemy mein Genius tha balki wo ek strong Warrior bhi tha. Crowd mein Atharva ko leke kaafi baate hone lagi thi lekin wo sab abhi bhi wahi khade they kyuki unhe pata tha asli show to ab suru hoga.










TO BE CONTINUED….
[ Note :- Jaisa ki maine aapse promise kiya hai dosto. Last updated par 15 like pure hone par mai next Update post kar dunga.
To promise ke hisab se maine naya update post kar diya hai. Ab is UPADTE par bhi 15 like jldi se pure kijiye aur naya update read kijiye. ]
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Itachi_Uchiha bhai..
Nice and beautiful update....
 
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