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[Itachi_Uchiha]

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[krish1152]

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[parkas]

UPDATE NO - 08
The Six Solar Finger​

Ek evil smile ke sath Suraj Atharva ke saamne aake khada hogya.


Atharva " Kya tum taiyar ho Suraj ? "
" Agar nahi to tumhe ek aur mauka deta hu main. "


Suraj " Tum majak kar rahe ho kya? "
" Tum jaise ke sath fight karne ke liye mujhe prepare hone ki jaroorat nahi. "


SLAP!


Jaise hi Suraj ne bolna band kiya waise sabhi ko ek loud sound sunayi diya. Crowd ne bas Atharva ko apni jagah se disappear hote dekha aur fir Suraj ko slap karte huye. Ek slap se hi Suraj niche gir gaya.


Silence!
Ek dum Silence!
Crowd ne pehle Suraj ko dekha jisse khada nahi hoya jaa raha tha aur fir unhone shocking expression se Atharva ko dekha.


" Fuck ! Kisne kaha tha ye ki Young Master QI JING Realm ke 1st level ka useless fool hai. "
" Young Master ke single slap se hi ye Suraj niche gir gaya jisse khada bhi nahi hoya jaa raha. "
" Kon kehta hai Young Master useless hai ? "


" Awesome….., kya Atharva abhi tak apni true strength hide karke rakhe huye tha ? "


" Kya ye hamare Young Master hai ? "
" Ye ek dum different person lag rahe hai. "


Puri Crowd aur YADAV Family ke Guards mein is tarah ki baaate hone lagi thi.


Suraj " Impossible, aise nahi ho sakta? Tumne mujhe kaise haraya ? "


Jisey sabse jyada shock laga tha wo Suraj tha, jo abhi bhi ground pe leta hua tha aur sir bhaari ho raha tha. Atharva ke ek Slap ne usey weak bana diya tha uske body ke andar ki Yuan Power ek dum mess ban chuki thi. Uske paas hilne tak ki strength nahi thi.


2 Young man jaldi se aaye aur unhone Suraj ko sahara deke uthaya, in dono ke hi face pe dare huye expression they.


Bet ko yaad karke to Suraj ko marne ka mann kar raha tha agar wo bina Bet ke ladta to uski reputation down hoti lekin Bet ki wajah se puri Family ki insult ho jaayegi.


Atharva " Chang "


Chang piche se bhaagta hua aaya aur Atharva ke saamne sir jhuka ke bola.


Chang " young Master aapki kya wish hai ? "


Jabse Atharva ne Chang ko 10 Gold coins diye hai tabse Chang ko lagta hai ki Atharva bhut kind hearted hai.


Atharva " Tum is Casket ko JADHAV Family ki Sedan Chair pe rakhne mein meri madad karo. Fir inka picha karke dekho ki ye Casket leke jaate hai ya nahi agar nahi leke jaate to aaj se JADHAV Family ke members bastards ke naam se jaane jaayenge. "


Atharva ne jor se chillate huye kaha.


Blergh!


Suraj ko to ye sunte hi khun ki Vomit ho gayi aur wahi behosh ho gaya. Suraj is time badi dikkat mein tha agar wo Casket leke wapis jaata hai to Karamchand uski body se uski Skin alag kar dega. Aur agar nahi leke jaata hai to City ke sabhi log JADHAV Family ko bastard kahenge. Chahe wo kuch bhi kare lekin Karamchand usko Jinda nahi chodega.


Chang " Yes, Young Master. "


Chang ko fark nahi padta tha kisi se bhi usko to bas apne Young Master ko khus karna tha. Usne soch liya tha aaj ke baad wo Atharva ka har ek order follow karega bina refuse kiye.


Haaa!


Ek loud shout ke sath Chang ne wo bhaari Casket apne Shoulder pe rakh liya. QI JING Realm ke 6th level pe hone se ek Bhaari Casket uthana uske liye easy tha.


Bina kuch kahe aur sune Chang ne wo Casket Jiya jaha baithi thi uske bagal mein rakh diya. Jiya jor se ro rahi thi Apne husband ka Casket dekh ke jo usey aur bhi jyada ugly bana raha tha.


Atharva " Suraj tum log jis kaam ke liye aaye they ab wo pura hua, isliye jaldi se yaha se niklo aur wedding Ceremony ko aage badhao. Aaj se YADAV Family ki kisi bhi Property pe JADHAV Family ka koi bhi member welcome nahi hai. Aur tum jo mujhse haar gaye ho, aaj ke baad mujhe apna face mat dikhana, agar kabhi dikha to tumhe wahi pitna suru kardunga aur itna pitunga ki tumhari Mother bhi tumhara Face nahi pehchaan paayegi. Now, Get Lost ! "


Finally, JADHAV Family ki parade jaha se aayi thi usi taraf wapis Chali gayi wo bhi sirf ek Casket ke sath. Jitni khusi se ye log aaye they. Usse jyada dukh mein ye log wapis jaa rahe they.


Rumors aur discussion puri Fragrant Sky City mein suney jaa sakte they. Jo do Families ke bich mein Conflict tha ab wo another level pe pahuch chuka tha. Sabko pata tha ab Fragrant Sky City ke peaceful din jaane waale hai aur ye jab tak waapis nahi aayenge jab tak ek Family jeet nahi jaati.


Jabse YADAV Family aur JADHAV Family ke relationship kharab huye they us din se hi Kailashnath ek dum busy ho gaya tha. Kailashnath Family ke paas bahut saari properties thi jinme Mansions, Elixir shop, Commerce Chamber aur bhut si chize aati thi. Aur inme se jyadatar properties ko Sohan sambhalta tha. Ab Sohan to mar chuka tha isliye sab kuch Kailashnath ko akele hi sambhalna pad Raha tha.


Atharva us incident ke baad apne Mansion se bahar na aane ka faisla kiya tha. Atharva dusre logo se jyada aage ki sochta tha, uske paas ek simple tarika tha apne enemies ko harane ka aur wo thi Strength. Ye aisa world hai jaha pe Jo Strong hai uski sab respect karenge aur sabse jyada Strong hai usko log follow karenge chahe wo galat ho ya sahi.


Har ek single Warrior ke liye Cultivation talent aur Combat talent bhut jaroori hai. Atharva ne The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karna start Kar diya tha jo usko doosro se jyada strength deti thi. Lekin Cultivation Skill sirf Foundation hoti hai aur ek Great Warrior banne ke liye usko Bahut achi Combat Skills ki jarurat padegi.


Saint Origin Universe mein Cultivation Skills ke jaise hi Combat Skills bhi Four part mein divide hai
1. Mortal
2. Earth
3. Heaven
4. Saint
Aur ye each level bhi 3 levels mein divide hai Low, Medium, High.


QI JING Realm sirf ek Foundation realm hai ek person QI HAI Realm mein Breakthrough karne ke baad hi Combat Skill ko practice kar sakta hai. Lekin Atharva doosro se different tha uske paas several Combat Skill ko practice karne ka experience tha. Aur The Dragon Transformation Skill usko normal person se jyada Yuan Energy provide karti thi, isliye filhal QI HAI Realm ke early stage ke Warrior Atharva ka koi match nahi they.


QI JING Realm ke Warrior isliye Combat Skills practice nahi kar paate they kyuki unke paas enough Yuan Power nahi hoti thi Skill ko support karne ki. Lekin Atharva ki story different thi.


Past Life mein Atharva ne Jo Combat Skill Practice ki thi wo thi ' Nine Solar Energy ' jo ki ek Saint level ki thi aur is Skill ko Atharva ne khud hi banaya tha apne liye. Ye bahut hi powerful Skill thi jo surroundings mein se energy collect karke User ko Great benefit provide karwati thi.


Is Combat Skill ko practice karne ke liye Ek strong body aur huge amount of QI energy chahiye. Joki bhut difficult hai achieve karna.


Past Life mein Atharva ne The Dragon Transformation Skill ki jagah Xuan Yuan naam ki skill Cultivate ki thi jo body ko bhut jyada Vital energy QI deti hai. Lekin iske baad bhi wo apni past life mein Nine Solar Energies Combat Skill ke Full potential ko use nahi kar paya tha.


Lekin is Life mein Atharva The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate kar raha tha, jo Xuan Yuan Skill se powerful hai. Har ek Red Dragon Mark ke sath uske bhut jyada amount mein Vital energy QI milegi aur iske sath wo is life mein Nine Solar Energies ko full potential ke sath use kar paayega.


Atharva " Too bad, main sirf QI JING REALM mein hu aur Nine Solar Energies is World ki sabse Strong Combat Skill hai. Even Divine Core Realm ke Warrior bhi is Skill ko practice nahi kar sakte. "


{ 5 Foundational Realm
1. QI JING REALM (9 Level hai)
2. QI HAI REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
3. MORTAL CORE REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
4. HEAVENLY CORE REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
5. DIVINE CORE REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)

ISKE BAAD AATE HAI MAIN REALM JO UPPER 5 HAI WO SIRF FOUNDATION HAI.

6. COMBAT SOUL REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
7. COMBAT KING REALM (First Grade to 9th Grade)
8. COMBAT EMPEROR REALM (First Grade to 9th Grade)
9. SAINT REALM (Minor, Great ) }


" Main abhi ke liye Nine Solar Energies ko practice nahi kar sakta. Lekin mein Six Solar Fingers Combat Skill ko practice kar sakta hu jo ki Nine Solar Energies Skill ka hi ek part hai. Six Solar Fingers Nine Solar Energies ka Foundation hai aur Six Solar Finger ko ek High Earth Level ki skill kaha jaa sakta hai. "


Atharva ne apne face pe ek smile liye ye socha. Puri Fragrant Sky City mein ek bhi Earth Level ki Combat Skills nahi thi, isliye yaha pe koi bhi Six Solar Fingers ko halke mein nahi le sakta tha.


Six Solar Finger mein Six Style they. Har ek Finger ki power alag Level pe thi jaha First Finger kisi bhi Stone ko bilkul Crush kar sakti thi wahi Sixth Finger kisi Mountain ko bilkul wipe kar sakti thi.


Next 3 din Atharva Six Solar Fingers ko practice karta raha bina apne Mansion se bahar nikle. Aur Kailashnath bhi bhut jyada busy ho gaya tha business manage karne mein ki uske paas Atharva ko disturb karne ka time nahi tha.


In 3 dino mein Atharva ne saara time The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne mein aur Six Solar Fingers ko practice karne mein lagaya. Is combination se uski Vital Energy QI se bharne lagi thi.


In 3 dino mein Atharva QI JING Realm ke ek dum peak pe pahuch gaya tha. Bas ek step dur tha QI HAI Realm mein Breakthrough karne se. Jo ek Red Dragon Mark form hua tha wo bhi bas Complete hone hi wala tha. Uske punch ki strength 5000 pound se 8000 pound ki ho gayi thi jo kisi bhi Early QI HAI REALM ke warrior ki nahi hoti.


Haaa!


Garden mein Atharva ek black Robe pehene khada tha aur usne jor se chillate huye apni Finger se ek Golden Ray release ki jo lightning speed se uske Finger tips se nikli thi.


Bam!


Wo Golden Ray waha pe rakhe ek bade se stone ko cut karte karte huye nikal gayi. Jaha se Golden Ray ne Stone ko Cut kiya tha waha pe smoke nikalne laga tha. Agar Fragrant Sky City mein koi is Attack ko dekh leta to pagal ho jaata.


" Main abhi sirf ek Finger hi use kar sakta hu Six Solar Fingers mein se aur abhi bhi ye First Finger ka full potential nahi tha. Aur is Attack mein meri body ki saari Yuan Energy khatam ho gayi. "


Atharva abhi paseeno mein bheeg raha tha aur weak feel kar raha tha attack karne ke baad aur jo attack tha wo bhi First Finger ke real potential ka half tha. Halanki ye powerful dikh raha tha lekin full power se bhut dur tha pura potentiel use karne ke liye aur practice ki jarurat padegi.


Ye bhi badi baat thi ki Atharva First Finger use kar paa raha tha. Kyuki SiX Solar Fingers ek High Earth Level ki Combat Skill thi ek QI JING aur QI HAI Realm ke Warrior itna bhi nahi kar sakte they.


Atharva ne Apne bag se Ek Restoration Pill nikal aur usko apne muh mein daal liya jisse uski Yuan Energy waapis pehle ke Level pe aa gayi. Restoration Pill ek aisi Pill thi jiski jarurat har ek warrior ko padti thi chahe wo koi se bhi realm mein ho. Fragrant Sky City mein Restoration Pill ki kimat 100 Silver Coins thi.


" Is Restoration Pill ki effectiveness sirf 60% hai baaki 40% impurities hai. Rubbish! "


Atharva ne khud se sochte huye apna sir hillaya. Mayor Mansion mein jo Restoration Pill thi wo sabse low Quality ki thi. Uske liye 60% effectiveness wali Restoration Pill kisi garbage se kam nahi thi.


Knock! Knock! Knock!


Atharva ko pehle se hi pata tha ye Kailashnath hi hai, isliye usne apna Door khola to usey Kailashnath ka worried face dikha.


Kailashnath " Atharva tumne fir improvement ki hai. "



Atharva ki QI sense karke Kailashnath ke worried face pe thodi si smile aa gayi thi. Sirf 3 din mein Atharva QI JING Realm ke 9th Level se ek dum peak pe aa gaya tha jaha wo kabhi bhi Breakthrough kar sakta tha QI HAI Realm ke Early stage mein.





TO BE CONTINUED....

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Itachi_Uchiha bhai....
Nice and lovely update....

 

[Bhupinder Singh]

UPDATE NO - 08
The Six Solar Finger​

Ek evil smile ke sath Suraj Atharva ke saamne aake khada hogya.


Atharva " Kya tum taiyar ho Suraj ? "
" Agar nahi to tumhe ek aur mauka deta hu main. "


Suraj " Tum majak kar rahe ho kya? "
" Tum jaise ke sath fight karne ke liye mujhe prepare hone ki jaroorat nahi. "


SLAP!


Jaise hi Suraj ne bolna band kiya waise sabhi ko ek loud sound sunayi diya. Crowd ne bas Atharva ko apni jagah se disappear hote dekha aur fir Suraj ko slap karte huye. Ek slap se hi Suraj niche gir gaya.


Silence!
Ek dum Silence!
Crowd ne pehle Suraj ko dekha jisse khada nahi hoya jaa raha tha aur fir unhone shocking expression se Atharva ko dekha.


" Fuck ! Kisne kaha tha ye ki Young Master QI JING Realm ke 1st level ka useless fool hai. "
" Young Master ke single slap se hi ye Suraj niche gir gaya jisse khada bhi nahi hoya jaa raha. "
" Kon kehta hai Young Master useless hai ? "


" Awesome….., kya Atharva abhi tak apni true strength hide karke rakhe huye tha ? "


" Kya ye hamare Young Master hai ? "
" Ye ek dum different person lag rahe hai. "


Puri Crowd aur YADAV Family ke Guards mein is tarah ki baaate hone lagi thi.


Suraj " Impossible, aise nahi ho sakta? Tumne mujhe kaise haraya ? "


Jisey sabse jyada shock laga tha wo Suraj tha, jo abhi bhi ground pe leta hua tha aur sir bhaari ho raha tha. Atharva ke ek Slap ne usey weak bana diya tha uske body ke andar ki Yuan Power ek dum mess ban chuki thi. Uske paas hilne tak ki strength nahi thi.


2 Young man jaldi se aaye aur unhone Suraj ko sahara deke uthaya, in dono ke hi face pe dare huye expression they.


Bet ko yaad karke to Suraj ko marne ka mann kar raha tha agar wo bina Bet ke ladta to uski reputation down hoti lekin Bet ki wajah se puri Family ki insult ho jaayegi.


Atharva " Chang "


Chang piche se bhaagta hua aaya aur Atharva ke saamne sir jhuka ke bola.


Chang " young Master aapki kya wish hai ? "


Jabse Atharva ne Chang ko 10 Gold coins diye hai tabse Chang ko lagta hai ki Atharva bhut kind hearted hai.


Atharva " Tum is Casket ko JADHAV Family ki Sedan Chair pe rakhne mein meri madad karo. Fir inka picha karke dekho ki ye Casket leke jaate hai ya nahi agar nahi leke jaate to aaj se JADHAV Family ke members bastards ke naam se jaane jaayenge. "


Atharva ne jor se chillate huye kaha.


Blergh!


Suraj ko to ye sunte hi khun ki Vomit ho gayi aur wahi behosh ho gaya. Suraj is time badi dikkat mein tha agar wo Casket leke wapis jaata hai to Karamchand uski body se uski Skin alag kar dega. Aur agar nahi leke jaata hai to City ke sabhi log JADHAV Family ko bastard kahenge. Chahe wo kuch bhi kare lekin Karamchand usko Jinda nahi chodega.


Chang " Yes, Young Master. "


Chang ko fark nahi padta tha kisi se bhi usko to bas apne Young Master ko khus karna tha. Usne soch liya tha aaj ke baad wo Atharva ka har ek order follow karega bina refuse kiye.


Haaa!


Ek loud shout ke sath Chang ne wo bhaari Casket apne Shoulder pe rakh liya. QI JING Realm ke 6th level pe hone se ek Bhaari Casket uthana uske liye easy tha.


Bina kuch kahe aur sune Chang ne wo Casket Jiya jaha baithi thi uske bagal mein rakh diya. Jiya jor se ro rahi thi Apne husband ka Casket dekh ke jo usey aur bhi jyada ugly bana raha tha.


Atharva " Suraj tum log jis kaam ke liye aaye they ab wo pura hua, isliye jaldi se yaha se niklo aur wedding Ceremony ko aage badhao. Aaj se YADAV Family ki kisi bhi Property pe JADHAV Family ka koi bhi member welcome nahi hai. Aur tum jo mujhse haar gaye ho, aaj ke baad mujhe apna face mat dikhana, agar kabhi dikha to tumhe wahi pitna suru kardunga aur itna pitunga ki tumhari Mother bhi tumhara Face nahi pehchaan paayegi. Now, Get Lost ! "


Finally, JADHAV Family ki parade jaha se aayi thi usi taraf wapis Chali gayi wo bhi sirf ek Casket ke sath. Jitni khusi se ye log aaye they. Usse jyada dukh mein ye log wapis jaa rahe they.


Rumors aur discussion puri Fragrant Sky City mein suney jaa sakte they. Jo do Families ke bich mein Conflict tha ab wo another level pe pahuch chuka tha. Sabko pata tha ab Fragrant Sky City ke peaceful din jaane waale hai aur ye jab tak waapis nahi aayenge jab tak ek Family jeet nahi jaati.


Jabse YADAV Family aur JADHAV Family ke relationship kharab huye they us din se hi Kailashnath ek dum busy ho gaya tha. Kailashnath Family ke paas bahut saari properties thi jinme Mansions, Elixir shop, Commerce Chamber aur bhut si chize aati thi. Aur inme se jyadatar properties ko Sohan sambhalta tha. Ab Sohan to mar chuka tha isliye sab kuch Kailashnath ko akele hi sambhalna pad Raha tha.


Atharva us incident ke baad apne Mansion se bahar na aane ka faisla kiya tha. Atharva dusre logo se jyada aage ki sochta tha, uske paas ek simple tarika tha apne enemies ko harane ka aur wo thi Strength. Ye aisa world hai jaha pe Jo Strong hai uski sab respect karenge aur sabse jyada Strong hai usko log follow karenge chahe wo galat ho ya sahi.


Har ek single Warrior ke liye Cultivation talent aur Combat talent bhut jaroori hai. Atharva ne The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karna start Kar diya tha jo usko doosro se jyada strength deti thi. Lekin Cultivation Skill sirf Foundation hoti hai aur ek Great Warrior banne ke liye usko Bahut achi Combat Skills ki jarurat padegi.


Saint Origin Universe mein Cultivation Skills ke jaise hi Combat Skills bhi Four part mein divide hai
1. Mortal
2. Earth
3. Heaven
4. Saint
Aur ye each level bhi 3 levels mein divide hai Low, Medium, High.


QI JING Realm sirf ek Foundation realm hai ek person QI HAI Realm mein Breakthrough karne ke baad hi Combat Skill ko practice kar sakta hai. Lekin Atharva doosro se different tha uske paas several Combat Skill ko practice karne ka experience tha. Aur The Dragon Transformation Skill usko normal person se jyada Yuan Energy provide karti thi, isliye filhal QI HAI Realm ke early stage ke Warrior Atharva ka koi match nahi they.


QI JING Realm ke Warrior isliye Combat Skills practice nahi kar paate they kyuki unke paas enough Yuan Power nahi hoti thi Skill ko support karne ki. Lekin Atharva ki story different thi.


Past Life mein Atharva ne Jo Combat Skill Practice ki thi wo thi ' Nine Solar Energy ' jo ki ek Saint level ki thi aur is Skill ko Atharva ne khud hi banaya tha apne liye. Ye bahut hi powerful Skill thi jo surroundings mein se energy collect karke User ko Great benefit provide karwati thi.


Is Combat Skill ko practice karne ke liye Ek strong body aur huge amount of QI energy chahiye. Joki bhut difficult hai achieve karna.


Past Life mein Atharva ne The Dragon Transformation Skill ki jagah Xuan Yuan naam ki skill Cultivate ki thi jo body ko bhut jyada Vital energy QI deti hai. Lekin iske baad bhi wo apni past life mein Nine Solar Energies Combat Skill ke Full potential ko use nahi kar paya tha.


Lekin is Life mein Atharva The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate kar raha tha, jo Xuan Yuan Skill se powerful hai. Har ek Red Dragon Mark ke sath uske bhut jyada amount mein Vital energy QI milegi aur iske sath wo is life mein Nine Solar Energies ko full potential ke sath use kar paayega.


Atharva " Too bad, main sirf QI JING REALM mein hu aur Nine Solar Energies is World ki sabse Strong Combat Skill hai. Even Divine Core Realm ke Warrior bhi is Skill ko practice nahi kar sakte. "


{ 5 Foundational Realm
1. QI JING REALM (9 Level hai)
2. QI HAI REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
3. MORTAL CORE REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
4. HEAVENLY CORE REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
5. DIVINE CORE REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)

ISKE BAAD AATE HAI MAIN REALM JO UPPER 5 HAI WO SIRF FOUNDATION HAI.

6. COMBAT SOUL REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
7. COMBAT KING REALM (First Grade to 9th Grade)
8. COMBAT EMPEROR REALM (First Grade to 9th Grade)
9. SAINT REALM (Minor, Great ) }


" Main abhi ke liye Nine Solar Energies ko practice nahi kar sakta. Lekin mein Six Solar Fingers Combat Skill ko practice kar sakta hu jo ki Nine Solar Energies Skill ka hi ek part hai. Six Solar Fingers Nine Solar Energies ka Foundation hai aur Six Solar Finger ko ek High Earth Level ki skill kaha jaa sakta hai. "


Atharva ne apne face pe ek smile liye ye socha. Puri Fragrant Sky City mein ek bhi Earth Level ki Combat Skills nahi thi, isliye yaha pe koi bhi Six Solar Fingers ko halke mein nahi le sakta tha.


Six Solar Finger mein Six Style they. Har ek Finger ki power alag Level pe thi jaha First Finger kisi bhi Stone ko bilkul Crush kar sakti thi wahi Sixth Finger kisi Mountain ko bilkul wipe kar sakti thi.


Next 3 din Atharva Six Solar Fingers ko practice karta raha bina apne Mansion se bahar nikle. Aur Kailashnath bhi bhut jyada busy ho gaya tha business manage karne mein ki uske paas Atharva ko disturb karne ka time nahi tha.


In 3 dino mein Atharva ne saara time The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne mein aur Six Solar Fingers ko practice karne mein lagaya. Is combination se uski Vital Energy QI se bharne lagi thi.


In 3 dino mein Atharva QI JING Realm ke ek dum peak pe pahuch gaya tha. Bas ek step dur tha QI HAI Realm mein Breakthrough karne se. Jo ek Red Dragon Mark form hua tha wo bhi bas Complete hone hi wala tha. Uske punch ki strength 5000 pound se 8000 pound ki ho gayi thi jo kisi bhi Early QI HAI REALM ke warrior ki nahi hoti.


Haaa!


Garden mein Atharva ek black Robe pehene khada tha aur usne jor se chillate huye apni Finger se ek Golden Ray release ki jo lightning speed se uske Finger tips se nikli thi.


Bam!


Wo Golden Ray waha pe rakhe ek bade se stone ko cut karte karte huye nikal gayi. Jaha se Golden Ray ne Stone ko Cut kiya tha waha pe smoke nikalne laga tha. Agar Fragrant Sky City mein koi is Attack ko dekh leta to pagal ho jaata.


" Main abhi sirf ek Finger hi use kar sakta hu Six Solar Fingers mein se aur abhi bhi ye First Finger ka full potential nahi tha. Aur is Attack mein meri body ki saari Yuan Energy khatam ho gayi. "


Atharva abhi paseeno mein bheeg raha tha aur weak feel kar raha tha attack karne ke baad aur jo attack tha wo bhi First Finger ke real potential ka half tha. Halanki ye powerful dikh raha tha lekin full power se bhut dur tha pura potentiel use karne ke liye aur practice ki jarurat padegi.


Ye bhi badi baat thi ki Atharva First Finger use kar paa raha tha. Kyuki SiX Solar Fingers ek High Earth Level ki Combat Skill thi ek QI JING aur QI HAI Realm ke Warrior itna bhi nahi kar sakte they.


Atharva ne Apne bag se Ek Restoration Pill nikal aur usko apne muh mein daal liya jisse uski Yuan Energy waapis pehle ke Level pe aa gayi. Restoration Pill ek aisi Pill thi jiski jarurat har ek warrior ko padti thi chahe wo koi se bhi realm mein ho. Fragrant Sky City mein Restoration Pill ki kimat 100 Silver Coins thi.


" Is Restoration Pill ki effectiveness sirf 60% hai baaki 40% impurities hai. Rubbish! "


Atharva ne khud se sochte huye apna sir hillaya. Mayor Mansion mein jo Restoration Pill thi wo sabse low Quality ki thi. Uske liye 60% effectiveness wali Restoration Pill kisi garbage se kam nahi thi.


Knock! Knock! Knock!


Atharva ko pehle se hi pata tha ye Kailashnath hi hai, isliye usne apna Door khola to usey Kailashnath ka worried face dikha.


Kailashnath " Atharva tumne fir improvement ki hai. "



Atharva ki QI sense karke Kailashnath ke worried face pe thodi si smile aa gayi thi. Sirf 3 din mein Atharva QI JING Realm ke 9th Level se ek dum peak pe aa gaya tha jaha wo kabhi bhi Breakthrough kar sakta tha QI HAI Realm ke Early stage mein.





TO BE CONTINUED....

Nice update

 

[BP high]

UPDATE NO - 08
The Six Solar Finger​

Ek evil smile ke sath Suraj Atharva ke saamne aake khada hogya.


Atharva " Kya tum taiyar ho Suraj ? "
" Agar nahi to tumhe ek aur mauka deta hu main. "


Suraj " Tum majak kar rahe ho kya? "
" Tum jaise ke sath fight karne ke liye mujhe prepare hone ki jaroorat nahi. "


SLAP!


Jaise hi Suraj ne bolna band kiya waise sabhi ko ek loud sound sunayi diya. Crowd ne bas Atharva ko apni jagah se disappear hote dekha aur fir Suraj ko slap karte huye. Ek slap se hi Suraj niche gir gaya.


Silence!
Ek dum Silence!
Crowd ne pehle Suraj ko dekha jisse khada nahi hoya jaa raha tha aur fir unhone shocking expression se Atharva ko dekha.


" Fuck ! Kisne kaha tha ye ki Young Master QI JING Realm ke 1st level ka useless fool hai. "
" Young Master ke single slap se hi ye Suraj niche gir gaya jisse khada bhi nahi hoya jaa raha. "
" Kon kehta hai Young Master useless hai ? "


" Awesome….., kya Atharva abhi tak apni true strength hide karke rakhe huye tha ? "


" Kya ye hamare Young Master hai ? "
" Ye ek dum different person lag rahe hai. "


Puri Crowd aur YADAV Family ke Guards mein is tarah ki baaate hone lagi thi.


Suraj " Impossible, aise nahi ho sakta? Tumne mujhe kaise haraya ? "


Jisey sabse jyada shock laga tha wo Suraj tha, jo abhi bhi ground pe leta hua tha aur sir bhaari ho raha tha. Atharva ke ek Slap ne usey weak bana diya tha uske body ke andar ki Yuan Power ek dum mess ban chuki thi. Uske paas hilne tak ki strength nahi thi.


2 Young man jaldi se aaye aur unhone Suraj ko sahara deke uthaya, in dono ke hi face pe dare huye expression they.


Bet ko yaad karke to Suraj ko marne ka mann kar raha tha agar wo bina Bet ke ladta to uski reputation down hoti lekin Bet ki wajah se puri Family ki insult ho jaayegi.


Atharva " Chang "


Chang piche se bhaagta hua aaya aur Atharva ke saamne sir jhuka ke bola.


Chang " young Master aapki kya wish hai ? "


Jabse Atharva ne Chang ko 10 Gold coins diye hai tabse Chang ko lagta hai ki Atharva bhut kind hearted hai.


Atharva " Tum is Casket ko JADHAV Family ki Sedan Chair pe rakhne mein meri madad karo. Fir inka picha karke dekho ki ye Casket leke jaate hai ya nahi agar nahi leke jaate to aaj se JADHAV Family ke members bastards ke naam se jaane jaayenge. "


Atharva ne jor se chillate huye kaha.


Blergh!


Suraj ko to ye sunte hi khun ki Vomit ho gayi aur wahi behosh ho gaya. Suraj is time badi dikkat mein tha agar wo Casket leke wapis jaata hai to Karamchand uski body se uski Skin alag kar dega. Aur agar nahi leke jaata hai to City ke sabhi log JADHAV Family ko bastard kahenge. Chahe wo kuch bhi kare lekin Karamchand usko Jinda nahi chodega.


Chang " Yes, Young Master. "


Chang ko fark nahi padta tha kisi se bhi usko to bas apne Young Master ko khus karna tha. Usne soch liya tha aaj ke baad wo Atharva ka har ek order follow karega bina refuse kiye.


Haaa!


Ek loud shout ke sath Chang ne wo bhaari Casket apne Shoulder pe rakh liya. QI JING Realm ke 6th level pe hone se ek Bhaari Casket uthana uske liye easy tha.


Bina kuch kahe aur sune Chang ne wo Casket Jiya jaha baithi thi uske bagal mein rakh diya. Jiya jor se ro rahi thi Apne husband ka Casket dekh ke jo usey aur bhi jyada ugly bana raha tha.


Atharva " Suraj tum log jis kaam ke liye aaye they ab wo pura hua, isliye jaldi se yaha se niklo aur wedding Ceremony ko aage badhao. Aaj se YADAV Family ki kisi bhi Property pe JADHAV Family ka koi bhi member welcome nahi hai. Aur tum jo mujhse haar gaye ho, aaj ke baad mujhe apna face mat dikhana, agar kabhi dikha to tumhe wahi pitna suru kardunga aur itna pitunga ki tumhari Mother bhi tumhara Face nahi pehchaan paayegi. Now, Get Lost ! "


Finally, JADHAV Family ki parade jaha se aayi thi usi taraf wapis Chali gayi wo bhi sirf ek Casket ke sath. Jitni khusi se ye log aaye they. Usse jyada dukh mein ye log wapis jaa rahe they.


Rumors aur discussion puri Fragrant Sky City mein suney jaa sakte they. Jo do Families ke bich mein Conflict tha ab wo another level pe pahuch chuka tha. Sabko pata tha ab Fragrant Sky City ke peaceful din jaane waale hai aur ye jab tak waapis nahi aayenge jab tak ek Family jeet nahi jaati.


Jabse YADAV Family aur JADHAV Family ke relationship kharab huye they us din se hi Kailashnath ek dum busy ho gaya tha. Kailashnath Family ke paas bahut saari properties thi jinme Mansions, Elixir shop, Commerce Chamber aur bhut si chize aati thi. Aur inme se jyadatar properties ko Sohan sambhalta tha. Ab Sohan to mar chuka tha isliye sab kuch Kailashnath ko akele hi sambhalna pad Raha tha.


Atharva us incident ke baad apne Mansion se bahar na aane ka faisla kiya tha. Atharva dusre logo se jyada aage ki sochta tha, uske paas ek simple tarika tha apne enemies ko harane ka aur wo thi Strength. Ye aisa world hai jaha pe Jo Strong hai uski sab respect karenge aur sabse jyada Strong hai usko log follow karenge chahe wo galat ho ya sahi.


Har ek single Warrior ke liye Cultivation talent aur Combat talent bhut jaroori hai. Atharva ne The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karna start Kar diya tha jo usko doosro se jyada strength deti thi. Lekin Cultivation Skill sirf Foundation hoti hai aur ek Great Warrior banne ke liye usko Bahut achi Combat Skills ki jarurat padegi.


Saint Origin Universe mein Cultivation Skills ke jaise hi Combat Skills bhi Four part mein divide hai
1. Mortal
2. Earth
3. Heaven
4. Saint
Aur ye each level bhi 3 levels mein divide hai Low, Medium, High.


QI JING Realm sirf ek Foundation realm hai ek person QI HAI Realm mein Breakthrough karne ke baad hi Combat Skill ko practice kar sakta hai. Lekin Atharva doosro se different tha uske paas several Combat Skill ko practice karne ka experience tha. Aur The Dragon Transformation Skill usko normal person se jyada Yuan Energy provide karti thi, isliye filhal QI HAI Realm ke early stage ke Warrior Atharva ka koi match nahi they.


QI JING Realm ke Warrior isliye Combat Skills practice nahi kar paate they kyuki unke paas enough Yuan Power nahi hoti thi Skill ko support karne ki. Lekin Atharva ki story different thi.


Past Life mein Atharva ne Jo Combat Skill Practice ki thi wo thi ' Nine Solar Energy ' jo ki ek Saint level ki thi aur is Skill ko Atharva ne khud hi banaya tha apne liye. Ye bahut hi powerful Skill thi jo surroundings mein se energy collect karke User ko Great benefit provide karwati thi.


Is Combat Skill ko practice karne ke liye Ek strong body aur huge amount of QI energy chahiye. Joki bhut difficult hai achieve karna.


Past Life mein Atharva ne The Dragon Transformation Skill ki jagah Xuan Yuan naam ki skill Cultivate ki thi jo body ko bhut jyada Vital energy QI deti hai. Lekin iske baad bhi wo apni past life mein Nine Solar Energies Combat Skill ke Full potential ko use nahi kar paya tha.


Lekin is Life mein Atharva The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate kar raha tha, jo Xuan Yuan Skill se powerful hai. Har ek Red Dragon Mark ke sath uske bhut jyada amount mein Vital energy QI milegi aur iske sath wo is life mein Nine Solar Energies ko full potential ke sath use kar paayega.


Atharva " Too bad, main sirf QI JING REALM mein hu aur Nine Solar Energies is World ki sabse Strong Combat Skill hai. Even Divine Core Realm ke Warrior bhi is Skill ko practice nahi kar sakte. "


{ 5 Foundational Realm
1. QI JING REALM (9 Level hai)
2. QI HAI REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
3. MORTAL CORE REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
4. HEAVENLY CORE REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
5. DIVINE CORE REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)

ISKE BAAD AATE HAI MAIN REALM JO UPPER 5 HAI WO SIRF FOUNDATION HAI.

6. COMBAT SOUL REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
7. COMBAT KING REALM (First Grade to 9th Grade)
8. COMBAT EMPEROR REALM (First Grade to 9th Grade)
9. SAINT REALM (Minor, Great ) }


" Main abhi ke liye Nine Solar Energies ko practice nahi kar sakta. Lekin mein Six Solar Fingers Combat Skill ko practice kar sakta hu jo ki Nine Solar Energies Skill ka hi ek part hai. Six Solar Fingers Nine Solar Energies ka Foundation hai aur Six Solar Finger ko ek High Earth Level ki skill kaha jaa sakta hai. "


Atharva ne apne face pe ek smile liye ye socha. Puri Fragrant Sky City mein ek bhi Earth Level ki Combat Skills nahi thi, isliye yaha pe koi bhi Six Solar Fingers ko halke mein nahi le sakta tha.


Six Solar Finger mein Six Style they. Har ek Finger ki power alag Level pe thi jaha First Finger kisi bhi Stone ko bilkul Crush kar sakti thi wahi Sixth Finger kisi Mountain ko bilkul wipe kar sakti thi.


Next 3 din Atharva Six Solar Fingers ko practice karta raha bina apne Mansion se bahar nikle. Aur Kailashnath bhi bhut jyada busy ho gaya tha business manage karne mein ki uske paas Atharva ko disturb karne ka time nahi tha.


In 3 dino mein Atharva ne saara time The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne mein aur Six Solar Fingers ko practice karne mein lagaya. Is combination se uski Vital Energy QI se bharne lagi thi.


In 3 dino mein Atharva QI JING Realm ke ek dum peak pe pahuch gaya tha. Bas ek step dur tha QI HAI Realm mein Breakthrough karne se. Jo ek Red Dragon Mark form hua tha wo bhi bas Complete hone hi wala tha. Uske punch ki strength 5000 pound se 8000 pound ki ho gayi thi jo kisi bhi Early QI HAI REALM ke warrior ki nahi hoti.


Haaa!


Garden mein Atharva ek black Robe pehene khada tha aur usne jor se chillate huye apni Finger se ek Golden Ray release ki jo lightning speed se uske Finger tips se nikli thi.


Bam!


Wo Golden Ray waha pe rakhe ek bade se stone ko cut karte karte huye nikal gayi. Jaha se Golden Ray ne Stone ko Cut kiya tha waha pe smoke nikalne laga tha. Agar Fragrant Sky City mein koi is Attack ko dekh leta to pagal ho jaata.


" Main abhi sirf ek Finger hi use kar sakta hu Six Solar Fingers mein se aur abhi bhi ye First Finger ka full potential nahi tha. Aur is Attack mein meri body ki saari Yuan Energy khatam ho gayi. "


Atharva abhi paseeno mein bheeg raha tha aur weak feel kar raha tha attack karne ke baad aur jo attack tha wo bhi First Finger ke real potential ka half tha. Halanki ye powerful dikh raha tha lekin full power se bhut dur tha pura potentiel use karne ke liye aur practice ki jarurat padegi.


Ye bhi badi baat thi ki Atharva First Finger use kar paa raha tha. Kyuki SiX Solar Fingers ek High Earth Level ki Combat Skill thi ek QI JING aur QI HAI Realm ke Warrior itna bhi nahi kar sakte they.


Atharva ne Apne bag se Ek Restoration Pill nikal aur usko apne muh mein daal liya jisse uski Yuan Energy waapis pehle ke Level pe aa gayi. Restoration Pill ek aisi Pill thi jiski jarurat har ek warrior ko padti thi chahe wo koi se bhi realm mein ho. Fragrant Sky City mein Restoration Pill ki kimat 100 Silver Coins thi.


" Is Restoration Pill ki effectiveness sirf 60% hai baaki 40% impurities hai. Rubbish! "


Atharva ne khud se sochte huye apna sir hillaya. Mayor Mansion mein jo Restoration Pill thi wo sabse low Quality ki thi. Uske liye 60% effectiveness wali Restoration Pill kisi garbage se kam nahi thi.


Knock! Knock! Knock!


Atharva ko pehle se hi pata tha ye Kailashnath hi hai, isliye usne apna Door khola to usey Kailashnath ka worried face dikha.


Kailashnath " Atharva tumne fir improvement ki hai. "



Atharva ki QI sense karke Kailashnath ke worried face pe thodi si smile aa gayi thi. Sirf 3 din mein Atharva QI JING Realm ke 9th Level se ek dum peak pe aa gaya tha jaha wo kabhi bhi Breakthrough kar sakta tha QI HAI Realm ke Early stage mein.





TO BE CONTINUED....

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[Rohit1988]

UPDATE NO - 08
The Six Solar Finger​

Ek evil smile ke sath Suraj Atharva ke saamne aake khada hogya.


Atharva " Kya tum taiyar ho Suraj ? "
" Agar nahi to tumhe ek aur mauka deta hu main. "


Suraj " Tum majak kar rahe ho kya? "
" Tum jaise ke sath fight karne ke liye mujhe prepare hone ki jaroorat nahi. "


SLAP!


Jaise hi Suraj ne bolna band kiya waise sabhi ko ek loud sound sunayi diya. Crowd ne bas Atharva ko apni jagah se disappear hote dekha aur fir Suraj ko slap karte huye. Ek slap se hi Suraj niche gir gaya.


Silence!
Ek dum Silence!
Crowd ne pehle Suraj ko dekha jisse khada nahi hoya jaa raha tha aur fir unhone shocking expression se Atharva ko dekha.


" Fuck ! Kisne kaha tha ye ki Young Master QI JING Realm ke 1st level ka useless fool hai. "
" Young Master ke single slap se hi ye Suraj niche gir gaya jisse khada bhi nahi hoya jaa raha. "
" Kon kehta hai Young Master useless hai ? "


" Awesome….., kya Atharva abhi tak apni true strength hide karke rakhe huye tha ? "


" Kya ye hamare Young Master hai ? "
" Ye ek dum different person lag rahe hai. "


Puri Crowd aur YADAV Family ke Guards mein is tarah ki baaate hone lagi thi.


Suraj " Impossible, aise nahi ho sakta? Tumne mujhe kaise haraya ? "


Jisey sabse jyada shock laga tha wo Suraj tha, jo abhi bhi ground pe leta hua tha aur sir bhaari ho raha tha. Atharva ke ek Slap ne usey weak bana diya tha uske body ke andar ki Yuan Power ek dum mess ban chuki thi. Uske paas hilne tak ki strength nahi thi.


2 Young man jaldi se aaye aur unhone Suraj ko sahara deke uthaya, in dono ke hi face pe dare huye expression they.


Bet ko yaad karke to Suraj ko marne ka mann kar raha tha agar wo bina Bet ke ladta to uski reputation down hoti lekin Bet ki wajah se puri Family ki insult ho jaayegi.


Atharva " Chang "


Chang piche se bhaagta hua aaya aur Atharva ke saamne sir jhuka ke bola.


Chang " young Master aapki kya wish hai ? "


Jabse Atharva ne Chang ko 10 Gold coins diye hai tabse Chang ko lagta hai ki Atharva bhut kind hearted hai.


Atharva " Tum is Casket ko JADHAV Family ki Sedan Chair pe rakhne mein meri madad karo. Fir inka picha karke dekho ki ye Casket leke jaate hai ya nahi agar nahi leke jaate to aaj se JADHAV Family ke members bastards ke naam se jaane jaayenge. "


Atharva ne jor se chillate huye kaha.


Blergh!


Suraj ko to ye sunte hi khun ki Vomit ho gayi aur wahi behosh ho gaya. Suraj is time badi dikkat mein tha agar wo Casket leke wapis jaata hai to Karamchand uski body se uski Skin alag kar dega. Aur agar nahi leke jaata hai to City ke sabhi log JADHAV Family ko bastard kahenge. Chahe wo kuch bhi kare lekin Karamchand usko Jinda nahi chodega.


Chang " Yes, Young Master. "


Chang ko fark nahi padta tha kisi se bhi usko to bas apne Young Master ko khus karna tha. Usne soch liya tha aaj ke baad wo Atharva ka har ek order follow karega bina refuse kiye.


Haaa!


Ek loud shout ke sath Chang ne wo bhaari Casket apne Shoulder pe rakh liya. QI JING Realm ke 6th level pe hone se ek Bhaari Casket uthana uske liye easy tha.


Bina kuch kahe aur sune Chang ne wo Casket Jiya jaha baithi thi uske bagal mein rakh diya. Jiya jor se ro rahi thi Apne husband ka Casket dekh ke jo usey aur bhi jyada ugly bana raha tha.


Atharva " Suraj tum log jis kaam ke liye aaye they ab wo pura hua, isliye jaldi se yaha se niklo aur wedding Ceremony ko aage badhao. Aaj se YADAV Family ki kisi bhi Property pe JADHAV Family ka koi bhi member welcome nahi hai. Aur tum jo mujhse haar gaye ho, aaj ke baad mujhe apna face mat dikhana, agar kabhi dikha to tumhe wahi pitna suru kardunga aur itna pitunga ki tumhari Mother bhi tumhara Face nahi pehchaan paayegi. Now, Get Lost ! "


Finally, JADHAV Family ki parade jaha se aayi thi usi taraf wapis Chali gayi wo bhi sirf ek Casket ke sath. Jitni khusi se ye log aaye they. Usse jyada dukh mein ye log wapis jaa rahe they.


Rumors aur discussion puri Fragrant Sky City mein suney jaa sakte they. Jo do Families ke bich mein Conflict tha ab wo another level pe pahuch chuka tha. Sabko pata tha ab Fragrant Sky City ke peaceful din jaane waale hai aur ye jab tak waapis nahi aayenge jab tak ek Family jeet nahi jaati.


Jabse YADAV Family aur JADHAV Family ke relationship kharab huye they us din se hi Kailashnath ek dum busy ho gaya tha. Kailashnath Family ke paas bahut saari properties thi jinme Mansions, Elixir shop, Commerce Chamber aur bhut si chize aati thi. Aur inme se jyadatar properties ko Sohan sambhalta tha. Ab Sohan to mar chuka tha isliye sab kuch Kailashnath ko akele hi sambhalna pad Raha tha.


Atharva us incident ke baad apne Mansion se bahar na aane ka faisla kiya tha. Atharva dusre logo se jyada aage ki sochta tha, uske paas ek simple tarika tha apne enemies ko harane ka aur wo thi Strength. Ye aisa world hai jaha pe Jo Strong hai uski sab respect karenge aur sabse jyada Strong hai usko log follow karenge chahe wo galat ho ya sahi.


Har ek single Warrior ke liye Cultivation talent aur Combat talent bhut jaroori hai. Atharva ne The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karna start Kar diya tha jo usko doosro se jyada strength deti thi. Lekin Cultivation Skill sirf Foundation hoti hai aur ek Great Warrior banne ke liye usko Bahut achi Combat Skills ki jarurat padegi.


Saint Origin Universe mein Cultivation Skills ke jaise hi Combat Skills bhi Four part mein divide hai
1. Mortal
2. Earth
3. Heaven
4. Saint
Aur ye each level bhi 3 levels mein divide hai Low, Medium, High.


QI JING Realm sirf ek Foundation realm hai ek person QI HAI Realm mein Breakthrough karne ke baad hi Combat Skill ko practice kar sakta hai. Lekin Atharva doosro se different tha uske paas several Combat Skill ko practice karne ka experience tha. Aur The Dragon Transformation Skill usko normal person se jyada Yuan Energy provide karti thi, isliye filhal QI HAI Realm ke early stage ke Warrior Atharva ka koi match nahi they.


QI JING Realm ke Warrior isliye Combat Skills practice nahi kar paate they kyuki unke paas enough Yuan Power nahi hoti thi Skill ko support karne ki. Lekin Atharva ki story different thi.


Past Life mein Atharva ne Jo Combat Skill Practice ki thi wo thi ' Nine Solar Energy ' jo ki ek Saint level ki thi aur is Skill ko Atharva ne khud hi banaya tha apne liye. Ye bahut hi powerful Skill thi jo surroundings mein se energy collect karke User ko Great benefit provide karwati thi.


Is Combat Skill ko practice karne ke liye Ek strong body aur huge amount of QI energy chahiye. Joki bhut difficult hai achieve karna.


Past Life mein Atharva ne The Dragon Transformation Skill ki jagah Xuan Yuan naam ki skill Cultivate ki thi jo body ko bhut jyada Vital energy QI deti hai. Lekin iske baad bhi wo apni past life mein Nine Solar Energies Combat Skill ke Full potential ko use nahi kar paya tha.


Lekin is Life mein Atharva The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate kar raha tha, jo Xuan Yuan Skill se powerful hai. Har ek Red Dragon Mark ke sath uske bhut jyada amount mein Vital energy QI milegi aur iske sath wo is life mein Nine Solar Energies ko full potential ke sath use kar paayega.


Atharva " Too bad, main sirf QI JING REALM mein hu aur Nine Solar Energies is World ki sabse Strong Combat Skill hai. Even Divine Core Realm ke Warrior bhi is Skill ko practice nahi kar sakte. "


{ 5 Foundational Realm
1. QI JING REALM (9 Level hai)
2. QI HAI REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
3. MORTAL CORE REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
4. HEAVENLY CORE REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
5. DIVINE CORE REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)

ISKE BAAD AATE HAI MAIN REALM JO UPPER 5 HAI WO SIRF FOUNDATION HAI.

6. COMBAT SOUL REALM (Early, Mid, Late Stage)
7. COMBAT KING REALM (First Grade to 9th Grade)
8. COMBAT EMPEROR REALM (First Grade to 9th Grade)
9. SAINT REALM (Minor, Great ) }


" Main abhi ke liye Nine Solar Energies ko practice nahi kar sakta. Lekin mein Six Solar Fingers Combat Skill ko practice kar sakta hu jo ki Nine Solar Energies Skill ka hi ek part hai. Six Solar Fingers Nine Solar Energies ka Foundation hai aur Six Solar Finger ko ek High Earth Level ki skill kaha jaa sakta hai. "


Atharva ne apne face pe ek smile liye ye socha. Puri Fragrant Sky City mein ek bhi Earth Level ki Combat Skills nahi thi, isliye yaha pe koi bhi Six Solar Fingers ko halke mein nahi le sakta tha.


Six Solar Finger mein Six Style they. Har ek Finger ki power alag Level pe thi jaha First Finger kisi bhi Stone ko bilkul Crush kar sakti thi wahi Sixth Finger kisi Mountain ko bilkul wipe kar sakti thi.


Next 3 din Atharva Six Solar Fingers ko practice karta raha bina apne Mansion se bahar nikle. Aur Kailashnath bhi bhut jyada busy ho gaya tha business manage karne mein ki uske paas Atharva ko disturb karne ka time nahi tha.


In 3 dino mein Atharva ne saara time The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne mein aur Six Solar Fingers ko practice karne mein lagaya. Is combination se uski Vital Energy QI se bharne lagi thi.


In 3 dino mein Atharva QI JING Realm ke ek dum peak pe pahuch gaya tha. Bas ek step dur tha QI HAI Realm mein Breakthrough karne se. Jo ek Red Dragon Mark form hua tha wo bhi bas Complete hone hi wala tha. Uske punch ki strength 5000 pound se 8000 pound ki ho gayi thi jo kisi bhi Early QI HAI REALM ke warrior ki nahi hoti.


Haaa!


Garden mein Atharva ek black Robe pehene khada tha aur usne jor se chillate huye apni Finger se ek Golden Ray release ki jo lightning speed se uske Finger tips se nikli thi.


Bam!


Wo Golden Ray waha pe rakhe ek bade se stone ko cut karte karte huye nikal gayi. Jaha se Golden Ray ne Stone ko Cut kiya tha waha pe smoke nikalne laga tha. Agar Fragrant Sky City mein koi is Attack ko dekh leta to pagal ho jaata.


" Main abhi sirf ek Finger hi use kar sakta hu Six Solar Fingers mein se aur abhi bhi ye First Finger ka full potential nahi tha. Aur is Attack mein meri body ki saari Yuan Energy khatam ho gayi. "


Atharva abhi paseeno mein bheeg raha tha aur weak feel kar raha tha attack karne ke baad aur jo attack tha wo bhi First Finger ke real potential ka half tha. Halanki ye powerful dikh raha tha lekin full power se bhut dur tha pura potentiel use karne ke liye aur practice ki jarurat padegi.


Ye bhi badi baat thi ki Atharva First Finger use kar paa raha tha. Kyuki SiX Solar Fingers ek High Earth Level ki Combat Skill thi ek QI JING aur QI HAI Realm ke Warrior itna bhi nahi kar sakte they.


Atharva ne Apne bag se Ek Restoration Pill nikal aur usko apne muh mein daal liya jisse uski Yuan Energy waapis pehle ke Level pe aa gayi. Restoration Pill ek aisi Pill thi jiski jarurat har ek warrior ko padti thi chahe wo koi se bhi realm mein ho. Fragrant Sky City mein Restoration Pill ki kimat 100 Silver Coins thi.


" Is Restoration Pill ki effectiveness sirf 60% hai baaki 40% impurities hai. Rubbish! "


Atharva ne khud se sochte huye apna sir hillaya. Mayor Mansion mein jo Restoration Pill thi wo sabse low Quality ki thi. Uske liye 60% effectiveness wali Restoration Pill kisi garbage se kam nahi thi.


Knock! Knock! Knock!


Atharva ko pehle se hi pata tha ye Kailashnath hi hai, isliye usne apna Door khola to usey Kailashnath ka worried face dikha.


Kailashnath " Atharva tumne fir improvement ki hai. "



Atharva ki QI sense karke Kailashnath ke worried face pe thodi si smile aa gayi thi. Sirf 3 din mein Atharva QI JING Realm ke 9th Level se ek dum peak pe aa gaya tha jaha wo kabhi bhi Breakthrough kar sakta tha QI HAI Realm ke Early stage mein.





TO BE CONTINUED....

Fantastic update jaldi jaldi badhao yaar ye sab padh rakha hai please

 

[Itachi_Uchiha]

UPDATE NO - 09
ALCHEMIST​

Atharva “ Father aap worried lag rahe hain? Kya hua ? ”


Kamalnath “ Aao andar chal ke baat karte hai. ”


Kamalnath aur Atharva dono andar ki taraf chal ke aa gaye. Room ke andar dono father aur son ek dusre ke aamne saamne baithe they.


Kamalnath “ Atharva tumhe pata hona chahiye ki Fragrant Sky City mein humare bhut se business hai, lekin jo sabse jyada money produce karta hai wo Pill Concocting ka hai. ”


{ Pill Concocting matlab jaha pill banayi jaati hai. }


Atharva “ Haa mujhe pata hai. ”


Atharva ne apna sir hillate huye jawab diya. Ek warrior ke liye pills ki supply se jada jaroori kuch nahi hota. Fragrant Sky City mein chahe wo JADHAV Family ho ya YADHAV Family dono ko sabse jyada money Pills ke business mein hi milta tha.


Kamalnath “ Hamara Pill Concocting ka business JADHAV Family ki wajah se bhut jyada affected hua hai, aur hum ab bhut badi musibat mein hai. ”


Kamalnath ne ek worried look ke sath kaha.


Atharva “ Father, exactly kya ho raha hai ? ”


Kamalnath “ JADHAV Family ne 70% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills Concoct karne wala master hire kiya hai. Wahi hamari shops mein jitni bhi Pills hai wo sab 60% effectiveness wali hai. Unhone ek baar Pills bechna start kiya to humara business hi band ho jaayega. Agar JADHAV Family ne puri Fragrant Sky City ko unki Pills se khush kar diya to hamari Family ka to is City mein rukna bhi muskil ho jaayega. ”


Atharva ko ab samajh mein aa raha tha ki uske Father itne worried kyu hai. Pill business khatre mein tha lekin Atharva ko is baat se koi farak nahi pada tha. Balki wo to khus tha kyuki apni past life mein Ek Great Warrior hone ke sath usko bhut saari chizo ka experience tha jinme se Pills Concoct karna bhi ek tha. Usne ek baar to 90% effectiveness ke sath Saint level ki Pill bhi Concoct ki thi. Restoration Pill ek basic Pill hai aur wo easily thousand pills concoct kar sakta hai wo bhi 100% effectiveness ke sath. Atharva apne past life ke experience ke sath easily JADHAV Family ko business se bahar kar sakta hai.


Atharva “ Father aap chinta mat kijiye, main kal Pill Shop pe visit karunga. ”


Kamalnath ne apna sir sehmati mein hillaya, halanki usey koi idea nahi tha ki Atharva Pill Shop pe kyu visit karna chahta hai ?


Atharva “ Father is Cultivation Skill ko dekho agar ye aapko fit hoti hai kya ? ”


Atharva ne ye bolte huye Kamalnath ko ek golden Paper de diya.


“ Cultivation Skill ! ”


Kamalnath ne surprise hote huye wo Paper Atharva ke hath se le liya aur usko curiosity ke sath dekhne lage.


“ Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill. ”


Ek ek single word ko padhte waqt Kamalnath ki aankhe badi hoti chali gayi. Kuch aur words padhte hi wo ek dum excited ho gaye. Jab unhone puri Script khatam ki to unke hath bhi shake ho rahe they jaise ye chota sa Paper ka Weight Thousand Pound ka ho.


Kamalnath “ Atharva tumne ye itni achi Cultivation Skill kaha se obtain ki ? ”


Kamalnath bhut jyada excited tha, script dekhne ke baad bhi usey ye nahi pata tha ki ye Cultivation Skill konse Level ki hai, lekin wo koi idiot nahi tha. Wo asani se bata sakta tha ki Ye Cultivation Skill uski current Cultivation Skill se bhut jyada Powerful aur Superior hai. Ye Xuan Yuan Skill puri Fragrant Sky City mein kisi bhi cheez se compare nahi ho sakti thi. Yaha tak ki QI Province mein bhi iske level ki skill koi nahi hogi.


Ye script Atharva ne likhi thi. Apni Past Life mein Atharva isi Skill ko Cultivate karke the Greatest Saint bana tha, lekin ab uske pass The Dragon Transformation Skill hai to usey Xuan Yuan Skill ki koi jaroorat nahi hai. Kamalnath ko ye Skill de dena ek dum appropriate decision tha.


Atharva “ Father, ek Great Master ne mujhe ye skill di thi, agar aapko pasand hai to aap is Skill ko Cultivate karna start kar do. ”


Agar Kamalnath abhi se ye Skill Cultivate karna suru kar deta hai to usey 2 month mein MORTAL CORE Realm mein Breakthrough karne mein koi dikkat nahi hogi.


Agar Kamalnath ko pata chal jata ki jo Skill usne pakad rakhi hai wo Saint Level ki hai to wo khusi se hi mar jaata. Isiliye Atharva ne Kamalnath ko purposely Skill ka Level nahi bataya.


Kamalnath bilkul apne thoughts mein kho chukka tha usne to abhi se hi Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill ko study karna suru kar diya tha. Wo is Skill se bhut jyada attract ho gaya tha aur wo khud ko apne thoughts se bahar bhi nahi nikal pa raha tha. Achanak hi wo pura pasine mein bheeg gaya aur aisa lagne laga ki wo abhi behosh ho jaayega. Ye sab sirf ek Minute ke andar hua tha jabse usne Skill study karna suru kiya tha.


Atharva “ Father. "


Atharva ne jor se chillate huye Kamalnath ko jagaya jo khudke thoughts mein hi kho chukka tha. Kamalnath sirf QI HAI Realm ke peak par tha aur uska talent bhi ordinary hi tha. Wo bhut tezi se Saint Level ki Cultivation Skill ko use kar raha tha isiliye aisa hua tha. Apne mouth se dhua nikalte huye Kamalnath ne Cultivation karna band kar diya aur tab usey realise hua ki wo ek dum exhausted hai.


Kamalnath “ Atharva ye Skill bhut powerful hai aur tumhare Dad ke paas limited talent hai, isiliye Cultivation ko rokna mere liye bhut hard ho gaya tha. "


Atharva “ Dad itni powerful Skill ko Cultivate karne mein time aur effort lagta hai. Aap isko bhut slowly-2 study kar sakte ho. ”


Kamalnath “ Beta tum ek dum sahi keh rahe ho, main QI HAI Realm ka warrior hu lekin fir bhi tumhari mental capacity mujhse jyada hai. Aisa lagta hai mera beta mujhse pehle hi bada ho gaya hai. Tumhara bhut acha Future hoga. Hahahhaha. ”


Kamalnath ko yaha se bhejne ke baad Atharva firse The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne laga, ye Skill Xuan Yuan skill se bhut powerfull hai. Agar Atharva ke paas apni past life ke 1000 years ka experience nahi hota to wo bilkul bhi aise result nahi nikal paata jaise uske paas ab hai.


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NEXT MORNING
PILL SHOP


Next Morning, Atharva ne ek clean Black Colour ka Robe pehna aur Mayor Mansion se nikal gaya. Usne apne hath mein ek Fan pakad rakha tha, apni smile aur bright eyes ki wajah se wo bhut handsome lag raha tha.


Pill Shop hi, wo YADHAV Family ka sabse important business tha aur wo Mayor Mansion se jyada dur bhi nahi tha. Atharva 15 minutes mein Pill Shop ke front door ke saamne pahuch gaya. Ye badi classical building thi jaise ordinary Pills building hoti hai. Pills ka strong Aroma door ke bahar bhi smell kiya jaa sakta tha.


“ Aap aa gaye Young Master. ”


“ Oh talented and handsome Young Master, aapke looks bhut gorgeous hai. Aap koi Mortal to lagte hi nahi ho, aisa lagta hai jaise aap Heavens se utre huye Angel ho. ”


Jo 2 guard Shop ke bahar khade they wo Atharva ko salute maarte huye uski tareef kiye jaa rahe they. Past mein bhi wo Atharva ko aise hi salute karte they aur tareef bhi aise hi karte they, lekin ab fark itna tha ki inki aankho mein sach mein respect thi.


Atharva “ Not bad, jaao aur jaake treasurey se 10 silver coins collect kar lo, lekin aage se mere saamne aisa bilkul bhi mat karna. ”


Fir Ek hath back pe aur ek hath mein Fan pakde huye Atharva Pill Shop ke andar chala gaya.


“ Apki jai ho Young Master. ”



Dono guards ne chillake kaha.
Pill Shop YADHAV Family ka main business tha lekin fir bhi yaha jyada guards nahi they. Kyuki Pill shop ke jo incharge they wo Jay tha, jo sirf ek alchemist hi nahi balki QI HAI Realm ke mid level ka warrior tha. Secondly Pill shop Mayor Mansion se jyada dur nahi thi. Agar yaha kuch hota bhi hai to Mansion se immediately help aa sakti thi.


Pill Shop ke meeting room mein 3 old man baithe they jinke face depressed aur clueless they. Jo 3 old man they wo teeno hi apni fifties mein they aur unhone grey robe pehna hua tha. Unme se ek fat tha aur ek bhut skinny. Jo old man bich mein baitha tha uski average body thi aur wo hi is Pill Shop ka incharge Jay tha. Jai hai wo Kamalnath ka best friend aur ye koi bhi bata sakta hai kyuki family member na hone ke bawjood Kamalnath ne usey Pill Shop ka incharge bana rakha hai.


“ Uncle Jay, aapke face pe ye depressed look bilkul suit nahi karta. ”


Atharva ne andar aate huye kaha. Trio Atharva ko dekhte hi apni seat se khade ho gaye.


Jai “ Young master aap yaha kyu aaye hai ? ”


Jai ko chodke koi bhi alchemist past mein Atharva se baat nahi karta tha, lekin jo 3 din pehle hua usko dekhke sabke mind badal gaye they.



Atharva “ Uncle Jai, Dad ne mujhe bataya hai ki JADHAV Family ne ek alchemist hire kiya hai jo 70% effectiveness ke sath restoration pill concoct kar sakta hai. ”


Atharva ne wahi pe rakhi huyi ek chair pe baithte huye kaha.


Jai “ Young Master, aapko ye bhi pata hai. Humne last kuch dino mein koi bhi restoration pill sell nahi ki hai. Hamari abilities limited hai aur hum 70% effectiveness wali pill banane ki ability nahi rakhte.”


Atharva “ don’t give up uncle, main aapko aise person se milwaunga jo 70% effectiveness se jayada effectiveness wala pill concoct kar sakta hai. ”


Jai “ What ? "
" Young master aise kisi ko jaante hai. ”


Jai ne khus hote huye kaha.


“ kaha hai wo alchemist ? "
" Agar wo hamari help karne ke liye taiyar hai to hum bilkul bhi disrespect show nahi karenge. ”


Fat man ne serious hote huye kaha.


Atharva “ Tum logo ko wo person dur lag raha hai, lekin wo tumhare bilkul saamne hi to hai. ”


Apne fan ko fold karte huye Atharva khada ho gaya.


“ What ? "
" Young master, kya tum khud ke baare mein hi to nahi keh rahe ho ? ”


Fat old man ne surprise hote huye Atharva se pucha. Baaki dono ka bhi same reaction tha.


Atharva “ Haa, main hi wo alchemist hu. ”


Hahhahahaha……


Jaise hi Atharva ne jawab diya waise hi trio ek dum jor se hasne lage.


Jai ” Young master aap pills concoct karna chahte ho ? "
" Majak karna band karo, sabko pata hai aap sirf pills consume karne mein ache ho naaki pills concoct karne mein. "


Atharva “ Uncle Jai mujhe itna bhi kam mat samjho. Wo kahawat hai na doctor wo hi banta hai jo sabse jyada bimar raha ho. Lekin mere liye alag hai ‘ acha alchemist wo hi banta hai jisne bahut saari pills consume ki ho. ’”


Trio ek baar firse hasne laga.


“ agar pills consume karne se hi log alchemist bante to abhi tak Saint Origin mein sabhi Alchemist hote. Ab aap yaha se jaao aur humey koi solution nikalne mein disturb mat karo. ”


Atharva “ Lagta hai tum log mujpe vishwas nahi karoge jab tak main tumhe apni ability na dikha du. Lets go, mujhe furnace room mein le chalo. ”


Apni sleeves ko uppar chahdate huye Atharva aise act kar raha tha jaise wo kuch bada karne wala ho. Trio ne Atharva ko dekha, unhe aisa bilkul bhi nahi laga ki wo majak kar raha hai. Kya wo sach mein itni pills consume karke alchemist ban gaya hai?









TO BE CONTINUED …….

 

[Smith_15]

 

[andyking302]

UPDATE NO - 07
Pay Me For The Casket​

Mayor Mansion ke bahar bhut jada bhid jama ho gayi thi. Mayor Mansion ke bahar Atharva aur Kailashnath khade hoke unki aur aati huyi lambi parade ko dekh rahe they, aisa dekhte huye un dono ke face pe ek cruel smile aa gayi.


Atharva " Aapne dekha Father, Karamchand itni simple si wedding ke liye itni lambi parade leke aa raha hai, Karamchand sirf hamari insult hi nahi humey dabana bhi chahta hai. "


Kailashnath " Hahaha, dekhte hai last mein kon laughing stock banta hai. "


Karamchand " Hahaha, Brother Kailashnath, main Sohan ko lene aaya hu kya wo taiyar hai ? "


Karamchand ne jor se chillate huye kaha taaki puri Crowd ko ke ye baat sun jaaye.


Kailashnath " Of course, mera beta ready hai, Atharva jao aur apne elder brother ko leke aao. "


Kailashnath ne ek smile ke sath jawab diya.
Karamchand ne ek silk Red Robe pehen rakha tha wahi Jiya ne ek phoenix cronot naam ki dress pehen rakhi thi aur wo bhut jada sharma rahi thi. Jadatar log to uske face ko dekh ke Vomit karne lage they aur dubara dekhne ki to himmat hi nahi ho rahi thi.


" Step Aside. "


Kuch moments ke baad ek loud shout sunayi di jo ki Atharva ki thi aur apne shoulder pe bada sa Casket leke aa raha tha.


Bang!


Atharva ne wo Casket aise hi Door se bahar fek diya jaise usme kuch bhi special na ho. Casket ka front Parade ki taraf tha aur uspe likha tha.


" Death. "


Puri crowd Casket ko hi dekh rahi thi aur bilkul silent ho gayi thi.


' ye log kya kar rahe hai ?'
' Wedding mein Casket laana ek buri baat hai, Mayor kya soch rahe hai ? '


Karamchand ke expression ek dum se change ho gaye aur Kailashnath se pucha.


Karamchand " Brother Kailashnath iska kya matlab hai. "


Atharva " I am sorry, mere elder brother kal ek bimari ke chalte maare gaye ab miss Jiya mere brother ki corpse se ho marriage kar sakti hai. Ye yaha pe present ho isliye maine ye mehnga Casket banwaya hai aur tension ki baat nahi hai isne Casket mein wedding dress hi pehen rakhi hai. "


Atharva ne apni voice mein QI energy mix karte huye bola taki Atharva har ek person ko ye baat suna sake.


Crowd mein ek dum se jor jor se baate hone lagi thi unhone pehle kabhi bhi aisa nahi dekha tha. Jadhav Family yaha pe ladke ko lene aayi thi lekin unka welcome uski Dead Body ke sath hua tha. Isse koi fark nahi padta ko Sohan jinda hai ya mar gaya, kyuki ye act sidha sidha Jadhav Family ki insult kar raha tha. Specially jab Jadhav Family itni badi parade ke sath aayi ho aur unhe mila sirf ek Casket, unki reputation ek dum se niche gir gayi thi.


Karamchand " Kailashnath, ye kya tum koi majak kar rahe ho ? "


Karamchand se ab apna gussa control nahi ho raha tha


Atharva " Uncle Karamchand tumhe ye kyu lag raha hai ki hum majak kar rahe hai ? "
" Tum yaha ladke ko lene aaye, aapne ye to bataya hi nahi ki Jinda chahiye ya mara hua. "


Paas mein khade logo ko lag raha tha jaise abhi unke mouth se blood bahar aa jaayega, ye kis type ki explanation thi.


Karamchand " Kailashnath tum aur tumhara beta bakwas mat karo. Sohan QI JING REALM ke 9th level ka warrior hai aur wo kal alive aur ek dum thik tha. Aise kaise mar gya ? "


Atharva " Agar tumhe vishwas nahi hai to khud hi ye Casket khol ke dekh lo. After all wo tumhare hi Family ka member hai ab. "


Atharva ne Friendly tone mein Karamchand se kaha. Kailashnath Atharva ke bagal mein silent khada tha aur sab kuch Atharvako handle karne de raha tha. Kailashnath Atharva se kaafi khus tha kyuki wo Karamchand jaise person se ek dum Normal aur Calm tone mein baat kar raha tha aur usse Argue bhi kar raha tha jo koi Normal 16 saal ka ladka Nahi kar sakta. Atharva ko pata tha ki Karamchand uspe attack nahi kar sakta kyuki Kailashnath aur Karamchand dono hi QI HAI Realm ke peak par they aur dono ki strength same thi.


" Fuck, hum yaha pe ladka lene aaye they aur Mayor humey ek Casket de raha hai, ye Jadhav Family ki insult hai. "


Jadhav Family ke ek Young man ne jor chillate huye kaha.


Atharva " hahhaaha, bilkul sahi kaha mere Friend, Lekin Jadhav Family thi jisne pehle humari insult ki hai. Sab log dhyan se dekho is Jiya ke Face ko, kyu Jadhav Family aise Sincerity dikhati hai humari Family ko? Main yaha sabhi men se puchta hu agar mein tumhe chance du is Jiya se Marriage karne ka wo bhi free mein to kya tum log insulted nahi howoge. Aur jo isse marriage karna chahte hai wo aage aaye."


Atharvane pehle jor se hasa fir ye baat boli aur Crowd ke saamne puri situation clear kar di uske paas koi reason nahi tha apne enemies ko respect dene ka.


Ye baat sunne ke baad waha khade har aadmi ka face green ho gaya tha.


' Shit, main khud suicide kar lunga is ladki se marriage karne se pehle. Jadhav Family itni badi Family hai aur unhone itni ugly Girl select ki hai marriage ke liye. Ye clearly ek insult thi Mayor Family ke liye. '


Ye baat kisi ne Crowd mein boli.


Atharva " Aur mujhe to doubt hai ki ye Ugly Girl tumhari daughter hai bhi ya nahi ? "


Atharva ne ek Cruel smile ke sath kaha.


Karamchand " Aaj se Jadhav Family aur YADAV Family enemies hai. "


Karamchand ek dum gusse se ubal raha tha wo ek dum differently Atharva ko dekh raha tha. Karamchand ek smart person tha to usey ab samajh aa raha tha ki suru se hi wo Atharva ke plan mein fas chuka tha Atharva ne Sohan ka use karke usey yaha parade laane pe majboor kar diya taaki wo inki insult kar sake.


Atharva " Good, mujhe koi fark nahi padta hum enemy hai ya nahi bas is Casket aur mere brother ko apne sath le jaana. Aur mujhe is Casket ka price dena mat bhulna ye bhut mehnga hai. "


JIANG Family ke sabhi member apne Young Master ki performance dekh ke ek dum surprise they. Unhe aisa lag raha tha jaise ye koi stranger ho. Jis useless Atharva ko wo jaante they usme kabhi itne guts nahi they ki wo Karamchand ke saamne aise baat kar sake. Waise Master Sohan kaise marr gaye? Lekin is baat se koi fark nahi padta kyuki Mayor waise bhi Atharva ko hi Pyar karta hai.


'Shameless, despicable, talented'


YADAV Family ke young Master ne Jadhav Family ki reputation ko mitti mein mila diya tha. Jo lambi Parade Jadhav Family leke aayi thi wohi abhi sabse bada laughing stock thi puri Fragrant Sky City ki.


Karamchand " Good, Very Good, Kailashnath tum aur tumhara beta thoda sa wait karo thode hi time tum dono is City mein ruk nahi paaoge. Let's go. "


Karamchand abhi bhut gusse mein tha, wo ek wise man hai aur aaj ek 16 saal ke bache ne uski réputation kharab kar di thi. Baat sirf réputation ki hi nahi thi uski insult bhi huyi thi puri City ke saamne.


Horse ko kick karte huye Karamchand waha se nikal gaya ab wo yaha ek minute bhi rukna nahi chahta tha.


" Atharva ek true man kabhi bhi aise method use nahi karta. Agar tumme himmat hai akele fight karne ki to main Suraj tumhe itna pitunga ki tumhare Father bhi tmhe nahi pehchan paayenge. "


Ek young ladke ne apne horse se niche utarte huye Atharva se kaha. Suraj Jadhav Family ka ek talented young man tha, halanki Karamchand yaha se chala gaya tha lekin wo Atharva ko itni asani se jaane nahi dena chahta tha. Unke paas khone ko kuch bacha hi nahi tha agar wo ab fight karke Atharva ko hara deta hai to kam se kam kuch to honor wapas aayega ye dikhake ki Jadhav Family ke Geniuses YADAV Family ke Geniuses se better hai.


"That's right, Atharva kya tumhare andar himmat hai challenge accept karne ki ? "


Jadhav Family ke doosre young man ne chillake kaha uske face pe arrogance saaf dikh rahi thi. Sabki nazaro mein Atharva ek useless Fool tha, beshak usne Jadhav Family ki insult ki ho lekin Jadhav Family ka koi bhi Genius asani se hara sakta tha aur maar bhi sakta tha.


Atharva " All right, tum mujhe fight karna chahte ho to main tumhara challenge accept kar lunga. Lekin main bina kisi Bet ke fight nahi karne wala. "


Atharva ne smile karte huye kaha. Yaha tak ki Kailashnath bhi jor se has raha tha, uske alawa kisi ko bhi Atharvaki real strength nahi pata thi. Sohan jo ki 9th level pe tha wo bhi Atharva ka koi match nahi tha. Aur Suraj to sirf 8th Level pe hi tha.


Suraj " Thik hai batao tum kya Bet lagana chahte ho ? "


Suraj ek dum khus ho gaya tha ye sunke ki Atharva uska Challenge accept kar raha hai.


Atharva " Hum log is Casket pe Bet lagayenge. Agar main harta hu to ye Casket Mayor Mansion ke front door pe 3 din tak latka rahega. Aur agar tum haare to tum is Casket ko us Sedan Chair pe rakh ke le jaaoge aur apne Front door pe 3 din ke liye latka doge. Agar aisa nahi kiya to Jadhav Family ke sabhi members bastard hai. "


Atharva ne jaanbujh kar jor se chilla ke kaha taaki sab sun sake. Ab Suraj fas chuka tha aur wo Bet ko cancel bhi nahi kar sakta tha kyuki Puri City ne sun liya tha. Agar wo haarke Casket leke jaate hai to wo aur bhi jada laughing stock ban jaayenge aur agar Bet accept nahi karte hai to aur insult hogi inki aur wo bastard kehlayenge. Fark nahi padta result kya ho insult Jadhav Family ki honi thi.


Suraj " Deal "


Suraj ne bina hesitation ke answer de diya jaise Atharva uske saamne koi Ant ho aur wo ye Bet jeet hi jaayega. Isliye usey Bet se koi matlab nahi tha.


Is event ko dekhte huye Crowd mein ek baar firse shor hone laga tha. Unhe laga tha Karamchand ke jaate hi maamla khatam ho jaayega lekin yaha dono Families ke young man aapas mein Fight karne ko ready they aur inki Bet inki Family ki reputation thi. Lekin logo ki attention Atharva pe thi ki ye Useless Fool Suraj joki 8th level pe hai usse kaise Fight karega.




TO BE CONTINUED….

Fabulous excellent fantastic update bhai

Ye to kamal ki strike किए hey in लोगों ने तो...

Aur ye chuse ne chalange accept kar liya hey...

Ab dkehte hey kaise apna hero uski band baja tha hey
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[parkas]

UPDATE NO - 09
ALCHEMIST​

Atharva “ Father aap worried lag rahe hain? Kya hua ? ”


Kamalnath “ Aao andar chal ke baat karte hai. ”


Kamalnath aur Atharva dono andar ki taraf chal ke aa gaye. Room ke andar dono father aur son ek dusre ke aamne saamne baithe they.


Kamalnath “ Atharva tumhe pata hona chahiye ki Fragrant Sky City mein humare bhut se business hai, lekin jo sabse jyada money produce karta hai wo Pill Concocting ka hai. ”


{ Pill Concocting matlab jaha pill banayi jaati hai. }


Atharva “ Haa mujhe pata hai. ”


Atharva ne apna sir hillate huye jawab diya. Ek warrior ke liye pills ki supply se jada jaroori kuch nahi hota. Fragrant Sky City mein chahe wo JADHAV Family ho ya YADHAV Family dono ko sabse jyada money Pills ke business mein hi milta tha.


Kamalnath “ Hamara Pill Concocting ka business JADHAV Family ki wajah se bhut jyada affected hua hai, aur hum ab bhut badi musibat mein hai. ”


Kamalnath ne ek worried look ke sath kaha.


Atharva “ Father, exactly kya ho raha hai ? ”


Kamalnath “ JADHAV Family ne 70% effectiveness wali Restoration Pills Concoct karne wala master hire kiya hai. Wahi hamari shops mein jitni bhi Pills hai wo sab 60% effectiveness wali hai. Unhone ek baar Pills bechna start kiya to humara business hi band ho jaayega. Agar JADHAV Family ne puri Fragrant Sky City ko unki Pills se khush kar diya to hamari Family ka to is City mein rukna bhi muskil ho jaayega. ”


Atharva ko ab samajh mein aa raha tha ki uske Father itne worried kyu hai. Pill business khatre mein tha lekin Atharva ko is baat se koi farak nahi pada tha. Balki wo to khus tha kyuki apni past life mein Ek Great Warrior hone ke sath usko bhut saari chizo ka experience tha jinme se Pills Concoct karna bhi ek tha. Usne ek baar to 90% effectiveness ke sath Saint level ki Pill bhi Concoct ki thi. Restoration Pill ek basic Pill hai aur wo easily thousand pills concoct kar sakta hai wo bhi 100% effectiveness ke sath. Atharva apne past life ke experience ke sath easily JADHAV Family ko business se bahar kar sakta hai.


Atharva “ Father aap chinta mat kijiye, main kal Pill Shop pe visit karunga. ”


Kamalnath ne apna sir sehmati mein hillaya, halanki usey koi idea nahi tha ki Atharva Pill Shop pe kyu visit karna chahta hai ?


Atharva “ Father is Cultivation Skill ko dekho agar ye aapko fit hoti hai kya ? ”


Atharva ne ye bolte huye Kamalnath ko ek golden Paper de diya.


“ Cultivation Skill ! ”


Kamalnath ne surprise hote huye wo Paper Atharva ke hath se le liya aur usko curiosity ke sath dekhne lage.


“ Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill. ”


Ek ek single word ko padhte waqt Kamalnath ki aankhe badi hoti chali gayi. Kuch aur words padhte hi wo ek dum excited ho gaye. Jab unhone puri Script khatam ki to unke hath bhi shake ho rahe they jaise ye chota sa Paper ka Weight Thousand Pound ka ho.


Kamalnath “ Atharva tumne ye itni achi Cultivation Skill kaha se obtain ki ? ”


Kamalnath bhut jyada excited tha, script dekhne ke baad bhi usey ye nahi pata tha ki ye Cultivation Skill konse Level ki hai, lekin wo koi idiot nahi tha. Wo asani se bata sakta tha ki Ye Cultivation Skill uski current Cultivation Skill se bhut jyada Powerful aur Superior hai. Ye Xuan Yuan Skill puri Fragrant Sky City mein kisi bhi cheez se compare nahi ho sakti thi. Yaha tak ki QI Province mein bhi iske level ki skill koi nahi hogi.


Ye script Atharva ne likhi thi. Apni Past Life mein Atharva isi Skill ko Cultivate karke the Greatest Saint bana tha, lekin ab uske pass The Dragon Transformation Skill hai to usey Xuan Yuan Skill ki koi jaroorat nahi hai. Kamalnath ko ye Skill de dena ek dum appropriate decision tha.


Atharva “ Father, ek Great Master ne mujhe ye skill di thi, agar aapko pasand hai to aap is Skill ko Cultivate karna start kar do. ”


Agar Kamalnath abhi se ye Skill Cultivate karna suru kar deta hai to usey 2 month mein MORTAL CORE Realm mein Breakthrough karne mein koi dikkat nahi hogi.


Agar Kamalnath ko pata chal jata ki jo Skill usne pakad rakhi hai wo Saint Level ki hai to wo khusi se hi mar jaata. Isiliye Atharva ne Kamalnath ko purposely Skill ka Level nahi bataya.


Kamalnath bilkul apne thoughts mein kho chukka tha usne to abhi se hi Xuan Yuan Cultivation Skill ko study karna suru kar diya tha. Wo is Skill se bhut jyada attract ho gaya tha aur wo khud ko apne thoughts se bahar bhi nahi nikal pa raha tha. Achanak hi wo pura pasine mein bheeg gaya aur aisa lagne laga ki wo abhi behosh ho jaayega. Ye sab sirf ek Minute ke andar hua tha jabse usne Skill study karna suru kiya tha.


Atharva “ Father. "


Atharva ne jor se chillate huye Kamalnath ko jagaya jo khudke thoughts mein hi kho chukka tha. Kamalnath sirf QI HAI Realm ke peak par tha aur uska talent bhi ordinary hi tha. Wo bhut tezi se Saint Level ki Cultivation Skill ko use kar raha tha isiliye aisa hua tha. Apne mouth se dhua nikalte huye Kamalnath ne Cultivation karna band kar diya aur tab usey realise hua ki wo ek dum exhausted hai.


Kamalnath “ Atharva ye Skill bhut powerful hai aur tumhare Dad ke paas limited talent hai, isiliye Cultivation ko rokna mere liye bhut hard ho gaya tha. "


Atharva “ Dad itni powerful Skill ko Cultivate karne mein time aur effort lagta hai. Aap isko bhut slowly-2 study kar sakte ho. ”


Kamalnath “ Beta tum ek dum sahi keh rahe ho, main QI HAI Realm ka warrior hu lekin fir bhi tumhari mental capacity mujhse jyada hai. Aisa lagta hai mera beta mujhse pehle hi bada ho gaya hai. Tumhara bhut acha Future hoga. Hahahhaha. ”


Kamalnath ko yaha se bhejne ke baad Atharva firse The Dragon Transformation Skill ko Cultivate karne laga, ye Skill Xuan Yuan skill se bhut powerfull hai. Agar Atharva ke paas apni past life ke 1000 years ka experience nahi hota to wo bilkul bhi aise result nahi nikal paata jaise uske paas ab hai.


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NEXT MORNING
PILL SHOP


Next Morning, Atharva ne ek clean Black Colour ka Robe pehna aur Mayor Mansion se nikal gaya. Usne apne hath mein ek Fan pakad rakha tha, apni smile aur bright eyes ki wajah se wo bhut handsome lag raha tha.


Pill Shop hi, wo YADHAV Family ka sabse important business tha aur wo Mayor Mansion se jyada dur bhi nahi tha. Atharva 15 minutes mein Pill Shop ke front door ke saamne pahuch gaya. Ye badi classical building thi jaise ordinary Pills building hoti hai. Pills ka strong Aroma door ke bahar bhi smell kiya jaa sakta tha.


“ Aap aa gaye Young Master. ”


“ Oh talented and handsome Young Master, aapke looks bhut gorgeous hai. Aap koi Mortal to lagte hi nahi ho, aisa lagta hai jaise aap Heavens se utre huye Angel ho. ”


Jo 2 guard Shop ke bahar khade they wo Atharva ko salute maarte huye uski tareef kiye jaa rahe they. Past mein bhi wo Atharva ko aise hi salute karte they aur tareef bhi aise hi karte they, lekin ab fark itna tha ki inki aankho mein sach mein respect thi.


Atharva “ Not bad, jaao aur jaake treasurey se 10 silver coins collect kar lo, lekin aage se mere saamne aisa bilkul bhi mat karna. ”


Fir Ek hath back pe aur ek hath mein Fan pakde huye Atharva Pill Shop ke andar chala gaya.


“ Apki jai ho Young Master. ”



Dono guards ne chillake kaha.
Pill Shop YADHAV Family ka main business tha lekin fir bhi yaha jyada guards nahi they. Kyuki Pill shop ke jo incharge they wo Jay tha, jo sirf ek alchemist hi nahi balki QI HAI Realm ke mid level ka warrior tha. Secondly Pill shop Mayor Mansion se jyada dur nahi thi. Agar yaha kuch hota bhi hai to Mansion se immediately help aa sakti thi.


Pill Shop ke meeting room mein 3 old man baithe they jinke face depressed aur clueless they. Jo 3 old man they wo teeno hi apni fifties mein they aur unhone grey robe pehna hua tha. Unme se ek fat tha aur ek bhut skinny. Jo old man bich mein baitha tha uski average body thi aur wo hi is Pill Shop ka incharge Jay tha. Jai hai wo Kamalnath ka best friend aur ye koi bhi bata sakta hai kyuki family member na hone ke bawjood Kamalnath ne usey Pill Shop ka incharge bana rakha hai.


“ Uncle Jay, aapke face pe ye depressed look bilkul suit nahi karta. ”


Atharva ne andar aate huye kaha. Trio Atharva ko dekhte hi apni seat se khade ho gaye.


Jai “ Young master aap yaha kyu aaye hai ? ”


Jai ko chodke koi bhi alchemist past mein Atharva se baat nahi karta tha, lekin jo 3 din pehle hua usko dekhke sabke mind badal gaye they.



Atharva “ Uncle Jai, Dad ne mujhe bataya hai ki JADHAV Family ne ek alchemist hire kiya hai jo 70% effectiveness ke sath restoration pill concoct kar sakta hai. ”


Atharva ne wahi pe rakhi huyi ek chair pe baithte huye kaha.


Jai “ Young Master, aapko ye bhi pata hai. Humne last kuch dino mein koi bhi restoration pill sell nahi ki hai. Hamari abilities limited hai aur hum 70% effectiveness wali pill banane ki ability nahi rakhte.”


Atharva “ don’t give up uncle, main aapko aise person se milwaunga jo 70% effectiveness se jayada effectiveness wala pill concoct kar sakta hai. ”


Jai “ What ? "
" Young master aise kisi ko jaante hai. ”


Jai ne khus hote huye kaha.


“ kaha hai wo alchemist ? "
" Agar wo hamari help karne ke liye taiyar hai to hum bilkul bhi disrespect show nahi karenge. ”


Fat man ne serious hote huye kaha.


Atharva “ Tum logo ko wo person dur lag raha hai, lekin wo tumhare bilkul saamne hi to hai. ”


Apne fan ko fold karte huye Atharva khada ho gaya.


“ What ? "
" Young master, kya tum khud ke baare mein hi to nahi keh rahe ho ? ”


Fat old man ne surprise hote huye Atharva se pucha. Baaki dono ka bhi same reaction tha.


Atharva “ Haa, main hi wo alchemist hu. ”


Hahhahahaha……


Jaise hi Atharva ne jawab diya waise hi trio ek dum jor se hasne lage.


Jai ” Young master aap pills concoct karna chahte ho ? "
" Majak karna band karo, sabko pata hai aap sirf pills consume karne mein ache ho naaki pills concoct karne mein. "


Atharva “ Uncle Jai mujhe itna bhi kam mat samjho. Wo kahawat hai na doctor wo hi banta hai jo sabse jyada bimar raha ho. Lekin mere liye alag hai ‘ acha alchemist wo hi banta hai jisne bahut saari pills consume ki ho. ’”


Trio ek baar firse hasne laga.


“ agar pills consume karne se hi log alchemist bante to abhi tak Saint Origin mein sabhi Alchemist hote. Ab aap yaha se jaao aur humey koi solution nikalne mein disturb mat karo. ”


Atharva “ Lagta hai tum log mujpe vishwas nahi karoge jab tak main tumhe apni ability na dikha du. Lets go, mujhe furnace room mein le chalo. ”


Apni sleeves ko uppar chahdate huye Atharva aise act kar raha tha jaise wo kuch bada karne wala ho. Trio ne Atharva ko dekha, unhe aisa bilkul bhi nahi laga ki wo majak kar raha hai. Kya wo sach mein itni pills consume karke alchemist ban gaya hai?









TO BE CONTINUED …….

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Itachi_Uchiha bhai....
Nice and lovely update....

 

[krish1152]

Nice update