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Update 28:- (Trouble Makers)





Yan Family mein sab ke Face pe khusi thi. Kuch hi der mein waha pe ek white Dress mein ladka aaya panic Expression liye huye. Wo kaafi handsome tha aur apne twenties mein lag raha tha. Jab usne Riya ka room Freeze dekha to uske Face ke expression kaafi Change ho gaye aur wo kaafi dar gaya.




"Riya ko kya hua? Is baar ye bimari itna jyada jor se strike kyu kar rahi hai?"




Harish "Mohit chinta mat karo. Riya ek dum thik hai."



Ye Mohit naam ka ladka Riya ka Cousin tha aur wo Riya ko apni sagi behen ki tarah pyar karta tha. Wo abhi sirf 20 years ka hi tha aur wo Late QI HAI Realm mein pahuch gaya tha. Iske sabse Jyada chance they Mortal Core Realm mein Breakthrough karne ke 21 ka hone se pehle.





Kyuki Riya ke ilaaz ki khabar kisi ko bhi nahi pata thi isliye Mohit bhi isse bekhabar tha. Mohit hi Misty Rain Tower ko sambhalta tha aur uska pura dhyan apne Cultivation pe tha isliye wo doosre matters pe dhyan nahi deta tha.




Harish ne Mohit aur AK ka intro karwaya aur Mohit ko jo bhi huwa bataya. Iske baad Mohit bhi AK ko Respect se dekhne laga kyuki uske liye uski Family se badhke kuch nahi tha. AK ko bhi Mohit ka First Impression kaafi acha laga.





Next Morning, Misty Rain Tower ke bahar se kaafi awaz aa rahi thi aur thodi hi der mein ek Guard bhagta hua ander aaya aur AK ki taraf dekhte huye bolne laga. Is time sabhi log Riya ke Room ke bahar hi they.




"Lee Family yaha aayi hai. Shen Brother AK ke liye yaha aaya hai apne Warriors ke sath aur unhone Misty Rain Tower ka Front Gate Block kar rakha hai."




Harish "Kisi ko nahi pata AK yaha reh raha hai to Shen ko kaise pata chala. Humph jaao jakar Shen se keh do AK Yan Family ka Important Guest hai. Aur wo AK ko hurt karna chahta hai to ye Yan Family ke sath War declare karne Jaise hoga."




"Chief, Shen ne Wang aur baaki ke 3 Mercenaries ko pakad liya hai. Aur wo keh raha hai ki agar Brother AK bahar nahi aaye to wo un sabko Misty Rain Tower ke saamne maar dega."




AK ne itna suna aur wo bahar ki taraf badh gaya. Baaki sab bhi uske piche jaane lage. AK sab ke aage chal raha tha uska Face ek dum Calm tha lekin uski aankho mein ek Killing Intent saaf dekha jaa sakta tha. Kisi ne aaj tak usey Darane ki ya Blackmail karne ki kosis nahi ki aur jisne ki unka end bhut bura hua.




AK abhi kaafi Gusse mein tha. Halanki wo Wang aur baaki sabka koi Friend nahi tha na hi un sab se usey farak padta tha kyuki wo khud ek Cold Hearted person tha lekin jab koi uske Matter mein kisi innocent ko ghasite to usey ye bilkul bhi bardast nahi tha.





Shen Bahar khada tha aur uske bagal mein ek young man khada tha jiski Energy Mohit se bilkul bhi kam nahi thi. Ye Shen ka Second Son tha aur ye bhi Late QI HAI Realm mein tha. Ye aur Mohit ek Dusre ke Rivals they. Lee Family ke Group ke saamne 4 log niche apne Ghutno pe baithe they unke muh sujhe huye they puri Body pe Blood laga hua tha aur unhe Iron Chain se bandha hua tha.





Harish "Shen Tumhari himmat kaise huyi Misty Rain Tower ke saamne ye sab karne ki? Tumhe kya lagta Yan Family tumhe kuch nahi kahegi. Agar Lee Family mein se kisi ne AK ke ek Hair ko bhi touch kiya to main Lee Family ke sath War Start kar dunga."






Sab log ek dum Clueless they khaskar ke Shen. Unhe samajh mein nahi aa raha tha ki Yan Family is AK ko kyu protect kar rahi hai. Shen ko pata tha agar Harish Puri Power ke sath AK ko protect karna chahta hai to wo AK ko bilkul bhi touch nahi kar paayega. Aur Lee Family ki Current Strength ke hisab se wo bilkul bhi Yan Family ke sath War declare nahi kar sakta tha.




Lekin Shen bhi puri taiyari ke sath aaya tha. Usne ishara kiya aur ek banda saamne aaya aur usne apni Sword Wang ke gale pe laga di.



Shen "AK agar tumne saamne nahi aaye to aaj main in sab ko maar dunga."




AK "Shen, tum Lee Family ke Chief ho, tum Red City ki Greatest Power mein se ek ho. Aur tum mere jaise Young man ke sath deal karne mein aise ghatiya Trick kaise use kar sakte ho. Disgusting."




Shen ke face ki smile freeze ho gayi kyuki jo AK ne kaha wo sahi tha. Shen ne bilkul nahi socha tha ki situation aisi ho jaayegi. Public bhi uske baare mein discuss karne lagi thi. Agar wo aaj in Mercenaries ko maarta hai to uski Reputation bilkul gir jaayegi.




Shen ke 3 Son they. First Son Mortal Core Realm mein Breakthrough kar liya tha aur wo abhi Apne Foundation ko stable kar raha tha. Uska Second Son bhi Genius tha aur wo bhi Late QI HAI Realm mein tha.




Second son "AK, maine suna hai tumne mere Third Brother ko maar diya. Main aaj iska badla jaroor lunga tumhe maarke. Agar tumme himmat hai to mere sath Death Match karo."




AK "Un Chaaro ko Free kar do. Main Challenge accept kar lunga."



Shen ne ye sunte hi signal diya aur uske admiyo ne un chaaro ko Release kar diya aur wo sab Yan Family ke side aa gaye.



Second Son bich mein aaya aur apne Late QI HAI Realm ka Aura Release kar diya. Wo Gyan aur Jain se kaafi Strong tha. Lekin unfortunately AK Bhi pehle wala AK nahi tha usne bhi Mid QI HAI Realm mein Breakthrough kar liya tha.



Suddenly dono ne ek dusre ke taraf Full power se Punch Throw kar diya. AK ne apni Full Strength use nahi ki kyuki agar wo aisa karta to Ye Second Son ek Punch mein hi mar jaata. Dono Punch ek dusre ke sath Collide huye kisi Metal ki tarah lekin Is Clash ke baad Second Son piche ki taraf chala gaya uska Hath bilkul numb ho gaya tha. Halanki wo apne pairo pe khada tha.



Sab log kaafi Shocked they unhone kabhi nahi socha tha ki AK itna Powerful hoga lekin Shen ke Face pe abhi bhi Smile thi.





Second son ne Gusse mein dhadte huye apna hath Ghumaya aur uske hath mein ek Black Color ki Sword aa gayi.




Buzz




Jaise hi Wo Sword bahar aayi wo buzzing ka sound produce karne lagi. Wo Sword 5 feet lambi thi aur Two Fingers jitni Chaudi thi.




AK "Low Rank Combat Weapon."




Ek Combat Weapon Kaafi Rare hota hai. Combat Weapon user ki Yuan Energy absorb karke do guna Strength ke sath attack kar sakta hai. Har Combat Weapon kaadi Rare hota. Halanki ye Low Rank Combat Weapon tha lekin ye Red City mein kaafi Rare tha. Is area mein ek Low Rank Combat Weapon ko dhundhna kaafi mushkil hai, Mortal Core Warrior ko bhi mushkil se Combat Weapon milte hai. Yan Family aur Lee Family dono ke paas 3-3 Low Rank Combat Wepona they.




Second Son "AK, Is Sword ka Naam Black Soul Ripper hai. Mujhe pata hai tumne apni life mein Combat Weapon nahi dekha hoga."




AK ye sunke Apne mann hi mann hasne laga. Ye second Son ek Low Rank Combat Weapon pe kitna proud hai. Uski Previous life mein Ultimate Combat Weapons bhi uski Aankho mein kuch nahi they. Kyuki Uske Paas Natal Weapon tha aur Natal Weapon Combat Se to bhut Jyada Strong hote hai. Combat Weapon ki Grade nahi badhti time ke sath jaise ek Low Rank Combat Weapon hai to wo wahi rahega life time. Lekin Natal Weapon owner ke sath Grow karta hai jaise jaise Owner strong hoga waise waise Weapon bhi Strong hoga. Natal Weapon bhut hi jyada rare hai. Inhe dhundha nahi jaa sakta kyuki Natal Weapon ko Warrior khud hi bana sakta hai apni Soul ke sath. Natal Weapon Person ki Life ke sath Connect rehte hai agar Natal Weapon damage hota hai joki impossible hai to User bhi injured hoga. Past life mein AK ke paas Natal Weapon tha Jiska naam tha "Heavenly Saint Sword" joki Saint Rank ki thi.




Second Son ne apni Yuan Energy Black Soul Ripper mein daal di. Us Blade se Cold Beams Nikalne lagi aur kisi Net ki tarah AK ki taraf badhne lagi. Second Son kaafi Fast AK ki taraf badh gaya aur Net bhi AK ko Cover kar chuka tha. Sablogo ki aankho ke saamne Second Son ne AK ko Half mein Cut kar diya.



"Hahahha"




Second Son jor se hasne laga lekin uski hasi ek dum se ruk gayi kyuki usey Realise hua ki usey Cut karte time kuch bhi feel nahi hua. Wo Sirf AK ki Shadow thi.




"Shadow"




Lekin wo aage kuch samajh ya kar pata itne mein AK kisi Flash ki tarah pata nahi kaha se Us Second son ke piche aa gaya aur usne apne hath se kisi Sword ki tarah us Second Son ka gala kaat diya.





Sab lob kaafi Shock they kyuki AK kaafi Fast tha uski Movement kisi ne nahi dekhi thi sirf Shen aur Harish ko chod ke lekin Shen kuch kar paata usse pehle hi AK ne Uske doosre bete ko maar diya. Usne dekha tha jaise Black Soul Ripper AK ko Cut karne wali thi waise hi AK kisi Flash ki tarah Crowd mein kahi gum ho gaya. Aur ek Second baad hi wo Second Son ke piche aa gaya.




Finally Shen ne React kiya aur wo dahad maarte huye AK ki taraf badh gaya lekin wo AK ko Touch bhi kar paata usse pehle hi Yan Family ke sabhi Mortal Core Warriors ne AK ko gher liya aur Harish Shen ke saamne jaake khada ho gaya. Dono Taraf ke Mortal Core Warriors ne apne Aura Release kar diya puri Crowd ko saans lena mushkil ho gaya tha lekin unhe samjh nahi aa raha tha ki Yan Family aisa kyu kar rahi hai. Shen ka Face bhi Ugly ho gaya tha kyuki uske sath sirf 3 hi Mortal Core Warriors aaye they usne bilkul nahi socha tha Situation aisi ho jaayegi.




Lee Family Members ne Shen ko samjhaya aur usey waha se le gaye kyuki Lee Family bilkul bhi Yan Family ke sath abhi War Nahi kar sakti thi kuch hid der mein AK ka naam puri Red City mein fail gaya.



AK ne Second Son ko maarke uska Combat Weapon utha ke khud ke paas rakh liya tha kyuki Uske paas koi Weapon nahi tha aur uski Heavenly Saint Sword Past life mein puri Tut gayi thi aur AK ko Koi Idea nahi tha us Sword ke Broken parts kaha hai. Lee Family ne ek Young Genius ke sath sath Ek Low Rank Combat Weapon bhi kho diya tha.




TO BE CONTINUED...
 
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Update 29:- (A Big Bad Dog)





AK ki main priority Lee Family bilkul bhi nahi thi na hi wo usey Serious le raha tha. Usne Decide kar liya tha ki wo Riya ke thik hote hi Origin Mountains mein chala jayega Training ke liye.




Issi Time Red City se Thousands of Miles dur Northwest mein 3 Young mein ek huge Mountain Range se bahar nikle. Is jagah ka naam hai Origin Mountains aur ye 10000 Miles ke Area mein faila hua hai aur yaha anginat Demon Beasts rehte hai. Ye ek Natural Place hai aur Yahi Mountain Range in 28 Cities ko QI Province se alag karti hai.




Halanki Origin Mountain Range kaafi bada tha aur yaha Anginat Demon Beasts they. Lekin wo itne Strong nahi they aur Heavenly Core Realm ka to ek bhi Demon Beast nahi tha is Mountain Range mein. QI Province ki jo Big Powers aur Powerful Sect hai wo isiliye Red City wale Area ki taraf dhyan nahi dete jab wo New Disciple recruit karte hai.




Jo Three Individuals they jo abhi aaye they wo apne Twenties mein they aur unme se 2 ladke aur ek ladki thi. Un teeno ne same style ke kapde pehne huye they. Yellow Robe aur unki Chest pe ek Sword ka Symbol bana hua tha. Obvious tha ki wo teeno QI Province ke hi kisi Powerful Sect se they.




Wo ladki aur ek ladka dono Early Mortal Core Realm mein they. Aur jo ladka bich mein khada tha aur Handsome tha wo Mid Mortal Core Realm mein tha lekin uska Aura Shen Aur Harish se bilkul bhi kam nahi tha.


{Writter Note:-main in dono ladko ko First Brother aur Second Brother likunga aur ladki ko Sister. Kyuki inka koi important Role nahi hai ye bas 2-3 Update ke mehmaan hai .}





Sister "First Brother, hum Pura Origin Mountain Cross karke is Remote Place mein pahuche hai."




Second Brother "Us Dog ne humey Rasta bhulwa diya is Origin Mountain ka. Humne Almost ek Month tak Travel kiya hai aur hum is Ghatiya si jagah pe aa gaye hai. First Brother, humey Wapis jaana chahiye."




First Brother "Ab hum yaha aa hi gaye hai to ye saamne jo City hai isme chalte hai. Kya pata wo Stupid Dog Yaha pe aaya ho. Hum ek Month se uske piche hai aur hum abhi tak us Dog ko pakad nahi paaye hai. Agar hum khaali hath wapis gaye to humari khub bejati hogi. Waise bhi Itne din Mountains mein rehke Bore ho gaya hu. Isliye is City mein chalte hai."




Wo teeno Red City ki taraf badh gaye.



Sister "Agar mujhe wo Dog mil gaya to Uski khaal udhed dungi."



---Evening, Yan Family---



Sab log abhi bhi Riya ke room ke bahar khade they AK ko chod ke kyuki wo apne room mein Rest kar raha tha. Riya ki Condition pehle jaise hi thi. Tabhi wohi Guard bhagta hua aaya panic Face ke sath.




Harish "kya hua? Ye mat kehna ki firse Lee Family musibat khadi kar rahi hai."




Guard "Is baar Lee Family nahi hai. Is baar Heavenly Sword Sect ke log hai."




"Heavenly Sword Sect"



Sabhi log kaafi excited ho gaye they.




Guard "Teen Young log aaye aur unhone kaha ki wo Heavenly Sword Sect ke Outer Disciples hai. Wo abhi Heavenly Falls Tower mein ruke huye hai aur unhone message bheja hai ki wo Chief se milna chahte hai."




Sabhi log Kaafi khus aur surprise ho gaye they. Wo log QI Province se besak isolated they lekin Mortal Core Warriors ko QI Province ke baare mein pata tha. QI Province mein 4 Big Sects hai aur Heavenly Sword Sect unme se ek hai. Wo log Pure QI Province ke Big Shot hai. Lekin Red City Wale ke liye khusi ki baat isliye thi kyuki Ye 4 Big Sects kabhi bhi Origin Mountains ki taraf dhyan nahi dete they.




Bina koi Hesitation ke Harish waha se unse milne ke liye nikal gaya. AK ke paas bhi ye News Pahuch gayi thi lekin usey inke baare mein koi khabar nahi thi usne apni Past life mein Divine Continent ke Big Sects ko apni Nazro mein nahi rakha to ye chote Sects ke baare mein to kya hi pata hoga usey.




Lekin AK ko pata tha usey Divine Continent jaana hai to Usey Pehli QI Province ko Dominate karna hoga aur Fir Pure Eastern Continent ko for wo Divine Continent mein tik paayega kyuki wo abhi pehle ki tarah strong nahi tha.




Baaki log jo Heavenly Sword Sect ka naam sunke khus ho rahe they. Jab inhe pata chalega ki wo kisi Dog ko dhundh rahe hai to ye sab khoon ki ulti kar denge.





Heavenly Falls Tower ke saamne Harish aur Shen ek sath pahuche. Un dono ne ek taraf gusse se dekhna lekin bina kuch bole ander chale gaye.




Harish aur Shen sidha second Floor pe chale gaye jo ki kaafi bada aur luxurious tha. Usi Floor mein wo teeno enjoy kar rahe they. Un teeno ka Status Normal logo se High tha lekin wo log fir bhi ye sab enjoy nahi kar paate they kyuki unhe apne Sect mein rehke hi Cultivate karna padta tha. Respected hone ki feeling un teeno ko kaafi achi lag rahi thi. QI Province mein Outer Disciples ko kaun puchta hai. har Sect mein Thousand se bhi jyada inner Disciple hote hai. Outer Disciples ko koi nahi puchta lekin is area ki baat alag thi.




Harish aur Shen ne un teeno ko kaafi Respectfully Greet kiya aur introduction diya apna apna.




First Brother "Main sidha point pe aata hu mujhe aap dono ki Families ki power ki jaroorat hai kisi kaam ke liye."




Shen "kya main Puch sakta hu aapko humari madad kis Cheez mein chahiye?"




First Brother "Ek Dog ko Dhundhne mein."




Harish aur Shen ka to dimag ghum gaya ye sun ke ki ye Heavenly Sword Sect ke Log ek Dog ko dhundh rahe aur aisa konsa Dog aa gaya jo 3 Powerful Mortal Core Warriors ko 10000 Miles tak hath nahi aaya.




First Brother "Itne surprise mat hoiye. Hum sach mein Ek Dog ko hi Dhudh rahe hai. Aur mujhe lagta hai Wo Stupid Dog yahi kahi Chupa hua hai. Usey koi normal Dog mat samjho. Wo kaafi Cunning hai aur ek dum Lunatic hai."




Harish "Wo Dog Dikhta kaisa hai."




Sister "Wo Golden karka hai aur kaafi Fierce hai aur tum log usey dekhte hi pehchaan jaaoge."




First Brother "Agar tum Dog ko dhundhte ho ya nahi lekin Kal main ek Examination rakhunga Origin Mountain ki Boundary pe Dono Family Se 10-10 Young Genius Participate kar sakte hai. Kyuki agar koi Talented Person ko Sect Join karwayenge to Sect bhi humey Reward dega. Un sabko 4 Hours milenge Demon Beasts ko hunt karne ke liye aur Demon Beasts ki amount ko dekhte huye main unhe Rank karunga aur Top 5 ko apne sath le jaaunga. Halanki makn unhe bas recommand kar sakta hu Sect mein Join hona unki khudi Ability hogi."




Harish aur Shen kaafi khus ho gaye kyuki ye kaafi badi opportunity thi dono Family ke liye. Unhe pata tha ye teeno sirf Outer Disciples hai inke paas koi Authority nahi hai Disciples ko select karne ki lekin ye log recommend to kar hi sakte hai.




Uske baad dono Apne apne Families ke paas Chale gaye aur unhe saari baat batayi aur us Dog ko dhundhne ke Order de diye. AK bhi is Dog ke baare mein Sunke surprise hua. Lekin dono Families mein se kisi ko wo Dog nahi mila.





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Update 28:- (Trouble Makers)





Yan Family mein sab ke Face pe khusi thi. Kuch hi der mein waha pe ek white Dress mein ladka aaya panic Expression liye huye. Wo kaafi handsome tha aur apne twenties mein lag raha tha. Jab usne Riya ka room Freeze dekha to uske Face ke expression kaafi Change ho gaye aur wo kaafi dar gaya.




"Riya ko kya hua? Is baar ye bimari itna jyada jor se strike kyu kar rahi hai?"




Harish "Mohit chinta mat karo. Riya ek dum thik hai."



Ye Mohit naam ka ladka Riya ka Cousin tha aur wo Riya ko apni sagi behen ki tarah pyar karta tha. Wo abhi sirf 20 years ka hi tha aur wo Late QI HAI Realm mein pahuch gaya tha. Iske sabse Jyada chance they Mortal Core Realm mein Breakthrough karne ke 21 ka hone se pehle.





Kyuki Riya ke ilaaz ki khabar kisi ko bhi nahi pata thi isliye Mohit bhi isse bekhabar tha. Mohit hi Misty Rain Tower ko sambhalta tha aur uska pura dhyan apne Cultivation pe tha isliye wo doosre matters pe dhyan nahi deta tha.




Harish ne Mohit aur AK ka intro karwaya aur Mohit ko jo bhi huwa bataya. Iske baad Mohit bhi AK ko Respect se dekhne laga kyuki uske liye uski Family se badhke kuch nahi tha. AK ko bhi Mohit ka First Impression kaafi acha laga.





Next Morning, Misty Rain Tower ke bahar se kaafi awaz aa rahi thi aur thodi hi der mein ek Guard bhagta hua ander aaya aur AK ki taraf dekhte huye bolne laga. Is time sabhi log Riya ke Room ke bahar hi they.




"Lee Family yaha aayi hai. Shen Brother AK ke liye yaha aaya hai apne Warriors ke sath aur unhone Misty Rain Tower ka Front Gate Block kar rakha hai."




Harish "Kisi ko nahi pata AK yaha reh raha hai to Shen ko kaise pata chala. Humph jaao jakar Shen se keh do AK Yan Family ka Important Guest hai. Aur wo AK ko hurt karna chahta hai to ye Yan Family ke sath War declare karne Jaise hoga."




"Chief, Shen ne Wang aur baaki ke 3 Mercenaries ko pakad liya hai. Aur wo keh raha hai ki agar Brother AK bahar nahi aaye to wo un sabko Misty Rain Tower ke saamne maar dega."




AK ne itna suna aur wo bahar ki taraf badh gaya. Baaki sab bhi uske piche jaane lage. AK sab ke aage chal raha tha uska Face ek dum Calm tha lekin uski aankho mein ek Killing Intent saaf dekha jaa sakta tha. Kisi ne aaj tak usey Darane ki ya Blackmail karne ki kosis nahi ki aur jisne ki unka end bhut bura hua.




AK abhi kaafi Gusse mein tha. Halanki wo Wang aur baaki sabka koi Friend nahi tha na hi un sab se usey farak padta tha kyuki wo khud ek Cold Hearted person tha lekin jab koi uske Matter mein kisi innocent ko ghasite to usey ye bilkul bhi bardast nahi tha.





Shen Bahar khada tha aur uske bagal mein ek young man khada tha jiski Energy Mohit se bilkul bhi kam nahi thi. Ye Shen ka Second Son tha aur ye bhi Late QI HAI Realm mein tha. Ye aur Mohit ek Dusre ke Rivals they. Lee Family ke Group ke saamne 4 log niche apne Ghutno pe baithe they unke muh sujhe huye they puri Body pe Blood laga hua tha aur unhe Iron Chain se bandha hua tha.





Harish "Shen Tumhari himmat kaise huyi Misty Rain Tower ke saamne ye sab karne ki? Tumhe kya lagta Yan Family tumhe kuch nahi kahegi. Agar Lee Family mein se kisi ne AK ke ek Hair ko bhi touch kiya to main Lee Family ke sath War Start kar dunga."






Sab log ek dum Clueless they khaskar ke Shen. Unhe samajh mein nahi aa raha tha ki Yan Family is AK ko kyu protect kar rahi hai. Shen ko pata tha agar Harish Puri Power ke sath AK ko protect karna chahta hai to wo AK ko bilkul bhi touch nahi kar paayega. Aur Lee Family ki Current Strength ke hisab se wo bilkul bhi Yan Family ke sath War declare nahi kar sakta tha.




Lekin Shen bhi puri taiyari ke sath aaya tha. Usne ishara kiya aur ek banda saamne aaya aur usne apni Sword Wang ke gale pe laga di.



Shen "AK agar tumne saamne nahi aaye to aaj main in sab ko maar dunga."




AK "Shen, tum Lee Family ke Chief ho, tum Red City ki Greatest Power mein se ek ho. Aur tum mere jaise Young man ke sath deal karne mein aise ghatiya Trick kaise use kar sakte ho. Disgusting."




Shen ke face ki smile freeze ho gayi kyuki jo AK ne kaha wo sahi tha. Shen ne bilkul nahi socha tha ki situation aisi ho jaayegi. Public bhi uske baare mein discuss karne lagi thi. Agar wo aaj in Mercenaries ko maarta hai to uski Reputation bilkul gir jaayegi.




Shen ke 3 Son they. First Son Mortal Core Realm mein Breakthrough kar liya tha aur wo abhi Apne Foundation ko stable kar raha tha. Uska Second Son bhi Genius tha aur wo bhi Late QI HAI Realm mein tha.




Second son "AK, maine suna hai tumne mere Third Brother ko maar diya. Main aaj iska badla jaroor lunga tumhe maarke. Agar tumme himmat hai to mere sath Death Match karo."




AK "Un Chaaro ko Free kar do. Main Challenge accept kar lunga."



Shen ne ye sunte hi signal diya aur uske admiyo ne un chaaro ko Release kar diya aur wo sab Yan Family ke side aa gaye.



Second Son bich mein aaya aur apne Late QI HAI Realm ka Aura Release kar diya. Wo Gyan aur Jain se kaafi Strong tha. Lekin unfortunately AK Bhi pehle wala AK nahi tha usne bhi Mid QI HAI Realm mein Breakthrough kar liya tha.



Suddenly dono ne ek dusre ke taraf Full power se Punch Throw kar diya. AK ne apni Full Strength use nahi ki kyuki agar wo aisa karta to Ye Second Son ek Punch mein hi mar jaata. Dono Punch ek dusre ke sath Collide huye kisi Metal ki tarah lekin Is Clash ke baad Second Son piche ki taraf chala gaya uska Hath bilkul numb ho gaya tha. Halanki wo apne pairo pe khada tha.



Sab log kaafi Shocked they unhone kabhi nahi socha tha ki AK itna Powerful hoga lekin Shen ke Face pe abhi bhi Smile thi.





Second son ne Gusse mein dhadte huye apna hath Ghumaya aur uske hath mein ek Black Color ki Sword aa gayi.




Buzz




Jaise hi Wo Sword bahar aayi wo buzzing ka sound produce karne lagi. Wo Sword 5 feet lambi thi aur Two Fingers jitni Chaudi thi.




AK "Low Rank Combat Weapon."




Ek Combat Weapon Kaafi Rare hota hai. Combat Weapon user ki Yuan Energy absorb karke do guna Strength ke sath attack kar sakta hai. Har Combat Weapon kaadi Rare hota. Halanki ye Low Rank Combat Weapon tha lekin ye Red City mein kaafi Rare tha. Is area mein ek Low Rank Combat Weapon ko dhundhna kaafi mushkil hai, Mortal Core Warrior ko bhi mushkil se Combat Weapon milte hai. Yan Family aur Lee Family dono ke paas 3-3 Low Rank Combat Wepona they.




Second Son "AK, Is Sword ka Naam Black Soul Ripper hai. Mujhe pata hai tumne apni life mein Combat Weapon nahi dekha hoga."




AK ye sunke Apne mann hi mann hasne laga. Ye second Son ek Low Rank Combat Weapon pe kitna proud hai. Uski Previous life mein Ultimate Combat Weapons bhi uski Aankho mein kuch nahi they. Kyuki Uske Paas Natal Weapon tha aur Natal Weapon Combat Se to bhut Jyada Strong hote hai. Combat Weapon ki Grade nahi badhti time ke sath jaise ek Low Rank Combat Weapon hai to wo wahi rahega life time. Lekin Natal Weapon owner ke sath Grow karta hai jaise jaise Owner strong hoga waise waise Weapon bhi Strong hoga. Natal Weapon bhut hi jyada rare hai. Inhe dhundha nahi jaa sakta kyuki Natal Weapon ko Warrior khud hi bana sakta hai apni Soul ke sath. Natal Weapon Person ki Life ke sath Connect rehte hai agar Natal Weapon damage hota hai joki impossible hai to User bhi injured hoga. Past life mein AK ke paas Natal Weapon tha Jiska naam tha "Heavenly Saint Sword" joki Saint Rank ki thi.




Second Son ne apni Yuan Energy Black Soul Ripper mein daal di. Us Blade se Cold Beams Nikalne lagi aur kisi Net ki tarah AK ki taraf badhne lagi. Second Son kaafi Fast AK ki taraf badh gaya aur Net bhi AK ko Cover kar chuka tha. Sablogo ki aankho ke saamne Second Son ne AK ko Half mein Cut kar diya.



"Hahahha"




Second Son jor se hasne laga lekin uski hasi ek dum se ruk gayi kyuki usey Realise hua ki usey Cut karte time kuch bhi feel nahi hua. Wo Sirf AK ki Shadow thi.




"Shadow"




Lekin wo aage kuch samajh ya kar pata itne mein AK kisi Flash ki tarah pata nahi kaha se Us Second son ke piche aa gaya aur usne apne hath se kisi Sword ki tarah us Second Son ka gala kaat diya.





Sab lob kaafi Shock they kyuki AK kaafi Fast tha uski Movement kisi ne nahi dekhi thi sirf Shen aur Harish ko chod ke lekin Shen kuch kar paata usse pehle hi AK ne Uske doosre bete ko maar diya. Usne dekha tha jaise Black Soul Ripper AK ko Cut karne wali thi waise hi AK kisi Flash ki tarah Crowd mein kahi gum ho gaya. Aur ek Second baad hi wo Second Son ke piche aa gaya.




Finally Shen ne React kiya aur wo dahad maarte huye AK ki taraf badh gaya lekin wo AK ko Touch bhi kar paata usse pehle hi Yan Family ke sabhi Mortal Core Warriors ne AK ko gher liya aur Harish Shen ke saamne jaake khada ho gaya. Dono Taraf ke Mortal Core Warriors ne apne Aura Release kar diya puri Crowd ko saans lena mushkil ho gaya tha lekin unhe samjh nahi aa raha tha ki Yan Family aisa kyu kar rahi hai. Shen ka Face bhi Ugly ho gaya tha kyuki uske sath sirf 3 hi Mortal Core Warriors aaye they usne bilkul nahi socha tha Situation aisi ho jaayegi.




Lee Family Members ne Shen ko samjhaya aur usey waha se le gaye kyuki Lee Family bilkul bhi Yan Family ke sath abhi War Nahi kar sakti thi kuch hid der mein AK ka naam puri Red City mein fail gaya.



AK ne Second Son ko maarke uska Combat Weapon utha ke khud ke paas rakh liya tha kyuki Uske paas koi Weapon nahi tha aur uski Heavenly Saint Sword Past life mein puri Tut gayi thi aur AK ko Koi Idea nahi tha us Sword ke Broken parts kaha hai. Lee Family ne ek Young Genius ke sath sath Ek Low Rank Combat Weapon bhi kho diya tha.




TO BE CONTINUED...
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Update 29:- (A Big Bad Dog)





AK ki main priority Lee Family bilkul bhi nahi thi na hi wo usey Serious le raha tha. Usne Decide kar liya tha ki wo Riya ke thik hote hi Origin Mountains mein chala jayega Training ke liye.




Issi Time Red City se Thousands of Miles dur Northwest mein 3 Young mein ek huge Mountain Range se bahar nikle. Is jagah ka naam hai Origin Mountains aur ye 10000 Miles ke Area mein faila hua hai aur yaha anginat Demon Beasts rehte hai. Ye ek Natural Place hai aur Yahi Mountain Range in 28 Cities ko QI Province se alag karti hai.




Halanki Origin Mountain Range kaafi bada tha aur yaha Anginat Demon Beasts they. Lekin wo itne Strong nahi they aur Heavenly Core Realm ka to ek bhi Demon Beast nahi tha is Mountain Range mein. QI Province ki jo Big Powers aur Powerful Sect hai wo isiliye Red City wale Area ki taraf dhyan nahi dete jab wo New Disciple recruit karte hai.




Jo Three Individuals they jo abhi aaye they wo apne Twenties mein they aur unme se 2 ladke aur ek ladki thi. Un teeno ne same style ke kapde pehne huye they. Yellow Robe aur unki Chest pe ek Sword ka Symbol bana hua tha. Obvious tha ki wo teeno QI Province ke hi kisi Powerful Sect se they.




Wo ladki aur ek ladka dono Early Mortal Core Realm mein they. Aur jo ladka bich mein khada tha aur Handsome tha wo Mid Mortal Core Realm mein tha lekin uska Aura Shen Aur Harish se bilkul bhi kam nahi tha.


{Writter Note:-main in dono ladko ko First Brother aur Second Brother likunga aur ladki ko Sister. Kyuki inka koi important Role nahi hai ye bas 2-3 Update ke mehmaan hai .}





Sister "First Brother, hum Pura Origin Mountain Cross karke is Remote Place mein pahuche hai."




Second Brother "Us Dog ne humey Rasta bhulwa diya is Origin Mountain ka. Humne Almost ek Month tak Travel kiya hai aur hum is Ghatiya si jagah pe aa gaye hai. First Brother, humey Wapis jaana chahiye."




First Brother "Ab hum yaha aa hi gaye hai to ye saamne jo City hai isme chalte hai. Kya pata wo Stupid Dog Yaha pe aaya ho. Hum ek Month se uske piche hai aur hum abhi tak us Dog ko pakad nahi paaye hai. Agar hum khaali hath wapis gaye to humari khub bejati hogi. Waise bhi Itne din Mountains mein rehke Bore ho gaya hu. Isliye is City mein chalte hai."




Wo teeno Red City ki taraf badh gaye.



Sister "Agar mujhe wo Dog mil gaya to Uski khaal udhed dungi."



---Evening, Yan Family---



Sab log abhi bhi Riya ke room ke bahar khade they AK ko chod ke kyuki wo apne room mein Rest kar raha tha. Riya ki Condition pehle jaise hi thi. Tabhi wohi Guard bhagta hua aaya panic Face ke sath.




Harish "kya hua? Ye mat kehna ki firse Lee Family musibat khadi kar rahi hai."




Guard "Is baar Lee Family nahi hai. Is baar Heavenly Sword Sect ke log hai."




"Heavenly Sword Sect"



Sabhi log kaafi excited ho gaye they.




Guard "Teen Young log aaye aur unhone kaha ki wo Heavenly Sword Sect ke Outer Disciples hai. Wo abhi Heavenly Falls Tower mein ruke huye hai aur unhone message bheja hai ki wo Chief se milna chahte hai."




Sabhi log Kaafi khus aur surprise ho gaye they. Wo log QI Province se besak isolated they lekin Mortal Core Warriors ko QI Province ke baare mein pata tha. QI Province mein 4 Big Sects hai aur Heavenly Sword Sect unme se ek hai. Wo log Pure QI Province ke Big Shot hai. Lekin Red City Wale ke liye khusi ki baat isliye thi kyuki Ye 4 Big Sects kabhi bhi Origin Mountains ki taraf dhyan nahi dete they.




Bina koi Hesitation ke Harish waha se unse milne ke liye nikal gaya. AK ke paas bhi ye News Pahuch gayi thi lekin usey inke baare mein koi khabar nahi thi usne apni Past life mein Divine Continent ke Big Sects ko apni Nazro mein nahi rakha to ye chote Sects ke baare mein to kya hi pata hoga usey.




Lekin AK ko pata tha usey Divine Continent jaana hai to Usey Pehli QI Province ko Dominate karna hoga aur Fir Pure Eastern Continent ko for wo Divine Continent mein tik paayega kyuki wo abhi pehle ki tarah strong nahi tha.




Baaki log jo Heavenly Sword Sect ka naam sunke khus ho rahe they. Jab inhe pata chalega ki wo kisi Dog ko dhundh rahe hai to ye sab khoon ki ulti kar denge.





Heavenly Falls Tower ke saamne Harish aur Shen ek sath pahuche. Un dono ne ek taraf gusse se dekhna lekin bina kuch bole ander chale gaye.




Harish aur Shen sidha second Floor pe chale gaye jo ki kaafi bada aur luxurious tha. Usi Floor mein wo teeno enjoy kar rahe they. Un teeno ka Status Normal logo se High tha lekin wo log fir bhi ye sab enjoy nahi kar paate they kyuki unhe apne Sect mein rehke hi Cultivate karna padta tha. Respected hone ki feeling un teeno ko kaafi achi lag rahi thi. QI Province mein Outer Disciples ko kaun puchta hai. har Sect mein Thousand se bhi jyada inner Disciple hote hai. Outer Disciples ko koi nahi puchta lekin is area ki baat alag thi.




Harish aur Shen ne un teeno ko kaafi Respectfully Greet kiya aur introduction diya apna apna.




First Brother "Main sidha point pe aata hu mujhe aap dono ki Families ki power ki jaroorat hai kisi kaam ke liye."




Shen "kya main Puch sakta hu aapko humari madad kis Cheez mein chahiye?"




First Brother "Ek Dog ko Dhundhne mein."




Harish aur Shen ka to dimag ghum gaya ye sun ke ki ye Heavenly Sword Sect ke Log ek Dog ko dhundh rahe aur aisa konsa Dog aa gaya jo 3 Powerful Mortal Core Warriors ko 10000 Miles tak hath nahi aaya.




First Brother "Itne surprise mat hoiye. Hum sach mein Ek Dog ko hi Dhudh rahe hai. Aur mujhe lagta hai Wo Stupid Dog yahi kahi Chupa hua hai. Usey koi normal Dog mat samjho. Wo kaafi Cunning hai aur ek dum Lunatic hai."




Harish "Wo Dog Dikhta kaisa hai."




Sister "Wo Golden karka hai aur kaafi Fierce hai aur tum log usey dekhte hi pehchaan jaaoge."




First Brother "Agar tum Dog ko dhundhte ho ya nahi lekin Kal main ek Examination rakhunga Origin Mountain ki Boundary pe Dono Family Se 10-10 Young Genius Participate kar sakte hai. Kyuki agar koi Talented Person ko Sect Join karwayenge to Sect bhi humey Reward dega. Un sabko 4 Hours milenge Demon Beasts ko hunt karne ke liye aur Demon Beasts ki amount ko dekhte huye main unhe Rank karunga aur Top 5 ko apne sath le jaaunga. Halanki makn unhe bas recommand kar sakta hu Sect mein Join hona unki khudi Ability hogi."




Harish aur Shen kaafi khus ho gaye kyuki ye kaafi badi opportunity thi dono Family ke liye. Unhe pata tha ye teeno sirf Outer Disciples hai inke paas koi Authority nahi hai Disciples ko select karne ki lekin ye log recommend to kar hi sakte hai.




Uske baad dono Apne apne Families ke paas Chale gaye aur unhe saari baat batayi aur us Dog ko dhundhne ke Order de diye. AK bhi is Dog ke baare mein Sunke surprise hua. Lekin dono Families mein se kisi ko wo Dog nahi mila.





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