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Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - The Merchant Of Death ( COMPLETED )

Which type of ending do you want for this part?


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Sushilnkt

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Waah ji waah ..

Aaj kuch laga mujhe bas ek baat boli kal vo naa ki aakhir anjali ki kiss to banti thi....
Aaj man ko shanti mili hai.... Lekin vo family the itna to nhi maarana chahiye tha... Or jinda chhod diya vhi hai....

Kuch kirdar bahut dil ko chhute hai... Vese hi kuch ab tha... Duniya ko aag laga sakte hai... Lekin apno ko nhi....
Ab sabse pahle dekho puri team kaha tha... Ravi rohit or sam nhi the... Vo hote to kya unko maarte,
Or deva bhai hote to...... Bahut kuch miss huaa hai.... Or bhabhi

Ab yaha se jate vkt km se km bhabhi sang ek imoshnal drama jarur hona chahiye.... Aakhir kaar kuch to hai... Jo dil ke adhik pass hai... Ye mera lojik hai...

Kahani me chalegi apne trike se hi...

Or bhai ek baat bolna chahta hu... Aap samjho to .... Mujhe aapki lekhni pasand hai...

Lekin ye bich bich english bol kar kahani ka ridam ki jo laga dete ho... Vo galt hai....
Gaali ka swad bhi lena ho to apni bhasha hi shi hai... Try kar lo...

Ye tin update aapne diye... Best diye.. lekin jaha apno se baat ki jati hai... Vaha kuch to apna pan hota hi hai... Vaha sala english daal daal ke pure set ki .......... Di
 

Mobography

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Thoda bahut jo lagaw team ke andar tha AP ke liye abb woh bhi khatam.
Chalo iss bahane team AP se mili toh sahi or maar bhi khai 😁.
Par sab updates padhne ke baad tak samajh nahi aaya kiska support kiya jaye kyunki sab apni jagah thik hai.
Par iss update ke baad ABEER ki ijjat Or badh gyi kyunki 2.0 ko itne karib se janne ke baad samne se uska mukabla karna bahut badi baat hai.
Hope team jaldi recover kare, DEVA bhai ka reaction kya hoga yeh bhi dekhne wali baat hogi.
Bechara dilawar toh ache se nipat liya bechara coma me bhi confuse hoga doctor ke paas jaye ya phir puncture thik karne wale ke pass 😁😁 kyunki itne puncture kiye hain.

JABARDAST UPDATES AP BHAI🔥🔥
 

Naik

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Update-189(The Aftermath)





"Fuckkkkkkkkk"..

Main chilaaya jisase woh pura hall gunjaa.. Maine Abeer ko dekha khoon se lathpath tha woh.. Uske alaawa sablog kaa yahi haal tha.. Jo bhi ho these guys were my family..

Main-I am sorry.. I am sorry. Fuckkkkkkkk..

Main Abeer se durr hata bus uski wajah se mera gussa double hogaya tha meri khopdi fattne ko hogayi thi.. Tab Chang aaya mere pass toh maine usko gardan se pakkada or Uppar uthane laga or jab almost uski aankhein bahaar aane ko hogayi tab chhoda.. Woh khaanstey hue niche girra or utha..

Chang - Boss look behind you there are 6 people right here.. Yelog surrender kar rahe they, guess karo marrtey hue kaise bheek mangengey Yelog.. Imagine..

Main-Shut the fuck up Chang harr baar yahi sab. I am not a fucking kid jisse tum harr baar aise Paagal bana doge i am a fucking monster for fuck's shake. Agar ye sab he hota hai toh don't fucking bring me then.. You know Kitana pain hota hai mujhe aane Jaane Mein you fucking dumbass it's like a bullet to the head.. Itana pain hota hai and harr baar aane se i fucking loose part of myself just because of these stupid things..Tell 1.0 Do not fucking call me for petty shit just deal with it or fucking die ill take care of rest.. Fuckkkkkkk.. Harr baar yahi oh let's call 2.0 he'll deal with it same stupid shit over and over again. Fuck this stupid shit next time if he calls me that'll be bad.. Kab aana hai kab jaana hai I make those decisions so do not fucking force me to come.

Maine apni belt se dono chaaku nikaale or un 5 logon ki taraf badha jo surrender kar rahe they Uppar.. I needed something like right now mujhe kuch chaahiye tha I was loosing my mind here i was in so much pain and i needed some relief.

Main-Do you guys want to leave?

Iska Jawaab dene k liye ek ne munh khola he tha ki mera right hand waala chaaku gaya seedha uske pait Mein or ussi speed se maine bahaar nikaala or left hand waala chaaku ghonpa maine uske bagal waale ki gardan Mein chaaku aar paar hogaya uske woh girra piche chaaku mere hath Mein reh gaya..Then Pehle waale ko firr ghonp diya maine chaaku woh munh se khoon thookta hua wahin girr gaya ye dekh 2 log piche hattey ek bacha woh piche hattna chaahta tha but woh freeze hogaya tha usse samjh nahi aaya ki kya kare brain freeze hogaya shock Mein uska.. Lekin woh kuch figure out kar paata usase Pehle mera righ hand waala chaaku gaya uske pait Mein jisase woh niche ki taraf jukha and dusara chaaku gaya uske galle k andar.Woh keval mere sahare khadda reh gaya or maine usko ek hath se roukka and dusara chaaku se uske pait Mein kai waar kiye or tabtak karta raha jabtak woh niche naa girr gaya ab Baaki 2 bhaage wahaan se lekin maine maara Pehla chaaku faink k jo Pehle bandey ki pith Mein Jaa dhansa or woh girra wahaan munh k ball and then dusare ko bhi maara chaku faink k or woh chaaku laga on point seedha uski gardan Mein Woh wahin k wahin freeze hogaya or slomotion Mein niche girra main aaya unki taraf Pehla banda niche padda padda vibrate horaha tha maine uska chaaku jhatke se nikaala or uski gardan par rakha..

"m. Mmmmujhe matt maaro nmmmaaro matt.. Nmmmmaaaainnn mere chotey-2 bache h. H. G. HAinn.. Please... Mmm aai.."

Oh finally woh satisfaction mujhe milla jo chaahiye tha uff mujhe laga sab chup chaap Marr jaayenge.Ye nashe ko koi drug beat nahi kar shakta.. Maine chaaku uski gardan par rakha tha usko halka halka dabaaya woh hillne laga Dard k maare tab ek jhatke Mein uska galla kaat diya and uska Saara Dard ek sath leliya maine.. Mera pura sareer kaanp utha goosebumps se i loved every moment of it..

Main last bandey k pass aaya jo Marr chuka tha fir bhi double checking k liye maine uski gardan se chaaku nikaala usko thoda Uppar uthaya chaaku uske Galle par rakha and slowly slowly kaat diya.. Now he is confirmed dead.

Main utha ek lambi angdaai lee ab bacha Dilawar woh ek corner Mein khadda tha maine usse dekha ussne mujhe dekha uski gand fatt chuki thi or jaise he meri taraf dekha ussne woh bhaaga Abeer ki side or uske piche Jaake chipp gaya..

Dilawar-Abeer bhai Abeer bhai bachaalo.. Aapne promise kiya tha bhai.. Abeer bhai please.. Maardega bhai woh.. Bhai.. Please.. Bhai main sab kabool kar lunga sab kaa sab.. Please bhai.. Bhai..

Abeer-Jitana bheek maangega utani he buri mout dega tujhe woh.. Please listen to me chup chaap Marr Jaa it'll be better for you..

Main-Dilawar dilawar dilawar.. Yahi Naam haina tera?? So you know I hate you I hate you very much I don't know kyun maybe because my other version hates you same thing but the point being I hate you so much.. So I'll tell you what happens to people whom I hate..

Dilawar-Olplease.. AP bhai.. Please.

Main-Shut the fuck up and listen dumb fuck.. So aaj nahi maarunga main tujhe.. But.. But word important hai Yahaan. But I'll make your life way worse then death itself..

Ye sun Abeer humare bich Mein se hatt gaya..

Main-So let me tell you a thing or two.. See 3 tareeke hotey hain kissi ko eternal pain dene k or surprisingly aaj tu teeno he seekh jaayega..

Woh bawla banke meri Baat sun raha tha tab maara maine Pehla punch bahot he bhayaanak uske Liver k Uppar and punch itana swift and strong tha uska liver puncture hogaya.. Woh 2 seconds takk khadda he rehgaya or fir Ekdum se niche girra munh se khoon ugaltey hue woh chilaana caah raha tha but chila nahi paya woh munh k ball niche girra tha or jhatke khaa raha tha Dard or lack of oxygen ki wajah se..

Main-So 3 tarah se coma Mein jaatey hain log First lack of oxygen supply to the brain.. Jo abhi dikhaaunga tujhe..

Maine usse uthaaya or piche machine k sahaare khadda kardiya and then maara next punch uski lungs k Uppar ek dum time leke point set karke kyunki hill toh shakta nahi tha woh..

Main-Thats what we call an Mat Wiang San Punch in Muay Thai.. I just punctured you liver and your lungs in 2 punches that's not even possible for 99.9999% of the people they can't even do half of this. Now there is two leaks inside your body your brain is not getting enough oxygen. Tera dimag thanda horaha hai or thanda hota he jaraha hai exactly 3 minutes Mein Woh bandh hojaaega or tu ek coma Mein chala jaayega.. Lekin tabtak main tujhe dusare 2 tareeke bhi samjhaadunga..

Woh honsh Mein tha but uski body k Uppar uska koi control nahi tha woh surely sab feel kar paa raha tha but react nahi kar shakta tha.. Woh uss machine par almost leta hua tha..

Main - Ab second way hard hai bahot hard. Second way to send someone to coma is heartstroke.. Ye mostly natural he hotey hain heart attacks you know, but fortunately for you mujhe aata hai ye.. So here you go check this out..

Maine usko machine k Uppar he seedha kiya halka saa and uss machine par chadda main and jukh k maine maare uske heart k Uppar ek k Baad ek bahot Saare punches woh bhi full power se..Jab main rukka toh woh jorr jorr se sans lene laga uski chest se upper body vibrate hone lagi thi.. Tab maine chaaku liya or badi he safaai se usko aadha ghonp diya uske heart k just Uppar itana ki bus woh touch ho uske heart se.. I have done this hundreds of time in my life I know the basics trust me..

Main-Now you are having a man made heart stroke lekin unfortunately iska koi ilaaj Hai nahi seedha coma 45-60 seconds hain tere pass.. Lekin tabtak i'll teach you the last and most painful way.. Final is head trauma. Ya head injury bol le ye thoda jaldi karna padega warna tu Pehle he coma Mein chala jaayega.. Fir seekhega kya..

Woh coma Mein Jaa raha tha time kam tha mere pass isliye Maine apna dusara chaaku liya or woh turant ghonp diya uske sirr k Uppar power bahot jyaada lagi but kardiya maine Pehle he waar Mein i am getting better..

Main-And now done.. So ab tu next 24-36 hours takk coma Mein rahega duniya k kissi doctor k pass koi ilaaj nahi hai seedha death he hai bus lekin usase Pehle jo pain tujhe feel hoga woh mout se laakh gunna badtar hai..Rest in peace My friend..

Main-Chang burn all the drugs and bring the money bags..


Abeer-You are a sick person AP..

Main-Come on you know better then that..

Woh sablog shocked hoke mujhe ghurre Jaa rahe they..

Main-Remember Abeer main jo karta hun woh meri ego satisfaction k liye karta hun but 1.0 jo karta hai uska reason hota hai i know you don't like him or me but woh jo kar shakta hai woh koi nahi kar shakta. Woh caahe toh khud Iss city par raaj kar shakta hai Filhaal lekin nahi he decided to be a better person and helped this city beshak usme mera ego satisfaction bhi tha but in the end he helped the city.. Ye nahi keh raha tum nahi kar paatey obviously you guys can do it easily but I forced him so he had to come here.. But remember Abeer i dont care uske sath kya kartey ho tum but jab main Yahaan hun toh don't ever try to be a hero you should've leaved I cant stop myself every time so whatever you do with 1.0 I don't give a single fuck but do not ever try to cross the line with me.. I am the worst at letting people go and you know it.. I don't give a fuck kitane log marrtey hain Iss city Mein or woh innocent hain yaa nahi i dont have time to judge ki woh innocent hain yaa nahi lekin 1.0 never kills innocent people and you know it.. Again in the end do not double cross me ever you know better then that..

Abeer-We can't let you roam these streets like this AP we have to stop you so next time you come here I'll make sure I stop you for good..

Main-Shut up Abeer I am not coming back here fuck this place.. But maybe I am.. I don't have time to waste here i am leaving fuck you..

And complete satisfaction ok aana successful hua kaafi Hadd takk jitana khoya utana kama bhi liya so I'll call this a fair trade 1.0, but Dhyaan rahe 1.0 isase pichli baar main khud aaya tha abki baar tune bulaaya next time mera hoga and jab main caahunga tab mujhe bahaar aane Mein help karni hogi tujhe and do not call me here for this stupid stuff please don't kyunki agli baar main khudko nahi roukk paauga and tujhe pata hona chaahiye.. I have to satisfy my bloodlust so do not call me dont.. Jab aana hoga woh main decide karunga not you.


So waapis Jaane kaa sabse easy and kam Dard waala tareeka hai khud se chale Jaao easy and painless.. Maine wahi kiya 2 minute Baad forcefully Jaana padta isliye main abhi nikala. Main piche deewar kaa sahaara leke baith gaya aankh bandh karke.. And uss time main itana relaxed tha maano main bed par so raha tha.. Mere mind Mein bahot Saari images ghumm rahi thi ek sath and fir Ekdum se headache suru hua jo kuch seconds takk chala or badhta he chala gaya and finally sab rukk gaya maine aankhein kholi chaaron taraf ki situation dekhi it was bad as hell.. Main khadda hua kapde saaf kiye Chang or Ami bags leke aachuke they paison waale..


Abeer-You are making him more and more stronger AP.. You are ruining yourself.. You are making him even worst then a monster.. He'll be unstoppable soon fir kya karega.

Main Abeer k Saamne gaya woh hurt tha kaafi jyaada hurt Same with Mangal same with Anjali Ajay Deepak Rajat and everyone. 2.0 kaa ek waar bahot jyaada hota hai bahot jyaada..

Main--I'll take care of that.. I am sorry Abeer i am really sorry but i have to do it I don't have any options you understand me??

Abeer-Do not show me your face again AP please don't..

Main-I won't trust me i wont.. I don't want to.. I don't even like this fucking city.. Ye sab kaa credit tumhe he lena padega Abeer warna fir Jawaab nahi de paaoge media ko.So just tell them tumne kiya ye sab.

Ye bolke main unn sab k bich Mein se nikala unmein se kissi ne mere sath eye contact nahi banaaya and that exact moment I knew they hated me..

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Dhow dia sabko 2.0 n kisi ko bhi nahi chodha Abeer n thodi fight ki lekin aur koyi nahi tik paya
Aaah... Dilawer Dilawer maut ko najdeek se dikha ker fir wapas le aaya 2.0 dikha dikha itni aasni se maut nahi milti
Chaa gaye bhai
Bahot bahot ziada khaternaak update bhai
Ab dekhte Deva bhai ka kia reaction hota h
Excellent
 

Kratos

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Wooooohhhh...AP....what a update...teeno hi best the. I'm waiting for that moment..jab 2.0 lambe time ke liye aayega...and AP flashback ke updates kab se doge..pahle flashback aur current sath me chal rahe the.ab sirf present update hi chal rahe hai.
 

Boby

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Karta hun sab points clear common se point they tum maybe thoda galat samajh gaye.

First Anjali and team Jatin k piche aaye they unhe he nahi pata tha ki Jatin Lawyer ko kidnap karke Kahaan leke jaayega kyunki ye place AP ne decide ki thi last moment par toh Deva yaa Abeer kissi ko koi idea nahi tha ki Jatin Lawyer ko wahaan kheton Mein nehar k pass leke jaaega so unhe koi idea nahi tha. Isliye Trap Deva ne jarur lagwaaya tha but location woh he hogi ye unhe thodi naa maalum hoga.

Second Wohlog again remember jatin ko follow kartey hue aae they or bus aae he they 3-4 minute ki time window thi ab Saamne se toh Wohlog aae they Iss bich piche bandey bhejna hard tha kyunki piche toh nehar thi toh bilkul piche se toh bandey aa nahi shaktey they isliye bandey ghum k jarahe they jisase halchal hui or AP samajh gaya tha or Wohlog fielding laga pastey usaee Pehle usse sab pata chal gaya or Anjali and team ki fielding puri lagi he nahi thi isliye piche kam bandey they.

Third AP fans kaise gaya iska Jawaab thoda spoiler waala hai but main try karunga bina spoiler tumhe samjhaun.. Remember jagah AP ne choose ki thi puri city Mein itani jagah hain toh fir wahi kyun choose ki?? Kyunki woh familiar tha uss jagah k kone kone se remember AP kaa brain uske fansney se Pehle uske bahaar nikalne kaa plan bana leta hai toh beshak AP ko ye Baat naa pata thi but uske brain ne kuch na kuch soch samjh k he woh location choose ki thi kyunki usse pata tha yahan usse fansaaya nahi Jaa shakta or woh easily nikal shakta hai. That's what is called Plan B.


Ye sab points maine mention nahi kiye because ye readers k Uppar tha samajhne k liye jo main humesha karta hun kuch karne k liye readers k Uppar Chhod deta hun. Or Uppar se itani details denge toh fir scripted movie he lagegi isliye main harr choti Baat ki details mention nahi karta kyunki ye sab jaahir c Baat thi..

Keep Supporting bhidu as always thanks for the review..
Thanks bhai fully agreed apke points sahi hae. Kahani ke har scene me real movie ki feeling hae. Bas us update me confusion tha so aapse discus kar liya . Thanks for rply. Abhi ke last 3 updates ek dam fadu the. All the best bhai .
 

Arv313

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Deadly weapon fighter Jhakkas update bhidu
Sab kah rahe hai ki AP ab family me vapas nahi aa payega ha ye to hai lekin bhai logo aap sabko yaad hoga ki AP ka vision en sabse badhake jo deva bhai aur AP ke pita ka tha lekin ab deva ji to neta ban gye to kisi bhi ek bhai ko to aage aana hi tha aur koi baat na jab sabko pta chalega to ye log khud nazare na utha payenge.
Waiting for new update bhidu.
 

Kingsingh

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Super updates boss aapne to updates ka zalzalla hi la diya. Everything that just happened there, ye meri kab se ek dabi hui khwahish thi 2.0 vs the whole team jo aaj poori ho gyi.
Ab ek wish aur hai bhai ki 2.0 ke hatho CBI team ka khel khatam kar do bhai.
Wonderful thrilling update.
 
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