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Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - The Merchant Of Death ( COMPLETED )

Which type of ending do you want for this part?


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mr.pothikj

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Mind blowing bhai. Tino update superb tha. AP ka dosh nehi hai. AP to un logo ko samjhaya tha but wo log hi nehi mane. Abir ka planning sahi tha. Agar AP ka frustration nikal jata to itna sab kuch nahi hota. But AP is AP. He is much smarter than Abir thats AP failed his plan. Thanks to Chang and Ami that they saves all of the family members life. Lastly AP 2.0 satisfied his ego and go back. Ab lagta hai agli bar jab ayega tab bohot kuch hoga that can not be imaginable. Thanks for this great update. As always we will wait for your next update.
 

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Update-187(He Is Here)



Woh sab guns taane khaddey they mere Uppar..

Main-Come on guys put your guns down I know goli nahi chala shaktey tumlog..

Ye unko bhi maalum tha they can't shoot me and I can't shoot them to Wohlog ne guns niche ki and andar enter hue or andar kaa scene dekh ek baar ko toh sablog wahin k wahin rukk gaye or chaaron taraf kaa najaara dekhne lage.. Jahaan dekho wahaan khoon or laashein he thi bus..

Dilawar-Abeer bhai I surrender.. Main Jahaan kahoge jiske Saamne kahoge wahaan sab kabool karlunga..

Abeer-Hello AP.. We met finally..

Main-Yeah..

Abeer - Why? Are you scared AP?? Little brother is scared??

Mangal - Looking good with the beard by the way..

Abeer - So what's the plan AP??

Main-It's upto you guys.. What do you guys want?

Abeer-First we want Dilawar..

Main-Yeah sure.. Take him.. There you go.. Lejaaao isko.. Lets go guys..

Abeer-Hold up AP hold up.. Dilawar ko toh hum le he lenge.. Secondly we want you..

Main-Not happening..

Abeer-Listen i got a great deal for you tu humare sath chal and hum in dono ko Jaane denge.. We just need you..

Main-But why??

Abeer-Why?? AP you killed almost 100 people in past few days burnt half the city down sent 3 government workers in coma from they might never recover.. And made a joke of the government and police..

Main-Yeah.. But everyone deserved it.. So that's about it.. Dekh simple c Baat batata hun I don't give a fuck tumlog kya kartey ho kyun kartey ho yaa Iss city Mein Kya chalta hai kya nahi main Yahaan koi hero banke nahi aaya tha main mere kaam se aaya tha or woh kaam tha ye kingdom khatam karna because it was personal and main uss kaam k bahot close hun so Dilawar ko rakho apne pass i dont need him maine jo karna tha kar diya. I will just leave now..

Mangal-Itna easy nahi hai AP..Aakhir kaar AP hai tu kabtak bahaar rahega?? Again kuch weeks Baad koi naye target k liye waapis Yahaan aaega and fir najane kitane logon ko maarega... I mean yahi hoga. AP inmein se aadhe se jyaada log chindi chor they. Tujhe jiss kaam ki wajah se nikaala gaya tha tu waapis illegally aake wahi kaam kar raha hai.. Humne muskil se jail Jaane se bachaya tha tujhe ki chalo tu durr rahega but no it seems sab sach hai you love killing people.. You enjoy it..

Anjali - Chill out guys.. AP hear me out trust me I'll get you a separate cell in jail and whatever you want will be provided there i mean bahaar rahega tu toh khudko caah kar bhi nahi roukk paaega ye sab karne se we want what's best for you.. Please listen to me.. Come with us..

Main-I can't be caged Anjali..

Abeer-But you deserve to be in a cage.. I mean AP why all this kyun ye sab?? Humein inform kardiya hota i know hum Pehle nahi pakkad paae ye sab we are not smart as you blah blah but tujhe pata hai aaj nahi toh kal hum bhi pakkad letey ye sab.. Or tu Humein call karke inform bhi toh kar shakta tha ki ye sab horaha hai or ye log kar rahe hain and uske Baad humlog sab sambhaal letey.. But nahi tujhe toh bus manmarji karni hai Bhagwaan jo banana hai tujhe..

Main-Listen to me guys as simple as that I am leaving tumhe ye chaahiye rakho isko i dont give a fuck. But no way in hell you are keeping me..

Abeer-Then I am sorry to disappoint You AP Humein force karna padega..

Main-You don't want this Abeer trust me.. You really don't..

Abeer-I mean dusara koi option bhi toh nahi hai AP..We have to try it..

Main - Trust me Abeer i am not joking..

Mangal-Same here AP.. Same here..

Main waapis mudda Chang or Ami k pass aaya..

Main-Kuch bhi hojaae do not come between us. Bich Mein tabhi aana jab main niche jameen par Marrne waala houn.. Usase Pehle do not even touch anyone.. Bus ye Dilawar bahaar nahi Jaana chaahiye Yahaan se.

Chang-But boss..

Main--You heard me Chang..

Abeer-So AP last chance come with us or it'll end badly..

Main-That's not an option Abeer..

Abeer - Well I am sorry then..

Abeer aage badha main unko hurt nahi karna chaahta tha not at all i know woh apni jagah sahi they bahot jyaada sahi..But agar Baat apni jagah ki hai toh main bhi kind of sahi tha.. Or Uppar se Jail Mein hell no i am not going to a fucking jail.. Nope..

Abeer Mangal Rajat Deepak Ajay Anjali and Jiya mere Saamne aaye.. Ok odds are interesting..

Ab maine Abeer ko pura moukka diya or ussne mouka khulle hathon se accept karliya ussne maara mere pait Mein Ek punch jo itana strongly laga ki main apne ghutano par girra munh se khoon thooktey hue and uske Baad ussne maari ek laat meri ribs Mein main side Mein Jaake girra..

Abeer-Come on AP fight me at least.. Get up..

Main apna munh ponchta hua khadda hua or khadda hotey he Abeer ne maari mujhe laat jo maine bich Mein he pakkadi or uski jaangh par maara ek punch and then uski laat chhodi or uske pait Mein di ek or kick woh piche hatta or Iss bich Anjali ne maara mere munh k Uppar punch ab main piche hatta or piche hatttey he Mangal ne maari mujhe laat main niche girra Jaake.. Main actually wait kar raha tha mere baandh k tuttaney ka.. Itane din se ek k Baad ek frustration jamma horahi thi mere Uppar or obviously time to time main nikaal bhi raha tha frustration but itana kaafi nahi tha i know 2.0 yahin tha or main 100% sure tha jyaada time k liye nahi toh Iss situation se deal karne k liye toh woh aaega he kyunki bina meri khopdi k satke main inko jyaada hurt nahi kar shakta tha.. Or agar main Jail gaya toh fir 2.0 Pagla jaayega he doesn't like to be caged.. You know Lions are better off in then Jungle then in a fucking cage.. Same..Uski ego usse permission nahi deti ki ye usse baandh k rakha jaae.And usse pata tha main ye nahi karunga.. So that's why main or frustration buildup kar raha tha..

Main niche se utha toh uthtey he 2 side se kick paddi mujhe toh main again niche girra..

Main-Abeer trust me you all should leave..

Chang - Abeer Sach Mein you all should leave.. Tum jo samjh rahe ho woh nahi hai ye..

Abeer ne Chang ko dekha usse thoda saa time laga samajhne Mein ki main naa he 1.0 hun or naa he 2.0.. Lekin 2.0 k bahot close hun or yelog mujhe or close bhej rahe they..

Abeer-Quick Anjali Hathkadi lagaao isko..

Main khadda hua iss bich or Abeer ko maara punch and badle Mein Mangal ne maari mujhe kick jisse lagtey he main fir girra niche.. And abki baar utha nahi main balki blank hogaya ek baar k liye.. Lekin blank hone se kuch hua nahi or main turant waapis aagaya. What the fuck.. Nothing happened.. What is going on.. Ek baar mujhe laga 2.0 bahot close tha but ab again mujhe woh bahot durr lag raha tha.. What happened?? Main soch raha tha ki Abeer ne maara mujhe punch..

Abeer-Anjali Hathkadi leke aao..

Mujhe bc kuch bhi samajh nahi aaya ki kya hua..Aisa lag raha tha ki 2.0 bahaar Aa he nahi paaya kyun i dont know.. Anjali Hathkadi leke Meri taraf badhi Abeer or Mangal mujhe pakkadney k liye aage aaye.. Lekin main turant khadda hua or bhaaga wahaan se Uppar ki taraf wohlog suru Mein toh mere piche nahi aae lekin jab main second floor par pohancha toh niche se Abeer ki awaaj aai..

Abeer-You can't Run AP.. Come on ye din dikhaaega ab..

Iss bich Uppar se Wohlog uttar rahe they jo surrender kar chuke they mujhe dekh fatt gayi unki or woh wahin rukk gaye lekin main unke pass se nikal gaya toh woh hath Uppar kiye he niche utarne lage..
Main seedha third floor par uss room Mein aaya Jahaan Dilawar tha wahaan woh tha jo mujhe caahiye tha wahaan corner Mein drugs k bags k bags bharre paddey they bahot jyaada drugs they wahaan par uske side Mein paison k bags bhi they 3 lekin mujhe paise nahi caahiye they..

I don't know main kya soch raha tha yaa soch raha tha bhi yaa nahi.. Lekin maine uss bag Mein se ek packet nikaala faada usko toh uski smell ne he bc mujhe hilla diya.. Tab maine usme se kuch drugs apni hatheli par rakhe jyaada nahi but thode se and turant unhe sungh gaya maine socha takk nahi uske baare Mein.. Main samajh gaya ki ye 2.0 karwa raha hai khudko bahaar laane k liye.. Drugs jaise he meri body Mein gaye main wahin late gaya 2 seconds k andar main pure world ka ek chakkar kaat k waapis ussi room Mein aaya.. Lekin jo gaya tha woh nahi aaya..

"Missed Me".. Fuck that was hard as fuck..fuck..That hurts.. But it feels great to be back.. Holy shit..

Main khadda hua munh saaf kiya and uss room se bahaar aaya and niche ki taraf chala wohlog Uppar aarahe they but mujhe niche aata dekh k wahin rukk gaye.. Maine ek angadaai lee ye meri prasandida habit hai. Fresh hawa Mein saans lete hue angadaai lena.. I love it..

Main niche aaya wohlog waapis apni jagah par they..

Abeer-Acha hua surrender kar raha hai tu..

Main-Hmmm.. Abeer.. How are you?? Oh sab hain so how are you guys doing??

Main unke close aaya tab Abeer ne mjjhe ghurra meri aankhein dekhi or woh samjh gaya..

Abeer-Oh fuck.. Guys tum sab piche.. Get back.. Durr hato.. Koi bich Mein Nahi aaega..

Main-You are overconfident and I love it..

Abeer-Not overconfident. Main inko hurt nahi hone dunga.. Come on hurt me..

Main-Hmm.. Interesting itani jaldi kya hai.. So ladies and gentlemen. Hi mujhe jaantey nahi tumlog but people Call me 2.0 I am a better, smarter, dangerous, Merciless, Cruel, deadly and Rutheless version of AP.. You know tumlogon ko Jaanana tha na kya hua kya ban gaya AP tu.. Main tum sabko practically samjhaaunga jo tumlog kabhi nahi bhulloge..Tumne toh ek jaanwar dekha tha mere andar but main tumhe dikhaaunga real me kya hai mere andar that's what I like to call a "MONSTER"..

Abeer-Fight me AP not them..

Main-Do not interrupt me.. Come on Abeer you know better then that.. Main tujhe maarunga tab yelog emotional hoke aage aayenge then inko maarunga akele ko hospital thodi bhejunga.. I mean i know kya hone waala hai. Also lets make it quick bahot kam time hai mere pass like bahot jyada kam..


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Update-189(The Aftermath)





"Fuckkkkkkkkk"..

Main chilaaya jisase woh pura hall gunjaa.. Maine Abeer ko dekha khoon se lathpath tha woh.. Uske alaawa sablog kaa yahi haal tha.. Jo bhi ho these guys were my family..

Main-I am sorry.. I am sorry. Fuckkkkkkkk..

Main Abeer se durr hata bus uski wajah se mera gussa double hogaya tha meri khopdi fattne ko hogayi thi.. Tab Chang aaya mere pass toh maine usko gardan se pakkada or Uppar uthane laga or jab almost uski aankhein bahaar aane ko hogayi tab chhoda.. Woh khaanstey hue niche girra or utha..

Chang - Boss look behind you there are 6 people right here.. Yelog surrender kar rahe they, guess karo marrtey hue kaise bheek mangengey Yelog.. Imagine..

Main-Shut the fuck up Chang harr baar yahi sab. I am not a fucking kid jisse tum harr baar aise Paagal bana doge i am a fucking monster for fuck's shake. Agar ye sab he hota hai toh don't fucking bring me then.. You know Kitana pain hota hai mujhe aane Jaane Mein you fucking dumbass it's like a bullet to the head.. Itana pain hota hai and harr baar aane se i fucking loose part of myself just because of these stupid things..Tell 1.0 Do not fucking call me for petty shit just deal with it or fucking die ill take care of rest.. Fuckkkkkkk.. Harr baar yahi oh let's call 2.0 he'll deal with it same stupid shit over and over again. Fuck this stupid shit next time if he calls me that'll be bad.. Kab aana hai kab jaana hai I make those decisions so do not fucking force me to come.

Maine apni belt se dono chaaku nikaale or un 5 logon ki taraf badha jo surrender kar rahe they Uppar.. I needed something like right now mujhe kuch chaahiye tha I was loosing my mind here i was in so much pain and i needed some relief.

Main-Do you guys want to leave?

Iska Jawaab dene k liye ek ne munh khola he tha ki mera right hand waala chaaku gaya seedha uske pait Mein or ussi speed se maine bahaar nikaala or left hand waala chaaku ghonpa maine uske bagal waale ki gardan Mein chaaku aar paar hogaya uske woh girra piche chaaku mere hath Mein reh gaya..Then Pehle waale ko firr ghonp diya maine chaaku woh munh se khoon thookta hua wahin girr gaya ye dekh 2 log piche hattey ek bacha woh piche hattna chaahta tha but woh freeze hogaya tha usse samjh nahi aaya ki kya kare brain freeze hogaya shock Mein uska.. Lekin woh kuch figure out kar paata usase Pehle mera righ hand waala chaaku gaya uske pait Mein jisase woh niche ki taraf jukha and dusara chaaku gaya uske galle k andar.Woh keval mere sahare khadda reh gaya or maine usko ek hath se roukka and dusara chaaku se uske pait Mein kai waar kiye or tabtak karta raha jabtak woh niche naa girr gaya ab Baaki 2 bhaage wahaan se lekin maine maara Pehla chaaku faink k jo Pehle bandey ki pith Mein Jaa dhansa or woh girra wahaan munh k ball and then dusare ko bhi maara chaku faink k or woh chaaku laga on point seedha uski gardan Mein Woh wahin k wahin freeze hogaya or slomotion Mein niche girra main aaya unki taraf Pehla banda niche padda padda vibrate horaha tha maine uska chaaku jhatke se nikaala or uski gardan par rakha..

"m. Mmmmujhe matt maaro nmmmaaro matt.. Nmmmmaaaainnn mere chotey-2 bache h. H. G. HAinn.. Please... Mmm aai.."

Oh finally woh satisfaction mujhe milla jo chaahiye tha uff mujhe laga sab chup chaap Marr jaayenge.Ye nashe ko koi drug beat nahi kar shakta.. Maine chaaku uski gardan par rakha tha usko halka halka dabaaya woh hillne laga Dard k maare tab ek jhatke Mein uska galla kaat diya and uska Saara Dard ek sath leliya maine.. Mera pura sareer kaanp utha goosebumps se i loved every moment of it..

Main last bandey k pass aaya jo Marr chuka tha fir bhi double checking k liye maine uski gardan se chaaku nikaala usko thoda Uppar uthaya chaaku uske Galle par rakha and slowly slowly kaat diya.. Now he is confirmed dead.

Main utha ek lambi angdaai lee ab bacha Dilawar woh ek corner Mein khadda tha maine usse dekha ussne mujhe dekha uski gand fatt chuki thi or jaise he meri taraf dekha ussne woh bhaaga Abeer ki side or uske piche Jaake chipp gaya..

Dilawar-Abeer bhai Abeer bhai bachaalo.. Aapne promise kiya tha bhai.. Abeer bhai please.. Maardega bhai woh.. Bhai.. Please.. Bhai main sab kabool kar lunga sab kaa sab.. Please bhai.. Bhai..

Abeer-Jitana bheek maangega utani he buri mout dega tujhe woh.. Please listen to me chup chaap Marr Jaa it'll be better for you..

Main-Dilawar dilawar dilawar.. Yahi Naam haina tera?? So you know I hate you I hate you very much I don't know kyun maybe because my other version hates you same thing but the point being I hate you so much.. So I'll tell you what happens to people whom I hate..

Dilawar-Olplease.. AP bhai.. Please.

Main-Shut the fuck up and listen dumb fuck.. So aaj nahi maarunga main tujhe.. But.. But word important hai Yahaan. But I'll make your life way worse then death itself..

Ye sun Abeer humare bich Mein se hatt gaya..

Main-So let me tell you a thing or two.. See 3 tareeke hotey hain kissi ko eternal pain dene k or surprisingly aaj tu teeno he seekh jaayega..

Woh bawla banke meri Baat sun raha tha tab maara maine Pehla punch bahot he bhayaanak uske Liver k Uppar and punch itana swift and strong tha uska liver puncture hogaya.. Woh 2 seconds takk khadda he rehgaya or fir Ekdum se niche girra munh se khoon ugaltey hue woh chilaana caah raha tha but chila nahi paya woh munh k ball niche girra tha or jhatke khaa raha tha Dard or lack of oxygen ki wajah se..

Main-So 3 tarah se coma Mein jaatey hain log First lack of oxygen supply to the brain.. Jo abhi dikhaaunga tujhe..

Maine usse uthaaya or piche machine k sahaare khadda kardiya and then maara next punch uski lungs k Uppar ek dum time leke point set karke kyunki hill toh shakta nahi tha woh..

Main-Thats what we call an Mat Wiang San Punch in Muay Thai.. I just punctured you liver and your lungs in 2 punches that's not even possible for 99.9999% of the people they can't even do half of this. Now there is two leaks inside your body your brain is not getting enough oxygen. Tera dimag thanda horaha hai or thanda hota he jaraha hai exactly 3 minutes Mein Woh bandh hojaaega or tu ek coma Mein chala jaayega.. Lekin tabtak main tujhe dusare 2 tareeke bhi samjhaadunga..

Woh honsh Mein tha but uski body k Uppar uska koi control nahi tha woh surely sab feel kar paa raha tha but react nahi kar shakta tha.. Woh uss machine par almost leta hua tha..

Main - Ab second way hard hai bahot hard. Second way to send someone to coma is heartstroke.. Ye mostly natural he hotey hain heart attacks you know, but fortunately for you mujhe aata hai ye.. So here you go check this out..

Maine usko machine k Uppar he seedha kiya halka saa and uss machine par chadda main and jukh k maine maare uske heart k Uppar ek k Baad ek bahot Saare punches woh bhi full power se..Jab main rukka toh woh jorr jorr se sans lene laga uski chest se upper body vibrate hone lagi thi.. Tab maine chaaku liya or badi he safaai se usko aadha ghonp diya uske heart k just Uppar itana ki bus woh touch ho uske heart se.. I have done this hundreds of time in my life I know the basics trust me..

Main-Now you are having a man made heart stroke lekin unfortunately iska koi ilaaj Hai nahi seedha coma 45-60 seconds hain tere pass.. Lekin tabtak i'll teach you the last and most painful way.. Final is head trauma. Ya head injury bol le ye thoda jaldi karna padega warna tu Pehle he coma Mein chala jaayega.. Fir seekhega kya..

Woh coma Mein Jaa raha tha time kam tha mere pass isliye Maine apna dusara chaaku liya or woh turant ghonp diya uske sirr k Uppar power bahot jyaada lagi but kardiya maine Pehle he waar Mein i am getting better..

Main-And now done.. So ab tu next 24-36 hours takk coma Mein rahega duniya k kissi doctor k pass koi ilaaj nahi hai seedha death he hai bus lekin usase Pehle jo pain tujhe feel hoga woh mout se laakh gunna badtar hai..Rest in peace My friend..

Main-Chang burn all the drugs and bring the money bags..


Abeer-You are a sick person AP..

Main-Come on you know better then that..

Woh sablog shocked hoke mujhe ghurre Jaa rahe they..

Main-Remember Abeer main jo karta hun woh meri ego satisfaction k liye karta hun but 1.0 jo karta hai uska reason hota hai i know you don't like him or me but woh jo kar shakta hai woh koi nahi kar shakta. Woh caahe toh khud Iss city par raaj kar shakta hai Filhaal lekin nahi he decided to be a better person and helped this city beshak usme mera ego satisfaction bhi tha but in the end he helped the city.. Ye nahi keh raha tum nahi kar paatey obviously you guys can do it easily but I forced him so he had to come here.. But remember Abeer i dont care uske sath kya kartey ho tum but jab main Yahaan hun toh don't ever try to be a hero you should've leaved I cant stop myself every time so whatever you do with 1.0 I don't give a single fuck but do not ever try to cross the line with me.. I am the worst at letting people go and you know it.. I don't give a fuck kitane log marrtey hain Iss city Mein or woh innocent hain yaa nahi i dont have time to judge ki woh innocent hain yaa nahi lekin 1.0 never kills innocent people and you know it.. Again in the end do not double cross me ever you know better then that..

Abeer-We can't let you roam these streets like this AP we have to stop you so next time you come here I'll make sure I stop you for good..

Main-Shut up Abeer I am not coming back here fuck this place.. But maybe I am.. I don't have time to waste here i am leaving fuck you..

And complete satisfaction ok aana successful hua kaafi Hadd takk jitana khoya utana kama bhi liya so I'll call this a fair trade 1.0, but Dhyaan rahe 1.0 isase pichli baar main khud aaya tha abki baar tune bulaaya next time mera hoga and jab main caahunga tab mujhe bahaar aane Mein help karni hogi tujhe and do not call me here for this stupid stuff please don't kyunki agli baar main khudko nahi roukk paauga and tujhe pata hona chaahiye.. I have to satisfy my bloodlust so do not call me dont.. Jab aana hoga woh main decide karunga not you.


So waapis Jaane kaa sabse easy and kam Dard waala tareeka hai khud se chale Jaao easy and painless.. Maine wahi kiya 2 minute Baad forcefully Jaana padta isliye main abhi nikala. Main piche deewar kaa sahaara leke baith gaya aankh bandh karke.. And uss time main itana relaxed tha maano main bed par so raha tha.. Mere mind Mein bahot Saari images ghumm rahi thi ek sath and fir Ekdum se headache suru hua jo kuch seconds takk chala or badhta he chala gaya and finally sab rukk gaya maine aankhein kholi chaaron taraf ki situation dekhi it was bad as hell.. Main khadda hua kapde saaf kiye Chang or Ami bags leke aachuke they paison waale..


Abeer-You are making him more and more stronger AP.. You are ruining yourself.. You are making him even worst then a monster.. He'll be unstoppable soon fir kya karega.

Main Abeer k Saamne gaya woh hurt tha kaafi jyaada hurt Same with Mangal same with Anjali Ajay Deepak Rajat and everyone. 2.0 kaa ek waar bahot jyaada hota hai bahot jyaada..

Main--I'll take care of that.. I am sorry Abeer i am really sorry but i have to do it I don't have any options you understand me??

Abeer-Do not show me your face again AP please don't..

Main-I won't trust me i wont.. I don't want to.. I don't even like this fucking city.. Ye sab kaa credit tumhe he lena padega Abeer warna fir Jawaab nahi de paaoge media ko.So just tell them tumne kiya ye sab.

Ye bolke main unn sab k bich Mein se nikala unmein se kissi ne mere sath eye contact nahi banaaya and that exact moment I knew they hated me..

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Update-188(All Of Them VS ME)




Main-Yaa even listen i know you guys were my family so still tumhe ek chance deta hun let me go..

Abeer-Yes..leave..

Main-Just kidding..

Ye boltey he maine maari Abeer ko khaddey - 2 he laat and laat k just Baad maara uske Uppar punch main uske Uppar tutt padda mere speed meri movement bahot jyaada tejj thi even Abeer k liye bhi. I know Abeer bahot he badhiya fighter hai like bahot jyaada bahot he jyaada badhiya but issue ye tha ki main usse bahot ache se jaanta hun itana ache se ki main usko predict kar shakta hun easily. Maine usko recover he nahi hone diya then ek or punch jadd diya usko and abki baar main piche hatta and jump maarke di maine double kick usko chaati Mein Ab girra woh piche main bhi girra but main turant he utha.. And woh uth raha tha tab main bhaagtey hue gaya uski taraf and maari apne knee uski chin k Uppar woh piche girra Jaake and girrtey he fir maari maine uski ribs Mein laat or dusari baar maarne he waala tha ki ussne meri laat pakkad lee or mujhe meri taang pakkad k he dusri taraf faink diya.. Abeer k pass power mujhse jyaada thi like bahot he jyaada jisase mujhe bachna tha. Main jump maarke utha or Abeer uth he gaya tha almost ki maine bhaagke fir maari apni dono laatein uski ribs Mein Woh firr girra niche Jaake abki baar solid lagi usko woh durr takk ludakta hua gaya.. Main fir badha uski taraf..

Main-Told you Abeer. Mujhe chale Jaane dena chaahiye tha tereko.. Galat roukk liya tune.. I mean come on khadda ho bola toh maine time kam hai.. Get up..

Abeer khadda hua ab aaya usse bhi gussa jo mujhe chaahiye tha..

Main-Animal vs the Beast.. Beast always wins..

Abeer-It's not always about winnings AP..

Main-For me it is..

Abeer ne mujhe maara punch main usase bacha but uske sath ussne kick di jisase main nahi bach paaya mere pait Mein lagi uski kick or main bc hawa Mein uchal k girra niche lekin turant utha.. Ab main Abeer ki taraf bhaaga and jump maarke diya apne ghutne uski chaati Mein Woh niche girra main uske Uppar girra and then maarne laga main uske thobdey par ek k Baad ek punches.. Abeer kuch nahi kar paaya... Yaa ussne kiya nahi..

Main- You fucking smartass ab samjha main tera plan..

Abeer actually Jaan bujh kar fight nahi kar raha tha kyunki meri frustration woh khudpar he nikalwaana chaahta tha taaki Baaki bache rahein.. warna mere liye itana easy nahi hota Abeer main jeet jaata obviously but itana easily nahi kabhi bhi nahi Abeer is one of strongest people I have ever seen so it's never easy with Abeer... Abeer smart game khel raha tha mere sath..

Abeer - Come on hit me now..

Maine uska chehra khoon se lathpath kar diya tha tab utha main uske Uppar se..

Main-Oh come on Abeer don't do me like this at least fight me..

Abeer-Nope.. Woh satisfaction nahi dunga main tujhe jo chaahiye hai tujhe come on Maar mujhe.. Lekin enjoy nahi karne dunga tujhe main..

Ab i know main Abeer ko jaanta hun but woh mujhe or bhi ache se jaanta hai..

Main- You dumb peice of shit..

Ye bolke maine di ek kick uske pait Mein Woh jukha tab maari dusari laat uske pait Mein Woh fir girra niche.. Ye dekh Mangal bhaaga aaya meri taraf..

Abeer-Nooo..Mangal nahi..

Lekin Mangal tabtak mere close aagaya tha usne mujhe dhakka maarna caaha lekin usase Pehle maine uske hath pakkad liye or usko jhatke se apni taraf khincha and diya uske munh k Uppar ek bhayaanak punch woh bohkla gaya tab diya maine ek or punch uske pait Mein Woh khaansta hua apne ghutano par girra or ghutano par girrtey he maine di ek kick usko chaati Mein Woh piche lait gaya maine usko hath pakkad k uthaaya or woh kuch sanjh paata usase Pehle maine maara apna sir uske munh k Uppar uski naak or munh se khoon behne laga tha. Tabtak Abeer uth chuka tha woh piche se aaya mujhe roukkane lekin usase Pehle main mudda or diya ek punch uske munh k Uppar and then maari ek kick usko woh piche machine se Jaake takraaya Tab bhaage Anjali Rajat Deepak or Ajay meri taraf or main bhi unki taraf bhaaga.. Ajay sabse aage tha maine liya bhaagtey hue jump or maara uske thobdey par punch hawa Mein he jo solid laga or woh niche girra and Then aai Anjali ussne mujhe punch maarna caaha main jukha or jukhe hue he usko piche push kiya uska balance bigada tab diya maine ek punch uske pait Mein Jo bahot jyada tejj laga like bahot jyaada tej Anjali wahin niche girr paddi or girrtey he di maine ek kick uski ribs k Uppar and Anjali was out of it Uski ek side ki ribs gayi ek he kick Mein .. Iss bich Rajat ne maari mujhe kick jisase main aadha he bach paaya or lagtey he thoda piche hatta lekin ulta double speed se Rajat par jhapta main and di ek laat uski chaati Mein Woh niche girra Jaake ab mere Saamne bus Deepak bacha tha woh badha aage mujhe punch maarna caaha ussne lekin maine uska hath pakkada and then turant uska hath apne dono hathon Mein fansaake maara jhatke k sath usse niche patak k.. Jisase woh chilaatey hue niche girra kyunki hath dislocate hogaya tha uska.. Ye dekh Jiya bhi aai meri taraf lekin usko maine close he nahi aane diya and maari kick uske munh k Uppar khaddey khaddey he jo uske liye kaafi thi woh piche deewar se takraai Jaake.. Pooja or Priyanka dono badhi meri taraf main bhi badha unki taraf maine Pooja ko maara ek punch or woh bechari piche Jaake girri Iss bich Priyanka ne mujhe maarna caaha punch main piche hatt k bacha or piche khaddey khaddey he di ek kick theek uske munh k Uppar jo bahot tej lagi or woh piche machine k Uppar se dusari side Jaake girri main Un dono ki taraf badha lekin tab mujhe realise hua ki nahi.. Yelog seh nahi paayenge.. Issliye main waapis mudda or Ajay jo khadda horaha tha uski taraf bhaaga or bhaagtey he di uske munh par ek laat woh uchal k niche girra and dobara nahi utha knocked out cold.. Uski naak tutt gayi honth fatt gaya jisase khoon behne laga..
Tab piche se Mangal aaya mujhe maarne main mudda ussne mujhe laat maarni caahi lekin maine apne dono hathon se uski laat pakkadi or khinchke girraaya usko niche or niche girrtey he maine di kick uski ribs k Uppar "Karrrrakkkk" " uski ribs jaati hui mehsush hui mujhe or woh chilaaya.. Mere just piche Anjali uth rahi thi usse sahara deke uthaaya maine and uthaatey he diya ek punch uske munh k Uppar woh piche girri Jaake.. Tab Rajat badha meri taraf ussne mujhe maarna caaha punch but maine uske sath same wahi kiya jo Ajay k sath kiya tha lekin Ajay waale se jyaada Dardnaak maine jhatke se usse niche patka or uska right hand gaya kaam se woh chilaaya apna shoulder pakkadke.. Jiya Deewar k sahaare se khaddi horahi thi main gaya uski taraf or woh khaddi ho paati usase Pehle di maine kick uski ribs k Uppar jo bahot galat lagi Jiya niche girri or niche karwatein badaltey hue Dard se chilaane lagi.

Abeer durr machine kaa sahaara leke uth raha tha toh main bhaaga uski taraf or machine k sahare Uppar jump leke maari Abeer k munh par laat woh machine k Uppar se piche Jaake girra.. Or main mudda toh mere piche Chang or Ami khaddey they..


Ami-Boss hogaya lets ho..


Main--What?? Itana jaldi.. Atleast hospital waalon kaa bill toh banaane dey..


Ami-Boss they are your family.. Try to understand.. I know you want it but.. Come on.. Please..


Main - Wait a second tu kiski side hai..


Chang - Boss.. Listen look here.. Piche dekho.. Come on these guys are your family and they are just doing there job..


Main - No..


Abeer-Naa don't stop him chang nikaal lene dey apni frustration usko.. Come on AP hit me..Come on.. Itane saal iske liye laddne kaa yahi tohfa millna chaahiye mujhe..

Main Abeer ki taraf badha usko maarne but bich Mein he rukk gaya..

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Woh sab guns taane khaddey they mere Uppar..

Main-Come on guys put your guns down I know goli nahi chala shaktey tumlog..

Ye unko bhi maalum tha they can't shoot me and I can't shoot them to Wohlog ne guns niche ki and andar enter hue or andar kaa scene dekh ek baar ko toh sablog wahin k wahin rukk gaye or chaaron taraf kaa najaara dekhne lage.. Jahaan dekho wahaan khoon or laashein he thi bus..

Dilawar-Abeer bhai I surrender.. Main Jahaan kahoge jiske Saamne kahoge wahaan sab kabool karlunga..

Abeer-Hello AP.. We met finally..

Main-Yeah..

Abeer - Why? Are you scared AP?? Little brother is scared??

Mangal - Looking good with the beard by the way..

Abeer - So what's the plan AP??

Main-It's upto you guys.. What do you guys want?

Abeer-First we want Dilawar..

Main-Yeah sure.. Take him.. There you go.. Lejaaao isko.. Lets go guys..

Abeer-Hold up AP hold up.. Dilawar ko toh hum le he lenge.. Secondly we want you..

Main-Not happening..

Abeer-Listen i got a great deal for you tu humare sath chal and hum in dono ko Jaane denge.. We just need you..

Main-But why??

Abeer-Why?? AP you killed almost 100 people in past few days burnt half the city down sent 3 government workers in coma from they might never recover.. And made a joke of the government and police..

Main-Yeah.. But everyone deserved it.. So that's about it.. Dekh simple c Baat batata hun I don't give a fuck tumlog kya kartey ho kyun kartey ho yaa Iss city Mein Kya chalta hai kya nahi main Yahaan koi hero banke nahi aaya tha main mere kaam se aaya tha or woh kaam tha ye kingdom khatam karna because it was personal and main uss kaam k bahot close hun so Dilawar ko rakho apne pass i dont need him maine jo karna tha kar diya. I will just leave now..

Mangal-Itna easy nahi hai AP..Aakhir kaar AP hai tu kabtak bahaar rahega?? Again kuch weeks Baad koi naye target k liye waapis Yahaan aaega and fir najane kitane logon ko maarega... I mean yahi hoga. AP inmein se aadhe se jyaada log chindi chor they. Tujhe jiss kaam ki wajah se nikaala gaya tha tu waapis illegally aake wahi kaam kar raha hai.. Humne muskil se jail Jaane se bachaya tha tujhe ki chalo tu durr rahega but no it seems sab sach hai you love killing people.. You enjoy it..

Anjali - Chill out guys.. AP hear me out trust me I'll get you a separate cell in jail and whatever you want will be provided there i mean bahaar rahega tu toh khudko caah kar bhi nahi roukk paaega ye sab karne se we want what's best for you.. Please listen to me.. Come with us..

Main-I can't be caged Anjali..

Abeer-But you deserve to be in a cage.. I mean AP why all this kyun ye sab?? Humein inform kardiya hota i know hum Pehle nahi pakkad paae ye sab we are not smart as you blah blah but tujhe pata hai aaj nahi toh kal hum bhi pakkad letey ye sab.. Or tu Humein call karke inform bhi toh kar shakta tha ki ye sab horaha hai or ye log kar rahe hain and uske Baad humlog sab sambhaal letey.. But nahi tujhe toh bus manmarji karni hai Bhagwaan jo banana hai tujhe..

Main-Listen to me guys as simple as that I am leaving tumhe ye chaahiye rakho isko i dont give a fuck. But no way in hell you are keeping me..

Abeer-Then I am sorry to disappoint You AP Humein force karna padega..

Main-You don't want this Abeer trust me.. You really don't..

Abeer-I mean dusara koi option bhi toh nahi hai AP..We have to try it..

Main - Trust me Abeer i am not joking..

Mangal-Same here AP.. Same here..

Main waapis mudda Chang or Ami k pass aaya..

Main-Kuch bhi hojaae do not come between us. Bich Mein tabhi aana jab main niche jameen par Marrne waala houn.. Usase Pehle do not even touch anyone.. Bus ye Dilawar bahaar nahi Jaana chaahiye Yahaan se.

Chang-But boss..

Main--You heard me Chang..

Abeer-So AP last chance come with us or it'll end badly..

Main-That's not an option Abeer..

Abeer - Well I am sorry then..

Abeer aage badha main unko hurt nahi karna chaahta tha not at all i know woh apni jagah sahi they bahot jyaada sahi..But agar Baat apni jagah ki hai toh main bhi kind of sahi tha.. Or Uppar se Jail Mein hell no i am not going to a fucking jail.. Nope..

Abeer Mangal Rajat Deepak Ajay Anjali and Jiya mere Saamne aaye.. Ok odds are interesting..

Ab maine Abeer ko pura moukka diya or ussne mouka khulle hathon se accept karliya ussne maara mere pait Mein Ek punch jo itana strongly laga ki main apne ghutano par girra munh se khoon thooktey hue and uske Baad ussne maari ek laat meri ribs Mein main side Mein Jaake girra..

Abeer-Come on AP fight me at least.. Get up..

Main apna munh ponchta hua khadda hua or khadda hotey he Abeer ne maari mujhe laat jo maine bich Mein he pakkadi or uski jaangh par maara ek punch and then uski laat chhodi or uske pait Mein di ek or kick woh piche hatta or Iss bich Anjali ne maara mere munh k Uppar punch ab main piche hatta or piche hatttey he Mangal ne maari mujhe laat main niche girra Jaake.. Main actually wait kar raha tha mere baandh k tuttaney ka.. Itane din se ek k Baad ek frustration jamma horahi thi mere Uppar or obviously time to time main nikaal bhi raha tha frustration but itana kaafi nahi tha i know 2.0 yahin tha or main 100% sure tha jyaada time k liye nahi toh Iss situation se deal karne k liye toh woh aaega he kyunki bina meri khopdi k satke main inko jyaada hurt nahi kar shakta tha.. Or agar main Jail gaya toh fir 2.0 Pagla jaayega he doesn't like to be caged.. You know Lions are better off in then Jungle then in a fucking cage.. Same..Uski ego usse permission nahi deti ki ye usse baandh k rakha jaae.And usse pata tha main ye nahi karunga.. So that's why main or frustration buildup kar raha tha..

Main niche se utha toh uthtey he 2 side se kick paddi mujhe toh main again niche girra..

Main-Abeer trust me you all should leave..

Chang - Abeer Sach Mein you all should leave.. Tum jo samjh rahe ho woh nahi hai ye..

Abeer ne Chang ko dekha usse thoda saa time laga samajhne Mein ki main naa he 1.0 hun or naa he 2.0.. Lekin 2.0 k bahot close hun or yelog mujhe or close bhej rahe they..

Abeer-Quick Anjali Hathkadi lagaao isko..

Main khadda hua iss bich or Abeer ko maara punch and badle Mein Mangal ne maari mujhe kick jisse lagtey he main fir girra niche.. And abki baar utha nahi main balki blank hogaya ek baar k liye.. Lekin blank hone se kuch hua nahi or main turant waapis aagaya. What the fuck.. Nothing happened.. What is going on.. Ek baar mujhe laga 2.0 bahot close tha but ab again mujhe woh bahot durr lag raha tha.. What happened?? Main soch raha tha ki Abeer ne maara mujhe punch..

Abeer-Anjali Hathkadi leke aao..

Mujhe bc kuch bhi samajh nahi aaya ki kya hua..Aisa lag raha tha ki 2.0 bahaar Aa he nahi paaya kyun i dont know.. Anjali Hathkadi leke Meri taraf badhi Abeer or Mangal mujhe pakkadney k liye aage aaye.. Lekin main turant khadda hua or bhaaga wahaan se Uppar ki taraf wohlog suru Mein toh mere piche nahi aae lekin jab main second floor par pohancha toh niche se Abeer ki awaaj aai..

Abeer-You can't Run AP.. Come on ye din dikhaaega ab..

Iss bich Uppar se Wohlog uttar rahe they jo surrender kar chuke they mujhe dekh fatt gayi unki or woh wahin rukk gaye lekin main unke pass se nikal gaya toh woh hath Uppar kiye he niche utarne lage..
Main seedha third floor par uss room Mein aaya Jahaan Dilawar tha wahaan woh tha jo mujhe caahiye tha wahaan corner Mein drugs k bags k bags bharre paddey they bahot jyaada drugs they wahaan par uske side Mein paison k bags bhi they 3 lekin mujhe paise nahi caahiye they..

I don't know main kya soch raha tha yaa soch raha tha bhi yaa nahi.. Lekin maine uss bag Mein se ek packet nikaala faada usko toh uski smell ne he bc mujhe hilla diya.. Tab maine usme se kuch drugs apni hatheli par rakhe jyaada nahi but thode se and turant unhe sungh gaya maine socha takk nahi uske baare Mein.. Main samajh gaya ki ye 2.0 karwa raha hai khudko bahaar laane k liye.. Drugs jaise he meri body Mein gaye main wahin late gaya 2 seconds k andar main pure world ka ek chakkar kaat k waapis ussi room Mein aaya.. Lekin jo gaya tha woh nahi aaya..

"Missed Me".. Fuck that was hard as fuck..fuck..That hurts.. But it feels great to be back.. Holy shit..

Main khadda hua munh saaf kiya and uss room se bahaar aaya and niche ki taraf chala wohlog Uppar aarahe they but mujhe niche aata dekh k wahin rukk gaye.. Maine ek angadaai lee ye meri prasandida habit hai. Fresh hawa Mein saans lete hue angadaai lena.. I love it..

Main niche aaya wohlog waapis apni jagah par they..

Abeer-Acha hua surrender kar raha hai tu..

Main-Hmmm.. Abeer.. How are you?? Oh sab hain so how are you guys doing??

Main unke close aaya tab Abeer ne mjjhe ghurra meri aankhein dekhi or woh samjh gaya..

Abeer-Oh fuck.. Guys tum sab piche.. Get back.. Durr hato.. Koi bich Mein Nahi aaega..

Main-You are overconfident and I love it..

Abeer-Not overconfident. Main inko hurt nahi hone dunga.. Come on hurt me..

Main-Hmm.. Interesting itani jaldi kya hai.. So ladies and gentlemen. Hi mujhe jaantey nahi tumlog but people Call me 2.0 I am a better, smarter, dangerous, Merciless, Cruel, deadly and Rutheless version of AP.. You know tumlogon ko Jaanana tha na kya hua kya ban gaya AP tu.. Main tum sabko practically samjhaaunga jo tumlog kabhi nahi bhulloge..Tumne toh ek jaanwar dekha tha mere andar but main tumhe dikhaaunga real me kya hai mere andar that's what I like to call a "MONSTER"..

Abeer-Fight me AP not them..

Main-Do not interrupt me.. Come on Abeer you know better then that.. Main tujhe maarunga tab yelog emotional hoke aage aayenge then inko maarunga akele ko hospital thodi bhejunga.. I mean i know kya hone waala hai. Also lets make it quick bahot kam time hai mere pass like bahot jyada kam..


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Awesome update, wese bhi jab AP ka raaz ,deva ke samne open hua tha tabhi laga tha AP 2.0 ke liye ab hariyana ke kam pura ho chuka ,ab abhi Sanjay Das bhi samne aayega to National - international level per AP 2.0 jayega ,aur kuch bhi ho lekin Ankit ne jinda rehne ki kimat bahut badi chukai hai ab na pyar bacha aur na pariwar. Kher ab shayed league per aapka focus jyada ho
 
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