Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - All Hell Broke Loose (Completed)

[Naik]

Bahi aaj ke update m yeh fight ka scene peera ker dena suspense pe fir mat rok dena
Thanks for lovely update

 

[AP 316]

Great updates as always AP sir.
AP se bakchodi maregi ye

AP sir konsa maal fook k update likhte ho bata do taaki hm bi fook k updates padhe or thoda idea ho kya hoga

Mere waala maal saha nahi jaata kissi se bhidu .. Keep Supporting DEVIL'S favourite DEMON

Ab samay aa gya hai 2.0 ke full on dhamal karke vapas jane ka vo ab en teeno ko dikhayega ki AP 2.0 kya chij h.
Great update bahut badhiya bhai
Waiting for the next update.

thanks bhai Arv313

Ye jyada lawde lag gaye bhai 3 vs 1 aur wo bhi jab AP complete form me nahi hai i mean na wo poora 1.0 hai aur na hi poora 2.0

Situation critical ho gai hai bc mtlb agle update me hopefully clear ho jayega scene may be ho sakta hai 1.0 khud ko bachane ke liye hi sahi lakin 2.0 ko control de de taaki in sab ki lag jaye

Well dekhte hain kal kya hota hai

thansk Genius keep supporting bhidu

Bhai badi khatarnak fight dikhayi he. 3 vs 1 aur wo bhi a little injured. Lagta he ki 2.0 ko full power milne wali he lekin sirf is fight ke liye.
Waiting 4 next update

thanks aka3829

Nice update bhaii bhot awala maza aya giea bhaiii ab new upbate ka intazar ha

thanks Nadan Dill

Ab 1.5 version k update hone time aa gaya hai..uske bina AP ka jitna muskil hai....

thanks rakku

JABRDUST UPDATE BHAI

thanjs Raj142

Great going dear

thanjs Shahrukh

superb waiting next

thanks aj008

Fabulous update bhai

thanks Black water

Bro this is my first comment on ur story koi shak nhi k story must hy or jahan tak mujhy lagta hy ab 2.0 Hi aye ga or Ap must be win to agar wo in 3no ko marny k bad adya ka bhi kaam khtam kar dey to better hy Q k game to us ny khail di hy agr AP in ko hara k badlay mai adya ki jan mang ly to may be ye better hy baki story ap ki hy to ap ko behter pata ho ga k kia karna hy but mery khayal say is adya ka kaam khatam ho jaye to behter hy Q k ye aagy ja k bhi koi game plan kar sakti hy or AP k pass itna time ho ga nhi next SD bhi to rehta hy us k harany k wakt agar ye phr koi game khail gai to mushkil ho jaye gi isi lia isy hi khtam kar do ye aik fair deal bhi ho gi k AP ny jitny k bad hi adya ko mara hy or next future mai bhi koi AP say panga leny say pehly 10 bar sochy ga but as i said story ki requirment hy wo ap behter janty ho next kia ho ga usi ka intzar hy or agr aj hi ye fight khatam kar do aik or update day kar to mehRbani ho gi

First of all welcome to the story bhidu.. And thanks for the kind words keep supporting Kashif.143

It's need beast,
Waiting for full fight, Adya is very smart per AP se kya connection hai ya kahu to kya lafda hai?
Jarur apne manager ko baaton me bhadkaya hoga aur wo chodu ban gaya.

Thanks Chinturocky

Kya DEVA bhai fight karne aayega???

ab dekhlena bhai kon aaega keep supporting Loveyou143

Nice

thanks Yellow Flash

Bro that's insane teeno ek saath superb start achi hai fight let see what happens in the end offcourse AP will win but how that will be par excellent...

Waiting for next...

thanks Naughty Lover

Great update bhai

thanks Nky

900 pages.... Mind blowing update.. Bhai aise jagah la k roka h ki... Kya hoga soch k nind nai aayega.. Ab to 2.0 ko aana hi padega... AP must win the fight...

thanks bhai Shyam Singh

Gazab bhai mast update tha padh kar maza aa gaya aur sab se main Adaya khel gayi mare toh jimmy kyu maru aur sab se main iske uppar bahot bada support hai like sara woh bahot badi machli hai yeh kand hone ke baad kya hoga lekin abhi toh yeh kand hi na khatam huwa aur apne AP hi peet rahe hai dekho kya karta hai aage ab waiting for next

thanks ajay reddy

yeh tha ek dum gajab level ka update
just awesome bhai sahab

ADYA is smart literally SMART vo jaanti hai ki AP kissi ko nhi bakshta chahen vo khud jiss marji condition mai ho vo harr situation apne favour mai modh(मोड़) deta hai aur tab logon ko unka level pta lgta hai ki unhone kya kiya aur uss kaam ko kar ke kitni badi galti ki aur ADYA yeh jaanti hai issliye usne pehle hi apna naam alag kar rkha hai magar usse umeed jarur hogi ki AP abhi best condition mai nhi hai toh shayad shayad unka koi chance hai karke aur upper support bhi dekho kiska hai isse SARA jo LEAGUE ki crazy HIGH position par hai aur iss se pta chla hai ki AP aise hi ispar action na le skta aur upper se ADYA bhi harr kadam kaafi soch samjh kar rakh rhi hai

chutiyon ki kammi na hai chahen normal life ho yan LEAGUE ke log hon aur iss case mai JIMMY hai vo vaise bhi chahen jo bhi ho uska marna tay hai jo yeh soche ki AP abhi kamjor hai aur yeh unka chance hai ki vo usse maar denge literally bahut badi galti hai unki. ab iss case mai example kya doon AP ne harr condition change ki hai vo yeh bhi karega kaise yeh nhi pta but karega jarur

well yeh condition khud ek example ban jayega aur ADYA ko bhi samjh aa jayega ki yeh matter nhi karta ki AP ki condition kya hai never ever try to screw him or even think about screwing him

2.0 aayega yan nhi yeh aap jaano kyunki AP kuch bhi kar skta hai halanki sabse better toh 2.0 ka aana hi hai but AP abhi yeh sochega nhi kyunki 1.0 ke pass bhi hai abhi control aur iss time behas na chahega AP vo ek baar puchega haan toh haan varna koi aur rasta sochega but jyada chances 2.0 ke full BEAST mode ke hain but agar 2.0 aaya toh bhi na jaane kya kya tarike nikal lega jiss se vo yeh condition easily jeet jaye let's see kya hota hai

KEEP WRITING
KEEP UPDATING

YOUR REGULAR READER
...MATHUR

thanks Mathur bhai for this wonderful review keep supporting as always.

BHAI YE VALA FIGHT SENCE AAJ COMPLETE KRDO

JABRDUST

What
1.5 main to abhi 1.0 aur 2.0 hi hain samaj raha tha 1.5 keh kar aapane to aur bhi jyada exite kar diya hain...
Aur ha sorry bhai kuchh dino se work load itana jyada tha ki is forum pe aa nahi paya...

koi baat nahi bhai personal life bhi jaruri Hai Pehle kaam niptaalo story toh yahin hai baadmein padhlena.. Keep Supporting bhidu Vipul

Awesomeupdate
And may next update going to be more awesome
WAITING

Thanks bhai King519king

 

[AP 316]

Story ab kafi interesting mod pe ja rahi hain sali yeh adaya main kuchh jyada hi chul machi hain khair use bhi pata chal jayega ke AP kon hain iss fight ke bad

thanks bhai Vipul

Sala kya gand bhad update tha maza aa gaya bhai. Sahi me high level par hai fight.
Guard ne AP Ke samane jukane lage to Jimmy mana kiya yahi AP Ka ego hurt hua hoga for sure par wo is time apane dimag se kam kar raha hai to gusse ko control kar raha tha. Aur to aur last time yad hai jab high command ki meeting me wo AP ki death plan kar raha aur fir usaki mout ke darshan hu I mean lol just guess ye to AP ki de respect kar ke usaki maut plan kar chuka hai. To kya hoga just imagine.
Adya sayani bandi hai usane apani safe side pakali aur manager ko age kar diya just to watch jab 1.5 version me hai to kya kar sakta hai . I mean maybe wo test kar rahi ho AP ko . Aur to aur wo AP ko ukasa rahi hai jaise ki woh slow ho gaya hai and wo 2.0 nahi hai. Are yaar I mean agar thodi jalak bhi aa gayi to 3 tino mar jayenge lol
Guess Maybe Adya bich aye aur wo the job she wants to be done by AP usako bataye to sayad fight rok de ye ho sakta but still fight chalu ho gai hai kise bhi karke marna hoga.
Kisi bade league member ki entry ho sakti hai jis se AP ka mood change ho. Hone ko to kuch bhi ho sakta hai. Par fir bhi wo bahut jada hurt hone wala hai fight me
Waiting for biggest ever mega update.

thanks bhai Sexy boy for this wonderful review keep supporting

Bhai sochane vali bat yeh hain ki agar league ki ek member yeh sab kar sakti hain to us league ko banane wale main member kya kya kar sakte hain main to yeh soch raha tha Ki AGAR LEAGUE CHAHE TO KYA much nahi kar sakti aur Agar AP league main aa gaya to ek taraf se bandh jayega kholi woh rules ke hisab se chalana padega aur jis kam ke liye woh nikala hain woh nahi kar shakta

Sala aj ap kuchh jyada hi slow magar kya kar sakta hain aur woh Jimmy kuchh jyada hi uchhal raha hain 1.0, 2.0 ho ya 1.5 koi bhi ho bap ko respect Dena bahot jaruri hain yeh bat samaj ni chahiye in gadho ko

Kya bhai aapane to KLPD kar diya ab puri fight hi khatam kar Dena bhai

Yar you are seriously testing our patience bro ksm se pure 24 hours tak suspense Mai marne k liye chod dete ho yaar.. Ye galat hai bhai ab to Darshan do uske yar.. Nahi to kya fayda agar hero hi mar gaya to.. We want 2.0 wait rahega update ka

kon Bola hero Marr jaaega aise thodi naa hero Marr jaaega bus dekhtey jaao and keep Supporting bhidu paarth

Awesome update. AP Bhai aapne readers ko full suspence me daal diya hai.
Now I eagerly waiting for your next update.

thanks Md aarif

Super update hai bhai

thanks Rajiv bhau

Nice update. Waiting for full scene

thanks Janu002

faad diya ap bhau jabardast updates

thanks Adirshi Bhai

Bhai ye kya kiya ye to bahut galat baat h. Fight scene adhe m kon chorta h. Chalo ab to kal ke update se hi sari umeed h. Apki baat bilkul sahi h ki 2.0 jitna kam ayega utna hi better hoga but still jab jarurat hi tab to aana chahiye na usko. Aj uski kaafi jarurat h ye 3no ko kutte ki maut marte dekh k jo sukun milega na uska kya kehna. Adya sali bahut chalu chiz nikli manager ko aage badha h khud piche khisak gayi agr sbko maar v diya to kamini ko koii fark nahi padega. Next tym phir se kuch tagda plan karegi mc. Iske piche jo h na usi k dum pe uchal rahi h AP ki family hi sbse badi chiz h agr wo family nahi hoti tb to sbko eksath tapka deta wo. Aise mauke pe deva bhai se ek fight scene aata to mazaa aa jata. Last story m bas ek fight tha unka. Chalo jane do. Yaha ek baat to fix h. Ye 3no ek k bad ek war karte ja rahe h kyunki mauka mila to chir phad dega in sbko jante h ye sb kuch tagda plan sochna padega tabhi in sbko maar payega. Uske baad Jimmy marega but problem av v wahi h adya to bach hi jayegi na. Aur adya ko tapkaya to sara piche padegi. Bhai ek request pls maarna to fir same GUDLA style m taki samne wala khud apni maut ki bheekh mange tab ja k sali adya ki pata lagega baap hmesha baap hota h chahe kisi v haal m ho. Nahi to wo baar baar ungli karti rahegi.
Pls post next update.

Eagerly waiting for next update brother

thanks Vaibhav bhai for this wonderful review keep supporting

Bhai mast tha
Waiting bro

thanks Rayder555

Nice update

thanks Jassybabra

Kya ap bro fight seen to complete krna tha yr
Update chota gai bro
Likin accha update
Nice one ap

thanjs Radhe

bro i think yaha 2.0 ko aana chahiye. aur 2.0 ka kisi ko pata bhi na cahle ki ye 2.0 hai...

its awesome update....

keep update

thanks DEVILWANTED

Bc gand marni pakki lag rahi ha AP ki ab to

thanks John Cena

Awsm update bro .... Next update aaj hi d do plzzz wait ni hota ab

thanks Jerry

Awesome update bhai....but yr ladai ke liye too beast(2.0) hi hona chahiye.......the devil hona chahiye jisse sbko ye pta chl jaye ki AP ke khilaf nhi janeka...... league or Aadhya ko uski jgha dikha de aisa devil AP

Bcz agr baat krke nikl gya too joo AP ki story mai image hai voo khrb hoo rhi hai....... shuruaat mai apne AP ko sbse khtrnak logo mai btaya or voo ab RJ kee logo se bhi pitt gya tha or ab pita too mjja biklul nhi ayega..... finally iss fight ke liye AP ka 2.0 bhahr anna chahiye...
Ek or suggestion i think agar anna story ko heroine nhi hai too AP ko uska chapter close kr dena chahiye chahe uske hurt krke hi.....bcz anna ki vgha se story mai joo AP ki bold or sakht ladke wali image hai voo khrb hoo rhi hai

thanks JokEr keeo supporting

Mind-blowing update bro maza aa gaya

Fight to bahut hi shandaar chal rahi hai lekin AP 1,5 weak hai pehle se to un teeno janwaron ka samna shayad thik se kar nahi pa raha hai
To is time pe AP 2,0 ko aana hi padega tab aayega fight ka asli maza kyoki teen Janwar ke liye to 1 beast ka aana to banta hai boss

So dekhte hai ki 2,0 aata hai ya nahi

Waiting for the next update bro

thanks Rajesh

Awesome update....

thanks rAge K

Mind blowing updare bro lakin bech main na chora karo or lgta hy next updates main league k sath fight hogi ya phir koi new character a raha hy fight rokwany k kye

thanks MAD

Har bar ki tarha tabahi update mene sare update read kiye best ab lagta hy 2.0 KO anaa hi hoga bat Zindagi or mout ki hy nice and thank,s to update AP ko batana hy k who is the boss

thanks Pagal pathan

Lajabab update bhai

thanks Tripuri chakraborty

Waiting For 2.0

thanks The Pervy Sage

Jhakaash update bhai ?
Fight scene pura dena jb vi update do to

thanks Aarya bhai

Zabardast update

thanks Tahirtahir111

पूरा कर भापे ऐसे ना चलता..........................

thanjs Jaatbhai

tabahi update AP bhai. bhai ab 2.0 ka wapis aana haq bnta hai. 3 fighters hain jin se larai ho rhi hai aur 3no best hain. specially anssar ziyada dangerous lag rha hai. 2.0 ko le aao bhai.
eagrly waiting for next update

Dekhtey hain kon aata hai bhai keep supporting Natsu dragneel

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Bahi aaj ke update m yeh fight ka scene peera ker dena suspense pe fir mat rok dena
Thanks for lovely update

Thanks Naik

 

[AP 316]

Update-262(The Beast Is Coming Out)


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Jimmy-What happened AP gussa nahi aaraha... Hahahaha... Maanlo AP you are washed up.. Haar maano or Chang ki dead body leke nikalo yahaan se..

Bhosdk 1.0 chhodega be?? Bhai 100% kuch toh bakchodi hui hai 1.0 k bus kaa nahi hai kuch kyunki uske bus kaa hota toh Atleast ab toh release kardeta mujhe aise thodi Chang ko marrne dega woh.. Vertigo ne uski bhi toh gand nahi maarli?? I mean maari toh hogi he for sure kahin jyaada toh nahi maarli?? Bhenchod gand Marr jaaegi aise toh..

1.0 bhosdk koi signal toh de Atleast scene dekh bhai.. Gand Marr rahi hai.. Kuch toh bol Haan yaa Naa.. Atleast dusara kuch try karun main.. Bhosdk give me a fucking hint Atleast..

Itani derr mein unhone or diye punches mujhe.. Bhenchod ek se bacha 2 se bacha teesre ne pel diya.. Or ab aaraha tha mujhe gussa.. Or tabtak ye bhi clear hogaya tha ki 1.0 k buss kaa lawda kuch nahi hai bhenchod.. Woh khud so gaya hai shayad Mere jester use ki wajah se.. Toh bhenchod mera baaki hissa kidhar hai..? Kahin bhenchod Drug k sath gaya toh nahi..

Mere mind ko lagaaya maine kaam par lekin lawda kuch nahi Milla.. Bhenchod what the fuck is happening... Anssar ne mujhe maari laat toh Main Abeer wagairaah k pass Jaake girra...

Abeer-It's perfect time for you to get angry..

Main-I can't bhenchod I am trying I can't..

Sunai-What do you mean you can't??

Main-I am trapped like this I don't know..

Sunai-No fucking way.. You are gonna die like this..

Ranjit-AP you can do this go fuck them up.. You don't need any 2.0 you are AP you can do anything you want.. Remember??

Main-You are right.. I am the fucking AP..

Ye bol main jhatke se utha or mudda toh muddtey he mere munh par Hault ka punch padda or main fir girra niche or niche girrte he Anssar ne mujhe uthaake faink diya.. No fucking way.. Bhenchod ye log overpowered hain..

Main-Hault tujhe pata hai kya result hoga iska?? Abhi nahi toh baadmein sahi tujhe woh mout dunga main.. Tera bhai teri wife teri beti kissi ko nahi chodunga... I will burn your entire family to the ground.. Belive me..

Hault-We will see about that..

Ye bolke ussne mereko niche paddey paddey ko he laat di bhenchod I am going to die..

Adya-What happened AP??? Tum toh woh AP nahi ho jisko main jaanti thi you are pathetic.. Woh hota toh yelog marr chuke hotey abtak..

Main-Sara help nahi karegi tumhari dekhlena.. I willl hunt you down and you know that..

Adya-Mereko Hunt karoge kyun maine kuch nahi kiya.. Ahahaha you can't go against the rules AP..

Jimmy - see everyone he is nothing.. Waise he hype Banaa rakhi thi AP ye AP woh he is a fucking nobody...


Gussa gussa... I fucking need my anger right fucking now.. Lekin gussa toh tu hai he or kya caahiye..

Main niche se uthne laga toh Anssar ne maari ek bhayaankar laat main piche deewar se takraaya.. Meri half body tutt chuki thi or ye confirm tha main unko nahi harra shakta.. Main niche padda tha or ab uth paana musqill tha..

Ab Hault laaya katana's(Samurai Type Swords) same ek mere pass fainki or 3 unhone rakhi it's game over now boys..

Adya -AP come on Chang ki life hai tumhaare hathon mein aise nahi haar shaktey tum.. Stand up..

Jimmy - He can't.. He is a fucking pathetic looser..

Adya apni jagah par khaddi hui or mere pass aai mere pass baithi..

Adya-So Chang ko marrne doge tum??? Apne best friend ko marrne doge tum..? Jaise KEVIN ko marrne diya tha?? Waise he Chang ko bhi marrne doge?? Haan??


Adya-You know KEVIN bhi Chang ki tarah blind trust karta tha tumhaare andar or uska result kya hua?? He is dead.. Only because of you.


Ab ye laga jhatka meri half dead body mein ek dum se Jaan aai..

Adya-Here you go it will make you feel better..

Ye bol ussne apna phone nikaala or ek audio chalaai jo koi call recording thi.. Or usme jo awaaj thi woh main behonsi mein bhi pehchaan shakta tha.. Ek awaaj meri or Dusari thi KEVIN ki.... Ye uski last phone call thi jo ussne mere pass ki thi...

Kevin-AP bro please help me bro please.. They are going to kill me.. I don't want to die AP bhai.. Please save me..

Main-kevin don't worry.. I will i'll i will save you.. Main mmammain hun yahaan.. Don't worry bhai don't worry.. Unko phone dey...

Kevin-They want you bhai... They are torturing me... Please bhai I can't take this anymore.. Please save me..

Main-OK. I will I will kahaan hai tu..

Or uske baad Ek goli chalne ki awaaj or Kevin ki cheekh... Meri awaaj nahi nikali aage... Mujhe bata k maara tha Kevin ko he was literally my brother there.. Main jhatke se khadda hua Adya se phone chinna... Or recording doobara chalaai.. Mere pass se Ami ne remove kardi thi ye kyunki main isko he sunta rehta tha.. Killers ko toh pakkad nahi paaya main or kar bhi kya shakta tha.. Maine woh recording fir se chalaai.. Mereko uski awaaj se he shanti milti thi he was everything for me..

Adya-Oh you still miss him??

Jimmy - Ranjit yahi tha kya AP??tumhara so called "The Merchant of Death" .. Ahahahaha... What a waste of my time..

Main woh recording sun raha tha ki Piche se Ray aaya or ussne mere hath par maari laat jisase woh phone saamne deewar se takraaya or bandh hogaya.. Recording rukk gayi sath mein meri sansein bhi..

I was fuming at that time aag lag gayi thi meri puri body mein... Or mujhe pata tha ab kya hone waala Tha.. I am fucking back.. Main khadda hua.. Meri body mein alag he energy aagayi thi chot wagairaah Sab sunn hogayi thi ek baar k liye... Mera mind fully working mode mein tha or abhi mujhe caahiye tha blood i want blood.. Maine Adya ko ghurra or woh meri aankhon ko dekhtey he samjh gayi 4 kadam durr gayi merese woh..

Adya-He is fucking here.. He is here...

Ray - No he is not.. He is same weak bitch..


Ray meri taraf Aaya Hault piche gaya usse pata tha he fucked up he fucked up pretty bad.. Woh piche chala gaya he don't want a peice of me now..

Ray ne Katana mere chest mein touch ki..

Ray-Hey... Open up...

Maine agla word toh bolne nahi diya usko left hand se Katana uthaai or right hand se itana bhayanak punch diya uske munh par ki woh blank hogaya uske hath se talwaar chutt gayi or woh ladkhadaaya... Maine jukh ke talwaar uthaai or woh sambhal paata usase pehle uske pait mein ghussai or piche pith mein Se nikaal di.. Uske munh se khoon ki ulti hui or ghutno par niche girra woh maine jhatke se talwaar nikaali tabtak Marr chuka tha woh dead in fucking 2 seconds...

Tab Main Chilaaya saari frustration, Rage, anger itane din se jo sab built hua tha sab bahaar aaya uss scream mein.. Pura hall gunj uthaa or uss time sabko pata tha ki the big bad "Raid Boss" is here..

Maine Anssar ko dekha woh confused tha Hault piche hatt chuka tha like bahot piche...

Ranjit-(Chilaake) Jimmy Here he is The Fucking Merchant Of Death Talk now bitch.. Open your mouth now.. Ab bol...


Jimmy pura kaanp gaya tha uski sans attak gayi thi.. Hill nahi paaraha tha woh..

Anssar-Finally attack kiya tune... Chal aaja khel khatam karun tera..Your Death will be on my hands..

Main-Ahahhahahahah...you don't know me... I am death bitch.. You think you are an animal well I am the fucking beast.. Lets go... I don't need this..


Ye bolke maine woh talwaar niche daali or aage badha uske pass talwaar thi but i dont give a fuck mujhe usko maarna hai toh maarna hai.. Main bhaaga uski taraf woh meri taraf badha ussne talwaar uthaai maarne ko lekin maine liya jump or maara ek punch seedha uske munh par jo bhaari laga or woh piche ko hogaya... Fir aage badha woh talwaar leke mere uppar waar kiya main kuddke bacha or ek laat di uske hath mein jisase talwaar chutti uske hath se woh uthane jukha maine usase pehle he uske thobdey par punch diya woh seedha hua toh ussi time maine jump leke laat maari uske munh par jiski power se woh girra niche apne ghutano par tab main piche hatta or ek k baad ek kai punch uske munh par diye usko react bhi nahi karne diya maine itane tejj move kar raha tha main punch k baad di maine usko laat he laat woh mujhe push karke khadda hua.. Uska thobda pura khoon se bharra tha.. Ussne mujhe punch maarna caaaha main jukh k bacha or niche jukhe hue ek punch uski jaangh par maara woh hadbadaaya tab ek punch uppar uthtey hue uski chin par diya uska Saara jabbda hill gaya hoga woh piche deewar se takraaya toh maine sambhalne nahi diya usko uski taraf jhapta main or ek k baad ek kai punch uske munh par dene laga ek do se bacha bhi woh lekin main itani speed se laga tha ki woh ek punch roukta tabtak 2 or aa jaatey they.. Woh bokhla gaya wahin deewar k sahaare khadey khadey... Or finally woh niche girra or uske niche girrtey he main thoda piche gaya or woh kuch samjh paata usase pehle main bhaagke uski taraf aaya or usko baithey - 2 ko apni dono knees jadd di.. Uska munh pichak gaya meri knees or deewar k bich mein.. Main khadda hua ussne bhi khadda hone ki koshish ki lekin woh uthne laga tabhi maine uski taang par laat di jisase woh fir ladkhadaaya or uske just baad diya ek or punch jisase woh niche girra.. Tab woh honsh kho chuka tha maine uska right hath pakkada usko thoda aage khincha or dono hathon mein fansaake ek jhatka diya uska right hand gaya kaam se shoulder se uttar gaya hoga kyunki woh bhayanak chilaaya... Or mereko di ussne chatpataatey hue laat main girra piche or woh hua khadda.. Right hand gaya tha uska 100% latak gaya uska hath... Ab jab do hath se kuch nahi kar paaya toh 1 se toh karta he kya.. Main khadda hua tabtak ussne mere waali talwaar uthaai left hand mein or meri taraf aaya.. Lekin left hand se woh lawda kuch naa ukhaad paaya woh hath hilaata usase pehle main usko punch maarke piche hatt jaata.. Or fir maine wait kiya uske attack kaa or jaise he ussne attack kiya pehle toh main piche hatta or uske turant baad dono hathon se uska left hand pakkada or jhatke se talwaar cheen lee uske hath se... Ye dekh woh hath chudaake piche hattne laga lekin uska hath aage tha maine ghumaai talwaar seedhi puri power se uska hath saamne tha or talwaar jaise he uske hath ko touch hui toh Dusari side se he nikali uska hath elbow k aage se kattke niche girr gaya.. Ab woh chilaaya bhayanak bahot he bhayanak.. Or piche deewar se satt gaya.. Tab main badha uski taraf or woh sarakne laga Dusari side..

Main-You can run from me but you can't run from death..
Ye bolke maine jukh k talwaar se waar kiya uske right foot par talwaar uske half pair mein dhans gayi almost or agli he second maine jhatke se nikaal Lee.. Woh girra niche apne gutanon par chilaatey hue.. Ab bus uske marrne ki derr thi.. Or kuch nahi bacha tha usme...

Main-Seems like ab jaanwar nahi raha tu..? Haina??

Anssar-Wwhwhsh Who are you?? Please tell me?? Kon ho tum...?

Main-Tujhe bataa deta hun tera bhai toh suspense mein gaya..

Ye bolke main uski taraf gaya or uske kaan mein kuch bola.. Jisse sunke woh blank hogaya.. Uske khoon se sanne cehre mein uski aankhein fatti hui saaf dikhaai derahi thi. Uska munh khulla kaa khulla reh gaya tha..

Anssar-No No no You are not..no no way.. Ye nahi ho shakta.. You are a....

Lekin woh aage kuch bolta usase pehle meri talwaar uske gardan ko Kaat tey hue bahaar aagayi or uski khopdi girri niche... Literally uski khopdi alag hoke niche girr gayi.. Agar ye jinda rehta toh isse regret hota ki kyun mujhse panga liya kyunki ab Jaan gaya tha mujhe ye issliye isko maine process karne kaa bhi mouka nahi diya kyunki usme kya fun hai.. Ab isko mout k baad bhi shanti nahi millegi.. Ki kyun?? Kyun Kiya maine woh.. Or yahi hai woh nasha jo caahiye mujhe. Mere maare hue bandey ko mout k baad bhi shanti nahi milti..

Maine talwaar daali niche or jhatke se palta kyunki piche se awaaj aagayi thi mujhe kissi ki or jaise he main side hatta Hault ki talwaar just mere baaju mein se nikali just 2 inch se bacha main.. Or turant maine Hault kaa galla pakkad liya like bahot jorr se uski sansein atak gayi talwaar jo aage badhaai thi woh waapis bhi nahi Lee gayi usase.. Talwaar niche girri uske hath se or dono hathon se mere hath ko hataane laga woh lekin meri pakkad se ajaad nahi ho paaya uski nashe dikhne lag gayi thi mujhe uska chehra laal hogaya tha aankhein maano bahaar aake girrengi.. Or tab ussne koshish chhod di hath chudaane ki.. Uski life nikalne lagi thi body se.. Lekin tab mujhe realise hua uska plan.. Oh ashaan mout caahta hai ye.. Hahahah.. Issiliye ussne dum lagaana bandh kardiya tha kyunki usse pata tha ki uska only chance tha woh talwaar kaa waar or woh fail hotey he woh samjh gaya tha ki jitani jaldi marega faayde mein rahega itana toh jaanta hai mereko woh. Lekin naa naa naa. Itani ashaan mout.???? Main dedun kissi ko?? Na naa naaa.. Maine chhod diya usko or woh girra ghutano par or then munh k ball... Tab sans aaya usko almost behons hogaya tha woh..
Mera level isase samjh lo ki mere dawaara jaldi di gayi mout ko bandey apni achi kismat maante hain.. Warna main jo mout deta hun naa bandey ko marrne k baad bhi chain nahi aata..

Main-You want that easy death?? Haan??? Itani ashaani se thodi maardunga..

Maine usko laat maari niche he tab jaake woh hosnh mein aaya or khadda hua toh mere hath mein talwaar dekh fir piche ko hatt gaya.. Or bhaaga Chang ki taraf..


Hault-Chang please.. Maine tumhe hurt kiya please you kill me.. Just take your revenge and finish me please.. I beg you.. Finish me however you want..

Chang-Oh I am enjoying my revenge right here you watch your back..

Ye sun woh palta or piche muddtey he talwaar gayi uske pait ko cheerti hui.. Lekin keval utana hissa jisase ye marre naa or behons bhi naa ho..

Woh usase sambhalo paata usase Pehle dusara waar hua uske hath k uppar wrist se aage kaa Saara hissa side mein jaake girra or woh chillaaya or chilaatey-2 piche jaake girra...

Main uski taraf badha woh padda padda piche hone laga lekin jaaega kahaan maine agla waar kiya uski taang k uppar talwaar uski jaangh mein jaa ghussi woh fadfadaaya chillaaya....

Main uske saamne baitha...

Main-I told you main maardunga tujhe when i say something it is the fucking truth, future adjust hota hai mere words k according... Chupp gaya tha tu bill mein or maine kaha tha mujhse chupp shakta Hai Tu, you can hide from me but you can't hide from death.. I fucking said it I fucking warned you I fucking made it clear to you that you will die and you still you fucking still came after me.. Mere pass aata maafi maangta kuch sochleta main bure se bura main tujhe aashaan si mout dedeta .. Lekin you fucking went behind my back.. You went behind Death's back.. And you will suffer now.. I will find your team or uske harr member ko uske pariwar k sath jinda jalaadunga.. Each and every fucking one of them will die..

Hault-Nnno... Sssuno..


Main-I don't care..

Ye bolke maine agla waar uski gardan par kiya or uska sir bhi dhadd se alag hoke niche girra and dead.. Apne last words apne sath he legaya woh... All dead.. Lekin mera quota pura nahi hua tha abhi naa naa ye toh jhatke se Marr gaye they i want fucking blood more blood.. Itane time baad aaya hun kuch toh risk logon ko bhi uthaana padega ab..

Ye soch main mudda Or aaya Jimmy ki taraf woh abtak apni jagah se nahi hilla tha main just uske saamne khadda hogaya or usko ghurra.. Woh pura kaa Pura kaanp gaya khaddey-2...

Main-(Chilaake) You All Will Bow down to your Overlord...

Ye sun uss room mein mojjud har ek shaks k hath mein jo tha woh niche girra or harr ek shaks apne ghutano par aagaya... Saare guards Chang Ami Sunaina Ranjit Abeer or Dusari taraf Adya bhi.. Woh uthi apni chair par se or mere saamne jukh k apne ghutano par baith gayi..

Main-You look at them that's my power that's me..Ab roukk unhe mere saamne jukhne se Jaa rouk k dikha show me kya cheej hai tu..I'll give you a choice agar tune inmein kissi ko bhi khadda kardiya toh tujhe baksh dunga main.. Warna your death will be miserable.. You have 2 minutes go for it..

Maine usko ghurrtey hue kaha uske sareer mein kamp kampi doud gayi woh turant bhaaga guards ki taraf...

Jimmy - Hey Guards stand up.. Stand up i am your boss.. Stand the fuck up.. Please stand up.

Lekin Guards ne apna sir bhi uppar nahi kiya.. Unki kya majaal jo mujhe aankh uthaake dekhein bhi.. Main feel kar paaraha tha ahista-2 mera pura mind waapis aaraha tha.. I know tumhe laga hoga abhi jo tha woh sab 2.0 tha nahi 2.0 abhi bhi badh raha tha recovery mode mein tha main still complete nahi hua tha lekin thodi derr mein he ho jaaunga or uske baad hoga mout kaa tandav.. 2.0 ahista - 2 waapis aaraha tha..

Jimmy bhaagte hue gaya Adya k pass jo apna sirr jukhaae baithi thi.. Ye wahi Adya hai jo thodi derr pehle 1.5 k saamne baatein kar rahi thi I know she is high or uske contacts merese bhi uppar hain.. . Lekin baat jab mout ki aati hai toh always remember everyone respects death.. Everyone bow down to death.. No one can overpower death.. Thats the truth..

Jimmy - Madam Please help me please save my life please...

Adya-I can't no one can.. Beekh Matt maango jitana desperate tum hoge jinda Rehne k liye utani he bhayanak mout dega tumhe woh just accept karlo and die don't beg its your biggest mistake just accept and die.. He is The Merchant of Death After all.. I can't save you from him.. No I can't..

Jimmy-No No no.. Please please...madam please...

Adya-Don't beg.. Shut up and die.. He will make you suffer if you don't stop..

Adya is spoiling my game.. Mujhe jaanti hai woh.. Main aage badha Jimmy ki taraf uski woh desperateness mujhe or desperate kar rahi thi.. Uska woh apni jindagi k liye Beekh maangana uski woh haalat in sab mein 4 chaand lagaa rahi thi i love it i fucking love it.. Main almost completely waapis aagaya tha bus kuch minutes mein main full hojaane waala Tha or fir hoga tandav.. Mujhe laga tha mereko jaake waapis aana padega lekin baat abhi banti dikh rahi thi mujhe mera control dheere-2 waapis aaraha tha 2.0 complete hone k bich bus kuch minutes kaa faansla tha or tabtak Jimmy tha mere pass khelne k liye..

Main Just Jimmy k piche jaake khadda hogaya..

Main-Jimmy..

Ye sun woh muda or muddtey he maine di laat bhayanak uske right shoulder joint par.. Full power se woh bhi woh side mein girra chilaatey hue 100% hath dislocate hogaya hoga uska Plan bhi yahi tha..


Main-This is called Maga Sneak Attack.. Karv Maga?? Jaanta hai kya hota hai??

Woh chilaata raha Dard se lekin kuch reply nahi diya..

Main-Main bataata hun...

Ye bolke maine uska left hand pakkad woh chatpataaya maine full power se uska hath khincha or niche uske armpits mein di ek laat bhayanak or laat k sath he diya uske hath ko jhatka uppar ki taraf ye hath bhi dislocated tha woh bhayanak chilaaya pure room mein uski cheekh gunj uthi thi..




Main-You know teri sabse badi galati kya hai?? I don't care tune mujhe fight karwaane ko bulaaya blah blah it's ok.. Lekin sabse badi galati jab ki tune jab tu jukha nahi mere saamne that hurts my ego and my ego is big very big and whenever my ego is hurt I start killing people left and right.. I don't care woh kon hai yaa reason kya hai yaa kaise maarna hai bus maarna hai toh maarna hai I don't give a fuck basically...

Maine usse pakkad k khadda kiya woh deewar se satt k utha.. Mere pass tha mouka main piche hatta or jump maarke di ek laat uski gardan par.. Jisase woh seedha girra niche or fir nahi hilla.. Marra nahi paralysed hogaya woh 2 seconds mein woh bhi that's called Hitting on the spots..

Then Maine uthaai katana or uske pass firse aaya uske aankhon k saamne... woh kuch nahi kar paaraha tha bus dekh raha tha or apni mout ko itana closely dekhna or kuch kar naa paana bahot buri feeling hai belive me bahot buri.. Maine Katana uske chest mein rakhi theek uske heart k uppar or ahista ahista push karne laga.. Katana uske sareer mein ghuss rahi thi lekin woh kar kuch nahi paaraha tha uski aankhein hill rahi thi bus or usme se aatey aanshu ye show kar rahe they ki kitana pain mein Hai woh.. Finally katana apne jagah par pohanchi or woh wahin k wahin nikal liya.. Thats what he gets for messing with me.. Belive me duniya ki sabse ghatiya feeling hai khudko marrtey hue dekhna or kuch kar naa paana.. Pura dum nikal jaata hai isme Saara saree tutt jaata hai.. Sabkuch khatam hota hua saa mehsoos hota hai.. Life or death sab samjh aajaati hai kya galat kiya jindagi mein kya sahi sab aankhon k saamne ghum jaata hai.. This is one of most painful deaths I can give..

Main almost complete ho chuka tha bus thodi si derr or fir puri tarah control mein Hounga main.. I can't wait i can't fucking wait.. 2.0 bus almost aa he gaya tha... Its about time woh waapis aaraha hai.. I can't wait..


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[AP 316]

Thanks guys for this support.. Last update k uppar 50+ reviews aaye this is insane issiliye mega Update diya hai aaj.. keep supporting as always.. Update Posted read and give reviews same deal on hai..

 

[Loveyou143]

Maa ki aankh
Kya jabardast fight scene tha bc
One of the best fight scene in this story
Ansar toh bichara suspense main hi margaya.
Aur Hault ka bhai bhi ek hi war main khatam.

Every one fears death thats why they bow down before warlord.
1.5 saal main bohot bakchodi hua hai but uske liye next part tak wait karna padega.

Ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.

Kya 2.0 completely wapis aayega ya phirse 1.5 hoke rehjayega yaa phir 1.0 hi aajayega.

Waiting for nexttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

 

[Genius]

Fuck ! Boss ye bada gazab scene tha believe it was one of the best, showing the power of the beast

Fucking hard ansaar ko ek bhi waar karne ka mauka tak nahi mila mtlb uski itni hype john se upar ki hype banai hi isliye thi ke 2.0 ka jalwa dikhe

Crazy you are writing crazy abhi 2.0 ko poora nahi jone de sakta 1.0 last time to 1.0 ne vertigo pills ki help se cover kar liya tha lakin is time agar 2.0 poora bahar aa gaya to bc bahut khoon bahega like bahut jyada

Now i am too eager for next update koi premium service hai kya

 

[Black water]

Marvelous update . The death merchant is back AP 2.0 wapis aagaya ab hoga maut ka tandav .mast fight scene tha bhai maut samne dekh kar bhi kuchh na kar pana bahut bura hai

 

[Raj Singh]

Jabardast faadu update

 

[AP 316]

Marvelous update . The death merchant is back AP 2.0 wapis aagaya ab hoga maut ka tandav .mast fight scene tha bhai maut samne dekh kar bhi kuchh na kar pana bahut bura hai

Aaya nahi hai waapis aaraha hai abhi pura nahi hua hai .. Keep Supporting bhidu Black water