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Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - All Hell Broke Loose (Completed)

Part 3 kaa title kya hona caahiye?

  • Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - The Merchant Of Death

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Kya fight this boss insane...
Is fight pr do line arz krnaa chaahta hu hope psnd aaye...
Lad rahaa tha AP fighting of lifetime,
Leke ek tez dhaari knife,
Jo aaya AP k saamne leke apni life,

Use Kya pata thaa khatam ho gayaa hai uska time...
 
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THIS SHIT is overpower BC
overpower character hai yeh lawda BETICHOD

BC kya mast scene tha literally mja aa gya betichod

data pack khatam ho gya BC issliye late reply aa rha hai jugad kiya hai ?

BC dimag se yeh baat nikal hi gyi thi ki AP ne goli chalai thi aur upper se DEAGLE hai MJ murda aadmi kaanp jaye iski aawaz se toh uss TAU ka awwaz sunn na kon si badi baat hai shi hai BC
aur londe ki pahunch dekh rhe ho matlab kuch deir pehle HC ke top bando se gand masti kar rha tha aur ab ek kissan tak se bina jaan pehchan ke bike maang li BC asli pahunch iss londe ki hai KISSAN se lekar HAIVAN tak sab iss mahashya se parichit hain BC yeh literally kaafi shi lga mujhe BC aur jab AP ne bola ki
DEVA ka BHAI hoon TAU kahin na paise kha rha tere
that was just cool ke pita ji BC

chlo RJ ke sab bande chutiye na they kissi ne predict toh kiya ki AP picha kar skta hai jo kaafi shi hai like koi toh samjhdar nikla JHANTO ke jhund mai se magar itna bhi nhi ki AP ko peil de

literally ab mereko lga ki AP ek OP character hai BC nashedi ne gaand phod di 5 bando ki upper se kya laws de literally mja aaya BC aur iss bande ke baare mai koi idea na hai mereko still aisa lgta hai AP ne training vagarh li hai iss se agar yeh iss story ka character hua toh varna mereko lga tha ki kissi TV SERIES yan MOVIE ka hi character daal diya BC kya mast tarike se pela just awesome BHAI literally just awesome

vo jo unexpected vala tha na ki unke yeh lage ki aisa kaise ho skta hai (jab AP ne knife phek ke maara tha) vo rule gajab tha BC just awesome

aur yeh 3-way conversation hui aisa lga mujhe
1. AP 2.0
2.AP1.0
3. DIMAG BC
jab 2.0 ko koi aisa bol nhi rha tha ki dumm nhi ghut rha tera aur uss time 2.0 ko bahar jaana pada saans lene ko mereko lgta hai vo baat toh DIMAG ne ki kyunki 1.0 bahut kamm baat krta hai 2.0 se i guess aur vo 2.0 ne try bhi kiya jab vo bol rha tha 1.0 ko ki usse full control de de but 1.0 ne nhi diya BC yeh scene ajeeb lga BC matlab iski film dhang se na uttri hai dimag mai vo karna padega BC as conversation BC bta ke na hoti ki kon bol rha hai but jo bhi ho i fucking love the fight scene aur BC iss knife fight ko one of the awesome scene mai dala jaye BC yeh scene gajab tha

AP ki achi khasi phati hai iss time silai karne mai hopefully jyada time na lage kyunki RJ wait nhi karega but still RJ ki sulgegi jarur BC pakka sulgegi aur sulagni bhi chahiye BC kya shi scene tha BC literally
MJ thak nhi rha main fight scene ki tareef karte karte awesome BC just awesome

let's see aage kya hota hai BC

KEEP WRITING
KEEP UPDATING

YOUR REGULAR READER
...MATHUR
 
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Apna Dil Aur Duniya Aap Ke Naam Kar Di,
Ye Bhi Na Socha Kaise Guzaregi Zindagi,
Bina Soche-Samjhe Har Khushi Aapke Naam Kar Di.

खड़े-खड़े साहिल पर हमने शाम कर दी,
अपना दिल और दुनिया आप के नाम कर दी,
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Update-247(The Fight Of A lifetime)




Bhenchod main tuttey futtey 4 gates mein ghuss chuka tha jo mereko kahin bhi nahi leke gaye ghum firrke wahin aagaya main..

Lekin finally mereko ek jagah milli jo shayad niche he jaarahi thi gate nahi tha kuch khidki type he thi.. Or mere hissab se jo thi ab wahi thi.. Maine deagle nikaali phone silent kiya or andar ghussa niche jukh k because gap chota tha woh.. Lekin bc bahaar jitana chota gap tha andar usase kahin jyaada badi jagah thi almost ek pura ghar tha niche 2 raastey they ek right jaaraha tha dusara left.. Like koi tunnel(Surangh) k maafik right side se mereko roshni aati hui dikhaai di toh 100% yahin they wohlog lekin pehle maine left check karna theek samjha kyunki bc main right mein jaaun or idhar koi piche se aake gand maardey.. Left side mein jaake dekha toh full andhera tha wahaan keval ek hall tha woh tutta futta jo abhi khaali thi.. Matlab jo tha right mein tha... Maine deagle taani or right side mein aage badha.. Or kuch he seconds mein mereko andar se awaajein bhi aane lagi.. Khussar phussar ki awaajein.. Or aage aage roshni bhi tej hoti jaarahi thi.. Finally main ek spot par pohancha jahaan mere saamne ek bada hall tha jisme se woh awaajein or light aarahi thi.. Maine jhaank k dekha toh wahaan par 4 bandey they kam se kam jo mujhe clear dikh rahe they uske alaawa wahaan kuch torches thi badi - 2 jinse wahaan light faili thi... Or ussi Hall k kone mein Abeer, Mangal, Sam, Ravi or Ami pillers se bandhe they... Sam Ravi ek piller se bandhe they Abeer or Ami ek piller se or Mangal akela ek se bandha tha.. Woh sablog drugged they because woh almost behonsh he they sab.. Or meri gand Tabb marri jab unke uppar najar gayi meri, unn sabke theek uppar Ek ek dandey or rassi se ek ek knife bandha tha jiska aim seedha unki khopdi par tha.. Maano koi jugaad kar rakha tha jisase thode time k baad woh knife niche ki taraf force se girrega or seedha unki khopadiyon mein jaake lagega.. Matlab Insta Death.. Wahaan par camera wagairaah kuch equipments bhi rakhe they.. Toh main inka game plan samjh gaya tha ye log yahan video banaake mujhe yaa bhai ko kuch cheej maanganey k liye balckmail karne waale they... Ki itani derr mein ye karo warna ye sab marrenge... Holy fuck.. Abeer or Sam thode bahot honsh mein aarahe they lekin still aankhein unki bhi nahi khulli thi..

Andar 4 janne confirm they jinmein se ek woh tha jiske sath meri fight hui thi..

Aadmi-Pakka ussne tera picha toh nahi kiya naa..?

Aadmi2-Nahi uski gaadi palat gayi thi toh Uske pass koi vehicle nahi tha mere piche aane k liye or uppar se woh injured tha Bahot jyaada..

Aadmi-Galati kardi tumlog ne usko halke mein leke suru se he samajhdaari se kaam letey toh woh bhi yahaan hota...

"woh toh Ab bhi yahin hai."...


Ye awaaj mere piche se aai or main piche mudda he tha ki ek bhayanak laat mere munh par lagi jisse lagtey he main uss hall mein jaake girra un 4 k saamne or meri gun mere hath se chutt gayi main firse gun uthane laga toh dusare bandey ne gun ko laat maari jisase woh durr jaa girri...

Aadmi1-Hahahahahaha.. Ye bachon waale hathiyaar kon use karta hai AP mard bano..

Main jhatke se khadda hua mere saamne filhal woh 5 log they... 5on k hathon mein chaaku they... Bhenchod Sachmein guns use naa kartey yelog.....

Aadmi1-AP AP AP... Ye bolraha Tha ki tu nahi aaega iske piche lekin mereko yakeen tha ki tere jaisa ghatiya kisam kaa Insaan yun he kissi kaa picha chhod he nahi shakta.. Or dekh tu aagaya yahaan...

Aadmi1-Ab aa he gaya Hai toh fir khel pura karletey hain.. Haina..Kyunki ye khel hum tere Bhai k sath durr baithke khelne waale they lekin ab tu aagaya toh tere sath live khel letey hain.. Jyaada time waste nahi karenge tere sathi aa shaktey hain warna..


Main-konsa khel..?

Aadmi-Bahot he aashaan khel hai ye chaaku dekh raha hai in 5on k uppar inki rassi uss mitti ki potli se bandhi hai or usme hoga thoda saa chedd (hole) jo theek 4 minutes mein khaali hojaaega or in 4 minutes mein agar tu unko bachaa shakta Hai toh bachaale warna fir tu bhi marega inke sath... Waise toh ye khel lamba tha lekin ab tu yahin aagaya toh ched bada kardenge yaani tere pass 4 minutes honge humein maarke inhe bachaane ko..

Main-Ek or galati main 4 minute mein tum 5on ko maarke in sabko bachaa lunga.. Khel khel mein tum log sabkuch haar jaaoge apna..

Aadmi1-Dekhletey hain.. Chal hojaa suru.. Yele..

Ye bol ussne mere pass ek knife fainka ab koi mujhse puche toh i dont know ussne life mein kya kya kiya hai lekin ye by far uski life ki Sabse badi galati thi.. Maine knife uthaaya... Mereko caahiye they 10 seconds.. Kuch calculate karne k liye.. Jo they mere pass..

Naya feature dikhaun??dekhoge?? Ok.. Lets go..


"Knife Battle " Who is best in knife Ami??? Nahi woh akeli 5 Bandon ko knife se nahi sulaa shakti... Lekin best kon hai knife fights mein.. Think think.. Oh my god its easy.. Its easy to name Him The best with Knifes "Bovice" OH My god The master of Blades himself...Brilliant ab woh yahaan meri jagah hota toh kya hota?? Answer simple hai in 5 ki Dead bodies paddi hoti jameen par 90 seconds k andar .. Because he is Mother fucking BOVICE... toh let's Copy and paste then..


Main- Let's go..

Woh 5 hue mere saamne.. Ab mere khopdi k tejj hone kaa ek faayda ye hai ki main kuch nahi bhullta choti se choti cheej se leke badi se badi cheej maine Bovice ko ladtey dekha hai akele ko 5 se jyaada bandey keval knife yaa swords se tapkaatey dekha hai..

Woh 5 hue saamne ek ne kiya uss mitti ki thaili mein hole..

Before battle advice by "Bovice" .. Humessa suruwaat mein unhe sochne do ki woh jyaada hain toh woh situation k control mein Hain...lekim real mein iska ulta hota hai jab jyaada bandey 1 bandey ko fight kar rahe hotey hain toh ek toh unmein koi combination nahi hota ek dusare ko suntey nahi woh.. Second wohlog overconfident hotey hain.. Third wohlog jyaada space cover kartey hain..

Issliye maine unko mere chaaron taraf aane diya.. Basically unhone mujhe gherr liya main bichmein tha or woh 5 mere 4on taraf...


Abeer-AP...??? Hey..? What the fuck is happening..

Main-1 vs 5 is happening bitch shut up let me focus.. Main haara toh uppar dekh...

Abeer ne dekha uppar toh itana shyaana toh tha woh ki game samjh gaya..

Abeer-Holy fuck.. You better win bitch because I don't have any plans on dying today...

Mangal-What the fuck is going on..

Main-Just shut the fuck up bhosdk.. Maadarchod aisa konsa sasta drug diya tha jo yelog pehle he uth gaye.. Chup raho be..

Maine loudly bola taaki baaki ko bhi honsh aaye mereko Inki jarurat padegi ek time par..

Aadmi-Let's go..

Ab 2 mere piche they 2 mere saamne or 1 mere right mein..

"Rule Number 1 by Bovice = Hit them When they least except it and hit the specific person jisko koi idea nahi hai ki usko bhi abhi lagg shakta Hai"...

Ab mere saamne waale ek bandey ne kiya aankhon se mere piche waale ki taraf ishaara ki mera dhyaan aage hai toh piche se attack kare.. Jo uski galati thi kyunki uska dhyaan hatta or main piche waale se niptaney ki bajaae aage ki taraf kudda or chaaku seedha uski chest mein ghonp diya ussne expect nahi kiya tha ye ussne bus piche waale ko order dene takk socha tha itana aage nahi pohancha tha woh uska munh khullgaya lekin awaaj naa nikali..

"Rule number 1 successfl"

"Rule number 2 do some crazy shit jo logical naa ho jo saamne waale ko bhi illogical lage or usko koi idea naa ho ye bhi koi kar shakta Hai during fight..."

Maine turant uski chest se chaaku nikaal liya or fir piche hatta or jo mere piche se attack karne ki try kar raha tha usse maari laat jo theek se nahi lagi lekin itani jarur lagi ki woh piche ko hogaya.. Or piche woh 3rd bandey k saamne aagaya jisase woh kuch kar paata usase pehle mere right mein jo akela tha usko di maine badhiya laat woh piche deewar se takraaya or kuch kar paata usase pehle maine maara chaaku faink k uski taraf full speed se woh react kar paata usase pehle woh chaaku uske Galle k aage se ghussa or piche gardan takk pohanch gaya hoga kyunki woh turant niche apne ghuttano par girra...

Rule number 2 successful illogical cheej yahaan kya hui maalum?? Maine mera ekmaatar weapon usko faink k maara ye ussne socha bhi nahi hoga ki mere pass jo akeli cheej hai defend karne k liye woh main usko faink k maarunga ussne agar thoda saa bhi socha hota toh woh easily bach jaata uss chaaku se kyunki itani high speed nahi thi chaaku ki lekin uska brain process naa kar paaya tabtak toh hochuka tha ye..



Ab chaaku maine kuch soch samjh k he fainka tha dusara chaaku tha meri najar or range dono mein jo first banda ludka tha uska chaaku niche girra tha issliye main chaaku fianktey he uski taraf ludka or jameen se uska chaaku uthaake khadda hua.. 3 vs 1 rehgaya tha.. First waala banda abhi jinda tha lekin jiske Galle mein maara tha woh 100%dead tha..

Ravi k alaawa sablog honsh mein aachuke they lekin bole kuch nahi woh Abeer ne samjha diya hoga unko shant rehney ko taaki mera dhyan naa bhatke... Kyunki unki khussar phussar suni thi maine..

"Rule number 3 Target the one who is most afraid and Terrified of the situation.."

Darpokk kon Tha yahaan woh banda jo gaadi leke mere pass se bhaaga tha or fir yahaan takk leke aaya tha mujhe.. Uski fatti paddi thi... Woh banda bus idhar udhar hill raha tha or wait kar raha tha ki kab uske sathi mereko maarein yaa injured karein taaki woh aage badhke khel khatam kare yaa fir nikale yahaan se woh... Woh bus idhar se udhar ghum raha tha... Uska 1% bhi iraada nahi tha mere pass aane kaa...


Ab usstak pohanchney k liye mereko ek bandey se nipatana tha jo full on attack mode mein tha filhaal.. Issliye main pehle uske pass he aaya ussne chaaku maara main jukha ussne laat maari maine jump maara ussne fir chaaku maara main fir bacha...ab maine chaaku chalaaya uski taraf woh bacha lekin real attack maine uske turant baad kiya maine laat maari uske lawde par jab woh chaaku se bachney mein busy Tha jisase woh piche ko hogaya or ye tha best mouka maine time plan karke maari thi ye laat woh darpok mereko uljhaa hua dekh k meri taraf badh raha tha piche se... Lekin jaise he woh bandey ko laat lagi main jhatke se ghuma or uss bandey ko off guard paaya or mudtey he bina soche samjhe seedha chaaku ghonp diya uske pait (stomach) k bichon bich or fir ghuma diya andar he bc saara system kuchal diya uska maine uske munh se thook ki lambi lambi laarein girri uski aankhein fattne ko hogayi thi or hath wahin k wahin rukk gaye they.. Maine chaaku nikaala or agle he second double speed se ghonp diya woh pura vibrate hua Maja aaraha tha lekin time nahi tha issliye second waar k baad maine usko chodd diya or woh girra niche..


Rule number 3 Successful the" Scared one paid the price... "

Ab tha scene 2 vs 1 or ye dono he bandey mereko tactical lag rahe they matlab Inko maalum tha ye kya kar rahe hain..

Abeer-AP kya horaha hai tujhe??

Time for Rule Number 4" Jester"...


Wait??? What?? Ye koi rule nahi hai kya suggest kar raha haibe Dimaag...


"Not a rule It's a medical condition or tu isase suffer kar raha hai suffocate horaha hai tu.. Closed space mein Hai tu ghuttan nahi horahi??? Body par dhyaan de drugs or Addiction se bahaar nikal Nashedi..."

Or main unko maarke khudko satisfy karne mein itana busy Tha ki maine dhyaan naa diya mera Saara sareer kaanp raha tha or main paseene se lathpath tha buri tarah.. Issiliye Abeer chilaaya tha ki kya horaha hai mujhe.. Fuck.. Its bad.. Main Ghutno par aagaya tha then mujhe realise hua ki mere left shoulder se leke right shoulder takk kuch toh bhi rengta hua gaya... Or uske 5 seconds baad mujhe realize hua ki ye ek chaaku tha or uss pain se main piche ko girra or girrtey he ek laat lagi meri khopdi mein or uske baad puri body par... Main Blank horaha tha I need fresh air mereko sans takk nahi aaraha tha theek se..

Stand Up And Fight Stand Up and Fight..

I cant fight I need time...

Tabtak Marr chuka hoga tu..

I need Fresh air.. I need to go outside..

Then Regenerate... Ah 3 Ah 2 and 1 go go go..

Main jump maarke utha or uthtey he seedha bahaar bhaaga meri aankhein almost bandh hone ko thi aisa lag raha tha koi mera galla ghont raha hai... Main bhayanak bhaagta hua bahaar aaya or bhaagke niche baithke uss khidki mein lait gaya jahaan se main andar enter hua tha.. Mera Munh uss tunnel se bahaar tha baaki hissa andar he tha.. Tabhi jaake mereko sans aaya ekdum se maano kuch Galle mein fansi cheej nikal gayi ho Galle se...main jor jor se sans leraha tha or tab mujhe realise hua ki main kitana pain mein tha filhaal...

"Bhosdk 1.0 abhi bolraha hun chhod de mereko gand Marr jaaegi warna.. Let the beast come out.." I need my complete self...



Fuck bhenchod... Try karna bekaar tha issliye main turant khadda hua or andar ki taraf bhaaga.. Toh andar se ek banda meri taraf aaraha tha usse laga main Bhaag he gaya toh woh shyaanpatti mein aage aaraha tha.
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Or ab time tha rule number 4 kaa "Target The One who is alone"

Bhai sahaab fans gaye main seedha jhapta uski taraf or ghonpdiya chaaku uski chest k theek bichon bich, waar ussne bhi kiya or uska chaaku meri shoulder mein ghussa lekin main tejj tha toh uska chaaku bahot Kam he andar takk gaya lekin still mereko piche hattna padda jisase jhatke se maine chaaku nikaala woh jukha niche maine di uske munh par laat jisase woh hua seedha or seedha hotey he chaaku ghonp diya uske pait mein puri power se.. Ab uss force se woh uppar uchhala... Then nikaal ke fir ghonp diya maine or fir ek baar... Ab usme naa bacha tha kuch bhi.. Rule number 4 successful...

Usko wahin chhod main badha andar ki taraf toh andar 2 bandey they jisko first maara tha woh uth chuka tha lekin injured tha woh but woh utha tha or woh potli mein or chedd kar raha tha... Issliye maine maara chaaku seedha faink k usko.. Jo uski gardan k side mein se ghussa or almost Dusari side ko nikal gaya tha uska hath uppar k uppar he rukk gaya or uski dead body girri niche..

Rule number 5 successful "Always Confirm Your Kills" "...


Ab Woh jaatey-2 ek ched or kar gaya tha toh mere pass almost 45 seconds they iss last bandey ko niptaane k liye..

Mere pass knife nahi tha.. RULE Number 6" What If You lost your Knife?? Answer is - KARV MAGA.... defend yourself..

Mostly knife attacks single way hotey hain matlab saamne waale k pass knife hota hai or woh attack karta hai or victim ko bachna hota hai yaa marrna hota hai.. Lekin Humein sikhaya jaata hai ki Knife waale ko maarna hota hai.. Kaise let me show you....


Most knife attacks 3 feet ki radius se hotey hain.. Yaani jyaada gap nahi hota aap piche nahi hatt shaktey Atleast bina saamne waale ko distract kare toh nahi..

Main aaya uski radius mein woh ready tha ready to attack..

Aadmi1-Time is important AP and you don't have much time..


Do not listen. Do not distract yourself.. Do not listen to a word he says..

Let him attack.. Ussne kiya attack main jukha or uska knife waala hath pakkad liya maine or fir uski taraf jaake meri elbow di uske kaan k just niche jo bhayanak lagi hogi kyunki woh thoda hilla.. Or maine jhatke se usase knife Cheena jo niche girr gaya... Ab chhoda uska hath maine or woh hatta piche ki taraf lekin piche hattney k turant baad maine maari usko laat woh piche deewar se takraaya or Sambhall paata usase pehle ek or punch diya uski khopdi mein "KARV Punch" Iss punch ki power itani hoti hai ki khopdi mein lagne k baad saamne waale kaa dimag hill jaata hai uski khopdi k andar, hillna matlab physically piche ki taraf khisak jaata hai power se. Jisase sab system blank hojaata hai woh bawla hogaya maine pakkadi dono hathon se uski gardan or left elbow or right hand k bich fansa liya usko... Ye tha "KARV MAGA" choke hold.. Ye jitani power lagaaega khudko free karwaane mein meri pakkad utani he tejj hogi or utani he jorse iska galla ghuttega... Lekin issane jor lagaaya he nahi pichle punch se ye behosh hogaya tha i guess.. Or jab iski body ne sab movements bandh kar di tab maine chhoda usko or woh dhadaam se girra niche.. Or ab main Bhaaga Abeer wagairaah ki taraf.. Knife uthaaya or sabse pehle toh Abeer ki ropes kaati pehle hath ki or then taang ki..

Main-Woh chaaku utha Mangal ko khol jaldi..

Main badha Ami ki taraf usko free kiya uske baad Kiya sam ko uske hath maine free karwaaye or pair Ami ne.. Ab Bacha tha Ravi jo still behosh tha... Issliye maine uske pairon ki rope kaati then hath ki kaati lekin woh bhenchod nashedi piller k sahaare he khadda raha issliye maine kiya usko push.. Or ussi time aaya chaaku niche lekin mereko maalum tha woh aaega issliye main aage ko nikal gaya tha lekin still bhenchod woh chaaku meri pith ko chirta hua nikala... Jisase main girra ghutano par bc 5 inch piche hota toh aar paar hojaata chaaku.. Uske baad main munh k ball lait gaya.. Fuck I am tired as fuck.. Holy fuck I need rest.. BADLY...

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Amezing miracle extraordinary speech less update bhai
 

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Superb. Extraordinary update.. Kya action h bhai gajab. Now AP is badly injured but best th8ng he save his family as he always say family se badhkar koi nahi.. Grreat writing.... :adore: :adore: :adore:
Waiting for next update...

Thanks Bhai Shyam Singh
Nice update bhaii bhot awala maza aya giea bhaiii ab new upbate ka intazar ha
Thanks Bhai Nadan Dill
Nice update AP bhai
2.0 ne 1.0 ki love life ki maa bahan kar di hai jabse aaya ha bas AP bidu ko action thriller me uljha rakha h bhai romance love khatam hi kar diya story se aap please riya aur ananya dono ki shadi karwa dena AP se ye aapke chhote bhai ki humble request hai
Great work
? you AP bidu
Abhi Shaadi mein time hai bhai bahot jyaada time agar is story kaa part 7 likhunga tab jarur Shaadi hojaaegi I guess :D lekin abhi koi plans nahi hain Shaadi k. :laughing:..
Thanks Bhidu Arv313
Jabardast Action scene tha bhai
I think RJ ka ab ye last push tha agianst AP
Uske to sare bande maar diye AP ne ab to lagta hai sidha Hanu mele mai hi bhasad machegi
Thanks for update
Keep updating
Haan Shayad ye last attack tha RJ kaa ab final battle he hogi.. Keep Supporting bhidu Clasher
Bhai agar kuchh din aur chahiye to aur le lo magar ek sath do update dene ki koshish karo taki majha aajaye padhne main...
Aur kuchh sexual scene bhi add karo kafi waqt ho chuka hain sexual scene ko pashe last sexual scene shayad last part main gua tha aur riya se breakup ke bad sex hi nahi kiya to jaldi se sexual part dalna...
Ya fir ab AP sudhar chuka:):):):):)
2 updates bus aisi situations par he aaenge jab scene complete karna hi warna daily ek update waala System demand mein Hai so wahi chal raha hai.. Keep Supporting bhidu Vipul
Jabardast action seen tha bhai maja aa gaye Bhai parke superb
thanks bhai Tripuri chakraborty
Update was great and he lol sach beast mode aur copy ka to puchho mat matalab aise hi knife ka kisika action copy kar liya wahhh kya mara hai janab ne ek ek kar sare ko kat diya woh bhi Abeer aur sab ke samane lol pata nahi Abeer aur ami kya kar rahe hai sala party woh bhi AP ki gher hajari me ulata unko sabaki safety karni chahiye na ki party sala ulta gyan to kut kut ke bhara raheta hai dono me 5 bando ne kidnap kar diya seriously lol

Gazab AP HI Sab kare. Akhir me AP gir gaya behosh ho gaya are ha wo bike bhi return ya paise dene the tauji ko dekhate hai , tauji ka bhala ho jo unhone bike de diya aakhir kon rat dega aur woh bhi anjaan log ko ,age kya hota kaise red John react karta I am sure plan b hoga jarur

Waiting for next update
thanks bhidu for the wonderful review Sexy boy
awsome mind blowing update brother
thanks Naik
Waiting for next update bhai


Aap ne aaj koi update nahi dia
Aur rule ke hisab se aap ke recent 2 updates ke baad bohut jyada reviews dia gaya hai.
Yahan tak ki jo jo silent readers the unhone bhi review dia kyunki update hi kuchh aisa tha.

But aaj kya hua bhai.
Waiting for next.......

Update na sahi ek replay hi dedo kyun ki aap ke replay update se kam thodi na hai.

Waiting for your replay......
Kal update issliye nahi diya kyunki Parson 4 updates kaa Kota full kar diya tha isliye Kal rest tha aaj aaega ab update :D.. Keep Supporting bhidu Loveyou143
Kya fight this boss insane...
Is fight pr do line arz krnaa chaahta hu hope psnd aaye...
Lad rahaa tha AP fighting of lifetime,
Leke ek tez dhaari knife,
Jo aaya AP k saamne leke apni life,

Use Kya pata thaa khatam ho gayaa hai uska time...
thanks bhai Naughty Lover wonderful Shayri :D
Nice AP waiting for next
Thanks bhai Sarfraz khan
THIS SHIT is overpower BC
overpower character hai yeh lawda BETICHOD

BC kya mast scene tha literally mja aa gya betichod

data pack khatam ho gya BC issliye late reply aa rha hai jugad kiya hai ?

BC dimag se yeh baat nikal hi gyi thi ki AP ne goli chalai thi aur upper se DEAGLE hai MJ murda aadmi kaanp jaye iski aawaz se toh uss TAU ka awwaz sunn na kon si badi baat hai shi hai BC
aur londe ki pahunch dekh rhe ho matlab kuch deir pehle HC ke top bando se gand masti kar rha tha aur ab ek kissan tak se bina jaan pehchan ke bike maang li BC asli pahunch iss londe ki hai KISSAN se lekar HAIVAN tak sab iss mahashya se parichit hain BC yeh literally kaafi shi lga mujhe BC aur jab AP ne bola ki
DEVA ka BHAI hoon TAU kahin na paise kha rha tere
that was just cool ke pita ji BC

chlo RJ ke sab bande chutiye na they kissi ne predict toh kiya ki AP picha kar skta hai jo kaafi shi hai like koi toh samjhdar nikla JHANTO ke jhund mai se magar itna bhi nhi ki AP ko peil de

literally ab mereko lga ki AP ek OP character hai BC nashedi ne gaand phod di 5 bando ki upper se kya laws de literally mja aaya BC aur iss bande ke baare mai koi idea na hai mereko still aisa lgta hai AP ne training vagarh li hai iss se agar yeh iss story ka character hua toh varna mereko lga tha ki kissi TV SERIES yan MOVIE ka hi character daal diya BC kya mast tarike se pela just awesome BHAI literally just awesome

vo jo unexpected vala tha na ki unke yeh lage ki aisa kaise ho skta hai (jab AP ne knife phek ke maara tha) vo rule gajab tha BC just awesome

aur yeh 3-way conversation hui aisa lga mujhe
1. AP 2.0
2.AP1.0
3. DIMAG BC
jab 2.0 ko koi aisa bol nhi rha tha ki dumm nhi ghut rha tera aur uss time 2.0 ko bahar jaana pada saans lene ko mereko lgta hai vo baat toh DIMAG ne ki kyunki 1.0 bahut kamm baat krta hai 2.0 se i guess aur vo 2.0 ne try bhi kiya jab vo bol rha tha 1.0 ko ki usse full control de de but 1.0 ne nhi diya BC yeh scene ajeeb lga BC matlab iski film dhang se na uttri hai dimag mai vo karna padega BC as conversation BC bta ke na hoti ki kon bol rha hai but jo bhi ho i fucking love the fight scene aur BC iss knife fight ko one of the awesome scene mai dala jaye BC yeh scene gajab tha

AP ki achi khasi phati hai iss time silai karne mai hopefully jyada time na lage kyunki RJ wait nhi karega but still RJ ki sulgegi jarur BC pakka sulgegi aur sulagni bhi chahiye BC kya shi scene tha BC literally
MJ thak nhi rha main fight scene ki tareef karte karte awesome BC just awesome

let's see aage kya hota hai BC

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2. 0 story k 90%characters k liye OP hai for sure kyunki jiss level par woh hai uska 30% paane mein bhi gandiya fatt jaati toh woh op rahega in sabke liye.. Lekin uski takkar k bhi millenge usko for sure.. Keep Supporting bhidu Mathur thanks for the wonderful review..
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Khade-Khade Sahil Par Hamne Shaam Kar Di,
Apna Dil Aur Duniya Aap Ke Naam Kar Di,
Ye Bhi Na Socha Kaise Guzaregi Zindagi,
Bina Soche-Samjhe Har Khushi Aapke Naam Kar Di.

खड़े-खड़े साहिल पर हमने शाम कर दी,
अपना दिल और दुनिया आप के नाम कर दी,
ये भी न सोचा कैसे गुज़रेगी ज़िंदगी,
बिना सोचे-समझे हर ख़ुशी आपके नाम कर दी।
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Amezing miracle extraordinary speech less update bhai
Thanks bhai
 

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"AP AP uthbe AP"...

Main-Jinda hun be mera phone le bhai ko call kar woh almost yahin honge I need to go to the hospital badly..

Main wahaan munh k ball padda tha niche bc mitti bhi thandi lag rahi thi or ab mann nahi tha uthney kaa. Naa bc aaj k liye itana he kaafi tha..

Main-Mereko bahaar leke chalo be koi..

Abeer ne mujhe uthaaya or humlog aaye bahaar Mangal Phone laga raha tha bhai ko..

Main-Woh Red Shirt waale k pass ek car ki chaabi hogi woh nikaal k le aao koi ek Scorpio khaddi hai iss area k just corner par.. Seedha ye raastey se Jaana trees khatam hojaaein toh right mein dekhna dikh jaaegi..

Mangal Waapis gaya andar meri aankhein bandh horahi thi bc bahot saare pains they body mein lekin mainly mereko koi toh nasha caahiye tha or ye talab tab shant hogi jab doctor log behonsh karenge.. Mera sir fatt raha tha Injuries se or nashe se bhi..

Sam-Aankhein khulli rakh bc stay with us you got this..

Main-Bro I am hurt sssso badddd.. I am fucking brrokeennn...

Sam-I know bc teri haalat dekh k saaf dikh raha hai.. Lekin jo bhi ho that fight was insane..

Main-Yep.. Bc puch Matt usase pehle kya hua.. Literally m. MN. N..


Mera munh apne aap idhar udhar nikalne laga tha bc awaaj theek se nahi nikal rahi thi mereko aisa lag raha tha ki nind aarahi hai..

Main-Bbbbadmein bataaUnga a...


Tabhi wahaan Aai ek gaadi jhaadiyon ko chirrtey hue.. Bhai or Anjali they yelog..

Deva-Tumlog theek toh ho..


Abeer - AP ko hospital lejaana hai ASAP... Lets move...

Ravi -Tumlog nikalo humlog Dusari gaadi mein aajaaenge...

Mereko bc Sab dhundala dhundala dikhraha tha dikhna almost bandh ho chuka tha bhenchod bus awaaj sunaai derahi thi.. Mereko gaadi mein daala gaya or humlog nikale wahaan se.. Mere sath I guess bhai Anjali Abeer or Sam they.. Main bich waali seat par leta tha Anjali or Sam ki goud mein..

Deva-AP...

Mere mein filhaal himmat nahi thi ki main jawaab dun honsh mein jarur tha lekin harr kaam karne mein 50 gunna jyaada dum lag raha tha issliye maine try he nahi kiya..

Deva-AP theek hai tu???

Maine Haan mein mundi hilaai maalum nahi unhone dekhi yaa nahi..

Anjali - Haan bolraha hai.. We need to move fast.. Sam iske sirr mein jo patti hai usko kholke dabaav bana wound par..

Ab Sam ne woh patti kholi jo maine bahot he dum lagaake baandhi thi.. Jisme gand faad Dard hua or main pura kaanp gaya...


Sam-Fuck sorry bhai..

Deva-Aaram se take it easy.. AP you got this.. You are a beast..please don't close your eyes..

Main 3 he time behonh ho shakta hun easily 1). VERTIGO se 2). Jab mera blood loss jyaada hogaya ho 3). Jab main Marr jaaunga.. Pain wagairaah yaa fir koi or drugs se behonsh nahi hota main aise... Itana easy nahi hai..

Or filhaal mera bahot Saara blood or energy lost ho chuke they..

Deva-Hua kya?? Ye toh picha kar raha tha naa uska??

Abeer-Humlog behonsh they mereko honsh aaya tab wohlog 5 they or ye akela unhone isko bola tha ki 4 minutes hain iske pass unhe haraake humein bachaane ko uske baad humaari death confirmed thi.. Lekin ye thehra jaanwar aadmi haraaa diya unko lekin pehle se injured tha kya hua isko???

Deva-jab tumlog k gayab hone ki news milli tab maine isko call kiya toh iska phone bandh tha.. iski tabiyat kharaab thi toh ye Delhi hotel mein rukka tha and phone bandh tha iska Anjali ne tracker ki help se uss location yaani hotel mein phone kiya toh pata chala ye bimaar tha or waapis delhi se ghar k liye nikal gaya tha toh hum gaye Delhi ki side taaki bichmein Mille tab iska call aaya isko bataaya maine ki tumlog kidnap hogaye ho toh uss time iska picha kar rahi thi koi gaadi ussne iski gaadi ko takkar maari or bhayanak accident hua iska.. Uss gaadi mein 2 log they ek ko issne goli maari injured hotey hue bhi or dusare ko bhi bhaga diya lekin uske uppar apna tracker lagaa diya issne because he is fucking smart or uske baad kaise bhi karke ye apne phone se uska picha kartey hue yahaan pohancha maine kaha tha thoda wait karle main aajaaunga lekin shayad time nahi tha iske pass issliye khud he gaya andar ye..

Abeer-My man is a fucking beast..

Sam-Bhai aap vishwaash nahi karoge kya scene tha udhar he was destroying those fools like crazy..

Deva-issiliye toh ye AP hai..

Sam-Lekin fir pata nahi ye bich mein blank hogaya shayad head injury k kaaran or iss bich kaafi waar kiye unlog ne iske uppar... Lekin still issne harra diya unko..

Anjali-Abeer drive faster bahot blood lost horaha hai..



Main-Waatttrrrr.....


Main badbadaaya or thank god Anjali samjh gayi ussne Turant koi bottle mere munh se lagaai or uske baad main hua blank.. Holy fuck finally thoda rest Milla.. Bahot gand fatti thi bhai bahot jyaada.. Uske baad meri aankhein khuli ek jaane pehchaane scene se woh tha Ruhi k hospital kaa ek kamra.. Meri body kaafi jagah se pain kar rahi thi mainly mere hath chest sir or sabse jyaada meri ribs.. Shayad ek aadh fractured thi. Kyunki sans letey time bahot Dard horaha tha.. Meri chest mein stitches ki jagah par surgical staples Lagey they inshort I was fucked..

Mereko 10 Minute lage sab realize karne mein.. Bhenchod kaafi gandu scene 10 ghanton mein maine I guess 13 log maardiye they woh bhi 4 alag alag situations par or woh bhi bc Jester k overdose mein.. puraane din yaad aagaye they..


Then Gate khulla or ek lady doctor andar aai as usual same doctor jo humessa milti hai mereko.. Reena naam tha shayad iska.. Behtarin doctor hai ye..

Reena-Good evening AP..

Main-Kitane time k liye Behonsh tha..??

Reena-Almost 18 Hours..

Main-Holy shit.. Any serious injuries..?

Reena-50% Ribs Cracked hain Tumhaari.. 2 se 3 weeks minimum rest caahiye jo tum karoge nahi issliye bus ye karna ribs par jyaada stress naa paddey.. Maanoge tum ye bhi nahi issliye time se dawaai letey rehna padega or pain rahega ribs mein..

Main - Fuck this is bad..

Reena-Rukko main baaki sabko bulaati hun...

Woh bahaar gayi or Apne sath Ruhi, Babhi, Bhai Ami or Abeer ko leke aai...

Ruhi-Kaise hain sir???

Main-Pretty bad..

Ruhi-Dikhraha hai woh toh..

Main-Yep..

Ruhi-But still fantastic job.. Ye sab keval tu he kar shakta Hai..

Main-True..

Babhi - Pain wagairaah hai???

Main-My ribs are hurting bad like crazy bad.. Bahot Dard horaha hai..

Ruhi-Ribs mein pain rahega woh khudse he heal hongi rest caahiye jo possible hai nahi.. So painkillers best rahengi..

Main-What about my hand?? Fractured hai yaa dislocated??? Kaafi pain horaha hai..

Reena-Dislocated tha fixed now 24-36 hours takk pain rahega..

Main - Matlab Pain he pain hai filhaal toh..

Reena-Ji..

Main-Problem ye hai time hai nahi mere pass jyaada issliye medicines dedo jitani deni hai lekin mereko Jaana padega ghar..

Reena-Atleast next 14-16 hours toh rest lelena ye main suggest karungi uske baad thoda bahot body ko freely move kar paaoge.. Agar abhi kuch karoge toh or jyaada problems hojaaengi.

Babhi-itana karlega ye no problem..


Deva-Haan..


Abeer-Discharge Kabtak karoge doctor??

Reena-Aaplog abhi lejaa shaktey hain Inko papers main ready kar dungi baadmein..

Ruhi-Papers main leke aajaungi..no problem...

Reena-Bus toh fir aaplog lejaa shaktey hain Inko, lekin gaadi slowly leke Jaana as i said Abhi next 16 hours takk rest ki shakti jarurat hai..

Main-Thanks.

Continued..
 
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