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Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - All Hell Broke Loose (Completed)

Part 3 kaa title kya hona caahiye?

  • Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - The Merchant Of Death

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Guffy

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Raajan-I mean jaruri thodi Hai Red John ki gang kaa he kaam ho koi or bhi toh ho shakta Hai.. I mean koi bhi kar shakta Hai ye toh lots of people are my enemies..

isko bolte hai chutiya insan aand gale mein atake pade hai lekin gyan dena hai

Raajan-Ofcourse agar aaya toh mere liye he aaya hoga or kiske liye aaega.

Aa gaya line par chutiya

Main-Abe uss bechari ki gardan toh chhod de Marr jaegi.. Fir itani goliyaan maarunga main tujhe ki soch nahi shakta tu..

Ussne gardan par pakkad dheeli ki..

Gand toh waise hi fat gayi sale ki kya khakh serial killer banege yeh jhatu log

Jack-Iss taraf gun bhi nahi karna majaak mein bhi nahi kyunki I don't care tere pass hostage hai yaa nahi...dont even try bro..


Jack same abeer ke jaise hi hai same copy benchoooooo

Ami-Bro don't even try turning your gun on AP.. I will open your skull in a heartbeat... AP ki taraf dekhna bhi nahi..


Yeh ami bhi kam nahi sala garam bhai kya boli hai maza aa gaya


Anaa usko Leke ek corner mein chali gayi.. Or baaki sab abhi bhi barf k maafik Jamme khadey they...

Acha huwa heart attack nahi aaya kisi ko sirf jam hi gaye hai



Overall mast update tha bhai maza aa gaya padh kar bahot jabardast update tha
 

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Raajan-How..? Kaise pata chala tumhe..? Itana jaldi..?

Main-Yahi toh kaam Hai mera sir.. Hua kya actually suruwaat se bataata hun.. Actually jab ye guard ne bataaya ki ussne Ramesh yaani jo maara gaya uss guard ki awaaj suni jo awaaj darri hui yaa fir shocked nahi thi normal awaaj thi.. Iska matlab ye hua ki wahaan usse jo koi bhi Milla tha usse woh jaanta tha yaani ye confirm tha ki killer aap he ki team mein se koi hai.. Ab option tha keval ek kyunki Police waale sab yahaan lambe time se they issliye woh nahi ho shaktey they yaani bache aapke private guards unmein se jo andar they woh ho nahi shaktey they kyunki wohlog apni jagah par he they.. Yaani bache bahaar waale 3 guards ab main gaya bahaar ki side jahaan ghass wagairaah hai or mitti gilli thi.. Tab mujhe wahaan dikhe shoes k nishaan then main waapis andar aaya police guards se baat ki toh unhone mujhe bataaya ki andar se awaaj aai toh sablog turant andar aaye lekin ye jo bhaisahaab hain ye last mein pohanchey.. Then jab ye yahaan aaye toh maine Isko laat maarne ko kahaa tab maine iska shoe dekha jiske niche halki halki mitti or ghass laga tha or police k according abhi takk deewar k uss side koi guard nahi gaya lekin ye bhai saab k pairon mein toh full saboot tha uske baad last saboot mujhe Milla jab maine iski pant dekhi ghutano k uppar se toh wahaan color laga tha halka saa bilkul halka ussne saaf karliya tha woh lekin still thoda bahot color laga tha jo tab laga jab woh andar se deewar kuddke bhaaga..bus fir kya tha baaki sab aapke saamne hai..

Kaha yeh aathvi feel ko samjha raha hai tu bhi ek goli mar sale ko khel khatam iska bhi


Mandeep-Lekin woh gloves kaa kya jo Milla tumhe..

Sach mein mar de isko goli sale ko ek update extra likh kar akal nahi hai isko game hone se bach gaya hai lekin sawal duniya ke chod raha hai


Deva-Chinta matt kijiye Jaisa AP ne kahaa ki aap filhaal no. 1 priority hain toh raat takk AP rukkjaaega yahaan par aapki security k liye..

Sala yeh din aa gaye ki AP 2.0 in chutiyo ko security dega AP 1.0 bina sasur ke bhi shadi kar lega tu goli mar de isko tension hi khatam

Main-I don't think so abhi bhi koi toh hai idhar.. Kuch toh hai.. Something is missing...

Jaate jaate bhi atka kar gaye ho maharaj lekin koi nahi maza aane wala hai AP ki naak ke niche ek aur hai ya do hai pata nahi lekin abhi hai aisa AP 2.0 ko lagta hai
dekho kya hota hai aage

baki mast update tha waiting next
 

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Last do cases me killer grp tha to meko lagta hai ke iske 1-2 sathi abhi hain

Agar aisa hai to abhi gand fad bakchodi hogi next update me

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Bakchodi toh jarur hogi bhidu.. :D.. Keep supporting Genius
This is superb as always, per Ab kya missing hai? Mujhe bhi Lagta hai wo akele to ye nahi kar raha hoga aur usake itane saathi her hamle me maare ja rahe hai to koi to backup plan taiyaar kiya hoga, after all he is RedJohn.
Yep plan toh surely hoga kya hoga woh aage dekhna padega.. Keep supporting Chinturocky bhai
Superb.. Mind blowing update.. .
Bhai scene create kiya hai.... Insane...
thanks Shyam Singh
rocking bro
thanks bhai
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jabrdast headshot??
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AP bro you have reached on another level of story I became a Fan of your skills #nohomo amazing brilliant ye SB to tere liye mjak hai
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Superb bhai
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Wah bc gajab...

Sala har update ke saath ab romamch badta he ja raha h,

Sorry to say per kahani ke bich mein kuch khichav sa lag raha tha, lekin pichle kafi updates se story ka level ab part 2 ka lag raha h..
Hats off bro...

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thanks bhidu level badhta rahega ab.. janu2016
Super update hai bhai
thanks bhai
Nice update AP bhai
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Awesome update bhai superb
thanks bhai
lets review one of the awesome cases

BC main seriously socha koi group aaya hoga like pichle harr baar ki tarah 3 group serial killers ka jinme se kissi ne GUARD ko mara hoga ek ne fenching ko katta hoga aur ek backup ke liye hoga kyunki ab tak sab serial killers almost 2-3 ke group vale hi hain (ek banda alag hai as vo RJ ki gang ko chor chuka tha) but na aisa ho hi nhi skta ki jo readers expect kare aur bhai sahab usse pesh kare harr baar gaand phod shock BC seriously lawda na samjh mai aaya tha ki AMAN(fake name) kaise killer hai literally kuch na pale pda tha but thanks to the ''HOW??" update pale pad gya

normal logo like TARA, ANAA vagarh ke liye yeh simply ek narak se gujarne vala experience tha kyunki kissi ko marte huye apni aankhon ke samne dekhna matlab gotte muh mai aane vali baat hoti hai aur TARA vahi experience kar rhi hai aur AP ne kya mast motivate kiya hai DEVA Bhai Ke dialogue aur apna 1.5 saal ke experience ka ek chota sa tukda ek sujhav ke roop mai diya hai just nice one
isko koi COLD BLOODED MOTIVATER ki updhi do re  :D

ab AP se kya miss vo rha hai yeh vahi jaane hume bass uske sath dhundhne ka hai jabki koi itni badi help na hogi but still let's see kya dekhne ko milta hai
AP se vahi chis miss ho rhi hogi jo iss time uske samne na aayi ho yan AP ne usse predict kiya ho but aisa na hua ho jo AP ko khatak rha ho
like kya pta AP ne predict kiya ho ki yeh killer baakion ki trah akela na ho koi sath mai ho but situation aisi banni ki aisa kuch samne na aaya ho yan yeh time ke chlte jo samne aana chahiye tha vo samne na aa paya ho
dekha jaye toh yeh kaam subah subah hua hai mtlb jaldi kaafi jaldi raat ko guard ki moot hui 20 min. mai ANJALI vahan pahunch gayi 4 bje AP ko khabar hui 4:30 AP pahuncha aur literally subah hone se pehle usne killer ke sar mai ek ched apni priya upkaran se bna diya mtlb MEDIA public ko juada panic kar nhi payegi kyunki MURDER ke approximately 3-4 ghanto mai killer ko bhi maar diya gya yeh sab DEVA bhai handle kar lenge
but AP ko jo chis missing lag rhi vo toh samjh se pare hai aur dekhte hain ki kya abhi bhi hamla hoga GOVERNER par kyunki AP hai abhi vahan aur BC pta nhi koi tha iske sath yan yeh akela tha but dekhte hain kya dekhne ko milta hai

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Raajan-I mean jaruri thodi Hai Red John ki gang kaa he kaam ho koi or bhi toh ho shakta Hai.. I mean koi bhi kar shakta Hai ye toh lots of people are my enemies..

isko bolte hai chutiya insan aand gale mein atake pade hai lekin gyan dena hai

Raajan-Ofcourse agar aaya toh mere liye he aaya hoga or kiske liye aaega.

Aa gaya line par chutiya

Main-Abe uss bechari ki gardan toh chhod de Marr jaegi.. Fir itani goliyaan maarunga main tujhe ki soch nahi shakta tu..

Ussne gardan par pakkad dheeli ki..

Gand toh waise hi fat gayi sale ki kya khakh serial killer banege yeh jhatu log

Jack-Iss taraf gun bhi nahi karna majaak mein bhi nahi kyunki I don't care tere pass hostage hai yaa nahi...dont even try bro..


Jack same abeer ke jaise hi hai same copy benchoooooo

Ami-Bro don't even try turning your gun on AP.. I will open your skull in a heartbeat... AP ki taraf dekhna bhi nahi..


Yeh ami bhi kam nahi sala garam bhai kya boli hai maza aa gaya


Anaa usko Leke ek corner mein chali gayi.. Or baaki sab abhi bhi barf k maafik Jamme khadey they...

Acha huwa heart attack nahi aaya kisi ko sirf jam hi gaye hai



Overall mast update tha bhai maza aa gaya padh kar bahot jabardast update tha
thanks Guffy bhidu for this unique review :yourock:
 

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Update-215(Found Him)





Lawn mein ghumke humlog waapis andar aaye toh sab clear hogaya tha udhar se.. Forensics waale photo or baaki saboot legaye they toh scene clear tha..

Main-Ab karein kya yahaan..?

Ami-Baithke kissi or ko maarne kaa plan banaao or kya..

Main-What the fuck you mean..?

Ami-I mean I know you Love killing people so much..

Main-Toh iska matlab serial killer ban jaaun..?

Ami-Ban shaktey ho tum no doubt..

Main-Ek punch mein thobda fod dena hai tera maine...

Ami-Yeah sure in your dreams..

Main-(Hanske) You made me laugh..

Ami-I am serious..

Main--tujhe kya lagta hai tu mujhe harra shakti hai?? Drugs lene lag gayi kya??

Ami-Nope drugs kaa kaam tumhaara hai.. Or Haan Mujhe 100% surely lagta hai main tumhe haraa shakti hun.. I mean main lagaataar practice kar rahi hun daily or tum bus sotey ho logon ko maartey ho drugs letey ho and so jaatey ho..

Main-You know agar main 10 saal coma mein rahun and then uthun or tum unn 10 saal takk rojj practice karo tab bhi tum mujhe nahi haraa shakti... Issliye din mein sapne lene bandh kar..

Ami-Yeah sure..

Main-Ek second mujhe thoda kuch yaad aaraha hai hmm 7-8 months pehle kahaan kaa scene tha..? Hmmm Arrey jidhar tu akeli fass gayi thi or koi help nahi kar raha tha tab god like entry maarke chatt se zipline lagaake kon aaya tha tujhe bachaane.. Ummm!! Shayad main he tha..

Ami-Bangladesh...

Main - Haan Bangladesh kaa he toh scene tha.. Or uske baad ek or kuch yaad aaraha hai mujhe jab teri gardan se saamne waale ka Chaaku 3 inch ki durri par tha or tu apne last sans lerahi thi tab un sabko silent sniper banke kissne tapkaaya tha.. Ummm! Oh Haan Maine.. Ye kahaan kaa scene tha ummm! Thimphu kaa Bhutan..


Ami-OK...

Main-Or Haan ek or scene yaad aaraha hai mujhe Jab tu Chang or Abeer Iron Man banke akele Ghuss gaye they kahin toh bhi or 3 seconds mein kidnap hogaye they tab kon aaya tha... Umm Main.. Haina...? Uss din bhi kya bhenchod log maare they maine 23 ghanton mein 2 countries ki 4 different cities mein 18-20 log maare they..

Ami-23...

Main--Haan 23..

Ami-I am not gonna lie that day was sick as fuck..

Main-I know....or ek yaad aaraha hai mujhe...

Ami-Oh shut up I know meri life bahot baar bachaai hai tumne ginwaane ki need nahi hai..

Main-Exactly... Issliye betu know your place...

Ami-By the way what's your plan.. I mean tum waapis jaa shaktey they wahaan par lekin gaye nahi ho abtak..

Main-Oh fuck that shit main waapis nahi Jaane waala.. I don't like them at all.. Mujhe nahi Jaana udhar..

Ami-Subu ko maara even uska death contract tha Jisske pass usse bhi maara high Command k regional manager ko bhi maara.. Lag toh yahi raha hai ki tum surely waapis Jaana caah rahe ho...

Main-Woh toh bus ego satisfy karne k liye.. Mera koi interest nahi hai Jaane mein.. Or waise bhi it doesn't matter main tu kya caahtey hain Jaana toh paddega he aaj nahi toh Kal...

Ami-I know.. But sabse buri haalat Tumhaari hogi.. No one cares about me or Chang hum nikal jaaenge aapka kya hoga boss..

Main-Meri mujhe sochne de.. I am motherfuckin AP, I can make a plan in 10 seconds so woh main dekhlunga..

Ami-OK ok we will see..

Hum baithey they toh woh Mandeep Rajan or Anaa wahaan aagaye..

Mandeep-Ok saare guards ko bhej diya hai maine..

Main-Wait what the fuck..? Bhejdiya.. What do you mean bhejdiya..

Mandeep-Haan tumhaare guards aaenge naa or tabtak tumlog ho he..

Main- You are so dumb kam se kam puch toh leta bhai..

Mandeep-What do you mean Abhi takk gaye nahi hai wohlog roukk shaktey hain agar tum caaho toh..

Main-Nahi fir shakk ho jaaega.. Ami tu yahin rukk main aata..

Ami-Wait what do you mean main aata...?

Main-Abe unmein ek or guard tha jo killer k sath tha usko range hath pakadna tha issliye main sabko bhejne waala Tha or uska picha karta..

Ami-What the fuck..

Mandeep- Abhi bhi kar shaktey ho just sablog duty sign off karke nikal he rahe hain.. Humaari he Van chhodke aaegi unhe..

Main-Oh hell yeah.. Itana bhi useless nahi hai tu.. Uss Van waale kaa number de mujhe.. Ami I gotta go..

Ami-I can't let you go alone main sath aarahi hun..

Main-Nope you are needed here.. I gotta go.. Just stay I don't want to waste my time.. Ami k pass mera number hai uss Van waale ka number send karo mere pass i am out..

Anaa-be careful AP...

Main bhaagke bahaar aaya toh main gate k bahaar woh Van thi or ussi mein Sab guards almost baith chuke they... Actually ek or gurad tha jo Red John kaa banda tha mujhe kaise pata kyun pata sab baadmein bataaUnga... Filhaal mera plan tha usko follow karna kahin naa kahin toh leke jaaega mujhe woh.. Kyunki abtak jitane bhi log Mille hain Red John k sab 3 k groups mein they or I don't think so yahaan bhi koi pattern tutta hai bhenchod chindi chor logon ko maarne k liye 3 bheje or Raajypaal k liye 1 banda naa naa bc... Hopefully ye bhi 3 he honge or yahaan keval 2 he they confirm toh mujhe lagraha tha ki 100% iss guard k sahaare kam se kam ek or ko pakad lunga..issliye jaise he woh Van nikali main andar se bahaar aaya or apni gaadi mein baitha or uss gaadi kaa picha karne laga.. Kaafi durr se lekin.. Subah kaa time tha toh utana traffic nahi millne waala Tha or uppar se uss Van kaa colour or banaawat kaafi unique thi issliye durr se bhi aaram se dekh paaraha tha main Uss Van ko main.. Or main 100% sure tha iss Van k driver or front passenger seat k alaawa koi bhi banda ye nahi dekh shakta tha ki piche kon aaraha hai.. Or woh guard middle mein tha issliye mujhe koi dikkat thi nahi.. Mujhe maalum tha woh 100% apni exact location par nahi uttarega... Van city k inside enter hui 1 banda wahaan uttara lekin apne waala abhi takk andar he tha.. Maine uss driver k pass call kiya..

Main-chup rehna bolna kuch nahi Gaadi normal speed par chala main piche hun.. AP bolraha hun..

Driver-Haan Haan theek beta hojaaega aake kardunga ye kaam..

Call disconnected..
Nice samajhdaar banda hai Driver bhi.. next stop par 1 guard or uttara.. Ab gaadi mein 3 guards mojjud they..humlog city se bahaar nikal gaye or Next stop city k bilkul outside hua wahaan Van puri tarah khaali hui.. 3no uttare or hath wagairaah milaake 2 ek side nikal liye or woh single guard seedha nikal gaya.. Maine gaadi Van k bagal mein lagaai..

Driver-Seedha nikal gaya Sahaab...

Main-Thanks.. Dikh raha hai mujhe nikalo tum baksish mill jaaegi..

Driver-Ji ji...

Maine gaadi wahin side mein lagaai or paidal he nikala uske piche.. Crowded ilaaka tha lekin itana crowded nahi ki woh dikhe naa... Main apna distance Banaa raha tha usase... Lekin woh bc chill maarke chal raha tha... Ye ilaaka high crime rate waala lag raha tha mujhe kyunki log bc Sab gundey mawaali type he they or pata nahi kyun mujhe toh aise ghurr rahe they maano khaa he jaaenge.. Humlog ek bajaar se gujjar rahe they filhaal.. Woh ek do dukaandar ko "Hi-Hello, Namastey kartey hue chalta jaaraha tha.. Isase pata chalta hai ki yelog kitane sharp minded hain yahaan aake aise settle hogaye maano yahin k log hon kissi ko shakk nahi hoga bc inke uppar.. Khair bajaar paar karke humlog galiyon mein aaye ab woh thoda satark hua idhar Udhar dekhne laga matlab uska ghar kamra yaa jahaan bhi woh rehta hai woh pass aaraha tha ab main ek grocery shop mein he ghuss gaya uske chaltey..dukaandaar jhat se aage aaya..

Shopkeeper - Haan beta kya loge..?

Lekin maine uski taraf dhyaan nahi diya as main dekh raha tha woh guard konsi side turn lega..

Shopk-Beta..? Hello.. Kya loge..? Bologe..?

Main--Condom hai???

Ye sun ussne mujhe aise ghurra maano uski beti ki chut maangli ho maine..

Shopk-N. Nahi ye sab yahaan nahi milta..

Main-Toh bhosdk budhau gand marraane ko baar - 2 puchraha hai jab kaam ki cheej hai he nahi toh..

Woh uss par kuch react kar paata usase pehle main nikal gaya.. Yahaan se right gaya tha woh main right gaya toh bc saamne koi nahi aage galli bhi bandh hogayi thi ek factory k piche waale hisse ne uss galli ko bandh kar rakha tha yaani woh yahin kahin kissi ghar mein gaya hai iss galli mein 3 he ghar they jinmein se 2 toh locked they like kaafi time se aisa lag raha tha.. Bc mere pass gun bhi nahi thi.. Main uss third ghar k side gaya 100% issi mein gaya hoga woh.. Main uss ghar ki taraf badha socha pehle taank jhaank karke situation kaa pata lagaa lun..Lekin jaise he main uss ghar ki khidki k pass jaata mujhe thodi si aahat hui.. Like koi piche tha mere.. Or itana toh seekh chukka hun main aisi situations mein kya karna hai main jhatak se palta toh mere piche woh guard khadda tha or ussne Chaaku se mujhpe waar kiya tha lekin palatne k kaaran uska chaaku mere hath mein laga bhenchod... Right hand par mere chaaku kaa cut laga or main piche ki taraf jaa girra... Lekin main jhatke se utha kyunki ye kaafi tejj tha agar jyaada time lagaata niche toh bhenchod gand Marr jaati... Ab main uske saamne khadda tha uske hath mein tha chaaku.. Or mahool tha 1 vs 1 kaa.. Lets go baby...


Continued...
 

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As I promised jaise reviews millenge ussi hissab se next update dedunga Update dediya hai.. Next 20 din yahi hoga agar reviews miltey hain yaani achaa response milta hai toh next update jald he post hojaaega.. So make sure to Read and Give valuable feedback... Thanks bhidulog keep supporting...
 

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Mast update bhai maza aa gaya parh kar ab one on one hoga toh dekhane ka maza aayega kya hota hai kar ke
Waise next part mein duniya ghumne wale hai sab BC bangladesh bhutan aur pata nahi kaha kaha jaane wale hai next part ka soch soch ke abhi se excitement ho rahi hai kya hoga kar ke
Waise yeh part bhi mast hai waiting next
 
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