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Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - All Hell Broke Loose (Completed)

Part 3 kaa title kya hona caahiye?

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BC aisa lag raha hai jaise History channel par UPDATE FACTORY padh raha hun ki kaise ek update ko likha jata hai kaise uske bare mei socha jata hai.
 

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Actually ye sawaal merese bahot baar pucha gaya hai issliye aaj bata he deta hun..

  1. Process suru hoti hai plot se plot sab already set hai or main plot mein jabtak ungali nahi karta jabtak tumlog aage kaa kuch guess naa karlo tab change karna pad jaata hai..Or Agar Aapke pass plot ready hai toh ye lagaalo 40% time daily bachega update likhtey time...
  2. Ab uske baad aati hai writing Process ek baar Plot padho (- 10 minutes) then Likhna suru karo main update deta hun 1500 words k aas pass kaa ek toh agar ek time par keval ek ya do he update likhna hai toh usme easily lag jaega 1.5 - 2 hours.. Lekin agar ikkatha likhne baithey ho toh ek update 35-40 minutes mein hojaaega kyunki flow Banaa rehta hai..
  3. Then Update hoga complete fir hogi uski editing spelling mistakes wagairaah correct hongi etcetera..
  4. Then aaega next day update post karne kaa time toh fir hogi ek baar re reading ki khaun koi mistake toh nahi reh gayi..
  5. Then hoga update post..
Yaani Agar ikkatha 3-4 updates likh rahe ho toh 1 update kaa average time hoga 1-1.5. Ghanta sab milaake.. Lekin 1 yaa 2 updates he likh rahe ho toh sab milaake 4-5 ghantey minimum lagenge..

Ab aatey hain special cases like Sex scenes (jo abhi tak hain nahi), Investigation scenes (jo pura update he investigation kaa hota hai), Fight scene, Kissi Villain ko hataane kaa plan banaana ho ki kaise maarunga usko.. Yaa fir Kaali kaa end hua uss type k updates hon unmein fir time bahot lagta hai caahe kitana he lagaalo kam hai 1 yaa 2 din takk lagaatey hain kyunki kaafi baar hataana then likhna padta hai theories fit nahi baithti yaa fir real nahi lagta toh sab hataana padta hai.. Agar Investigation ki koi sense nahi bani toh fir faayda nahi likhne kaa isase acha seedha murderer pakad lo.. Kaali waale update mein 2 week+ takk laga hua tha main mera sabse jyaada time khapaane waala update tha ye.. usase pehle jo sabse jyaada time khapaane waala update tha woh tha Last Part Mein Ritu kaa sex scene or then Riya k sath breakup.. Mujhe laga tha isase lamba kuch nahi hoga kyunki 1-1 week laga tha inmein ..lekin then jab Ye kaali kaa the end likha toh fatt k hath mein aakar then niche bhi girr gayi..

Lekin then main thehra multi talented banda highly Politically Active Student hun studies ko jyaada time nahi deta as mera interest utana nahi hai AP ki tarah last mein padhke degree lene waalon mein se hun main.. Issliye time nikal jaata hai Sundays ko holidays ko yaa fir kahin meeting mein Hain or wait karna hai toh earphones lagaae and likhne laga..

Toh ye hota hai ek update mein bhidu.. I. Hope tumhe passand aaya hoga jawaab thanks for asking..
Bhai...tussi great ho...
 
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BC aisa lag raha hai jaise History channel par UPDATE FACTORY padh raha hun ki kaise ek update ko likha jata hai kaise uske bare mei socha jata hai.
Lol Detailing Mein He toh Nasha hai bhai :D
Bhai...tussi great ho...

I know :D thanks bhidu
 

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Main fataak se utha fresh hua.. Kyun beta John jall gayi naa gand.. Itana Jaan gaya hun main John ko ki uske baare mein pehle he bataa deta hun.. Khair fresh hoke main nahaaya seconds mein kapdey change kiye then niche aaya toh Rishi Babhi or Meenu breakfast kar rahe they...
Babhi-Aaja breakfast karle..
Main-Time nahi hai.. Aap waala he dedo..
Babhi-bye..
Maine chalte chalte babhi ki plate or juice kaa glass uthaaya... Chaltey - 2 he jaldi se khaaya juice peeya and then glass or plate bc Olympics k maafik faink diye.. Gaadi Rishi ki saamne khaddi thi as woh Jaane waala Tha toh driver ne nikaal rakhi thi.. Maine usase chaabi lee usko dusari nikaalne ko bola... Anjali kaa message aagaya tha sabse pehle mujhe pass mein he Jaana tha.. 10 Minute mein scene par pohancha main.. Toh ye ek society thi middle class k log baag rehtey they... Ek kaafi choudi (Wide) galli thi jiske dono side ghar they or uss galli k ekdum corner par ek park tha or wahin gaadi mein ek laash thi.. Bheed kaafi thi local log and media wagairaah.. Lekin woh scene se durr they.. Police kaafi thi.. Bheed ko cheerta hua main aage aaya media mere pass aa paata usase pehle main scene par aagaya or media ko police ne roukk liya.. Wahaan par Deepak or Jiya they Incharge..
Jiya-Morning boss..
Main-Kya scene hai..
Jiya-52 saal ki lady hai boss
Main sun raha tha lekin bhenchod media orr logon kaa sound itana tha ki mera dimag ghum raha tha..
Main-Ek second Deepak in sabko or piche lejaao turant jo chappar chappar kare arrest karlo gaadi mein baithaao then chhod dena..
Deepak-ok boss...
Main-i can't fucking work like this.. Jiya continue..
Jiya- Retired school principal or filhaal ek Social Worker hai.. Kaafi naam tha city mein inka..yahin rehti hain ye saamne waala ghar unka he hai.. Ek beta hai and ek beti hai woh rahe dono.. Kal Raat late night Delhi se waapis aane waali thi subah dudh waale ne gaadi ki taraf dhyaan diya toh front mirror par khoon se John kaa emoji bana tha.. Ussne woh nishaan dekha pass se toh laash milli and sabko inform kiya ussne.. Woh raha dudh waala.. Forensics sahi time toh postmortem k baad he bataa paayenge lekin unke according subah 4 baje k aas pass he hua hai ye sab.. Koi cctv nahi hai ek tha Park mein jo 6 months se kharaab padda hai..
Main-OK.. Main start karta hun just make sure no one disturbs me..
Jiya-ok boss..
Main aage aaya toh forensic waale pictures wagairaah le rahe they..
Main-Out bhidulog..
Woh samjh gaye ek he baar mein or turant good morning bolke piche hatt gaye..
Scene ye tha front seat par dead body thi aunty ka galla kaata gaya tha or bahot he jyaada safaai se kaata gaya tha.. ek he waar mein woh bhi.. Yaani banda professional tha matlab bahot jyaada professional in short serial killer.. Khoon niche uske pairon takk aagaya tha front mirror par bada saa smiley face tha jo dhund k kaaran thoda saa feeka hogaya tha but still visible tha.. Jyaada time tha nahi maine usko dhangse dekha 30 second takk and scene samjh gaya.. Main gaadi se ek side mein aaya park ki taraf jahaan bahaar he fool wagairaah lage they...
Main-(chilaake) jiya...
Jiya bhaagti hui wahaan aai Deepak bhi aaya..
Main-Sabse close ghar ye inhi kaa haina...
Jiya-Haan ye ghar saamne waala..
Main-tum dono Ye ladka or ladki jahaan sotey hain wahaan jaao or main bolun tab reply Dena..jaldi..
Jiya-ok boss..
Woh dono uss ladke ko leke andar gaye ro ro k aakhein laal hogayi thi dono bhai behen ki..
Thodi der baad main uss corner par khadda hoke bola..
Main-Jiya.. Deepak...
Lekin koi reply nahi aaya.. Matlab awaaj nahi pohanchi Maine jiya ko call kiya or dono ko waapis bulaaya.. Wohlog aagaye waapis..
Jiya-Kya hua boss.. Awaaj he naa aaai thoda jorr se bolna tha..
Main-jor se he toh nahi bolna tha Got it .. Dekho hua kya tha.. Murder actually car mein nahi hua..
Jiya-Wait what..?
Main-Eigjactly.. Aunty ji yahaan aai raatko apne beta beti ko disturb nahi karna caahti thi sure dusri key hogi uske pass issliye gaadi se woh gate kholne k liye uttari thi lekin tabhi usse kuch awaaj sunaai di jo yahaan se aai hogi for sure.. Ab Aunty Bollywood movies ki tarah khud investigate karne idhar aai.. Or jaise he Woh idhar aai yahaan kuch Milla nahi kyunki banda yaa bandey yahaan inn jhaadiyon mein thaa yaa they most probably 2 they.. Or jaise he woh Jaane k liye muddi turant piche waala banda uske saamne aaya or Bam ek he waar mein galla cut awaaj nikali hogi ek baar jiss hissab se galla katta hai bus 2 words he nikale honge woh bhi itani awaaj mein "Hello" bus that's it.. Ussne apne dono hathon se galle ko dabaaya lekin koi faayda nahi tha blood nahi rukkne waala Tha...and bam death.. Ab uske baad unhone aunty ko uthaaya turant or car mein daala issliye jyaada blood car mein he hai..
Jiya-Lekin boss ye kaise maalum aapko ki usko yahaan maara hai yahaan toh thoda bahot blood bhi nahi hai..
Main-Kyunki beta blood waali mitti uthaali gayi hai yahaan se.kachi jameen hai ye . Dekho iss aunty k ghutnon par mitti lagi hain yaani jaise he uska galla katta woh ghutano par girri ye same mitti yahaan hai.. Then uski peeth dekho halki halki mitti lagi hai yaani ghutano k baad ye peeth k ball girri.. Ek or clue ye hai ki uske hontoh takk khoon jaa chuka hai seat par baithey baithey uppar ki taraf khoon kaise jaaega bhalla woh tabhi hoga jab woh niche girri ho..for sure khoon k chintey yahaan girre honge jyaada nahi but girre jarur they issiliye yahaan se dekho mitti uthaali gayi hai.. Alag he dikh raha hai..
Jiya-Haan yahaan se..
Main-Yep.. Kab, kaise marri hogaya clear kyun ye or clear karna hai.. Iski gaadi ki search karo main or Jiya ghar ki search karte hain..
Main Or Jiya andar aaye humein bus Aunty k room ki search karni thi.. Kaafi bada room tha main or Jiya dono lage kaam par...
Kaafi cash or kuch samaan Milla wahaan..uska phone niche gaadi mein tha lock tha usme bete ko maalum tha... woh open kiya usme kuch Khaas tha nahi..
Main-ek kaam karo reason teeno murders investigate karke dhundunga ek baar teeno ko investigate karlun.. Kyunki jitana late hounga utana log badhenge baaki jagah or most probably wohlog ek aadh koi saboot hoga toh usse waise kharaab kardenge..
Jiya-OK ok..

Main-Bus formality k liye uss dudh waale se sawaal jawaab karna woh nahi hoga for sure shakal se he naa lagraha woh..
Jiya-Boss body hatwaadun ab?.
Main-Yep..
Jiya ne medical team ko bulaaya wahaan..



Main - ... Jiya I am done here next case par jaaraha hun main...


Jiya-OK boss..

Main wahaan se gaadi mein aaya chang ko Message karke scene bataaya ki kaise aaj 3 murder hue hain karke...then pohanchna main second scene par..




 

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Next scene ek kasba tha like city or village kaa mixture.. City k bilkul outside padta hai ye.. 8 baj gaye they... Yahaan utani bheed nahi thi as gaon waale darr k maare durr he rehtey hain.. Keval media he tha.. Yahaan Incharge Anjali thi or Uske alaawa Abeer Ami or Pooja wahaan they...

Ek ghar tha medium type single floor tha gate par 2 hawaldar they baaki police waale media ko ek side kar rahe they.. Main andar enter hua toh Anjali and baaki sab udhar he they.. Andar 2 room they ek bathroom and ek kitchen..or unhi mein se ek room k bed par laash thi galla kaata gaya tha bilkul same to same ussi tarah jiss tarah se us aunty kaa kaata gaya tha or bed k uppar deewar par smiley face tha.. 45-50 ki age thi uncle ki..


Anjali-oh hey.. Welcome..

Main - Kya scene hai..

Anjali - Gaon k doctor they ye akele rehtey they wife Marr chuki hai beta hai ek Chennai mein inform kardiya Hai usko.. Kaam waali bai subah aai or gate nahi khola uncle ne kaafi derr toh gaon waalon ko bulaaya gate toda toh andar uncle ki laash thi.. .. 4.30 baje k aas pass hua hai forensics k according..


Main Laga uncle ko dekhne .. 1 minute baad aagaya conclusion par..

Main - Uncle nind ki goli khaata tha... Nind mein he tapak gaya uppar samjh mein bhi naa aaega Marra kaise tha.. 5"10-5"11 ki height hogi killer ki jiss type se ghaav hai and upar jiss height par ye smiley face chaapa hai woh dekh k clear hai.. Jyaada tagda banda nahi tha kyunki sotey hue bhi itana gehra waar nahi kiya gaya lekin professional tha for sure again it means serial killer...Left handed tha.. Woh khidki se bahaar gaya hoga surely as gate andar se bandh tha.. Pehle bahaar se lock open kiya andar aaye kaam kiya then gate lock Kiya andar se and bam khidki se waapis bahaar...

Pooja - Ok ok you are fast I see..

Anjali-boss we have something..

Main-kya..?

Anjali-As most probably ye ek he bandey kaa kaam Hai issliye maine Blood samples bhijwa diye they pehle he lab mein.. Or mera shakk sahi nikala kyunki uncle k galle par ek or blood sample mille hain jo uss Aunty k hain.. Yaani isse same ussi chaaku se maara gaya hai jisase aunty ko maara gaya tha..

Main-No fucking way..

Anjali-It's true blood match hogaya hai aunty se...

Main-Ek second first killers alag alag hain dono k aunty waala killer itana lamba nahi tha lekin ho shakta Hai 1 se jyaada bandey hon..Lekin fir bhi 4 baje aunty marri 4.30 baje ye 30 minute mein aunty ko maara uski laash gaadi mein daali then wahaan painting banaai or yahaan aake gate kaa lock open kiya and uncle ko maar bhi diya no fucking way.. Main Jaguar mein aaya hun or mujhe 19 minutes yahaan pohanchey mein lag gaye wahaan se.. Traffic bhi nahi tha..no fucking way..

Anjali - maybe first scene par 2 bandey ho or smiley banaane k liye banda ek wahaan rukka ho then ek banda yahaan lock pick kar raha ho.. Taaki jaise he woh second banda yahaan aae woh ready rahe..

Main-maybe ho shakta Hai. Abeer..

Abeer-Yo..

Main-Yahaan se wahaan jaa or waapis full speed mein aana jitana tejj ho shake utana..marrega nahi airbags hain he.. Bus kissi ko kuchalna nahi..

Abeer-bitch I am far better driver then you.. Ami aatoh..

Abeer or Ami nikal gaye..

Main-Ghar Ki Talaash I lee??

Anjali-Ek room baaki hai bus..

Main-aajao toh laash hatwaado dekhliya maine...

Humlog uss room mein aaye toh ek old almiraah thi wahaan.. Uska lock toda toh kapde wagairaah uski wife k gehney bc puraane model k.. Uske alaawa Rupaaye they.. Gaon kaa doctor tha toh patient cash he detey honge..

Main-Ok thanks next jagah jaaraha hun main.. Saara kuch likho ek file mein and pohancho station.. Motive teeno kaa ek sath dhundenge..

Anjali-ok boss..

Main bahaar aaya gaadi mein baitha and then pohanchna last crime scene par... Government quarters they yahaan par sab city k bichon bich mojjud thi ye jagah.. Yahaan bhi kuch log idhar udhar faile they relatives wagairaah bhi aachuke they shayad rona dhona chal raha tha ek aadh lady kaa.. Main uss ghar mein aaya toh Andar Rajat Ajay Priyanka Mangal they... 2bhk ghar tha ye bhi or hall mein sofa par ek aadmi ki laash thi.. 45-50 iski ummar rahi hogi.. Same galla kaata gaya tha or bc ye bhi ekdum same waise he jaise pichli 2 scenes par tha.. TV tha saamne uske uppar smiley face bana tha..

Main-Pehle toh insabko bahaar nikaalo..

Ajay- inki behan hai boss..

Main-I don't care.. Rona dhona bahaar... Sabko nikaalo..

Aurat- ab ro bhi nahi shakti main mere bhai ki mout par ek toh kabse laash ko yun rakha hai tumlogon ne kuch kar nahi rahe...

Main-Aunty out... Leke jaao re isko..

Aurat-How dare you talk to me like that..

Main-Get out aunty..

Ajay usko or ikka dukka jo andar they sabko bahaar legaya...

Rajat - Headmaster hai bhai divorced akela rehta hai.. Raatko ye exam papers check kar raha tha or shayad yahin so gaya ye piche waali khidki open thi yahaan se aae honge woh or bhaisahaab ki aankh seedhi uppar he khulli hogi..

Main-Bhenchod kehna padega kaafi practice ki hogi maarne waalon ne sabko same cut diya hai bc..

Mangal-Same he banda hoga men..


Main-Naa bc ye dekh iss bandey kaa angle dekh yun bhenchod right hand se maara hoga.. 6"2 ki height rahi hogi bc easily. Last killer chota tha or left handed tha..

Mangal - Woh naa maalum lekin Anjali ne bataaya ki last body par blood samples mille hain toh iske samples bhi legaye they and guess what isski Gardan par un dono k blood samples mille hain...

Main-What the fuck? No fucking way.. Ispar bhi..

Mangal-Haan..


Main-Bhenchod aisa kya chala rahe they wohlog Rocket??? Itana jaldi or itani safaai se kaam Kar rahe they bc darrne waali baat hai ye toh.


Mangal-Yep..

Ajay - Boss woh aunty media k saamne aapko sunaa rahi hai..

Main-Chhod gand marwaae I don't care.. Ek kaam karo yahaan kaa scene niptaao or Saara kuch detail mein note karo and mereko station mein millo.. Forensics ko bolo jaldi se jaldi report aani caahiye... Time kya tha, blood samples kaa kya Scene tha... Wagairaah wagairaah...

Main wahaan se bahaar aaya toh media waale aaye lekin constables ne durr he roukk liya or main nikala gaadi mein.. Insab mein time lagne waala Tha issliye 2 ghantey toh maine teeno crime scenes k chakkar kaatey gaadi mein full speed saare shortcuts dekhe ki kaise wohlog itani jaldi pohanchey honge... Driving skills increase hogaye lekin kuch sujha nahi bhenchod ab jarurat thi thodi outside help ki..main haweli aaya 12 baje k aas pass lunch kiya and then room mein aaya Chang kaa bacha hua jester nikaala and bam last dose andar...Ab ye aai bahaar se help... Ab maine time waste nahi kiya 10 Minute mein main waapis nikal gaya kyunki 3no postmortem reports aagayi thi or sab files ready thi ab sabkaa motive dhundana tha..

Police station k Meeting Room Mein filhaal Anjali or baaki team, Abeer, Mangal, Ami or Priyanka.. And FIA waale sab mojjud they or mera he wait kar rahe they..

Main aake apni jagah par baitha..

Main-let's go guys.. Start se suru karo jaldi jaldi sab Bataado.. 1st murder, Jiya..

Jiya-Boss Time of death 4.00 am sahi kaha aapne death car k andar nahi hui thi bahaar hui thi body ko move kiya gaya tha..koi fingerprints nahi shayad gloves use kiye they... Ye Aunty ki file hai puri past present and future ki..

Jiya ne mujhe file di..

Main-Next..

Anjali-Time of death 4.30 am se ek do minutes uppar niche ..sahi kaha tha tumne killer lefty tha or medium built personality rahi hogi.. Nind ki goliyaan Lee thi unhone.. Blood Samples jaisa maine bola wahi hai uske uppar wahi chaaku use kiya gaya hoga jisase first murder hua tha kyunki Uncle k wound mein first lady k blood k samples Mille hain thode bahot..

Main - Yahi baat khaaye jaarahi hai mujhe..

Anjali-Ye rahi uss bandey ki saari details..

Main-Next..

Rajat - time of death 5.05 am approximately.. Baaki Sab jaisa aapne bataaya murderer k baare mein woh lagbhag theek hai.. Or yahaan bhi iske wound mein Pichle dono k blood k samples Mille hain bahot he kam lekin Mille jarur hain.. Ye rahi details..

Main-What the fuck.. So guys i need complete silence..

Sabse pehle toh teeno kaa connection dhundana tha mereko.. Common dekhtey hain kya hai teeno mein.. Maine teeno files sath kholi sab ghurra.. Bc processing jester ki wajah se itani tejj thi ki abhi thoda feel horaha tha mere pass brain hai.. Or uski wajah se 5 minute mein maine connection dhund liya.. Lol bhenchod majaak banaadiya case kaa..

Main-got it..

Sab-What the hell???

Mangal-Bc itani jaldi..

Main-Time pass nahi suno.. Pehle bataata hun connection teeno kaa.. Connection hai school.. Yaani woh aunty jiss school se retired haina 3rd banda ussi school kaa headmaster hai filhaal.. Or woh school ussi kasbe mein Hai jisme apne second victim woh doctor sahaab rehtey hain..

Anjali-Oh my god its true...

Main-It is.. Ab ye toh hua connection ab suno marrne ki wajah...


Main-Sabse pehle toh ye Corrupt they teeno.. Or ek he kand mein corrupt they..


Jiya-How..?


Main - Jiss government school ki baat haina usase bahot paisa khaaya hai inhone.. Pehle woh lady principal thi ab ye banda headmaster hai.. Government students ko jo free dresses, bags, cycles, computers wagairaah other accessories provide karti hai un sabmein se paisa khaate they ye dono .. Ye Serial killer k liye kaafi nahi hai sabse main ye suno even Government mid day meal provide karti hai Usmein bhi yelog ghotala kartey they jiss kaaran low quality kaa Khaana students ko milta hai..Or more shocking Uss Current principal k sath affair bhi hai iska..


Deepak-Ye aapko kaise pata..


Main-Phone mein last search thi aunty ki uss school k bache hospital mein pohanchey hain kharaab Khaane ki wajah se.. Then ye Delhi gayi he nahi Delhi gayi thi toh toll tax ki slip kahaan hai online transaction thi toh phone mein message kahaan hai.ye uss principal k sath he thi Kal Raat kyunki Aunty k room mein mujhe aunty ko handwriting milli thi wahi same hand writing uss headmaster k exams par thi...then phone mein uss principal ko code words mein message bhejein hain issne ki ab kya karein wagairaah wagairaah mera Naam toh nahi aaega wagairaah wagairaah jo kaafi hai isse School scam se joddne k liye..yaani ye raatko Delhi se nahi uss principal k yahaan se ghar gayi thi. Then bc iski pension bank mein direct aati hogi toh itana cash kiss kaam kaa.. Or cash bhi like 2-3 months se padda hai uss almiraah mein condition se saaf dikhraha hai.. Ye tha inke marrne kaa raaj.. Koi bhi thodi bahot investigation karta toh pakkad leta ye..


Jiya-Oh my god.. You are insane..

Main-Yes i am..


Anjali-Lekin uss doctor kaa kya..

Main-Arey Haan un doctor bhaisahaab ne un bachon kaa first checkup kiya tha jab woh bimaar hone lage or uss current headmaster ne isse paise khilaae taaki ye suru mein real reason bataaye he naa bus normal pait Dard ki dawaai dedey.. Issiliye bache ghar baithey baithey or bimaar hogaye or last mein unhe hospital mein admit karwaayaa gaya.. 2 bache marre bhi they.. Naam aagaya unki gareeb families kaa ki woh Khaane mein gandagi parostey hain..lol...or ye teeno bachgaye.. Chota sa scam tha but 2 bachon ki jaan legaya or kuch abhi bhi hospital mein Hain.. Yahi tha reason maine 5 minute mein jodd liya teeno ko.. killers toh pata nahi kabse research kar rahe honge..

Sab-Holy fuck..

Anjali-You are getting faster day by day..

Main--oh you have no idea honey.. Ab killer ko dhundein firr??

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Update-195(Done And Dusted)





Kaise marre pata karliya tha maine, kab marre woh bhi clear tha, Motive bhi clear kardiya tha maine.. Connection bhi teeno kaa clear kardiya tha 50% kaam done hogaya tha ab bacha tha baaki 50% or sabse tough kaam yaani killers ko dhundana.. Yahaan main thoda saa atak gaya.. Ye bhenchod theory samjh nahi aai ki itani jaldi kaise woh next jagah pohanch gaye.. I mean impossible nahi tha ye karna lekin still mera dimag belive nahi kar raha tha or Agar mera dimag belive nahi kar raha toh iska matlab gadbad hai beta..

Filhaal main akela Anjali k cabin mein baitha equations Banaa raha tha new new theories create kar raha tha even ek theory mein toh main khud killer bangaya tha lekin still dikkat aarahi thi.. Mera dimag mujhe khudpar bojh lag raha tha itana kaafi nahi tha mujhe full mind control caahiye.. Main Paagal horaha tha.. Ye sab total 15 minutes kaa kaam Tha agar main fully ready hota toh.. Bloods, samples, deaths, scam, serial killers, time of death.. Oh my fucking God.. Holy fucking shit.. Fuckkkkk.... Clear... Ahahahaha ahah.. Ab mere sawaal k jawaab forensics waalon se lene they mereko... Bus fir case solve tha.. Bhenchod even my slower version is faster then AP's faster version and that's A fact.. Aahahahah I am god..

Main bhaagke bina kissi ko bataaye niche aaya gaadi mein baitha or pohancha seedha hospital.. Wahaan se aaya postmortem wing mein.. Wahaan Reception par pucha doctors k baare mein toh pata chala lunch time hai toh lunch kar rahe hain wohlog.. Staff room kaa adress bataaya ussne or main aaya uppar ek corner mein tha woh room.. Maine knock kiya toh andar se awaaj aai khulla hai.. Main andar enter hua toh andar 3 male nurse baithey they or lunch kar rahe they.. Yelog humaari he team mein se they jo aaj teeno crime scenes par thi..

Main-Hi guys..

Nurse1-hello sir.. How can we help you..

Main-Actually main doctors ko dhund raha hu jinhone aaj postmortem kiya tha..

Nurse 1-Oh Dr Kundan or Dr Rathi dono he lunch k liye gaye hain sir.. 1 ghantey takk aajaaenge.. Kuch kaam tha aapko?

Main-Haan kuch questions they.. Tumlog bhi toh hoge postmortem k time tumlog se puch shakta hun..?

Nurse1-sure sir.. Hum teeno he mojjud they teeno postmortems mein..

Main-Perfect..

Main andar aaya or unke sath baith gaya..

Nurse1-khaana loge sir..?

Main-bus tum khaao bhai jyaada time nahi lunga.. So first..? Kya tum sure ho ki 2nd or 3rd dead body par baaki k blood samples mille hain..

Nurse1-Ji sir doctors ne Confirm kardiya tha ye toh..

Main-lekin how is this even possible ye ho kaise shakta Hai..

Nurse1-Woh toh Sir aapko he pata lagaana padega humaara kaam toh hogaya..

Main-Oh Haan sure.. Next question itani safaai se cut they teeno k teeno toh kya teeno he ek he waar mein cut kiye gaye they..

Nurse1-Ji sir kaafi professionalism tha cuts mein...

Main - ye kaise possible hai yaar ab..

Nurse1-again sir ye toh aapko he pata lagaana padega..

Main-Arrey maine toh lagaaliya pata..yahi toh bataane aaya tha main yahaan par bhai.. Sab pata laga chuka main ye toh bus confirmation k liye puch raha tha..

Nurse1-kya..???


Main-Lol beta tumhe kya lagta hai serial killer hoke tum bhagwaan banjaaoge Haan... Hahahahah...

Ye sun ab woh hue safed..

Main-Chaalaaki naa karna warna teeno ko thok dunga mujhe maalum Hai teeno murders tumne kiye hain...

Woh hue ab Pagal.. Unka munh rehgaya khulla kaa khulla..

Nurse1 - kya baat Kar rahe ho sir..

Main-Shyaana naa ban lawde rukk samjhaa deta hun.. Tera toh mereko first scene par he shakk hogaya tha.. Jab maine tere hathon par mitti dekhi thi.. Kyunki raatko jab tu murder kar raha tha tab andhere mein tune blood saaf toh kardiya jameen se lekin kuch chintein rehgaye.. Issliye jab subah tu scene par aaya toh tune woh dekhe ab baaki kissi ko maalum tha nahi ki wahaan kya hua tu saboot dekhraha tha kuch hai ki nahi.. Blood dikha tujhe toh tune sataak se woh mitti uthaai or fainkdi park ki side.. Then gloves daal liye tune.. But gloves mein tere hath visible hain or mujhe feel hogaya tha ki tere hath par mitti lagi thi.. Ab main 100% nahi tha issliye maine jaane diya tujhe naam pata maalum tha tera toh jaaega kahaan.. Baaki tumlog ko blood samples ne pakadwaa diya...

Main bolraha Tha toh unmein se ek ne meri side se ek chaaku ghopana caaha jo wahaan nimbu pyaaj kaatne k liye rakha tha unhone.. usse laga dhyaan nahi hoga lekin Bechaare ko kya maalum main thehra Kameena aadmi maine baithey-2 raaste mein he uska hath pakad liya or left hand se uski ribs mein diya punch jisase uski pakkad hui kamjor and maine right hand se chaaku liya or jhatke k sath uski khopdi mein ghonp diya kaan se thoda uppar bilkul dimag k andar.. Ye sab itana jaldi hua ki baaki 2 kuch samjh paatey usase pehle first waala chair se niche girr padda ye they tumhaare bhai k reflexes.. Ab woh dono khadey hone lage..

Main-Bc kam se kam theory sunletey puri dimag ghum jaata Gandu log..

Ab ye caahiye toh ye sahi.. 2nd k uthney se pehle he maine uski chair ko laat maari jisase woh niche ko girr gaya or main hua khadda.. First waala meri taraf aaya lekin aata usase pehle uske thodey par diya maine ek punch woh thoda piche ko hua then ek laat di uske pait mein jisase woh piche ko jaa girra table k uppar se.. Ab no 2nd banda tha woh khadda hochuka tha almost lekin bechaara kuch kar paata usase pehle maine uski goti par laat di woh bechaara fir ghutano par baith gaya or ab aaya mera favorite part jaise he woh ghutano par baitha maine uske thode par di laat juttey k toe end ki side se bhenchod itani powerful thi woh laat ki mera Jutta uske thobdey mein dhans gaya ho maano or uske force se woh piche girra... Yahaan takk ki mere juttey par khoon lag gaya tha.. Or ye koi kamjor bandey nahi they dono hattey kattey they.. Jo Marr chuka tha woh toh bhenchod 6 feet plus tha..

Main-Halwa hai kya Pagal hun jo akela aaunga sab pata hone k baad bhi.. Issiliye toh aaya hun main jaldi jaldi aao yahin insaaf hoga tumhaara aaj..

Abtak 1st uth chuka tha or uske hath mein tha ek fire extinguisher chota waala or jaise he main uski taraf mudda ussne mere munh par jamaa diya woh.. Kaafi badhiya laga thobdey par.. jabdaa hillgaya Saara.. Munh se blood thuka maine or jaise he woh dubara maarne laga maine usko piche ki taraf push kiya or piche woh chair k uppar imbalance hoke girra niche maine jhatak se uske hath se fire extinguisher liya or diya uske munh par lekin usne dono hathon se rouk liya lekin uske badle maine uske lawde par laat maari jisase uske hath aaye niche ki taraf or fir maine uske munh par jamaadiya woh fire extinguisher kaafi power se.. Woh bc palat gaya lagtey he lekin maine bina wait kiye he fire extinguisher jamaadiya uski khopadi mein.. Bhenchod khopadi khulgayi hogi uske munh se halki si sound nikali..jor se nikalti toh bhi iss floor par koi thaa nahi.. Ab woh dono niche paddey they..

Main-Toh Haan.. Ab suno I know tum Red John k sathi ho wagairaah wagairaah or tum kaafi experienced ho wagairaah wagairaah.. Tum usko dhoka nahi doge wagairaah wagairaah.. Lekin dekhlo Main tumhe woh de shakta hun jo redjohn nahi de paayega.. Kya maalum Hai? Jindagi..

Nurse 2-K.k.kabhi nahi.. Tum kabhi nahi pakad paaoge usse..

Main-Hahahaha.. Bhosdk likh k lele tere ko jaldi millega woh uppar..

Woh aage kuch bolta usase pehle maine pehle waale ki khopadi se woh chaaku nikaala jisse dekh woh second banda uth gaya or piche hatne laga lekin piche tehri deewar bhenchod aar paar toh Jaane se raha maine ek jhatke mein uske pait k andar pura kaa pura chaaku ghonp diya.. Bechaara bent hogaya... Maine chaaku ghumaaya woh chilaaya and then jhatke se nikaala usko chain Milla ek second k liye ki maine firse ghonpdiya... Woh bechaara apne ghutano par tha aankhon Mein Paani aagaya tha...

Maine usko khadda kiya ek hath se ussne mujhe dhakka maarna caaha but itani power kahaan bachi thi maine fir ghonpdiya chaaku then waapis bahaar then andar 7 baar stab kiya usko maine jabtak karta raha jabtak uski body ne saari harkatein bandh naa kardi or uske baad woh niche girra..


Ab bacha tha aakhiri banda uski khopdi se khoon behraha tha or woh khadda hone ki try kar raha tha lekin chot ki wajah se samjh naa paaraha tha kuch.. Ab maine chaaku nikaala or last bandey k saamne chair par baitha woh mere pairon mein niche baitha tha yaa padda tha aisa he kuch..

Main-Dekho uncle itani ummar ho chuki bahot hui Red John k khilaaf loyalty kabtak bachaaoge usko.. Bataado kon hai kahaan hai bus baaki main dekhlunga chalo kahaan Chhodo ye Bataado kon hai then jaao aaram se apno family k pass chill karo..

Nurse1-John he Mmm meri fammmfamily hai...

Main-ek baat maanani padegi bhenchod Red John k pass bandey bade loyal hain.. Chalo kuch toh Bataado...

Nurse1-ye jaanlo humaari mout se rukkega nahi woh humein toh marrna he hai or shaheed hone se behtar kya mout hogi..

Main-Jaa be lawde Saheed tere Munh se word takk naa acha lagta ye... Saheed woh hotey hain jinki life kaa moto he logon ki seva karna hai tere jaise gandu log nahi khaaya peeya logon ki jindagi barbaad ki huggdiya or firse repeat.. Saale gande naali k kiddey teri mout itani buri hogi ki next life mein bhi sapnon mein main he dikhunga..


Woh uthne laga lekin maine ek laat di uski gardan par woh fir niche girr padda..
Main-Tu toh killer hai chaaku se itane murders kiye hain Red John k liye, tujhe toh maalum he hoga sabse dangerous waar kahaan hota hai chaaku se jahaan sabse jyaada pain ho lekin death sabse jaldi...

Ispar woh kuch nahi bola lawda bolega bc..
Main - Main bataata hun yahaan ye neck haina teri yahaan se agar safaai se chaaku daala jaaye taaki bones bichmein naa aaein toh chaaku seedha spinal cord ko cut kardeta hai..99% chance hai immediately Marr jaaega banda lekin 1% chance hai ki puri body incapacitate hojaaegi bole toh paralyze hojaaegi or agle 60 seconds takk tujhe apni he Jaan apne andar se jaati hui mehsooh hogi..or tu kuch nahi kar paaega.. Most probably tera moot nikal jaaega apne aap highly chances tu hugg bhi dega.. Very Very painful..
tab kiya maine aakhiri waar uski gardan mein ghonpdiya chaaku piche se... Jaisa maine bataaya sabse mushkil kaam hota hai yahaan se chaaku daalna as bones k bich bahot Kam jagah hoti hai.. Lekin main thehra professional banda seedha ghonpdiya uski aankhein bahaar aagayi thi lagaalo... 99% chance waali baat bani woh turant munh k ball niche girra or nikal liya..
Main--It doesn't matter how a man dies, but how he lives. The act of dying is not of importance, it lasts so short a time Infact it's the process of death which is more painful then Death and life itself.And I have Given you one of most painful death ever. Rest in Peace bitch just wait a little and your friends are coming soon..

Haash ab milli shanti maano 3 dose leli hon Jester ki... Haash... Woh nasha he kuch or hai jo mujhe logon ki Jaan lene mein aata hai I fucking enjoy every single moment of it..
Main caahta toh team ko le aata arrest karwaaleta... Agar maarna hota toh thok bhi detey mere kehne se woh.. Lekin itani painful death kahaan milti inhe then main aisa mouka kyun Jaane dun.. I fucking love it..
Maine call kiya Abeer ko...
Abeer - Where the fuck are you..?
Main- Hospital second floor staff room 3.. Killer millgaye...
Abeer-wait what the fuck..? Pakad liya?
Main-pakad bhi liya or faisla bhi kardiya..
Abeer-kasam se?
Main-aake dekhle dimag naa khaa..

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Update-193(Investigation - 2)







Main fataak se utha fresh hua.. Kyun beta John jall gayi naa gand.. Itana Jaan gaya hun main John ko ki uske baare mein pehle he bataa deta hun.. Khair fresh hoke main nahaaya seconds mein kapdey change kiye then niche aaya toh Rishi Babhi or Meenu breakfast kar rahe they...
Babhi-Aaja breakfast karle..
Main-Time nahi hai.. Aap waala he dedo..
Babhi-bye..
Maine chalte chalte babhi ki plate or juice kaa glass uthaaya... Chaltey - 2 he jaldi se khaaya juice peeya and then glass or plate bc Olympics k maafik faink diye.. Gaadi Rishi ki saamne khaddi thi as woh Jaane waala Tha toh driver ne nikaal rakhi thi.. Maine usase chaabi lee usko dusari nikaalne ko bola... Anjali kaa message aagaya tha sabse pehle mujhe pass mein he Jaana tha.. 10 Minute mein scene par pohancha main.. Toh ye ek society thi middle class k log baag rehtey they... Ek kaafi choudi (Wide) galli thi jiske dono side ghar they or uss galli k ekdum corner par ek park tha or wahin gaadi mein ek laash thi.. Bheed kaafi thi local log and media wagairaah.. Lekin woh scene se durr they.. Police kaafi thi.. Bheed ko cheerta hua main aage aaya media mere pass aa paata usase pehle main scene par aagaya or media ko police ne roukk liya.. Wahaan par Deepak or Jiya they Incharge..
Jiya-Morning boss..
Main-Kya scene hai..
Jiya-52 saal ki lady hai boss
Main sun raha tha lekin bhenchod media orr logon kaa sound itana tha ki mera dimag ghum raha tha..
Main-Ek second Deepak in sabko or piche lejaao turant jo chappar chappar kare arrest karlo gaadi mein baithaao then chhod dena..
Deepak-ok boss...
Main-i can't fucking work like this.. Jiya continue..
Jiya- Retired school principal or filhaal ek Social Worker hai.. Kaafi naam tha city mein inka..yahin rehti hain ye saamne waala ghar unka he hai.. Ek beta hai and ek beti hai woh rahe dono.. Kal Raat late night Delhi se waapis aane waali thi subah dudh waale ne gaadi ki taraf dhyaan diya toh front mirror par khoon se John kaa emoji bana tha.. Ussne woh nishaan dekha pass se toh laash milli and sabko inform kiya ussne.. Woh raha dudh waala.. Forensics sahi time toh postmortem k baad he bataa paayenge lekin unke according subah 4 baje k aas pass he hua hai ye sab.. Koi cctv nahi hai ek tha Park mein jo 6 months se kharaab padda hai..
Main-OK.. Main start karta hun just make sure no one disturbs me..
Jiya-ok boss..
Main aage aaya toh forensic waale pictures wagairaah le rahe they..
Main-Out bhidulog..
Woh samjh gaye ek he baar mein or turant good morning bolke piche hatt gaye..
Scene ye tha front seat par dead body thi aunty ka galla kaata gaya tha or bahot he jyaada safaai se kaata gaya tha.. ek he waar mein woh bhi.. Yaani banda professional tha matlab bahot jyaada professional in short serial killer.. Khoon niche uske pairon takk aagaya tha front mirror par bada saa smiley face tha jo dhund k kaaran thoda saa feeka hogaya tha but still visible tha.. Jyaada time tha nahi maine usko dhangse dekha 30 second takk and scene samjh gaya.. Main gaadi se ek side mein aaya park ki taraf jahaan bahaar he fool wagairaah lage they...
Main-(chilaake) jiya...
Jiya bhaagti hui wahaan aai Deepak bhi aaya..
Main-Sabse close ghar ye inhi kaa haina...
Jiya-Haan ye ghar saamne waala..
Main-tum dono Ye ladka or ladki jahaan sotey hain wahaan jaao or main bolun tab reply Dena..jaldi..
Jiya-ok boss..
Woh dono uss ladke ko leke andar gaye ro ro k aakhein laal hogayi thi dono bhai behen ki..
Thodi der baad main uss corner par khadda hoke bola..
Main-Jiya.. Deepak...
Lekin koi reply nahi aaya.. Matlab awaaj nahi pohanchi Maine jiya ko call kiya or dono ko waapis bulaaya.. Wohlog aagaye waapis..
Jiya-Kya hua boss.. Awaaj he naa aaai thoda jorr se bolna tha..
Main-jor se he toh nahi bolna tha Got it .. Dekho hua kya tha.. Murder actually car mein nahi hua..
Jiya-Wait what..?
Main-Eigjactly.. Aunty ji yahaan aai raatko apne beta beti ko disturb nahi karna caahti thi sure dusri key hogi uske pass issliye gaadi se woh gate kholne k liye uttari thi lekin tabhi usse kuch awaaj sunaai di jo yahaan se aai hogi for sure.. Ab Aunty Bollywood movies ki tarah khud investigate karne idhar aai.. Or jaise he Woh idhar aai yahaan kuch Milla nahi kyunki banda yaa bandey yahaan inn jhaadiyon mein thaa yaa they most probably 2 they.. Or jaise he woh Jaane k liye muddi turant piche waala banda uske saamne aaya or Bam ek he waar mein galla cut awaaj nikali hogi ek baar jiss hissab se galla katta hai bus 2 words he nikale honge woh bhi itani awaaj mein "Hello" bus that's it.. Ussne apne dono hathon se galle ko dabaaya lekin koi faayda nahi tha blood nahi rukkne waala Tha...and bam death.. Ab uske baad unhone aunty ko uthaaya turant or car mein daala issliye jyaada blood car mein he hai..
Jiya-Lekin boss ye kaise maalum aapko ki usko yahaan maara hai yahaan toh thoda bahot blood bhi nahi hai..
Main-Kyunki beta blood waali mitti uthaali gayi hai yahaan se.kachi jameen hai ye . Dekho iss aunty k ghutnon par mitti lagi hain yaani jaise he uska galla katta woh ghutano par girri ye same mitti yahaan hai.. Then uski peeth dekho halki halki mitti lagi hai yaani ghutano k baad ye peeth k ball girri.. Ek or clue ye hai ki uske hontoh takk khoon jaa chuka hai seat par baithey baithey uppar ki taraf khoon kaise jaaega bhalla woh tabhi hoga jab woh niche girri ho..for sure khoon k chintey yahaan girre honge jyaada nahi but girre jarur they issiliye yahaan se dekho mitti uthaali gayi hai.. Alag he dikh raha hai..
Jiya-Haan yahaan se..
Main-Yep.. Kab, kaise marri hogaya clear kyun ye or clear karna hai.. Iski gaadi ki search karo main or Jiya ghar ki search karte hain..
Main Or Jiya andar aaye humein bus Aunty k room ki search karni thi.. Kaafi bada room tha main or Jiya dono lage kaam par...
Kaafi cash or kuch samaan Milla wahaan..uska phone niche gaadi mein tha lock tha usme bete ko maalum tha... woh open kiya usme kuch Khaas tha nahi..
Main-ek kaam karo reason teeno murders investigate karke dhundunga ek baar teeno ko investigate karlun.. Kyunki jitana late hounga utana log badhenge baaki jagah or most probably wohlog ek aadh koi saboot hoga toh usse waise kharaab kardenge..
Jiya-OK ok..

Main-Bus formality k liye uss dudh waale se sawaal jawaab karna woh nahi hoga for sure shakal se he naa lagraha woh..
Jiya-Boss body hatwaadun ab?.
Main-Yep..
Jiya ne medical team ko bulaaya wahaan..



Main - ... Jiya I am done here next case par jaaraha hun main...


Jiya-OK boss..

Main wahaan se gaadi mein aaya chang ko Message karke scene bataaya ki kaise aaj 3 murder hue hain karke...then pohanchna main second scene par..




Kya se kya ho gaya lawde tere kand mein RJ beta tu toh gaya AP pure mood mein hai aaj toh waise maza aaya padh kar dekho kya milta hai dusre murder mein
 
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Update-194(I Am Insanely Fast)





Next scene ek kasba tha like city or village kaa mixture.. City k bilkul outside padta hai ye.. 8 baj gaye they... Yahaan utani bheed nahi thi as gaon waale darr k maare durr he rehtey hain.. Keval media he tha.. Yahaan Incharge Anjali thi or Uske alaawa Abeer Ami or Pooja wahaan they...

Ek ghar tha medium type single floor tha gate par 2 hawaldar they baaki police waale media ko ek side kar rahe they.. Main andar enter hua toh Anjali and baaki sab udhar he they.. Andar 2 room they ek bathroom and ek kitchen..or unhi mein se ek room k bed par laash thi galla kaata gaya tha bilkul same to same ussi tarah jiss tarah se us aunty kaa kaata gaya tha or bed k uppar deewar par smiley face tha.. 45-50 ki age thi uncle ki..


Anjali-oh hey.. Welcome..

Main - Kya scene hai..

Anjali - Gaon k doctor they ye akele rehtey they wife Marr chuki hai beta hai ek Chennai mein inform kardiya Hai usko.. Kaam waali bai subah aai or gate nahi khola uncle ne kaafi derr toh gaon waalon ko bulaaya gate toda toh andar uncle ki laash thi.. .. 4.30 baje k aas pass hua hai forensics k according..


Main Laga uncle ko dekhne .. 1 minute baad aagaya conclusion par..

Main - Uncle nind ki goli khaata tha... Nind mein he tapak gaya uppar samjh mein bhi naa aaega Marra kaise tha.. 5"10-5"11 ki height hogi killer ki jiss type se ghaav hai and upar jiss height par ye smiley face chaapa hai woh dekh k clear hai.. Jyaada tagda banda nahi tha kyunki sotey hue bhi itana gehra waar nahi kiya gaya lekin professional tha for sure again it means serial killer...Left handed tha.. Woh khidki se bahaar gaya hoga surely as gate andar se bandh tha.. Pehle bahaar se lock open kiya andar aaye kaam kiya then gate lock Kiya andar se and bam khidki se waapis bahaar...

Pooja - Ok ok you are fast I see..

Anjali-boss we have something..

Main-kya..?

Anjali-As most probably ye ek he bandey kaa kaam Hai issliye maine Blood samples bhijwa diye they pehle he lab mein.. Or mera shakk sahi nikala kyunki uncle k galle par ek or blood sample mille hain jo uss Aunty k hain.. Yaani isse same ussi chaaku se maara gaya hai jisase aunty ko maara gaya tha..

Main-No fucking way..

Anjali-It's true blood match hogaya hai aunty se...

Main-Ek second first killers alag alag hain dono k aunty waala killer itana lamba nahi tha lekin ho shakta Hai 1 se jyaada bandey hon..Lekin fir bhi 4 baje aunty marri 4.30 baje ye 30 minute mein aunty ko maara uski laash gaadi mein daali then wahaan painting banaai or yahaan aake gate kaa lock open kiya and uncle ko maar bhi diya no fucking way.. Main Jaguar mein aaya hun or mujhe 19 minutes yahaan pohanchey mein lag gaye wahaan se.. Traffic bhi nahi tha..no fucking way..

Anjali - maybe first scene par 2 bandey ho or smiley banaane k liye banda ek wahaan rukka ho then ek banda yahaan lock pick kar raha ho.. Taaki jaise he woh second banda yahaan aae woh ready rahe..

Main-maybe ho shakta Hai. Abeer..

Abeer-Yo..

Main-Yahaan se wahaan jaa or waapis full speed mein aana jitana tejj ho shake utana..marrega nahi airbags hain he.. Bus kissi ko kuchalna nahi..

Abeer-bitch I am far better driver then you.. Ami aatoh..

Abeer or Ami nikal gaye..

Main-Ghar Ki Talaash I lee??

Anjali-Ek room baaki hai bus..

Main-aajao toh laash hatwaado dekhliya maine...

Humlog uss room mein aaye toh ek old almiraah thi wahaan.. Uska lock toda toh kapde wagairaah uski wife k gehney bc puraane model k.. Uske alaawa Rupaaye they.. Gaon kaa doctor tha toh patient cash he detey honge..

Main-Ok thanks next jagah jaaraha hun main.. Saara kuch likho ek file mein and pohancho station.. Motive teeno kaa ek sath dhundenge..

Anjali-ok boss..

Main bahaar aaya gaadi mein baitha and then pohanchna last crime scene par... Government quarters they yahaan par sab city k bichon bich mojjud thi ye jagah.. Yahaan bhi kuch log idhar udhar faile they relatives wagairaah bhi aachuke they shayad rona dhona chal raha tha ek aadh lady kaa.. Main uss ghar mein aaya toh Andar Rajat Ajay Priyanka Mangal they... 2bhk ghar tha ye bhi or hall mein sofa par ek aadmi ki laash thi.. 45-50 iski ummar rahi hogi.. Same galla kaata gaya tha or bc ye bhi ekdum same waise he jaise pichli 2 scenes par tha.. TV tha saamne uske uppar smiley face bana tha..

Main-Pehle toh insabko bahaar nikaalo..

Ajay- inki behan hai boss..

Main-I don't care.. Rona dhona bahaar... Sabko nikaalo..

Aurat- ab ro bhi nahi shakti main mere bhai ki mout par ek toh kabse laash ko yun rakha hai tumlogon ne kuch kar nahi rahe...

Main-Aunty out... Leke jaao re isko..

Aurat-How dare you talk to me like that..

Main-Get out aunty..

Ajay usko or ikka dukka jo andar they sabko bahaar legaya...

Rajat - Headmaster hai bhai divorced akela rehta hai.. Raatko ye exam papers check kar raha tha or shayad yahin so gaya ye piche waali khidki open thi yahaan se aae honge woh or bhaisahaab ki aankh seedhi uppar he khulli hogi..

Main-Bhenchod kehna padega kaafi practice ki hogi maarne waalon ne sabko same cut diya hai bc..

Mangal-Same he banda hoga men..


Main-Naa bc ye dekh iss bandey kaa angle dekh yun bhenchod right hand se maara hoga.. 6"2 ki height rahi hogi bc easily. Last killer chota tha or left handed tha..

Mangal - Woh naa maalum lekin Anjali ne bataaya ki last body par blood samples mille hain toh iske samples bhi legaye they and guess what isski Gardan par un dono k blood samples mille hain...

Main-What the fuck? No fucking way.. Ispar bhi..

Mangal-Haan..


Main-Bhenchod aisa kya chala rahe they wohlog Rocket??? Itana jaldi or itani safaai se kaam Kar rahe they bc darrne waali baat hai ye toh.


Mangal-Yep..

Ajay - Boss woh aunty media k saamne aapko sunaa rahi hai..

Main-Chhod gand marwaae I don't care.. Ek kaam karo yahaan kaa scene niptaao or Saara kuch detail mein note karo and mereko station mein millo.. Forensics ko bolo jaldi se jaldi report aani caahiye... Time kya tha, blood samples kaa kya Scene tha... Wagairaah wagairaah...

Main wahaan se bahaar aaya toh media waale aaye lekin constables ne durr he roukk liya or main nikala gaadi mein.. Insab mein time lagne waala Tha issliye 2 ghantey toh maine teeno crime scenes k chakkar kaatey gaadi mein full speed saare shortcuts dekhe ki kaise wohlog itani jaldi pohanchey honge... Driving skills increase hogaye lekin kuch sujha nahi bhenchod ab jarurat thi thodi outside help ki..main haweli aaya 12 baje k aas pass lunch kiya and then room mein aaya Chang kaa bacha hua jester nikaala and bam last dose andar...Ab ye aai bahaar se help... Ab maine time waste nahi kiya 10 Minute mein main waapis nikal gaya kyunki 3no postmortem reports aagayi thi or sab files ready thi ab sabkaa motive dhundana tha..

Police station k Meeting Room Mein filhaal Anjali or baaki team, Abeer, Mangal, Ami or Priyanka.. And FIA waale sab mojjud they or mera he wait kar rahe they..

Main aake apni jagah par baitha..

Main-let's go guys.. Start se suru karo jaldi jaldi sab Bataado.. 1st murder, Jiya..

Jiya-Boss Time of death 4.00 am sahi kaha aapne death car k andar nahi hui thi bahaar hui thi body ko move kiya gaya tha..koi fingerprints nahi shayad gloves use kiye they... Ye Aunty ki file hai puri past present and future ki..

Jiya ne mujhe file di..

Main-Next..

Anjali-Time of death 4.30 am se ek do minutes uppar niche ..sahi kaha tha tumne killer lefty tha or medium built personality rahi hogi.. Nind ki goliyaan Lee thi unhone.. Blood Samples jaisa maine bola wahi hai uske uppar wahi chaaku use kiya gaya hoga jisase first murder hua tha kyunki Uncle k wound mein first lady k blood k samples Mille hain thode bahot..

Main - Yahi baat khaaye jaarahi hai mujhe..

Anjali-Ye rahi uss bandey ki saari details..

Main-Next..

Rajat - time of death 5.05 am approximately.. Baaki Sab jaisa aapne bataaya murderer k baare mein woh lagbhag theek hai.. Or yahaan bhi iske wound mein Pichle dono k blood k samples Mille hain bahot he kam lekin Mille jarur hain.. Ye rahi details..

Main-What the fuck.. So guys i need complete silence..

Sabse pehle toh teeno kaa connection dhundana tha mereko.. Common dekhtey hain kya hai teeno mein.. Maine teeno files sath kholi sab ghurra.. Bc processing jester ki wajah se itani tejj thi ki abhi thoda feel horaha tha mere pass brain hai.. Or uski wajah se 5 minute mein maine connection dhund liya.. Lol bhenchod majaak banaadiya case kaa..

Main-got it..

Sab-What the hell???

Mangal-Bc itani jaldi..

Main-Time pass nahi suno.. Pehle bataata hun connection teeno kaa.. Connection hai school.. Yaani woh aunty jiss school se retired haina 3rd banda ussi school kaa headmaster hai filhaal.. Or woh school ussi kasbe mein Hai jisme apne second victim woh doctor sahaab rehtey hain..

Anjali-Oh my god its true...

Main-It is.. Ab ye toh hua connection ab suno marrne ki wajah...


Main-Sabse pehle toh ye Corrupt they teeno.. Or ek he kand mein corrupt they..


Jiya-How..?


Main - Jiss government school ki baat haina usase bahot paisa khaaya hai inhone.. Pehle woh lady principal thi ab ye banda headmaster hai.. Government students ko jo free dresses, bags, cycles, computers wagairaah other accessories provide karti hai un sabmein se paisa khaate they ye dono .. Ye Serial killer k liye kaafi nahi hai sabse main ye suno even Government mid day meal provide karti hai Usmein bhi yelog ghotala kartey they jiss kaaran low quality kaa Khaana students ko milta hai..Or more shocking Uss Current principal k sath affair bhi hai iska..


Deepak-Ye aapko kaise pata..


Main-Phone mein last search thi aunty ki uss school k bache hospital mein pohanchey hain kharaab Khaane ki wajah se.. Then ye Delhi gayi he nahi Delhi gayi thi toh toll tax ki slip kahaan hai online transaction thi toh phone mein message kahaan hai.ye uss principal k sath he thi Kal Raat kyunki Aunty k room mein mujhe aunty ko handwriting milli thi wahi same hand writing uss headmaster k exams par thi...then phone mein uss principal ko code words mein message bhejein hain issne ki ab kya karein wagairaah wagairaah mera Naam toh nahi aaega wagairaah wagairaah jo kaafi hai isse School scam se joddne k liye..yaani ye raatko Delhi se nahi uss principal k yahaan se ghar gayi thi. Then bc iski pension bank mein direct aati hogi toh itana cash kiss kaam kaa.. Or cash bhi like 2-3 months se padda hai uss almiraah mein condition se saaf dikhraha hai.. Ye tha inke marrne kaa raaj.. Koi bhi thodi bahot investigation karta toh pakkad leta ye..


Jiya-Oh my god.. You are insane..

Main-Yes i am..


Anjali-Lekin uss doctor kaa kya..

Main-Arey Haan un doctor bhaisahaab ne un bachon kaa first checkup kiya tha jab woh bimaar hone lage or uss current headmaster ne isse paise khilaae taaki ye suru mein real reason bataaye he naa bus normal pait Dard ki dawaai dedey.. Issiliye bache ghar baithey baithey or bimaar hogaye or last mein unhe hospital mein admit karwaayaa gaya.. 2 bache marre bhi they.. Naam aagaya unki gareeb families kaa ki woh Khaane mein gandagi parostey hain..lol...or ye teeno bachgaye.. Chota sa scam tha but 2 bachon ki jaan legaya or kuch abhi bhi hospital mein Hain.. Yahi tha reason maine 5 minute mein jodd liya teeno ko.. killers toh pata nahi kabse research kar rahe honge..

Sab-Holy fuck..

Anjali-You are getting faster day by day..

Main--oh you have no idea honey.. Ab killer ko dhundein firr??

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Bhai you r insane men kya se kya soch liya yrr bahot hi jabardast mere ko laga personal dusmani hogi yeh socha tha maine yaha toh government scam ka scean hai ab dekho kya hota hai killer ko kaise pakadate hai humare AP 1.5 reading 3rd update
 
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Kaise marre pata karliya tha maine, kab marre woh bhi clear tha, Motive bhi clear kardiya tha maine.. Connection bhi teeno kaa clear kardiya tha 50% kaam done hogaya tha ab bacha tha baaki 50% or sabse tough kaam yaani killers ko dhundana.. Yahaan main thoda saa atak gaya.. Ye bhenchod theory samjh nahi aai ki itani jaldi kaise woh next jagah pohanch gaye.. I mean impossible nahi tha ye karna lekin still mera dimag belive nahi kar raha tha or Agar mera dimag belive nahi kar raha toh iska matlab gadbad hai beta..

Filhaal main akela Anjali k cabin mein baitha equations Banaa raha tha new new theories create kar raha tha even ek theory mein toh main khud killer bangaya tha lekin still dikkat aarahi thi.. Mera dimag mujhe khudpar bojh lag raha tha itana kaafi nahi tha mujhe full mind control caahiye.. Main Paagal horaha tha.. Ye sab total 15 minutes kaa kaam Tha agar main fully ready hota toh.. Bloods, samples, deaths, scam, serial killers, time of death.. Oh my fucking God.. Holy fucking shit.. Fuckkkkk.... Clear... Ahahahaha ahah.. Ab mere sawaal k jawaab forensics waalon se lene they mereko... Bus fir case solve tha.. Bhenchod even my slower version is faster then AP's faster version and that's A fact.. Aahahahah I am god..

Main bhaagke bina kissi ko bataaye niche aaya gaadi mein baitha or pohancha seedha hospital.. Wahaan se aaya postmortem wing mein.. Wahaan Reception par pucha doctors k baare mein toh pata chala lunch time hai toh lunch kar rahe hain wohlog.. Staff room kaa adress bataaya ussne or main aaya uppar ek corner mein tha woh room.. Maine knock kiya toh andar se awaaj aai khulla hai.. Main andar enter hua toh andar 3 male nurse baithey they or lunch kar rahe they.. Yelog humaari he team mein se they jo aaj teeno crime scenes par thi..

Main-Hi guys..

Nurse1-hello sir.. How can we help you..

Main-Actually main doctors ko dhund raha hu jinhone aaj postmortem kiya tha..

Nurse 1-Oh Dr Kundan or Dr Rathi dono he lunch k liye gaye hain sir.. 1 ghantey takk aajaaenge.. Kuch kaam tha aapko?

Main-Haan kuch questions they.. Tumlog bhi toh hoge postmortem k time tumlog se puch shakta hun..?

Nurse1-sure sir.. Hum teeno he mojjud they teeno postmortems mein..

Main-Perfect..

Main andar aaya or unke sath baith gaya..

Nurse1-khaana loge sir..?

Main-bus tum khaao bhai jyaada time nahi lunga.. So first..? Kya tum sure ho ki 2nd or 3rd dead body par baaki k blood samples mille hain..

Nurse1-Ji sir doctors ne Confirm kardiya tha ye toh..

Main-lekin how is this even possible ye ho kaise shakta Hai..

Nurse1-Woh toh Sir aapko he pata lagaana padega humaara kaam toh hogaya..

Main-Oh Haan sure.. Next question itani safaai se cut they teeno k teeno toh kya teeno he ek he waar mein cut kiye gaye they..

Nurse1-Ji sir kaafi professionalism tha cuts mein...

Main - ye kaise possible hai yaar ab..

Nurse1-again sir ye toh aapko he pata lagaana padega..

Main-Arrey maine toh lagaaliya pata..yahi toh bataane aaya tha main yahaan par bhai.. Sab pata laga chuka main ye toh bus confirmation k liye puch raha tha..

Nurse1-kya..???


Main-Lol beta tumhe kya lagta hai serial killer hoke tum bhagwaan banjaaoge Haan... Hahahahah...

Ye sun ab woh hue safed..

Main-Chaalaaki naa karna warna teeno ko thok dunga mujhe maalum Hai teeno murders tumne kiye hain...

Woh hue ab Pagal.. Unka munh rehgaya khulla kaa khulla..

Nurse1 - kya baat Kar rahe ho sir..

Main-Shyaana naa ban lawde rukk samjhaa deta hun.. Tera toh mereko first scene par he shakk hogaya tha.. Jab maine tere hathon par mitti dekhi thi.. Kyunki raatko jab tu murder kar raha tha tab andhere mein tune blood saaf toh kardiya jameen se lekin kuch chintein rehgaye.. Issliye jab subah tu scene par aaya toh tune woh dekhe ab baaki kissi ko maalum tha nahi ki wahaan kya hua tu saboot dekhraha tha kuch hai ki nahi.. Blood dikha tujhe toh tune sataak se woh mitti uthaai or fainkdi park ki side.. Then gloves daal liye tune.. But gloves mein tere hath visible hain or mujhe feel hogaya tha ki tere hath par mitti lagi thi.. Ab main 100% nahi tha issliye maine jaane diya tujhe naam pata maalum tha tera toh jaaega kahaan.. Baaki tumlog ko blood samples ne pakadwaa diya...

Main bolraha Tha toh unmein se ek ne meri side se ek chaaku ghopana caaha jo wahaan nimbu pyaaj kaatne k liye rakha tha unhone.. usse laga dhyaan nahi hoga lekin Bechaare ko kya maalum main thehra Kameena aadmi maine baithey-2 raaste mein he uska hath pakad liya or left hand se uski ribs mein diya punch jisase uski pakkad hui kamjor and maine right hand se chaaku liya or jhatke k sath uski khopdi mein ghonp diya kaan se thoda uppar bilkul dimag k andar.. Ye sab itana jaldi hua ki baaki 2 kuch samjh paatey usase pehle first waala chair se niche girr padda ye they tumhaare bhai k reflexes.. Ab woh dono khadey hone lage..

Main-Bc kam se kam theory sunletey puri dimag ghum jaata Gandu log..

Ab ye caahiye toh ye sahi.. 2nd k uthney se pehle he maine uski chair ko laat maari jisase woh niche ko girr gaya or main hua khadda.. First waala meri taraf aaya lekin aata usase pehle uske thodey par diya maine ek punch woh thoda piche ko hua then ek laat di uske pait mein jisase woh piche ko jaa girra table k uppar se.. Ab no 2nd banda tha woh khadda hochuka tha almost lekin bechaara kuch kar paata usase pehle maine uski goti par laat di woh bechaara fir ghutano par baith gaya or ab aaya mera favorite part jaise he woh ghutano par baitha maine uske thode par di laat juttey k toe end ki side se bhenchod itani powerful thi woh laat ki mera Jutta uske thobdey mein dhans gaya ho maano or uske force se woh piche girra... Yahaan takk ki mere juttey par khoon lag gaya tha.. Or ye koi kamjor bandey nahi they dono hattey kattey they.. Jo Marr chuka tha woh toh bhenchod 6 feet plus tha..

Main-Halwa hai kya Pagal hun jo akela aaunga sab pata hone k baad bhi.. Issiliye toh aaya hun main jaldi jaldi aao yahin insaaf hoga tumhaara aaj..

Abtak 1st uth chuka tha or uske hath mein tha ek fire extinguisher chota waala or jaise he main uski taraf mudda ussne mere munh par jamaa diya woh.. Kaafi badhiya laga thobdey par.. jabdaa hillgaya Saara.. Munh se blood thuka maine or jaise he woh dubara maarne laga maine usko piche ki taraf push kiya or piche woh chair k uppar imbalance hoke girra niche maine jhatak se uske hath se fire extinguisher liya or diya uske munh par lekin usne dono hathon se rouk liya lekin uske badle maine uske lawde par laat maari jisase uske hath aaye niche ki taraf or fir maine uske munh par jamaadiya woh fire extinguisher kaafi power se.. Woh bc palat gaya lagtey he lekin maine bina wait kiye he fire extinguisher jamaadiya uski khopadi mein.. Bhenchod khopadi khulgayi hogi uske munh se halki si sound nikali..jor se nikalti toh bhi iss floor par koi thaa nahi.. Ab woh dono niche paddey they..

Main-Toh Haan.. Ab suno I know tum Red John k sathi ho wagairaah wagairaah or tum kaafi experienced ho wagairaah wagairaah.. Tum usko dhoka nahi doge wagairaah wagairaah.. Lekin dekhlo Main tumhe woh de shakta hun jo redjohn nahi de paayega.. Kya maalum Hai? Jindagi..

Nurse 2-K.k.kabhi nahi.. Tum kabhi nahi pakad paaoge usse..

Main-Hahahaha.. Bhosdk likh k lele tere ko jaldi millega woh uppar..

Woh aage kuch bolta usase pehle maine pehle waale ki khopadi se woh chaaku nikaala jisse dekh woh second banda uth gaya or piche hatne laga lekin piche tehri deewar bhenchod aar paar toh Jaane se raha maine ek jhatke mein uske pait k andar pura kaa pura chaaku ghonp diya.. Bechaara bent hogaya... Maine chaaku ghumaaya woh chilaaya and then jhatke se nikaala usko chain Milla ek second k liye ki maine firse ghonpdiya... Woh bechaara apne ghutano par tha aankhon Mein Paani aagaya tha...

Maine usko khadda kiya ek hath se ussne mujhe dhakka maarna caaha but itani power kahaan bachi thi maine fir ghonpdiya chaaku then waapis bahaar then andar 7 baar stab kiya usko maine jabtak karta raha jabtak uski body ne saari harkatein bandh naa kardi or uske baad woh niche girra..


Ab bacha tha aakhiri banda uski khopdi se khoon behraha tha or woh khadda hone ki try kar raha tha lekin chot ki wajah se samjh naa paaraha tha kuch.. Ab maine chaaku nikaala or last bandey k saamne chair par baitha woh mere pairon mein niche baitha tha yaa padda tha aisa he kuch..

Main-Dekho uncle itani ummar ho chuki bahot hui Red John k khilaaf loyalty kabtak bachaaoge usko.. Bataado kon hai kahaan hai bus baaki main dekhlunga chalo kahaan Chhodo ye Bataado kon hai then jaao aaram se apno family k pass chill karo..

Nurse1-John he Mmm meri fammmfamily hai...

Main-ek baat maanani padegi bhenchod Red John k pass bandey bade loyal hain.. Chalo kuch toh Bataado...

Nurse1-ye jaanlo humaari mout se rukkega nahi woh humein toh marrna he hai or shaheed hone se behtar kya mout hogi..

Main-Jaa be lawde Saheed tere Munh se word takk naa acha lagta ye... Saheed woh hotey hain jinki life kaa moto he logon ki seva karna hai tere jaise gandu log nahi khaaya peeya logon ki jindagi barbaad ki huggdiya or firse repeat.. Saale gande naali k kiddey teri mout itani buri hogi ki next life mein bhi sapnon mein main he dikhunga..


Woh uthne laga lekin maine ek laat di uski gardan par woh fir niche girr padda..
Main-Tu toh killer hai chaaku se itane murders kiye hain Red John k liye, tujhe toh maalum he hoga sabse dangerous waar kahaan hota hai chaaku se jahaan sabse jyaada pain ho lekin death sabse jaldi...

Ispar woh kuch nahi bola lawda bolega bc..
Main - Main bataata hun yahaan ye neck haina teri yahaan se agar safaai se chaaku daala jaaye taaki bones bichmein naa aaein toh chaaku seedha spinal cord ko cut kardeta hai..99% chance hai immediately Marr jaaega banda lekin 1% chance hai ki puri body incapacitate hojaaegi bole toh paralyze hojaaegi or agle 60 seconds takk tujhe apni he Jaan apne andar se jaati hui mehsooh hogi..or tu kuch nahi kar paaega.. Most probably tera moot nikal jaaega apne aap highly chances tu hugg bhi dega.. Very Very painful..
tab kiya maine aakhiri waar uski gardan mein ghonpdiya chaaku piche se... Jaisa maine bataaya sabse mushkil kaam hota hai yahaan se chaaku daalna as bones k bich bahot Kam jagah hoti hai.. Lekin main thehra professional banda seedha ghonpdiya uski aankhein bahaar aagayi thi lagaalo... 99% chance waali baat bani woh turant munh k ball niche girra or nikal liya..
Main--It doesn't matter how a man dies, but how he lives. The act of dying is not of importance, it lasts so short a time Infact it's the process of death which is more painful then Death and life itself.And I have Given you one of most painful death ever. Rest in Peace bitch just wait a little and your friends are coming soon..

Haash ab milli shanti maano 3 dose leli hon Jester ki... Haash... Woh nasha he kuch or hai jo mujhe logon ki Jaan lene mein aata hai I fucking enjoy every single moment of it..
Main caahta toh team ko le aata arrest karwaaleta... Agar maarna hota toh thok bhi detey mere kehne se woh.. Lekin itani painful death kahaan milti inhe then main aisa mouka kyun Jaane dun.. I fucking love it..
Maine call kiya Abeer ko...
Abeer - Where the fuck are you..?
Main- Hospital second floor staff room 3.. Killer millgaye...
Abeer-wait what the fuck..? Pakad liya?
Main-pakad bhi liya or faisla bhi kardiya..
Abeer-kasam se?
Main-aake dekhle dimag naa khaa..

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Kya maara hai ek dum kadak maza aa gaya bhidu padh kar update aaj ke toh

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