Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - All Hell Broke Loose (Completed)

[aks 21]

Bohot hi sandaar jabardast updates bhai......ab to story jonh wick type lagne laga hai padhne me......awesome going bhai

 

[Raj Shah Playboy]

Are bhai kya update diya hein bole toh ekdum jakkaas,
Dialog toh ese hein jese imraan hasmi ki kiss GAJAB,
Arvind ki toh lag jaani hein bethey bethey,
Keerti ke jaath ke baal sulag jaayenge,
Bole toh EK NUMBER BOHAT HARD.....!
WAITING FOR NEXT......

 

[Tripuri chakraborty]

Shandar update bro

 

[Tahirtahir111]

Boht Zabardast update

 

[Pagal pathan]

Nice update Kia likhte ho yar zabardast ye Mera fast reply ha is forum par nice AP main xossip par bhi ye storey red karta tha wo band howa tu yaha red ki I love it your writing skills well-done

 

[Jerry]

Waiting bhai

 

[AP 316]

Nice

Gajab

Arvind ki to gandiya faad di hai

Zabardast......sabki fatti hai AP k naam se hi...ab tera kya hoga kaliya so called Arvind.....

Nice update

How I think you have also decided name of part 3 Merchant of death

BAhoot haad bhaiyyagi

Wow mind blowing bro

Jhakash

Nice update

Super mind blowing update bhai

Seems like Aravind granted his own death wish

superb upadte waiting for next

AP bidu AAG Laga di Adbhut prashansniya.

jeee baat bhai isko bolte sexiest update of the week.. Morning main breakfast k saath bas aisa update chahiye hota hai yar.. Loved it man Loved it

Ab jhon ki mouth ke pehla aur ek agaya AP sa marna keliya

Nice update bhaii bhot awala maza aya giea bhaiii ab new upbate ka intazar ha

Awesome AP bro....

Bhai fir adhura chhod diya scene.

Ye scene 5 updates kaa hai bhai aise thodi ek he din mein dedunga sab updates fir suspense kya rahega or thrill kya rahega aise toh fir 5 din mein story khatam agar aise scenes ek he baar mein complete kardunga toh fir kya padhohe sabka dhyaan rakhna padta hai bhidu...keep Supporting bhai Chinturocky

Bhai u r awsm .... Kya likhte ho ...

Thanks Guys for all the love and support keep supporting as always..

 

[AP 316]

Zabardast update

Great update bhai

Great Going AP bhai

Superb mind blowing update..

Superb update but incomplete

super update hai bhai

Verry nice update bhai aur kya line thi main bat nahi samne vale ki kahani khatam karta hun maza gaya bhai story padh ke

AP ko sambhal ne ki baat kar raha tha

Ab sawal ye hain ki arvind ko 4 call karne ke lite konsi kimat chukani padegi jo bhi kimat ho uski buri taray phatne vali hain

Awesome superb ? miracle update bro

Awesomeupdate
Just amazing
Waiting for next update
कुछ तो हवा भी सर्द थी कुछ था तेरा ख़याल भी,दिल को ख़ुशी के साथ साथ होता रहा मलाल भी।

शीशा तो टूट कर अपनी कशिश बता देता है,दर्द तो उस पत्थर का हैं, जो टुटने के काबिल भी नही।

वो इश्क़ ही क्या जो किसी के चेहरे से हो,मज़ा तो तब है जब इश्क़ किसी के बातो से हो।

Toooooooo good toooo much goood

Nice update

The Marcent Of Death...and at the end of the day I am AP ... it's the last word everyone should remember.... Fabulous Fabulous Fabulous

Nice AP waiting for more updates

Yeh kia tha bhai isne tow sab ki ma behen ker di gajab bhai gajab excellent mind blowing update
Keep posting
Thanks for lovely update brother

Bohot hi sandaar jabardast updates bhai......ab to story jonh wick type lagne laga hai padhne me......awesome going bhai

Shandar update bro

Boht Zabardast update

Thanks guys for all the reviews you guys are the best keep supporting..

 

[AP 316]

Update hamesha ki tarah tha ek dam awesome lakin aajkal last lines kuch jyada badhiya likh rahe ho

Ye 3 call wala system bhi gazab bakchodi thi arvind ki gandiya fat gai ek dam aur 4th call jo AP ne bola tha mahngi padegi wahi fekhna hai kitni mahngi padti hai ab

last lines mein aajkal bhaavnein badh jaa rahi hain bhai JK.. Keep supporting Genius

Bhai is update ka to title hi kamal ka tha

Aur sach me Arvind devil se hi deal kar raha tha sale ko pata nahi tha ki AP hai kya chij use to AP ka matlab ya fir AP hai kya aur kya kya kar sakta hai hault ne bakhubi bata diya

Ab Arvind ke sath kya ho sakta hai ye to sirf upar wala hi bata sakta hai ya fir khud AP

Wel fantastic update bhai maza aa gaya
Waiting for the next update

Koi naa Ab samjh jaaega Arvind AP hai kya cheej keep supporting bhidu Rajesh

R.I.P Arvind... Beshak iske baad to yahi haal hona hai...
Dude I got the goosebumps dost to dost dushman bhi taarif krte hai bande ki insane...

Waiting for next...

thanks bhai Naughty Lover

BC neend mai padh rha tha update aur dialogue padh kar neend hi udd gayi BC

kya mast scene chla bhai literally ARVIND ki keh ke li hai BC aur bahut gehrai takk maari hai BC

ARVIND ki literally phat ke chaar ho gyi hai aur BHAI kya tareeke se phati hai BC gajab hai vo toh
DUSHMAN hi agar DUSHMAN ki tarref kare toh samjh lo BHAI ki level kya hai bande ka aur upper se abhi AP ne HAULT ko dushman nhi maana hai kyunki vo bass achi khasi story ke flow mai bakchodi karke apni mout ko davat de gaye hain so let's see kaisi mout milti hai inn hutado ko

ab just think ARVIND ki kaise li jayegi kyunki MARTIN aur KREETI dono mai se koi bhi kuch nhi kar skta aur pehle bhi nhi kar skte they aur upper se agar dekha jaye toh AP ke pass 2 chance hai like pehle ARVIND 3 phone calls vaali shart haara hai aur ab yeh 4th phone call ki keemat
aur agar overall dekha jaye toh AP jaise chahen vaisa karskta hai ARVIND ke sath aur vo kuch bhi nahi kar skta
matlab ARVIND ki bahut buri tarike se gaand phati hai literally bahut buri tarike se aur DELHI ke HC ka HQ toh gya uske hath se but let's see ki AP ne uske liye kya socha hai

KEEP WRITING
KEEP UPDATING

YOUR REGULAR READER
...MATHUR

thanks for the wonderful review Mathur bhai keep supporting as always dekhtey hain kitani sahi hai Tumhaari theory.

Well well well..
The merchant of death.
This line has another level of savage..

after this I'm imagining the his death
And also the Redjhon.
Kitna jda brutal hoga wo agr ye hai to..
That was fucking insane..
Awesome update as always
Keep going..

Brutality toh hogi aage for sure hogi bhai.. Keep supporting Macantastic

Awesome really dammm seems same like gadla trick used lol 3 phone call haha. AP is Merchant of Death.
Hault is scared and out at safe house wow lol really arvid sucks usako ab pata chalega AP Kon hai and keerti aur Martin to jaise unako to pahale hi mar diya ho aisa lag raha tha wo bol hi nahi rahe the as they afraid of AP.

WHAT UPDATE 30 bar read kar chuka hu dialogues lol jo hault ne explanation diya hai wah gazab mind glowing.

Waiting for next update bro

Dekhate hai age kya hoga Arvind ka haha I will say hoga wahi jo manjure AP hoga

thanks Jay bhai for this wonderful review Sexy boy keep supporting

HELLO AP BROTHER...

YE UPDATE ABHI TAK PADHI TUMHARI STORY KA SABSE BEST, AWESOME UPDATE HAI.... MAIN KHUD KO COMMENT KARANE SE ROK NAHI PAYA ....

STORY BAHUT HI MAST JA RAHI HAI BRO....

AWESOME...

IS STORY KO PAD KAR EK ALAG HI FELLING AATI HAI, LIKE A DEVIL LIVE WITH PEOPLE... AND IT'S INSANE...
KEEP UPDATE

Thanks bhidu for the kind words DEVILWANTED keep Supporting..

Are bhai kya update diya hein bole toh ekdum jakkaas,
Dialog toh ese hein jese imraan hasmi ki kiss GAJAB,
Arvind ki toh lag jaani hein bethey bethey,
Keerti ke jaath ke baal sulag jaayenge,
Bole toh EK NUMBER BOHAT HARD.....!
WAITING FOR NEXT......

Thanks bhai Raj Shah Playboy

Nice update Kia likhte ho yar zabardast ye Mera fast reply ha is forum par nice AP main xossip par bhi ye storey red karta tha wo band howa tu yaha red ki I love it your writing skills well-done

Thanks bhidu Pagal pathan keep supporting

 

[AP 316]

Update-243(Two Addictions At The Same Time)



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Jester k feel mein maine Arvind ko 5 minute kaa time diya sochne k liye ki kya galati hogayi usase.. Kahaan galat reh gaya woh..

Main-Haanji sir.. Anymore phone calls...

Arvind-Nnnno... I lost.. Just tell me your price and I'll give it you... Kitane paise loge tum.. Just tell me the price and I'll give it to you..


Ye suntey he main khadda hua or mere saamne baithey Arvind k munh par aisi bhayaanak laat maari ki woh sofa samett he piche jaa girra...ab ye scene dekh uss room mein sabki gand fatti...keerti or Martin jhatke k sath apni seats se khadey hue or ek side hatt gaye..

Arvind Pagla gaya uski khopaddi blank hogayi hogi..


Main-You can not buy death bitch..

Martin-Hey hey AP AP.. Its ok.. You won.. We are sorry.. We will leave..


Main-Your time is up.. Isko choice di issne Lee ye haara or ab ye Marrega.. Thats how it works around here.. You win you get what you want but If I win you are dead...

Ranjit-We don't need this AP it's ok... Listen usse samjh mein aagaya...

Main-What do you mean.. Main nahi chhod shakta usko I need to kill him I will kill him..i am dying to kill him from past 15 minutes..

Keerti-AP AP we made a mistake we are sorry please please...


Iss bich Arvind bokhlaaya hua utha... Main usski taraf badha toh Ranjit ji mere bich mein aagaye.. Or unhone meri aankhon Mein aankhein daal bolna suru kiya.. Ab duniya mein 3 he bandey hain jo mere gusse mein meri aankhon se aankhein milla shaktey hain.. 1). DEVA Bhai 2).Ranjit ji.. 3).Baadmein bataaUnga... Baaki sabki gand fatt jaati hai in aankhon Mein dekhne se pehle..

RANJIT-I know You are addicted I know you want to kill him.. Mujhe pata hai tum maaroge usko or meri baat sunoge nahi still humessa ki tarah main samjhaane ki koshish karunga tujhe.. Listen just think about your past.. Kya tum caahtey ho aise harr kissi ko maaro he is a powerful guy no doubt tu isse maardega lekin fir iske bandey tere liye aaenge I know tu unko bhi maardega.. Then iska death contract waala koi aaega and I am damn sure tu usse bhi maardega.. Lekin just think itana time kyun waste karna iske uppar tumhaare already itane bade plans hain unke bich tu inse nipatega.. Jabki tu isse jinda chhod shakta Hai dekh uski shakal woh puri life mein tujhe aankh uthake dekh bhi nahi paaega toh kya jarurat hai.. Why?? Uppar se mere uppar problems aaengi woh alag tu kabtak bachaaega mujhe.. Just think about me..


Ab meri ego bahot badi hai or mera addiction bahot jyaada hai main isse 100% maarna caahta hun kyunki woh mera nasha hai.. Lekin abhi mujhe Ranjit ji ki baat theek lag rahi thi.. Jiske 2 reasons they pehla i care about Ranjit and main nahi caahta usse hurt kare koi i know koi usse hurt karega toh main 100% usse thok dunga lekin as Ranjit ne kahaa kabtak main bachaaunga usko agar abhi maine ye kiya toh mere toh dushman badhenge he Ranjit k bhi sath sath badhenge.. Dusara reason tha Jester main abhi feel mein tha or gusse k dauraan bhi theek se soch paaraha tha.. Ab meri ego Maan gayi addiction nahi Maan raha tha... Usko manaaney kaa ek he tareeka hai.. Main thoda piche hatta jahaan table thi jo kaanch ki bani thi maine diya ek bhayaanak punch uske uppar kaafi Mota kanch tha uss table kaa tutta jarur woh lekin mere hath ki gand bhi marri sath mein.. Kaafi jagah kaanch lag gaya.. Fir main mudda arvind ki taraf..

Main- bahot kishmat waala hai tu.. Lekin woh kehtey haina aise he thodi bach jaaega... Tera 90% business Ranjit acquire karega Legally woh bhi tera naam paisa sohrat sab Ranjit ki..


Arvin-L. L. Lekin bina business's kkkk main marrrr jjjjaunga... Mememere dushman mere piche aaenge mere se uppar ki post waale meme mere piche aaenge... I am dead man..

Main-Wahi toh plan hai wahaan chances hain tere bachne k ye jo dost hain tere woh bachaalenge lekin meri baat nahi maani toh tere saare khaandaan ko jinda jalla dunga main ..Or abhi bataadun tujhe agar aaj k baad tu mujhe kahin bhi dikha I don't care tu kya kar raha hai wahaan yaa kya nahi I don't care main wahi khopaddi kholdunga teri... I will kill you and everyone you care about.. Teri family friends i dont give a fuck kon - 2 marega lekin sab marrenge ye pakka hai.. Aage se kabhi bhi Ranjit k kissi bhi kaam mein kaise bhi tune taang adaai jinda jalla dunga.. High command waale dead body takk uthaaney nahi aaenge teri.. Issliye ye Veham bhi nikaal dena..

Ye bol main wahaan se nikala room k gate ko laat maari or bahaar aaya toh mera hath khoon se lathpath tha or mera khoon niche floor takk jaaraha tha... Ab addiction ko shant karna tha uska ek he tareeka tha woh tha Jester... I know main aaj already 2 baar yahaan le chuka tha or jyaada sehat k liye khatarnaak hai.. Caahe sehat meri he kyun naa ho.. Aam logon se 4 gunna jyaada already le chuka hun main.. Lekin still ab ek addiction ko dusara addiction he kaat shakta Hai.. Issliye main Sunaina k room mein aaya or mere sath jo Jester main leke aaya tha woh jeb se nikaala bc hath mein kaafi Dard horaha tha.. Wahaan Sunaina ki table par puraa maal daala maine or aage kuch karta usase pehle Sunaina wahaan aagayi...

Sunai-Oh my god AP itana khoon..

Ussne turant first aid kit lee room mein se or mere pass aai... Then dikha usse Jester.

Sunai-Oh my god AP already bahot jyaada lechuke ho tum..this is bad..

Main-I can't control it.. Ab usko jinda chhoda hai toh Kuch Toh karna padega he..

Sunai-Half lelo..

Lekin woh aage kuch bol paati usase pehle main ek jhatke mein main sab dhakaar gaya..


Sunai-You are so stupid AP fuck you..

Ab 2 cheejein he ho shakti hain, overdose k kaaran yaa toh main kuch ghanton k liye main behosh hojaaunga yaa fir main theek he rahunga.. Lekin 15 seconds mein he main samjh gaya ki sona he padega.. Yaa yun kahun behosh he hona padega..

Sunaina mere hath par kuch lagaa rahi thi Dard bandh hogaya tha meri aankhein jall rahi or aage kya hone waala Tha main samjh gaya tha.. Meri body kaanpney lagi ek dum se..

Sunai-Oh my god bola tha maine...

Meri aankhon se bhayaanak Paani behne laga AC mein paseene aane lage mujhe..

Main-I'll be back in few hours..

Sunai-Yeah sure you are fucking garbage jaruri tha.. Hath Matt khinch dawaai lagaane de.. Or Haan wohlog...

Lekin uske baad kya hua kya nahi mereko kuch yaad nahi hai main hogaya blank..Blank hoke Main space mein pohanch gaya wahaan bc hawa mein udd raha tha sab kuch idhar se udhar sab ghum raha tha nind mein bhi chakkar aarahe they mereko.. Bahot he buri gand marri thi..




Lekin finally main utha meri aankhein khuli toh maine khudko ussi room k sofa par paaya... Mera sir bhayaanak Dard kar raha tha.. Like bahot bahyaanak..itana bhayaanak ki mere munh se nikala" I want jester right fucking now.. "

"Ofcourse Pehli cheej yahi bologe tum" sirr Dard kar raha hai yaa nahi??


Awaaj Ranjit ki thi lekin kahaan se bolraha Tha woh ye maalum nahi tha mereko.. Itana confused tha main..

Main-Mera sirr fatt raha hai..


Ranjit-yelo..tablets lelo.. Doctor ne di hai.


Ranjit ko malum hai meri condition is hotal kaa personal doctor hai ussne check kiya hoga mujhe.. Mere hath mein theek se patti bandhi thi usme bhi halka halka pain tha..

Maine Ranjit se goli or Paani kaa glass liya.. Or 4on goliyaan gatak gaya.

Main-I am feeling cold.. AC bandh karo what the fuck..

Sunaina-Ac bandh he hai..

Main-Oh my god... I am shivering...

Sunai-Maine kaha tha half lele..

Main-Or maine kaha tha maar lene do usko.. Fuckk...

Ranjit-Here..

Ussne mereko ek kambal diya..

Main-What's the time??

Ranjit-9.00pm...

Main-Holy fuck mereko ghar bhi Jaana tha..

Ranjit-Abhi nahi subah chale Jaana..

Main-Nahi subah late uthunga toh late nikal paaunga or fir traffic mein fans jaaunga itana time nahi hai waste karne ko mere pass..

Sunaina-No way tereko abhi Jaane dungi main..

Main-I am fine ye 5 minute mein theek hojaaega..

Ranjit-Waise you can't believe main kitana khuss hun AP.. Ek nahi do do khus khabri milli hain mujhe..

Main-konsi..?


Ranjit-1st Arvind se bacha then jo best khus khabri ye hai ki tune gusse mein meri baat suni.. Mujhe abhi takk belive nahi horaha hai... This is like a dream came true..

Sunai-yep..usko punch maarne k baad main 100% sure thi ki Arvind marega..

Ranjit-Matlab control karna seekh rahe ho tum..


Main-Ghanta control nahi Jester tha woh.. Kitani baar bata chukka hun ki main control nahi kar shakta or naa he main control karna caahta hun.. Ek Yahi cheej bachti hai le de k isko control Karlun Ghanta..


Continued..