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Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - All Hell Broke Loose (Completed)

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Main 5 minutes mein fresh hua kapdey change kiye.. Or niche aaya wahaan Sam, Ami, Abeer Mangal Rishi babhi or bhai breakfast kar rahe they....
Abeer-abe aise udaa hua kaise aa raha hai..
Main-humko Jaana Hai lets go..
Abeer-Kidhar.. !? Kyun..? kya hua...?
Main-Case aaya hai naya urgent hai naasta chhodo... Lets go..
Deva-hua kya..?
Main - Red John striked...baaki details baadmein dunga..
Deva-what the fuck..
Abeer-holy fuck..naasta chhod be..
Hum 5on bhaagtey hue bahaar aae.. Saamne RR khaddi thi toh ussi mein sanwaar hoke Anjali k diye address ko nikale..
Abeer-hua kya..??
Main-Ek kidnapping hui hai Anjali ne bataaya Red John Involved hai.. Isase jyaada kuch maalum nahi..
Abeer-Fuck.. Kidnapping mein John kahaan se aaya..
Main-wahi toh bc chalke dekhtey hain..
Humlog Jagah PAr pohanche toh Ye ek colony thi city k corner par theek thaak middle class waale log rehtey they yahaan par.. Jyaada ameer wagairaah kaa illaka nahi tha.. Issi colony mein ek ghar tha jahaan humein Jaana tha.. Durrr se he humein police or media ki gaadiyan dikh gayi.. Kaafi bheed thi wahaan par.. Jaisa Anjali ne bataaya hum back side pohanchey or Anjali ko call kiya.. Medium saaa makaan tha ye keval ground floor takk he simmit tha.. Bahaar se utana bada nahi lag raha tha.. Anjali ne backdoor khulwaaya.. Tab hum andar aaye.. Andar ek haal 3 bedroom or ek kitchen tha.. Hall mein 3-4 ladies ek lady ko shant karwaa rahi thi.. Or ek side mein 3-4 aadmi khadey they..
Anjali humein side waale room mein legayi jahaan Par Baaki team mojjud thi... Even FIA (Pakistan) waale bhi waapis aagaye they.. (actually hua ye tha ki bichmein India Pak k bich thodi problems hogayi thi jiss wajah se in log ko waapis Jaana padda tha abhi maamla shant hua toh ye waapis aagaye investigation par).. JAVED unka leader Jamaal, Abdul or woh maal Nazia..
Main - Welcome back guys..
Javed-Dhanywaad AP saahab.. Kaafi acha laga aapko dekh kar..
Anjali-So scene ye hai Ye jo lady ro rahi haina or woh jo safed shirt waala shaks hain inn dono kaa ghar hai ye unke alaawa ek beti hai inki 20 21 k bich ki age hai.. Ussi kaa kidnap hua hai.. Or kidnapper ye nishaan chhod k gaya hai..
Ye bolke Anjali ne Diwaar ki taraf ishaara kiya toh woh dekh main shocked rehgaya kyunki ye same wahi nishaan tha jo Red John banaata hai apne victims k khoon se.. Basically ye ek "Smiley face" hai emojis type.. Jo John kaa tredmark hai.. Uske alaawa wahaan par uss ladki kaa left hand kaa angutha bhi katta hua padda tha or jiss tarah se woh kaata gaya tha ye maanana galat nahi hoga ki itani safaai se keval red John he kar shakta Hai.. But kidnapping kyun.. Woh toh maarke body chhod jaata hai or Angutha apne sath leejaata hai.. Smiley face samjh mein aata hai... Or ye ladki ko kyun target banaaya usne jabki woh keval unhe logon ko target karta hai jinke Jaane se uss city, state yaa country ko nuksaan ho yaani Vip 's business tycoons, celebrities...
Main-ladki ki mom kya karti hain and dad..?
Anjali-Maa housewife hai or Dad Haryana Police mein Inspector hain..
Main-Inspector..? Kaisa I mean koi vip case solve kiya hai usne yaa fir corrupt ho yaa kuch Orr..
Main actually ye theory prove karna caah raha tha ki kahin ladki kaa baap koi Surendra type Vip police waala ho isliye John ne uski beti ko target banaaya ho.. But ye hoga nahi kyunki jiss haalat mein ye reh rahe hain uss hissab se lagta nahi Riswat khorr hoga ye.. Toh bacha ek option ye koi Singham type police waala hoga.. Yaani popular..
Anjali-nahi.. Inmein se kuch nahi naa koi vip case naa he corrupt hai.. Normal Inspector hai..mere under hai kaafi time se...
Main-Hua kya tha puri story..?
Anjali--Actually Kal Raat dono Husband Wife Kissi party mein gaye they.. Ladki ghar mein akeli thi.. Ye dono raatko late night waapis aaye or aake inhone check nahi kiya beti ko.. Socha so rahi hai kyun disturb karna.. Lekin subha jab isko Maa school k liye jagaane aai tab ye sab dekha fir uske papa ne station mein phone kiya and baat faili society mein... police waale jo sabse pehle aaye they unhone ye sab dekh k andaaja lagaaya ki Red John he hoga ye baat logon mein faili uske baad media mein and bam high profile case bangaya 25 minutes mein..
Main-issi liye bhai ko abhi takk nahi pata tha.. Itana jaldi sab hua hai....
Toh isliye media yahaan par aaya ki baat faili mujhe laga koi vip gaya isliye yahaan aae yelog..
Main-ladki kaa naam.??
Anjali-Sonam...
Main- Javed Miyan tumhaara experience Red John par kya kehta hai iss case k baare mein..
Javed-AP sir main Red John k case par kaafi time se hun 50 paar ka hogaya hun uske case par lage lage...lekin yahaan main khud confused hun kyunki dekhiye Ek taraf toh ye jo kidnapping hai kissi aam shaks ki hai woh Red John nahi karta I mean woh aise harr kissi ko nahi target banaata ye toh aap sabko maalum he hai..Agar aise karta toh abtak pakkada jaa chuka hota...Toh mujhe nahi lagta ye red John hai.. Lekin wahin dusri taraf jo saboot hain yaani ye baareeki se kata hua angutha or ye khoon se sajaya gaya nishaan ye dekh k ye kehna galat hoga ki ye Red John kaa kaam nahi ho shakta.. Itani achi copy John k kaam ki matlab aisa mujhe nahi lagta koi kar paaega..
Main-So aapka matlab hai humein pehle he ye maanke chalna caahiye ki ye Red John ne kiya hai..
Javed-Ji sir exactly...
Anjali - maine highways or baaki city se bahaar Jaane waale raaston par force lagwaadi hai koi bina checking nahi jaaega..
Main-faayda nahi hai koi.. Kyunki 90% chances hain ki Wohlog issi city mein Hain bahaar Jaane ki jarurat nahi hai unko.. Or Agar bahaar Jaana bhi hai toh Abhi tak jaa chuke honge ghantey bitt chuke waardaat ko..
Anjali-So what's the strategy now..
Main - First things first forensics waalon ko bulaao agar ye Red John nahi hai toh high chances hain kuch naa kuch saboot chhoda hoga...
Anjali-wohlog on the way hain..
Main-Second Bahaar media ko jaake bolo ye Red John ne kiya hai...
Anjali - wait what...? Humein ye Bataana hai yaa chuppanaa hai.. Bhagdad Mach jaaegi yaar..
Main- wahi caahiye Red John ko 2 cheejon se shakt nafrat hai number 1 khudki popularity se, news wagairaah isse passand nahi hai or number 2 behrupiyon se.. Jo iski nakal kartey hain unhe ye khud dhundke maarta hai.. Toh agar ye John ne kiya hai toh bhi humaara faayda hai agar nahi toh Orr jyada faayda hai kyunki jab usse pata chalega ki koi behrupiyaa aaya hai toh usse bahaar nikalna paddega..
Anjali--toh tum kehrahe ho hum uss bechari ladki ko Red john k khilaaf bait ki tarah use karenge..
Main--Haan..
Mangal-wait what...? Bachi hai AP woh..
Anjali-come on yaar usko bachaana hai humaara kaam..
Main- guys ye emotional chutiyaape kaa time nahi hai mere pass ye sab maine pehle he clear kiya tha ki hum harr kissi ko nahi bacha shaktey kuch ko sacrifice karna padega or jaruri thodi Hai uss ladki ko kuch hoga i am sure hum bachaa lenge usko ...
Anjali-but fir bhi AP Bhagwaan naa kare agar kuch hogaya toh..?
Main - toh woh Marr jaaegi.. Come on yaar abhi kahaan jinda Hai woh or bachne k chances abhi kahaan Hain... Toh jo hai he nahi uske liye hum hajaaron Jaan ko khatre mein nahi daalenge..
Anjali-AP.
Main-Go go.. I don't like media warna main khud boldeta jaake...jaao..
Anjali and Jiya bahaar gayi toh nikaltey he media ne gher liya... Humlog gate se dekhne lage unko...
Anjali- Dekhiye shant hojaaiye koi sawaal kaa jawaab nahi dungi main.. Bus sun lijiye.. Kidnapping case hai or most probably ye lag raha hai ki Ye Red John ne kiya hai...
Ye suntey he media ki sitti pitti gumm hogayi or woh fir lage chappar chappar karne..
Anjali - Kal Raat Ki ghatna hai or humaari first priority yahi rahegi ki Bechaari ladki ko sahi salaamat ghar leke aaya jaae.. Or uske sath sath he uss Red John ko hum...
Anjali Aage kuch bolti usase pehle maine Jaan bujh k usko piche se dhakka maara jisase woh boltey boltey rukki or uski jagah main aaya.. Actually main nahi caahta tha ki Anjali Red John k khilaaf kuch bole woh kya main nahi caahta koi bhi Red John k khilaaf bole kyunki Koi chindi chorr nahi hai woh isliye maine usko hataaya or naa caahtey hue bhi Media k saamne aagaya main..
Main-Anjali we got a new lead... Andar bulaaya hai tumhe..
Anjali ne ishara samjha or Jiya k sath andar chali gayi.. Main bhi unke sath mudda lekin main thehra haryana kaa celebrity :laughing: mujhe kahaan Jaane dene waale they Media waale.. Bc 8-10 log ek sath lage chillane toh mujhe kissi kaa samjh nahi aaya..
Main - keval 2 sawaal kaa jawaab dunga jaldi pucho... Aise he karoge toh main jaata hun fir...

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Superb update bro.
1 teer se 2 sikar krne ka plan lg rha he jis trh red john pe ilzam lga kr vo kidnappers ko pkre or usi ke jriy red john tk pohcha jaay.
 

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Fabulous update bro

Thanks bhai

Bhidu AP is back with his full of Mind

Gajab
thanks bhai

awesome BC

well yeh shi hai MEDIA toh RJ ka naam sunkar hi bavli ho jayegi aur lag jayegi TRP ke piche jiske chalte pure din RJ chaya rahega NEWS par jo usse pasand nhi

yahan AP ek HERO ki trah hi soch rha hai kyunki vo pehle hi accept kar chuka hai ki vo har kisis ko nhi bacha sakta issi liye uss ladki ko mra hua maan rha hai halanki mujhe yeh kidnapping fake lag rhi hai like kisi aur ne kidnap kiya hai ladki ka yan ladki khud chali gyi halanki ANGUTHE vali baat alag hai agar ANGUTHA uss ladki ka hi hai toh bhi yeh dono cases possible hain agar RJ ka kaam na hai yeh toh

ab aayega mja MEDIA ke koi 2 sval ka jvaab milega unhe toh salon koi standard ka puchiyo chutiye svaal na puchiyo BC

well AP nhi chahta hai ki koi aur RJ ke raste mai aaye uske ilava kyunki RJ yahan AP ke liye aaya hai yan AP RJ ke liye aaya hai koi farak na lga mujhe toh AP yeh na chahta ki RJ ke khilaf koi aur kisi bhi tarah ka kuch kahe issliye ab jo bolna hoga AP hi bola karega RJ ke khilaf agar kuch bolna hua toh

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...MATHUR
eigjactly red John AP k liye aaya hai or AP red John k liye.. Thanks for this wonderful review bro keep supporting

Super update hai bhai
thanks

Nice update
Thanks bhai
Mujhe aisa khan lag raha he subconsciously ki ye sab AP ka kam he... RJ ko bahar lane ko..... Ho sakta he aur nahini bhi kyun ki AP baki kisi ko kuch bolne se rok raha he.... Media maine.. Kyun ki RJ apna ego pe na le le... Aur ye media ki kitni fikae AP ko padi he wo toh hamine pata he wo easily kisike jariye anjali ko andar bula sakta tha.... Par wo khud gaya. Aur to aur media ke question ke liye bhi rahi ho gaya.. Jaroor AP kuch aisa ans dega jis se RJ ki jalegi
AP kha karta hai ye khud mujhe naa malum :D thanks for the wonderful review bhai keep supporting as always..
Are bhencho ye kya hua chindi Chor harkto par aagya kya red John let see what the action happen
Thanks bhai
Awesome update. Action shuru hone wala h. Waiting for next update.......
thanks bhai

thanks bhai

Mast update bhai ek dum akhir aa hi gaya red john waiting next
thanks bhai

Very nice update
Thanks bhai
I think ke ye us ladki ka koi pagal ashik hoga jiske pyar Ko ladki ne thukra diya ho aur wo Red John ka fan ho isliye usko copy kar Liya badla Lene me...

Khair dekhte hain sach kya hai
Let's see dekhtey hain kon ho shakta Hai
Brilliant update AP sir ji.... Great going :10::10::applause::applause::applause::applause:
thanks bhaib

Zabardast update
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mast update
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AP bro story bohat slow kar di hy lamby arsy sy na koi sex aya hy na koi romance aya hy story ka interst khatam ho raha hy ahista ahista kuch intresting add karo jab sy AP wapis aya hy koi 1 dafa b romance ni aya
Romance bhi Aajaega :D keep supporting bhai
story is going good ....

i missed it so much ..
Thanks bhai
Awesome update bhai
Dekhte hai ki kidnapping sach mai red john ki hai ya koi behrupiya hai jo red John ko copy kar raha hai
Keep posting
thanks bhai keep supporting

Awesome update bhai... superb.. keep writing
Thanks bhidu
Nice update
thanks bhai

Jhakaass
Update hai Bhai

Ab is kidnapping me red Jhon involved hai ya Nahi ye to abhi clear nahi hua hai
Agar hoga to maza aayega aur nahi bhi hua to bhi maza aayega

So dekhte hai kya hota hai

Waiting for the next update
Maja jarur aaega bhai :D keep supporting
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Thanks bhai
Superb update bro.
1 teer se 2 sikar krne ka plan lg rha he jis trh red john pe ilzam lga kr vo kidnappers ko pkre or usi ke jriy red john tk pohcha jaay.
thanks bro..




Thanks everyone for the support keep supporting as always..
 

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Update-139(Investigation - 2)




Ye sunke woh reporters chup hue or ek ki awaaj aai..

Reporter- Ankit Ji aapko kya lagta hai iss case k baare mein or Red John k baare mein..?

Main-2 questions ek he mein hogaye Dekhiye i think so ki ye Red Kaa he kaam Hai beshak tareeka uska naa ho lekin highly chances ussi k hain.. Ab investigation suru hui hai toh jald se jald hum Red John yaa jo bhi iske piche hai usko pakadenge. But highlighted point ye hai ki Red John ko hum pakadenge surely dead or alive.. Aaplogon k channels k maadhyam se main haryana ki janta ko yahin baat Bataana caahunga ki darrke nahi khulke jeeo hum naa pehle kissi k aage jukhe hain or naa he ab jukhenge.. Thanks...
Ye boltey he main turant ghar k andar aaya wohlog piche se chillate rahe..
Team uss ladki k room k andar he thi..
Anjali - kya hua tha..?
Main-guys kaan kholke ye baat sunlo tum mein se koi bhi kabhi bhi kahin bhi kissi k saamne bhi Red John k khilaaf kuch bhi nahi bolega.. Yaad rahe koi chindi chorr nahi hai woh, Red John naam hai uska.. iss naam kaa khouff naa caahtey hue bhi sabke dill mein hoga..agar naa Hai toh hona caahiye..
Mangal-or tu bol shakta Hai..? Abhi bola tu..
Main-main alag hun or main already uski hitlist mein sabse uppar hun so it doesn't matter..
Bc Kal sotey time ye socha tha Aaj Sunday hai toh aaram se paddey paddey din nikaal dunga.. Bc chutiya log ko Sunday k din bhi chain nahi hai.. Kalse college open hojaaenge toh ye bhi dikkat rahegi..
Main-Ladki k papa ko bulaalo..
Anjali ne bahaar se uss aadmi ko bulaaya 45 k aas pass ummar hogi uski shakal se he police waala lag raha tha banda... Kaafi maayush tha hona bhi caahiye ekloti beti gayab hogayi thi uski.. Dharm naam tha uska..
Main--Namaskar main...
Dharm-Ankit Singh.. Ji jaanta hun aapko.. Or ye bhi jaanta hun ki agar koi meri beti ko sahi salamat laa shakta Hai toh woh aap log hain..
Anjali-Dharm chinta naa Karo hum Sonam ko jarur dhund lenge..
Dharm-Ji madam..
Main - Aapki beti k baare mein bataaiye sab kuch... Or please kuch chupana nahi police waale ho aap toh jaantey ho acha bura sab bataadena.. Ye baatein issi kamre mein rahengi...
Dharm - Ji ekloti beti hai meri Bachpan se he laad pyaar se paala hai aap he k college mein padhti hai average student hai kissi se jyaada ghullti nahi hai jaldi .. But pichle kuch din se uska behavior mujhe kaafi ajeeb lag raha tha.. Meri beti mujhse kuch nahi chipaati thi lekin pichle kuch din se baatein chipaane lagi thi choti moti he sahi lekin ajeeb se hogayi thi.. Jo hua woh college k time he hua.. Kyunki ghar par koi chinta ki baat he nahi thi..
Ami-Boss...
Main-yes..
Ami-Ye dekho..
Ami k hath mein ek kaagaj kaa tukda tha oh god kaash ye woh naa ho jo main sochraha hun..
Main - please don't tell me ye drugs hain.. Please..
Ami - Black Tar Heroin..

Ye sun uss room mein mojuud sabki aankhein khuli ki khuli rehgayi..

Dharm-Ye possible nahi hai ye nahi ho shakta..

Main-jiya ghar k andar humaare alaawa jitane bhi police waale yaa log hain sabko bahaar bhejdo abhi k abhi.. Ye baat iss kamre se bahaar nahi jaani caahiye..


Jiya-OK boss...


Main-Jiya Ami Search this whole room..

Ami-You got it..

Main-Javed and team Rajat Ajay and Deepak.. Bahaar Saara ghar chaan maaro search the whole bloody house.. Ek kona bhi nahi bachna caahiye...

Rajat-OK boss..

Anjali-Mujhe maalum Hai tu kya sochraha hai but Dharm ki guarantee main leti hun i bet my life on him inn sabke baare mein isko kuch nahi pata hai..

Main-Maalum Hai mujhe I know ye innocent hai .. 2 minute shant raho..


Jiya-Boss..

Main-holy fuck..

Jiya k hath mein ek kaagaj tha jisko dekh k he lag raha tha kaafi drugs hain usme.. Or woh uss ladki ki almirah mein tha.. Dharm bechaara baawla hogaya tha..

Ab main hua active mera dimag aaya working condition mein Main possibilities dhundney laga ki ye kya or kyun ho shakta Hai no. 1 ye kidnappers ne plant kiya hoga..? Answer - Nahi.. Kyun kiss liye kya jarurat thi unko.. Befaltu risk banta ye unke liye.. No. 2 iska baap ye sab karta hai hidden mein.. Answer -nahi because agar ye drug dealer hota toh aise naa rehta uppar se inspector hai bc isko kya jarurat khudke ghar mein drugs rakhne ki befaltu kaa risk.. No. 3-ye ladki khud drug addict thi..answer-nahi not possible baap police waala hai aankhein dekh k pehchaan leta woh drug addict ko.. Uppar se itani maatara mein kon khudke liye rakhta hai apne pass.. Number 4-ye ladki kissi k under darrke dabke yaa blackmail hoke kissi k liye kaam Kar rahi thi.. Bc inspector ki beti par kon shakk karega ki ye drugs bechti hai.. Gajab plan.. Gajab dimag.. Answer-Highest possibilities issi ki hain.. Ab pata karna tha ladki kaa friend circle boyfriend girlfriend affairs dost dushman..

Belive me mere mind ne ye sab 1 minute k andar andar count karliya tha likhne mein beshak time laga ho... My mind love to work on these things usko inhi cheejon mein nasha milta hai..

Anjali-AP...

Main-i need complete silence in this room please... 30 seconds... I beg you..

Kon ho shakta Hai boyfriend..? Yaa koi blackmailer..? Agar blackmail karke kaam hua hota toh baap ko kuch toh maalum hota or itani si ladki ko kon drugs bechney k liye blackmail karega.. Uppar se itani gand mein dum kiske hoga ki inspector ki beti ko blackmail kare... Toh bacha kya dost.. Yaani most probably boyfriend wahi chutiya sona babu karke ye kaam karwaa shakta Hai.. Lekin girlfriend bhi ho shakti hai lesbians you never know..

Main-Sonam kaa phone kahaan Hai..?

Anjali-Pooja k pass bhejdiya hai station mein..

Main-Pooja ko call karo bolo open kare or mujhe harr call harr message iss phone k caahiye mere pass ASAP..

Anjali-ok..

Main-Dharm ji i know you are innocent.. But dikkat ye hai aapne apni beti par dhyaan naa diya.. Maanta hun time kam milta hai but still ye aapka kaam Hai dhyaan rakhna caahe jo bhi ho family comes first.. Fuck the job.. Family always comes first..

Woh bechaara rone ko tha almost ro he raha tha..

Dharm-Mujhe abhi bhi vishwaash naa horaha ki meri beti drugs lerahi thi..

Main-Nahi aapki beti nahi lerahi thi nope not 1% woh ye supply kar rahi thi, koi karwaa raha tha.. Koi boyfriend tha sonam kaa...?

Dharm-Ji mere hissab se toh nahi..

Main-Boyfriend toh tha surely.. 100% tha..

Anjali-shayad mummy ko pata ho... Bulaaun..

Main-nahi woh ro rahi hain main baat nahi kar shakta tum he baat karo jaake..


Anjali ne Dharm ko bahaar bhejdiya..

Anjali - dharm kaa kya hoga.. .?? Suspend..?


Main-kyun..?

Anjali - jaise he highcommand ko pata chalega usse seedha suspend karenge,..

Main-bola toh main kissi ko bataane ki jarurat he nahi hai.. Ye innocent hai aise he rehney do waise bhi aise police waale kam hain haryana mein..

Anjali - Pakka..?


Main-Haan yaar tu trust karti hai usko wahi kaafi hai... Uppar waalon ko main sambhaal lunga.. Tu mujhe iska boyfriend laake dede bus wahi caahiye mereko...

Anjali- tu itana sure kaise hai boyfriend ko leke..?

Fir maine Anjali ko meri theory samjhaai jisse sun woh bhi chakra gayi.


Anjali-God damn.. Your brain is on a whole new level now...

Main-Indeed it is.. I myself is on whole another level..

Continued..
 
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