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बंधु कहानी बहुत बढ़िया जा रही है पर ऐसा लगता है कि कुछ बिखराव है पहले पार्ट के जैसे एक सीध में नहीं जा रही है कभी कहीं का पार्ट आ रहा है कभी कहीं का. मेरा मतलब है कि AP को इतना बड़ा केस सॉल्व करना है लेकिन वो फालतू में टहल रहा है। अब अगर ये सारे केस आपस में जुड़े हों तब तो ठीक है। AP का जलवा फ़र्स्ट पार्ट में ज्यादा दिखाई देता था। उम्मीद है कि आप मेरी बात का बुरा नहीं मानेंगे।
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Sabse pehle toh bilkul bura nahi maanunga bhai readers kaa toh bilkul bhi nahi..
So The thing is new AP ko samjhe nahi abhi takk aap abhi takk off course woh 24 ghantey toh case par nahi laga reh shakta uska dimag chud jaaega usase iske liye daily normal day stuff jaruri Hai kyunki AP kaa mind kabhi bhi kahin bhi kuch bhi soch shakta Hai case solve karne k liye hint usse Khaana khaate hue bhi mill shakta Hai sotey hue bhi or college mein bhi isliye sab normal day to day stuff jaruri Hai..
kyunki normal bandey kar shaktey hain ye sab ki Haan bhai 2 din sounga nahi main lagaatar ye falaaane case par kaam karna hai mujhe lekin AP aisa nahi kar shakta uska dimag woh case 15 minutes mein solve kar shakta Hai.. Or jaisa maine bataaya Tha past mein ki AP kaa dimag jitana kam use ho utana he badhiya Hai jyaada use hua toh problems honge.. Isliye itana bada case beshak ho sab soch samjh k karna padega usko..
Baat karein first part ki toh uski starting isase kahin jyaada burri thi start mein keval Sex, Bakchodi, Or school kaa scene Tha Villain bhi kaafi late introduce hua tha introduce hone k baad bhi usko side mein he rakha tha jabki ye waala villain toh surendra se kahin uppar hai toh aise he toh nahi milljaaega millega kaise usne kuch kiya he nahi hai aisa ki jisase mill jaae toh uske liye off course time caahiye main caahun toh next 5 updates mein red John ko dhund bhi lunga or usko khatam bhi kardunga lekin faayda kya hai kissi ko passand nahi aaega isliye story revolve karni padti hai ek he jagah nahi rakh shaktey college bhi hai family bhi hai ladkiyaan bhi hai police bhi hai sab dekhna padta.
Or Agar baat karein saare case aapass mein judde honey ki woh agar bataadunga toh fir aage padhke faayda kya hoga suspense kya rahega isliye uske liye toh aage padhna padega... Lekin itana bataadun sabkuch ek he jagah aake khatam hoga...
Thanks for pointing out bhai still dekhtey hain kya aata hai aage k plot mein taaki kuch naya kar shakein...
Thanka for the lovely comment brother keep supporting..
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Update-103(Gote'm)
Main-woh sab Chhodo mujhe ek baat andar he andar khaaye jaa rahi hai woh ye ki aapko insabke cehre kaise yaad rehgaye... Ye uska beta ye uska ye woh ye woh... No way aapko ye sab yaad hain...
Deva-Are nahi ek do kaa naam he jaanta tha main toh Jaise Ashish Ajit or Sana... Woh toh Gaadi mein aaya toh yahan Guptaji ne bataadiya sabka biodata... Aise haina log vishwaash mein aajatey hain jaldi...
Main-lol...
Nicki-hehehe true...
Deva-tu ab jiya se un ladkon k naam le Jack ko call karke information bhejdey Police ko nahi milenge woh kya maalum kahaan chippey honge thodi gundagardi dikhaani padegi...
Main-ok abhi kardeta hun aap nikalo...
Deva-ok guys Bye have a great day... Sambhaal lena sab yahaan...
Sab-Bye bhai...
Bhai baaki neta, Guptaji Or Senior officers wahaan se Nikal liye Abhi ne apne sathiyon ko samjhaadiya tha or woh log road se hatt rahe they uppar se Sumit or uske kaafi sathi bhi nikal liye they toh bheed mein ab kuch or parties k chutiya log yaa fir thode bahot time pass log he bache or woh bhi Bheed kam hoti dekh k nikal liye or turant he traffic police action mein aagayi turant he Highway ko Vaywastheet kardiya gaya... Or Abhi Gang mere pass aai...
Abhi-AP 1 Hour starts now...
Main-ok... Don't worry i got you...
Maine Jack ko call kiya..
Main-Yo Jack Wassup...
Jack-All good sir...
Main-listen we have a problem... Big problem..
Jack-Talk to me sir...
Maine usko bataaya ki kya hua ladkiyon k sath and then kaise road bandh hua and kaise fir bhai ne 1 ghanta diya unhe...
Jack-Ok matlab normal log hain gundey wagairaah nahi hain...
Main-Haan... Main name or address bhejdunga tumhe but dikkat ye hai chuppe hue hain wohlog..
Jack-Hojaaega sir no problem... 2-4 dost yaa relatives ko dhamkaaunga Saara address bataadenge kahaan gayab hain wohlog don't worry...
Main-Shabbas... 1 hour ok...
Jack-Ji sir...
Call disconnected...
Jiya wahaan aai humlog waapis uss chaai ki dukaan par baithey and Unke naam or data Kal waali police report mein se leke maine Jack ko bhejdiya...
Jiya-Kon laga hai kaam par...?
Rohit-Jack...
Jiya-Oh My God.. Those guys are so fucked...
Main-Indeed they are...
Jiya-Listen listen best part Bataana toh bhull he gayi main, hum kal waale on duty officer k contact mein aae toh pata hai kyun chhod diya gaya un 3no ko kal...
Nicki-Kyun...?
Jiya-Kyunki un ladkiyon ne Police station aake pehchaan karne se mana kardiya even kahaa ki unhe koi case nahi caahiye...
Rohit-What the hell...?
Nicki-oh great just great...
Abhi-h.. H.. H. Humein nahi maalum tha ye...
Rohit - Off course... 99.8 % cheejain maalum nahi hoti tumlog ko...
Main-(hanste hue) You guys are just brilliant i love it, i love it...
Abhi-Lekin ab jarur case karengi woh, bilkul taiyaar hain...
Tabhi udhar Sam aaya bc finally gandu aa he gaya...
Sam-What the fuck is going on here...?
Nicki-Ahem-Ahem... Language Sam...
Sam-Oh sorry my bad..
Main-Yo yo yo welcome back...
Sam-Thank you...
Rohit-It's Nice to see you...
Sam-Thanks...
Main-ab jaldi se samaan jo leke aaya hai usse waapis baandh or Yamunanagar ko nikal jaa yahaan tera koi kaam nahi hai...
Ye sun mujhe Jiya or Rohit ko Hansi aagayi...
Rohit-ahahahaaha...
Sam-Already Jaanwar se baat hogayi hai kal jaaunga... Get destroyed...
Ashish-What the hell are you guys talking about...
Rohit-Tumlog yahin Ho be, jaao dharna udhar hai tumhaara bc...
Unlog ne chaai coffee khatam ki and nikal gaye apne dharne par... Ab wahaan main Nicki mam Riti mam Rohit Jiya or Sam bache...
Nicki-Yamunanagar mein kya hai..?
Main-Naya case...
Nicki-Haan woh bataaya Deepu ne mujhe...but tumlog yahaan kaise ho fir...
Main-Kissi ko toh yahaan bhi rukkana jaruri Hai na..
Nicki-jaise ki aaj..
Main-exactly...
Nicki-Ami kahaan Hai lekin... Woh toh nahi gayi Yamunanagar jiya k sath bhi nahi hai woh...
Main-Aaj chutti Lee hai usne... Ghar par he hai...
30-40 minutes hogayi or Mousam ek dum kadak hogaya tha toh Main Sam Jiya or Rohit Dukaan se uth kar gaadiyon ki side aagaye jo pass mein he khaddi thi... Darshal dikkat mousam ki nahi thi humlog ko cigarette peeni thi or udhar madam baithi thi toh ye bahaana banaake aaye humlog...
Jiya apne officers kaa haal chaal Jaananey chali gayi... Or humne cigarette sulgaai..
Sam-Bc ab jaake journey kaa stress kam hua...
Humne cigarette finish ki he thi ki Abhi gang firse wahaan aagayi..
Abhi-AP 40 minutes passed...
Main-Dude Relax agar maine bola 1 ghantey mein hojaaega toh hojaaega last part nahi padha tha kya apun jo bolta hai wahich hota hai..
Abhi-Last part... Matlab...
Matlab lawda Mera..
Main-kuch nahi bhai my bad..
Maine Jack ko call kiya toh usne mera phone cut kardiya.. Bc ye kya bakchodi hai.. Lekin woh bakchodi turant samjh mein aagayi mujhe kyunki Jack ki chamchamaati black Audi just humaare bagal mein aake rukki or usme Se jack uttara..mast 3 Peice Suit matching shoes black goggles... Bc ekdum dashing lagraha tha banda... Our own James Bond..
Humse Galle milla woh aatey he kaafi time hogaya tha bc jack ko dekhe...
Jack-Millgaye Sir wohlog Leke aarahe hain bandey..
Main-Are gajab...
Jack-Farmhouse par they inmein se ek k bhai ko uthaaya usne pura address dediya with pincode..
Main-lol...
Sam-Shabbas...
Tabhi wahaan 4 black Range Rovers aai ekdum same to same unmein se Jack k 7-8 Sathi uttare or unke sath woh 3 ladke 25-28 ki age hogi teeno he dikhne mein bc masum se lekin kaam gandu waale... Shakal dekh lag raha tha thodi maar bhi paddi hai Inko... Un 3 ko leke wohlog humaare pass aae... Or woh teeno sirr jukha kar khaddey hogaye... Or humaare aadmiyon mein se ek aage aaya..
Jack-Isase milliye Sir ye hai Vinny mera chota bhai or Abeer sir kaa second In command ye pura physical kaam dekhta hai jaise ki aaj..
Main-Hello Vinny Nice to meet you...
Maine Vinny Se hath milaya..
Vinny-Pleasure sir. Here you go sir your package..
Main-Jiya...
Jiya ne Turant unko arrest karwaayaa or unko wahaan se legaye Police waale..
Mouni-Thanks Sir Inko pakkadney k liye...
Vinny-I have no idea aap kiss baare mein baat Kar rahi hain... Maine kissi ko nahi pakkada.. Main toh yahaan AP sir se millne aaya hun...
Mouni-Humne Abhi dekha aap un 3 ko leke aae..
Vinny-Sorry madam lekin unko police ne pakkada hai..
Ashish-I see I See no credit policy.. NIce Nice..
Vinny-(Hanske) Enjoy Your Day Guys... AP sir Sam Sir Rohit Sir I'll take the leave now...
Main-Bye.... Great Job dude...
Vinny-Thanks sir..Anything Anytime sir..
Ye bolke woh apne sathiyon ko leke wahaan se Nikal gaya or uske sath he Jack Bhi Bye bolke Nikal gaya... Ab wahaan bache main or Abhi gang...
Ashish-Thanks Yaar AP..
Mouni-Double thanks By the way...
Arushi-Yep first for saving us and second for Catching them...
Abhi - Yeah thanks for all this Bro...
Main-No problemo... Suno tumlog ko ek gyaan ki baat bataata hun..
Ashish-Bataa bhai bataa Lambe time se tera gyan nahi liya hai...
Divya-Haan School k baad isne gyaan diya he nahi hai...
Mouni-I am curious now bataao AP...
Main-Actually its not always about what is right what is wrong... The thing is anything can turn out to be good or bad and we can't do anything about that...
Lekin issi bich mera phone baja jo new number se tha..
Main-Just a second...
Maine Phone Pick Kiya...
Main-Hello...
Varsha - Hey AP its Varsha From Crime Branch Delhi.. Remember me...
Main-Off course I do.. Whats up..?
Varsha-I need your help badly...
Main-ok what kind of help...? Talk to me..
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Thanks for the overwhelming response bhailog ab jaisa ki sharif banda bhai ne bataaya ek do or pm aae hain mujhe ki story slow chal rahi hai reason maine uppar waale quote mein bataa diya hai ki kyun chal rahi hai kyunki sab kuch jaruri Hai college bhi Ladkiyaan bhi or family bhi lekin still agar aapko lagta hai toh Aaj maine report kardi hai jaldi he poll change hojaaega story kaa or jaise he naya poll add hoga please Sablog Vote karein kyunki fir uske according he hum story ko aage badhaa paaenge...
Thanks for the support everyone keep supporting..