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A hero can kill someone to save the world...

but a villain can destroy the world to save one...

 

[Lovekillsyou]

Badhiya tha

 

[Bilal jan]

UPDATE 2



LOCATION - MUMBAI
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PLACE - VENKY's RESIDENCE
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Venky Ko yahan Aaye 4 saal ho gaye the.....
usne mumbai main hi 12 complete kiya aur ab yahan paas ke hi Sagar University main usne aaj hi Btech main admission liya tha .... Kehne ko toh duniya main uske liye is duniya main koi nahi tha... Woh yahan akela rehta tha....
University se wapas aa ke fresh hua phir hua phir khana banane laga...
khana banake woh apne room main aaaya aur apni almirah se photo album nikal ke dekhne laga....
Aksar woh jab sad hota tha album nikaal leta tha...
aaaj bhi yahi kiya usne album main pehli tasweer thi ek aurat ki jo dikhne main kafi khoobsurat thi age lagbhag 40 ki hogi... us photo ko dekh ke uske aankhon se aansun nikal aaye aur woh rote hue kehne laga.....
MAA.....

Ji haaan yeh thi uski maaa anamika..

aur saath main thi uski behen komal aur papa rajesh.....
photo dekhte dekhte woh so gaya aur chala gaya bachpan ki yaadon main.....

LOCATION - BANGLORE
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PLACE - RAJESH's RESIDENCE
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venky uth ja beta teri behen taiyaar baithi hai school jaane ke liye... aaj summer vacation ke baaad school open ho rahe hain yddd hain na tumhe ya bhool gaye... maa ke itna jagane ke baad bhi venky nahi utha toh unhone chadar pakad ke kheench liii...

VENKY - Kya maa sone bhi nahi deti ho..
MAA - kitna soyega chal aaja maharani taiyaar hai agar woh upar aa gayi na toh teri khair nahi...
waise teri saari aadatein toh usme hai judwaa jo tehri teri ( ji haan sahi suna aapne ham dono bhai behen judwaa hain) par pata nahi aaj q jaldi uth gayiii..
chal aaja mere raja bete jldiiii....
yeh kehkar maa chali gayi aur venki uthkar taiyaaar hone laga.... phir fresh hoke woh niche aaya hi tha ki komal ne shuru ki apni badhaas nikalna shuru...

KOMAL - Aa gaye bhai aaap itna late karaoge toh main kisi din kahin chali jaungi tumse door phir rehna akele....
VENKY - jldi se uske paas aaaya aur gale laga ke bolne laga ab aisi baat dobara mat kehna... tu meri behen hi nahi meri jaaaan hai.. agar tu chali gayi toh main kaise jiyunga....
in dono bhai behen ka pyaar dekhke maa ki aankhon main aansu aur woh kehne lagi... ki mere ghar ko kisi ki nazar na lage....
lekinnnn.
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use bhi Kahaan pata tha ki jiski nazar lagni thi uski toh lag chuki hai is ghar ko....
tring... tring.. tring..

LOCATION - MUMBAI
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PALCE - VENKY's RESIDENCE
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phone ki ghanti ki wajah se venky jag gaya time dekha toh 8 baj rahe the....
8 missed call padi hui thi mohini ki (mohini school classmate and best freind of venky)...
missed call dekh ke venky sochne laga ki call krunga ab toh yeh sunayegi bahut islie usne mobile side main rakha aur fresh hone chala gaya.....
wapas aake pehle dnr kiya phir balcony main jaake cigrette phunkne laga...
cigrette abhi khatm bhi nahi hui thi ki phirse call aane laga...
usne call pick hi kiya ki saamne se.....
MOHINI - kutte kahan mar gaya tha call q nahi attend kar raha tha.. ek toh akele akele admission kara liya aur bataya bhi nahi... main jab wahan admission lene pahunchi tujhe gate pe dekha tha wapas aate hue... tujhe pukara maine lekin tu ruka bhi nahiiiii...
VENKY - are maine suna nahi tha... aur tujhe bataya toh tha kal ki main admission lene jaunga kal tu bol sakti thi ki mujhe bhi jaaana hai...
MOHINI - Chal koi niii kal chalega na college...
VENKY - off course pagal chalunga... thik hai kal milte subah college mainn...
MOHINI - ok...
VENKY - Bye
MOHINI - bye


ACHE LOGON KO KAUN YAAD RAKHTA HAI
ISILIYE MAIN BURA HUN BAHUT BURA...

ITS VILLAIN

Lajwab Awesome Superbbbb Speechless update..........
Bohat khob superbbb.....

 

[Bilal jan]

UPDATE - 3
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LOCATION - MUMBAI
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PLACE - SAGAR UNIVERSITY
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sagar university bahut badi University thi aaage kaafi bada maidaaan tha aur side main students ke liye parking ki jagah thi....

venky ne college ke main gate se enter kiya aur parking main apni bike park ki...
aur academic block ki taraf chalne laga....

woh abhi garden main hi tha ki saaamne use bheed dikhi.....
venky udhar hi jaaane laga....
wahan pahunch ke dekha toh mohini ro rahi thi....
maine usse poocha kya hua....

MOHINI - main yahan aaayi aur chair par baith gayi tabhi in logon ne gande comments karne shuru kr diye aur mujhe apne paas bulaya...

10 mins ago....

SENIOR 1 - new commer???

MOHINI - yes..

SENIOR 2 - which branch???

MOHINI - Btech

SENIOR 1- name kya hai???

MOHINI - Mohini

SENIOR 3 - thori moh hame bhi dedo....

MOHINI - WHAT.??

SENIOR 1- kuch nahi... chalo ab dance kr ke dikhao

MOHINI - Mujhe dance nahi aata

SENIOR 1-dance nahi aata toh phir kiss krni padegi aman (SENIOR 2) ko

MOHINI - plzzz mujhe jane dijiyeee

mohini ki ankhon se aansu nikalne lage the yeh wahi time tha jab venky ki entry hui thi wahan pe....

venky yeh sunke senior 1 ke paas gaya aur ek jabardast punch diya uske muh par...
thabbbbb.....

punch itna jordar tha ki woh senior zameen par gir bada aur uske muh aur naaak se khooon aa gaya tha....

itne main piche principle ki gaadi aa gayi aur sabhi students jaaane lage...

SENIOR 2 (AMAN) - - dekh lenge tujhe sham ko mil bahar tu.....

VENKY - Chal ja na be apna kaaam kar....

phir venky mohini ke paaas aata hai aur usse kehta hai ____

VENKY - pagal kal se mere saath aaana...

MOHINI - ok mere fighter......

phir woh dono class main aate hai aur first bench par baith jaate hainn....

pehla class applied maths ka tha teacher aaye aur sabka introduction lene laga...
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sir my name is______

jaise hi yeh aawaaz suni woh piche mudkar use dekhne laga bahut khoobsurat thi woh ladki Usne black suit pehna hua tha qayamat mat dha rhi thiiii......

woh ladki use kuch kuch jaaani pehchani lagi......


UNKNOWN GIRL - sir my name is rashmika...
and i m from banglore....


Banglore sunte hi usne sochna start kiya kahin yeh meri rashmi toh nhiiii....


nhiii nhiiii woh kaise ho sakti hai qki uski toh aadat thi ldkon ke jaise kapde pehenne kiiii....

aur phir venky brrr brrr use dekh rha tha aur isi tarah se 2 classes aur lagi phir recess ho gaya dono uthke canteen jane lage....

toh woh ldkiiii rashmika ham logon ke paas aaayiiiii......


RASHMIKA - hiii i am...

VENKY - RASHMIKA.... i m venky aur yeh hai mohini....

RASHMIKA - can we frnds...

MOHINI - offcourse...

VENKY - yeah... why not...

_______aur phir teeno canteen main gaye aur ek khaali table par baith gaye.....
venky chala gaya tha order dene....

wapas aake woh bhi baith gaya...

aur phir aapas main study related discussion hone laga aur phir thori der main....
unka order aa gaya aur woh teeno khane lage.....

venky - so spicy yrrrr.... ymmmmy
maza aa gaya yrrrrrr.

RASHMIKA - YEAH.....
ache the samose...

MOHINI - Hmmmmm

phir wahan se nikal kar class main aaaye aur baaaki ki classes attend ki... uske baaad mohini, rashmika aur venky parking ki taraf jaane lage parking main pahuncha hi tha gate ke paas use bheed dikhi aur woh mohini ke paas aaya aur kehne laga.........


VENKY - Ek kaaam kar aaj tu rashmika ke saaath ghar chali ja mujhe thora kaaam hai...

MOHINI - hmmmm thik hai...

VENKY - rashmika koi dikkat toh nhi hogiiiii...

RASHMIKA - nhi yrrr dikkat kaisi main chor dungi mohini darling ko....

VENKY - mujhe tere irade thik nahi lag rhe rape wape mat kar dena mohini ka....

RASHMIKA - hahhhhhahahhahahh......

MOHINI - bhk pagal....

RASHMIKA - chalo mohini chalte hain...
bye venky

MOHINI - BYE

VENKY - BYE


__________________In logon ke jaate hi venky ne bike start ki aur bahar aane laga


aur bahar dekha usne kamse kam 30 - 40 ladke khade with their hathiyaar....
venki bike bahar lekar aaya aur full speed main bhaga di..

woh seniors bhi apni bikes par baithe aur picha karne lage.....

AMAN - (senior 2) kahan bhaaag raha hai be hijde

vivek (senior 3) - itne ladkon ko dekh kar fat gayiii....

ruk na be madarchod, ek baap ki aulad hai toh ruk....

saala yeh hai hi nahi ek baab ki aulaaad iski maa ne kaafi jayad kele khaye hain lagta hai....


venky yeh sab sunke unsuna kar raha tha lekin uska gussa badhta ja raha tha uski aankh gusse ki wajah se laal hoti ja rhi thiiii......

aur aage jaake ek sunsaan ilake main ek maidaan main gaadi khadi kar di aur intezaaar krne laga seniors ka.....
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AMAN - Q be darr gaya tha kya jo bhaag raha tha.....

VIVEK - chal tujhe ek moka diya maafi maang le pair pakad ke maaf kr denge tujhe...

VENKY - main bhi tumhe ek moka deta hun bhaag jao warna uthne ke kaabil nahi chorunga log aake uthakar le jayenge....

ya ho sakta hai kisii ko milo hi na.....

AMAN - Yeh sunke aman aur vivek ke saaath sab hansne lage....

aman ne apne ek bande ko ishare se mujhe maarne ko kaha us bande ne hockey hawa main uthayi aur mujhe maarne hi wala tha ki ek punch pada uske chest pr aur dher.......

woh banda uske baad na hila na dhula lekin yeh dekh kar abki brrrr 10 bande ek saaath meri taraf badhe......

do logon ne mujhpe ek saath attack ek ne hockey mere haath par maarni chahi main niche baith bach gaya aur phir kood ke dusre bande ki gardan padi aur ghuma diiii......
krrrrrr. rrrrrr........ dead.....

ab mere andar gussa badhta ja rha tha.... jisne mere upar hockey se waar kiya tha uski hocket pakad ke kheeenchiii aur usi ke sir le de maaari....

dhabbbb... aaaahhhhh....

uska sir fat gaya tha....

bache hue 8 ek saaath war karne lage lekin main bachaaw kar rha tha kisi tarah unse.... phir unme se ek thora paas aaaya maine di flying kick uski chest pe aur dusre ko punch maaara muh pe.... teesre ko maari hockey stick uske haaath mainnn.... aur phir uska haaath pakad ke dislocate kar diya phir woh chillane laga... gaaand phaaad dard ho raha tha uski chillahat aur dard ka anumaaan laga kar kar baaaki sab toh bhaaag gaye the....

lekin 2 log bache the....


aman aur vivek........ kaha tha na bhaaag jao warna bhaaagne ka mauka nahi dunga.......

AMAN - Abe ham q bhaagenge.... bhagega toh tu abhi 5 ko maaar kar khud ko don samajhne laga hai.....
piche dekh abhi bahut khade hain....

VENKY - HAHAHAHAHHA.......

VIVEK - hans q raha hai pagal ho gaya hai kya......

VENKY - Abe apne piche mud ke dekh kaun hai mujhe toh koi nahi dikh raha....

jaise hi dono ne piche mudke dekha.... wahan koi nahi tha yeh dekhke unki ab fatne lagi.....
qki jis tarah venky maaar raha tha unhe ab bachna mushqil lagne laga tha....

woh jaise hi piche dekh ke mude saamne ki taraf....

venky uske muh ke paaas tha aur usne diya ek punch unki naaak pe jisse khoon behnelaga......

aur phir venky ne vivek aur aman ke upar hockey stick se maarna shuru kr diya....

dhabbbbbb..... dhabbbb..... fattttttt....fattttt......dhabbbbbbbb.....dhaabbbbbb...

aaaaahhh......aaaahhhhhhhhh........aaaaaahhhhh...........

maaaf kr do bhai gltiiiiiiii ho gayiiiiiii......
ab aisa dobara nahi krenge...... plzzzz bhai...... woh dono mere pair padne lage.....

VENKY - jinda rahoge tab gltiiii ka sochoge na....... main jinda hi nahi chorunga....
Tum log student toh ho nahi.... sagar university ke maine pata kiya aaaj lunch main.....
daily wahan aate ho ladkiyon ko cherna tmhari aadat haiiiiii.....
students ko drugs supply krte ho..... aur kya naaam hai tmhare us baaap ka (drugs
supplier)......

hnnnnn ydddd aaaya ROCKY..... tum logon ko bhi maaarunga aur use bhi maaarunga.....
dekh lena lekin tum log dekhoge kaise itna bol ke maine un done ki gardan ghuma di aur..... unko unki gaaadi main bharke niche khaayi ki taraf ludka diya..... aur unki gaaadi niche jaise hi takrayi hai..... boooooommm...

Lajwab Awesome Superbbbb Speechless update..........
Bohat khob superbbb.....

 

[Bilal jan]

UPDATE - 4
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LOCATION - MUMBAI
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PLACE - VENKY's RESIDENCE
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un logo ko maar ke main ghar wapas aaya aur fresh hoke so gaya.....

aaj khana banana nahi tha qki kajal aa rhi thi isiliye bahar se hi manga lenge baad main....

aur so gaya.... thori der main....
kisi ne darwaze pe knock kiya toh venky ne uth ke darwaza khola saamne dekha toh kajal thiiii.....

kajal ne dodke venky ko gale lagaya..... aur kehne lagi i miss u so much....
(frnds kajal venky ki frnd hai.... lekin in done ke beeech sex relation hai islie yeh mat samjhma ki yeh venky ki gf hai.... kajal dikhne main bahut khoobsurat hai iske booobs aur gaand bahut bade hai...... jiske wajah se yeh dikhne main bahut jyada attractive aur hot lgti hai......)

KAJAL - Toh aaj ka kya plan hai.....

VENKY - Plan wahi puran haiiii....

itna sunte hi kajal ne jump laga di venky ke upar.....

aur venky ke sir ke piche hath rakhkar uske sir ko jhukati hai aur apne larzte hue hontho ko venky k hontho se mila deti hai

Ummmmm ahmmmm ummmmm........

Dono me kiss shuru ho jati hai venky alag hi dunia ke anand main dooba ja rha tha kajal ke nazuk mulayam hontho ka ehsaas use romanchit kar rha tha aisa maza to kisi ke sath bhi sex krte hue nhi aya tha venky ko.....

Ummmmm mmmmmuuaaaah ummmmmm seerrraaaap ummmmmm mmmuaaahhh.........

Dono ek dusre k hontho ko choos rhe the...... ummmmm.. seerraaaapp.... mumm.... ummmmmmm... mmmmuuaaaahhhh....


Thodi der kiss karne ke baaad kajal ne saans lene k liye chehra piche kiya to usne mehsoos kiya ki uske honth poori tarah dono k thook se bheeg gye the......

venky to poora madhosh ho chuka tha kajal ki nazren venky ki nazron se mili aur bina ek pal gawaye dono ke honth phir jud gye....
kajal venky ka kabhi nichla honth choos rhi thi kabhi upar wala aur fir usne apni jeebh venky ke muh me daal di......

Kajal venky ki jeebh ko choos rhi thi aur venky kajal ko follow kar rha tha phir venky ne bhi kajal ki jeebh ko choosna shuru kar diya.....

Ummmm suurrerup mmmuaaa ummmmmm.......

venky sirf kajal ko follow kar rha tha phir kajal ne venky ka ek hath pakadkar apne booobs par rakh diya aur halke se dabakar use ishara kiya.......

venky bhi kajal ka ishara samjh gya aur usne kajal ke bade boobs ko dabana shuru kar diya........

venky pehle dheere dheere phir zor se boobs ko press karne lga jiski wajah se kajal ko thoda dard bhi hua aur uske muh se siskariyan nikalne lagi magar usne roka nhi venky ko balki wo is mithe mithe dard ko enjoy karne lagi......

“ aah unhhh aaah cccccc ooohhh ccccc aaaahhh aise hi dabao inhe aaaahhhhh ccccc dusra bhi dabao ooohhhhh hmmmmm aaaaahhh ccccc kas kar dabao ooohhhhhh ccccc........ ’

kajal ki chut me pani aa gya tha aur uski uttejna ab teji se bad rhi thi......

phir kajal ne jaldi se venky ki tshirt utar kar venky ke seene par hath firane lagi aur uski chhati par kiss karne lagi,venky toh is ehsas me khota chala ja rha tha use ab yeh sab control nhi ho rha tha......

kajal kiss karti hui neeche badhne lagi aur venky ke lower ko nikaaal diya uske underwear se hi uske land ka ubhaar saaf jhalak raha tha jo is bat ka gawah tha ki venky is waqt anand ke sagar me doob chuka hai......

‘ aaahhhh oooooohhhhh kyaaaaa kaarrrrr rhiiiii ho ooooohhhhhhh cccccc ‘.....

venky ke muh se siskiyan nikal rhi thi agle hi pal kajal ne venky ka underwear bhi neeche khinch diya aur venky ka land uchhalta hua bahar aa gya.....
venky ka land koi mamuli land nhi tha balki 8 inch lamba aur 4 inch mota tha.....


Venky : kya hua kajal kya pehli baaar dekh rhi ho mera land.......


Kajal : nhi nhi aisa nahi hai.... darasal tumhare land ka akar pehle se bahut bada lag raha hai.... toh main soch rhi thi k main ise jhelungi ya nahiiiii.....

Fir kajal land ko pakad leti hai aur masalne lagti hai...

jisse land ka tanav aur bad jata hai aur uspar nasen ubharne lagti hain......

venky ka land bahut garam tha jiska ehsas kajal ko ache se ho rha tha......

kajal ki choot bahut jyada pani chhodne lagi thi.......

phir kajal apne kapde utarne lagti hai aur sirf bra panty main let jaati hai...

venky kajal ke safed tarashe hue badan ko dekhkar mantra mugdh ho gya tha uska muh apne aap khul jata hai aur halak khushk hone lagta hai kitni haseen thi kajal koi bhi dekhe to pagal ho jaye........

venky ne kajal ke bra ke hooks khol ke bra ko bahar nikalta hai....

Bra khulte hi boobs uchhalkar bahar aa jate hain
Kya haseen nazara tha doodh se safed aur perfect shape k thos sudol boobs jinpar brown color k chhote chhote nippal the jo is bat k gawah the ki unko jyada chheda nhi gya hai

‘ aah ccccc venky ab inhe maslo pyar se inhe dabao inhe muh main leke chooso ‘

venky farmabadaar gulam ke jaise aadesh sunkar dono hatho se doodh ko dabane lagta hai aur fir ek doodh ka nipple muh me le ke choosne lagta hai fir thodi der baad dusre nipple ko muh me leta hai pehle wale ko dabane lgta hai
kajal toh anand ke sagar me doobti ja rhi thi itna maza use kabhi nhi aya tha
‘ aaaahhhhhh oooohhhhh cccccccc aaaaaahhhhh uuuuiiiiiii ummmmmmm aaaaaaahhhhhh aise hi aaaaaahhhhhhh oooooohhhhhhh shabash aise karo aaaahhhhhh oooohhhhhhh maaaaaaa cccccccc’

‘ ab penty bhi utaro jaldi se ‘
venky doodh ko chhodkar kajal ki penty kheench kar utarne lagta hai jisme kajal kamar uthakar uski madad karti hai
kajal ki penti poori kamras se bheegi hui thi jise venky ek bar gaur se dekhta hai aur sunghta hai, ek alag hi khushbu use mehsus hoti hai......

kajal ye dekhkar khus ho jati hai magar ab usse apni choot ki aag bardasht nhi ho rhi thi....

‘ venky ab tum dheere dheere apna land choot main daalo....

‘ dekho venky tumhara land zara araam se daalna agar main kahun ruk jao to ruk jana aur jab poora chala jaye tabhi jor se karna ‘
venky kehta hai meri jaaaan jaisi tmhari mrziiii.....ham toh gulaaam hai aapki choot ke......

kajal apni taange utha kar khol deti hai aur venky uski tango ke beech ghutno par baith jata hai magar venky ki position sahi nhi thi..... isliye woh takiya maangta hai.......

‘venky takiya kajal ki kamar ke niche rakhta hai aur khud Bhi ghutne failakar neeche ho jata hai ab land ka topa choot k samne tha....


kajal apne muh se thoda thook lagakar land par apne hath se lagati hai aur land ko pakadkar choot par set karti hai....


‘Ab ghusao aram se '
Venky apne land par zor deta hua land ko andar ghusane ki koshish karta hai magar venky ke land tope ke mukable choot ka muh chhota tha... qki kaafi dino se dono ne sex nahi kiya jiski wajah se choot kass gayi thiii thoriiii....


kajal ko takleef mehsus hone lagti hai....


venky lagatar zor bda rha tha pukk ki awaz se land ka agla hissa choot me gus jata hai.....


‘ aaaahhhhhh cccccc oooooohhhhhh maaaa marrrrr gyiiiiiii oooohhhhhhh ccccc cc’.....


kajal ko dard hone lagta hai uski choot ekdam kas gyi thi aur aise lag rha tha jaise koi khanjar daalkar uski choot ko faad rha ho.....


venky kajal ke chehre ko dekhkar samjh jata hai ki use bahut takleef ho rhi hai isliye wo ruk jata hai....


‘Aaahhhhh cccccc tum rukkkk kyunnn gyeeee aage badaooooooo dheere dheere ccccccc oooohhhhh’.....


venky phir se land par zor dene lagta hai aur ek inch aur land andar ghus jata hai ab tak 3 inch hi land andar gya tha magar kajal ki to jaise jaan hi nikal rhi thi....


‘venkyyyyyyy cccccccc sath me mere doodh bhi dabao isse mujhe thoda aram milega ‘......


venky jhat se doodh dabane lagta hai kajal thodi relax hoti hai toh venky ko jhatke se land andar karne ko kahti hai, venky uski bat mankar ek halka jhatka mar deta hai aur land 2 inch aur andar ghus jata hai magar kajal ki jaan halak me aa jati hai
Yahan tak to wo pehle bhi land le chuki thi venky ka lekin bahut dino se kiya nahi isliye bahut dard ho raha tha...


‘ ooohhhhh aaaaaahhhhhh maaaaaa cccccccc oooohhhhh maaarrrrrr gyiiiii cccccccc ooohhhhh ‘......


Thodi der venky kajal ke doodh dabata rehta hai jisse 5 minutes baad kajal thoda normal ho jati hai aur venky ko itne hi land ko andar bahar karne ko kehti hai....


venky utne hi land ko dheere dheere andar bahar karne lgta hai pehle to kajal ko takleef hoti hai magar fir dheere dheere land apni jagah bna leta hai aur use acha lagne lgta hai......


venky toh ankhen band larke mza le rha tha aur sath me doodh dba rha tha kajal bhi ab rang me aane lagi thi.....


‘ aaaahhhhh cccccc ummmmmm ooohhhhhhh aaaahhhhhh ccccc aise hi karoooooo aaahhhhh mmaaaaa aur tej dhakke maro aaaahhhh cccccc’.....


venky kajal ki awaz sunkar apni gati bda deta hai aur tez dhakke marne lagta hai....


‘ aise hiii aaaahhhhh oooohhhhhh mmaaaaa reeee aur zzzzzooooorrrrrr sseeeee maaaroooo aaaahhhhh
Poooraa ghussaaa dooo aaahhhhh meri parwaaahhhhh cccccccc oooohhhh mat karooooo ummmmm ghusa do poooraaaaa cccccc ooohhh’.....


venky kajal ki awaz sunkar ek tez dhakka marta hai aur uska land 1.5 inch aur andar ghus jata hai.....


kajal ke muh se cheekh nikal jati hai.....


‘ohhhhh......mmmmaaaaaaaaa. .....Aaaaahhhhhh.......


kajal ki ankhon se aansoo behne lage the jise dekhkar venky ruk jata hai....


‘ kya karun tumhara land meri jaan lelega aisa lag rha hai kisi ne khanjar ghusa diya hai pet me aaaahhhh maaaaa ‘......


venky phir se kajal ke doodh dabane lagta hai aur 5 minutes me halke dhakko se aur doodh dabane se ab wo normal ho gyi thi ab venky itne hi land se kajal ki choot me dhakke marne lagta hai aur kajal bhi anand me doob jati hai.....


‘ aaahhhh aaahhhh aaaahhhh cccccc ooohhhhh aisee hiii aaaahhhh zor se karoooo aaahh zor lagao aaahhhhh ccccc ummmmm aaaaa’......

venky ne apni gati aur bda di thi kajal se aur bardasht nhi hota aur uski choot sikudne lagti hai 2 minute bad hi uska paani nikalne lagta hai.....

‘ aaahhhhh main aaaaaaa rhiiiiii huuuunnnnnnn aaaaaahhhhhh maaaaaaa maaainnnnn gyyyyiiiiiii.....
Ohhhhhhh mmmmmmmaaaaaa’......
venky dekhta hai ki kajal teji se kamar uthane lagi hai to moka dekhkar akhri bacha hua land bhi tej dhakke se choot me ghusa deta hai.....

kajal ki ankhen palatne lagti hai ye aakhri dhakka usse bardasht nhi hua tha anand ki charam seema main venky ne aakhri prahar kar ke choot ki dhajjian uda di thi...

venky ka land kajal ki bachedaani me ghus gya tha aur land ki sakhti ki vajah se use bahut jyada dard ho rha tha.. use lag rha tha wo nhi bachegi choot se bhi khoon behne lga tha.....

kajal ka jism sir kati murgi ki tarah fadfadane laga tha kajal besudh ho gyi thi
venky kajal ki aisi halat dekhkar bed k sirhane pade gilas se pani jaldi se kajal ke chehre par dalta hai aur kajal ko hosh ata hai.....

‘ aaaahhhhhh maaaaa nikaloooooo baharrrr maaaaa aaaiiii main mar jaaungiii ccccc aaaaaaah please nikalo bahar aaaaaaa fattttt gyi meriiiii choooot aaaaaahhhhhhh ccccccc maaaaa nikalo ise ‘......

venky chupchap bas kajal ke doodh dabaye ja rha tha.. use aur kuch nhi pta tha ki wo kya kare kuch der baad kajal ka dard kuch kam hota hai magar wo abhi bhi siskar rhi thi....

‘ ccccc oooohhhhhh aaaaaahhhhhh Maaaa cccccc. ccccccc aaaa.....

kajal venky ko dhakke marne ko bolti hai...

venky dhakke marne shuru kar deta hai kajal ki choot ek bar pani chhod chuki thi jis vajah se ab land aram se andar bahar hone laga tha land ne choot ko apne hisab se khol diya tha....

‘Aaaahhhhh uuuummmmmm aaaaaaahhhhh cccccccc..... ccccc aaaissseee hiiiii maaaa rreeeee ccc. Aaaah zor se maroooo aaaahhhhh’

‘Yeh lo kajal aur lo aur zor se ye lo...... aaahhhhh mmmaaaaa aaissseeee hiiii cccc mmaaaa....

aaaaaaahhhhhhh ccccc maaaa..... cccccc ooooohhhhhh.... aaaaaa cccccc aur Zoor seee maaaro....

Aaaahhhhhh ccccccc...... aise hi daily chodega na mujhe aaaahhhhh ccccc bol chodega na mujhe?’.....

‘ tum jo kahogi wo karunga kajal daily chodunga tmhe.... ccccc bas mujhe chhodkar kahin mat jana ‘....

‘ kahin nhi jaungi cccccc aaaahhhhh aur tez karo cccccc mmaaaa ummmmmm aaaaahhhhh ab to main teri gulam ho gyi hun.....

10 minutes k bad phir se kajal charam par pahunch gyi thi magar venky abhi bhi lga hua tha....

‘ aaaaahhhhhh aur tez karo aaaaahhhh maaaaa ccccccc ummmmmm oooohhhhhh aur tezzzzzz aaaaaahhh main aaaaaa rhiiii hunnnnn aaahhhhh’.......

kajal jhatke lete hui pani chhod deti hai.....

Magar venky abhi laga hua tha dono paseene me nahaye hue the ab venky bhi bardasht se bahar ho rha tha....

venky aur tez tez jhatke maarne lagta hai venky ki bechaini badne lagti hai...

venky kajal ki taango ko dono hatho se pakad kar kajal ke doodh par uske ghutne lga deta hai... kajal ke paon uske sir k paas aa gye the uski paon ki payal uske chehre k pass chhann chhann ka madhur sangeet bja rhi thi jo venky ki uttejna ko charm par le jate hain....

venky poora zor lgakar dhakke marne lagta hai.....

kajal se itni tabadtod chudai bardasht nhi hoti aur ek bar fir se uski choot pani chhodne k liye fadfadane lagti hai.....

‘ aaahhhhh mmmaaaaaa meri kamarrrrrr ooohhhhh main gyiiiii ‘

‘ mera nikalne wala hai kajal'

‘ use nikalne de mere andar hi nikal use ‘

‘ nikalne wala hai kajal aaahhhh cccc ooohhhh’

‘ aaane de aaahhhh ccccc jaldi kar main aur jhel nhi paungi jaldi kar aaaahhhhh ‘

Isi ki sath venky ka land dam tod deta hai aur uske land se lava behne lagta hai...

venky ka land poora choot me ghusa hua tha venky ka jism akad gya tha aur uske land ka ras seedha kajal ki bachedaani me gir rha tha
Bachedaani me ras k girte hi kajal ne bhi fir se paani chhod diya tha
kajal is chudai se poori past ho gyi thi.....

venky kajal ke upar hi let gya tha aur dono apni sanso ko durust kar rhe the.....

kajal se venky ke jism ka bhar bardasht nhi ho rha tha wo venky ko side main palta deti hai aur apni taange sidhi kar k venky ko bahon me kas leti hai.... rat ke 9 baj gaye.....

venky uthta hai apna mobile uthata hai aur mobile se zomato par khane ka order karta hai.....
phir fresh hone chala jaaata hai.... fresh hone ke baaad kajal ko jagata hai aur woh bhi fresh ho ke nighty pehen leti hai.....

thori der main khana aa jata hai aur dono milke khana khate hain aur phir thori der baaad phir shuru kar dete hain apni raasleeela.....

aaaj ke liye itna hi.....
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UPDATE - 5
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LOCATION - MUMBAI
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PLACE - ROCKY's ADDA
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rocky bahut gusse main tha jabse usne suna tha ki uske bandon ko kisi ne maaar diya hai......

ROCKY - kaun tha be woh???
tum log kuch bolte q nahi ho.....

BANDA 1 - Bhai wo bahut dangerous hai.... bahut kharab maaarta hai....

ROCKY - Meri gang main ho ke tu usse darta hai.... namard hai re tu.....

phir rocky ne apni pistol nikali aur usko thok diya....
saala uski tareef karta tha behnchod.......chalo re batao uske baare main.....

BANDA 2 - bhai woh ladka sagar university main padhta hai.... qki aman ne hame wahi bulaya thaa. aur wahin se uska picha kiya tha ham logon ne.....

ROCKY - theeek hai apni pooori team leja..... aur usko utha ke lao..... yahan kaise bhi karke....

agar nahi la paye toh yahan mat aana qki uske baad ka hasr toh jaante hi ho kya hoga tum logon ka.....

BANDA 3 - Jii bhai utha layenge..... aap befikr rahiye......

phir wahan se woh 50 bande aur hathiyaar leke niakalne lagte hainnn......

ROCKY - ruko ruko be tum log..... apna woh inspector ka kya naaam hai.....

BANDA 2 - Rajesh.....

ROCKY - hnnn usko phone laga ke de zara mere ko.....

woh phone lagata hai jaise hi rajesh call pick karta woh banda mobile rocky ko de deta hai......

ROCKY - hello..... isspector sahab..... ek kaaam tha aapse.....

RAJESH - hnnn boliye rocky bhai.....

ROCKY - ek bande ko utana hai.... aap jaoge toh jyada locha nahiii hoga.... mere bande jayenge..... toh marpeeet toh pakkka hogi.....

isliye aap jao use arrest karna phir mere bandon ke hawale kar dena use aaage ja ke.....

RAJESH - thik hai kaaam ho jaega.... lekin apne ek bande ko mere saath bhej dena use pehchanne ke liye....

ROCKY - thik hai main kisi ko bhej dunga....

RAJESH - ok main team taiyaar karta hun.....

ROCKY - apne wafadaar bando ko le jaana inspector...aur hnnn tmhara cut time pe mil jayega......

RAJESH - OK bhai......

phir rocky ek bande se kehta hai ki tu inspector ke paas chale jaaana aur tum 5 log ek gaaadi leke thora aage rehna ...inspector use tmhare hawale kar dega.... koi gadbad nahi honi chahiyeee......

aur baaaki sab log niklo apne apne kaaam par aaaj kal bahut kam marketing ho rhi hai drugs ki.....ise badhao jaake......

phir sab wahan se nikalne lagte hain......
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PLACE - VENKY's RESIDENCE
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venky subah 7 baje so ke uthta hai..... phir kajal ko jagane lagata hai......

VENKY - Uth na kajal kitna soyegiiiii....

KAJAL - yrrrr venky q preshan kar raha hai..... tu ja na college mujhe kaunsa college jaaana hai...tu ja taiyaar ho aur mujhe sone de.... waise bhi meri raaat ko flight hai dubai ke liye.....
so plzzz ab tu jaa aur mujhe sone de......

VENKY - OK....
chal tu so..... main chala fresh hone.....

phir venky fresh hota hai aur kapde pehen ke paidal hi university chal deta.... aaj uska mnnn bike se jaane ka j nahi tha..... islie taxi se nikal liya University....
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PLACE - UNIVERSITY
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TIME - 9:00AM
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University pahunch ke venky idhar udhar dekhta hai phir left main use mohini aur rashmika dikhti hain.... udhar hi chal deta hai venky.....

VENKY - Hiii mohini, hiii rashmika....

MOHINI - HIII VENKY...

RASHMIKA - HIII VENKY....
Kaise ho....
aaj late aaye thora....

VENKY - Hnnn woh aaj main taxi se aaya hun na....

MOHINI RASHMIKA - q......

VENKY - mnnn kar raha tha islie.....

MOHINI - ohhh acha.... chalo classs chalte hainnn......

VENKY RASHMIKA - hmmmmm chalo..

IN CLASS.....

Class main pahunchkar yeh teeeno piche baith jaate hai qki aage sab full thi.....

MOHINI - Venky teri wajah se piche baithna pad raha hai......

VENKY - koi niii kal se aage baith jaana....

phir class main chemistry teacher ki entry hoti hai .....

VENKY- (mnnn main) ufff kya gazab teacher hai.... dil aa gaya hai re....

TEACHER - toh bacho iss semester ke assignments note kr lo... aur 7 8 assignment de dale ek saaath.....

VENKY - lagta hai madam maar ke hi dam lengi....itte saare assignment koi deta hai kyaa....

RASHMIKA - ruko zara sabr kro.......
abhi sabhi denge assignment itne hiii...

MOHINI -

VENKY - yrrr kitna zulm kar rhe hain ham logon pe......

phir jo bhi teacher aata gaya aur assignment deta chala gaya.....

RECESS TIME.....
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Yeh log canteeen main ja ke baith gaye... aur order karke wait karne lage.....
phir unka order aa gaya aur woh khake jaane lage.... door par pahunche hi the ki....

tabhi.....

UNKNOWN GIRL - hey can i talk to you???

VENKY - YEAH.....

VENKY - tum log chalo main aata hun class....

yeh sunke woh log class chali gayi.....

VENKY - hnnn toh kahiye kya keh rhi thiii aaap??

UNKNOWN GIRL - i am sanjana....

VENKY - Kya kaam hai mujhse?.

SANJANA - I LOVE YOU.....

VENKY - Sorry..... mujhe gf nahi banana abhiii.... Chaho toh frnd ban sakti ho...

SANJANA - (SAD FACE) okkk.....

yeh kehke sanjana jaane lagi toh.....

VENKY - Udaas q hoti ho sochenge iske baare main....

SANJANA - OK BYEEEE....

VENKY - BYE.....

phir isi tarah classes khatm ho gayiiiiii.....

PLACE - OUTSIDE UNIVERSITY......

inspector rajesh apni jeep main baitha intezaar kar rha tha.....

ROCKY - kab ayega be garmiii main baithe baithe preshan ho gaya hun.....

ROCKY's BANDA - abhi aa hi raha hoga.... woh dekhiye jo saamne se aaa raha hai na black shirt aur blue jeans main wahi hai venky.....

venky udhar se nikal raha tha ki tabhi inspector rajesh uske saamne aaya aur kehne laga....

RAJESH - you are underarrest....

VENKY - lekin kis jurm main....

RAJESH - kal kitno ko maara tha tune 8 logon ko yaad aaya yeh raha gawaaah saaath main hi leke aaya hun....

VENKY - SIR maine kisi ko nahi maara....

RAJESH - thane chal tujhe sab kuch yaad aa jayega....

phir ek constable ne hathkadi lagayi.... aur jeep main daaal diya venky ko....

aur jeep chal di apni manzil par..... phir aaage jeeep ruki ek jagah par aur venky ko shift kar diya rocky ki gaadi main.....

VENKY - sir mujhe kahan le ja rhe ho..

RAJESH - tu special jail ja raha hai....

aur sab hansne lage.....

phir use rocky ke adde par le jaaane lage.... raaste main usne kaha ki mujhe toilet karna hai..... toh uski hathkadi khol di aur woh toilet krke gaadi main aake baith gaya....

woh chahta toh bhaag sakta lekin use dekhna tha ki kahan leke ja rhe hain use.... jab un logon ne dekha ki woh wapas aa gaya hai bhaagne ki koshish nahi ki hai toh phirse hathkadi nahi lagayi aur yahi sabse badi galti thi unki.....


gaadi main 2 bande aage the driver ko mila ke aur 2 venky ke saaath piche baithe hue the.....venky ne chupke se dono ki gun gayab ki...
aur silencer toh laga hi hua tha gun main usne ek ek karke dono ko maut ki neend sula di .....

aage jo baitha use kuch shaq hua ki yeh dono bol q nahi rahe hai jaise hi woh uthke piche dekhne laga.....

venky ne use headshot de diya.... driver kuch karta usse pehle uske sir pe bandoook taan di venky ne.....

aur bola chupchaap jahan ja rha tha wahi chal....

driver ne gaadi ek cement factory ke aage roki...dekh ke lagta tha ki yahan kaaam hota tha kuch din pehle tak....

venky us driver ke saath andar gaya saamne.....

ROCKY aur uski paltan khadi.....

ROCKY - abe akela q aaya hai baaki sab kahan hai...

BANDA - bhai isne sabko thok diya....

ROCKY - Kya sabko thok diya... leke aa ise mere paas....

venky khud hi aage chalne laga jaise hi saamne aaya rocky ne uska chehra dekha....

Rocky ke hosh hi ud gaye maut jo saamne khadi thiiii.... woh bhaag ke apne cabin main gaya aur andar se door lock kar liya... aur apne phone se kisi ko call lagane laga.... call pick hote hi....

ROCKY- Bhai woh.... wohhhh... zinda hai... zinda hai....

SAAMNE SE - kaun zinda hai.....

ROCKY - VILLAIN.......

AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......

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[Bilal jan]

UPADTE - 6
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LOCATION - MUMBAI
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PLACE - ROCKY's ADDA
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BOSS - kaun zinda zinda....

ROCKY - bhai villain....

BOSS - kahan hai woh???

ROCKY - mere bandon ke saamne khada hai...

BOSS - maar do use.... paiso se tol dunga tujhe...

ROCKY - Boss woh maardega mujhe bhiiiii....

BOSS - nahi maroge use toh main tmhe maar dunga....

ROCKY - ok bosss... kuch karta hun....

BAHAR HALL MAIN... MM

VENKY - 1, 2, 3, 4,.......10 hi ho bssss..... chalo sab saath main aaao.....

Phir venky ne apna chaku nikala.... aur uspar haath phairne laga.... bahut dino se shikaar nahi kiya hai kisi ka isse...

woh sab aage bhadne lage....
ek banda aage aaya aur usne punch maarne ko try kiya venky ke chest pe venky ne uske haath ko pakda aur dusre haath se chaku uski gardan main ghonp diya......

abki baar 4 bande ek saath aaye pehle ne face pe maara toh venky niche baithe aur dusre wale ko phenk ke maara chaku.... woh uske gardan main ghus gaya phir jump lagake uske paas gaya aur chaku nikala hi tha ki kisi ne uspe goli chalayi.... goli uske haath ke paas se nikal gayiiii....

venky jump lagake ek pillar ki piche chip gaya.... aur dekhne laga unki position sab ke paas revolver thi... un teeno ko chorke jinhe abhi venky maar raha tha....

woh sab saamne hi khade the... usme se ek ne jaise hi dekha ki venky ka chehra dikh raha hai usne fire kr diya lekin woh bhi khali chala gaya...

abki brrr venky ne apni dono revolver nikala aur aim lagake do ko head shot maar diya....

woh ab bhagne lage safe position lene ke liye....itna time bahut tha venky ko unko maarne ke liye....
aur kuch hi der main woh sab zameen par pade the....

yeh wahi time tha jab rocky boss se baaat kar rha tha... call cut hote hi usne jaise hi door khola saamne ka nazara dekhte hi uske rongte khade ho gaye....

door ke side se venky achanak nikalke uske saamne aa gaya....

HELLO ROCKY....

rocky - villain bhai mujhe maaf kar do....

VENKY - maaf kar dun.... tujhe toh pata hai ki main maaf nahi karta kisi ko....

2 saal tune mere saath kaaam kiya itna toh tujhe pata hi hoga.... ki main maaf nahi karta.....

Chal bata tera boss kahan hai tujhe chor dunga... aaj pehli brrr kisi ko main maafi wala option de raha hun...

VENKY - (mnnnn main) agar maine isko boss ka pata bata diya toh boss meri family ko maar dega.... nhiii main yeh hone nahi dunga... main ise boss ka pata nahi bataunga... ise mujhe maarna hoga toh maar lega......

VENKY - Kya sochne laga budbak.....jldi bata mere paas time nahi hai....

ROCKY - bhai mere ko nahi pata hai.....

(aap yeh soch rahe honge ki rocky maarne ka try q nahi kar raha venky ko... qki rocky ko pata agar use usne maara aur venky bach gaya toh woh use tadpa tadpa ke marega islie woh abhi chup hi tha) lekin venky ne use maarne ka mauka hi nahi diya aur rocky ka ' na' sunke use bahut jyada gussa aa raha tha gusse ki wajah se uski aankhein laal ho gayi thi yeh dekh ke rocky aur dar gaya... tabhi

venky ne rocky ka ek haath pakda aur use tod diya.... phir dusra bhi tod diya.....

Rocky dard se chillane laga aur tadapne laga.... use ab dard saha nahi ka raha tha lekin kya karta agar kuch batata toh family chali jaati islie usne apna muh band hi rakha.....

VENKY - ab bhi nahi batayega.....

ROCKY - muuujheee naaaahiiiii paaataaaaaa... (dard ki wajah se uski aawaaz nahi nikal rahi thi sahi se) ....

VENKY nai ab apna chaku uthaya aur dheere dheere uske seene pe cut karne laga....

aaahhhhhhhh......bhaaaaaiiiiiii.....mujheeeeee.... nahiiiiii..... pata..... hai..... sach...... main..... chor..... do..... mujhe......

chor dun tujhe behnchod tujhe chor dun meri poori life barbaad kardi tere aur tere boss ke ek jhuth ne.... aur main tujhe chor dun.....

phir venky ne chaku se uske upar anginat waaar kiye jabtak uski ek saaans chalti rahi tab tak waaar karta raha uske upar....

VENKY - le chor dia.....

Phir venky utha wahan se aur usne apne kapde dekhe toh usme bahut khooon laga tha usne....

rocky ke cabin main dekha toh wahan almari main kapde thode dheele the lekin usne pehen liya......

phir generator room main gaya wahan dekha toh petrol rakha hua tha do karpe utha laya aur poori factory main daalne laga.....

phir sabki bodies ko ek jagah ekhatta kiya....

aur unpar bhi petrol chidakne laga.... phir use yaaad aaya usne rocky ka mobile liya aur use off karke jeans main daaal liya....

phir gate ke paas aaya aur lighter jala ke andar phenk diya aur piche ke gate se nikal gaya....

thori door aaage chalke woh ruka aur piche mudkar dekha toh aag poori factory main fail gayi thi.... uski aankhon main aansu bhi thi.... aur chehre pe khushi bhi thi.....

DOSTI BHI USNE ....
NIBHAAYI THI BAHUT ACHE SE....
LEKIN DUSMANI MAIN BHI......
USNE KOI KASAR NAHI CHORI....

aaj ke liye itna hi...... continued

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[SameerK]

UPDATE - 10
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LOCATION - MUMBAI
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PALCE - SAGAR UNIVERSITY
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NOTE - AB SE STORY MAIN VILLAIN AUR VENKY KI JAGAH PE " MAIN "USE HOGA....
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(PRESENT TIME)

maine bike ko parking main khadi ki... aur apni nigahen idhar udhar dodane laga ki shayad bahar hi rashmika aur mohini mil jayen....

lekin aisa hua nahi.... islie maine socha chalo pehle canteen main kuch pet pooja hikar lete hain.... islie main canteen ki taraf chal diya.... abhi canteen thori hi dooor thi..... ohhh teri yeh period toh sarika mam ka hai.... main yeh kaisa bhool gaya....

jaldi chal venky warna madam ki entry scene nahi dekh payegaa.....

phir main lagbhag dodte hue class main enter hua aur piche wali sit pe baith gaya.....

aur tabhi saamne se prakat hui laakhon dilon ki dhadkan
hmari sarika jain.... ufff kya lag rhi thi..... pink colour ka blouse aur saath main black colour ki saadi aur mathe pe black colour ki hi bindi lagayi hui.....

bole toh doston ek dam kaatilana loook tha... bsss aisa lag raha tha swarg se koi apsara dharti pe utar aayi ho....

(kuch jyada toh nahi ho gayi tareef frnds)....

madam ke enter karte hi sab good morning wish karne lage....

maine bhi good morning wish kiya mam ko aur phir mam ne sabko baithne ko kaha.....
sab apni apni sit par baith gaye... phir mam ne padhana start kiya aur hamne unhe taadna start kiya....

aise hi 20 minutes nikal gaye...

wahin rashmika aur mohini ne piche mudkar kai brrr dekha toh main unhe nahi dikha qki main toh desk pe sar rakh ke mam ko dekh raha tha isiliye unhe main nhi dikha....

Rashmika aur mohini yahi soch rhi thi ki main nahi aaya hun aaj.....

MOHINI - rashmi lagta hai aaj kutta nahi aaya....

RASHMIKA - lagta toh hai ki nahi aaya....

MOHINI - bata deta toh main bhi nahi aati.... bahut boring lag rha hai.....

RASHMIKA- hnmm yrrrr.... yeh class padh len phir garden main baithenge kya bolti ho??? qki aaj half day bhi hai 4 hi class hogi....

MOHINI - hnnn thik hai.....

phir dono padhai pe dhyaaan kendrit karne lagi.... tabhi mam piche mudhi aur unki nazar achanak mere upar gayi.... lekin main unhe hi dekhta raha... yeh dekhkar mam ko gussa bahut aaya....

aur woh kehle lagi.......

SARIKA - hey..... you stand up.....what's your name???

jaise hi mam ne yeh kaha sabhi log piche dekhne lage aur mere uthte hi rashmika aur mohini bhi mujhe dekh gayiiiiii......aur dono khush ho gayi jaise ko khazana mil gaya ho unhe...
MOHINI - aaya toh hai... abhi iski class leti hun....

MAIN - VENKY......

SARIKA - kya kar rhe the tum abhi???

MAIN - kuch nahi mam.... woh note kr rhe the black board pe jo likha hua tha.....

mam mere paas aayi aur dheere se bolne lagi.....

SARIKA - acha black board mere badan pe laga hua hai kya???

MAIN - nhiiii mam.... main aapko q dekhunga......

SARIKA - apni copy dikhao mujhe.....

meri copy mam ne uthayi aur check karne lagi.... aaaj tak maine kuch likha hi nahi tha copy main
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KAJAL - tumne aaj tak kuch likha hi nahi hai....

VENKY - mam... jispe likhte the woh wali copy ghar pe reh gayi hai....

KAJAL - is period ke baad mujhe tum staff room main milo.... smjhe.....

VENKY - theeek hai mam....

phir maine chupchap likhte hue.... poori class khatm ki phir period khatm hone ki bell baji... aur mam nikalne lagi class se aur main bhi chal diya unke piche - piche staff room ki taraf....

mam ke peeche chalte hue main gaana gaate hue ja rha tha qki woh lag hi rhi thi itni khoobsurat.....



"" Chalun main tere peeche peeche

Baaki saare bandhan tod doon
Jo tere tak na jaaye
Us raste ko chhod doon
Har khwab mera umeed meri
Main tujhe jod doon

Sab rishte naate hans ke tod doon

Bas tujh se dil ka rishta jod doon
Jod doon ""

itne main staff room aa gaya aur mam apne cabin main chali gayi.... main bahar khada ho gaya.... phir thori der baad mujhe bulaya main andar chala gaya....

SHARIKA - hnnn toh bolo kya kar rhe the tum??.

Main - Kuch nahi mam....

SHARIKA - sach batao warna principle sir se kehke rusticate karwa doongi....

Main - ( main sochne laga agar bata dunga toh bhi gussa hongi aur nahi bataya toh rusticate kara Dengi.... chalo bata hi deta hun...)
mam woh main aapko dekh raha tha aaj aap bahut khoobsurat lag rhi thi....

SHARIKA - gusse main mujhe dekhte hue.... kya vichaar aaye mnnn main phir.....

main - kuch nhiiii mam...

SHARIKA - acha theek hai aainda khayal rakhna main tmhari teacher hun.... meri class main sahi se baithna.... samjhe....

main- ji mam.... waise mam bura mat manna.... aao sachme bahut khoobsurat ho....


yeh sunke mam thora blush karne lagi....

Sharika - acha... acha.... thanq.....
ab tum jao apne class main 2nd period shuru ho gaya hoga.....

MAIN - mam main kalse 4 din nahi aaunga....

SHARIKA - Q kya ho gaya.... q nahi aaoge....

MAIN - mam woh main bahar ja rha hun.... dubai...
islie nahi aaunga college.....

SHARIKA- okkk.... okkk... jao.... mere liye koi gift leke aan wahan se....

MAIN - OKKK mam zaroor....




phir main staff room se nikal ke class main aa gaya class main abhi teacher nahi aaye the....

main apna bag uthake mohini ke paas chala gaya aur unki seat par baith gaya... woh dono aapas main baat kar rhi thi aur mujhe ignore karne lagi....

mujhe yeh acha nahi laga aur maine bag uthaya... aur seedhe class ke bahar aa gaya aur bahar ki taraf chal diya....

woh dono mujhe pukarti hui class ke bahar aayi lekin main ruka nahi....

RASHMIKA - dekha gussa ho gaya.... bola tha ignore mat kro use...

MOHINI - are chilll kr yrrr jaega kahan wapas phir yahin ayega....

Rashmika - yrrr tmhari wajah se main bhi nahi boli usse abhi abhi toh main frnd bani thi uski itni jldi frndship toot jayegi yrrr...

MOHINI - kuch nhiiii hoga yrrrr... woh aisa hi hai thori der gussa rehta hai... phir sahi ho jata hai... abhi dekhna thori der baad garden main baithke class aa jaega....

phir woh dono mere piche piche garden main aaayi aur tabhi unhone dekha ki main bike le ke gate se nikal raha hun....

MOHINI- aaj ise pata nahi kya ho gaya.... pta nhiii kahan ja rhi hai class miss karke....

RASHMIKA - lagta hai aaj kuch jyada hi gussa ho gaya hai....

phir woh dono wapas class jati hain lakin unka bhi mnnn nahi lagta hai... aur dono ek class karke apne apne ghar chal deti hainnn.....

main ghar aaya aur fresh hone laga.... fresh hoke apne kapde pack kar ke so gaya.... phir 4 baje utha toh dekha mohini ki call aa rhi thi.... maine mobile uthake switchoff kar diya.....

phir kapde pehen ke bahar aaya aur auto main baith ke Airport aa gaya....

Airport par maine apna boarding paas liya.... phir thori der baad main ja ke plane main baith gaya.....


phir kuch waqt ke baad announcement hone lga....


“Ladies and gentlemen, this is vikram and I’m your chief flight attendant. On behalf of (Captain Roy and) the entire crew, welcome to Airdubai flight... non-stop service from mumbai to dubai....

At this time, make sure your seat backs and tray tables are in their full upright position and that your seat belt is correctly fastened. Also, your portable electronic devices must be set to ‘airplane’ mode until an announcement is made upon arrival.

Thank you.”

phir main thori der baad so gaya q ki mujhe flight main neend bahut aati hai....

3 ghante baad meri flight land ho gayi.... airport se nikal ke main bahar aaya aur taxi pe jaake baith gaya aur use location de di ( kal hi maine kajal se uski location maang li thi qki use surprise dena tha pabunch ke)...

phir thori der baad ek ghar ke saaamne gaadi ruki aur maine use kiraya dia aur bag uthake chal diya door ki taraf....

maine knock kiya....
kajal ne jaise hi gate khola maine bola surprise....
aur aake lag gayi mere gale.....

aaj ke liye itna hi....

continued...

ViLLAiN

Superb update bhai

 

[Bilal jan]

UPDATE - 7
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LOCATION - MUMBAI
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PLACE - VENKY's RESIDENCE
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venky rocky ka game baja ke apne ghar wapas aa gaya....

time dekha toh 9 baj gaye the raaat ke.....

VENKY - (mnnn main) saala bahut time lag gaya venky ke kaand main.....

khana bahar se khake aaya tha islie khana banane ki koi tension nahi thiiii.....

phir usne apne kapde utare aur chal diya fresh hone...
fresh hoke bahar aaya aur mirror ke saamne khade ho ke apni body ko dekhne laga.....

Venky ki body kaafi kasi hui thi..... uske badan main chest par 3 goliyon ke nishan jaise the.....usne ek nishaan par haath phera aur kehne laga.....

VENKY - ek toh khatm do aur bache hai yeh nishan dene wale.....

dusre ko is mobile se pakdunga phir teesre ka bhi kuch pata chal hi jayega....aur mobile ko dekhne laga.... Bosss i am coming.....

phir venky apne bed pe let gaya aur kuch sochne laga......
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FLASHBACK
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LOCATION - DELHI
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4 saal pehle ki baat hai venky ne apna admission mumbai ke kisi government school main karaya tha aur wahan ke principal se baat kr li thi ki sir main sirf exam dene aaunga....

pehle toh principal ne bahut aanakani ki phir venky ne bahut minnatein ki tab principal sir se use approval de diya....

phir venky mumbai se delhi aa gaya tha... aur din bhar bsss ghoomta rehta tha...

Ek roz venky raat main bahar ghooom raha tha ki tabhi kuch ladke aaye (un ladkon ki age lagbhag 23-24 saal hogiiii)....

Un logon se chaku dikhate hue kaha jitna bhi rokda hai
de de warna jaaan se maara jayega bache.....

venky ne 500 rupaye pocket se nikaal ke de diye.....

LADKA 2 - aur dena be warna abhi maar dunga.....

VENKY - mere paas aur kuch nahi hai.....

LADKA 1 - Yeh jo locket latak raha chain ke saath ise de....

venky ne apna locket pakda aur bhagne laga abhi thori hi door gaya tha ki piche se ladke ne chaku faink kar maara aur woh venky ke pair main ja ke laga....

venky muh ke side road par gira tha..... jiski wajah se uske muh main dard toh ho hi rha tha saath main chaku lagne ki wajah se pair main asehneeey peeda thi....

woh ladke bhi venky ki taraf doud kar aane lage..... venky ne piche mudkar dekha toh woh log kaafi paas aa gaye the....

usne uthne ko try kiya lekin uth hi nahi paaya.... bhaagna toh bahut door ki baat thi....

ek ladka paas aaya aur apna pair chaku pe rakh kar use aur ghusane laga.....

venky dard ki wajah se bahut zor cheenkha......

aaaaahhhhh...... bachooooooooo.... koi...haiiiiii.....helppppp......meee........bachooooooo.......aaaaaaahhhhhhhh.......chorrrrrr.....dooooo.....mujhe...........

itne main hi saamne se ek gaaadi aati hui dikhayi di gaadi main se us admi ne dekha ki kuch ladke ek ladke ko maaar rahe hain....

toh usne gaadi ek kinare roki aur apni revolver le ke bahar nikla...

rovolver dekhte hi woh saare ladke bhaaag gaye.... ab wahan road par pada tha venky woh us ladke ke paaas aaaya aur pooochne laga kaun the yeh log....

VENKY - mujhe nahi pata main bahar tehelne ke liye nikla tha unlogon ne mujhe chaaku dikha kar lootne ki koshish mera locket lene lage toh main bhaga toh un logon ne chaku maar diya mere pair main....

acha mera naam rocky hai chalo hospital chalte hai tmhara bahut khooon nikal raha hai.....

(sahi samjhe yeh wahi rocky hai jisko villain/venky ne maara diya tha last update main......)

VENKY - main chal nahi paunga bahut dard hi raha hai...

phir rocky ne use sahara dekar apni car tak laaya aur usme piche wali seat par lita diya...

phir chal diya hospital....

hospital wahan se 5 km par tha jaaate jaaate 20 min lag gaye qki traffic acha khasa tha... qki abhi raaat ke 8 hi baje the....

hospital pahunch ke use emergency ward main le gaya sahara deke....

qki sabhi doctor raaat main jyadatar emergency ward main hi HoTe hainnn....

wahan pahunch ke doctor ko bula ke laya rocky pehle toh doctor ne poocha kaise hua yeh rocky ne bataya ki kuch ladkon ne chaku maar diya.......

toh doctor ne kaha yeh police case hai pehle police ko aa Jane do tabhi treatment hoga.... rocky ne chupke use 5000 hazaar rupaye pakdaye.....

phir doctor poochne laga kahan hai patient..... (paise ke aage bhoot bhaagte hai toh yeh doctor kya cheeez hai) .....

ROCKY - aapke cabin main....

phir doctor ne nurse ko bola samaan lane ko aur khud chal diya cabin main thori der main nurse samaan le ke aa gayi toh lag gaya doctor kaaam pe.......

phir uske ghaaw ko doctor ne cotton se saaaf kiya aur
aur taanke lagane lage qki bahut jyada cut lag gaya tha pair main.....

taanke lagake bandage kr dia ghaaw ko aur dard ki tablet de di....

Venky ne use kha liya..... phir thori der baad.....

ROCKY - chalen ab ghar agar aaram ho toh...

VENKY - hnnn chalo...

Phir venky rocky ke sahare ke saaath car tak aaya aur baith gaya.....

ROCKY gaadi chalane laga phir venky ne apne rooom ka pata bataya.... 25 minute lage pahunchne main....

ROCKY - tum kya karte ho.....

VENKY - kuch nahiiiii...

ROCKY - koi kaaam karoge agar milega....

VENKY - hnnn zarooor.....

ROCKY - yeh lo mera card jab thik ho jaaana achese tabhi aaana.... thik hai....

VENKY - jiii thik haiiii..
bye bro..... nd thanks for the help aaj kal ke zamane koi nahi karta..... thanq so much....

ROCKY - ok ok ab jao..... aur aaram se jaana.....

PHIR rocky bhi chal diya apni manzil par aur venky bhi apne ghar ki taraf......
continued......

aaj ke liye itna hi.....
keep supporting

ViLLaiN

Lajwab Awesome Superbbbb Speechless update..........
Bohat khob superbbb.....

 

[Bilal jan]

UPDATE - 8
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LOCATION - DELHI
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PLACE - VENKY's ROOM
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FLASHBACK CONTINUED......
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venky par hue hamle ko aaj 10 din ho gaye the uska ghaaw bhi ab bhar gaya tha aur taanke bhi cut gaye the.....

woh apne rooom main tehel raha tha...

phir use yaad aata hai ki ROCKY ne usko apna card diya tha.... woh use doodne lagta hai.....

par use yddd nahi aa raha tha ki kahan rakha hua hai card....

phir woh chair par baith jaata hai aur sochne lagta hai ki tabhi......

use woh card bed ke niche pada hua dikhayi deta hai woh jhatttt se use utha leta hai...aur uski location dekhta hai.....

phir venky fresh hota hai aur kapde pehen ke ghar se bahar nikalta hai.....

aur main road par aata hai aur auto ko rokta hai.... aur address bata ke bolta hai yahan chaloge.....

auto wala kehta hai chalenge q nahiiii sahab baithiye..... lekin 100 rupaye bhada lagega.....

VENKY - hnnn bhai aaap chalo......

phir auto wala chal deta hai aur ek bade se bunglow ke aage auto rok deta hai....

venky use paise dekar rafuchakkar karta hai.... aur chal deta hai gate ke paasss.....
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PLACE - BOSS's BUNGLOW
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GATEKEEPER - hnnn bhai kisse milna???

VENKY - ROCKY bhai se.....

GATEKEEPER - naam kya hai???

VENKY - Jiii Venky.....

GATEKEEPER - okkk... ruko poooch lun sahab se....

phir gatekeeper rocky ko phone laga deta hai aur kehta hai ki koi venky naaam ka ladka aaya hai kehta hai rocky bhai se milna hai....

saamne se....... bhej do use andar.....

GATEKEEPER - Jiii bhai.....

phir gatekeeper gate kholta hai aur venky andar aata hai....

gatekeeper kehta aap chale jao andar haaal main hi sahab baithe hue hain....

phir venky andar jaane lagta hai ek nazar bunglow ko dekhta hai kaafi badi jagah main bana hua tha white colour se ranga hua tha aur bunglow ke saamne ek bahut bada garden tha....

jisme tarah tarah ke ped-podhe lage hue the..... left side main servant quarters bane hue the....

ek cheez venky ne notice kiya ki wahan security bahut hai gate pe hi 2 gurads khade the aur boundary par kayi guards pehra de rahe the tehelte hue....

Venky stairs pe chadte hue ghar ke andar dakhil hua.... saamne sofe par use rocky baitha dikh gaya....

aur saaath main koi aur bhi baitha hua tha....

ROCKY - aao venky ab pair kaisa hai tmhara....

VENKY - jiii thik hai ab.... aapne bulaya tha islie aa gaya....
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ROCKY - inse milo yeh hai boss.... main inke liye hi kaaam karta hun....


VENKY - venky boss ko dekhta hai haath jod ke pranaam karta hai....

BOSS - toh kaunsa kaam kar lete ho....

VENKY - sir main hacking main maahir hun....

BOSS - rocky ek kaaam karo isko 2 mahine ki training ke liye uk bhejne ka intezaaam kro...

qki hacking toh ise aaati hi hai saaath main agar fight karna seekh gaya... toh banda bahut kaaam ka hai yeh....

VENKY - lekin aaplog kaam kaunsa karte ho???

BOSS - jab laut kar aaoge tab batayenge....

theek hai ab jao room main rest kro.... aaj se tum yahin rahoge.....

phir rocky use 2nd floor pe le jata hai.... aur uska room dikha ke bolta hai....

thori der rest kr lo abhi paasport banane ke liye thori der main ek aadmi ayega.... toh thori der rest karke apne ghar se documents le aana.....

aur hnnnn driver ko bol dena woh gaadi se leke chala jayega tumhe......

VENKY - OK.....

phir thor der rest karta hai phir uthke fresh hota hai... aur bahar aata hai...

ek driver se kehta hai gaadi nikalo mere ghar chalna hai.... phir driver gaadi nikaalta hai aur venky usme baithta hai phir chal dete hain....

venky ghar pe pahunch ke apne saare documents aur zaroorat ka samaan aur kapde le leta hai aur ek bag main rakhkar bahar aata hai....

aur makaan malik ko keys aur baaki ka rent dekar kehta hai ki ab woh kahin aur shift ho raha hai....

phir gaadi main baithke woh wapas aa jata hai.... haal main dakhil hota hai toh pata chalta hai ki paasport banane wala aa gaya hai....

woh use zaroorat ke hisaab se documents deta hai....

aur phir paasport officer kehta hai 3 din main aapka paasport ready ho jaega visa ke saaath aaap taiyari kro jaane ki....

VENKY - taiyari kya karni hai.. mujhe aap paasport jaise doge... bsss meri taiyaari ho jaegi....

paasport officer - ok..... toh phir main chalta hun....

phir paasport officer uthke jaane lagta hai.....

AFTER 3 DAYS.......

venky airport par baitha hua tha saath main rocky bhi tha.. aur saath main thi ek ladki jo ki venky ke saath ja rhi thi.....

ROCKY - dekho jahan tum ja rhe ho wahan se tum ek undefeatable fighter banne kj koshish karna.... pehle toh woh tumhe sikhayenge fight karna aur uske baad hogi fight.....

yddd rakhna venky death fighting hoti hai wahan pe..... main tmhara intezaar karunga....

ROCKY - Best of luck bro.....

VENKY - thanks bro.... waise main aapko nirash nahi karunga....

ROCKY - Theek hai... tmhare saath nisha ko bhej raha hun yeh tmhare khane pine ka khayal rakhegi.....

ROCKY - bye.....

VENKY - bye....

phir venky aur nisha chal dete hain apni manzil ki taraf......

aaj ke liye itna hi....
continued....

Lajwab Awesome Superbbbb Speechless update..........
Bohat khob superbbb.....

 

[Bilal jan]

UPDATE - 9
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LOCATION - MUMBAI
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PLACE - VENKY's RESIDENCE
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Venky abhi bhi so raha tha raat ke 12 baj rahe the.... tabhi kisi ka phone aane se woh jag gaya.....

mobile uthake dekha toh kajal ki call thi venky ne call pick ki....

VENKY - hnnn kajal bolo kya hua??? itne time call kar diya....

KAJAL- nhiii kr sakti kya.... bolo???

VENKY - kar sakti ho yrrrr..... tum nahi krogi toh kaun karega....

KAJAL- tmhari bahut yddd aa rhi hai....

VENKY- q phir khujli hone lgi kya???

KAJAL - httt pagal.... maine islie call kiya tha ki main safely pahunch gayiiii hun... lekin tmhe toh lagta hai meri fikr hi nahi hai.... na hi koi call kiya na hi msg....

VENKY- are main aaj bahut tired feeel kar raha tha islie so gaya tha....

KAJAL - q aaaj kisko ghodi bana diya....

VENKY - pagal ho kya..... college main aaj lab thi toh 3 periods khade hi rhe.... by the way kab pahunchi tum???

KAJAL- bsss 1 hour hua hai..... yahan aaaye tum bhi aa jao saath milkar ghooome.....

VENKY - sach.... kaho toh aa jaun...

KAJAL - hnnn baba aa jao.... plzzzz

VENKY - theeek hai prson aaata hun...

KAJAL - really tum aaoge.... omg mujhe vishwaas nahi ho rha.....

VENKY - jab ayenge tab vishvaaas ho jaega.... lekin 2 din se jyada nahi rukenge...

KAJAL - theek hai aao to sahi pehle.....

VENKY - ok....byeee....

KAJAL - bye.... gn

VENKY - good night......

Phir venky call cut karke mobile rakh deta hai aur phir apni soch main gum ho jaata hai.....
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(FLASHBACK)
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LOCATION - UK (NEWYORK)
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aeroplane main venky aur nisha apni seats par so rahe the tabhi announcement hone laga.....
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(“Ladies and gentlemen, we have just been cleared to land at the ??? airport.....

Please make sure one last time your seat belt is securely fastened. The flight attendants are currently passing around the cabin to make a final compliance check and pick up any remaining cups and glasses.....

Thank you.”.....)
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announcement sunke dono jag gaye aur apna huliya theek karne lage...

thori der main flight land ho gayi aur dono apna luggage leke airport se nikalne lage....

Airport ke bahar hi unhe rocky ka bheja hua banda mil gaya jo ki ek paper pe venky likh ke khada tha.....

VENKY - hiii i am venky...

UNKNOWN - i am michael....

MICHAEL - sir aap dono gaadi main baith jaiye main luggage rakhta hun....

VENKY - OK.....

phir dono gaadi main baith jaate hain... aur michael luggage rakh ke gaaadi main aake baith jaata hai....

phir michael gaadi chalate hue apne ghar ke bahar aake rukta hai....

MICHAEL- aap ko yahin rukna hai 2 mahine...zaroorat ka sab samaan rakhwa diya hai....aur kisi cheez ki zaroorat ho toh mujhe call kar lena yeh lijiye mera number...

VENKY - ok shukriya....

phir woh dono ghar ke andar chal dete hain.... yeh 1BHK flat tha....

ab aapko thora nisha ka indroduction kara deta hun
qki yeh 1BHK flat hai.. toh introduction toh banta hai.....

NISHA age lagbhag 20 saal hogi dikhne main ek dam hot lagti thi.... gori gori jaangein.... patli kamar aur chati kafi badi thi pata nahi khud mehnat kiya tha apni chati pe ya kisi ne ki thi..... par thi ek dam kadak maaal... saala aadmi dekhke hi neutral ho jaye....

dono apna apna samaan set karne lage.... india se uk ki doori bahut jyada hai islie flight main baithe baithe dono bahut thak gaye the.....

islie jldi se khana mangaya bahar se aur khane lage....
khana khake dono ne sone ka socha phir nisha thora sochme main gum ho gayi....

NISHA - (mnnn main yrrr ab kya karun ek hi room hai... iske saathsoungi toh pata nahi kab iske upar main chad jaun qki mujhe raat main sote hue pillow pe pair rakhke sona acha lagta hai warna neend nahi aati....

aur agar main iske paas soyi aur raat main pair chala gaya toh yeh kya sochega....main bahar hi so jaungi haaal main sofe pe
yeh sahi rehega....)

NISHA - ek kaaam karo aap rooom main so jao main yahan so jaungi....

VENKY - nahi tum so jao main so jaunga yahi.... theek hai....

NISHA - thik hai....

VENKY - good night....

NISHA - good night.....
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aaj ke liye itna hi..
continued....

ViLLAiN

Lajwab Awesome Superbbbb Speechless update..........
Bohat khob superbbb.....