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story ki main heroine kaun ho sakti hai??.

  • rashmika

  • mohini

  • kajal

  • nisha

  • some one else


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A hero can kill someone to save the world...

but a villain can destroy the world to save one...


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Jaguaar

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UPDATE - 10
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LOCATION - MUMBAI
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PALCE - SAGAR UNIVERSITY
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NOTE - AB SE STORY MAIN VILLAIN AUR VENKY KI JAGAH PE " MAIN "USE HOGA....
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(PRESENT TIME)

maine bike ko parking main khadi ki... aur apni nigahen idhar udhar dodane laga ki shayad bahar hi rashmika aur mohini mil jayen....

lekin aisa hua nahi.... islie maine socha chalo pehle canteen main kuch pet pooja hikar lete hain.... islie main canteen ki taraf chal diya.... abhi canteen thori hi dooor thi..... ohhh teri yeh period toh sarika mam ka hai.... main yeh kaisa bhool gaya....

jaldi chal venky warna madam ki entry scene nahi dekh payegaa.....

phir main lagbhag dodte hue class main enter hua aur piche wali sit pe baith gaya.....

aur tabhi saamne se prakat hui laakhon dilon ki dhadkan
hmari sarika jain.... ufff kya lag rhi thi..... pink colour ka blouse aur saath main black colour ki saadi aur mathe pe black colour ki hi bindi lagayi hui.....

bole toh doston ek dam kaatilana loook tha... bsss aisa lag raha tha swarg se koi apsara dharti pe utar aayi ho....

(kuch jyada toh nahi ho gayi tareef frnds😂😂😂)....

madam ke enter karte hi sab good morning wish karne lage....

maine bhi good morning wish kiya mam ko aur phir mam ne sabko baithne ko kaha.....
sab apni apni sit par baith gaye... phir mam ne padhana start kiya aur hamne unhe taadna start kiya....

aise hi 20 minutes nikal gaye...

wahin rashmika aur mohini ne piche mudkar kai brrr dekha toh main unhe nahi dikha qki main toh desk pe sar rakh ke mam ko dekh raha tha isiliye unhe main nhi dikha....

Rashmika aur mohini yahi soch rhi thi ki main nahi aaya hun aaj.....

MOHINI - rashmi lagta hai aaj kutta nahi aaya....

RASHMIKA - lagta toh hai ki nahi aaya....

MOHINI - bata deta toh main bhi nahi aati.... bahut boring lag rha hai.....

RASHMIKA- hnmm yrrrr.... yeh class padh len phir garden main baithenge kya bolti ho??? qki aaj half day bhi hai 4 hi class hogi....

MOHINI - hnnn thik hai.....

phir dono padhai pe dhyaaan kendrit karne lagi.... tabhi mam piche mudhi aur unki nazar achanak mere upar gayi.... lekin main unhe hi dekhta raha... yeh dekhkar mam ko gussa bahut aaya....

aur woh kehle lagi.......

SARIKA - hey..... you stand up.....what's your name???

jaise hi mam ne yeh kaha sabhi log piche dekhne lage aur mere uthte hi rashmika aur mohini bhi mujhe dekh gayiiiiii......aur dono khush ho gayi jaise ko khazana mil gaya ho unhe...
MOHINI - aaya toh hai... abhi iski class leti hun....

MAIN - VENKY......

SARIKA - kya kar rhe the tum abhi???

MAIN - kuch nahi mam.... woh note kr rhe the black board pe jo likha hua tha.....

mam mere paas aayi aur dheere se bolne lagi.....

SARIKA - acha black board mere badan pe laga hua hai kya???

MAIN - nhiiii mam.... main aapko q dekhunga......

SARIKA - apni copy dikhao mujhe.....

meri copy mam ne uthayi aur check karne lagi.... aaaj tak maine kuch likha hi nahi tha copy main
...

KAJAL - tumne aaj tak kuch likha hi nahi hai....

VENKY - mam... jispe likhte the woh wali copy ghar pe reh gayi hai....

KAJAL - is period ke baad mujhe tum staff room main milo.... smjhe.....

VENKY - theeek hai mam....

phir maine chupchap likhte hue.... poori class khatm ki phir period khatm hone ki bell baji... aur mam nikalne lagi class se aur main bhi chal diya unke piche - piche staff room ki taraf....

mam ke peeche chalte hue main gaana gaate hue ja rha tha qki woh lag hi rhi thi itni khoobsurat.....



"" Chalun main tere peeche peeche

Baaki saare bandhan tod doon
Jo tere tak na jaaye
Us raste ko chhod doon
Har khwab mera umeed meri
Main tujhe jod doon

Sab rishte naate hans ke tod doon

Bas tujh se dil ka rishta jod doon
Jod doon ""

itne main staff room aa gaya aur mam apne cabin main chali gayi.... main bahar khada ho gaya.... phir thori der baad mujhe bulaya main andar chala gaya....

SHARIKA - hnnn toh bolo kya kar rhe the tum??.

Main - Kuch nahi mam....

SHARIKA - sach batao warna principle sir se kehke rusticate karwa doongi....

Main - ( main sochne laga agar bata dunga toh bhi gussa hongi aur nahi bataya toh rusticate kara Dengi.... chalo bata hi deta hun...)
mam woh main aapko dekh raha tha aaj aap bahut khoobsurat lag rhi thi....

SHARIKA - gusse main mujhe dekhte hue.... kya vichaar aaye mnnn main phir.....

main - kuch nhiiii mam...

SHARIKA - acha theek hai aainda khayal rakhna main tmhari teacher hun.... meri class main sahi se baithna.... samjhe....

main- ji mam.... waise mam bura mat manna.... aao sachme bahut khoobsurat ho....


yeh sunke mam thora blush karne lagi....

Sharika - acha... acha.... thanq.....
ab tum jao apne class main 2nd period shuru ho gaya hoga.....

MAIN - mam main kalse 4 din nahi aaunga....

SHARIKA - Q kya ho gaya.... q nahi aaoge....

MAIN - mam woh main bahar ja rha hun.... dubai...
islie nahi aaunga college.....

SHARIKA- okkk.... okkk... jao.... mere liye koi gift leke aan wahan se....

MAIN - OKKK mam zaroor....




phir main staff room se nikal ke class main aa gaya class main abhi teacher nahi aaye the....

main apna bag uthake mohini ke paas chala gaya aur unki seat par baith gaya... woh dono aapas main baat kar rhi thi aur mujhe ignore karne lagi....

mujhe yeh acha nahi laga aur maine bag uthaya... aur seedhe class ke bahar aa gaya aur bahar ki taraf chal diya....

woh dono mujhe pukarti hui class ke bahar aayi lekin main ruka nahi....

RASHMIKA - dekha gussa ho gaya.... bola tha ignore mat kro use...

MOHINI - are chilll kr yrrr jaega kahan wapas phir yahin ayega....

Rashmika - yrrr tmhari wajah se main bhi nahi boli usse abhi abhi toh main frnd bani thi uski itni jldi frndship toot jayegi yrrr...

MOHINI - kuch nhiiii hoga yrrrr... woh aisa hi hai thori der gussa rehta hai... phir sahi ho jata hai... abhi dekhna thori der baad garden main baithke class aa jaega....

phir woh dono mere piche piche garden main aaayi aur tabhi unhone dekha ki main bike le ke gate se nikal raha hun....

MOHINI- aaj ise pata nahi kya ho gaya.... pta nhiii kahan ja rhi hai class miss karke....

RASHMIKA - lagta hai aaj kuch jyada hi gussa ho gaya hai....

phir woh dono wapas class jati hain lakin unka bhi mnnn nahi lagta hai... aur dono ek class karke apne apne ghar chal deti hainnn.....

main ghar aaya aur fresh hone laga.... fresh hoke apne kapde pack kar ke so gaya.... phir 4 baje utha toh dekha mohini ki call aa rhi thi.... maine mobile uthake switchoff kar diya.....

phir kapde pehen ke bahar aaya aur auto main baith ke Airport aa gaya....

Airport par maine apna boarding paas liya.... phir thori der baad main ja ke plane main baith gaya.....


phir kuch waqt ke baad announcement hone lga....


“Ladies and gentlemen, this is vikram and I’m your chief flight attendant. On behalf of (Captain Roy and) the entire crew, welcome to Airdubai flight... non-stop service from mumbai to dubai....

At this time, make sure your seat backs and tray tables are in their full upright position and that your seat belt is correctly fastened. Also, your portable electronic devices must be set to ‘airplane’ mode until an announcement is made upon arrival.

Thank you.”

phir main thori der baad so gaya q ki mujhe flight main neend bahut aati hai....

3 ghante baad meri flight land ho gayi.... airport se nikal ke main bahar aaya aur taxi pe jaake baith gaya aur use location de di ( kal hi maine kajal se uski location maang li thi qki use surprise dena tha pabunch ke)...

phir thori der baad ek ghar ke saaamne gaadi ruki aur maine use kiraya dia aur bag uthake chal diya door ki taraf....

maine knock kiya....
kajal ne jaise hi gate khola maine bola surprise....
aur aake lag gayi mere gale.....

aaj ke liye itna hi....

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PLACE- UNDERGROUND FIGHT ARENA....



PLACE INFO----


(DEATH FIGHTING) ...


Ek ladka jo dikhne main average tha i mean saanwla tha lekin usne body apni achi banayi hui thi...
sunsaan raasto se guzar raha tha. raaat ke dus baj chuke the aamtor par mumbai main toh itne time bahut chehel pehel hoti hai.. qki yeh mashoor hai mumbai dekhna hai toh raaat ko dekho q raaat ka nazara hi kuch aur hota hai.... anyway ab kahani pe aate hain toh yeh jagah mumbai ki bheed bhaad ilake se dooor thiiiiii.....
aur woh chalte hue ek factory ke gate ke paas ruka aur aas paas dekhne laga use koi dikh hi nahi raha tha ... Aur woh gate khol ke ander jaane laga... dekhne main woh factory kaafi purani lag rhi thi machines jyadatar kharab padi hui thiiiii.......
Woh dheere aage badhne laga jitna aage ja rha tha utni hi chillane ki aawaz aa rahi thi....
aage chalte hue use niche jaane ke lie stairs mili woh niche jaaane laga....
niche ek haaaal bana hua tha aur bich main ek ring bani hui thi aur aas paas lagbhag 700 log the sab apne apne fighter ka naaam lekar unhe cheer kar rahe the.... dheere woh ladka paas gaya ring ke aur dekha ki ek fighter ko dusra fighter uske upar baithke mukke maaar raha tha aur pehla fighter chupchap jameen par pada hua tha lag rha tha woh mar gaya tha.... phir refiree ne dusre fighter ko uske upar se hataya aur pehle fighter ko check karne laga aur phir announced kiya fighter is dead... and the winner is sam.....
aur phir public cheer up karne lagi... sam.. sam. sammmmmm. sammm.....
sam- sam ko harana mushqil hi nahi namumkin hai....
hai koi maai ka laal jo sam ko hara sake...
phir bheed se nikal ke woh ladka bahar aaaya aur ring ke andar chala gaya aur kehle laga...
itna gumaan mat kar apni taqat par tujhse jyada takatwar insan mitti main mil gaye...

sam- tu ladega bol.... bakchodi mat kar...

ladka- off course ladunga beta.

sam - yeh death match hai....
yahan se bachke zinda nahi jayega abhi tere khelne khane ki umar hai chala ja yahan se warna maara jayegaa...

ladka - q dar gaya kya??

sam- nahi main q darunga tujh jaise chuze se..

ladka - chal phir aaja fight kar jhaaaantu...

yeh sab sunke sam ko bahut gussa aata hai aur wo fight ke liye haaan kar deta hai...
refiree rules samjhata hai ki is fight main koi rules nahi hai....
phir horn bajta hai aur fight shuru ho jaaati hai

sam us ladke ke paas aata hai aur ek flying kick maarta hai ladke ki ribs par aur ladka gir jaaata hai...
woh ladka uthne wala hota hai ki sam uske paas jaata hai aur uske face aur ribs pAr punch maarne lagta hai phir sam khada hota hai aur jump karke us ladke ke upar girta hai....
aur ladke muh se khooon behne lagta hai....


sam- kaha tha na mat kar fight maara jayega chuze....

yeh sun ke woh ladka khada ho jaata aur kehta hai beta main kuch kar nahi raha toh islie apne aapko bahut bada fighter samajhne laga chal aaja be harami ki aulad...
yeh sunke sam uske paaas dodke aane lagta hai use maaarne ke lie aur apna haath upar uthata hai lekin sam uski taraf dor ke uski gardan par punch maaarta hai aur sam 2 kadam door jaaake girta hai aur uth hi nahi pata dobara...
phir refiree check karta hai aur kehta how it is possible... dead??
phir public shor machane lagti hai.
yahoooooo. yoooo..... lekin naaam toh koi jaanta nahi tha islie sirf yooo aur yahooo hi keh rahe the....
phir refiree us ladke ke paaas aaya aur kehne laga...

kaun ho tum?????



KEHNE KO TOH MAIN RAVAN BHI HUN RAM BHI HUN....
PAR IN JAISO KE LIYE MAIN HUN......
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SARIKA - apni copy dikhao mujhe.....

meri copy mam ne uthayi aur check karne lagi.... aaaj tak maine kuch likha hi nahi tha copy main
...

KAJAL - tumne aaj tak kuch likha hi nahi hai....

VENKY - mam... jispe likhte the woh wali copy ghar pe reh gayi hai....
Presence of Mind kamaal ka hey....:)
 

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kingkhankar

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SARIKA - apni copy dikhao mujhe.....

meri copy mam ne uthayi aur check karne lagi.... aaaj tak maine kuch likha hi nahi tha copy main
...

KAJAL - tumne aaj tak kuch likha hi nahi hai....

VENKY - mam... jispe likhte the woh wali copy ghar pe reh gayi hai....

KAJAL - is period ke baad mujhe tum staff room main milo.... smjhe.....
This only indicates that Kajal does not know the real Venky.
Otherwise she will be telling "Let's go to your house to check...":) instead of inviting him to her cabin...
 

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UPDATE - 10
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LOCATION - MUMBAI
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PALCE - SAGAR UNIVERSITY
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NOTE - AB SE STORY MAIN VILLAIN AUR VENKY KI JAGAH PE " MAIN "USE HOGA....
___________________________________
(PRESENT TIME)

maine bike ko parking main khadi ki... aur apni nigahen idhar udhar dodane laga ki shayad bahar hi rashmika aur mohini mil jayen....

lekin aisa hua nahi.... islie maine socha chalo pehle canteen main kuch pet pooja hikar lete hain.... islie main canteen ki taraf chal diya.... abhi canteen thori hi dooor thi..... ohhh teri yeh period toh sarika mam ka hai.... main yeh kaisa bhool gaya....

jaldi chal venky warna madam ki entry scene nahi dekh payegaa.....

phir main lagbhag dodte hue class main enter hua aur piche wali sit pe baith gaya.....

aur tabhi saamne se prakat hui laakhon dilon ki dhadkan
hmari sarika jain.... ufff kya lag rhi thi..... pink colour ka blouse aur saath main black colour ki saadi aur mathe pe black colour ki hi bindi lagayi hui.....

bole toh doston ek dam kaatilana loook tha... bsss aisa lag raha tha swarg se koi apsara dharti pe utar aayi ho....

(kuch jyada toh nahi ho gayi tareef frnds😂😂😂)....

madam ke enter karte hi sab good morning wish karne lage....

maine bhi good morning wish kiya mam ko aur phir mam ne sabko baithne ko kaha.....
sab apni apni sit par baith gaye... phir mam ne padhana start kiya aur hamne unhe taadna start kiya....

aise hi 20 minutes nikal gaye...

wahin rashmika aur mohini ne piche mudkar kai brrr dekha toh main unhe nahi dikha qki main toh desk pe sar rakh ke mam ko dekh raha tha isiliye unhe main nhi dikha....

Rashmika aur mohini yahi soch rhi thi ki main nahi aaya hun aaj.....

MOHINI - rashmi lagta hai aaj kutta nahi aaya....

RASHMIKA - lagta toh hai ki nahi aaya....

MOHINI - bata deta toh main bhi nahi aati.... bahut boring lag rha hai.....

RASHMIKA- hnmm yrrrr.... yeh class padh len phir garden main baithenge kya bolti ho??? qki aaj half day bhi hai 4 hi class hogi....

MOHINI - hnnn thik hai.....

phir dono padhai pe dhyaaan kendrit karne lagi.... tabhi mam piche mudhi aur unki nazar achanak mere upar gayi.... lekin main unhe hi dekhta raha... yeh dekhkar mam ko gussa bahut aaya....

aur woh kehle lagi.......

SARIKA - hey..... you stand up.....what's your name???

jaise hi mam ne yeh kaha sabhi log piche dekhne lage aur mere uthte hi rashmika aur mohini bhi mujhe dekh gayiiiiii......aur dono khush ho gayi jaise ko khazana mil gaya ho unhe...
MOHINI - aaya toh hai... abhi iski class leti hun....

MAIN - VENKY......

SARIKA - kya kar rhe the tum abhi???

MAIN - kuch nahi mam.... woh note kr rhe the black board pe jo likha hua tha.....

mam mere paas aayi aur dheere se bolne lagi.....

SARIKA - acha black board mere badan pe laga hua hai kya???

MAIN - nhiiii mam.... main aapko q dekhunga......

SARIKA - apni copy dikhao mujhe.....

meri copy mam ne uthayi aur check karne lagi.... aaaj tak maine kuch likha hi nahi tha copy main
...

KAJAL - tumne aaj tak kuch likha hi nahi hai....

VENKY - mam... jispe likhte the woh wali copy ghar pe reh gayi hai....

KAJAL - is period ke baad mujhe tum staff room main milo.... smjhe.....

VENKY - theeek hai mam....

phir maine chupchap likhte hue.... poori class khatm ki phir period khatm hone ki bell baji... aur mam nikalne lagi class se aur main bhi chal diya unke piche - piche staff room ki taraf....

mam ke peeche chalte hue main gaana gaate hue ja rha tha qki woh lag hi rhi thi itni khoobsurat.....



"" Chalun main tere peeche peeche

Baaki saare bandhan tod doon
Jo tere tak na jaaye
Us raste ko chhod doon
Har khwab mera umeed meri
Main tujhe jod doon

Sab rishte naate hans ke tod doon

Bas tujh se dil ka rishta jod doon
Jod doon ""

itne main staff room aa gaya aur mam apne cabin main chali gayi.... main bahar khada ho gaya.... phir thori der baad mujhe bulaya main andar chala gaya....

SHARIKA - hnnn toh bolo kya kar rhe the tum??.

Main - Kuch nahi mam....

SHARIKA - sach batao warna principle sir se kehke rusticate karwa doongi....

Main - ( main sochne laga agar bata dunga toh bhi gussa hongi aur nahi bataya toh rusticate kara Dengi.... chalo bata hi deta hun...)
mam woh main aapko dekh raha tha aaj aap bahut khoobsurat lag rhi thi....

SHARIKA - gusse main mujhe dekhte hue.... kya vichaar aaye mnnn main phir.....

main - kuch nhiiii mam...

SHARIKA - acha theek hai aainda khayal rakhna main tmhari teacher hun.... meri class main sahi se baithna.... samjhe....

main- ji mam.... waise mam bura mat manna.... aao sachme bahut khoobsurat ho....


yeh sunke mam thora blush karne lagi....

Sharika - acha... acha.... thanq.....
ab tum jao apne class main 2nd period shuru ho gaya hoga.....

MAIN - mam main kalse 4 din nahi aaunga....

SHARIKA - Q kya ho gaya.... q nahi aaoge....

MAIN - mam woh main bahar ja rha hun.... dubai...
islie nahi aaunga college.....

SHARIKA- okkk.... okkk... jao.... mere liye koi gift leke aan wahan se....

MAIN - OKKK mam zaroor....




phir main staff room se nikal ke class main aa gaya class main abhi teacher nahi aaye the....

main apna bag uthake mohini ke paas chala gaya aur unki seat par baith gaya... woh dono aapas main baat kar rhi thi aur mujhe ignore karne lagi....

mujhe yeh acha nahi laga aur maine bag uthaya... aur seedhe class ke bahar aa gaya aur bahar ki taraf chal diya....

woh dono mujhe pukarti hui class ke bahar aayi lekin main ruka nahi....

RASHMIKA - dekha gussa ho gaya.... bola tha ignore mat kro use...

MOHINI - are chilll kr yrrr jaega kahan wapas phir yahin ayega....

Rashmika - yrrr tmhari wajah se main bhi nahi boli usse abhi abhi toh main frnd bani thi uski itni jldi frndship toot jayegi yrrr...

MOHINI - kuch nhiiii hoga yrrrr... woh aisa hi hai thori der gussa rehta hai... phir sahi ho jata hai... abhi dekhna thori der baad garden main baithke class aa jaega....

phir woh dono mere piche piche garden main aaayi aur tabhi unhone dekha ki main bike le ke gate se nikal raha hun....

MOHINI- aaj ise pata nahi kya ho gaya.... pta nhiii kahan ja rhi hai class miss karke....

RASHMIKA - lagta hai aaj kuch jyada hi gussa ho gaya hai....

phir woh dono wapas class jati hain lakin unka bhi mnnn nahi lagta hai... aur dono ek class karke apne apne ghar chal deti hainnn.....

main ghar aaya aur fresh hone laga.... fresh hoke apne kapde pack kar ke so gaya.... phir 4 baje utha toh dekha mohini ki call aa rhi thi.... maine mobile uthake switchoff kar diya.....

phir kapde pehen ke bahar aaya aur auto main baith ke Airport aa gaya....

Airport par maine apna boarding paas liya.... phir thori der baad main ja ke plane main baith gaya.....


phir kuch waqt ke baad announcement hone lga....


“Ladies and gentlemen, this is vikram and I’m your chief flight attendant. On behalf of (Captain Roy and) the entire crew, welcome to Airdubai flight... non-stop service from mumbai to dubai....

At this time, make sure your seat backs and tray tables are in their full upright position and that your seat belt is correctly fastened. Also, your portable electronic devices must be set to ‘airplane’ mode until an announcement is made upon arrival.

Thank you.”

phir main thori der baad so gaya q ki mujhe flight main neend bahut aati hai....

3 ghante baad meri flight land ho gayi.... airport se nikal ke main bahar aaya aur taxi pe jaake baith gaya aur use location de di ( kal hi maine kajal se uski location maang li thi qki use surprise dena tha pabunch ke)...

phir thori der baad ek ghar ke saaamne gaadi ruki aur maine use kiraya dia aur bag uthake chal diya door ki taraf....

maine knock kiya....
kajal ne jaise hi gate khola maine bola surprise....
aur aake lag gayi mere gale.....

aaj ke liye itna hi....

continued...


ViLLAiN
Superb update
 
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