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Incest Vihaan Aur Ashita - Bhai Behen ki kahani - Exclusively written for XFORUM(COMPLETED)

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Update 19 Ashita Worried and Sad

Shaam ko 4 baje visiting hours tha to sabko jana tha aur doctor se report bhi jaanna tha ke scan ki kia report aya hai.

Anirud ko kaam par jaana tha, suman ko bhi magar donon ne phone karke leaves le liye, aur Ashita bhi ghar par reh gayi, college se off.

Ab Anirud Ashita ko batana chahta tha uss doctor ki proposal ke baare mein, Weise to ussko pehle se pata tha ke doctor kaamyaab nahin hone wala kyunke Ashita saaf inkaar karegi. Magar jiss waqt doctor ne uss se pucha tha tab to ussko weisa karna pada suman ko andar bula kar doctor wali baat bata kar, varna agar doctor alag se sirf Suman se baat karti tab kuch aur bhi ho sakta tha. Anirud ne suman ke saamne baat kiya yeh dekhne ke liye ke Suman kia kahegi, ussne socha tha ke suman inkaar karegi yeh kehkar ke Ashita abhi padh rahi hai koyi 4 /5 saa ke baad wo usski shaadi ke baare mein sochegi… magar Suman ne jab haan kar diya to Anirud ne haan mein haan milaya halaan ke ussko pata tha plan flop hone wala hai.

To wapas Hospital jaane se pehle Suman nahane gayi to jaldi se Anirud Ashita ki kamre mein gaya aur baat bataayi doctor wala. Ashita apne papa se naraaz hua ke kyun ussne saaf inkaar nahin kiya. Phir bhi Anirud ne keh diya ke “tumko buss inkaar karna hai baaki main sambhaal lunga, koyi issues nahin hogi dekh lena”

Ashita uss doctor ko yaad karte hue sochne laga kiss tarah se wo ussko ghurr raha tha apne consultation mein, phir Ashita ne jeise flashback mein jaakar dekha ke jiss waqt wo 10 baje khirki ke paas khadi Vihaan ke bed par ussko dekh rahi thi aur doctor waha aya tha tab Ashita ne uss se pucha tha ke kyun Vihaan enkhen nahin khol rahe to jiss tarah se doctor ne ussko dekha tha, ab Ashita uss ke nazar par ghaur kar rahi thi ke wo ussko bade pyar se dekh raha tha uss waqt se hi…. Wo aasikh ho gaya tha ussi waqt Ashita ka….

Ashita sochne lagi ke kia dekha uss doctor ne uss mein us waqt, to jiss dress mein thi abhi ussi mein thi, Ashita aine ke saamne jaakar khud ko dekhne lagi aur ek sleeveless dress mein thi jiss mein usski gori baazu dikh rahe the aur halki si usski bra ki strap nazar arahe the, phir Ashita ne khud apne boobs ke form dekhe uss dress mein, to paaya ke usske boobs ke form bahot saaf nazar arahe the, aur usski ghutnon ke thoda sa upar tak dress tha to usski jaanghon ki upri hissa bhi dikh rahe the…. Ashita khud ko nihaarne lagi aine mein dekhte hue aur Vihaan ko socha aur khud se kaha,

“Bhai iss jism ka malik hai, ussko mere jism ka har ek hissa passand hai, ab soch rahi hoon wo itne dinon keise bardaasht karta raha mujhko eise apne saamne dekh kar, agar doctor aashik hua to mera apna aashik jo itne saalon se mera aashik hai uss par kia beeta hoga itne dinon tak ussko main ne apne se door rakha, apni jism se ussko mehroom rakha, kitna tadpa hoga mera Vihaan mere liye?!”

Aur turant Ashita ne socha kitne saare hot pics liye hein Vihaan ne usske apne mobile mein to jhat se usske dimaagh mein baat aayi ke mobile kahan hai? Ashita ka mann khannka, ek darr si lagi ussko yeh soch kar ke kahin mobile kissi aur ke haath to nahin lag gaya? Ashita yaad karne lagi ke ussne Vihaan ke jism par charon taraf haath ferri thi, magar usske paas bed par usska mobile nahin tha….. ab Ashita bahot pareshan hui aur apne mummy papa se kehkar wapas hospital ke liye nikli, dress change karke, Vihaan ke mobile ke talaash mein.

Sochte hue jaa rahi thi ke kiss se puchegi? To raaste mein hi socha ke police station mein pehle puchna chahiye shayad unn logon ko pata hoga kyunke wohi log usse sadak se utha kar hospital le gaye the.

To Ashita police station pahunchi. Wahan ke saare tharki nazrein Ashita ko upar se niche ghurr rahe the. Ashita ne saari baat bataayi to wahan ke sabhi police walon ne kaha ke night shift wale police walon ne Vihaan ko hospital pahunchaya tha to wo unn logon ko pata hoga ke mobile kidhar hoga.

Ashita, apne bhai ki accident aur tamaam haalaat ko face karte hue thoda chidchida sa agaya uss mein aur ghussa aya ussko to kuch yun kaha uss police wale se jo araam se apne kursi par baitha hua tha aur jeise ussko wahan se hillne ka mann nahin tha, to awaaz ko thoda ooncha karke Ashita ne usske chehre mein gambhirta se dekhte hue kaha,

“Register mein sab kuch likha nahin hota hai? Agar mobile ko night shift walon ne rakha hoga to kia wo yahin kahin kissi drawer mein nahin para hoga? Kissi log book ya register mein night shift walon ne nahin likha hoga usske baare mein aur uss accident aur wounded person who was transported to hospital? Yeh sab kia mujhe aap logon ko seekhana hoga? Aap zara uth kar check karne ki takliff karenge or if you allow do I verify that myself?”

Thoda sa English jhaarrne se Ashita ne socha wo alsi police wala kuch hill dol karega, aur usski English kaam kar gayi, wo lazy police wale ne Ashita ke chehre mein dekhte hue jhat se log book khola aur check karte hue kaha,

“haan madam ji yeh raha likha hai ke ek ghayal naujawaan ko road se uthakar hospital lejaaya gaya 2.30 am ko. He was drunk likha hua hai aur naam likha hai Vihaan ??? aur samajh mein nahin araha surname kia hai madam ji, haan aur likha hai ke koyi personal item nahin rakha gaya……” aur…… police wala logbook ko apne chehre ke ziada nazdeek karte hue jeise kuch padhne ki koshish kar raha tha, phir padha, …. “usske paas mobile tha jisse ussne khud apne pant ke jeb mein dala aur ussne khud apna naam bataya aur address bhi, behosh hone se pehle. It was a hit and run case madam ji. Buss yehi likha hai, aur kuch usske taraf se yahan rakha gaya hota to zaroor iss mein likha hota.”

To Ashita ne pucha “to usska mobile kahan gaya, usske paas to nahin mila mujhe?!”

Tab tak ek dusra police wala jo shaayad pehle wala se ziada bade post par tha sabhi baton ko sunte hue Ashita ke paas aaya aur araam se kaha,

“Dekhiye, aap jaakar hospital mein search kijiye. Wahan par casualty department mein puch taaj kijiye to jinn logon ne uss waqt usska moaena kiya hoga ussko zaroor pata hoga, jiss doctor ne aap ke bhai ko consult kiya, patti vaghaira lagwaya ussi ne mobile rakha hoga ya kissi nurse vaghaira ne rakha hoga, aap ko hospital mein zaroor pata chalega, aap khamakhan ghussa kar rahe hein hum logon par, hum bhi insaan hein madam ji aur hum bhi to kaam hi kar rahe hein nah?!”

Ashita ne ussko ek Muskaan se thanks kaha aur nikal gayi.

Hospital ke taraf badhte hue Ashita ko iss baat ki fikar thi ke kissi ne usski tasveeron ko kahin dekha to nahin hoga mobile mein, aur ziada fikarmand hone lagi thi yeh soch kar ke agar kissi ne mobile chura liya hoga to kabhi bhi ussko apne khud ki pics nahin milegi, aur pata nahin kissi ne unn pics ko internet par kissi sex forum par upload kar diya to gazab ho jaega. Uss ke ilawa Ashita ko ziada afsos iss baat ka ho raha tha ke Vihaan ne bade pyar se usski tasveeron ko der saal pehle se save karta aa raha hai aur usski aur bhi tender age ki pics ko Vihaan ne save kiya hua hai aur Vihaan ko weh din bade pyare the aur hamesha kaha karta tha ke weh din wapas nahin ane wale iss liye unn tasveeron ko nishaani ki taur par zindagi bhar rakhega. To bahot emotional values the Ashita ke liye unn tasveeron aur videos ki, aur khaas kar Vihaan ke liye to usske pyar ki nishaniyan the sab. Phir khud Ashita ko ab apne pics ko dekhne ka man kar raha tha kyunke jinn dinon shuru mein Vihaan ne usske pics lena shuru kiya tha Ashita uss se doorie rakh rahi thi magar ussko pata hai ke chori chupke Vihaan ne usski bahot saare tasveerein liye hein.

Hospital pahunchtne tak Ashita ne yaad karne ki koshish ki ke kia password hoga Vihaan ka mobile unlock karne ki? Yaad karti gayi ke kia kabhi Vihaan ne uss mobile ke password ke baare mein kuch kaha the ya nahin? Ashita Vihaan se doorie rakh rahi thi itne mahine, saalon se phir bhi usski har ek choti si choti baat ko dil se lagaa kar rakhti thi, to ussko thoda bahot yaad araha tha ke jab naya naya mobile laya tha to usske dusre subha ko college jaane se pehle usski tasveerein lete waqt ussne password ya fingerprints aur biometrics ki kuch batein kahe the…. Aur aakhir mein Ashita ko thik se yaad aya ke ashita ne vihaan se pucha tha,

“agar kissi ne meri eise pics jo tum le rahe ho dress badalte waqt; kissi tarah dekh liya iss mobile mein to kia hoga?!”

Aur uss waqt Vihaan ne bade fakr se kaha tha,

“Are koyi nahin dekh sakta kabhi bhi kyunke yeh mere fingerprints se unlock hota hai, 15 seconds ke baad screen lock ho jata hai aur issko koyi bhi use nahin kar sakta mere siwa, tum bhi nahin, dunya mein koyi bhi nahin dekh paega kuch bhi isske andar hehehehe! Aur fir meri girlfriend ke pics ko main ek secure folder mein save karta hoon aur wo folder bhi mere fingerprints se hi khulega hehehehe!”

Tab Ashita ki jaan mein jaan aayi ke chalo koyi mobile ko open to nahin kar paega……

Aur Ashita hospital mein phir daakhil hui……

To be continued……..
 
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Update 20 - The Mobile, Ashita and the Doctor

Ashita pehle casualty mein gayi jahan sabse pehle patients ka moaena kiya jata hai wahan par puch taaj kiya to udhar bhi same response mili ke kal raat ke shift walon ko pata hoga. Bahot bhidh the aur officers kum, to Ashita ne behtar samjha ke doctor se milkar pata lagaaye Vihaan ki mobile ki. Aur khud se muskuraate hue Ashita ne kaha,

“Uss Romeo doctor ko phir face karna padega dhat, main ussko nahin pata lagne dungi ke mere gharwalon ne mujhe usske proposal ke baare mein bata diya hai…, pakka wo mujhse ab flirt karega, I am sure of that”

Pura hospital ka chakkar kaatna pada Ashita ko doctor ko dhundne ke liye, koyi kehta consultation mein hoga, wahan nahin mile to kissi ne kaha, kissi ward mein apne patients ko dekhne gaya hoga, to kahin par kaha jaata ke pata nahin kidhar hai doctor sahab.

Chakkar lagaate waqt Ashita ek baar Vihaan ke ward ke khidi ke paas ruka, to paaya ke Vihaan ko kissi dusre bed par lejaya gaya hai. Wo uss bed par nahin tha jahan pehle the, nurse ke cabin ke karib wale bed par tha ab. Aur ussi haal mein tha. To Ashita ne ek nurse se sawaal kiya ke kia usski scan ho gayi to jawaab haan mein mila, Ashita ne result pucha to kaha gaya ke result doctor ke paas hai. Aur sawaal kiya ke kab Vihaan ki enkhen khulegi to nurse ne kaha wo jaagaa hua tha kuch der pehle par injection dena para ussko sulaane ke liye kyunke dard se tadap raha tha. Serum ab bhi laga hua tha. Ab Ashita ne uss nurse se mobile ke baare mein pucha aur Vihaan ke personal belongings, paise, batwa vaghaira ke baare mein to nurse ne kaha wo check karke ke batata hai.

Nurse apne office mein dekhne gaya phir wapas aya Vihaan ki batwe ke saath aur kuch chote chote kaagaz ke tukdon ke saath jo sambhaal ke rakha gaya tha, wo Vihaan ke jeb se nikale gaye the. Nurse ne pucha ke ussko wapas rakh diya jaaye ya wo unn chizon ko le jaegi. Ashita ne sab le liya aur mobile ke baare mein pucha to nurse ne kaha ke buss itna hi kuch hai Vihaan ke naam se usske office mein. Uss nurse ne Ashita se ek form par sign karwaya ke uss ne wo chizein wapas le liya hai, aur ek note likha ke mobile nahin hai unn chizon mein. Ashita ne sign kiya aur batwa le liya unn gagazon ke tukdon ke saath. Phir wapas doctor ko dhunte hue Ashita hospital ke chakkar kaatne lagi.

Aur kayi jagaon par puchne ke baad Ashita ko bataya gaya ke doctor kissi restaurant mein khana khane ko gaye hue the magar wapas agaye hein to yahin kahin hoga. Aur ho yeh raha tha ke jab Ashita udhar jata doctor ko dhundne, to wo idhar hota, aur jab Ashita idhar ata dhundne, to doctor udhar hota.

Iss chakar mein visiting time karib ho raha tha to ek telephone booth se Ashita ne ghar phone karke apne parents se kaha ke wo ghar wapas nahin arahi hai, wahin hospital mein hi unnka wait karegi, kyunke visiting time close ho raha tha uss waqt. Ashita ne yeh bhi bata diya parents ko ke Vihaan ki scan ho gayi hai aur result doctor ke paas hai magar doctor kahin dikh nahin rahe aur wo ussi ki talaash kar rahi hai. Aur yeh bhi bataya Ashita ne khush hote hue ke Vihan ne enkhen khole the magar dard ho raha hai iss liye ussko injection diya gaya hai aur wo abhi so raha hai aur bed change kiya gaya hai usska.

Ashita ne apne papa se baat kiya tha phone par aur jab Anirud ne sab kuch Suman ko bataya yeh kehte hue,

“Dekha hamari beti kitni sayaani hai, sab kuch pata kar chuki apne aap, wo hospital mein sab pata kar chuki, apne bhai ko dekh bhi liya aur pata laga liya ke scan hua ke nahin, Vihaan ka haal bhi bata diya, scan bhi ho gaya aur wo ab doctor se milne jar ahi hai….”

Yeh sunkar suman ne kaha,

“Arey wo doctor se milne ja rahi hai kahin uss doctor ne uss se keh diya ke ussne hum se usska haath manga hai shaadi ke liye to kia hoga? Ashita to saaf inkaar kar degi, ofo aap ne ussko roka kyun nahin ke doctor se nahin mile wo? Kuch nahin ata aap ko bade khush ho rahe hein ke beti sayani ho gayi, haan sayani to hai magar sab bigaar ke rakh degi abhi, itna acha rishta aya hai ussko uss doctor se hi shaadi karwa dena chahiye ab!”

Anirud thoda ansaate hue apni patni ke chehre mein dekhte hue kaha,

“Tumko apne bete ki chinta ziada hai ya abhi beti ki shaadi ki pari hai? Kia ziada important hai abhi? Rishta to Ashita ki kabhi bhi kahin se bhi a sakta hai, padh kar degree haasil kar legi to iss se bhi bada Rishta aa sakta hai, to kaun si badi baat hogi agar iss doctor ko mana bhi kar diya to?”

Suman ne thoda ghussa hote hue jawaab diya,

“Mujhe pata tha aap iss rishte se khush nahin ho, mujhe maloom tha aap kissi tarah Ashita ko nahin karne doge uss doctor se shaadi; uss waqt doctor se baat karte waqt hi mujhe dikh gaya tha ke aap ussko inkaar karna chahte ho, magar main baat ko aguey zaroor badhaaungi dekh lena ussi ke saath Ashita ki shaadi karwaungi, haan keh deti hoon ji!”

Anirud ne hansste hue usske peeth ke piche bhunbhunaate hue kaha,

“Dekh lunga, Vihaan ke hote hue keise usski shaadi kahin aur karwaogi tum, you will be disappointed dear wife!”

Suman ne mudhkar pucha,

“kia kaha aap ne?”

Anirud ne halki si muskurahat mein kaha,

“kuch bhi to nahin main to ghazal gunguna raha hoon!”

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Ashita chalte hue doctor ke office ki taraf dobara badh rahi thi aur dusri taraf se doctor ne Ashita ko door se dekh liya tha aur muskuraate hue ussi ke tarf dekhte arahe the.

Donon miley to doctor ek hawas bhari nazron se Ashita ko upar se niche tak dekhte hue kaha,

“hello beautiful young lady kia aap abhi tak yahin ho subha se?”

Ashita ne ek two piece pehni hui thi aur sach mein bahot hot dikh rahi thi, blouse ke upar wala button khula hua tha, jiss mein usski cleavage nazar arahe the, aur skirt ghutnon ke upar tha jiss mein usski jaanghon ka upri hissa jo usski safed rang ko kuch ziada nikhaar rahe the aur skirt ki dark blue colour ke contrast se aur bhi saaf dikhaayi de rahe the. Uss sexy part ko doctor sahab ki nazrein kuch ziada hi dekh rahe the jo Ashita ne notice kiya usske chehre mein dekhte hue jab ussne baat kiya to.

Ashita kuch bolne hi jaa rahi thi ke doctor ne kaha,

“Come on let’s meet in my office I will tell you about the scan results.”

Yeh kehte hue doctor ne Ashita ke kaandhon par haath rakhte hue apne office ke taraf badhe jo koyi 3 metres ke faasle par tha.

Kad mein Ashita se ooncha hone ke kaaran doctor ko uss waqt Ashita ki cleavage aur bhi ziada dikh rahe the jissko chalte waqt wo dekhe jaa raha tha.

Ashita usska haath apne kaandhon par feel kar sakti thi aur ussko samajh mein agaya ke doctor kuch tharki type ka hai ya Romeo type wala hai. Ashita ne kuch nahin kaha aur normal chalti gayi usske office ke taraf muskurakar formally baat karte hue.

Jab office pahunch gaye to door open karte waqt uss doctor ne Ashita ke kaandhe se apne hatheli ko halke se ferrte hue Ashita ke baazu par haath challate hue Ashita ke kalaayi tak kiya aur usske hath thaam ke ussko office ke andar laaya. Ashita ne sab achi tarah se mehsoos kiya. Aur iss liye khamosh rahi kyunke ussne socha ke iss waqt yeh doctor usske bhai ka dekh bhaal kar raha hai kahin Ashita ne kuch ziada kiya ya kaha to kuch bigar naah jaaye. To Ashita ne issko casually liya.

Ab office ke andar aa gaye to doctor apne chair par nahin baitha balke ek sofa tha, usske desk ke saamne jiss par Ashita ko baithne ko kaha aur khud usske paas baitha jeise ke koyi kissi ko apne lounge ya living mein receive karte waqt karta hai. Doctor ne jaan bujh kar Ashita ko wahan bithaya kyunke ussko pata wahan baithne se Ashita ki skirt aur bhi thoda upar uth jaegi jiss mein usski gori jaaghein aur bhi nazar aegi ussko.

Donon baithe to doctor ki himmat dekho ke direct apne haath ko Ashita ke jaangh par rakh kar pucha,

“Aap ke mummy papa ne kuch nahin bataya aap ko?”

Ashita turant samajh gaya ke doctor pakka tharki hai aur ussko chhuh raha hai aur sexually arouse ho raha hai uss se. Par naasamajh bante hue Ashita ne kaha,

“Mummy papa ne? kiss baare mein?”

Doctor ne apne hatheli ko thoda sa ferrte hue Ashita ke jaanghon ke aur upar kiya usski chaati ko ghurrte hue.

Tab Ashita ko apne haath ko usske haath ke upar rakhna pada usske haath ko aguey badhne se rokne ke liye aur ek jhuti muskurahat ke saath kaha,

“aap mujhe scan ke results dikhane wale the?”

Doctor ne tab Ashita ke haath ko apne haath mein lekar kaha,

“Aap mujhe bahot passand ho, pehli nazar mein hi aap ko dekha to dil machal gaya aur aap ke parent se kuch baat kiya tha main ne yaad hai aap ke papa ko rukne ko kaha tha main ne aaj subha ko?”

Ashita ke mann mein ek chhan sa hua usske baton ko sun kar aur usske chehre mein dekhte hue Ashita ne kaha,

“Main samjhi nahin aap kia kehna chahte ho? kyun papa ko rukne ko kaha tha aap ne aur mummy bhi gayi thi andar usske baad, mujhko kuch nahin bataya unnhon ne aap batao please.”

Jab doctor ko pata chala ke Ashita ko unnke parents ne abhi kuch nahin bataya hai to socha ke ussko bhi uss baare mein abhi kuch nahin batana chahiye. Balke socha ke usske saath flirt karna chahiye thoda sa.

Ashita usske jawaab ka intezaar kar rahi thi usske chehre mein dekhte hue to doctor ne, phir Ashita ke baazu par apna haath ferte hue kaha,

“Aap kitni khubsurat ho kissi ne kaha hai aap ko yeh baat? “

Ashita thoda blush hui aur tab tak doctor ne apne mobile haath mein liya aur Ashita ki pic lena chaha to jaldi se Ashita ne apne hatheli se apne chehre ko chhupaate hue kaha,

“No, aap kyun meri pic le rahe ho, please don’t!”

Itna kaha Ashita ne to Vihaan ki mobile yaad aya usse aur turant kaha,

“Haan main iss liye aap ko dhund rahi thi ke mujhe mere bhai ki mobile nahin mil rahi hai aur sab keh rahe hein ke aap ko pata hoga ke wo kahan hai? Kia aap ke paas hai Vihaan bhai ka mobile?”

Tab tak donon ke haath ek dusre ke haath mein jakre hue the, Ashita ki ungliyon ko doctor ne apne ungliyon mein jakra hua tha aur donon ek dusre ke chehre mein dekh rahe the, aur Ashita usske jawaab ka intezaar kar rahi thi usske chehre mein sawaali nazron se dekhte hue.

Thik tabhi kissi ne office ke darwaze par knock kiya.

Doctor sahab ko uthna pada darwaze ki dastak dene wale ko reply karne ke liye, aur jab wo utha to apne pant mein apne lund ko adjust karte hue door open karne gaya, Ashita ne usske unn sab harkaton ko dekha dekha!! Aur yaad kiya Vihaan kayi daffa weisa kar chuka hai usske saamne!!

Jiss ne dastak diya tha ussne dhire se doctor se kuch kaha aur wapas chala gaya tab doctor ne darwaze ko iss baar lock kiya jo Ashita ne dekha aur pucha,

“Aap ne lock kyun kiya door ko? Abhi visiting time hone wala hai aur mere parents mujhko dhundenge, bhai ko dekhne bhi jana hai mujhe….”

Doc phir usske paas baitha aur araam se muskuraate hue kaha,

“Arey young beautiful girl, lock iss liye kiya taake koyi disturb nah kare humko, thoda sa privacy to chahiye nah ek sexy lady ke saath thoda sa waqt guzarne ke liye kyun thik kaha nah sweetheart?”

Ashita khadi ho gayi aur kaha,

“I have to go please let me out.”

Doc ne Ashita ke kaandhon par haath rakhte hue muskurakar kaha,

“Why are you in a hurry, main kia tumhara rape karunga? Fikar mat karo darling hum sirf baatein kar rahe hein, tum kyun itna serious le rahi ho? Door lock nahin karunga to baar baar koyi bhi knock karke disturb karega, aur jab dekhenguey ke lock hai to apne aap wapas chale jaeinguey”

Ashita uncomfortable feel karne lagi thi aur ussko sab bahot ajeeb lagne laga tha phir bhi baith gayi.

Tab doctor ne phir apne haath ko usske jaangh par kiya aur kaha,

“Kitni sexy ho tum, kitni arouse karti ho logon ko, yahan tak ke khud tumhara bhai tumse arouse hota hai aur tumhara sexy pics leta hai aur tum lene deti ho, batao aur kia kia karti ho apne BHAI ke sath? Bahot lucky bhai hai tumhara hmm?”

Ashita ki pasine chuth pade aur tab tak doctor ka ek hath Ashita ke skirt ke niche usski jaaghon ke andar jaa chuka tha aur dusra hath Ashita ke blouse ke andar usski boob kuchal raha tha aur usska munh Ashita ke gardan par ferrne laga tha, doctor ka jeeb Ashita ke chaati ko chaatne laga tha aur Ashita ki saansein badhne lagi thi aur wo kuch nahi keh paa rahi thi jeise ek shock mein aa gayi thi uss waqt hamari pyari Ashita……..

To be continued… (4500 words from both updates)
 
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hahaha, Black bhai aap ko takliff karne ki zaroorat nahin padegi aap ko khud dikh jaega ke kia hoga doctor ka :D
thanks bhai.
Casi bhai when a reader starts reading a story , he slowly find himself attatched to the story . And , thats what right now happening with me . And my name is Krishna , friends call me "Krish" not Black . BTW last update was very heart-touching .
 

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Kiya kar diya bhai ashita ka ye bat to uski bap bhi janti thi fir bhi aisa karne de raha hai ashita....jaise doc abhi kar raha hai aisa lag raha hai ki Sirf ashita ko pas lake bhogne ke liye hii rishta ki bat karbaya bhog ke rishte ki Baat bhi band kar dega.... Abhi is situation se ashita kaise bahar niklega dekhte hain
 

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Doctor to Tharki nikla
Sale ko itna bara secret Pata chal gya Ab to wo uske dam pe Ashita ko blackmail kar ke kuch v kar skta hai
Dekhna hai Ashita kuch krne degi ya nhi
Ab next week ka besabri se intezar .......
 

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donon updates bahut hi behtareen tarike se likha gaya hai
ek ek scene jeise enkhon ke saamne hum dekh sakte hein
aap itni details mein keise sab kcuh dikha sakte ho iss se mujhe tahjub hota ai
you are indeed a great writer casi dear
appreciated very much.
in the first update you showed the torments of Ashita and in the second one she takes the troubles to look for the mobile of her brother but found out the real face of the doctor.
amaing and unexpected turn in the story which was very intelligently planned by you.
so this is why the doctor was introduced in the story.
the hot and sexy part between ashita and the doctor was indeed hot
but how will she get out of that and how did the doc open the pics when fingerprints were needed to open the secure folder to see the pics?
casi dear you are very intelligent and this part is going like a thriller update
loved it very much.
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