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Incest Vihaan Aur Ashita - Bhai Behen ki kahani - Exclusively written for XFORUM(COMPLETED)

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Update 25 – Meeting Doctor Agarwal (A)

Udhar Inspector Raane ne Doctor ko itna darraya ke usska medical council se doctari ki License zapt karwa dega, pura life wo kabhi doctor ka kaam nahin kar paega, ussko 15/25 saal jail karwa dega ek college ki student ko attempt to rape ke ilzam mein. Wahin ka peon eye witness hoga, aur upar se usske aadmi ussko itna marega ke usske haddi kahan aur pasli kidhar hai samajh mein nahin aega aur to aur doctor ki encounter bhi karwa sakta hai, ussko revolver dikhaate hue yeh sab dhamkiyan diya Raane ne uss doctor ko.

Doctor peyron mein girr ke maafi mangne laga aur bachche ki tarah rone laga. Yeh kehte hue ke apne baki ke puri life mein kabhi bhi kissi ladki ya aurat ko buri nazar se nahin dekhga, hamesha izat karega. Wo tharrtharr kaampne laga tha uss room mein jo bahot hi bhayanak lag raha tha. Wo especially mujrimon ko darrane dhamkaane ke liye mahaul weisa banaya gaya hai uss room ka. Aur teenon officer aur Raane jiss tarah se usske saath sawaalaat kar rahe the koyi bhi surma hota to pighal jata aur maafi maangta. Aur kasmein khata apne biwi bachon ki zindagi bhar koyi bura kaam nahin karega.

Doctor se baat karne se pehle Raane ne usski mobile ko cyber Crime dept walon ko de diya tha check karne ke liye kia ussne koyi upload kiya hai internet par. Jab result aaye to pata chala ke koyi bhi upload nahin kiya gaya hai internet par pichle ek saal mein. Tab Raane usske gallery khol kar dhundne laga ke kidhar Ashita ke pics ko rakha hai ussne magar kahin nahin dikha to Raane doctor se phir puch taaj karne gaya ke kiss mobile mein Ashita ki pics ko rakha hai….

Doctor sahab ne rote hue kaha,

“are Sir main ne koyi photo Ashita ki apne mobile par save kiya hi nahin tha, maa Kassam, main ne ussko buss jhoot bola tha ussko darrane ke liye, agar save kiya hota bhi to kabhi bhi internet par upload nahin karta sahab.”

Raane aur usske officers ko ek pal mein pata chal jata hai jab koyi jhoot bolta hai to, unn sabko itna to experience tha. Raane ko khud dikh gaya ke wo sach bol raha hai aur ussne sach mein koyi Ashita ki tasveer nahin save kiya tha. Phir bhi raane ne kaha,

“Tumhare paas zaroor dusra mobile hoga jiss mein tumne save kiya hoga, jaldi bata varna iss baar eisi jagah marunga ke tera lund khada hona hi bhool jaega!”

Doctor phoot phoot kar rote hue apni maa ki kasam, bhagwaan ki Kassam, apni doctari ki Kassam khaate hue kaha ke usske paas aur koyi bhi mobile nahin hai.

Raaane ko dikh gaya ke wo sach bol raha hai. Aur ussko raat bhar ussi room mein rakha gaya bina khana paani ke aur subha ko Raane ne ussko jaane diya warn karte hue ke agar kabhi bhi kissi ne usske khilaaf koyi bhi simple sa report kiya to usski khair nahin, usske mobile ussko wapas kiya aur wapas jaane ko kaha.

Dusre subha ko Raane ne Ashita ko Vihaan ki mobile par phone karke bata diya ke doctor ne jhoot kaha tha ussne koyi bhi pic save nahin kiya tha usski, aur ussko koyi fikar karne ki zaroorat nahin sab thik hai aur doctor ab zindagi mein kissi bhi ladki ko molest nahin karega.

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Ashita aur Priya hospital pahunche aur thoda talaash karne ke baad Doctor Agarwal ke consultation mein jaa pahunche.

Ashita ne khud ko introduce karte hue saare baat ko bataya aur doctor Agarwaal ne donon ko araam se apne desk ke saamne baithne ko kaha.

Doctor Agarwaal ek vilayati dikhta tha, had se ziada gora, balke chehre par usske gaal kuch laal rang ke dikh rahe the, usske thath se dikh raha tha ke bahot hi bada vyakti hai. Usske chehre mein jeise ek noor tha, aur ek bahot pyari muskurahat ke maalik the Agarwal sahab.

Ashita aur Priya donon usske haath aur ungliyon ko dekh rahe the jiss mein ek pen liya hua tha doctor sahab, aur pen ka rang kala tha aur usske safed haath mein pen eisa dikh raha the jeise doodh mein makhi. Donon ladkiyan uss doctor ko admire kar rahe the kyunke Doctor Agarwal mein baat hi kuch eisi thi. Usska mizaaj to itne ache the, itna narm dili se baat karta tha aur itne meethe bolte the ke maanlo ek farishte se mulakaat ho gayi ho. Usske haath par unnke kale kale baal, patle patle, mehin saaf nazar arahe the haath ka rang kuch iss kadar safed tha.

Donon ladkiyan jeise apne saamne Shahrukh Khan ya Salman khan ko dekh liya ho, iss kadar ussko dekhte hi jaa rahe the bina kuch bole.

To Doctor sahab hi be bolna shuru kiya,

“Tum donon college se chhuti lekar mujhse milne aaye ho girls?”

Ashita ne Priya ke chehre mein heyraani se dekhte hue doctor se shocked awaaz mein pucha,

“magar aap ko keise pata chala?”

Doctor ne apni wohi pyari si muskurahat mein jawab diya,

“tum donon ke uniform se!”

Tab Ashita ne sharminda hote hue socha ke kitna behuda sawaal kar diya ussne ! Aur phir bhi pucha,

“Aap foreign se ho? kiss country se Aaye ho aap?”

Doctor: “kyun main foreigner lagta hoon? Main 100 % Desi hoon girls. Mere rang ko dekh kar tum logon ko lagta hai ke main foreigner hoon? Main Kashmir ke vadiyon mein paida hua aur pala posa gaya hoon shaayad issi liye rang thoda safed par agaya hai mera. Tumhara kasoor nahin, mujhse laakhon log yeh sawaal kar chuke hein tumse pehle, sab yehi samajhte hein ke main Europe ka rehne wala hoon kyunke mera rang unn logon ki tarah hai. Khair chorro aur batao ke tum exactly janna kia chahti ho?

Ashita ne tab bahot udaas hote hue kaha ke Vihaan ne kyun weisa behave kiya aur kyun uss se baat nahin kiya, aur kyun usske sar dard se phat raha hai usski kia problem hai head ke andar. Ussko detail mein sab jaanna tha.

Doctor sahab ne tab pucha,

“tum donon Vihaan ke behnein ho kia?”

Ashita aur Priya ne hansste hue ek dusre ka chehra dekha pehle tab Priya ne jawaab diya,

“Nooooo!! Main isski Saheli hoon yeh Vihaan ki behen hai!”

Tab doctor ne ussi pyari si mukurahat mein kaha,

“Oh! I am extremely sorry, mujhe laga tum donon sisters ho. Haan to listen to me well, be attentive to what I am going to say okay girls?”

Donon ne phir ek dusre ko dekha aur tawajoh se doctor ke chehre mein dekhte hue sunne lage ke ussko kia kehna tha vihaan ke baare mein.

Doctor ne ek diagram dikhaate hue apne pen se anek jagahon par uss brain ki tasveer par pen chalaate hue samjhaya.

“yeh dekho, yeh brain ka wo hissa hai jahan par Vihaan ko blood clots jamaah hue hein choat lagne ki vajah se. Police ke report ke anusaar usska sar car se dhaka lagne ke baad girte hue pavement se takraya tha aur pavement ka wo hissa tut gaya tha aur hichkole khaate hue Vihaan dobara road ke dusre side ke pavement se sar ke bal hi gira tha. Skull bahot solid hota hai veise yahan tak ke ek pathar ya concrete ko bhi tod sakta hai jeise Vihaan ke skul ne kiya, magar wo karte waqt brain ke andar damage hota hai, nerves tutta hai, aur blood clot automatically jammah ho jata hai.

Ab jiss jagah par blood clots hue hein uss jagah insaan ke senses kaam karte hein, balke usski shuruwaat hota hai, jeise sunghne ki, dekhne ki, samajhne ki, yaad karne aur sunne ka bhi. Bahot chothe chote nerves hote hein, sensorial, jo dimagh ke anek hisson mein information bhejte hein. Jeise ke aap ke enkhon ne pila rang dekha, to enkhen ye message brain tak pahunchata hai ke jo enkhon ne dekha usska rang pila hai. To ab agar wo nerves jahan se message ko guzar ke jana hai wahan par blood clot jama hue hein to message nahin jata block ho jata hai. Aur agar jata bhi hai to der se, iss liye Vihaan late reactions de sakta hai bahot saare chizon ka. Ya koyi reaction hi nahin dega bilkool. Kuch chizon ko pehchanega hi nahin. Kuch chizon ko samjhega hi nahin. Jeise ke time kia hua hai puchoge to ussko pata bhi nahin hoga ke ghadi mein dekhna chahiye time ka pata lagaane ke liye…..”

Jab doctor ne itna kuch keh diya to Ashita ka rona shuru hua…. Aur Priya ussko chhup kara rahi thi aur doc ne kaha ke shaayad ussko nahin batana chahiye tha yeh sab balke usske parents ko sab kuch bolna chahiye tha. Tab Ashita ne rona bandh karte hue pucha,

“Doctor sir, to isska ilaj to hoga nah?”

Doctor ne muskuraate hue Aashita ke chehre mein namrata se dekhte hue jeise ussko dilasha dete hue kaha,

“wohi to bataane jaa raha tha ke tum rone lagi beti.!”

Phir Asita ne sisakte hue kaha, “thik hai sorry aap batao nah kab tak Vihaan thik ho jaega?”

Doctor: “ghaur se sunon; 3 din ke baad main ussko discharge kar dunga, abhi observation par hai mujhe kuch aur maloomaat karna hai usske brain ko lekar. Filhaal yeh samajh lo ke main medicines se usske brain ke andar wale blood clots ko mitaa raha hoon. 3 din baad pata chal jaega mujhe ke clots mit rahe hein ke nahin. Abhi batana mushkil hai. Wo sab clots liquid bankar khoon mein shamil hoke bad blood group mein jaakar kidney ussko throw out kar dega.”

Ashita ne doctor ko beech mein rokte hue pucha,

“kitne din mein sab saaf ho jaega sir?”

Doctor ne kaha, “it’s a long process my girl, 3 se 6 mahine lag sakte hein saare clots ko disrupt hone mein. Magar uss dauraan Vihaan ko complete rest lena chahiye, no physical efforts, no deep thinking, no head abrupt movements. ”Ashita ne phir doc ko rokte hue pucha”

“and Sex?”

Yeh puch liya jhat se tab realise kiya ke kia keh gayi, aur chehra laal ho gaya Ashita ka! Aur turant Priya ne Ashita ke haat par ek tamach mara.

To doc ne Ashita se pucha,

“Is he married?”

To be continued in the next post immediately
 
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Update 26 - Meeting Doctor Agarwal- (B) Vihaan back.

Ashita aur Priya ek dusre ke chehre mein hakbakaaye dekhne lage bina jawaab diye, to doc ne khud donon ke heyraan chehre mein dekhte hue dhimi awaaz mein kaha,

“Oh usska girlfriend hoga phir well its ok, sabke gierlfriends hote hein!”

To jaldi se Ashita ne apni ungli ko kuch iss tarah se Priya ke taraf kiya doc ko dekhte hue khule munh ke saath jeise revolver taana hua hai Priya ke kanpatti par. Aur wo dekh ke Priya ka reaction bilkool weisa hi tha ke jeise ussko koyi goli maarne wala hai abhi turant!!

Doctor donon ko apne desk saamne uss position mein shocked dekhte hue muskurakar kaha,

“Oh, to tumhari seheli hi Vihaan ki girlfriend hai, thik hai main samajh gaya, matlab tumhari hone wali bhabi ke saath aayi ho tum!”

Ashita ne haan mein sar hillaya jaldi jaldi, aur Priya ka munh khula ka khula hi raha Ashita ko haan mein sar hillate hue dekh kar, wo kabhi Doc ko dekhti to kabi Priya ko jeise ussko saamp sung gaya tha.

Tab Priya ne Ashita ke haath par zor se pinch kiya aur donon hatheli ko munh par rakh kar zor se “khikhikhikhikhi” karne lage apne apne chehre par donon hath rakh kar hansste hue.

Doctor donon ke uss hanssi ko dekh kar khud hansste hue kaha,

“tum log bilkool mere potiyon ke jeise harkatein kar rahe ho, wohi sharaarti adaayein, aur natkhatpan hein tum donon mein abhi tak bachi ho tum donon hahaha!”

Ashita ne tab shocked hote hue doc ke chehre mein dekhte hue sawaal kia.

“What? Aap ke potiyan bhi hein? Aap itne umr ke to bilkool bhi nahin dikhte ho sir?” Priya ne haan mein sar hillaya matlab doctor utne umr ke nahin dikhte the.

Doctor ne phir muskuraate hue donon se kaha,

“I have 5 grand daughters and 3 grandsons from two different sons, and one daughter.”

Donon ladkiyan bahot heyraan chehre se doctor Agarwal ke akarshit karne wale muskurahat ko dekhte rahe aur Priya ne kaha,

“Sir aap ko dekh kar bilkool bhi nahin lagta ke aap ke itne bade bete beti aur unnke bache bhi honge….”

Aur Ashita ne Priya ke baat ko jodte hue kaha,

“Hamein laga ke aap koyi 30 ya 35 ya ziada se ziada 40 saal ke kareeb honge!”

Doctor ne ek halki hanssi mein kaha,

“Thanks for the compliment, haan har koyi yehi kehta hein mujhse, well I am 56 yrs old young girls! Aur mere potiyon mein se ek ka naam bhi Priya hi hai, 17 saal ki hai aur bahot hi natkhat hai, wo meri beti ki beti hai, main usska nana hoon aur baaki potiyan mere bete ki betiyan hein. Aur ek beta hai meri beti ki aur baaki beton ke hein. So that was my family hehehe and you naughty girl Priya so you wanted to know about the sexual health of your boyfriend right?”

Turant Priya ne nah mein sar hillate hue apni ungli ko Ashita ke taraf kiya.

Doc ne apni halki hanssi mein kaha,

“haan ok thik hai main samajh gaya tumko puchne mein sharam aa rahi hai to apne seheli ko puchne ko kaha hoga tumne issi liye ussne wo sawaal kiya jo tum karna chahti thi, sab samajhta hoon main tum ladkiyon ki sharaaratein!”

Priyan ne apne sar par haath rakhte hue socha “dhat teri ki, sala doctor ko nahin pata ke wo ulta keh aur samajh raha hai ussko nahin pata ke Ashita hi Vihaan ki behen hai aur girlfriend bhi uff!”

Tab doctor sahab ne kaha,

“Acha kiya tum donon ne mujhse yeh sawaal puch kar kyunke main to tumhare parents se puchne wala tha ke kia Vihaan ko koyi emotional trauma ya issue se guzarna pada pichne mahinon mein”

Ab Ashita ka dil zoron se dhadakne laga doc ki baton ko sunkar aur pucha,

“Haan sir usska break up hua tha aur pichle 18 mahinon se wo bahot stress mein tha tension mein tha kyunke usski girlfriend ussko ignore kar raha tha….”

Doc ne tab Priya ke taraf dekhte hue kaha,

“kyun? Kyun tumhara break up hua tha Vihaan se?!”

Iss baar Ashita ne apne maathe ko peette hue apne khayaalon mein kaha,

“Oh my God kia confusion hai yeh doc sahab Vihaan ka gf main hoon Priya nahin re baba uff!”

Ab jab Doc ne sawaal Priya se kiya to Priya ko hi reply karna pada aur Ashita apni Saheli ka munh dekh rahi thi ke wo kia jawaab deti hai doc ko aur Saheli ne kaha,

“Buss… Sir…. Eise hi, wo… hum….. hum donon mein….. eeeeiiiiinnnnn……. Wooooo…..” aur tab tak help ke liye Priya ne phir Ashita ko pinch kiya tab jaldi se Ashita ne kaha,

“Haan Sir wohi inn donon ka break up sex ki vajah se hi hua tha…aur issne 18 mahinon tak ignore kiya mere bhai ko aur wo bahot udaas rehta tha aur peene bhi laga tha, hum sab ek hi college jaate the Sir aur in donon ka wahin se shuru hua tha aur break up bhi!”

Priya hakbate hue Ashita ke chehre mein dekhte hue ussko apne mann mein gaaliyan dete hue keh rahi thi,

“Saali kutti Kamini apne saare ilzam mujh par thop rahi hai bahaar nikal tujhe batati hoon main!”

Doctor ne phir muskuraate hue kaha,

“okay main samajh gaya, dekho iss baare mein mujhe important baat karna hai tum logon se, wo yeh hai ke emotional trauma dikha mujhe usske brain system mein, aur mujhko yehi laga tha ke ishk ka chakkar hua hoga ya main ne socha kahin wo drug addict to nahin, ab tum logon ne iss baare mein bata diya to I am sure issi vajah se usske uss emotional trauma hua hai. He missed someone and was affected. Ussko pyar se, ulfat se ussko ziada jald achcha kiya jaa sakta hai. That will work faster than medicine. Samjhe tum log?” yeh Doc ne Priya ke taraf dekhte hue kaha. Aur jawaab Ashita ne diya,

“haan sir main samajh gayi ussko to ab beshumaar pyar milne wala hai Sir.”

Itne tajurbekaar doctor, wo koyi stupid nahin tha, wo khud samajh gaya ke Ashita aur usske khud ki bhai mein koyi incestuous relationship hai issi liye sabhi sawalon ka jawaab wo khud de rahi hai aur apne Saheli ko involve kar rahi hai khud unnse bachne ke liye. Doctor samajh gaya ke Ashita apne aur apne bhai ke beech ke rishte ko unnko nahin bata sakti thi issi liye apni Saheli ko saath laayi thi Vihaan ki girlfriend bana kar.

To iss baar doctor ne Ashita ko dekhte hue kaha,

“Agar ussko takliff hui hai breakup ki vajah se to uss breakup ko end karna hoga aur ussko usska pyar wapas dilana hoga, usske dimaagh mein ek baat baith gayi hai ke usska pyar uss se chiiin gaya hai aur usske dimaagh ke uss hisse mein jahan emotional bleeding hote hein wo part bahot kumzor hai iss waqt aur upar se choat lagne ki vajah se aur blood clot se usske dimaagh par aur bhi gehra sadma jeisa assar hua hai to tumko uss ka dhyan 100 guna ziada rakhna hoga samjhi?”

Enkhon mein ensoo liye Ashita ne haan mein sar hillaya. Aur Priya khud se sawaal karne lagi ke doc kyun ab Ashita se sab kuch keh raha hai, jeise ke wohi Vihaan ki girlfriend hai, kia doc samajh gaya hum ussko ullo bana rahe hein?!”

Aur nikalne se pehle Ashita ne doc se phir pucha,

“please aap bataayein ke kia Vihaan jaldi thik ho jaega nah Sir?”

Doc ne reply kiya,

“jeise main ne kaha, 3 se 6 mahine lag sakte hein magar, agar ussko achchi tarah se emotional support diya gaya to aur bhi jaldi thik ho sakta hai. Main ussko appointment deta rahunga follow up ke liye, medicines bhi dunga full usske blood clots ko dissolve karne ke liya, tum apne pyar se ussko sahi karna aur medicine apna kaam karega. Aur haan sexually wo full fit hai aur jiss part ko brain sexually active karta hai wo bilkool bhi damage nahin hua hai, magar remember it well, inn pehle kuch hafton mein agar sexual relationship hua to usske sar mein bahot hi dard hoga uss blood clot ki presence ki vajah se. jeise jeise wo blood clot kum hota jaega usske sar ke dard bhi kum hote jayeinguey. Main pain killers full dunga ussko taake jab bhi dard ho wo pain killers se araam paa sake. Aur ek bahot important baat sunlo, ho sakta hai pehle do mahinon mein Vihaan ko partial amnesia ho, wo kuch bhool sakta hai phir yaad kar sakta hai.”

Ashita ne pucha,

“To kia kal ussne mujhko nahin pehchana Sir? Kia wo mujhko bhool gaya hai?”

Doc: “Noooo, wo baat nahin hai, main kehna chahta hoon baat karte waqt for example wo late se kissi chiz ka naam yaad karega kabhi kabhi, bahot waqt lagega ussko kissi chiz ka naam yaad karne mein. Jeise ke samajh lo ussko ek sentence kehna hai jiss mein office naam lena hai to wo sentence full kahega magar uss office word ko lamba time lega yaad karne mein ussko wo word late yaad aega. Kabhi hakla bhi sakta hai, aur kabhi ussko epileptic fit bhi aa sakta hai. Sabse badi baat yeh hai ke usske enkhen abhi thik se work nahin kar rahe hein, ussko double dikh raha hoga, aur ek symptom hai, ussko V-syndrome kehte hein jiss se ussko tumhara chehre double dikhega, ek upar aur ek niche. Tum ussko do dikhoge ek thoda upar ek thoda niche ussko ek enkh ko bandh karna padega tab ek dikhega….. yeh tab tak hoga jab tak blood clot end nahin hoga. Main ne ussko enkhon ke doctor ko bhi refer kiya hai uss side ka follow wo doctor karega, aur wo bhi thik ho jaega bilkool koyi 6 mahinon mein. Uss ke sar par koyi bhi choat bilkool nahin lagna chahiye in 6 mahinon ke dauraan. His head is at present very sensible and weak. I will give all important vitamins and supplements for the recovery but all the way that will take the next 3 to 6 months to be back to normal. 6 mahinon ke baad Vihaan bilkool wohi Vihaan ban jaega jo pehle tha.”

Ashita ko tassali hui aur ab Priya ke taraf dekhte hue chalne ka ishara kiya.

Magar Ashita ne last mein nikalte waqt doc se kaha,

“Ek request karni thi aap se, please yeh boyfriend girlfriend wale baat mere mummy papa se mat kehna agar aap unn se mile to please.”

Doc ne kaha,

“bilkool bhi nahin karunga, magar tum mujhe apne ghar ka aur mobile number deti jao, so that agar Vihaan ke baare mein kuch khaas development hui ya usske baare mein kuch batana bhool gaya hoon to tumko phone karke bata dunga tab tumko disturb hoke yahan nahin ana padega. Agar tumko eitraz nah ho to mujhko number de sakti ho, main save karta hoon apne paas.”

Aur Ashita ne bhi doc ka number save kiya Vihaan ke mobile par taake agar ussko bhi doc se Vihaan ke baare mein kuch kehna ya puchna hai to discuss kar sake.

Aur donon saheli relax feel karte hue uss doctor ke consultation se nikle.

Raaste mein jaate waqt Priya Ashita ko maarte hue bolti jaa rahi thi,

“saali, kamini, apne bai ka girlfriend banaya mujhe tum ne, aur upar se sex ke bare mein bhi doc ko mere taraf ishara kiya main teri munh noch lungi kutti kahin ki!”

Ashita Priya ki maar se bachte hue aague aaguey bhaag rahi thi zoron se hansste hue. Log unn donon ko masti karte hue road par jaate dekh rahe the. Do college girls uniform mein uss tarah se masti karte hue kissi ko acha lag raha tha dekhna kissi ko bura.

Priya ne doc ki sentence dohraate hue kaha, “to tum apne hone wali bhabi ke saath aayi ho hihihihihihihihi”

Donon phir zoron se hanssne lage….

Aur thodi der baad donon normal baat karte hue jaane lage to Priya ne kaha,

“Tum samajhti ho ke doctor ullo hai kia? Ussko sab samajh mein agaya tere aur Vihaan ke baare mein. Tumne dekha nahin last mein wo sari batein sirf tumse kehne lage the mujhse nahin?”

Ashita ne kaha,

“Mujhe bhi laga ke wo samajh gaya magar he is a very good human, he understands life. Kuch bhi nahin kaha ussne.”

Aur Priya ne kaha,

“kitna handsome hai yaar main to uss se pyar kar lun abhi hi, he looks so young, agar wo batate nahin to bilkool nahin lagta ke he is 56 years old, he is a very lovely and handsome person and a very good human being.”

Ashita Priya ke baat se sehmat thi……


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3 din ke baad Vihaan ghar agaya tha.

Ashita Khushi se jhum rahi thi aur apne papa ki help se apne bed ko bhi Vihaan ke room mein lagayi aur keh diya ke raat bhar wo Vihaan ke kamre mein hi rahegi usska dekh bhaal karne ke liye.

Magar raat ko wo Vihaan ke bed par usske saath sote hue nazar aayi bilkool pehle ki tarah Vihaan ko apne baahon mein bharke, aur apne tangon ko usske tangon mein jakar kar.

To be continued……(3940 words from two last updates )
 
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awesome update dear :superb:
dono update bahut hi ache the khas karke priya aur ashita ki dr. agarwal se huyi baatchit
tharki dr. ko saza mili par koi action scene nahi aaye :(
ye bawli priya ko apne dada ke umra ke insan se sachi love to nahi ho gaya :hehe:
vihaan aur ashita fir se ek sath ab vihaan ko normal karne ki bari ashita ki :)
 
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Super update sir...all contents of this update is so positive...aur aapne jistrah se biology terms ko explain kiya, wo bahut hi badhiya tha...ab fir se vihaan aur ashita ka pyar sayad dekhne ko milega...
 
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Sach batau casi bhai apki kahani padhte samay Aisa partit hota hai jaise Mai koi chalchitr dekh Raha hu
Ye Kewal apke lekhni ki Shakti se hi sambhav hai
Ab aate hai kahani par hamesha ki tarah ye update bhi shandar the
Ashita-priya-doctor ki vartalap bahut pasand aayi
Vihaan ka pura report bhi mil gya
18 mahine se hi Dard aur ghav diya tha ashita ne ab use khud hi uspe Marham lagana hai
Dekhte hain kab tak Vihaan thik ho pata hai
 
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donon updates mujhe bahut bahut bahut hi passand aaye.
bahut hi besht likha hai aap ne.
eisa laga ke koyi movie dekh rahi hoon jeise sab kuch enkhon ke saamne ho raha hai
aap ki likhne ki capacity itna strong hai ke paathak ko baandh lete ho apne script mein.
Priya aur Ashita ki conversation doctor se behad majedaar aur lajawaab hein. bahut funy bhi the kayi jagah par. Priya aur Ashita ek dusre ko support bhi katte aur jeise dhoka bhoi dete ghalati se.... bahut comic the donon, magar ashita ki udaasi bhi feel hue jab jab doctor ki baaton se wo royi.
jab donon raaste par masti karte jaa rahe the to mujhe laga main do students ko uss tarah se jaate hue dekh rahi hoon road par uniform mein.
bahut hi shaandaar likha hai aap ne casi ji. hats off.
sab se best end tha ke vihaan ke saath bed par pehle ki tarah Ashita so rahi hai wowww maja agaya my dear.
:adore: adore: adore: adore: adore: adore: adore: adore:
AND THANKS VERY MUCH ITNI ACHI KAHANI AUR UPDATES KE LIYE.
 
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