Incest Vihaan Aur Ashita - Bhai Behen ki kahani - Exclusively written for XFORUM(COMPLETED)

[Casinar]

Bidu tumhare writing skill, ye likhne ka style, ye conversation, ye paragraphs ye inverted commas, ye sentence buildings nah ye sab padhne me ek alag maja ata hai bidu.
Kabhi to apun ko lagta hai ek kitaab padh rela hoon aur kabhi shak hota hai k sala tu kissi book ko copy to nahin karta. Magar tab apun ko khud thapad maarta hoon k casinar par shak karna apne aap par shak karna hai. Ek non Hindi writer ka eise likhna bade kamaal ki baat hota hai bidu. Sala issi forum dekhta hoon Hindi likhne wale, Issi India ke rehne wale itna ganda likhte hein k ghin ata hai, sharam lagta hai aap ki writing se innke writing ko compare karta hoon to.
Casi bidu aap ko eise hi legend nahin kehte aap full deserve karte ho.
Aap ka hath chumne ko hai apun ko.
Fabtafabulous mind boggling update likha hai bidu

bahot shukriya King bro

 

[Casinar]

Bhut khubsurat update casi ji. Short but sweet.
Suspense aur bhi badhta jaa raha hai. Ruchi kidhar udh gayi? Gayab ho gayi? Mujhe vihaan k liye worry ho raha hai. Vi bimaar hai nah? Brain issues hai nah ussko? Kia ussko aur brain damage nahin hoga itne stress se?
Ruchi usske life mein aayi, pyar hua, sex hua, vihaan ki thakaan ki excess hui aur wo hospitalised hua. Matlab thoda maja k liye hopital ki bed pakarna pada. Matlab Ruchi usske liye wrong saabit hui. Negative saabit hui usske liye.
Aur mujhe darr hai k ab Ruchi ki vajah se Vihaan ko aur bhi serious health problems na ho jaaye.
Jo mystery aap ne create kiya hai nah vo jabardast hai. Bhut acha ja raha hai keep it up. You are doing a great job.
Hats off.
Dekhte hein k promise break karke, Ruchi k ghar jaake kia haasil karte hein donon.

bahot bahot shukriya komal dear

 

[Casinar]

waiting new update

thodi der mein karta hoon, aur ek page ke baad

 

[Casinar]

Thanks for being regular

i update EVERYDAY dod not do on weekends except if i am free

 

[Casinar]

Bhai ka yeiisch style hai..

thanks james bro

 

[Casinar]

Ek achhi si review to de dijiye na aapki casi sir ke writing skill ko leke plz plz plz plz

wo zaroor deta hai magar rarely

 

[Casinar]

Kar deti but meri review pe aap hanste ho...

jo funny hota hai wo hanssne ke liye hi ota hai nah? ussko apni success samajhna chahiye dear

 

[Casinar]

casi bhai ke liye jitna bhi likhun mai suraj ko diya dikhana jaise hoga mam waise wo khud jante wo kya hain aur mere likhe gaye ek sabd bhi anmol hote hain jo aasani se nahi milte aur ye to samjh lo thread hi apni hai tabhi to har post like karta hun aur kya kahun behtar hai chup rahun aap enjoy karo hamko jo karna hoga karenge casi bhai ke liye

are vah Rahul, yeh hui nah baat
thanks very much yara

 

[Casinar]

Brilliant review

hmmm dekha nah

 

[Casinar]

Kal update aae the mujhe pata na chala.
Wonderful update of suspense.
Ruchi kidhar gayi? Kaun utha legaya ussko? Ye kia raaz hai?
Are casi bhai ye incest love story mein suspense bhi agaya what a fantastic idea. Ye keise kiya aap ne bhai. Maja dugna ho gaya eise update padhkar yaar.
Magar jiada lamba mat khincha issko bhai.... weise pata hai k aap lamba nahin khinte scenes ko.
Jaldi se suljhao iss secret ko bhai. Aakhir Ruchi kia chij hai, kyun aayi thi wo Vihaan ki life mein aur kyun chali bhi gayi. Bheja garam kar diya aap ne magar update majedaar hai bhai.

bahot shukriya Shambhu bhai