Incest Vihaan Aur Ashita - Bhai Behen ki kahani - Exclusively written for XFORUM(COMPLETED)

[Savi]

Kia baat hai casi ji kahani ne achanak ek naya mod le liya jo lena chahiye tha aur hum intjar mein bhi the magar eise hoga isska bilkool umeed nahin thi.
Kia kamaal ka plan kiya hai aap ne uss mod par aane k liye ye bahut hi acha laga.
Bhut realistic hai Vihaan k dimagh me uss tarah se brain bleeding shuru hona kyunke ye pehle hua tha aur jiss tarah se wo apne time ko wrongly istemal kar raha tha kum sokar aur jiada sex aur padhaayi ect karke k wo hona bilkool natural laga.
Very well imagined and well planned.
Ab aate hein Ruchi par. Ruchi the mysterious girl keh sakte hein usse.
Sach mein kia character banaya hai aap ne iss Ruchi ki. Bahut hi intriguing character hai ye ladki. Bahut acha bhi banaya hai aap ne character ko. Usski shuru mein masoomiyat, usski bholepan, usski bahut achi mizaj sab ab fake lagne lagi hai. Ab eisa lagta hai k Ruchi itne dinon se sab kuch plan karke kar rahi thi. Eisa lag raha hai ke yeh sab Ruchi ka ek game plan tha.
Yeh meri personal soch hai aur ho sakta hai main ghalat hoon. Ho sakta hai k jo aap reveal karo vo kuch aur hi ho lekin an tak jo kuch main ne padha aur jitne situations aaye hein Vihaan aur Ruchi k darmiyan mujhe Ruchi ki sab kuch plan kiya hua lagne laga hai.
Ab ussne jiss tarah se 4 din k liye contact ko break kiya, uss se milne nahin gayi aur 4 din k bich wo ghayab ho gayi jeisa k ussne kaha tha.
Kia ye sab Ruchi ne planning k bina kiya?
Excellent update casi ji.

 

[Suparseupar]

Superb. Awesome. Very interesting turn in the story. Was not expecting it will cme so fast. But it came.
Ruchi disappeared as she had said. Great now we will know about her I hope

 

[Vikram]

have reached till update 21.
a wonderful story my dear
It's so nice to read that I feel I will reach to actual update tonight, hopefully
very interesting characters and your narration is fabulous.
First time reading a story from you though have heard a lot about you in the past Casinar
you are indeed and great writer I can say.
Will catch you tonight or at latest by tomorrow morning.

Casinar last time I had read till update 21 and had said will reach the last update that night but could not make it.
BUT TONIGHT I DID IT.
I read the last update just a moment ago. In fact I was left to terminate 10 updates and just finishef all of them. Pheeeeewwww my friend this is a fantastic story. You are an amazing writer. Its the first time I am reading your story.
Kia likhte ho bhai buss ek behtareen lekhak ho aap.
I am proud and happy that I started reading yout story the FIRST here. I did read few others but stopped as they were not of real interest. Your writing skill is perfect.
Get the feel of reading a professional writer, a real author.
You have amazing writing capability. You the art of portraying anything and make the reader get connected with your content. You are very creative and know how to create amazing situations which are most of the tine very realistic. You make the readers LIVE the moments. Readers feel going through all that are happening in the story.
I personally felt that I am watching a vety interesting movie.
Where this story has now reached is at a very important phase and I'm very happy to be part of the readers who will now b able to post comment on every coming updates. Its a real pleasure to read from you dear Casinar and i am proud and happy to call myself your fan.
Thanks very much for this great, amazing, beautiful, awesome story.
Waiting for the next update.
Thanks, thanks and thanks a million times dear.
Vikram with love.

 

[Naina]

hmm main keh rahi thi na... daal mein kuch toh jarur Kala hain..... ... joh woh pehle kahti rahti thi ki gayab ho jaungi gayab ho jaungi....kahi sach mein gayab toh nahi ho gayi . waise pehle pehal toh yeh ruchi kaafi bholi aur masoom lag rahi thi par ab to fully mysterious lag rahi hain....
Vihaan.... ... ab insaan hain yal machine thodi na hain..... lo ji ho gaya bimar....
sochni wali baat yeh hain ki jab vihaan ruchi ke ghar jaye aur jake dekhe ki uske ghar tala laga hua hain tab kiya karega vihaan....... ek request thi casi sir ki agar ho sake to har update mein thodi bahot ashita ki activities ke baade dikha dete toh...
Btw let's see what happens next
Brilliant update casi sir..... Great going..

 

[Hornyhunter512]

Jo jawaab main me monika ko diya wohi jawab tumko bhi deta hoon.
Tum 10 saal k bacha ho kia bhai? Kia kahani padhna nahin ata?
Kia Ashita apne baap ae chud gayi? Kia kissi aur ne Ashita ko choda kia bhai?
Ab kia Ashita ko SAPNA bhi ana mana hai kia?

Yes I m 10 year old child.....
Maine to pahle hi bola tha.ki bura mat manana comment ka,,,,khud hi comment Karne ko bolte ho to jaruri nahi har tumhari tareef hi karu..jaisa lagega waisa hi comment krunga,,,ji huzuri mujhe aati nahi...
And bachho wali harkate tum Kar rhe ho ki jab Tak chocolate do to Khushi warna gussa ho jayenge...means update ki tareef karu to theek nhi to chhidh gye....
Any ways don't worry Meri wajah se apna and apne baaki readers ka mood khrab mat kro ...
Sorry...aaj ke bad Mai tumhare thread pe nahi dikhai dunga....

 

[Iron Man]

Awesome update

 

[Casinar]

Yes I m 10 year old child.....
Maine to pahle hi bola tha.ki bura mat manana comment ka,,,,khud hi comment Karne ko bolte ho to jaruri nahi har tumhari tareef hi karu..jaisa lagega waisa hi comment krunga,,,ji huzuri mujhe aati nahi...
And bachho wali harkate tum Kar rhe ho ki jab Tak chocolate do to Khushi warna gussa ho jayenge...means update ki tareef karu to theek nhi to chhidh gye....
Any ways don't worry Meri wajah se apna and apne baaki readers ka mood khrab mat kro ...
Sorry...aaj ke bad Mai tumhare thread pe nahi dikhai dunga....

Comment karne ko main kissi ko bolta nahin hoon. TUM NE MUJHE PM KARKE ITNE SAARE TAARIF KIYE THE love with a rapist ka aur kaha tha k mere sabhi naye stories ka WAIT karoge TAB main ne tumko iss kahani ko padhne aur reply karne ko kaha. VARNA MAIN KABHI BHI KISSI KO REPLY KARNE KO NAHIN KEHTA HOON. Sirf mere readers ko hi kehta hoon aur socha tha tum ek ho iss liye kaha tha nahin pata tha nah k immature 10 saal ka bacha ho. Ab pata chala KAHANI FORUM PAR HAI JISSKO PADHNA HAI WO PADHE JISSKO REPLY KARNA HAI WO KARE. tumhare uss pm ko yahan post karke dikhaun kia?
Aur abhi to main ne tumhare uss comment ko reply bhi nahin kiya hoon jisske baare mein tum baat kar rahe ho. Main ne to tumhare uss comnent ko reply kiya jissko tumne Monica ko reply kiya. Aur tum to uss comment k bare mein baat kar rahe ho jiss mein tumne bura nah maanne ki baat kiya hai. Ghaur se dekho kia uss comnent ki reply kiya main ne tumko??
Ji huzurri MUJHE CHAHIYE BHI NAHIN. HARGIZ nahin. Kissi ne aaj tak WORST nahin kaha mere kissi bhi update ko. Agar wo update worst hota to tum AKELE ko kyun laga? Baaki ke mature readers k comments ko bhi padha karo, unn logon ko kyun worst nahin laga? Immaturity dikhta hai jissko padhna hi nahin ata wo saaf dikhta hai.
Reply karna hai karo, na karna hai nah karo ye tumhari marzi.
Jab main ne abhi tak Ashita ko saaf paak rakha hai, ussko kissi ne choda hi nahin wo apne Vihaan k liye hai aur rahegi kayi baar keh chuka hoon issi thread par shuru se phir bhi andhon ko main ENKHEN to nahin de sakta nah?
React eise karte hein jeise Ashita ki choot mein kissi aur ka lund ghusste aur nikalte dekh liya. Writer ka kaam hai dimagh istemal karke paathakon ko ghumana aur tum ghum gaye to main KAAMYAAB HUA

 

[Koi toh rok lo]

Nice update bro
Waiting bro

 

[Koi toh rok lo]

Comment karne ko main kissi bolta nahin hoon. TUM NE MUJHE PM KARKE ITNE SAARE TAARIF KIYE THE love with a rapist ka aur kaha tha k mere sabhi naye stories ka WAIT karoge TAB main ne tumko iss kahani ko padhne aur reply karne ko kaha. VARNA MAIN KABHI BHI KISSI KO REPLY KARNE KO NAHIN KEHTA HOON. KAHANI FORUM PAR HAI JISSKO PADHNA HAI WO PADHE JISSKO REPLY KARNA HAI WO KARE. tumhare uss pm ko yahan post karke dikhaun kia?
Aur abhi to main ne tumhare yss comment ko reply bhi nahin kiya hoon jisske baare mein tum baat kar rahe ho. Main ne to tumhare uss comnent ko reply kiya jissko tumne Monica ko reply kiya. Aur tum to uss comment k bare mein baat kar rahe ho jiss mein tumne bura nah maanne ki baat kiya hai. Ghaur se dekho kia uss comnent ki reply kiya main ne tumko??
Ji huzurri MUJHE CHAHIYE BHI NAHIN. HARGIZ nahin. Kissi ne aaj tak WORST nahin kaha mere kissi bhi update ko. Agar wo update worst hota to tum AKELE ko kyun laga? Baaki ke mature readers k comments ko bhi padha karo, unn logon ko kyun worst nahin laga? Immaturity dikhta hai jissko padhna hi nahin ata wo saaf dikhta hai.
Reply karna hai karo, na karna hai nah karo ye tumhari marzi.
Jab main ne abhi tak Ashita ko saaf paak rakha hai, ussko kissi ne choda hi nahin wo apne Vihaan k liye hai aur rahegi kayi baar keh chuka hoon issi thread par shuru se phir bhi andhon ko main ENKHEN to nahin de sakta nah?
React eise karte hein jeise Ashita ki choot mein kissi aur ka lund ghusste aur nikalte dekh liya. Writer ka kaam hai dimagh istemal karke paathakon ko ghumana aur tum ghum gaye to main KAAMYAAB HUA

Sahi kaha bro
Jab vihaan kisi or k sath maza kar sakda hai toh ashita kyu nahi
Ab j Story ashita vihaan ke love Story Hai toh ashita vihaan ka wait Kara k ow a kar oski pyass mitya
Ab j toh glat Hai ek maza kara dushra bus waiting kara
Ab Ashita thoda maza toh la sakdi hai
Osko bi apne jism ki pyass mitani hai
Itna toh chelta hai
Keep going bro
Next update ka intzar raha gya

 

[shambhu]

Update 77 And This Happened​

Vihaan ka ab routine ho gaya tha har subha ko bus stop par Ruchi ka wait karna, ek saath bus mein chipak ke baithna, college mein flirt karna, kiss karna, har shaam ko Ruchi ko usske ghar ke aas paas chorr ke wapas ana, aate waqt Phoolvati ka Vihaan ka wait karna aur har roz phoolvati se usske aangan ke saamne ruk kar 15/20 minutes tak baat karna, Phoolvati ka uth pataang baat flirt style mein karna….. yeh sab har roz, pura haffta chalta tha eisa vihaan ki routine mein….

Ab iss ke ilawa raat ko barah baje 5/6 baar aur Vihaan Ruchi ke kamre mein gaya khidki se aur Ruchi ke saath 2/3 ghante beetaaye. Sex advance ho gaya tha donon ke beech, aur zaroorat ek dusre ki advance level ki ho gaye the… sab kuch jo Aashita ke saath karta tha, wohi sab kuch Ruchi ke saath bhi karne laga tha Vihaan. Aur dil se pyar bhi karne laga tha, matlab Vihaan ke liye ab Ruchi ke bina rehna naamumkin ho gaya tha. Ruchi ke baghair nah usska subha hota, nah din guzarta aur nah raat. Ashita ko jeise ussne corner hi kar diya tha, jab mann kare call karta varna Ashita ko khud usse phone karke uss se baat karna hota tha.

Vihaan ke paas waqt kum padhne lage the, 24 hours usske liye ab kaafi nahin tha apne sabhi activities ko niptaane ke liye. College jana, padhana, khud padhna aur apne exams ki tayyaari karna, Ruchi ke saath time beetaana, raat ko ya to uss se chat karna, ya Ashita ki call attend karna, ya beech raat mein Ruchi ke kamre mein usske saath sex karna, phir wapas ana, sona, subha ko uthna jaldi se tayyaar hona aur phir college jana!!

Takriban har roz usske sar mein dard hota tha, enkhen dard karne lage the, ussko saans lene ke liye time kaafi nahin tha…. har raat sirf dhai ya 3 ghante so paata tha. usske sehat par assar hone lage the aur ek din college mein vihaan behosh gir pada beech class mein.

Ussko seedha hospital lejaaya gaya college ke taraf se hi. Ruchi ko uss din pata bhi nahin chala ke Vihaan ko college se hospital lejaya gaya kyunke Vihaan apne khud ke class attend karte hue girra tha.

Uss roz Ruchi heyraan hui Vihaan ko yard mein dhudnte hue kyunke eisa pehli baar hua tha ke college end hone ke baad Vihaan absent tha. Ab bus wait kar rahe the aur Ruchi ko bus mein jana tha magar usske samajh mein nahin arahi thi ke keise jaayen vihaan ke bina. Kissi ne to bataya bhi nahin tha ke Vihaan hospitalise hua hai, Administration walon ko pata tha magar students ko nahin.

Ruchi aur Phoolvati bus mein baithe aur donon baahar dekhte rahe aur jab bus jaane ke liye start hue to Ruchi chilla uthi, conductor se rukne ke liye kaha. Bus ruka to Ruchi bus se utar gayi aur bhaagte hue office ke taraf gayi, aur udhar phoolvati ne bus ko roke rakha.

Ruchi wapas aayi to rone lagi Phoolvati se kehte hue ke Vihaan behosh girr gaya tha aur hospital mein admit hua hai office walon ne ussko bataya jab wo puchne gayi to. Phoolvati ne kaha ke bus se utrein aur hospital chalen magar Ruchi ne kaha ke wo hospital nahin jaa sakti usske personal reasons the hospital nah jaane ka. Aur ussne Phoolvati ko akeli jaane ko kaha, wo maan gayi aur bus se utar gayi.

Phoolvati hospital jaate waqt khud se kehti gayi ke ussne notice kiya pichle kuch dinon se ke vihaan bahot thakka hua dikh raha tha, jeise bahot ziada kaam karne ke baad koyi thaka hua dikhta hai weisa hi vihaan dikh rahe the pichle kuch dinon se, yeh phoolvati ne notice kiya tha pichle kuch dinon se. to sochne lagi ke kyun vihaan utna thakka hua dikhne laga tha? Kia vajah thi ke wo araam nahin karta tha, soch liya uss ne ke hospital mein vihaan se milkar sawaal karegi uss se.

Hospital pahunch kar jab phoolvati vihaan se mili to Vihaan ki nazrein Ruchi ko dhund rahe the, aur pucha Phool se ke Ruchi kyun nahin aayi.

Behrehaal, vihan ko 4 din ke liye hospital mein rehne ko kaha gaya kyunke usske brain mein bleedings hone lage the. Pichli baar ki blood clotting ki vajah se abhi jo stress vihaan le rahe the apne overload activities ki vajah se usske brain mein negative effects hue. Ussko rest ki zaroorat thi, doctor ne ussko zabardasti rest karne ko kaha varna brain mein serious problems ho sakte the.

Ab jab doctor ne vihaan se pucha ki wo sexually active hai to vihaan ne haan mein jawaab diya, doctor ne pucha kitne ghanta sota hai to ussne kaha 3 ya 4 ghante to doctor ne kaha agar wo 7 ghante nahin soya to pagal ho sakta hai!! Aur doctor ne ussko samjhaya ke sexual activities brain se direct connect hota hai aur ziada excitement aur sex ko lekar agar bahot active raha to usske brain ko takliff ho sakte hein iss liye filhaal ke liye kuch dinon tak sex se bhi door rehne ko kaha gaya tha usse, at least inn 4 dinon tak rest karne ko kaha doctor ne.

Phoolvati ke sawaal karne par vihaan ne yeh sab kuch nahin bataya usse buss itna kaha ke ussko rest ki zaroorat hai. Wo kum sota hai iss liye behosh gira tha. magar phoolvati honshiyaar ladki thi uss ne khud vihaan se kaha,

“Tum yeh Ruchi se milna aur eysh karna thoda kum karo iss se bhi dimaagh kharaab hota hai, uss se thora kum mila karo, ghar par araam bhi kiya karo, soya karo, har waqt sirf usske piche mat laga raho, wo hai to yahin nah araam se waqt nikaal kar milo, har raat kyun jaate ho uss se milne, tum kia samajhte ho mujhe nahin pata ke tum raat raat bhar usske bistar par hote ho? sab pata hai mujhe. Jiss din tum ne pucha tha ke mere bedroom mein raat ko night lamp jalti rehti hai tabhi main samajh gayi thi ke tum uss se milne jaate honge raat ko tabhi mere room ki light on dekha hoga tumne. Ruchi nahin bataati par usske haav bhav se main sab samajh jaati hoon jiss raat ko tum uss se milte ho….”

Vihaan ne araam se muskuraate hue Phool ki baton ko suna aur usse laga ke Ashita ussko daant rahi hai, to phool se kaha,

“Thik hai meri maa thik hai araam karunga, tum ab ghar jao, haan aaj main nahin rahunga udhar tumhare aangan ke saamne tumse chat karne ke liye, mat rona main wapas ajaunga 4 din ke baad hahaha!”

Phool ne munh banaate hue kaha,

“main kyun rone lagi bhala ro to wo rahi thi tera Ruchi, ab bhi ghar jaakar ro rahi hogi!”

Itna hi kaha tha Phool ne ke ruchi ki message aayi phool ki mobile par to phool ne kaha,

“lo, tere baare mein hi puch rahi hai ke main mila ya nahin tujhse aur tu keisa hai puch rahi hai kia bolun?”

Vihaan ne kaha,

“Uss se puch ke aayi kyun nahin main usska wait kar raha tha bol de!”

Tab Phool ne Ruchi ko call kiya aur mobile Vihaan ko de diya baat karne ke liye.

Ruchi ne rote hue Vihaan se pucha ke kia hua usski tabiyat keisi hai, to vihaan ne ussko tassalli dete hue kaha ke fikar karne ki koi baat nahin ussko araam ki zaroorat hai. Aur vihaan ne pucha ke wo kyun nahin aayi uss se hospital milne ko?

Ruchi ne samjhaya ke wo agar thik waqt par ghar nahin pahunchi to ussko problem hogi, har roz exact time par ussko ghar par hona zaroori hota hai varna ussko bahot mushkilon se guzarna padta hai. Vihaan samajh gaya ke usski bhabi baiya ki vajah se wo nahin aa paayi hospital.

Akhir mein Phool wapas chali gayi aur vihaan ruchi ke baare mein ghanton tak sochta raha, phir aakhir mein ashita ko socha to ussko call kiya. Shaam ka waqt tha to use pata tha ashita kitchen mein kaam kar rahi hogi. Vihaan Ashita ko nahin batana chahta tha ke wo hospital mein admit hai nahin to wo bahot fikar karti aur vihaan ki mummy papa bhi pareshan hote iss liye vihaan ne video call nahin normal call kiya Ashita ko.

Ashita se koyi ek ghante tak baat kiya phone ke through vihaan ne aur kaha ke office ke kaam mein busy hai overtime kar raha hai iss liye agle 4 dinon tak wo ussko phone nahin karega iss liye fikar nahin karna.

Apne dada ji ko phone karke vihaan ne bata diya ke wo hospital mein admit hai aur apne mummy papa ko bataane ko mana kiya.

Dada ji, chacha aur chachi aur ekaat cousins ussko raat ko dekkhne aaye hospital mein aur jab pata chala ke ziada serious nahin hai buss ussko rest ki zaroorat hai to wapas chale gaye aur dada ji ne har roz uss se milne ka vada kar gaya.

Ruchi ne phone kiya raat ko Vihaan se baat kiya magar uss se kaha ke agle chaar din wo bhi uss se bilkool, bhi contact nahin karegi iss liye ke wo nahin chahti ke usski vajah se ussko takliff ho. Ruchi samajh gayi thi ke uss se raat raat bhar milne ki vajah se usske saat raat guzaarne ki vajah se vihaan ki sehat par bura assar par raha tha, samajhdaar thi wo, Ruchi samajh gayi ke usske saath itna sex karke, raaton ko jaag ke, kum sokar vihaan ka yeh haal hua hai, aur ussne ab ek aur vada liya vihaan se ke inn 4 dinon tak donon bilkool bhi contact nahin karenge jeise ek dusre ko jaante bhi nahin.

Vihaan nahin maan raha tha, ussne kaha ke kum se kum messages to kar sakte hein… magar Ruchi ne kaha ke 4 din bina koyi baat kiye, bina mesg kiya milenge to usska maza alag hoga, tab vihaan maan gaya aur kaha ke thik hai 4 din baad donon wapas milenge.

Inn 4 dinon ko vihaan bilkool akela raha, nah ashita ko contact kiya aur nah Ruchi ko. Jeise 4 dinon ka vrat rakh liya tha ussne. Magar sirf Phoolvati se contact rakha ussne. Phoolvati ke zarye Ruchi ki khabar leta rehta tha, magar dusre din ko jab vihaan ne Ruchi ke baare mein pucha Phool se to ussne bataya ke Ruchi uss din college nahin aayi. Vihaan ne socha shayad Ruchi ko acha nahin lag raha college mein kyunke wo nahin jaa raha issi liye ruchi bhi nahin gayi college.

Chauthe din ko bhi Phool ne kaha ke Ruchi college nahin aayi thi. Ab bhi vihaan ne socha ke ruchi vihaan ko bahot miss kar rahi hogi college mein issi liye wo nahin aayi… aur chauthe din ke baad jab vihaan ko hospital se discharge mila to wo Saturday ka din tha aur jo pehla chiz ussne kiya wo tha Ruchi ko phone karna, pehle text kiya ghanta bhar wait kiya magar Ruchi ki koyi jawaab nahin aayi to uskso vihaan ne call kiya magar Ruchi ki mobile switch off arahi thi…..

Kyun? Kyun Ruchi ki mobile off arahi thi? Eisa to pehle kabi bhi nahin hua tha? kahan gayi Ruchi? Kia jeise ussne kaha tha ke ek din achanak se ghaayab ho jaegi, to kia wo ghaayab ho gayi? Keise? Kahan gayi?

Vihaan ab kia karega? Usske khidki ke paas jaakar uss se milne ki koshish karega raat ko? Magar jab ruchi jawaab hi nahin degi to keise jaega udhar? Ab kia hoga?

Agle update mein pata chalega!!

To be continued………..

Wow vo samaye agaya itni jaldi? Mujhe to laga tha kuch time lagega raaz jaanne me Ruchi k baare mein. Magar mujhe bhi jaldi thi to khush husa iss update ko padhke.
Kia jabardast idea hai boss Vihaan ki pehle wale bimaari ko dobara usske hectic dinon ko milakar ek baar aut bleeding karwane ki vah
Bahut logical update diya hai bhai. Khub fit baithta hai kahani mein. Superb.
Rahi baat Ruchi ki to seikron sawal aate hein jo baaki k paathakon k kaha wohi mere bhi sawaal hein aur update me aap ne bhi sawaal kar diya end mein. To dekhte hein agle update mein kitna saamne ata hai Ruchi ki secrets ta phir aap kuch aur hi update doge aap suspense ko aur barkaraar rakhne k liye?
Jabardast update hai bhai