Incest Vihaan Aur Ashita - Bhai Behen ki kahani - Exclusively written for XFORUM(COMPLETED)

[Casinar]

Jhakaas, faaduu updtae bhai
bahut behtareen update hai aaj vala
Ruchi aur Phoolvati se gawn mein milkar bahut hi acha laga
Fantastic update

thanks very much bro

 

[Casinar]

Wooow superb update hai casi ji. Bahut hi khubsurti se likha hai aap ne dear.
Main ne socha tha kuch eisa hoga magar bilkool nahin socha tha k aap issko itni khubsurti se likhoge. Aap ki likhne ki shaili nah ek alag hi mod deta hai update ko. Aap jiss tarike se ek event ki varnaan karte ho nah wo hatke hota hai aur tamaam vakeah ko ek alag roop de deta hai. Sab dil mein utar jata hai. Yeh hai aap ki likhne ka kamaal.
Main ne bhi socha tha Vihaan ladkiyon ka picha karega baat karega number mangega magar bilkool nahin socha tha k iss tarah ki behad umda update aa sakta hai wo sab karte hue.
Jadugar ho aap casi ji. Aap ki kalam ka jadu chalne lagta hai jab aap likhne baithte ho to yehi keh sakti hoon.
Aur kuch nahin kahungi. Hope itna kaafi hai bataane k liye k yeh update kitna passand aayi mujhe.
Thanks very much. Eise hi jadu karte chaliye dear.

Aap ka tehe dil se shukriya Savi dear iss khubsurat review k liye

 

[Casinar]

Fantastic, Mindblowing, breathtaking update hai casi bhai.
Bhut shaandaar likha hai aap ne yaar. Bahut passand aya mujhe.
Vihaan full flirt kiye ja raha hai. Donon ladkiyon ko pata liya ussne to. Ek ka numbar mil gaya ek ka milna baki hai. Bhut fast hai hero apna ladkiyon k maamle mein kyun?
Afsos hua Ruchi ki ghar ki life k bare mein jaan kar. Dayan bhabi hai wo to. Aur keisa bhai he k behen par usski patni julm karti hai to vo kuch nahin karta behen k liye?
Phoolvati se baat bhi kar liya hero ne phone par wow. Kahin ye phoolvati bhi pyar na kar baithe hamare hero se. Kyun mujhe eisa lag raha h k wo Vihaan k.liye ek soft corner bana chuki hai apne dil mein?
Khai dekhte hai aage kia hota hai.
Kahani bahut hi mast chal rahi hai bhai, eise hi lage rahi dost.

Bahot bahot shukriya Indian bhai

 

[Casinar]

Itna pyara update hai ke do baar padhi main ne. Bhut kamaal k likha hai aap ne. Sab kuch bahut hi pyar se likha gaya hai. Sab kuch araam se likha hai aap ne.
Ruchi aur Phoolvati donon new entries bhut ache hein. Donon k role nikhar kar aaye hein Vihaan k saath.
Ruchi k bare mein jaan kar dukh hua par ab shayad usske dukhon ka end hone wala hai Vihaan dwara.
Sab kuch behtareen tarike se dikhaya hai aap ne.
Superb, mindblowing, fantastic.

Thanks very much Saathi dear

 

[Casinar]

Very beautiful update Casinar ji. Lovely update. Written so beautifully that its worth several reads.
You wrote it with perfection. You put soul in the update which pleases all readers and it connects so strongly. Everything is perfect in this update. Every character has an importance, each one had a role to play and all did very well. Its a wonderful screenplay casinar ji.
From start to end this is a movie sequence and will b very much appreciated by cinegoers.
I just imagined sitting in the theatre and the movie starts with two college girls in the bus laughing about a boy who just missed a wave to one of the girls.
Next scene at the bus stop the hero waiting for them and from inside the bus the girls talking about him and the scene changed when the hero started walking by their side flirtatiously.
And that you have written happens exactly in the movie.
Hoe awesome is that Casinar ji?
So you are such a good story teller that any of your stories can easily be made into a movie. You know if a film producer finds you he will not make any movies till you do not write for him. I can bet on that. Like I hv read your faraar, love with a rapist, and Y.B.M.H.H. Those are great movie stuffs. This is why I love reading from you.
Hats off Casinar ji for such a wonderful update my dear.

Thanks very very much for the lovely appreciaton and review Amity dear

 

[Casinar]

Kia kahun casi bhai kia nah kahun?
Pyar ho gaya mujhe aap ki kahani se, pyar ho gaya Ruchi se, pyar ho gaya phoolvati se pyar ho gaya Ashita se, pyar ho gaya iss kahani k har character se, pyar ho gaya har reader se, readers k har comment se.
Pyar ho gaya aap se aap ki writing se aap ki varnaan, pyar ho gaya aap ke har ek update k intejaar se.
Pyar keise nahin hoga aap jeise calibre ki writer ki kahani se.
Shayad hi koyi eisi kahani hogo jahan updates k ilawa har comments ko padhte hein readers. Main to miss nahin karta. Har ek comment ko padhta hoon har update k saath tabhi to kaha readers aur unnke comment se bhi pyar ho gaya.
Kaun eisi thread hai jinn par iss tarah k comment aate hein aap k threads k ilawa? Nahin hai, nahin hai, nahin hai.

bahot bahot shukriya nayan bhai arey bjai aap bi likh sakte ho! laga ke ek update pah raha hoon

 

[Casinar]

Bilkool sahi kaha hai

Agree 100%

thanks dosto dusre readers ko support ke liye

 

[Casinar]

I also AGREE

Jhakaas, faadu. Gajab, jabardast.
Aur kuch nahin kehna apun ko baaki sab ne keh diya apun ne padh liya.
Buss gajab gajab gajab

bahot bahot shukriya King bhai

 

[Casinar]

sir mera khna manoge to vihaan ki shadi uski sister she hi krna bohat story mai pdha hai ek se Jada shadi hoti hai so plz vihaan ki shadi
sirf uske sister ke sath hi krna
Baki ko sex kisi ke nhi sath kre chlega
Aj ka update shi that mja aagya pdh ke

bahot shukriya monika dear, dekhte hein keise badhaate hein aage

 

[Casinar]

its my opinion ap ko jaisa lge vaise likho pdhne ne mai mja kisi bhi halat mai aayega thanks

thik hai ddear, jeisa hona chahiye weisa hi hoga nah