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Update 117  | November 28th 11:30 PM |
Update 118 | December 6th 11:30 PM |
Update 119  | December 12th 11:30 PM |
Update 120  | December 16th 11:30 PM |
Update 121 | December 20th 11:30 PM |
Ding waitingUpdate 10:30 ke baad aye ga
Ok Bhai Padhe kal ab to sone ja rhe hainUpdate 10:30 ke baad aye ga
Waiting10:30 se 12:30 ke beech update kabhi bhi aa sakta hai! Agar wait ker sako to theek hai, Agar nahi to main subha padhne ke liye kahu ga, Update 12:30 se pehle aa jaye ga.
Waiting bhai10:30 se 12:30 ke beech update kabhi bhi aa sakta hai! Agar wait ker sako to theek hai, Agar nahi to main subha padhne ke liye kahu ga, Update 12:30 se pehle aa jaye ga.
kafi fast update tha, scenes kafi tezi se aa ja rhe the. shyd quantity k chalte quality thori c compromise ho gai hai. it could have been divided into 2 parts. is se cheezein explain karni asaan ho sakti thin aur humare liye cheezon ko process karna. well nevermind.sonia k sath sex wala part kuch smj mein nai aya like achanak se ese sex ho geya itni jaldi manta hun vansh se revenge k liye ye arav ka first step tha par phir bhi sonia ka itni jaldi yun arav k niche ajana maza sa nai aya. esa lga k arav ko kuch effort hi nai karni pari sonia pehly se hi bhari pari thi k arav aye aur mujhy chod le. i'm very disappointed. main first arc k last update ko abhi bhi feel kar sakta hun aur usi k jesa kuch expect kiya tha us update ne rongtey khare kar diye har ek scene kisi movie ki tarah imagine karne pe majboor kar diya tha. lekin yahan main kahun ga k sonia k sath sex wala part abhi to mujhy unnecessary lga kuch behter ho sakta tha. 2-3k words sex pe zaya ho gaye
mujhy lga tha k shyd is update mein alpha apni team se miley ga lekin esa kuch nai hua. is pure arc mein hi team dungon mein hi busy rahi sandworms k sathhumari luna to lagta hai kafi powerful ho gai hai. daisuke se bhi zeyada powerful lag rhi hai
. aur vansh se bhi mila arav ko itni asani se wtf bro itna easy to nah karo kam se kam vansh k sath to nai qk ye wo villain hai jisey i think sabhi readers sab se zeyada nafrat karte hon ge main to karta hi hun.
aur benchoo ye spirit qi ki bhanak lag hi gai baki clans ko ab maza aye ga nah bhiru. ab lagta hai k next arc mein hume bohat kuch dekhne ko milne wala hai. agar fire clan k leader k sath fight hoti hai aur agar us mein alpha aur luna ka duo dekhne ko mil jaye to
tinkerbell's mother kya ab dark enery poses karti hai? tarun k baton se lagta hai k is spirt ki wajah se wo pehly bhi bohat kuch kho chuka shyd apni family. kya insane fight thi yaar. ye fight incomplete rahi thi to shyd future mein hume is fight ka result dekhne ko miley hope.
akansha ka bhi badla le liya geya hai aur us ki chachi ko arav ne slave bna liya hai. slave bhi pack mein add hoga ya phir is ka koi alag scene hai
tsubameafter so much time kya entry di hai. bisi kisi ko bolne hi nai diya apne samne. arav ki trainer ka title deserve karti hai
keep
see you after the breakhope you'll come soon
Atlast Aarav has come face to face with his worst cheater enemy, Vansh Sayani, who murdered his beloved sister. In a way, Aarav has finally succeeded in getting some sort of revenge by getting intimate with Sonia, Vansh's wife - a superb masterstroke planned & executed well by the brilliant Aarav. Now let's wait and see how Aarav's going to extract his revenge from Vansh by pulling the rug from under his feet
, he he he. A fierce tug of war is imminent
indeed. Wow, what a superb climatic end to Ascension Arc, hats off to you, dear bro
for your brilliant masterstroke at the right moment, once again astonished by your sheer mastermind & it's application at the right time, right place & right situation
. Awaiting your upcoming amazing updates
dear bro with abated breath
Salty~Otaku .... awesome update...I am speechless....mere pass shabd nahi hai kya reply karu....you are such a great writter maza aa gaya...keep it up and thank you so much for such nice story.... weekend itana acche se khatam hoga Maine soch nahi tha...thanks once again with lots of love
Bahot jabardast update tha bhai. Kiya mast move tha bhai ekdamm lallantop. Ab shala vansh ko uraa denaa shale ne aur uski maa ne bahot bura kiya hain. Faar denaa shaalo ko. Abh nahi chhorna shaalo ko bhai . Next update ka intajaar rahegaa bhai
Ohh bhai shab kya turn aaya h story ab smjh aaya aarav kyu business and all mein padha use kyu ye sb Krna tha har chiz k piche vjh thi ab point aaya h samne
Awesome update
Superb bro, beautiful & excellent update,
Excellent update Bhai
Jabardast
Nice update
Feel for you bruhhhh....
As writer I can understand... How difficult editing with phone....
Coz in my story I come up with 3k words update that takes 20 minutes to copy aur paste change font... Men... Very... Difficult.... So hats off how you do itin short time... And comes up with 5-7k words....
Let's talk about last update....
That new year was not bad for aarav love to see this... where he was in front of vansh revealing his identity... Question is that did vansh know who aarav is... If he don't find out then... Things going to be worse for him...
One thing that was confusing right now for me... is that fighting scene... New character coming fighting without intro... N the old one... Ahhhh that was so much confusing... Honestly in my opinion I didn't like that part anyway.... Fufu...
So tasubmi... Knows where aarav comes from... I think she was... I think she also remember him... N he comes back also... It's just my fan theory... Coz taking stand for him in front of other guild leader makes me curious... That's good scene actually in this last update of arc...
Lastly convo btwn Micheal n Carolina... Ufff where Micheal said aarav is coming out of shadows now he was prepared... Who's gonna be his Target???.. That makes goosebumps for sure... If that sence we saw in movie aur enemie series...
Well well... Overall that end that arc... This was good arc lots of character add n disappeared also...I didn't remember their names like Mia who was from tower security I guess....
And what aarav choose is also an question markemotions or not...
Amy way... Enjoy your break with your valentine
Till then see yaa...
Sayonara
bro its Thursday, its time for another fantastico update as uh always do bro
Bhai great writing skill and bahat hi jyada interesting story... Kya hi bolu yaar I am speechless...
Apke story apne aap favourite list me aa gaya hai...
Next update ke liye wait hi nahi kar pa raha... Raha hi na ja raha
Koi kuchh bhi bole you are a best story writer so always wait for next update. Bhai i am your fan bhai jaldi se update deke sabka muh bandh kardo aur mere dil me next update ke liye jo
excitment ki aag hain use bujhaa jo bhai
Bro say something
Bro sabut de rhen Hain ki hm abhi Zinda hai
Waahhhh... Kal ayega... Ek romanchak update... Shayad purane dost phir se mile...
Ding waiting
