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Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

Who are your two favorite male characters in this story?


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Salty~Otaku

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Quick Recap of the Arc: After Aarav's encounter with kim Min-soo as Avinash Kim Min-soo ran away. Then Kunle got invitation from the Carnival of death (COD) to save him and for Aarav's alterior motive aarav and Yoo-Jung decided to go with him and joined them Becky and also Caroline who wanted undiscovered her father's murderer.

In carnival with Aarav and Yoo-Jung's help they clear each floor and Aarav was taking all game master out until at floor 3 they got tricked by the game master and lost becky there.

Later they are joined by another team's 2 remaining players (Mira&Daryl) and they entered the 4th floor where they got summoned into another world to complete a quest, Save this world from demon kind and from the demon king and an side quest to save both of Priestesses twin daughters(Eira&Sola). To save them Aarav made a sacred bond(Marriage by earth means) with both of daughters them and get into a physical relationship with them.

*End of recap*
 

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Mujhe kal out of city jana hai kuch dino ke liye! Koshish karu ga update kal subha he 9:30 baje de ker chala jau, Uss ke baad 4 din out of city rehne wala hu, Agar huwa to update 51 bhi bataye gye din per aa jaye ga!



Jaldi Jaldi Target pura karo :announce:
Ho gya 🙂
 

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Ye Sonia kahi wearwolf Bhai ki Sonia to nahi
Dono alag alag story hai! Ab character ke naam to hazaron same ho sakte hai, Lekin hai to dono story alag he na, Even mujhe yaad bhi nahi tha ke uss story me bhi Sonia naam ka koi Character hai.
Bella ko ab arav yad nahi hai kya Jo wo boli yo yung ka bf hai arav so confusing
Ye aage pata chale ga! :pepethanks:
 

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Nice update
Arav k mind mein khud ko or power full or paise wala banane ko koi plan hai uspe he kaam kar raha hai woh
Eternapower Generator he wo plan hai na :anyahide:
Daisuke or Bella ko dekh kar acha laga
Yu Jung ki bhi khabar mili iss update mein
Ab dekhte hai yeh team sath kab aati hai dobara
Soon! Lekin uss ke beech me bohat kuch hone wala hai :anyasmug:
 
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All 4 updates are awesome fantastic hey bro. Arav ki to dusman ki list barta ja raha hey.
Zada samay ke liye nahi :anyasmug:
Dekhtey hey purana dusman kab samney aata hey.
Soon!
Ye Veer aur Akash ki alag hi kahani hey,suru sey ek dusrey ki opposite tha,ab marney ki baad samney aaya ki best friend the.Arav Akash aur Veer in tino ki past mey jarur kuch na kuch garbar hey. Dekhtey hey kya tha wo.
Gadbad to hai, Lekin kuch sadharan nahi, Aage sab kuch pata lage ga bus aise he saath bane rahiye ga!
Tanu alag khichri pakaney lagi hey, dekhtey hey wo kya swad lata hey,
Yup!
bhai last mey ye kya boom phora, Arav aur Bella k bich kuch tha lekin memory delete k karan usse Yong ki ex bana diya.
Dekhtey hey ab aageya kya hota hey
Uss ka raaz bhi aage khule ga!
All 4 updates are awesome fantastic hey bro. Arav ki to dusman ki list barta ja raha hey. Dekhtey hey purana dusman kab samney aata hey. Ye Veer aur Akash ki alag hi kahani hey,suru sey ek dusrey ki opposite tha,ab marney ki baad samney aaya ki best friend the.Arav Akash aur Veer in tino ki past mey jarur kuch na kuch garbar hey. Dekhtey hey kya tha wo. Tanu alag khichri pakaney lagi hey, dekhtey hey wo kya swad lata hey,bhai last mey ye kya boom phora, Arav aur Bella k bich kuch tha lekin memory delete k karan usse Yong ki ex bana diya.
Dekhtey hey ab aageya kya hota hey
KEEP IT UP AND AS ALWAYS WAITING FOR
:pepethanks:for your beautiful review :heart:
 

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Bahut badhiya update hai Bhai.....
Aarav ke team member ko bhi yaad nhi hai siway yoo Jung ke.....usko bhi shayed aarav se connected hone se yaad hai....dekhte hai baki sab ko yaad aata hai ki nhi jab aarav un sab ke samne jaayega.....kya akhansha ki tarah baki sabko bhi yaad aata hai ki nhi dekhte hai....
Waiting for next update
Yaad ata hai ya nahi wo to un ke dot ke color ker upar ho ga! Jaise Akanksha ka color badla bilkul waise he, :pepethanks:
 
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Main to aise hi dekhne aaya tha ki update kitne baje ayega, par yahan par to pura update hi mil gaya. Great boss.
Schedule diya hu to uss hisaab se update dene ki bhi puri koshish hai :love2:
To us din shayad Aarav yahi kaam kar raha tha, Tinkerbell se ek Barrier banwa kar Mana ki negative energy alag kar raha tha. Ab to Player's association bhi uske saath lag rahi hai. Michael ko usne apne saath kar liya hai.
Yup! Lekin exactly wo nahi ker raha tha, Ye aage dikh jaye ga!!
Sonia ek naya character aa gya hai. Dekhte hain iska kya role hai.
You are gonna love her :anyasmug:
Ye Ishita ki kya problem hai, hamesha thaki huyi si lagna, neend nahi aana, koi usko blackmail to nahi kar raha hai.
Thaki hone se blackmail ka kya connection :dquestion:


Tanu puri story me weak link lag rahi hai, weh Malhotra ke pass ja rahi hai, jaldi hi uska confusion dur hona chahiye.
Hoye gi, Lekin aise he ek pal me personality switch nahi dunga! Samay ke saath sab kuch ho ga.
shayad Tanu aur Aarav ke DNA sample match karna, par yahin par usko sabse bada jhatka lagne wala hai. Tanu ka confusion bhi dur ho jayega.... hahaha.... just guessing...
Uss ke liye Aarav ka bhi DNA sample chahiye ho ga? Waise bhi agar sab ke Saamne sachayi aa bhi gayi to ghate me Malhotra he hone wala hai.
To aakhir pehle wale Aarav ke team members dikhe. Par Bella kaise Yoo-Jung ke liye aisa keh sakti hai, Aarav ko kiss to weh khud kar rahi thi. Waise yeh Alpha ka pack member hone ke karan tha, Bella ka BF to koi intern tha. Lekin iska matlab team members ko Aarav ki yaad hai.
Wo kiss Bella ke liye tha! Lekin dusra wala nahi :sip: Baki sab aage pata chal he jaye ga!!
Pichle ek do update padh kar dikha, jis tarah Meera react kar rahi thi, "yeh kaise possible hai.' aur bhi, kafi kuch, saaf hai usko Aarav se apne beta ka ahsas ho raha hai, mujhe ab lagne laga hai ki Aarav sach me Veer ka judva bhai hai.
Anything can happen at this point! Lekin kitna sahi ho ye daikhna ho ga :roll:
Phir Avinash ka kya role hai, aur Soul Binding to clan se aati hai, weh kaise Avinash ne Aarav ko de di.
Soul Binding same clan se nahi mili thi! Avinash ne Aarav ki Devour Ability active ker ke khud ko Devour karwaya tha :smartm:
Main to aise hi dekhne aaya tha ki update kitne baje ayega, par yahan par to pura update hi mil gaya. Great boss.

To us din shayad Aarav yahi kaam kar raha tha, Tinkerbell se ek Barrier banwa kar Mana ki negative energy alag kar raha tha. Ab to Player's association bhi uske saath lag rahi hai. Michael ko usne apne saath kar liya hai.

Sonia ek naya character aa gya hai. Dekhte hain iska kya role hai.

Ye Ishita ki kya problem hai, hamesha thaki huyi si lagna, neend nahi aana, koi usko blackmail to nahi kar raha hai.

Tanu puri story me weak link lag rahi hai, weh Malhotra ke pass ja rahi hai, jaldi hi uska confusion dur hona chahiye. Malhotra kuch bada plan kar raha hai, shayad Tanu aur Aarav ke DNA sample match karna, par yahin par usko sabse bada jhatka lagne wala hai. Tanu ka confusion bhi dur ho jayega.... hahaha.... just guessing...

To aakhir pehle wale Aarav ke team members dikhe. Par Bella kaise Yoo-Jung ke liye aisa keh sakti hai, Aarav ko kiss to weh khud kar rahi thi. Waise yeh Alpha ka pack member hone ke karan tha, Bella ka BF to koi intern tha. Lekin iska matlab team members ko Aarav ki yaad hai.

Pichle ek do update padh kar dikha, jis tarah Meera react kar rahi thi, "yeh kaise possible hai.' aur bhi, kafi kuch, saaf hai usko Aarav se apne beta ka ahsas ho raha hai, mujhe ab lagne laga hai ki Aarav sach me Veer ka judva bhai hai. Phir Avinash ka kya role hai, aur Soul Binding to clan se aati hai, weh kaise Avinash ne Aarav ko de di.

End me, great update.
:pepethanks:for your lovely review :love3:
 
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nice update


Maza aa gya update path k larky
Nice update 😍😍

Awesome update bro

Superb update dia hai bhai...maza aaya padh kar...

Awesome update 🙂😃

Bahut mast update hai Bhai sayonara...

Mst update bro

Good update bro 😁👍

Nice update


Awesome update bhai 👍👍👌👌

Ding 👍🔥nice update bro keep posting

Zabardast update Bro. Mqza aa gya

Bhai bahut hi fabulous update hai
Kaas karke last wala scene
Maja aagya

Nice update

Awesome and fantastic update bhai keep posting

Superb update bro,
:applause: :applause::applause:

Very nice update Bhai ☺️😊

Shandar update

:pepethanks:guys for your love and support :love2:
 

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UPDATE 50 ~
(NO MORE CHANCES)



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Moonlit Oasis
Mumbai ~ 1:31 AM


*Clunk*


Club ke baahir car rokte huwe Ishika Car se baahir aa gayi, Uss ke saath he dusri taraf se Tanu bhi utar ker uss ke paas aa gayi.



Ishika: Hum ye club ke andar milne wale hai kya?


Tanu(Nod): Yup, Priya bata rahi thi ke ye uss ke dadu ka club hai! Un ke connection ki wajha se unhe bohat se logo se yahan milna hota hai, Lekin kuch bhi badi baat nahi hai, Uss ke Dadu bhi yanhi ho gye.


Ishika yahan aa to gayi thi, Lekin abhi bhi wo kuch khaas taiyar nahi thi, Lekin ab wo Tanu ko bilkul ignore bhi nahi ker sakti thi.



*Thud*


Car ka darwaza band karte huwe dono club ke andar ki taraf chal di, Baahir he unhen security ne rok liya.



Security: Ma'am ye private club hai! Yahan bina Pass ke koi nahi ja sakta, Ap mujhe Pass dikha sakti ho kya?


Tanu: Hamare paas to koi pass nahi hai! Lekin hum yahan Sachin Uncle se milne aye hai, Ap un se confirm ker sakte ho.


Dono ache kapde pehan ker ayi thi to security wale ko koi doubt nahi tha, Lekin confirmation ke liye uss ne andar se puch liya, Andar se usse un dono ko guide karne ke orders de diye gye.


Security: Theek hai Ma'am! Ap log mere saath chaliye main ap ko Malhotra sahib ke paas le jata hu.



Dono uss ke saath andar chali gayi, Andar ka pura atmosphere he alag tha, Sab se pehle to andar ghuste he un ke kaano me tez music aa laga, Colorful lighting ke saath andar log haatho me sharab pakade naachne aur peene me lage huwe the.

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Music ki awaaz me dono ek dusre ki awaaz bhi nahi sun sakti thi, Security unhe sidhiyon se upar le gayi, Ye ek VIP area tha yahan baithne ke liye alag alag room bane huwe the.

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Security: Malhotra Sir ap ka andar wait ker rahe hai! Ap andar chali jaye.



Security ne ek kamre ke baahir rukte huwe kaha, Ishika ko kuch acha nahi lag raha tha, Tanu ne aage badhate huwe darwaza khol diya aur andar chali gayi, Ishika ko bhi uss ke saath jana per gaya.


“Tanu, Meri bacchi! Kaisi ho?”


Un ke andar jaate he sofe per baitha Malhotra khare hote huwe un ka savagat karne laga, Lekin Ishika tab heraan huwi jab uss ne apne boss ko bhi wanhi baithe huwe daikha.



Malhotra(Laugh): Ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai! Shankar yahan sirf kuch baat karne aya hai, Usse sab kuch pata bhi hai.


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Shankar ne haath me drink pakde Ishika ko wave ker diya, Apne boss ke saath club me khade usse awkward lag raha tha, Dono wanhi ek sofe per baith gayi.



Malhotra: Priya ne bataya tha ke tum aa rahi ho! Tumhe tumhare naye bhai ke baare me kuch baat karni thi na? Batao kya baat karni thi?


Tanu ne ishika ki taraf daikha, Ab itne aage ane ke baad ishika bhi usse rokne wali nahi thi, Uss ne Tanu ko aage badhane ka ishara ker diya.


Tanu(Nervous): Uncle, Priya keh rahi thi ke ap ko bhi lagta hai ke Aarav koi fraud hai?



Tanu ki baat sun ker Malhotra ne gambhir chehara bana liya aur dono ko dhayan se daikhne laga, Uss ne Shankar ki taraf daikha aur seedha ho ker baith gaya.



Malhotra(Sigh): Huh, Kya batau beta! Tumhara to wo bhai hai, Lekin mujhe uss per bharosa nahi hai, Tumhare bhai ke saath itne saal kaam kiya hai main ne, Lekin uss ka swabhav aur Aarav ka swabhav bohat alag hai.



Malhotra ne ek thandi saans bhari aur apne pareshani ka natak karne laga-



Malhotra: Veer mere bache ki tarha ka tha! Uss ka banaya sab kuch aise apne saamne kisi fraud ke paas jaate daikhna mere liye bohat dardnak hai, Sorry agar tumhe bura laga ho, Lekin mujhe nahi lagta ke wo tumhara bhai hai bhi.


Malhotra apni baat keh ker chup ho gaya, Uss ki baat sun ker Tanu khush ho gayi, Aakhir koi to tha jise Aarav per shak tha, Ek pal me wo khud ko ab akela mehsoos nahi ker rahi thi.



Tanu: Uncle ap ko sorry kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai! Mujhe bhi bilkul aisa he lagta hai, Lekin Mummy Papa ko kuch samajhta he nahi hai, Lekin ab ap hamare saath ho to hum koi na koi raasta dhoond he le gye.



Tanu ki khushi daikh ker Malhotra ke chehre per bhi muskurahat aa gayi-


Malhotra: Aisa kya? Mujhe to pata he nahi tha! Tum pareshan mat hona meri bachi hum koi na koi raasta dhoond le gye, Shankar se bhi main ye he baat ker raha tha, Idhar aoo tumhe dikhau ke hum kya soch rahe the.


Malhotra ne side per hote huwe Tanu ke liye jagha banate huwe kaha, ishika ne usse rokna chaha lekin Tanu tab tak uth chuki thi, wo seedhe Malhotra ke saath baith gayi.


Malhotra: Ye daikho, Uss Aarav ne ek naya project shuru kiya hai! Lekin shankar ka chota bhai ussi department me hai Aarav ke saath, Hume sirf ek saboot chahiye uss ke baad hum uss Aarav ki sachayi sab ke saamne la sakte hai.


Malhotra ki baat sun ker Tanu khush ho gayi, Aage hote huwe Malhotra ne uss ke kandhe per haath rakh ker usse apne saath laga lia.


Malhotra(Hug): Tum pareshan mat hona! Veer ka kuch bhi main uss fraud ke haath nahi lagne dunga!



Tanu(Smile): Thank you Uncle! Ap mujhe batao ke hum kya kare? Kuch madad chahiye kya ap ko?



Malhotra: Abhi mujhe kuch bhi madad nahi chahiye! Lekin agar tum logo ko kuch bhi ajeeb dikhe to tum mujhe batana, Hum usse uss ke plan me kamyaab nahi hone de gye.



Tanu aur bhi khush ho gayi, Lekin ishika ki nazre Malhotra ke haath ke upar thi, wo apna angootha Tanu ke kandhe per phairane laga huwa tha, ishika usse ek galti manana chahti thi.


Lekin Malhotra ki harkate usse kuch khaas achi nahi lag rahi thi, Wanhi usse shankar ke bhi kaandon ke Baare me pata tha, Shankar chehre per ek ghinoni muskurahat liye ishika ke badan ko niharne me laga huwa tha.


Ishika ke sar me tez dard shuru ho gaya, Lekin wo sab ke saamne dikha nahi sakti thi, Dard ko bardasht karte huwe wo kuch sochne ki koshish karne lagi lekin uss ke kuch bhi samajh me nahi aa raha tha.


Shankar: Kya huwa ishika? Tum kuch sahi nahi lag rahi!


Shankar uthte huwe ishika ke saath aa ker baith gaya, ishika ka uss ne haath pakad liya lekin ishika ne apna haath foran chudwa liya, Usse shankar ka uss ke paas ana acha nahi lag raha tha.



Ishika(Enduring): Main theek hu! Ap waapis ja sakte ho.


Shankar: Aise kaise? Meri employee ka chehara aise pheeka para huwa hai, Main kaise ja sakta hu aise me?


Shankar ishika ke paas ho gaya aur ek haath uss ki jangh per rakh diya, Usse daikhte huwe Malhotra muskurane laga.



Shankar apne haath se ishika ki jangh ko sehlane laga, ishika khud ko alag karna chahti thi, Lekin uss ki tabiyat kharab hone lagi thi, Shankar chance daikhte huwe apna haath upar ke jaane laga.


*Ring-Ring*


Ekdum se Tanu ke phone bajne laga, Ye daikh ker Malhotra ne uss ka phone pakadna chaha, Lekin Tanu ne tab tak calm pick ker li thi.



Tanu: Hello, Dad!....Ji hum abhi baahir aye huwe hai.....Ap ko bataya tha na Priya meri friend hum uss ke saath uss ke Dada Ji ke club me the....Ji hum jaldi nikalne wale hai.


Tanu ne call per baat karti rahi, Malhotra ka pura mood kharab ho gaya, Phone rakhte huwe Tanu khadi ho gayi.



Tanu: Sorry Uncle! Lekin Dad ne jaldi ane ke liye kaha hai, Hume nikalna ho ga, Lekin next time hum puri detail me baat kare gye.


Malhotra ne pheeki muskurahat ke saath usse jaane diya, Shankar bhi muh banaye ishika ke paas se hat gaya, ishika ka haath pakadte huwe Tanu ne usse uthaya aur wo dono kamre se nikal gayi.


Security abhi bhi baahir thi, Unhone andar daikha to Malhotra ne unhen jaane dene ka ishara ker diya, Security unhe baahir tak chorne saath aa gayi.



Ishika(Whisper): Bade Papa ki call sahi time per aa gayi! Tanu, mujhe nahi lagta ke Sachin Uncle hamare saath hai, Mujhe un se weird vibes aa rahi thi.


Ishika ne dheeme se Tanu ko kaha, Uss ne upar daikha to Tanu ka chehara pura serious huwa huwa tha, Uss ki aankhe bheegi huwi thi.



Tanu: Papa ki call nahi ayi thi! Wahan main ne jhoot bola hai.



Tanu ne apna phone dikhate huwe kaha, Screen per ringtone open thi, Tanu ne tab chupke se sirf ringtone chala di thi, ishika ne bhi aur kuch nahi kaha aur khamoshi ke saath club se baahir aa gayi.



Security ne unhen baahir chhod diya, ishika aage ho ker driving seat per baith gayi, Tanu ke baithate he uss ne car chala di.




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Moonlit Oasis
Mumbai ~ 2:41 AM




*Huh*



Malhotra ne ek thandi saans bhari aur peeche ho ker baith gaya, Uss ke saamne baitha shankar bhi muh banaye huwa tha.



Shankar(Frustrated): Kab se intezar ker raha tha uss ishika ka mere neeche ane ka! Aj ek bade ghar ki ladki ka swad chakhne wala tha, Sab kuch kharab ho gaya.



Malhotra(Smirk): Swad to Sach me aa jata! *Chuckle* Jab uss Veer ki princess mere saamne tange failaye laiti hoti, Lekin kya he ker sakte hai, Sirf apni havas ki wajha se hum kiye karaye per paani gira sakte the.



Malhotra kehte huwe apna haath sofe se neeche le gaya, Uss ke neeche ek voice recorder laga huwa tha, Malhotra ne usse baahir nikal liya.




“Uncle ap ko sorry kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai! Mujhe bhi bilkul aisa he lagta hai, Lekin Mummy Papa ko kuch samajhta he nahi hai, Lekin ab ap hamare saath-”


Recorder me sabhi baate record ho gayi thi, Malhotra aur shankar ke Chehre per muskurahat aa gayi.



Shankar: Hamare Admi raaste me taiyar khare hai! Club se thora distance bante he wo log un dono ko utha le gye, Un me se ek fake testimony dene ke liye bhi taiyar hai.



Malhotra(Sip): Uss ki gavahi aur ye recording daikhne ke baad pura blame uss Aarav per ho ga! Uss ke baad to hum kitna chahe utna swad chakhe gye un do apsarao ka. *Laugh*


Malhotra ne ek baar me puri bottle muh se lagate huwe kaha, Ye uss ka plan tha un dono ko kidnap ker ke pura blame Aarav ke upar daalne ka, Uss ke paas enough proof the Aarav ko Gunhegar sabit karne ke liye.


*Knock-Knock*



Darwaze per dastak huwi to dono khamosh ho gye, Un ke security ke bande baahir he khare the, Un ke hote huwe kisi ko knock karne ki zaroorat nahi thi.



Shankar khada huwa aur darwaze ke paas chala gaya, Uss ne Malhotra ko daikha aur darwaza khol diya.


*Crash*


Darwaze khulte he Shankar ki puri body hava me uthte huwe upar ceiling se lag gayi, Ye daikh ker Malhotra ki hava tight ho gayi.


*Tuck*


*Tuck*


*Tuck*



Kamre me kadmo ki awaaz goonjne lagi, Malhotra ne kanpate huwe saamne daikha to uss ke saamne koi khara huwa tha, Saamne khare vyakti ki ungliyo se khoon ki bunden neeche gir rahi thi.



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Uss ke pairon me black leather shoes pehne huwe the, Upar uss ne black pant aur saath me ek black long coat pehna huwa tha, Lekin uss ko aur khofnaak uss ke chehre per pehna wo black mask bana raha tha.

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Shankar(Groaning): Ugh......Ahhh! Please mujhe jaane do.


Shankar ki body ajeeb tarha se muri huwi thi, Uss ke sharir me kayi hadiye toot chuki thi, Zameen per gire huwe wo uss vyakti se bhikh maangne laga.


*Thud*



Uss vyakti ne apna paon seedhe shankar ke muh per rakh diya, Shankar dard se tadapne laga, Ye daikh ker Malhotra ki halat kharab hone lagi.


Uss ne baahir se kisi ko bulana chaha lekin usse darwaze ke baahir he security ke bande giray huwe dikh gye, Malhotra ko apni maut saamne dikhayi dene lagi.



Malhotra(Frightened): K-Kon ho tum? K-Kya chahate h-ho mujh se?


Malhotra sarakte huwe peeche hone laga, Uss vyakti ne Malhotra ki taraf daikha aur apna paon zor se Shankar ke muh per maar diya, Shankar wanhi hosh kho diya.



Ye daikh ker Malhotra aur bhi dar gaya, Tezi se uss ne peeche rakhi apni gun nikal ker uss vyakti ki taraf nishana bana liya, Lekin saamne wala thoda bhio chaunka nahi ye daikh ker aur usse daikhta raha.



[Alpha Presence Activated]



Ek dark Aura saamne khade vyakti se nikalte huwe kamre me failne laga, Malhotra ka sharir bhari hone laga aur wo wanhi neeche gir gaya, Uss ka sharir hil bhi nahi paa raha tha.



*Tuck*


*Tuck*


*Tuck*



Vyakti chalte huwe uss ke paas aa ker neeche baith gaya, Malhotra apni bebasi mehsoos ker ke rone ke sivaye aur kuch nahi ker sakta tha.



Malhotra(Whimper): Please mujhe jaane do! Tumhe jo chahiye ho le lena, *Sobbing* Lekin please mujhe jaane do.



Vyakti: Ek baar tujhe jaane de chuka hu! Lekin kutte ki dum kabhi seedhi nahi hoti, Ab ki baar tujhe puri tarha se he apne raaste se hatane aya hu.


Vyakti ne table se ek knife uthate huwe kaha, Uss ke shabd sun ker Malhotra ke sharir sunn per gaya.


Malhotra(Whisper): A-Aarav?



*Sinister Chuckle*


“Bingo”


Aarav ne apne chehre se mask utaar ker Malhotra ko apna chehra dikha diya, Usse daikhte he Malhotra ko ehsaas ho gaya ke uss ke yahan se bach ker jaane ka koi bhi raasta nahi hai.


Aarav: Pathetic, main kuch aur bhi acha expect ker raha tha tum logo se! Lekin tum logo me se wo 90's ka villain nikal he nahi raha, Kuch to naya socho lekin itna dimagh kon lagaye.


*Slash*


*Scream*



Kehte he Aarav ne knife se Malhotra ke haath ka thumb kaat ker alag ker diya, Malhotra dard se chillane laga uss ka haath khoon se bhar gaya.


Tinkerbell(Grin): [Hehehe, Tum ne pehle angootha he kyu kaata? Batau kya? Kyu ke uss ne tumhari choti behan per ye he angootha rakha tha, Right?]



Aarav: [Shut Up!]



Tinkerbell(Giggle): [Akhir me ho to tum bhi insaan he na! Enhhh, Kitne cute lagte ho apni choti behan ke liye ye sab karte huwe]


Aarav: [Master Authority! 6 ghantay ab kuch nahi kehne wali tum]



Tinkerbell ka muh band ho gaya, Koshish ker ke bhi wo kuch nahi keh sakti thi, Aarav ne waapis apna dhayan Malhotra ki taraf ker liya.



Malhotra(Groaning): Ugh.... Tujhe kya lagta hai? Ahhh.... M-mujhe yahan maar ker tu bach jaye ga kya? Mujhe maarna tere liye he khatra ban jaye ga, Abhi bhi moka de raha hu-



*Hahahahahaha*



Malhotra ki baat sun ker Aarav hansne laga, Ye daikh ker Malhotra ka akhri card bhi bekar ho gaya.



Aarav(Whisper): it's only a murder if they find the body! Otherwise, it's a missing person.



Malhotra ka pura sharir thanda per gaya, Usse ab samajh aa rahi thi ke uss ke saamne koi insan nahi, Ek rakshas baitha huwa tha, Uss ki muskurahat Malhotra ke umeede todti ja rahi thi.


*Grrr*


Aarav ne knife ko Malhotra ke gale per rakh diya, Uss ki saanse wanhi thamne lagi.



Malhotra(Chocking): You.....You won't get away with this!



Aarav(chuckling): Oh, Malhotra! I already have.



*Kchhh!*


Aarav knife se Malhotra ka gala dheeme dheeme kaatne laga, Malhotra khud ki maut ke har dard ko mahsoos ker raha tha, Uss ki aankho me bebasi thi lekin Aarav ke chehre per halki bhi gelani ke bhav nahi the.


*Clang*


Malhotra ka gala kaat ker Aarav ne knife wanhi gira di, Aankhe khole Malhotra ka sharir bejan wahan gira huwa tha, Aarav khada ho gaya.



*Wooosh*



Baahir se Malia kamre me aa gayi, Uss ke haath me ek bada bora pakda huwa tha, Aarav ne usse ishara kiya to wo un dono ki body ko utha bore me daalne lagi.


Aarav ne inventory me se ek stone baahir nikala, Uss Stone ke upar kuch bana huwa tha, Aarav ne usse kamre ke beech me rakh diya, Stone laal rang me chamakne laga.



*Gulp*



Kamre me gira sabhi khoon seedhe uss stone me jaane laga, har taraf se khoon ke nishan khatam hone lage, Daikhte he daikhte wahan se sabhi khoon khatam ho gaya.


Aarav: Body ko le ker dhayan se jaana! Kisi ki bhi nazar me nahi ana, Tumhe jagha batayi hai wahan ja ker kutto ko daal dena.


Malia ne nod kiya aur wahan se nikalne lagi, Aarav ne wahan rakha huwa recorder utha liya aur wanhi gira huwa shankar ka phone bhi utha liya.



Aarav: Kaam karne ka samay aa gaya hai, Shadow!!!




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*Chug-Chug*


Ishika car chala he rahi thi ke ekdum se car jhatke lete huwe ruk gayi-



Tanu: Kya huwa Di? Car kyu rok di?



Ishika: Fuel khatam ho gaya hai! Lekin kaise? Abhi kal he to tank full karwaya tha!!



Ishika car se baahir aa gayi, Uss ki halat abhi bhi sahi nahi thi, Uss ke paon larkhara rahe the, Car ek sunsan raaste per aa ker ruki thi. Tanu bhi baahir aa gayi.


Tanu(Consern): Di ap theek ho na?


Ishika(Gasping): Huh, Haan main theek hu! Wait karo shayad fuel can rakhi huwi hai car ke andar!!



Tanu wanhi car ke aage bonnet se lag ker khari ho gayi, November ka maheena shuru ho gaya tha, Raat me halki thand hone lagi thi, Tanu upar asmaan ko daikhne lagi, Uss ki himmat bhi tootne lagi.


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Tanu(Quavering): Sorry Di, Aj meri zid ki wajha se anarth hone wala tha! Pagal ho gayi thi main uss Aarav ki wajha se, Lekin mujhe tab bhi hosh se kaam lena chahiye tha.



Ishika: Tumhari galti nahi hai! Mujhe bhi kahan shak huwa tha? Mujhe to abhi bhi soch ker ghin aa rahi hai ke Dada ji ki umar ka vyakti aisa kuch ker sakta hai.


Ishika diggy khol ker daikhne lagi, Lekin wahan bhi fuel can nahi tha, Uss ka sar bhaari hone laga.


Tanu(Shivering): Mujhe to abhi bhi soch ker dar lag raha hai! Uss samay agar meri nazar un ki pant ke us ubhar. Yuck, Soch ker he ulti ane ko ho rahi hai.



Tanu khud ko cover karte huwe boli, Uss ne peeche daikha to ishika diggy band ker rahi thi, Usse fuel nahi mila.


Ishika: Samajh nahi aa rahi ke kya ho raha hai? Fuel bhi khatam aur Can bhi nahi hai, Driver Uncle to ye dono cheezo ka dhayan rakhte hai.


*Pounding*


Ishika Tanu ki taraf ane lagi, Lekin beech me he uss ke sar me tez dard shuru ho gaya, Uss ka balance bigad gaya aur wo girne lagi.


Tanu(Stunned): Di!!!



*Thud*



Ishika ke girte huwe he ek haath aage aya aur usse girne se bachate huwe pakad liya, Tanu ko thoda sakoon mila, Uss ne upar daikha to uss ke saamne Aarav khada huwa tha ishika ko apne saath lagaye huwe.


Usse wahan daikh ker Tanu chaunk gayi, Uss ki jaise chori pakadi gayi thi, Aarav ne ishika ki taraf daikha to uss ki saanse tez ho rahi thi, Aarav ne uss ke sar per haath rakh diya.



Aarav(Whisper): Ap araam ker sakti ho! Main sab kuch handle ker lu ga.


Ishika ka sharir dheela parhne laga, Aarav ne neeche haath daala aur usse apni bahon me utha liya.



Tanu(Furious): Ye kya ker rahe ho?



Aarav ishika ko uthaye uss ke paas chala gaya, Tanu darte huwe peeche car se lag gayi, Aarav uss ke paas ho ker uss ki aankho me daikhne laga.



Aarav: Bohat apne mann ki ker li tum ne! Ab chup chap mere saath ghar chal rahi ho tum.


Aarav uss se puch nahi raha tha, Usse bata raha tha, Tanu dar ki halat me kuch bol bhi nahi saki, Aarav ghoomte huwe aage chalne laga.


*Ba-dump*

*Ba-dump*


Tanu ne daikha to uss ki dhadkane tez ho chuki thi, Lekin ye dar ki wajha se nahi thi, Ye ehsaas Tanu ke liye naya bhi nahi tha, Lekin wo usse samajhne se inkar kar rahi thi.


Aarav: Shayad tum ne meri baat suni nahi hai! Mere saath ghar chal rahi ho tum!!


Aarav thoda aage nikal chuka tha, Tanu ne Car me daikha to Aarav usse lock ker chuka tha, Peeche he ek aur Car khadi huwi thi uss ke baahir Tarun khara huwa tha.


Tarun: Boss! Ap chaliye main dusri car le ker ata hu.



Aarav: Nahi, Subha kisi ko bhej ker car mangwa lena! Abhu tum car drive karo aur hume ghar chor ke chale jana.


Tanu khamooshi se chalte huwe Aarav ke paas aa gayi, Tarun ne uss ke liye aage ka darwaza khol diya, Tanu car me baith gayi, Aarav ishika ko le ker peeche baith gaya.



Tanu: Tum aage aa sakte ho! Main ishik-



Aarav(scold): Shut Up!



Tanu seham ker baith gayi, Tarun aage baith ker car chalane laga, Aarav ne Tanu ko raasta guide karne ke liye keh diya, Bina kuch kahe wo raasta batane lagi.




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Aarey Milk Colony
Mumbai ~ 2:57 AM



*Gulp*

*Gulp*

*Gulp*



Sunsan sadak ke upar kuch log gadiyan le ker khade huwe the, Un me se kuch log sharab peene me lage huwe the to kuch baithe huwe the.


Sabhi daikhne se he badmaash aur gunde lag rahe the-


Man1: Abey oye! Hum yahan kaam karne aye hai ya daru peene ke liye? Daru kam ker thodi.



Un me se ek aadami ne dusre se kaha, Uss ki baat sun ker dusre ka muh ban gaya.


Man2: Ek baat bata! Jab boss kuch nahi keh rahe to teri gaand me kyu khujli ho rahi hai? Ek laat du ga na saale pilpila hage ga.


Man3: Chinta kyu ker raha hai? Bhul gaya kya, Hamare post pileyar hai, wo bhi E bank ke pileyar, Aisi nazuk kaliyon ke liye to unhe khud ane ki zaroorat bhi nahi thi.



Un ke peeche he devansh baitha sab kuch sun ker muskura raha tha, Player ban jaane ke baad wo association se bach ker mumbai me he ek gang bana ker baith gaya tha, Uss ki shaktiyon se baki gangs wale uss se darte the.


Devansh: Maze ker lo! Lekin ye kaam bade seth ka hai, Kitna bhi asaan kyu na ho, Lekin dhayan rakhna ke koi galti na hone paye, Warna ek ek ki gand alag alag tod ke rakh du ga.



Man 2: Boss chinta nahi karna! Sab kuch sahi hone wala hai, Waise boss, Ladkiyan photu me to bohat bhari huwi maal lag rahi thi, Ek ek baar hume bhi round lagane dena na.


Dusre aadami ne devansh ko makhan lagate huwe kaha, Sirf wohi nahi baki ke aadmi bhi tasveer daikh ker lund khare kiye huwe the, Un me se ek devansh khud bhi tha.


Devansh(Smile): Laga lena, Lekin pehle un seth logo ko karne dena! Aisa maal tum jaison ko sirf 2nd hand he mil sakta hai, Pehle bade logo ko baari lagane dena.


Uss ki baat sun ker sabhi apne lund ko sehlane lage, Unhe intezar karte kaafi samay ho gaya tha, Devansh gaadi ke bonnet se neeche aa gaya.


Devansh: Chalo ab time ho gaya hai! Gaadi ka petrol ab tak to khatam ho gaya ho ga, Lekin yaad se unhe ghayal mat karna, seth ko fresh maal mangta hai.


Devansh ki baat sun ker sabhi gadiyon ki taraf ane lage, Haatho me hathiyar pakde kisi normal citizen ko darane ke liye wo kaafi the.


*Grooowwwwrrrrr*


Ek tez gurahat ne un sab ke kadam wanhi rok diye, Sabhi ek saath peeche ki taraf ghoome to andhere me unhe laal chamakti aankhe dikhayi di.


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Man2: Bhediya? Bhediya sehar me kaise aa gaya?


Man1: kya pata? Lekin mujhe nahi lagta ke ye kisi ke saath hai! Akela bhediya hai yanhi se goli maar dete hai.


Aadami ne khete huwe apni gun baahir nikali, Uss ka nishana seedha bhediya tha, Lekin uss ke trigger dabane se pehle he ek pal me laal Aankhe uss ke paas aa gayi.



*Wooosh*



*Ka-boooooom*



Aadami ko peeche se Devansh me pakad ker hata diya, Devansh ne apne haath me pakdi shield se khud ko defend karna chaha, Lekin attack itna powerful tha ke wo peeche gadi se takra gaya.


Devansh: Bhaago sabhi abhi ke abhi!! Ye koi sadharan bhediya nahi hai, Hum abhi Demon Wolves ke Alpha ke saamne khade huwe hai, Shadow!!!


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*Crunch*


Devansh kehte huwe seedha he huwa tha ke Shadow bilkul uss ke saamne tha, Muh kholte huwe Shadow ne ek baar me Devansh ka sar uss ke dhar se alag ker diya.



Sabhi Admiyo ko ye daikh ker vishwas nahi ho raha tha, Unhone devansh ko larte daikha tha ke wo kitna shaktishali hai, Lekin wohi shaktishali devansh un ke saamne bina sar ke gira huwa tha.



*GRRR*



Shadow ab bakiyo ki taraf daikhte huwe gurane laga, Sabhi Admiyo ki phat chuki thi, Saanse thaame sabhi Shadow ko daikh rahe the.


“Bhaaago!!!”



Un me se ek Aadami chillaya aur uss ki awaaz sun ker sabhi bhaagne lage, Shadow bhi un ki taraf bhaagne laga, Un jaise sadharan insaan Shadow ki speed ki barabari kahan ker sakte the?



“Ahhhh......Ughhhh......Maaaaa.....Bachao......Koi bacha lo......Nahiii”



Ek ek ker ke Shadow un sabhi ko hunt karne laga, Chandani raat me puro sadak khoon aur laasho ke tukro se bhari huwi thi, Un sab ke beech me khara huwa tha Shadow!



Uss ke chehre per dikh raha tha ke wo kitna khush hai, Aj uss ke Alpha ne pehli baar usse summon kiya tha aur kuch kaam diya tha usse, Uss ne bhi wo kaam bakhubi nibhaya tha.


Shadow ke neeche circle ban gaya, Usse pata lag gaya ke uss ka samay pura ho gaya hai, Shadow waapis nahi jaana chahta tha, Lekin abhi usse ye santushti thi ke samay ane per wo apne Alpha ki madad ke liye aa sakta hai.



Circle se roshni nikalne lagi, agle he pal Shadow waapis tower me chala gaya, Sadak per reh gayi to sirf laashe aur khoon se lipti huwi sunsan sadak, Kuch he samay me itni cheekh pukad sun ker log bhi wahan ane lage.




Saamne ka drishya daikh ker sabhi ki ruh kaanp ker reh gayi, Lekin kisi ko bhi nahi pata tha ke wahan kya huwa hai?
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