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Thriller VAGUE..........completed
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VAGUE....................
Son nadi ke kinare khada ek 27 baras ka yuvak apne andar kayi sailab liye Son nadi ki har pal uthati hui jal-dharao ko dekh kar kisi gahan soch me dooba hua tha. uski halat is samay Son nadi me har pal uthne wali aur har pal nast ho jani wali jal dharao ke samaan thi.. uske andar bhi har pal naye vichar panapte aur fir agle hee pal nayi vicharo me usi tarah sama jaate jaise Son nadi ki jal-dharaye ek dusare me sama rahi thi... Usne thaan liya tha ki use wo karna hee hai, fir chahe use koyi kuch bhi kahe... Chahe Father Adler zindagi bhar uski shakl naa dekhe...
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Usne jeb se cigarette ki packet nikal kar ek cigarette muh me dabaya aur lighter se cigarette sulga kar ek lamba kash kheencha... Dono hath hawa me failakar aur aankhe band karke apna sar upar karke usne fir ek lambi saans li aur waise hee khada raha... Mano wo jo ab karne wala tha uski himmat juta raha tha... Wo bahut der tak aise hee upar sar kiya aur baanhe failaye Son nadi ke kinare khada raha aur fir eka-ek usne apni aankh kholi... Uski aankh me jwalamukhi dhadhak rahi thi.. usne bachi hui Cigarette Son nadi ki jal-dharao ko samarpit kar revolver apne jacket ke andar wale packet se nikal kar apne hath me pakda aur waha se chal diya... Aatmaj Mangal ke ghar ki taraf...........
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Aatmaj Mangal Sonemuda nagar ka ek bahut pratishthit vyakti tha.. ya yun kahe ki sabse jyada... Mangal tha toh ek retired T.I. par uska dabdaba Sonemuda me aisa tha jaise wo ab bhi T.I. hee ho... Uski do santaan thi ek beta aur ek beti aur dono kamane lag gaye the... Bete ki shadi ho chuki thi aur beti ki shadi ki baat chal rahi thi... Kul milakar , Mangal ka pariwar purn roop se purn tha , jiska kaal bankar bankar wo 27 baras ka yuvak aa raha tha...
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Raat ke 2 baj rahe the aur thand apne charam seema par thi... Kohra itna jyada pad raha tha ki raat ko street lights jalne ke bawjood bas kuch kadam hee dikhayi pad raha tha, par wo 27 baras ka yuvak bedhadak Aatmaj Mangal ke ghar ki taraf badh raha tha... Wo chalta raha aur chalta raha jab tak ki Mangal ke ghar ke sameep nahi pahuch gaya aur waha pahuch kar usne Mangal ke ghar ke saamne lagi street light ko ek patthar uthakar foda... Patthar ke street light se takrane ke karan aawaz toh hui par use sunne wala koyi nahi tha... Yun kahe ki street light ki cheekh bhi us chupp andhere me dab gayi... Thik usi tarah jaise kuch der baad Mangal aur uske pure pariwar ki cheekh dabne wali thi................................
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Street light ke toot kar bikhar jaane ke baad Mangal ke ghar ke saamne ghupp andhera ho gaya aur isi andhere ka fayda uthakar wo yuvak wahi Mangal ke ghar se thodi door me behichak khada ho gaya aur apne shikar ka intezaar karne laga....
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Aaj Mangal ka beta raat ko train se aane wala tha jise lene Mangal apni jeep me station gaya tha, train aadhe ghante late thi upar se kohre ke karan thik se na dikhne ke karan Mangal ko ghar pahuchte-pahuchte 3 baj gaye...
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"Huhhhhh.... Kitni thand hai papa, Sonemuda me... Lagta hai koyi barf ki silliya chhua raha ho pure sharir me..."jeep se utarkar , Mangal ka beta bola aur apne hath ragadne laga...
"Chutiyaaa... Dastana pahan ka hath ragad raha hai..."andhere me khada wo 27 baras ka yuvak badbadaya...
" Jara jor se darwaja khatkhatana , warna teri maa ko sunayi hee nahi dega..."jab ek-do baar darwaja khatkhatane ke baad bhi darwaja nahi khula toh Mangal bola...
"Mammi..... Mammiiiiiiii" darwaje par apna hath marte hue Mangal ka beta chillaya aur jaise hee andar se aawaz aayi toh kuch doori par khada wo yuvak apne hath me revolver aur chehre par muskan liye aage Mangal ke ghar ki taraf badha...
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Mangal ji ki biwi ke darwaja kholne tak Mangal ji bhi gate ke paas aa chuke the aur apne bete ke sath wo bhi darwaja khulne ka intejaar karne lage, is baat se agyaan ki..... Waha ek teesara shaks bhi tha jo darwaja khulne ka besabri se intezaar kar raha tha........................ !
"Bhagyvan kitna time laga diya gate kholne me.. jam gaye hum dono toh..."
"Hum dono nahi , hum teeno..."peechhe se us Yuvak ne revolver me silencer lagate hue kaha aur fir revolver Mangal ke bete ke sar par satate hue Mangal ki biwi se bola "bhagyvan chillana nahi please, warna tere launde ko marna padega..."
"Taaaaa...tum ho kaanun.."apne bete ke sar par gun dekhkar Mangal ji Sak-paka gaye
Mangal ke bete ko toh jaise mirgi aa gayi ho , apne sar par gun dekh usse khada bhi nahi raha jaa raha tha aur usne wahi mootna shuru kar diya... Mangal ki biwi apna aankh fade fade ek tak apne bete ko bina palak jhapkaye dekhe jaa rahi thi... Use dar tha ki yadi palak jhapkane ki bhi aawaz hui toh wo 27 baras ka Yuvak uske bete ki khopdi bhoon kar rakh dega...
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"Itne me hee moot diya... " Neeche dekhkar wo Yuvak bola"abhi jo aage hoga use dekhkar toh fir tera dil, tere gand ke raaste se bahar aa jayega..."
Itna bolkar us yuvak ne ek laat Mangal ke bete ko mara jisse wo ghar ki dahleez par gira aur dahleej par girte hee uski maa use apne seene se lipta kar rone lagi... Aur ab revolver Mangal ke bete se hatkar khud Mangal ke khopdi par tan chuki thi...
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"Kyyyyuun kar rahe ho aisa..."Mangal ne apni nazar tirachhi karke peechhe dekhne ki koshish karte hue us Yuvak se puchha...
"Don't worry, I'll tell that later..."
Us Yuvak ne Mangal ko bhi laat markar uske ghar ki dahleej par giraya aur un teeno ko ghar ke andar ghaseet kar karne ke baad usne ghar ka darwaja andar se band kar diya...
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"Madarchod... Bahut hua..." Gusse se apne daant piste hue Mangal khada hua "abey randi ki aaulad... Maloom nahi kya, main kaun hoon.. sale jis gun ki dhauk jama raha hai usse do guni badi bandook main apne goto ke beech me rakhta hoon..."
"You need to understand that I'm the one who's running the show here"Mangal ke bete ki taraf revolver ferkar us yuvak ne kaha aur trigger daba diya...
Aur ek goli jakar uske bete ke shoulder par lagi aur wo neeche zameen par chillate hue gira...
"Ise shant karao bhagyawan... Warna agli goli main ise nahi tujhe marunga... "Wo yuvak Mangal ki taraf palta" toh kya bol raha tha main...? Haan... Ye ki... I'm the one who's running the show here.... Arey Mangal ji aapki gand toh abhi se fat gayi... Don't worry he will survive........... If luck works.... Maine use goli is liye mari taaki aap log mujhe seriously lo... Aur yadi ab bhi seriously nahi liya toh do ki maa chodunga, do ki biwi , ek ki behan aur ek ki beti... Literally...... Samajh me aaya kya... ? Nahi na..? Sala aptitude week hai tum logo ka. Anyway....." Waha bahar hall me rakhe television ke paas jakar us yuvak ne aux cable ke through apna mobile woofer se connect kiya aur music on kiya....
Fir wapas palat kar music ki beat me apne apne sar aur shoulder ko hilate hue Mangal ke paas aaya aur ek mauka uske jabde me achanak mara aur fir jor-jor hasne laga...
"Lol, that was unexpected.... Hahaha... Even for me..."kahte hue usne apna revolver fir se ek baar Mangal ke bete ki taraf kiya aur ek baar fir se trigger daba diya... Abki baar goli Mangal ke ladke ke dusare shoulder me lagi....
Iske baad wo yuvak kuch der baj rahe music ki dhun me aankh band karke naachta raha aur wo teeno waha dare sahme us yuvak ko dekhte rahe... Waise Mangal tha toh police me par uske bete ke sharir me ghusi do goliyo ne is waqt uski buddhi har li thi aur us yuvak se muqabala karne ke bajay wo wahi neeche jameen me pade-pade apne biwi aur bete ki bhaanti us yuvak ko naachte hue dekh raha tha... Kuch khauff toh us yuvak ka tha baki rahi sahi kasar jo darawana music baj raha tha usne puri kar di thi....
"Bhagyvan kitna time laga diya gate kholne me.. jam gaye hum dono toh..."
"Hum dono nahi , hum teeno..."peechhe se us Yuvak ne revolver me silencer lagate hue kaha aur fir revolver Mangal ke bete ke sar par satate hue Mangal ki biwi se bola "bhagyvan chillana nahi please, warna tere launde ko marna padega..."
"Taaaaa...tum ho kaanun.."apne bete ke sar par gun dekhkar Mangal ji Sak-paka gaye
Mangal ke bete ko toh jaise mirgi aa gayi ho , apne sar par gun dekh usse khada bhi nahi raha jaa raha tha aur usne wahi mootna shuru kar diya... Mangal ki biwi apna aankh fade fade ek tak apne bete ko bina palak jhapkaye dekhe jaa rahi thi... Use dar tha ki yadi palak jhapkane ki bhi aawaz hui toh wo 27 baras ka Yuvak uske bete ki khopdi bhoon kar rakh dega...
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"Itne me hee moot diya... " Neeche dekhkar wo Yuvak bola"abhi jo aage hoga use dekhkar toh fir tera dil, tere gand ke raaste se bahar aa jayega..."
Itna bolkar us yuvak ne ek laat Mangal ke bete ko mara jisse wo ghar ki dahleez par gira aur dahleej par girte hee uski maa use apne seene se lipta kar rone lagi... Aur ab revolver Mangal ke bete se hatkar khud Mangal ke khopdi par tan chuki thi...
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"Kyyyyuun kar rahe ho aisa..."Mangal ne apni nazar tirachhi karke peechhe dekhne ki koshish karte hue us Yuvak se puchha...
"Don't worry, I'll tell that later..."
Us Yuvak ne Mangal ko bhi laat markar uske ghar ki dahleej par giraya aur un teeno ko ghar ke andar ghaseet kar karne ke baad usne ghar ka darwaja andar se band kar diya...
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"Madarchod... Bahut hua..." Gusse se apne daant piste hue Mangal khada hua "abey randi ki aaulad... Maloom nahi kya, main kaun hoon.. sale jis gun ki dhauk jama raha hai usse do guni badi bandook main apne goto ke beech me rakhta hoon..."
"You need to understand that I'm the one who's running the show here"Mangal ke bete ki taraf revolver ferkar us yuvak ne kaha aur trigger daba diya...
Aur ek goli jakar uske bete ke shoulder par lagi aur wo neeche zameen par chillate hue gira...
"Ise shant karao bhagyawan... Warna agli goli main ise nahi tujhe marunga... "Wo yuvak Mangal ki taraf palta" toh kya bol raha tha main...? Haan... Ye ki... I'm the one who's running the show here.... Arey Mangal ji aapki gand toh abhi se fat gayi... Don't worry he will survive........... If luck works.... Maine use goli is liye mari taaki aap log mujhe seriously lo... Aur yadi ab bhi seriously nahi liya toh do ki maa chodunga, do ki biwi , ek ki behan aur ek ki beti... Literally...... Samajh me aaya kya... ? Nahi na..? Sala aptitude week hai tum logo ka. Anyway....." Waha bahar hall me rakhe television ke paas jakar us yuvak ne aux cable ke through apna mobile woofer se connect kiya aur music on kiya....
Fir wapas palat kar music ki beat me apne apne sar aur shoulder ko hilate hue Mangal ke paas aaya aur ek mauka uske jabde me achanak mara aur fir jor-jor hasne laga...
"Lol, that was unexpected.... Hahaha... Even for me..."kahte hue usne apna revolver fir se ek baar Mangal ke bete ki taraf kiya aur ek baar fir se trigger daba diya... Abki baar goli Mangal ke ladke ke dusare shoulder me lagi....
Iske baad wo yuvak kuch der baj rahe music ki dhun me aankh band karke naachta raha aur wo teeno waha dare sahme us yuvak ko dekhte rahe... Waise Mangal tha toh police me par uske bete ke sharir me ghusi do goliyo ne is waqt uski buddhi har li thi aur us yuvak se muqabala karne ke bajay wo wahi neeche jameen me pade-pade apne biwi aur bete ki bhaanti us yuvak ko naachte hue dekh raha tha... Kuch khauff toh us yuvak ka tha baki rahi sahi kasar jo darawana music baj raha tha usne puri kar di thi....
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par mera aptitude bilkul bhi strong nahi hai 
bahut hi badiya update hai aage ki story ka anuman laga sakta hoon par dekhte hai aap kis aur le jane ke mood main hai 
bahut hi badiya update hai aage ki story ka anuman laga sakta hoon par dekhte hai aap kis aur le jane ke mood main hai
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Thankspar mera aptitude bilkul bhi strong nahi hai
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Jab kuch der hua aur wo yuvak yun hee aankh band kiye naachta raha toh Mangal ko apni police training ka abhas hua aur usne pratikar karne ka nirnay liya.... Mangal us yuvak ki revolver par ghaat lagane laga... Wo bas mauka dekhkar jhapata marne ki taiyari kar raha tha....
"Tujhe pata hai maine tere bete ko dusari baar goli kyun mari...? Ye bahut mast question tha, tujhe mujhse puchhna chahiye tha..."Mangal ke sar me nachte hue ek laat markar us yuvak ne kaha "kyunki kya pata mere is show me tera beta kahi bahaduri dikhane ki koshish karta toh jabran mujhe use maarna padta... Par main ye nahi chahta aur na hee tu ye chahta hoga... is prakar tu abhi khush hoga ki maine uske dusare shoulder me bhi goli chalayi.... Main toh ye chahhhhhh"
Wo yuvak bol hee raha tha ki Mangal ne jo ghaat lagaya hua tha usko anjaam diya aur seedha Us Yuvak par jhapata mara... Mangal ke is achanak jhapatne se us Yuvak ki revolver zameen me giri , jise Mangal ne jaldi se lapak liya aur revolver us Yuvak par taan diya aur bina koyi samay ganwaye usne firing shuru kar di aur lagatar trigger dabata raha.. Mangal bahut der tak trigger dabata raha.... Aur jab uska gussa shant hua toh usne apni aankhe kholi........................
Wo yuvak us par dusari revolver taane sahi-salamat khada tha. Mangal khauff aur gusse me itna bhar gaya tha ki use ye gyaat hee nahi raha ki us yuvak par wo ab tak blank round chala raha tha asal me us revolver me sirf do hee bullet thi, jo uske bete ke sharir me ghusi thi. Par jo revolver us yuvak ne is wqt Mangal par taan rakhi thi.... Wo khali nahi thi aur uski ek bullet seedhe aakar uske pet ke beecho beech lagi...
"Aaaaaaaaaahhhhh.............." Mangal apna pet pakad kar cheekha... Jispar wo yuvak teji se Mangal ki taraf aaya aur apne ek pair se Mangal ke muh ko dabate hue apni Revolver uske bete ki taraf karke shant rahne ke liye kaha.....
"Now, Time to introduce more characters in the story... Mangal ji... Apne maa-baap, beti-bahu ko bahar bulao... Waise unhe abhi tak toh aa jana chahiye tha par par lagta hai saale ghode bechkar so rahe hai... Waise sahi hee hai, durghatna se der bhali... Teri beti kaha hai, rapchandus maal hai wo... Kya gand hai uski, dekhte hee do-do lund dalne ka man karta hai... Kaha hai teri beti...?"
"Wo Lucknow me hai..."
"Lucknow me hai... ? Shit... Koyi baat nahi teri bahu se kaam chala lunga, uske bhi doodh dekhkar dabane ka man karta hai... Mast chodunga re aaj toh.. "laar takate hue wo Yuvak bola...
Jhanjhana ke baj rahe music ke sath wo yuvak Mangal ki biwi ke paas gaya aur Mangal ki biwi ka gaal par hath ferne laga... Galo se hote hue uska hath gale tak aaya aur fir gale se neeche uski chhatiyo ko apne ek hath se masalne laga... Mangal ki biwi iska koyi virodh nahi kar rahi thi use dar tha ki yadi usne us Yuvak ka virodh kiya toh kahi wo fir se kisi ko na maare... Isliye wo asahay subukte hui wahi apne bete ko pakad kar shant baithi rahi aur wo Yuvak uski chhatiya masalta raha aur chhati masalne ke baad usne apna hath aur neeche kiya aur Mangal ki biwi ki choot par saree ke upar se apni ungaliya firayi... Mangal ki biwi is dauran achet wahi jas ki tas baithi rahi....
"Sali randi... Tu toh enjoy karne lagi..". Uski choot pe kaskar ek mukka marte hue wo Yuvak bola "jaa jakar sabko bula ke laa aur chu se chaa aawaz nahi aani chahiye... Warna bahar jaane ka darwaza yahi hai... In dono ke sar ko chhalni karke nikal jaunga... Chal ab ja.." uski chut dabate hue wo Yuvak bola... "Awwww... Bahut dard ho raha hai... Mele babu ko... Madarchod"
Mangal ki biwi ne apne bete ko deewar ke sahare chhodkar karahte hue waha se langda langda kar chalte hue andar jaane lagi...
"Apni biwi ki chaal dekh raha hai Mangal, jab tune pahli baar iski gand chodi hogi uske dusare din subah ye aisi hee langda kar chali hogi... Hai na... Hai na.... Bolna be... Bol... Bol madar jaat"Mangal ke gaal par thappado ki baarish karte hue us Yuvak ne puchha....
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Kuch der ke baad waha hall me Mangal ka pura pariwar mauzood tha... Gand toh sabki fat chuki thi us Yuvak ko dekhkar par is dar se ki kahi ye goli na chala de wo sab chup hee rahe....
"Chhotu idhar aa..."Mangal ke pote ko apni taraf bulate hue usne kaha.."madarchod udhar apne baap ki taraf kya dekh raha hai, idhar dekh aur idhar aa...Warna teri maa chod dunga..."
"Tujhe pata hai maine tere bete ko dusari baar goli kyun mari...? Ye bahut mast question tha, tujhe mujhse puchhna chahiye tha..."Mangal ke sar me nachte hue ek laat markar us yuvak ne kaha "kyunki kya pata mere is show me tera beta kahi bahaduri dikhane ki koshish karta toh jabran mujhe use maarna padta... Par main ye nahi chahta aur na hee tu ye chahta hoga... is prakar tu abhi khush hoga ki maine uske dusare shoulder me bhi goli chalayi.... Main toh ye chahhhhhh"
Wo yuvak bol hee raha tha ki Mangal ne jo ghaat lagaya hua tha usko anjaam diya aur seedha Us Yuvak par jhapata mara... Mangal ke is achanak jhapatne se us Yuvak ki revolver zameen me giri , jise Mangal ne jaldi se lapak liya aur revolver us Yuvak par taan diya aur bina koyi samay ganwaye usne firing shuru kar di aur lagatar trigger dabata raha.. Mangal bahut der tak trigger dabata raha.... Aur jab uska gussa shant hua toh usne apni aankhe kholi........................
Wo yuvak us par dusari revolver taane sahi-salamat khada tha. Mangal khauff aur gusse me itna bhar gaya tha ki use ye gyaat hee nahi raha ki us yuvak par wo ab tak blank round chala raha tha asal me us revolver me sirf do hee bullet thi, jo uske bete ke sharir me ghusi thi. Par jo revolver us yuvak ne is wqt Mangal par taan rakhi thi.... Wo khali nahi thi aur uski ek bullet seedhe aakar uske pet ke beecho beech lagi...
"Aaaaaaaaaahhhhh.............." Mangal apna pet pakad kar cheekha... Jispar wo yuvak teji se Mangal ki taraf aaya aur apne ek pair se Mangal ke muh ko dabate hue apni Revolver uske bete ki taraf karke shant rahne ke liye kaha.....
"Now, Time to introduce more characters in the story... Mangal ji... Apne maa-baap, beti-bahu ko bahar bulao... Waise unhe abhi tak toh aa jana chahiye tha par par lagta hai saale ghode bechkar so rahe hai... Waise sahi hee hai, durghatna se der bhali... Teri beti kaha hai, rapchandus maal hai wo... Kya gand hai uski, dekhte hee do-do lund dalne ka man karta hai... Kaha hai teri beti...?"
"Wo Lucknow me hai..."
"Lucknow me hai... ? Shit... Koyi baat nahi teri bahu se kaam chala lunga, uske bhi doodh dekhkar dabane ka man karta hai... Mast chodunga re aaj toh.. "laar takate hue wo Yuvak bola...
Jhanjhana ke baj rahe music ke sath wo yuvak Mangal ki biwi ke paas gaya aur Mangal ki biwi ka gaal par hath ferne laga... Galo se hote hue uska hath gale tak aaya aur fir gale se neeche uski chhatiyo ko apne ek hath se masalne laga... Mangal ki biwi iska koyi virodh nahi kar rahi thi use dar tha ki yadi usne us Yuvak ka virodh kiya toh kahi wo fir se kisi ko na maare... Isliye wo asahay subukte hui wahi apne bete ko pakad kar shant baithi rahi aur wo Yuvak uski chhatiya masalta raha aur chhati masalne ke baad usne apna hath aur neeche kiya aur Mangal ki biwi ki choot par saree ke upar se apni ungaliya firayi... Mangal ki biwi is dauran achet wahi jas ki tas baithi rahi....
"Sali randi... Tu toh enjoy karne lagi..". Uski choot pe kaskar ek mukka marte hue wo Yuvak bola "jaa jakar sabko bula ke laa aur chu se chaa aawaz nahi aani chahiye... Warna bahar jaane ka darwaza yahi hai... In dono ke sar ko chhalni karke nikal jaunga... Chal ab ja.." uski chut dabate hue wo Yuvak bola... "Awwww... Bahut dard ho raha hai... Mele babu ko... Madarchod"
Mangal ki biwi ne apne bete ko deewar ke sahare chhodkar karahte hue waha se langda langda kar chalte hue andar jaane lagi...
"Apni biwi ki chaal dekh raha hai Mangal, jab tune pahli baar iski gand chodi hogi uske dusare din subah ye aisi hee langda kar chali hogi... Hai na... Hai na.... Bolna be... Bol... Bol madar jaat"Mangal ke gaal par thappado ki baarish karte hue us Yuvak ne puchha....
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Kuch der ke baad waha hall me Mangal ka pura pariwar mauzood tha... Gand toh sabki fat chuki thi us Yuvak ko dekhkar par is dar se ki kahi ye goli na chala de wo sab chup hee rahe....
"Chhotu idhar aa..."Mangal ke pote ko apni taraf bulate hue usne kaha.."madarchod udhar apne baap ki taraf kya dekh raha hai, idhar dekh aur idhar aa...Warna teri maa chod dunga..."
