Karta hoon bhaiWaiting
Karta hoon bhaiWaiting
I loved this update with the core of my heart. The love Abhi bestowed over Aruhi was overwhelming, intense, full of love, marvelous, fantastic.
The seaside scene was fabulously described and the bonding and love between Aruhi and Abhi was spectacular. Loved everything at the seaside, from the swiming, to sand castle building, to the walking on the sand and the sunset watch. Everything is written and described fabulously.
However I had pinch in the heart for Shweta. She had a bad childhood and was watching all silently trying not to disturb the pleasure of Aruhi and Abhi. She must be living her childhood in Aruhi as well and thinking of the days Abhi was taking her in his lap and giving his love to her..... I still remember the days Shweta on seeing Abhi how she was running into his arms shouting "Abhiiiiiiii"
So I feel Shweta must be living those moments watching her daughter having the same happiness with the same man she loved and enjoyed her childhood.
What a change of time and what a coincidence that today Shweta chose the same man for her daughter as well.
Fantastic heart touching update Casinar ji.
And this update comes to add even more beauty to the last one. The love and pleasure Aruhi got with Abhi now gets multiplied by Navina with whom Aruhi immediately gets connected to get along like a glove in the hand. Navina's motherly nature attracts kids since she have had great experience in teaching and handling students.
A woman with no children gives more attention and care to children and so was Navina and Aruhi chose to spend the night with her instead of her mother.
Abhi is left alone with Shweta and he starts being naughty whereas Shweta is scared and worried since its yhe first time she is in Abhi's house and Navina is around.
Excellent writing and lovely update Casinar ji. Very much appreciated.
Appreciation k liye tehe dil se dhanyavad Swathi dearPyar bhara update hai Casi ji.
Aruhi ko itna pyar mil jaegac
achanak se ek hi din me socha nahin hoga na Aruhi ne na Shweta ne.
Navina ki khushi shayad Aruhi se bahut jiada tha magar jiss tarah se Aruhi ghul mil gayi Navina se itni jaldi lagta hai dil ke taar pehle se jude hue the donon ke.
Abhi ko bhi khushi hua hoga Navina ko Aruhi ke saath utna khush dekh kar. Navina Aruhi k sath itni khush think Abhi ko Shweta ke saath akele chorr diya donon ko intimacy de kar. Wah kia wife hai.
Abhi ne Shweta ko akela paakar ashiki karne laga usske saath jabke Shweta ko darr lag raha tha aur Abhi ko jiada maja araha tha Shweta ko uss situation mein paakar.
Majedar aur pyar se bharpur updare. Too good.
- ab tk sare updates bht hi kamal ke rahe.abhi or ruhi ka pyar dono ke pyar ka parwan chadhna
- abhi ka ruhi ke family ko maanna or uski family ka mana krna
- ruhi ka abhi se door jana or abhi ka ek mushkil daur se gujarna
- navina ki abhi ke life mein as a frnd entry or uski life partner banna
- abhi ke career mein taraki krna or ek naya mukaam hasil krna
Bahot bahot shukriya appreciation ke liye kirti dearruhi ki agar baat ki jaye toh sbse bura usi ke sath hua phle teenage mein uska maa banna jiske wajah se use kafi kuch sahna pda lekin utne kam age mein bhi usne apni beti(shweta) ke liye acha socha or uski chachi ne use goad le liya kbhi kisi chiz ki kami nhi hone di chahe nature ki jaisi bhi ho.ruhi ke life mein abhi ki entry hona lekin uske family wlo ke chalte use abhi se bhi dur hona pada.
shweta ko jb woh 18 saal ki thi tb use pta chala ki ruhi uski maa hai toh woh use nafrat krne lgi or use se badla lene ke liye abhi ke sath pyshical ho gyi shaadi shuda hote hue bhi or us ab is mein ye kah skte h ki dono bahak gye the.lekin inka ye risha aage bhi continue raha jisko shweta ne pyar ka naam diya asal mein pyaar toh kahi tha hi nhi sirf attraction tha kyu ki woh abhi or ruhi ka bachapan se dekhti aai thi or jb use apne husband se woh pyar nhi mila toh use abhi yaad aane lga.jo galti woh kr rhi hai us mein woh apni beti ko bhi ghasit liya.shweta ke wapas aane se story bilkul track se hat gyi aisa mera maanna hai
Very beautiful update mate.
Aruhi got easily connected with Navina. Her gentle and loving nature made the kid love her even more and Abhi and Shweta were given time to spend together without being disturbed.
Shweta was feeling embarassed aa she was scared that Navina would know or may come accross them but Abhi was all at ease since he knew Navina is aware of all. And Abhi enjoyed the moments seeing shweta in the scared position.
I loved it very much when Abhi emphasized that Navina will remain his priority and will live with her the most.
Lovely update Casinar. Am sorry for replying late. The fact is that I read it before sleeping and immediately fell asleep after reading.