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Update 28 Abhi Returns Home

Abhi 6.30 ko bus mein chala gaya tha kaam shuru bhi kar diya tha. Koyi aur aaya hi nahin tha. Mehboob ya Rahima ko pata bhi nahin chala ke Abhi Ruhi ke ghar thehra tha. Sab soye hue the jab wo washroom gaya apne kaam karne wale kapda pehenne.

Ruhi aur Abhi ek saath kitchen mein baith kar chai piye the, usske baad wapas Ruhi ke kamre mein donon ne lamba passionate kiss kiye, Abhi ne kapda badla, Mahesh ka kapda wapas kiya, magar underwear Mahesh ka hi pehne rakha, Ruhi se kaha kal parson tak ghar se dhulwa ke wapas kar dega magar Ruhi ne ussko rakhne ke liye kaha.

Manoj 6 baje ghar se nikal gaya tha apne kaam par jaane ko. To uss se mulakaat hi nahin hui. Ruhi tab tak apni nighty mein hi thi bina bra ke. Jiss waqt usski bedroom mein Abhi ussko kiss kar raha tha to wo bilkool chipki hui thi Abhi ke chaati par aur Abhi usski mulayaam boobs ko apne chest par feel kar raha tha achchi tarah se aur ussko laga ke Ruhi jaan bujh kar thoda sa ragadh raha tha khud ko Abhi ke jism se….. Abhi ko fir afsos hua ke ussne raat ko Ruhi ko pyasa hi chorr diya tha aur subha subha to usski pyas bujhana naaamumkin tha kyunke usski maa kitchen mein thi, dada ji uth chuke the to kuch ziada kuch karne ki possibilities nahin the.

Jab Abhi ne bus mein kaam shuru kar diya to jaise har subha ko jab Abhi apne ghar se ata tha, uss waqt wo Ruhi se usski khidki ke paas jaa kar milta tha, to Ruhi ne ussko yehi kaha tha ke 7 baje tak baahar se uss se khidki ke paas baat kare magar pata nahin kyun Abhi ne weisa nahin kiya balke kaam start kar diya tha. To Ruhi apne khidki se Abhi ko akele kaam karte hue dekh rahi thi.

Jab 7 baje Saeed aur baaki ke log aaye to sab ne dekha ke apne khidki se Ruhi Abhi ko dekh rahi hai. Jab koyi pyar mein dooba hota hai to ussko pata nahin chalta ke dusre log unnko dekh rahe hein, pyar karne wale ko sirf apna pyar dikhaayi deta hai, Ruhi aur Abhi ke bhi yehi haal tha uss aangan mein. Koyi kissi ka parwah kiye baghair donon ek dusre ko ishara karte, ishare se baat karte, aur milkar bhi baat karte jaise sab normal the, upar se Ruhi aksar jeeb se chidhata Abhi ko aur wo lagbhag sab logon ne kayi baar dekha hua tha.

Kaam karte hue Abhi ek chiz ko soch kar usse miss kar raha tha. kia tha wo? Usski diary!! Kal raat agar wo ghar hota to kal ke baare mein sab kuch likh chuka hota. Ab soch raha tha ke aaj raat ko ussko kal ki 24 hours likhna hoga plus aaj ka din bhi. Yeh sab sochte hue kaam kar raha tha aur muskura raha tha kal raat ke moments ko sochte hue. Jab muskura raha tah ussi waqt udhar se Ruhi bhi unn palon ko soch kar muskura rahi thi jo donon ne kal raat ko ek sath bitaaye the, aur donon ke nazrein turant milte to donon ek dusre ko dekh kar hanss padte the. Aur yeh sab baaki ke log notice kar rahe the.

To ab sab normal guzarne laga aur lunch time ke baad Abhi gaya Ruhi se baat karne to ussne piche ke darwaze se Abhi se ghar ke piche milne aayi. Lunch time khatam hone tak donon ek dusre ke baahon mein rahe, kiss vaghaira karte, Abhi ka haath Ruhi ke jism ke kuch ziada hi andar ferrne laga tha aur Ruhi mana nahin kar rahi thi ab ussko chhune se.

Jab lunch ke baad Abhi kaam karne wapas gaya to Ruhi ek baar kuch kapde dho rahi thi jiss mein Abhi ka underwear tha, aur Ruhi ne ishare se kuch kaha Abhi se. Abhi gaya usske paas puchne to Ruhi ne kaha aaj shaam ko ghar wapas jaane se pehle usska underwear sukh jaega to ussko de degi lejaane ke liye.

Phir Ruhi sone chali gayi aur shaam ko 3 bajne ke baad kitchen ki chaukath par dikhaayi diye. Uss dauraan Shweta kayi baar Abhi se milne aayi bus ke andar, baahar, bagal mein, peyr ke paas, haar jagah. Aur kitchen se Ruhi Shweta ko dekhti rahi Abhi ke saath.

Shaam ko sab normal guzra aur washroom se hokar Abhi nikla ghar wapas jaane ke liye, to Ruhi ne ussko ghar ke piche aane ka ishara kiya kitchen ke chaukath se.

Assal baat yeh thi ke ab Ruhi Abhi ko bahot miss karne lagi thi, ussko pata tha ke ab Abhi chala jaega aur kal shaam aur raat ki tarah aaj usske saath nahin rahega, to Ruhi ko bahot udaas feel ho raha tha. Usska dil chahta tha aaj ke shaam aur raat bhi kal ki tarah guzre, ke Abhi aaj bhi wahin rahe usske paas, usske kareeb.

Jab Abhi ghar ke piche gaya to Ruhi uss se lipat gayi aur zor se Abhi ko jakar kar ussko chaaron taraf usske chehre par, chhaati par, gaal par, munh par chumne lagi. Ruhi ki baahein Abhi ke gale mein bandha hua tha aur wo Abhi ko chorr hi nahin rahi thi, ek kiss kiye donon ne, aur Ruhi ab kiss ko hi khatam nahin kar rahi thi, Abhi ne taaqat se ussko khud se door karte hue kaha,

“Aaj mujhko sach mein buss miss karwana hai kia? Kal milte hein nah sweetheart. Ab to jaane do nah baba!”

Ruhi ne ek natkhati adaa mein kaha,

“Nah! main nahin jaane dungi aaj bhi aap ko, mujhe aap ki ab zaroorat hai.”

Abhi ne bade pyar se kaha,

“Samajhta hoon my love, magar ghar bhi to jaana hai nah mujhe, ghar par sab meri raah dekh rahe honge, maa aur Naina fikar kar rahe honge, kal subha 6 baje yahan ajaunga aur yahin milenge donon aur sath rahenge 7 baje tak okay?!”

To Ruhi ne pucha,

“Achcha aap mujhe yeh batao ke kal raat itna acha mauka mila tha aap ko mere saath aap ne kyun kuch nahin kiya? I was waiting for that you know?!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Are isska jawaab to kal raat ko hi de diya tha nah tumko? Atmosphere sahi nahin tha nah? Hum akele nahin nah the jaise uss din ko the jiss din tumari mummy nani ke yahan gayi thi.”

Ruhi: “Raat thi, tanhaayi thi, hum akele hi the, khamoshiyan the, aur kia chahiye the atmosphere banana ke liye? Kitni haseen raat thi kal? Aap ko pata hai main kal raat 3 baar aayi thi aap ke paas jab aap neendh mein the, iss umeed se ke aap ko jaga kar apne saath apne kamre mein lechalun, magar aap bahot gehre neendh mein the to disturb karna achha nahin laga… Aap sote hue kitna handsome aur sexy lagte ho pata hai aap ko?”

Abhi: “hmmm bilkool jaise main ne tumko uss din sote dekha tha, to tum ne bhi mujhko sote hue dekh hi liya, hisaab barabar hehehe”

Ruhi: “Aap ko mazaak sujh raha hai do you know what I went through? Can you understand that?”

Aabhi: “Do you really think I do not understand? And can you feel and understand what I had felt the day I had seen you sleeping? Do you know how much I was longing for you? I so dearly wanted to come on the bed by your side at that very moment and wished to make love to you, and you were looking so hot and sexy, if that stupid Reza had not been there I was sure to be on the bed by your side that day.”

Abhi ko sunke Ruhi ke aankhon mein ek chamak dikhi, aur ussne Abhi ko bahot sensually kiss kiya, aur usski aah nikal rahi thi kiss karte hue, usski jism mein jaise ek aag bhadakne lagi thi, aur apne jeeb ko Abhi ke gaal par ferrte hue Ruhi ne whisper mein apni garam saans chorrte hue kaha,

“I so badly now need you Abhi, please stay, issshhhh, I want you really bad!”

Abhi: “Sorry sweetheart it’s not the right time honey and not the suitable place for that. We are unfortunate because when the time was right you were not willing, and when you were ready last night, I knew it, but then I was not willing, its sad, we are not synchronised that way I see. But don’t worry, the suitable time and moment will soon be by our side.”

Ruhi e munh banaate hue kaha,

“thik hai phir jao aur kabhi wapas mat aana aap!”

Abhi ne usske aankhon mein dekhte hue usske donon aankhon ko kiss kiya aur kaha,

“haaye yeh ghussa bhi kitni khubsurat hai, chaar chand laga deta hai iss chehre par, jaaneman, zuban ne to keh diya magar ye aankhen meri raah takte rahenge kal subha tak aur ho sakta hai raat bhar sapnon mein bhi main hi bassa rahunga inn aankhon mein…”

Ruhi pighal gayi aur phir se lipat gayi Abhi se yeh kehte hue,

“hmmm aur aap in aankhon ko tarpa kyun rahe ho Abhi, innko aap hi ka intezaar rehta hai, uff kaise raat kategi aaj meri?!”

Abhi: “Shweta ko apne saath rakhna, uss ke saath meri batein karna, main tum donon ke yaadon aur baton mein to present rahunga nah hote hue bhi, hmm thik hai sweetheart?!”

Ek last kiss kiye donon ne, Ruhi ne ussko usska underwear diya ek kagaz mein lapet kar aur Abhi wahan se nikal chala….. Jab tak wo main road nahin pahuncha Ruhi ussko dekhti rahi.

Jab Abhi bus mein baith gaya, aur bus wahan se guzra to dekha ke Ruhi Shweta ke saath ussko bus mein dekh rahe the, angan ke bus ke paas khade hokar. Yeh pehli baar hua tha ke Ruhi bus ke paas aakar Abhi ko bus mein jaate hue dekh rahi thi aur aaj Ruhi ne Aabhi ko wave kiya Shweta ke saath.

Ghar wapas aakar sabse pehle Abhi ne apni diary likhna shuru kiya. Kal jo kuch bhi hua Ruhi ke sath usske ghar mein, usski kamre mein, kiss tarah Ruhi ne change kiya, kaise bra nikali etc sab kuch Abhi ne detail mein likha apne diary mein. Aur apne feelings ko deeply likha Abhi ne. Ye bhi likha ke abhi aane se pehle Ruhi ne uss se kaha ke kal raat 3 baar wo Abhi ko dekhne aayi thi beech raat mein aur Ruhi ne kaha ke wo kitna handsome aur sexy dikhta hai sote hue….. baaki sab kuch likha Abhi ne jaise har roz din kaise guzarta hai Ruhi ke aangan mein… wo sab likhte hue Abhi har raat ko un lamhon ko dobara jeeta hai har roz jaise abhi sab likhte hue Abhi wapas kal raat ke lamhon ko jee raha tha…..

Jab Abhi nahane chala gaya to hamesha ki tarah Naina ne wo sab padha jo Abhi ne likha tha. Naina jaanna chahti thi ke kal raat bhar Abhi kahan ruka tha, aur wohi padha Naina ne jisska ussko shak tha, matlab Naina ko shak tha ke Abhi Ruhi ke ghar hi ruka hoga…..

Jab Abhi naha kar wapas apne kamre mein aya to Naina diary haath mein liye Abhi ko dekh rahi thi aur kaha,

“Bhai she is not a virgin? Magar kyun ussne detail nahin bataayi aap ko?”

To be continued….
 
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Update 28 Abhi Returns Home

Abhi 6.30 ko bus mein chala gaya tha kaam shuru bhi kar diya tha. Koyi aur aaya hi nahin tha. Mehboob ya Rahima ko pata bhi nahin chala ke Abhi Ruhi ke ghar thehra tha. Sab soye hue the jab wo washroom gaya apne kaam karne wale kapda pehenne.

Ruhi aur Abhi ek saath kitchen mein baith kar chai piye the, usske baad wapas Ruhi ke kamre mein donon ne lamba passionate kiss kiye, Abhi ne kapda badla, Mahesh ka kapda wapas kiya, magar underwear Mahesh ka hi pehne rakha, Ruhi se kaha kal parson tak ghar se dhulwa ke wapas kar dega magar Ruhi ne ussko rakhne ke liye kaha.

Manoj 6 baje ghar se nikal gaya tha apne kaam par jaane ko. To uss se mulakaat hi nahin hui. Ruhi tab tak apni nighty mein hi thi bina bra ke. Jiss waqt usski bedroom mein Abhi ussko kiss kar raha tha to wo bilkool chipki hui thi Abhi ke chaati par aur Abhi usski mulayaam boobs ko apne chest par feel kar raha tha achchi tarah se aur ussko laga ke Ruhi jaan bujh kar thoda sa ragadh raha tha khud ko Abhi ke jism se….. Abhi ko fir afsos hua ke ussne raat ko Ruhi ko pyasa hi chorr diya tha aur subha subha to usski pyas bujhana naaamumkin tha kyunke usski maa kitchen mein thi, dada ji uth chuke the to kuch ziada kuch karne ki possibilities nahin the.

Jab Abhi ne bus mein kaam shuru kar diya to jaise har subha ko jab Abhi apne ghar se ata tha, uss waqt wo Ruhi se usski khidki ke paas jaa kar milta tha, to Ruhi ne ussko yehi kaha tha ke 7 baje tak baahar se uss se khidki ke paas baat kare magar pata nahin kyun Abhi ne weisa nahin kiya balke kaam start kar diya tha. To Ruhi apne khidki se Abhi ko akele kaam karte hue dekh rahi thi.

Jab 7 baje Saeed aur baaki ke log aaye to sab ne dekha ke apne khidki se Ruhi Abhi ko dekh rahi hai. Jab koyi pyar mein dooba hota hai to ussko pata nahin chalta ke dusre log unnko dekh rahe hein, pyar karne wale ko sirf apna pyar dikhaayi deta hai, Ruhi aur Abhi ke bhi yehi haal tha uss aangan mein. Koyi kissi ka parwah kiye baghair donon ek dusre ko ishara karte, ishare se baat karte, aur milkar bhi baat karte jaise sab normal the, upar se Ruhi aksar jeeb se chidhata Abhi ko aur wo lagbhag sab logon ne kayi baar dekha hua tha.

Kaam karte hue Abhi ek chiz ko soch kar usse miss kar raha tha. kia tha wo? Usski diary!! Kal raat agar wo ghar hota to kal ke baare mein sab kuch likh chuka hota. Ab soch raha tha ke aaj raat ko ussko kal ki 24 hours likhna hoga plus aaj ka din bhi. Yeh sab sochte hue kaam kar raha tha aur muskura raha tha kal raat ke moments ko sochte hue. Jab muskura raha tah ussi waqt udhar se Ruhi bhi unn palon ko soch kar muskura rahi thi jo donon ne kal raat ko ek sath bitaaye the, aur donon ke nazrein turant milte to donon ek dusre ko dekh kar hanss padte the. Aur yeh sab baaki ke log notice kar rahe the.

To ab sab normal guzarne laga aur lunch time ke baad Abhi gaya Ruhi se baat karne to ussne piche ke darwaze se Abhi se ghar ke piche milne aayi. Lunch time khatam hone tak donon ek dusre ke baahon mein rahe, kiss vaghaira karte, Abhi ka haath Ruhi ke jism ke kuch ziada hi andar ferrne laga tha aur Ruhi mana nahin kar rahi thi ab ussko chhune se.

Jab lunch ke baad Abhi kaam karne wapas gaya to Ruhi ek baar kuch kapde dho rahi thi jiss mein Abhi ka underwear tha, aur Ruhi ne ishare se kuch kaha Abhi se. Abhi gaya usske paas puchne to Ruhi ne kaha aaj shaam ko ghar wapas jaane se pehle usska underwear sukh jaega to ussko de degi lejaane ke liye.

Phir Ruhi sone chali gayi aur shaam ko 3 bajne ke baad kitchen ki chaukath par dikhaayi diye. Uss dauraan Shweta kayi baar Abhi se milne aayi bus ke andar, baahar, bagal mein, peyr ke paas, haar jagah. Aur kitchen se Ruhi Shweta ko dekhti rahi Abhi ke saath.

Shaam ko sab normal guzra aur washroom se hokar Abhi nikla ghar wapas jaane ke liye, to Ruhi ne ussko ghar ke piche aane ka ishara kiya kitchen ke chaukath se.

Assal baat yeh thi ke ab Ruhi Abhi ko bahot miss karne lagi thi, ussko pata tha ke ab Abhi chala jaega aur kal shaam aur raat ki tarah aaj usske saath nahin rahega, to Ruhi ko bahot udaas feel ho raha tha. Usska dil chahta tha aaj ke shaam aur raat bhi kal ki tarah guzre, ke Abhi aaj bhi wahin rahe usske paas, usske kareeb.

Jab Abhi ghar ke piche gaya to Ruhi uss se lipat gayi aur zor se Abhi ko jakar kar ussko chaaron taraf usske chehre par, chhaati par, gaal par, munh par chumne lagi. Ruhi ki baahein Abhi ke gale mein bandha hua tha aur wo Abhi ko chorr hi nahin rahi thi, ek kiss kiye donon ne, aur Ruhi ab kiss ko hi khatam nahin kar rahi thi, Abhi ne taaqat se ussko khud se door karte hue kaha,

“Aaj mujhko sach mein buss miss karwana hai kia? Kal milte hein nah sweetheart. Ab to jaane do nah baba!”

Ruhi ne ek natkhati adaa mein kaha,

“Nah! main nahin jaane dungi aaj bhi aap ko, mujhe aap ki ab zaroorat hai.”

Abhi ne bade pyar se kaha,

“Samajhta hoon my love, magar ghar bhi to jaana hai nah mujhe, ghar par sab meri raah dekh rahe honge, maa aur Naina fikar kar rahe honge, kal subha 6 baje yahan ajaunga aur yahin milenge donon aur sath rahenge 7 baje tak okay?!”

To Ruhi ne pucha,

“Achcha aap mujhe yeh batao ke kal raat itna acha mauka mila tha aap ko mere saath aap ne kyun kuch nahin kiya? I was waiting for that you know?!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Are isska jawaab to kal raat ko hi de diya tha nah tumko? Atmosphere sahi nahin tha nah? Hum akele nahin nah the jaise uss din ko the jiss din tumari mummy nani ke yahan gayi thi.”

Ruhi: “Raat thi, tanhaayi thi, hum akele hi the, khamoshiyan the, aur kia chahiye the atmosphere banana ke liye? Kitni haseen raat thi kal? Aap ko pata hai main kal raat 3 baar aayi thi aap ke paas jab aap neendh mein the, iss umeed se ke aap ko jaga kar apne saath apne kamre mein lechalun, magar aap bahot gehre neendh mein the to disturb karna achha nahin laga… Aap sote hue kitna handsome aur sexy lagte ho pata hai aap ko?”

Abhi: “hmmm bilkool jaise main ne tumko uss din sote dekha tha, to tum ne bhi mujhko sote hue dekh hi liya, hisaab barabar hehehe”

Ruhi: “Aap ko mazaak sujh raha hai do you know what I went through? Can you understand that?”

Aabhi: “Do you really think I do not understand? And can you feel and understand what I had felt the day I had seen you sleeping? Do you know how much I was longing for you? I so dearly wanted to come on the bed by your side at that very moment and wished to make love to you, and you were looking so hot and sexy, if that stupid Reza had not been there I was sure to be on the bed by your side that day.”

Abhi ko sunke Ruhi ke aankhon mein ek chamak dikhi, aur ussne Abhi ko bahot sensually kiss kiya, aur usski aah nikal rahi thi kiss karte hue, usski jism mein jaise ek aag bhadakne lagi thi, aur apne jeeb ko Abhi ke gaal par ferrte hue Ruhi ne whisper mein apni garam saans chorrte hue kaha,

“I so badly now need you Abhi, please stay, issshhhh, I want you really bad!”

Abhi: “Sorry sweetheart it’s not the right time honey and not the suitable place for that. We are unfortunate because when the time was right you were not willing, and when you were ready last night, I knew it, but then I was not willing, its sad, we are not synchronised that way I see. But don’t worry, the suitable time and moment will soon be by our side.”

Ruhi e munh banaate hue kaha,

“thik hai phir jao aur kabhi wapas mat aana aap!”

Abhi ne usske aankhon mein dekhte hue usske donon aankhon ko kiss kiya aur kaha,

“haaye yeh ghussa bhi kitni khubsurat hai, chaar chand laga deta hai iss chehre par, jaaneman, zuban ne to keh diya magar ye aankhen meri raah takte rahenge kal subha tak aur ho sakta hai raat bhar sapnon mein bhi main hi bassa rahunga inn aankhon mein…”

Ruhi pighal gayi aur phir se lipat gayi Abhi se yeh kehte hue,

“hmmm aur aap in aankhon ko tarpa kyun rahe ho Abhi, innko aap hi ka intezaar rehta hai, uff kaise raat kategi aaj meri?!”

Abhi: “Shweta ko apne saath rakhna, uss ke saath meri batein karna, main tum donon ke yaadon aur baton mein to present rahunga nah hote hue bhi, hmm thik hai sweetheart?!”

Ek last kiss kiye donon ne, Ruhi ne ussko usska underwear diya ek kagaz mein lapet kar aur Abhi wahan se nikal chala….. Jab tak wo main road nahin pahuncha Ruhi ussko dekhti rahi.

Jab Abhi bus mein baith gaya, aur bus wahan se guzra to dekha ke Ruhi Shweta ke saath ussko bus mein dekh rahe the, angan ke bus ke paas khade hokar. Yeh pehli baar hua tha ke Ruhi bus ke paas aakar Abhi ko bus mein jaate hue dekh rahi thi aur aaj Ruhi ne Aabhi ko wave kiya Shweta ke saath.

Ghar wapas aakar sabse pehle Abhi ne apni diary likhna shuru kiya. Kal jo kuch bhi hua Ruhi ke sath usske ghar mein, usski kamre mein, kiss tarah Ruhi ne change kiya, kaise bra nikali etc sab kuch Abhi ne detail mein likha apne diary mein. Aur apne feelings ko deeply likha Abhi ne. Ye bhi likha ke abhi aane se pehle Ruhi ne uss se kaha ke kal raat 3 baar wo Abhi ko dekhne aayi thi beech raat mein aur Ruhi ne kaha ke wo kitna handsome aur sexy dikhta hai sote hue….. baaki sab kuch likha Abhi ne jaise har roz din kaise guzarta hai Ruhi ke aangan mein… wo sab likhte hue Abhi har raat ko un lamhon ko dobara jeeta hai har roz jaise abhi sab likhte hue Abhi wapas kal raat ke lamhon ko jee raha tha…..

Jab Abhi nahane chala gaya to hamesha ki tarah Naina ne wo sab padha jo Abhi ne likha tha. Naina jaanna chahti thi ke kal raat bhar Abhi kahan ruka tha, aur wohi padha Naina ne jisska ussko shak tha, matlab Naina ko shak tha ke Abhi Ruhi ke ghar hi ruka hoga…..

Jab Abhi naha kar wapas apne kamre mein aya to Naina diary haath mein liye Abhi ko dekh rahi thi aur kaha,

“Bhai she is not a virgin? Magar kyun ussne detail nahin bataayi aap ko?”

To be continued….
Nice update sir
 

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3 update ek saath kaun dena passand karega bhai.
Samjhata hoon baat kia hui thi.
Itne dinon se, kitne update pehle se sab readers wait kar rahe the ke Ruhi ki askhir kia secret hai. To main me socha ab baat ki reveal karne ka time agaya kyunke 6/7 update piche se isska intezaar kiya jaa raha tha. To hab main ne update 24 likhna shuru kiya to socha uss mein Ruhi wali baat ajaegi ?
Magar nahin aya. To socha ek double update likh deta hoon uss mein zaroor ajaega... uss mein bhi nahin reach hua.... to majbooran teesra update likhna pada uss baat tak pahunchne ki aur thik jav likha ke Ruhi ne Abhi se pucha ke and if am not a virgin..... tab to continue karna tha updare 26 ko usske saath, tab main ne dekha ke 5700 words hi gaye hein 6 ghanton se likh raha tha bhai to bus WAHIN rok diya update ko!!
Well planned aur suspicious wali baat update mein aega kabhi. :D
Haan ek baat aur.... aap kahani se relate karte ho, khushi hui ...
Aur ye kahani mere dil ke bahot kareeb hai.
Yes I can understand....aap par readers ka dabaav hai....

Lekin bhai.....readers to kahenge hee.....ye to 3 hee the....agar aap ak din me 8...10 bhi de denge to bhi kuch log itne desperate hote hai ki unhe padhte hee waiting ka post karne lagenge.....

Ye aapke upar hai ki unhe kaise....handle karenge....khud unke dabaav me aayenge ya unhe mazbut karenge....aapko jyada appreciate karne ke liye....apne words se....

Ab ye aapke upar hai ki aap apni kahani ko unke hisaab se chalaate hai....OR usi disha me modte hai...jis disha me readers le jana chahte hai....

Ya phir khud un readers ki soch ko control karke....unhe bhi wo sab sochne par mazbur karte hai....
Jo aap chahte hai ki wo soche.....

Think about it....
Thanks....
 

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Those who love, only see their love and get lost in their thoughts. Last night was very romantic, on this night the two will never forget. The way Abhi felt about Ruhi, now Ruhi feels the same for Abhi. Both want to be together but it is probably impossible now. I also like Ruhi's anger. As usual, Abhi is capturing the moment spent with Ruhi in a diary. Naina has questioned for the first time today, let us see what Abhi answers against Ruhi.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...:heart::heart::heart:
 

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Update 28 Abhi Returns Home

Abhi 6.30 ko bus mein chala gaya tha kaam shuru bhi kar diya tha. Koyi aur aaya hi nahin tha. Mehboob ya Rahima ko pata bhi nahin chala ke Abhi Ruhi ke ghar thehra tha. Sab soye hue the jab wo washroom gaya apne kaam karne wale kapda pehenne.

Ruhi aur Abhi ek saath kitchen mein baith kar chai piye the, usske baad wapas Ruhi ke kamre mein donon ne lamba passionate kiss kiye, Abhi ne kapda badla, Mahesh ka kapda wapas kiya, magar underwear Mahesh ka hi pehne rakha, Ruhi se kaha kal parson tak ghar se dhulwa ke wapas kar dega magar Ruhi ne ussko rakhne ke liye kaha.

Manoj 6 baje ghar se nikal gaya tha apne kaam par jaane ko. To uss se mulakaat hi nahin hui. Ruhi tab tak apni nighty mein hi thi bina bra ke. Jiss waqt usski bedroom mein Abhi ussko kiss kar raha tha to wo bilkool chipki hui thi Abhi ke chaati par aur Abhi usski mulayaam boobs ko apne chest par feel kar raha tha achchi tarah se aur ussko laga ke Ruhi jaan bujh kar thoda sa ragadh raha tha khud ko Abhi ke jism se….. Abhi ko fir afsos hua ke ussne raat ko Ruhi ko pyasa hi chorr diya tha aur subha subha to usski pyas bujhana naaamumkin tha kyunke usski maa kitchen mein thi, dada ji uth chuke the to kuch ziada kuch karne ki possibilities nahin the.

Jab Abhi ne bus mein kaam shuru kar diya to jaise har subha ko jab Abhi apne ghar se ata tha, uss waqt wo Ruhi se usski khidki ke paas jaa kar milta tha, to Ruhi ne ussko yehi kaha tha ke 7 baje tak baahar se uss se khidki ke paas baat kare magar pata nahin kyun Abhi ne weisa nahin kiya balke kaam start kar diya tha. To Ruhi apne khidki se Abhi ko akele kaam karte hue dekh rahi thi.

Jab 7 baje Saeed aur baaki ke log aaye to sab ne dekha ke apne khidki se Ruhi Abhi ko dekh rahi hai. Jab koyi pyar mein dooba hota hai to ussko pata nahin chalta ke dusre log unnko dekh rahe hein, pyar karne wale ko sirf apna pyar dikhaayi deta hai, Ruhi aur Abhi ke bhi yehi haal tha uss aangan mein. Koyi kissi ka parwah kiye baghair donon ek dusre ko ishara karte, ishare se baat karte, aur milkar bhi baat karte jaise sab normal the, upar se Ruhi aksar jeeb se chidhata Abhi ko aur wo lagbhag sab logon ne kayi baar dekha hua tha.

Kaam karte hue Abhi ek chiz ko soch kar usse miss kar raha tha. kia tha wo? Usski diary!! Kal raat agar wo ghar hota to kal ke baare mein sab kuch likh chuka hota. Ab soch raha tha ke aaj raat ko ussko kal ki 24 hours likhna hoga plus aaj ka din bhi. Yeh sab sochte hue kaam kar raha tha aur muskura raha tha kal raat ke moments ko sochte hue. Jab muskura raha tah ussi waqt udhar se Ruhi bhi unn palon ko soch kar muskura rahi thi jo donon ne kal raat ko ek sath bitaaye the, aur donon ke nazrein turant milte to donon ek dusre ko dekh kar hanss padte the. Aur yeh sab baaki ke log notice kar rahe the.

To ab sab normal guzarne laga aur lunch time ke baad Abhi gaya Ruhi se baat karne to ussne piche ke darwaze se Abhi se ghar ke piche milne aayi. Lunch time khatam hone tak donon ek dusre ke baahon mein rahe, kiss vaghaira karte, Abhi ka haath Ruhi ke jism ke kuch ziada hi andar ferrne laga tha aur Ruhi mana nahin kar rahi thi ab ussko chhune se.

Jab lunch ke baad Abhi kaam karne wapas gaya to Ruhi ek baar kuch kapde dho rahi thi jiss mein Abhi ka underwear tha, aur Ruhi ne ishare se kuch kaha Abhi se. Abhi gaya usske paas puchne to Ruhi ne kaha aaj shaam ko ghar wapas jaane se pehle usska underwear sukh jaega to ussko de degi lejaane ke liye.

Phir Ruhi sone chali gayi aur shaam ko 3 bajne ke baad kitchen ki chaukath par dikhaayi diye. Uss dauraan Shweta kayi baar Abhi se milne aayi bus ke andar, baahar, bagal mein, peyr ke paas, haar jagah. Aur kitchen se Ruhi Shweta ko dekhti rahi Abhi ke saath.

Shaam ko sab normal guzra aur washroom se hokar Abhi nikla ghar wapas jaane ke liye, to Ruhi ne ussko ghar ke piche aane ka ishara kiya kitchen ke chaukath se.

Assal baat yeh thi ke ab Ruhi Abhi ko bahot miss karne lagi thi, ussko pata tha ke ab Abhi chala jaega aur kal shaam aur raat ki tarah aaj usske saath nahin rahega, to Ruhi ko bahot udaas feel ho raha tha. Usska dil chahta tha aaj ke shaam aur raat bhi kal ki tarah guzre, ke Abhi aaj bhi wahin rahe usske paas, usske kareeb.

Jab Abhi ghar ke piche gaya to Ruhi uss se lipat gayi aur zor se Abhi ko jakar kar ussko chaaron taraf usske chehre par, chhaati par, gaal par, munh par chumne lagi. Ruhi ki baahein Abhi ke gale mein bandha hua tha aur wo Abhi ko chorr hi nahin rahi thi, ek kiss kiye donon ne, aur Ruhi ab kiss ko hi khatam nahin kar rahi thi, Abhi ne taaqat se ussko khud se door karte hue kaha,

“Aaj mujhko sach mein buss miss karwana hai kia? Kal milte hein nah sweetheart. Ab to jaane do nah baba!”

Ruhi ne ek natkhati adaa mein kaha,

“Nah! main nahin jaane dungi aaj bhi aap ko, mujhe aap ki ab zaroorat hai.”

Abhi ne bade pyar se kaha,

“Samajhta hoon my love, magar ghar bhi to jaana hai nah mujhe, ghar par sab meri raah dekh rahe honge, maa aur Naina fikar kar rahe honge, kal subha 6 baje yahan ajaunga aur yahin milenge donon aur sath rahenge 7 baje tak okay?!”

To Ruhi ne pucha,

“Achcha aap mujhe yeh batao ke kal raat itna acha mauka mila tha aap ko mere saath aap ne kyun kuch nahin kiya? I was waiting for that you know?!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Are isska jawaab to kal raat ko hi de diya tha nah tumko? Atmosphere sahi nahin tha nah? Hum akele nahin nah the jaise uss din ko the jiss din tumari mummy nani ke yahan gayi thi.”

Ruhi: “Raat thi, tanhaayi thi, hum akele hi the, khamoshiyan the, aur kia chahiye the atmosphere banana ke liye? Kitni haseen raat thi kal? Aap ko pata hai main kal raat 3 baar aayi thi aap ke paas jab aap neendh mein the, iss umeed se ke aap ko jaga kar apne saath apne kamre mein lechalun, magar aap bahot gehre neendh mein the to disturb karna achha nahin laga… Aap sote hue kitna handsome aur sexy lagte ho pata hai aap ko?”

Abhi: “hmmm bilkool jaise main ne tumko uss din sote dekha tha, to tum ne bhi mujhko sote hue dekh hi liya, hisaab barabar hehehe”

Ruhi: “Aap ko mazaak sujh raha hai do you know what I went through? Can you understand that?”

Aabhi: “Do you really think I do not understand? And can you feel and understand what I had felt the day I had seen you sleeping? Do you know how much I was longing for you? I so dearly wanted to come on the bed by your side at that very moment and wished to make love to you, and you were looking so hot and sexy, if that stupid Reza had not been there I was sure to be on the bed by your side that day.”

Abhi ko sunke Ruhi ke aankhon mein ek chamak dikhi, aur ussne Abhi ko bahot sensually kiss kiya, aur usski aah nikal rahi thi kiss karte hue, usski jism mein jaise ek aag bhadakne lagi thi, aur apne jeeb ko Abhi ke gaal par ferrte hue Ruhi ne whisper mein apni garam saans chorrte hue kaha,

“I so badly now need you Abhi, please stay, issshhhh, I want you really bad!”

Abhi: “Sorry sweetheart it’s not the right time honey and not the suitable place for that. We are unfortunate because when the time was right you were not willing, and when you were ready last night, I knew it, but then I was not willing, its sad, we are not synchronised that way I see. But don’t worry, the suitable time and moment will soon be by our side.”

Ruhi e munh banaate hue kaha,

“thik hai phir jao aur kabhi wapas mat aana aap!”

Abhi ne usske aankhon mein dekhte hue usske donon aankhon ko kiss kiya aur kaha,

“haaye yeh ghussa bhi kitni khubsurat hai, chaar chand laga deta hai iss chehre par, jaaneman, zuban ne to keh diya magar ye aankhen meri raah takte rahenge kal subha tak aur ho sakta hai raat bhar sapnon mein bhi main hi bassa rahunga inn aankhon mein…”

Ruhi pighal gayi aur phir se lipat gayi Abhi se yeh kehte hue,

“hmmm aur aap in aankhon ko tarpa kyun rahe ho Abhi, innko aap hi ka intezaar rehta hai, uff kaise raat kategi aaj meri?!”

Abhi: “Shweta ko apne saath rakhna, uss ke saath meri batein karna, main tum donon ke yaadon aur baton mein to present rahunga nah hote hue bhi, hmm thik hai sweetheart?!”

Ek last kiss kiye donon ne, Ruhi ne ussko usska underwear diya ek kagaz mein lapet kar aur Abhi wahan se nikal chala….. Jab tak wo main road nahin pahuncha Ruhi ussko dekhti rahi.

Jab Abhi bus mein baith gaya, aur bus wahan se guzra to dekha ke Ruhi Shweta ke saath ussko bus mein dekh rahe the, angan ke bus ke paas khade hokar. Yeh pehli baar hua tha ke Ruhi bus ke paas aakar Abhi ko bus mein jaate hue dekh rahi thi aur aaj Ruhi ne Aabhi ko wave kiya Shweta ke saath.

Ghar wapas aakar sabse pehle Abhi ne apni diary likhna shuru kiya. Kal jo kuch bhi hua Ruhi ke sath usske ghar mein, usski kamre mein, kiss tarah Ruhi ne change kiya, kaise bra nikali etc sab kuch Abhi ne detail mein likha apne diary mein. Aur apne feelings ko deeply likha Abhi ne. Ye bhi likha ke abhi aane se pehle Ruhi ne uss se kaha ke kal raat 3 baar wo Abhi ko dekhne aayi thi beech raat mein aur Ruhi ne kaha ke wo kitna handsome aur sexy dikhta hai sote hue….. baaki sab kuch likha Abhi ne jaise har roz din kaise guzarta hai Ruhi ke aangan mein… wo sab likhte hue Abhi har raat ko un lamhon ko dobara jeeta hai har roz jaise abhi sab likhte hue Abhi wapas kal raat ke lamhon ko jee raha tha…..

Jab Abhi nahane chala gaya to hamesha ki tarah Naina ne wo sab padha jo Abhi ne likha tha. Naina jaanna chahti thi ke kal raat bhar Abhi kahan ruka tha, aur wohi padha Naina ne jisska ussko shak tha, matlab Naina ko shak tha ke Abhi Ruhi ke ghar hi ruka hoga…..

Jab Abhi naha kar wapas apne kamre mein aya to Naina diary haath mein liye Abhi ko dekh rahi thi aur kaha,

“Bhai she is not a virgin? Magar kyun ussne detail nahin bataayi aap ko?”

To be continued….
Aag ab dono taraf hai
Khubsurat update
 

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now my observation till present scenario
only abhi is in love.... he is somewhat attracted physically too due to his debut closeness with a girl of his dreams
but ruhi is totally in lust
uski maa bahut jyada shatir nazar aa rahi hai

aur jo apne naina ji ke comment ko reply kia... mein apse bilkul sahmat nahi hu... naina ji sahi kah rahi hain
jaise ruhi ki ma ke samne hug-kiss hua.... indian middle class society me 1986 kya aj 2020 me bhi acceptable nahi hai... husband wife bhi nahi karte... unke beech to officially koi relation hi nahi
manoj ka stand...kisi bhi tarah villainish ya negativi nahi...he is behaving as per social and family norms
mujhe nahi pata ki ap india me kahan aur kin logo ke beech rahe hain aur apne kya jana hai...
me 45 years ki life me. majdoor se lekar business class tak aur natiin capital se theth dehat (extreme rural) tak sab me raha hu......
in dono ka affair aur ruhi ki maa ka behavior indian social atmosphere se kahin bhi match nahi karta
apki story achchhi lag rahi hai ...hum padh bhi rahi hai... lekin ap apni fantassy ko itna justify karke impose na karein...
naina ji ke comment ko ... jo ki logical bhi tha...apne majak udane ya unko jaise kuchh pata hi na ho aur unhone galat kaha hai....aise reply diya... jo mujhe bhi achchha nahi laga...
fantassy me sabkuchh logical nahi hota.... use ham usi tarah accep kar lete hain.... but don't impose illlogics for justification
 

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Update 28 Abhi Returns Home

Abhi 6.30 ko bus mein chala gaya tha kaam shuru bhi kar diya tha. Koyi aur aaya hi nahin tha. Mehboob ya Rahima ko pata bhi nahin chala ke Abhi Ruhi ke ghar thehra tha. Sab soye hue the jab wo washroom gaya apne kaam karne wale kapda pehenne.

Ruhi aur Abhi ek saath kitchen mein baith kar chai piye the, usske baad wapas Ruhi ke kamre mein donon ne lamba passionate kiss kiye, Abhi ne kapda badla, Mahesh ka kapda wapas kiya, magar underwear Mahesh ka hi pehne rakha, Ruhi se kaha kal parson tak ghar se dhulwa ke wapas kar dega magar Ruhi ne ussko rakhne ke liye kaha.

Manoj 6 baje ghar se nikal gaya tha apne kaam par jaane ko. To uss se mulakaat hi

Bhai bohat hot & sexy update tha ruhi bohat garam hai lekin abhi majbur hai lekin ruhi ne detail kuin ni btai yeha sawal ab bhi hai
 
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