Update 15 The Calm Is Back
Abhi ne life mein kabhi kissi ladki ko kiss nahin kiya tha, usske samajh mein nahin araha tha ke kaise kia karein, sirf apne honth ko Ruhi ke honton se takraya tha ussne, magar Ruhi ussko kiss kar rahi thi, Abhi ko ussi pal laga ke ussko kiss karna to ata hi nahin magar Ruhi ko kiss karna ata tha!!
Ab aaguey….
Ruhi ki chaati Abhi ke seene par dabbe hue the, usski boobs chipke hue the Abhi ke chest par, aur Ruhi ne Abhi ko bade zor se jakra hua tha. Abhi ke saans lene se usski boobs jaise push ho rahe the, Abhi ne sar jhukaate hue usski thodi se Mulayam cleavage dekha, kitni mulaayam tha wo hissa jo Abhi ko nazar arahe the aaj pehli baar wo bhi apni khud ki baahon mein…. Ruhi ko jaise feel hua ke Abhi usski cleavage dekh raha tha, to halke se nazar ko upar kiya Abhi ke chehre mein dekhne ke liye to paaya ke haan Abhi ke aankeh usski seene ke andar hi dekh rahe the to Ruhi ne ek saans lete hue kaha,
“Aap ne nahin bataya ke aaj aap kyun late aaye abhi? Kia wo mujhko punish karne ke liye tha?”
Abhi ne dhire se gehri awaaz mein kaha,
“Tumhara dress maila ho jaega, mere kapde maile hein tum maile kapde par chiipki hui ho Ruhi!”
Abhi to apne working clothes mein tha, maile to the hi, par Ruhi ko koyi parwah nahin tha uss waqt, aur ussne kaha,
“Mere sawaal ko avoid kar rahe ho reply karne ko nah? issi liye dusri baat bana rahe ho Abhi?!”
Abhi ne usski gaal sehlaate hue kaha,
“yeh baat nahin hai Ruhi, mujhe acha nahin lag raha ke iss maile kapde mein tumhare saath iss position mein rahun main apne dusre kapde mein hota to baat aur thi nah.”
Ruhi ne ek Muskaan mein kaha,
“mujhe to koyi farak nahin padta, acha batao ab khush hue aap mujhe baahon mein bhar liya nah?!”
Abhi ne halke se hansste hue kaha,
“baahon mein tumne mujhe bhara hua hai main ne to sirf tumhare kaandhe par haath rakha hai!”
Ruhi ne ussko aur zor se jakarte hue ek bachche ki adaa mein kaha,
“To bharro nah mujhko apne baahon mein jaise main ne aap ko liya hua hai”
Abhi: “iss libaas mein main tumko nahin lena chahta apni baahon mein mujhe odd feel ho raha hai, tumhare kapde gande ho jayenge Ruhi!”
Itna kaha ke Mehboob ki awaaz aur usske kadam unn donon ke taraf badhte hue sunaayi diye, Mehboob yeh kehte hue araha tha,
“Abhi, ghussa thanda hua ke nahin ajao chalo kaam jaari rakho nah bhai!”
Usski awaaz sunkar Ruhi ne jhat se Abhi ko chorrte hue alag hua do kadam, tab tak Mehboob wahan pahunch gaya aur Ruhi se hi pucha,
“issko cool kiya tumne apni baton se nah?!” Aur Abhi ka haath thaam kar Mehboob ne usse chalne ko kaha.
Tab tak Ruhi ki maa bhi agayi Ruhi ke paas aur pucha,
“kia kaha ussne kyun itna late aya aaj?”
Ruhi: “pata nahin maa, mujhe yakeen hai ke meri hi vajah se late aya, ab bhi thoda ukhda ukhda sa hai, hope normal ho jaega kuch der baad, main jaati hoon terrace saaf karne usske aankhon ke saamne to rahungi, kuch der pehle main taras rahi thi ussko wahan dekhne ke liye…”
Ruhi ki maa ne pucha;
“Tumne ussko jakra hua tha, wo bhi mere saamne ussko jakar liya besharaam kahin ki, Mehboob jab aya to tujhko uss position mein nahin dekha nah?!”
Ruhi ne bata diya ke usske aane ke awaaz sunte hi Ruhi Abhi se do kadam door khadi ho gayi thi.
Ruhi chali gayi terrace par jhadu lagaane aur Abhi ko nazron se chorr hi nahin rahi thi. Abhi bhi ussko dekhte hue hi kaam kiye jaa raha tha. Aur Ruhi ussko dekhte hue khud se keh rahi thi;
“Iss aangan mein pehli baar ek naam itna goonji hai ABHI. Iss naam ko main to har roz weise hi sunna chahti hoon. Iss se pehle kabhi bhi yeh naam mere aangan mein nahin suna tha main ne, jab suna to itna suna ke iss naam ko sune bina raha nahin jata, agar yeh naam iss aangan mein goonjna band ho jayega to mujh par kia guzregi wo main soch rahi hoon aaj!!”
Aur achanak Ruhi ka dil dhadka aur khud se kaha;
“Abhi ne to mujhe ishare se sab kuch keh diya hai halaan ke saaf nahin kaha main usske mann ki baat ko padh chuki hoon, magar main apni baat ussko kaise bataun? Mere baare mein ussko pata chala tab kia hoga? Kaise react karega wo? Chala gaya to main kia karungi? Kyun main ussko dil de baithi? Itne dinon tak to kissi ke saath aisa feel nahin hua tha kyun Abhi se main ne shuru mein hi sab kuch nahin keh diya? Agar ussne socha ke main ne dhoke mein rakah usse tab kia hoga? Maa ne kehne se mana kiya hai, magar mujhe lagta hai ke ussko sab sach sach bata dena chahiye. Aur agar mere baare mein usske gharwalon ko pata chal gaya to koyi bhi accept nahin karega mujhe yakeen hai…. Main maa ko sunun ya apne dil ki? Kia karun main? Hey bhagwaan help me!”
Ruhi ke chehre par udaasi dekh kar Abhi ne ishaare se pucha kia hua, magar Ruhi ne kuch nahin mein sar hillaya.
Unn dinon ek geet mashoor tha jo Abhi aksar gungunaya karta tha aur usske situation par fit lagta tha, Abhi ne uss geet ko seeti bajaate hue gaya, wo Ruhi ke liye hi tha, aur Ruhi ussko pyar bhade nazron se dekhne lagi aur jab Abhi ne gaane ke mukde ko whistle kiya bilkkol sur mein to Ruhi ki Aankhen bhar aaye, gana yeh tha;
“Pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna
Pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna
Do aankeh to kia do jahan mein samaaye nah jitna
Pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna…..
Dil mein kab tak karoge basera
Saath kab tak nah chorroge mera
Dharti chorre nah suraj ka phera
Saath chorrenge yun hum nah tera
Pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna
Do aankhen to kia do jahan mein samaaye nah jitna
Zindagi ka tumhi ho irada,
Yaad rakhoge kia tum yeh wada
Nahin bhulenge hum tumhein aise
Dil nah bhule dharakna jaise
Pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna
Do aankehn to kia do jahan mein samaaye nah jitna
Jeete hai hum tumhare sahare
Din guzarte hein kaise tumhare
Ab judaayi nah seh payenge hum
Tumse bichde to mar jayenge hum
Pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna
Do aankeh to kia do jahan mein samaaye nah jitna
Pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna…..”
Iss gaane ko agar aap log issi waqt sunna chaahe to you tube ka yeh link par hai:
Manhar aur Asha bhonsle ke gaaye hue bahot hi mashoor gana tha yeh unn dinon aur har roz subha shaam radio par sunaayi deta tha… har kissi ke zuban par yeh geet hua karta tha unn dinon.
Ab Abhi itna zor se iss gaane ko seeti bajaate hue chala jaa raha tha Ruhi ko dekhte hue ke usski aankhen bhar aayi, wo ro padi aur chali gayi wahan se apna chehra dhone ko.
Khud Abhi ke bhi aankh bhar aaye kyunke wo iss part ko dil mein gaa raha tha seeti bajaate hue
Jeete hai hum tumhare sahare
Dun guzarte hein kaise tumhare
Ab judaayi nah she payenge hum
Tumse bichde to mar jayenge hum
Aur tahjub ki baat yeh thi ke jab Abhi seeti bajaate hue iss part ko dil mein gaa raha tha ussi pal ko Ruhi issi part ko hi dil mein gaa rahi thi, yaane ke yeh part jo female voice mein thi wohi Ruhi gaa rahi thi issi liye ro padi thi
Ab judaayi nah seh payenge hum
Tumse bichde to mar jayenge hum
Yeh kudrat ka Karishma tha ya kia magar hua aisa hi tha….. aur uss din ke baad wahan aakhri din tak kaam karte hue har roz, din bhar Abhi iss gaane ko seeti se oonche sur mein bajata tha… jab kabhi Ruhi nazar nahin aati thi to Abhi ko buss iss gaane ko seeti mein bajana hota tha aur Ruhi daudi chali aati thi usske saamne…. Donon iss gaane se jaise bandhe hue the unn dinon. Ab sochna agar bichde honge to kia haal hota hoga donon ka jab iss geet ko kabhi sunte honge to!! Yun sochiye ke 15 saal baad donon ek dusre se door hai aur iss gaane ko sun rahe hein ussi waqt par alag alag jagah par aur ek dusre ko yaad kar rahe hein to manzar kia hota hoga!! (yeh likhte hue main bahot bhaavuk ho gaya)
Uss din Abhi ka din bahot acha guzra. Saaed bhai aur wo phir se mamooli tarah se baat karne lage jaise ke kuch hua hi nahin tha. Shayad Saeed bhai ne apna kusoor maan liya tha aur ussko pata tha ke Abhi ne bus mein uss se bahot ziada kaam kiya hai.
Ruhi baar baar Abhi ke saamne aati rahi ussko apne jeeb se chidhaati jo Abhi ko behad passand tha…. ab jeeb nikaal kar honton ke beech kuch pointed jaise karke ek ladke ko dikhana isska sexual matlab bhi hota hai aisa Abhi ne socha kia Ruhi ko pata bhi hai ke wo kia ishara karti hai uss tarah se jeeb se usse mock karke? Magar kyunke usski uss adaa se, jiss adaa se Ruhi Weise karti thi wo bahot pyara hota tha iss liye Abhi ko bahot passand tha usska weise karna. Ek baar to Ruhi ne apni maa ke saamne weise jeeb se abhi ko mock kiya. Abhi heyraan reh gaya ke usski maa ne kyun kuch nahin kaha Ruhi ko aur weisa karne diya…. Maa hanss rahi thi jab Ruhi Abhi ko uss tarah se jeeb se mock kar rahi thi… aur weisa mock karna har roz hota raha. Chalta raha ruhi ke taraf se. ruhi khud darrta tha ke kahin kabhi Mehboob, ya saeed nah dekhle Ruhi weisa karte hue….
Ab aate hein kiss wale baat par.
Abhi kaam karte waqt uss kiss ko bhi gehraayi se sochta raha. Kyunke usska pehla kiss tha ussko pata tha ke wo anari tha aut kiss ahi se nahin kar paaya, ussko wo mehsoos hua tha uss waqt ke Ruhi ussko kiss kar rahi thi wo Ruhi ko nahin.
Ab kia Abhi ko pata chala ke Ruhi ne pehle life mein kiss kiya hua hai? Bilkool nahin. Abhi ko kaise pata chalta kyunke ussne life mein aaj pehli baar ek ladki ko kiss kiya, to ussko kia pata ke sahi kiss kaisa hota hai… haan tassavur mein Ruhi ko hi kiss karta hai khayaalon mein to sochta hai honthon ko honton par rakh kar chumte hein jaise gaal ko chumte hein. Magar usske honthon ko Ruhi chuss rahi thi kiss ke dauraan, balke Abhi ke jeeb ko takriban le liya tha apni munh mein kiss karte waqt….. yeh part Abhi ko bahot accha laga tha magar ussne expect nahin kiya tha ke weisa bhi kiss kiya jaata hoga.
Magar ab, tanhaayi mein jab Abhi soch raha tha to mehsoos kiya ke agar kiss weisa kiya jaaye aur agar usske munh mein Ruhi ka jeeb ajaaye to wo zaroor usske rass ko chuss lega, pee lega…. Aur ab akele mein Abhi soch raha tha ke uss waqt ussko wohi karna chahiye tha magar khud ko hi anari kaha ussne…. Aur Ruhi ki cleavage ko bhi socha Abhi ne aur ussne apne erection feel kiya aur utejina ne ghar kiya usske andar, phir Abhi ne Ruhi ko dekhna chaha ussi pal, to dekha ke Ruhi apni khidki se teke hue Abhi ko bade pyar se dekh rahi thi. Abhi ko ussi waqt Ruhi ko apne baahon mein bharne ka man kiya aur ab Abhi Ruhi ki jism ko dekhna chahta tha ussko mehsoos karna chahta tha apne haath se usski jism ko chhuhna chahta tha. lunch time karib araha tha to Abhi ne Tony se kaha ke wo pani lene jaa raha hai, aur Abhi terrace par gaya, Ruhi ne jab ussko waha dekha to jaldi se baahar aayi, aur Abhi ke saamne apni nili dress mein muskurati hui dekhne lagi. Abhi ab upar se niche Ruhi ko nihaar raha tha aur usski boobs ka form dekh raha tha usski dress ke upar, uss ubhaar ko admire kar raha tha, to Ruhi usske chehre mein dekhte hue pucha,
“kia hua? Kia dekh rahe ho Abhi?”
Abhi ne kaha,
“tumko phir se weise apne seene se lagaane ka mann kar raha hai, piche aao nah!”
Ruhi ne hansste hue kaha
“paagal ho kia? Dekho Saeed ji aur Mehboob donon bus mein hein weh dekh to nahin rahe magar unn ko pata hai ke tum yahan ho!”
Abhi ne kaha,
“tum behad khubsurat ho aur aaj main ne pehli baar tumko feel kiya, mera mann nahin bhara hai…”
Ruhi ne ussi Muskaan aur apni rijhati adaaon mein kaha,
“Okay milungi piche, tum lunch karne ke baad ana; hamare paas 30 mins tak to honge nah, aur haan cigarrete mat peena varna mujhe kiss nahin karne dungi, samjhe aap Abhi?”
Abhi bahot khush hua aur kaam par wapas gaya... Ruhi ko kiss karne ka, apne baahon mein bharne ko, usski jism ko chaaron taraf feel karne ko sochte hue…..
To be continued….
the update starts by Ruhi still holding Abhi and asking him either he came late just to punish her,
either he was still angry with her.
The way you have described because of Abhi being tall, how Ruhi's face reached up
abhi's chest so she leaned her cheek over his chest and listened to his heartbeats in the last update was awesome and she is still at that place still with her face over his chest.
Ruhi asked him if he is happy as he wanted to hold her and now he is doing that but Abhi told her that she is holding not him holding her and so she asked him to hold her but aww poor Abhi did not want to spoil her dress as he was in his dirty working clothes.... so nice of him, so he only had put his hands over her shoulder without hugging her whereas Ruhi had held him tightly in her arms.... very nice scene indeed and Ruhi proved her love for her, very nice.
Mehboob came to fetch Abhi and he went back to work while Ruhi went to be around to be close to each other and from where each other can ... their games of eyes and looking each other continued while Abhi worked and Ruhi did her house chores.
but here for the first time bro, you made Ruhi talk to herself by mentioning about her personal issues.
And the question is what is her secret? What I and surely all other readers have understood that Ruhi had a past, a boyfriend, someone she loved or could be she was married and separated then and I also feel like the little Shweta is her daughter, could be I am wrong but I am feeling so, since the way you mentioned how far she looked alike.
Ruhi is worried very much thinking of the day she will have to reveal her secret to Abhi. she should be.... anyhow hope not this secret that will be the reason of their separation..... because the much Abhi loves her I don't think he will leave her.....
The part Abhi whistling the song "pyar karte hein hum....." reminds me of my own days I was doing this for someone
I can see myself in this scene and fully understand the bond they both had with this song. this song could be like the generic of their love story
I can also deeply feel what would be the pain and feeling of melancholia if after years of separation they will be listening to the song and above all, if both of them are listening to it at the same time at different places..... its a very HEAVY feeling. it's nostalgic.
and the updates end with a beautiful note as Ruhi has accepted to meet Abhi again behind the house during his lunchtime.
Very beautiful update Casi bro, you have already revealed much about the story, all have already understood that there will be separation between them, and that is gonna be painful, but as you explained to Chinturocky, I want to read the whole story to know why it happened, how it happened and what is gonna happen after.
fabulous update with impeccable narration and vivid descriptions. hats off.
