Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

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Ab tak ki iss kahani ki sabse khatarnak aur sabse jiada romantic update. Pyar ubhar ubhar k baahar aaya hai iss update mein. Wow.
Abhi ghusse mein kuch bhi bakta hai. Ruhi ko bhi bura bhala nikal gaya usske munh se.
Saeed se ghamasain ladaayi hui. Khub sunaya Abhi ne Saeed ko ke wo uss se bahut jiada kaam kiya hai bus mein.
Magar sab se badi aur pyari baat yeh hui k khud Mehboob ne Ruhi ki maa ko Abhi ko ek taraf lejaane ko kaha ussko shaant karne k liye. Mehboob ko shayad pata tha ke Ruhi ne agar Abhi ko shaant kiya to wo khamosh ho jaega iss liye Saeed se Abhi ko door karne k liye usse Ruhi ki maa k hawale kiya.
Aur baaki ko hua buss kamaal hua.
Main ne bilkool bhi nahin socha tha ke Ruhi apni maa ke saamne uss tarah se Abhi ko jakar legi. Magar samajh sakti hoon kyun ussne waisa kiya. Ussne ek to Abhi ko bahut hi misd kiya tha kyunke wo late aya tha aur Shayad Ruhi ne feel kiya hoga k wo ab kabhi nahin aega usski kal wale shabdon k liye. Dusri baat iss liye kyunke Ruhi samajh rahi thi k Abhi mein ghussa iss liye bhi bhara hua tha sirf usski kal wali vyohar ki vajah se. Abhi ne chillate hue yeh bhi kaha tha ke bala kaha gaya hai usse to kaam ko wahin chorr kar chala jaaye aur Ruhi ne sab suna tha.
Ruhi ne Abhi ko apne baahon mein har kar jiss tarah se uss se maafi maangi apni kal ki kahe hue shabdon ke liye, ussko padhte hue meri aankhen nam ho gaye.
Aur kiss wali baat bhi unexpected tha. Socha nahin tha k Abhi Ruhi ko kiss karega. Sabse badi baat ye hai k Abhi ka pehla kiss tha magar Ruhi ki pehli kiss nahin thi wo.
To Ruhi ko kiss karna kaise aaya THAT IS THE QUESTION or the secret.
FANTAFABULOUS update Casi ji. Hats off.

tehe dil se shukriya itni achi review ke liye Savi dear

 

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Are wah miyan! Shah bhai ab tak ki sabse behtareen update kahunga positive way mein. Behad passand aaya ye update mujhe yaar. Rula diya yaar Ruhi ne mujhe. Bahut pyar bhara hai usske dil mein Abhi ke liye yaar. Wow.
Chalo shuru se update ki operation karta hoon
To Abhi itna hurt tha Ruhi kal wali "bala tal jaegi" baat se aur Ruhi ki shaam ko nahin dikhaayi dene se ke ussko late hi sahi bus se utarne ko bhi mann nahin kar raha tha. Socha k wahan kaam karna chorr de. Kitna hurt hua tha ye pata chalta hai usski uss vyohaar se.
Tony usske piche gaya aur ussko sab kuch bataya k Ruhi kaise ussko dhund rahi hai subha se.
Magar Abhi bhi puchne laga k terrace par kasm kar diya Ruhi ne ya nahin, matlab Abhi chahta tha k Ruhi ussko dikhe aur usske nazdik rahe.
Magar Abhi tab bhi ghusse mein hi tha k kuch bhi bol raha tha k ab kyun Ruhi nahin dikh rahi mar gayi kia ye sirf ghussa express karna tha, wo mean to nahin kar raha tha k weisa ho.
Phir hui takraar Saeed k saath. Ek ghayal sher ko kabhi cherrte nahin hai. Abhi ghayal tha pehle se hi aur jara sa deri se aane k liye Saeed uss par tut para to Abhi explode ho gaya. Laazmi tha usska visphot hona.
Aur Abhi ne prove kiya k bus mein ussne Saeed se jiada kaam kiya hai jiss se Mehboob raazi tha.
Aur maamla aur na bigre iss liye Mehboo apna kaam nikalne k liye Ruhi ki maa aur Ruhi ko istemaal kiya Abhi ko Saeed se door karne k liye. Mehboob ko kyunke pata tha ke Abhi Ruhi ko chahta hai to ussko laga hoga k Ruhi ussko shaant kar sakta hai
Aur tab aayi haseen pal Abhi ke liye.
Wah bhai ye BEST part tha iss update ka jissne mujhe rula diya. Pyari Ruhi ne mujhe uss tarah se maafi maangte hue rulay yaar. Kitna pyar karti hai Abhi se aaj Ruhi ne saabit kar diya bhai.
Kia update likha hai aap ne, behtareen, Lajawab, shaandaar se bhi upar.
Magat suspense note par end kiya update ko. RUHI KO KISS KARNA ATA HAI AUR ABHI KO NAHIN KYUNKE TE USSKA PEHLA KISS THA.....
Matlab saaf hai k Ruhi pehle kiss kar chuki hai..... sawaal hai kiss ko kiss kiya hai Ruhi ne???
Badhya se bhi badhya update bhai.
Shabaash. :

AAp ka shukra guzar hoon Husein bhai itni achi review ke liye aise hi saath dete rehna bhai

 

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Gajab ka update hai casi ji. Behtareen update. Bahut kamaal ki update hai ye.
Behad passand aya mujhe.
Main detail mein nahin jaungi buss itna kehna hai main rone lagi jiss tarah se Ruhi Abhi se mafi mang rahi thi. Bahut emotional tha wo part.
Aur shocking ye baat thi k samajh mein agaya k Ruhi k life mein ya to koyi tha pehle ya ab bhi ya ya door hai, pata nahin kia raaz hai par kuch hai jarur.
Dilchasp aur shaandaar likha hai aap ne.

bahot bahot shukriya Swathi dear for the appreciation

 

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Bahut behtareen update,
Ruhi ki jarur koi back story hai.
Shayad abhi sahi ho ke wo bachchi ruhi ki hi beti ho, Shayad kuchh bahut bura hua hai ruhi ke Saath.
Aur apni bachchi ko bahut Dino baad kisi ke liye khush dekhker usaki maa NE bhi rishte ko manjuri Di ho.
Saeed aur ruhi ka baap villain na nikale.

bahot shukriya Chintu bhai kal ki update par aap ne reply nahin kiya to main ne socha ke kia ho gaa bhai
ab khushi hui aap ke reply dekh kar

 

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Wah dhanssu update bhai. Ab tak ki BEST update hai mere hisaab se.
Bahut emotional part bhi hai iss update mein. Jajbaaton aap ne kiss andaj se likha hai wi bahut hi habardast hai. Wah kia baat hai bhai maja agaya, dil ne ro diya.
Abhi ke dil ko thess pahunchi thi kal. Aur aaj subha late utha so late gaya kaam par. Jaane se pehle hi jaise ek do raahe par tha ke jaaye ta nah jaaye, tahak k socha hamesha k liye eahan3kaam ko chorr de. Sirf iss liye k Ruhi ne ussko bala se chhutne ko kaha tha agar wo dikhaayi dena band karde wahan. Gehri chot lagi thi dil ko Ruhi ki uss baat se iss liye Abhi bahut hurt tha.
At last gaya to pata chala Tony se ke Ruhi ussko dhund rahi hai subha se. Yehi to chahta tha nah Abhi. Magar ysske aane k baad saamne kyun nahin arahi thi isske liye ab ghussa ho raha tha.
Kaam jaise shuru hua to Saeed ne ussko late aane k liye sunana shuru kiya aur Abhi pehle se apne andar ek toofaam ko thaane hue tha to wo phoot gaya aur Saeed se jhagra serious hua to Mehboob bich mein aya sulah karaane aur stithi ki haalat dekh kar Ruhi ki maa se Abhi ko alag karne ko socha jo best option tha. Matlab Mehboob ko pata tha ke Ruhi hi Abhi ko shant kara sakti thi.
Aur phir best part aayi update mein. Wah maja agaya uss part ko padhke bhai.
Kia likha hai uss part ko aap ne. Kia varnaan kiya hai uss behtareen romantic part ki. Adbuth.
Jiss tarah se Ruhi ne Abhi ko jakra apne baahon mein wo shayad Abhi ko hi umeed nahin thi k waisa karegi wo. Ab Ruhi ne weisa kyun kiya? Wo iss liye k ussne subha se Abhi ko bahot miss kiya tha aur phir ussko maafi mangni thi uss se kal k liye. Aur Ruhi ko pata tha Abhi uss se naraz tha kal se, aur uss ghusse ko bhi thaame hue tha. To Ruhi ko bhi mauka mila khud ki safaayi dene ki. Aur Abhi ke seene se lagte hue Ruhi ne khud ko maaf karwa liya....
Phir aap ne jiss tarah se Abhi ki kad aur Ruhi ki kad ko dikhaya iss update mein aisa laga main sab apne aankhon ke saamne dekh raha tha. Ek ooncha aadmi aur kum kad wali ladki usske chest tak hi reach hogi ladki ka sar aur chehra.... aap ne ussko baakhubi dikhaya hai k abhi ko sar jhuka kar Ruhi ki thudi ko upar karna para usske honton par apne honth ko rakhne k liye...

Baaki samajh mein agaya k kiss ke jarye k Ruhi ki life mein pehle koyi tha ta HAI ????
JABARDAST UPDATE CASI BHAI

Dil ki gehraayi se aap ka shukriya ada karta hoon nayan bhai iss pyari review ke liye, thanks very much yaara

 

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bahut badhiya casinar bhai...............
last ke 5 updates shortcut markar............. bina comments padhe seedhe ....index par jaakar padhe tab apke sath pahuncha hoon

kahani achchhi hai

lekin abhi..............wo mujhe jitna starting mein business point of view se mature laga..........
utna hi feelings ko lekar immature ,,,,,,,,,, vyavhar mein ................
jis tarah wo ek ladki ko exhibit kar raha hai.........apne affair mein
ruhi se pahle to poore compound ke log jaan aur samajh gaye ki abhi ke man me kya hai
jabki ruhi ki maa ka support hone ki wajah se abhi isi sab ko bina outsiders ki najar me aye bhi kar sakta tha
us par bhi pyar ka pagalpan ki sankiyon ki tarah har samay usi ke samne rahe ruhi
isika anjam tha jo mahboob ne ruhi ki maa ko chetawni di,,,,,,aur saeed ne to tamasha bana diya......
roohi ke ghar par hi jo abhi ke affair ko lekar saeed ne kaha ..........wo actually abhi se jyada ruhi ke liye .........bura laga mujhe
aur saeed ko kitna bhi galat thehra lo..... lekin use ye kahne ka mauka abhi ke pagalpan ne diya
yahi kaam mahboob bhi karta .... jo saeed ne kiya............ lekin wo apna kam jo kam keemat me ho raha tha......use beech me rukwana nahi chahta tha....use maloom tha ki abhi ke bina saeed ye itni asani se nahi kar payega.... aur shayad kar hi na paye

ruhi wo ek alhad kali hai..........jise ghar ki chardiwari me........maa ke support se ye pyar aage badhane ka mauka mila hai.....
pita yahan hain nahi..... bhai aur dadaji se bachte huye chal rahi hai..............isliye sab theek hi hai

abhi dekhte hain..................aage kya hota hai...........
saeed ko raste se hataye bina to na business hoga aur na hi pyar.................lekin use raste se hatana aasan kam nahi hai
waise abhi ne jo photo wala mamla set kiya ruhi ke bhai se .........usse use naya business lene mein bahut bada support milega

bahot bahot shukriya kaamdev bhai.
aap ne update ek saath padhke reply kiye, chalo koyi baat nahin bhai
jo doubts hein aap ke mann mein story aur updates ko lekar wo dhire dhire mit jayehnge buss aap ko kahani ko end tak padhna hoga tab kuch khul kar saamne ayenge.
Thanks veryr much bhai

 

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Bahut pyara update bhai.
Last part bahut emotional raha. Ruhi ne almost rula diya aaj bhai kitna kuch keh gayi wo Abhi ko uss tarah se jakre hue. Bahut hi emotional scene tha last wala bhai aur fir end bhi hua ek aise baat par ke ab to yehi lagta hai ke jarur Ruhi ke life mein ya to koyi thi pehle ya ab bhi hai aur shayad door hai abhi k liye aur fir Ab Ruhi ko Abhi se pyar ho gaya.
Agar mera andaza sahi hai to jo bhi koyi dooe hai filhaal Ruhi se wo wapas aega to Ruhi ko usske paas jana padega to obviously Abhi ko nikalna padega.
Uss kiss se pata chala k Ruhi ne pehle kiss kiya hai magar ye baat Abhi ko to nahin pata kyunke yeh to usska pehla kiss tha life ki. To Abhi ko kaise pata chalega?
Suspense hai bhai hum readers ko to aap ne samjha diya par Abhib ko kaun batayega ye baat?
Badhya super badhya update bhai.
Mujhe khushi iss baat ki hai ke abhi ke liye Abhi khush kai kyunke Ruhi ne ussko pyar kiya.

Bhaot bahot shukriya Shambhu bjai iss appreciation ke liye

 

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Quite an emotional update. Moistened my eyes bro. Had not thought that would happen.
Ruhi's part of asking forgiveness was too emotional. She should hv sobbed while saying all that to Abhi. So this means she is very strong that girl. She is emotionally stronger than Abhi. I hv seen Abhi emotionally weak so far, but Ruhi proved to be stronger than him.
Regarding the kiss its understood that Ruhi had a past. And what is that past? Thats the question. Will Abhi be told about her past? Or will her padt separate them?
Very interesting and intriguing update bro. You are maintaining the suspense perfectly.
You narration is fantastic and description perfect.
I am very eager to know further.
Will wait for the next impatiently. Bravo bro.

thanks so very very much for the lovely appreciative post Vikram bro

 

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Iss update ne bhavuk kar diya bidu.
Shaandar, lajawab update hai. Shuru se end tak special hai. Bahut Romantic hai end mein. Kaafi emotional bhi hai.
Ruhi ki adaa ne jaan le liya yaar.
Kitni pyari aur caring hai bidu.
Kitna maafi manga yaar Abhi se kal k liye. Kiss tarah se Abhi bahon mein jakar liya, wow very special moment. Kiss was superb.
But saaf zahir hi gaya kiss se k Ruhi pehle bhi kiss kar chiki hai. Kiss ko? Kab? Kia story hai usski ab?
Agle update me dekhenge.

bahot bahot shukriya King bhai

 

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Marvellous update casi bro. Awesome breathtaking update. One of the best till now
Yesterday I had asked how you will get them reconciled, and the way you did that is JUST FABULOUS. What a great creator of situation you are bro. Wow. Just amazing. I had never thought that you will create another fight to make Ruhi come in between to carry Abhi to a corner. That was perfect and VERY VERY well planned. Beautifully executed. Amazing. Beautiful.
A very intense and romantic moment took place between Abhi and Ruhi. That was an amazing situation as Ruhi was already missing Abhi a lot, she was emotionally suffering as Abhi had not come by 9 and she must already be wishing to see him, to be close to him and when the quarrel brome3between Saeed and Abhi that was a golden opportunity for Ruhi to take Abhi in her arms to give him emotional support as she knew he was hurt yesterday by her words.
So she made herself be forgiven in such a cute, romantic way which stole my heart. It was romantic plus emotional that scene. Very beautifully written and described. You did a wonderful job Casi bro. Superb.
The only hic is who is the one whom Ruhi kissed before or with whom she learned to kiss?
She had someone in her life?
Is the cute Shweta her daughter? Is she a divorcee? Was she jilted by someone? Was there a tragedy in her life? So many questions bro.
Hope in the next updates we will come to know more.
Keep up the good writing Casi bro. You are just fantastic a writer. Love you bro.
Hats off

I feel indebted top you for such wonderful reviews Rowdy bro,
you like read in my mind while replying
than ks loads bro