Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

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Woooooowww.....
As always.....
Very well written update.....
And first fully romantic update.....

Both are expressing there love..... feelings to each other......and the way you describe.......brilliant......
I feel like.a.......like I'm watching a romantic movie......awesome......

Shetan ka character kaafi achcha laga.....pr kahani ke iss mod par wo abhi or Ruhi ke liye.....awesome milestone ka kaam kar sakti hai...

Uske jaiye wo baat kar sakte hai.....mil sakte hai.....even sab logo ke saamne bhi....
OR aaj to Ruhi ne....shetan ke jariye kiss bhi bhijwaya......aweskaj bhijwaya ke liye.....very good....

Mujhe bas aweskaj bhijwaya chij abnormal lag rahi hai....OR wo hai Ruhi ke family ka behaviour.....

Mahesh or uske dada ke saamne.....shetan ne abhi ko kiss kiya.....wo bachchi hai...lekin shweta ne saath hee bata bhi diya ki use aisa karne ko.....Ruhi ne kaha tha.....
Phir bhi Mahesh or baaki normal hee the.....
OR aisa to tab hee ho sakta hai jab kuch kaafi abnormal ho....

Dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai.....
Anyways
Beautiful update
Thanks

bahot bahot shukriya Vikaram bhai.
mujhe bahot khjhushi hui ke ap ko mera likha hua romantic scene acha laga
Mahesh aur dada ji ke saamne to day 1 se ruhi aati rahi hai,
second ya third day se hi Abhi ko aadat ho gayi thi Ruhi ko kitchen ke threshold par khade hue dekhna issi liye wo jagah normal place ta ruhi ko rehne ki, yaad hai usski maa bhi first day ko wahin khadi hokar ruhi ko bula rahi thi, to ek aisi jagah hai jahan se almost normally har roz maa beti khade hokar baahar dekhte the,
bus nahin tha tab bhi wo ek watching point tha un logon ke liye.
Aur teesre din se jab abhi kaam se wapas jaane laga aur Ruhi ko wave kiya tha to dada ji, ruhi ka bada bhai manoj sab ne dekha tha kyunke Abhi ne Ruhi ki maa ko bye aunty kaha tha, to wo bilkool normal liya tha sab ne sab hansse the... iss liye usske baad sab samajh gaye the ke abhi bye karta hai wapas jaane se pehle iss liye koyi ziada dhyaan nahin deta tha.....
haan jab Shweta ne kaha ke ruhi ne kaha hai Abhi ko kissy dene ke liye, to sab ne suna, to uss baat ko aisa liya gaya ke ek chhoti bachi hai to kissy karne ko keh diya Ruhi ne, bus normal liya gaya baat ko, uss aangan mein sab kuch itna familar tha ke sab normal dikhta tha. ek jawan ladka aur ek jawan ladki ek dusre se baat karte hein to lagta tha donon ek dusre ko passand karte hein kyunke donon ki jodi bahot achi dikhte the....

 

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Amazing update casi bhai,
behad hi shandaar, aur lajawab update hai bhai,
gusse ke baad abhi par to sweet disses ki baarish ho gayi hai,
pahle use ruhi ne hug kiya aur phir ab kiss kar rahi hai,
casi bhai aap to har update ke last mein ruhi ke liye ek doubt daal dete ho,
ab ye ruhi ko itni achchhi tarah se kiss karna kaise aata hai,
dekhte hain ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

Bahot shukriya Aman bhai.
haan doubt to dal deta hoon
buss yun samajhiye ke aap Abhi ho, to aap ko kia pata hota ke Ruhi ko kiss karna ata hai?
nahin nah? to weise hi Abhi ke nazar se yeh kahani chal rahi hai ab tak. jitna abhi ko pata hai utna hi humko bhi pata chalega, aur abhi ke zarye hi humko iss se ziada pata chalega bhai
thanks very much bhai appreciate karne ke liye.

 

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Fantastic update sir

thanks very much Sona dear

 

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very nice update abhi ki to balle balle ho gayi ruhi bahon me aa gayi sab theek ho raha hai.bus banane me ab kafi progress honi chahiye waise 45 din bache hain abhi.ab bus ke andar bahar ka kaam hona baki hai.mujhe yakin hai ki bus badhiya ban jayegi magar simple si hogi kyunki jitne paise mil rahe usme ac wagira ka kaam nahi ho payega

bahot shukriya Rahul yara

 

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Woooooowww
Vey brilliant.....very brilliant...
Another Fantastic and fabulous update.....

Mostly last part.......
Kyoki pichle kaafi time se only pyar pyar or romance hee dikhaya jaa raha tha to.....
Ye kuch naya tha.....OR STORY ko phir se refreshment ke liye best tha.....OR wese bhi takrar se pyar badhta hai.....(aisa mai nahi hindi films kahti hai)...

Ha bhale hee Ruhi ne ye baat.....mazaak me kahi ho.....lekin jab situation aisi ho...or phir uss time abhi puri tarah serious tha....
May be wo apne pyar ka izhar karne gaya ho....Ruhi ke pass....kyoki ab tak wo samajh chuka hai ki ghar ke sabhi logo ko....
Na keval ghar ke balki uske bhi sabhi saathiyo ko....bhi pata hai ki uska or Ruhi ka koi scene chal raha hai....except Mehboob.....

Kisi ne abhi tak kuch bhi nahi kaha....na koi objection kiya.....balki mon rah kar....ak tarah se sahamati hee dikhai hai....
OR jab ki Ruhi ki maa ko bhi koi problem nahi hai....

To aise me abhi ko ye time sahi laga.....baat karne ke liye.....kyoki phir 1.5 mahine tak Mahesh bhi wanhi par rahega....OR ho sakta hai tab tak bas bhi complete ho jaye.....

To jab aisi situation ho.....tab mazak bhi achcha nahi lagta....aisa lagta hai jaise saamne waale ko hamaari feelings ki koi kadar hee nahi hai.....
OR phir uski baat ko ham seriously lekar gusse ho jaate hai......
Kuch had tak ye sahi bhi hota hai....

Khair kaha Ruhi use mana rahi thi....OR kaha ab use manana padega....shayad Abhi thoda khud par bhi gussa ho gaya hai.....


Farjina ki entry achchi thi.....

Ha ak baat samajh me nahi aayi.....jab Abhi or Ruhi Manoj ke saamne......ak dusre ko ishare.....batchit karte hai....OR Ruhi ne Shweta ke saath abhi ke liye kiss bhi bhijwaayi wo bhi uske saamne.....
OR ho sakta hai ki kai bar hua ho...itne dino me.....

Phir jab Abhi Mehboob se nahi dar raha.....jaisa ki usne Ruhi ke ...mahboob ke liye bataane par.....use samjha ya......

To phir wo us se kyo dar raha hai.....ha ye sahi hai ki uske bhai se saamne us se romance karna thoda awkward hoga par....jab itna sab chal hee raha hai to ab kya hai.....


Anyways
Dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai...
Thanks....

tehe dil se shukriya Vikram bhai iss wonderful review ke liye
aap ne sab kuch bilkool sahi samjha aur pehchana hai bhai#
jo aap nahin samjhe ho wo abhi nahin bolunga, wo sab dhire dhire aap ko pata chal jaega incoming updates ke zarye.
thanks very much Vikram bhai aise hi saath dete rehye mera boos up hota hai aap sabhon ke review se dost.

 

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Woooooowww
Behatreen update.....

Saeed ke andar frustration hai.....kisi baat ko lekar....OR wo chij paisa nahi hai....

Tony ke role as a friend day by day achcha hota jaa raha hai.....
Update ki starting me abhi ka behaviour kaafi strange tha.....matlab itna short tempered......kaafi weird tha.....
Yanha tak ki gusse mai usne Ruhi ke marne ki baat bhi kah di.....ye kuch bilkul nahi tha.....

Ab iss situation ko dekh kar kah sakte hai.....KI abhi ka pyar pyar nahi....attraction hai.....bhale gee wo isme kitni hee buri tarah se dooba hua ho....lekin that is not love.....

Ak real pyar karne wala.....chahe wo ladka ho ya ladki....ye sapne me bhi nahi soch sakta ki saamne waale ko jra se chot bhi lage.....
Phir uske marne ki baat.....kahna to bahut door ki baar hai....
Ab aisa lag raha hai....KI abhi bas pahle waali Ruhi ki kami ko pura kar raha hai....na ki wo iss Ruhi ko pyar kar raha hai.....
Agar ye Ruhi pahle waali Ruhi hoti to......shaayad wo ye nahi kahta.....
OR is se pata chalta hai ki wo iske saath isliye hai ki iska naam Ruhi hai or ye sundar hai...na ki isliye ki wo us se sach me pyar karta hai.....wo bas pahli waali ki kami puri kar raha hai.....
OR last me aapne....jo ye update jis jagah par roka hai....us se bhi mujhe kuch aisa hee feel ho raha hai.....

Abhi ne kaafi mahanat ki he....ye baat mahboob bhi jaanta hai.....OR usne khud Ruhi ki maa ko bulaya or abhi ko uske saath Ruhi ke pass bheja....
Saath hee abhi ko kuch der Ruhi ke saath rakhne ko bhi kaha.....
Is se pata chalta hai ki use koi aitraz nahi hai...is rishte se.....

Ak kaha water hai....AADMI KHUD BHALE HEE KUCH NA BOLE....PAR USKA KAAM BAHUT KUCH BOLTA HAI.....
Mahboob ko bhi shaayad abhi ka kaam or lagan hee pasand aayi hai....

But the best part of the update......
Ruhi or abhi ka Milan.....
Fantastic and mind blowing.....abhi ke liye to ye ak nuclear bomb jaisa hai....
Dimaag ak dum blank....ho gaya....

Bhale hee I love na bola ho lekin itna sab karke ruhi ne to apna pyar express kar hee diya....abhi ke prati.....OR wo baat alag hai ki baad me kuch ho lekin abhi to wo uske liye puri tarah samarpit hai....

OR JIS tarah se wo bar bar maafi maang rahi thi jabki uski koi khas galatians bhi nahi thi....ye uske love ko show karne ke liye kaafi hai.....

Anyways
Dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai....
Thanks

thanks again vikram bhai
abhi ka pyar gehra pyar hi hai bhai,
ussne jo kuch kaha wo gusse mein kaha he did not mean any bad for ruhi.
buss munh se nikal gaya , ghusse mein insaan paagal ho jata hai nah aur khud ussko pata nahin chalta ke kia keh raha hai issi tarah se ussne bol diya ke ab kahan hai mar gayi kia? Jaise ek maa kabhi apne bache ko dhunte hue kehti hai kahan mar gaya tu?
haan garam khoon hai, young hai aap jaante hi honge ek jawan garam khoon ki rawani, to eise kayi naujawaan hote hein jo josh mein ajaate hein aur ghusse par kaabu nahin kar paate....aisa tha Abhi uss waqt saeed ke prati bhi.... baad mein Abhi apne gusse ko control karna seekh jaega kyunke ek din aap padhoge ke ussne khud kaise khud se kaha ke usska ghussa ussko nuksaan pahucha raha hai..... bhai ab aane wale updates k baare mein to abhi nahin likhun to behtar hoga.... bahot saare aise sawaal honge abhi jisske jawaab kahani mein aage chal kar pata chalega bhai...
Ruhi maafi maang rahi thi kyunke ussko pata tha ke Abhi HURT hua hai usski kal wali baat se....
Sach mein ABHI bahut hi gehre tarike se hurt hua tha uss baat se....
aap ne kaha ke usski subha wali behaviour samajh mein nahin aayi - bhai usske dil ko thess pahunchi thi Ruhi dwara ruhi ne kaha ke bala tal jaegi agar ussne wahan ana band kar diya to... issi liye abhi sochne laga ke hamesha ke liye wahan jaana chorr dein to ruhi ko sukoon milegi.... Ruhi ki baat usske dil main baith gaya tha, ussne uss baat ko dil se lagaa liya tha, hurt tha issi liye ussne uss waqt weisa socha tha...
bhai thanks very very much for such detailed review, I love it.

 

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Ruhi's words make Abhi sad, but when Tony tells that Ruhi is upset for Abhi, our hero becomes happy again. Abhi's nature shows how much he likes Ruhi. The matter worsened when Saeed and Abhi got into an argument. Roohi realizes his mistake and Abhi wanted the same. But forgetting all those things which happened, today I loved Ruhi and abhi's kiss scene. Ruhi knows how to kiss, does it mean she had a boyfriend earlier. I worry nothing bad happens for our innocent hero.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...

thanks very very much for the lovely appreciation Aakash bro

 

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to baat dheere dheere aage baddh rahi h
superb update

bahot bahot shukriya James yara

 

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waiting new update

will post in a while

 

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Jabardast update bhai. Dil ko chuh dene wala update. Mere to aankhen nam ho gaye Ruhi ko uss tarah se maafi maangte hue dekh kar. Kitna pyar karti hai wo Abhi se magar kyun itni doorie rakhti thi, kyun itna tadpati thi Abhi ko shuru mein?
Kia baat hai ji Ruhi bata nahin sakti Abhi ko?
Bhai jiss tarah se aap ne Abhi aur Ruhi ko milaya nah wo kamaal ka tha. Bilkool nahin socha tha k ek aur ladaayi hogi aur iss baar saeed k saath. Sala jaise loha lohe ko kaatta hai waise hi ladaayi ladaayi ko end karta hai
Bahut badhya, intense aur romantic update bhai. Behtareen likha gaya hai. Hats off.

bahot bahot shukriya Indian bhai