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Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

king cobra

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Update 13 The Work Accelerated

Do hafte baad bus ki base ki frame work ho gaya aur Manoj ne photo liya to aisa tha:

chasis-frame.jpg


Ab iss frame se lekar upar tak baaki ke lohe ko weld karna tha bus ki complete frame banana ke liye…..

Ek mahine tak kuch aisa hi chala Abhi aur Ruhi ke beech. Abhi Ruhi ko paagalon ki had tak pyar karne laga tha. Usske bina jina naamumkin ho gaya tha Abhi ke liye ab. Subha shaam, raat din Abhi ke khayaalon mein ab sirf Ruhi rehti thi. Jaise Ruhi Abhi ki saans lene ki zarya thi, Abhi ki oxygen thi wo. Ghar mein apni behen se sirf Ruhi ki baatein karta, diary mein 100 pages likh chuka tha “The Days I Spent At Ruhi’s Place” wale diary mein. Aur Naina, Abhi ki chhoti behen sab padhti thi uss diary mein. Jitna kuch guzra tha Ruhi ke saath uss ek mahine mein sab likha hua tha uss diary mein, aur Naina ko sab pata tha.

Naina ne Abhi se Ruhi ki ek photo laane ke liye kaha. Abhi khud kayi dinon se Ruhi se usski ek photo mang raha tha magar Ruhi dene se inkaar kar rahi thi. Aaj ke zamaane mein yeh sab hua hota to seikhron pics le liya hota Abhi ne Ruhi ki hai nah dosto?

Iss ek mahine mein Abhi kuch aur bhi close ho gaya tha Ruhi se. Aksar usski maa saath hoti jab Abhi Ruhi se baat karta. Wo shayad iss liye usski maa weisa karti thi, taake Mehboob ko kehne ka mauka nah mile ke Abhi aur Ruhi akele mein baatein kar rahe the. Aisa Abhi soch raha tha. Magar kabhi kabhi Abhi akele bhi baat karta tha Ruhi se chhup chhupa kar. Kabhi Ruhi normal rehti, Abhi ki har baat ko maanti, shaam ko present rehti Abhi ke jaane ke waqt to kabhi bilkool nahin aati jaise jaan bujh kar Abhi ko tarpaane ke liye. Kissi din Abhi behad khush dikhta to kissi din udaas kaam karta kyun ke Ruhi saamne nahin aati.

Har Saturdays ko kaam 2 se 2.30 ko end hote aur sabhi Saturdays ko Ruhi apni course ke liye jaati aur Abhi ussko bus ke jagah se main road tak ya kabhi bus stop tak chorrne jaata aur usski maa donon ko dekh kar hanssti. Magar jiss Saturday ko Mehboob hota aangan mein tab to Abhi nahin jaa paata Ruhi ke saath, magar ek trick karta abhi, cigarrte kharidne ke bahane jaldi se jata Ruhi se bus stop par milne aur baat karne.

Har Saturdays ko Ruhi ek alag dress pehenti jiss mein wo behad khubsurat dikhti aur Abhi machal jata, aur bhi paagal hota usski khubsurti ko dekh kar. Hona bhi tha har roz Ruhi ghar par apne gharelu kapdon mein Abhi ke samne hoti thi, to jab saj sanwar kar acchhi kapdon mein nikalti to 100 gunah ziada khubsurat to lagni hi thi….

Abhi ko apne dil ki baat kehne ko mann kiya Ruhi se… thoda ghabra bhi raha tha Abhi ke sahi waqt hai kahein ya nahin, ya thode din aur wait karen…. Phir khud se kehta ke nahin aur kuch din intezaar karte hein….. kaam jaldi aage badh raha tha aur ab lagne laga tha ke 4 mahine se pehle hi kaam pura ho jaega, iss liye Abhi ko ab jaldi tha Ruhi se baat karne ke liye….

Uss aagan mein takriban sab ko pata lag chuka tha ke Abhi aur Ruhi ke bich kuch chal raha hai…. Saeed team ke charon ko pata chal gaya tha ke Abhi Ruhi se behad pyar karta hai. Saeed ko bhi pata tha aur Mehboob ko bhi pata tha magar wo anjaan banne ka naatak karta tha. Usski biwi Rahima ko pura yakeen tha ke Abhi Ruhi se pyar karta hai kyunke ussne kayi baar Abhi ko Ruhi se isharon mein baat karte hue dekh liya tha washroom se, aur Rahima ne Ruhi ko isharon se jawaab dete hue bhi dekha tha.

Ab itna pata nahin chala tha ke kia Rahima ne wo sab Mehboob ko bataya tha ya nahin isske baare mein waqt aane par pata chalega.

Shweta weekends mein aati thi aur kabhi 3 ya 4 din baad jaati thi. Mehboob ki beti jo Primary school jaati thi, wo bhi Abhi se hamesha baatein karti thi, chhoti thi, aur jiss din Shweta aur Farzina(Mehboob ki beti) saath khelte to kaafi shor hote the aangan mein…. Donn ladkiyan khelte waqt kayi baar Abhi ke paas aate uss se baatein karte, ussko cherrte, chhute etc…. Aur Ruhi kadhi donon ko dekhti. Kabhi kabhi to koyi baat kehna hota to Ruhi Farzina ko kehti jaakar Abhi se kehne ke liye.

Phir aaye school ki chhutiyon ke din. Der mahina school, college sab bandh, aur saare bache at home. Ruhi ka bhai Mahesh bhi ab har roz at home. Abhi ko ab fikar hone laga ke ussko kitne ache mauke mile the Ruhi se apne dil ki baat kehne ko magar ussne nahin kaha aur ab der mahina aur wait karna padega, aur bus ke upar wale frames bhi weld ho chuke the aur ab bus aisa dikhne laga tha takriban:


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Ye photo ek example hai aur yeh ek garage ke andar hai, magar wahan Abhi wala chasis par tha aur aangan mein tha peyr ke niche tha.
Abhi aise hi weld karta tha, aur itna ooncha bus ki body ban gaye the ek mahine mein, sab ho gaya tha….

Aur Abhi ko ab lagne laga ke agle der mahinon mein bus ko complete kar diya jaega. To ussko bada fikar hua ke ab der mahina bacha hai usske paas Ruhi se apne dil ki baat kehne ke liye, ya ussko propose karne ke liye… agar der mahine mein kaam end hua to matlab schools resume hone tak bus road par chalne lagega. Abhi ko ab waqt kum dikhne laga…. Ussko fikar hua aur socha ab to Ruhi se kehna padega sab kuch….. magar ussko pata nahin kyun darr sa lag raha tha, ussko darr tha ke Ruhi naah nah karde. Aur yeh bhi soch raha tha Abhi ke yeh bhi ho sakta hai ke Ruhi intezaar kar rahi ho ke kab Abhi ussko propose karega. Abhi ki saansein phul rahe the yeh sab sochte hue. Ussko himmat nahin ho rahi thi Ruhi se yeh kehne ke liye ke wo uss se pyar karta hai.

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Sab mamool par chal rahe the aur ek din kaam karte waqt har roz ki tarah Abhi ne Ruhi ko kapde dhote hue dekha. Takriban har subha ke 10 baje Ruhi uss pathar par kapde dhote hue nazar aati hi thi aur Abhi uss se isharon mein baat karta tha aur Ruhi bhi thodi chanchal adaa se Abhi ko dekhti aur baat karti. Kabhi kabhi usski maa bhi karib hoti thi Ruhi ke aur wo bhi dekhti un donon ko ishaare se baat karrte hue aur wo buss hanssti aur Ruhi se puchti ke kia keh raha hai Abhi. Abhi ko achchi tarah se pata tha ke Ruhi ki maa ko sab pata hai aur wo encourage karti thi jaise apni beti ko Abhi se weise baat karne ko. Ussko koyi problem nahin thi ke usski beti Abhi ke close jaaye, baat kare ya kuch bhi.

Phir kuch der baad Ruhi dhoe hue kapdon ko sukhne ke liye daal rahi thi taar par aur usski maa andar chali gayi thi to Abhi ka mann kiya ke wo Ruhi se jaakar baat kare…. Aur gaya bhi.

Mehboob bus ke paas hi tha, baaki sab log the. Jab Abhi Ruhi ke paas gaya to Mehboob dekh raha tha. Abhi ne Ruhi ke paas hote hue kaha,

“Ek baat kehni hai tumse Ruhi.”

Ruhi ne bus ke taraf dekhte hue kaha,

“Aap kyun Mehboob chacha ke presence mein yahan aaye ho? mujhko problems hogi jaao nah please!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Ari mere khayal se to ab sabko pata hai hamaare baare mein nah? Aur tumhari mummy bhi yahin hai nah?”

Ruhi muskuraayi aur kaha,

“kia pata hai sabko hamaare baare mein?”

Abhi: “yeh bhi kehna padega Ruhi?!”

Ruhi: “haan kehna to padega hi nah?

Abhi: “main ne kaha tha nah ke ishara kaafi hota hai to ek mahina ho gaya aur tumko pata nahin kia ab tak?”

Ruhi ne bus ke taraf dekha kapde taar par taangte hue aur weise hi muskuraate hue kaha,

“Ek mahine mein kia hota hai ek saal bhi aisa hi chal sakta hai kyun? Aap ko nahin passand jaisa chal raha hai”

Abhi: “phir usske baad kia hoga?”

Ruhi: “kuch bhi nahin kyun kia hona chahiye?”

Abhi: “Ruhi shaayad der mahinon mein bus complete ho jaega, kaam khatam ho jaega, yahan se main chala jaunga!”

Ruhi ne kuch aisa jawaab diya jiss se Abhi ke dil ko choat pahuncha.

Ruhi ne hansste hue kaha,

“Oh! chale jaoge aap? Uff matlab bala tal jaegi phir”

Ye jawaab sunkar Abhi ka dil baith gaya aur usske paas koyi bhi jawaab nahin tha Ruhi ko dene ke liye. Thoda ghussa bhi aya aur turant wahan se laut gaya bus ke paas.

Ab pata nahin Ruhi ne mazaak kiya tha ya serious thi. Ussne muskuraate, hansste hue kaha tha wo baat, shaayad Ruhi ne hi nahin socha tha ke Abhi wahan se laut jaega. Aur Shayad Abhi ko bina kuch bole wapas lautte hue dekh kar Ruhi ko apni ghalati ka ehsaas hua ke ussne kuch ghalat keh diya aur usski muskurahat udaas chehre mein badal gayi jiss waqt Abhi ke kadam wahan se bus ke taraf badhne lage the.

Abhi bus ki frame ke andar kaam kar raha tha to andar chala gaya, chehra utra hua tha to Mehboob ne pucha,

“kia hua Abhi? Chehra kyun achanak utra hua hai kissi ne kuch kaha kia tujhe?!”

Abhi ne nah kaha aur apne kaam karne laga to Mehboob ne mudhkar Ruhi ko dekha, to iss liye ke Abhi ko pata tha ke wo Ruhi ko dekh raha hoga kyun ke ussne donon ko baat karte hue dekha tha to Abhi ne bhi Ruhi ko dekha aur paaya ke Ruhi ka bhi chehra utra hua tha aur bahot hi sad face se Abhi ke taraf dekh rahi thi kapde tangte hue.

Abhi kaam karte hue badbadaata gaya ghusse mein,

“Main bala hoon? Bala tal jaegi mere chale jaane se? To kyun mere saath hanss hanss kar baat karti hai? Kyun mera intezar karti hi, kyun mujhse baat karti hai?! Achah matlab ussko Khushi hogi mere chale jaane se yeh baat hai!!”

Tony ne pucha,

“are kia ho gaya? Kaun khush hoga tere jaane se?”

Abhi ne Tony se kaha,

“Mere jaane se bala tal jaegi yaar main yahan ziada hoon, kissi ko Khushi hogi jab mera yahan aana band ho jaega!”

Tony ne pucha,

“What? Kia Ruhi ne tujhe aisa kaha kia?!”

Abhi ne Ruhi ke taraf dekhte hue haan kaha Tony ko. To Tony ne bhi Ruhi ke taraf dekha aur kaha,

“are dil pe mat le yaar ussne zaroor mazaak kiya hoga tere se!”

Abhi: “mazaak mein bhi koyi aisa kehta hai kia Tony? Mere dil ke andar ghussi wo baat, bahot takliff hua mujhe usski yeh baat sunkar. Laga ke ek khajar bhonk diye seene mein mere”

Tony ne kaha:

“are bhai dekh wo kitni udaas dikh rahi hai, usska chehra to dekh….”

Abhi ne Ruhi ke taraf dekha, usski aankhon mein dekha ke sach mein bahot udaasi thi, jaise Abhi se sorry keh rahe the usski nazrein,

Tony ne kaha,

“Sun mujhe exactly bata kia hua baat kaise shuru hui aur end kaise hui tab main tujhe bataunga ke ussne mazaak kiya ke nahin bata mujhe!”

Jab Abhi ne puri wakiya sunaya Tony ko to Tony ne kaha,

“Are paagal wo 100% mazaak kar rahi thi, aur tumne ussko koyi jawaab bhi nahin diya bina kuch kahe laut aaye to issi liye wo itni udaas hai dekh to, lagta hai rone wali hai… kia yaar jhagra bhi shuru ho gaye tum donon ke?!”

Abhi ne phir Ruhi ke chehre mein dekha to iss baar shaayad Ruhi bhi khafa hui aur andar chali gayi Abhi ko teerchi nazar se dekh kar!”

Lunch time tak Ruhi nahin dikhi, aur nah Abhi ne ussko dhunda. Ab pata nahin ke ghar ke andar se Ruhi Abhi ko kahin se jhank rahi thi ke nahin yeh sirf Ruhi ko pata hai.

Thik lunch lene jaane se pehle bus ke andar se ek baar Abhi ne Ruhi ke uss khidki ke taraf dekha, to Ruhi khidki par apne donon elbow teke hue nazar aaye bus mein dekhte hue. Abhi ne seedha usske chehre mein dekha, Ruhi ne gaalon ko phulaate hue jaise Abhi ko mock kiya, phir turant apne jeeb nikaal kar Abhi ko mock kiya Ruhi ne…. yeh Abhi ko bahot hi achcha laga, aur kayi baar Abhi ko weise mock karti gayi apne jeeb se… lag raha tha jaise wo Abhi ko manaane ki koshish kar rahi thi….

Lunch ke liye Abhi washroom ke taraf gaya aur Ruhi wahin rahi apne khidki par teke hue. Abhi ko pata tha ke Ruhi wahan usska wait karegi kyunke har roz lunch ke baat Abhi wahan uss se baat karne jaata hai. Magar aaj Abhi nahin gaya usske paas! Ruhi wait karti rahi aur ek baar Abhi aur Tony donon nikle, bus ke paas se guzre, Ruhi khush hui ke Abhi usske paas araha hai magar Abhi aur Tony seedhe chale gaye main road ke taraf, Ruhi wait karti rahi magar Abhi nahin aya lunch time ki break khatam hone tak. Jab 12.45 ho gaye Ruhi ne time dekha to ussko pata tha ke ab work resume karega Abhi to uss se baat nahin karega….. ussne Abhi ko main road se wapas aate dekha, Abhi ne usske taraf sirf ek baar dekha, Ruhi wahi rahi apne kamre ke andar se khidki par lean hote hue, aur Abhi bus ke andar chala gaya aur kaam start kar diya, Ruhi dekhti rahi….. ab jitna ghussa Abhi ko aya tha kuch der pehle uss se ziada ghussa Ruhi ko aayi to ussne khidki bandh kar liya, parde khinch liye, wahan se lounge mein aayi aur saare parde khinch diye aur sone chali gayi….. Abhi ne sab dekha aur chup chap kaam karta gaya kyunke ussko pata tha ke ab Ruhi sone chali gayi hai….

Magar shaam ko kaam khatam karne ke baad jab Abhi washroom gaya to Ruhi nahin dikhi, ghar wapas jaane bhi laga to Ruhi saamne nahin aayi, Abhi wait karta raha magar Ruhi nahin nikli stairs par aur Abhi ko bina Ruhi ko dekhe wapas jaana pada. Ussko ek bhaaripan mehsoos hone laga tha, saans lene mein takliff hone lagi thi, ussne socha lunch time mein ussko Ruhi se baat karne jana chahiye tha tab sab clear kar leta usske saath… Abhi ne kaha ke Ruhi grudge rakhti hai…..

Abhi uss raat ko der tak beer peeta raha Tony se Ruhi ke baare mein baat karte hue, ghar bilkool nashe mein pahuncha tha uss raat ko.

To be continued…. (2610 words)

Badhya update bidu.
Sala donon mein ladaayi bhi karwa doya aap ne? Are kia bhai. Aisa nahin karana tha nah.
Ego problem lagta hai. Ruhi ki bhi ego hurt hua k Abhi uss se talk karne ko nahin gaya to ussne badla liya usske saamne nahin aayi.
Donon taraf se ek cold war chedh gayi hai. Kal kia hoga ab?
Hope sab thik ho jaega.
Mast update hai bidu :thumbup:
 

Aakash.

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It is said that love does not hide from hiding, Eventually everyone comes to know about Abhi and Ruhi's love. By now everything was going well, the story took a turn again. Roohi's answer hurts Abhi's heart a lot, as he loves Roohi very much and I think Roohi must have joked that maybe this is true. After reading today's update, I do not understand what to say. I have a wish that I want to know Ruhi's mind.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...:heart::heart::heart:
 

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Update 13 The Work Accelerated

Do hafte baad bus ki base ki frame work ho gaya aur Manoj ne photo liya to aisa tha:

chasis-frame.jpg


Ab iss frame se lekar upar tak baaki ke lohe ko weld karna tha bus ki complete frame banana ke liye…..

Ek mahine tak kuch aisa hi chala Abhi aur Ruhi ke beech. Abhi Ruhi ko paagalon ki had tak pyar karne laga tha. Usske bina jina naamumkin ho gaya tha Abhi ke liye ab. Subha shaam, raat din Abhi ke khayaalon mein ab sirf Ruhi rehti thi. Jaise Ruhi Abhi ki saans lene ki zarya thi, Abhi ki oxygen thi wo. Ghar mein apni behen se sirf Ruhi ki baatein karta, diary mein 100 pages likh chuka tha “The Days I Spent At Ruhi’s Place” wale diary mein. Aur Naina, Abhi ki chhoti behen sab padhti thi uss diary mein. Jitna kuch guzra tha Ruhi ke saath uss ek mahine mein sab likha hua tha uss diary mein, aur Naina ko sab pata tha.

Naina ne Abhi se Ruhi ki ek photo laane ke liye kaha. Abhi khud kayi dinon se Ruhi se usski ek photo mang raha tha magar Ruhi dene se inkaar kar rahi thi. Aaj ke zamaane mein yeh sab hua hota to seikhron pics le liya hota Abhi ne Ruhi ki hai nah dosto?

Iss ek mahine mein Abhi kuch aur bhi close ho gaya tha Ruhi se. Aksar usski maa saath hoti jab Abhi Ruhi se baat karta. Wo shayad iss liye usski maa weisa karti thi, taake Mehboob ko kehne ka mauka nah mile ke Abhi aur Ruhi akele mein baatein kar rahe the. Aisa Abhi soch raha tha. Magar kabhi kabhi Abhi akele bhi baat karta tha Ruhi se chhup chhupa kar. Kabhi Ruhi normal rehti, Abhi ki har baat ko maanti, shaam ko present rehti Abhi ke jaane ke waqt to kabhi bilkool nahin aati jaise jaan bujh kar Abhi ko tarpaane ke liye. Kissi din Abhi behad khush dikhta to kissi din udaas kaam karta kyun ke Ruhi saamne nahin aati.

Har Saturdays ko kaam 2 se 2.30 ko end hote aur sabhi Saturdays ko Ruhi apni course ke liye jaati aur Abhi ussko bus ke jagah se main road tak ya kabhi bus stop tak chorrne jaata aur usski maa donon ko dekh kar hanssti. Magar jiss Saturday ko Mehboob hota aangan mein tab to Abhi nahin jaa paata Ruhi ke saath, magar ek trick karta abhi, cigarrte kharidne ke bahane jaldi se jata Ruhi se bus stop par milne aur baat karne.

Har Saturdays ko Ruhi ek alag dress pehenti jiss mein wo behad khubsurat dikhti aur Abhi machal jata, aur bhi paagal hota usski khubsurti ko dekh kar. Hona bhi tha har roz Ruhi ghar par apne gharelu kapdon mein Abhi ke samne hoti thi, to jab saj sanwar kar acchhi kapdon mein nikalti to 100 gunah ziada khubsurat to lagni hi thi….

Abhi ko apne dil ki baat kehne ko mann kiya Ruhi se… thoda ghabra bhi raha tha Abhi ke sahi waqt hai kahein ya nahin, ya thode din aur wait karen…. Phir khud se kehta ke nahin aur kuch din intezaar karte hein….. kaam jaldi aage badh raha tha aur ab lagne laga tha ke 4 mahine se pehle hi kaam pura ho jaega, iss liye Abhi ko ab jaldi tha Ruhi se baat karne ke liye….

Uss aagan mein takriban sab ko pata lag chuka tha ke Abhi aur Ruhi ke bich kuch chal raha hai…. Saeed team ke charon ko pata chal gaya tha ke Abhi Ruhi se behad pyar karta hai. Saeed ko bhi pata tha aur Mehboob ko bhi pata tha magar wo anjaan banne ka naatak karta tha. Usski biwi Rahima ko pura yakeen tha ke Abhi Ruhi se pyar karta hai kyunke ussne kayi baar Abhi ko Ruhi se isharon mein baat karte hue dekh liya tha washroom se, aur Rahima ne Ruhi ko isharon se jawaab dete hue bhi dekha tha.

Ab itna pata nahin chala tha ke kia Rahima ne wo sab Mehboob ko bataya tha ya nahin isske baare mein waqt aane par pata chalega.

Shweta weekends mein aati thi aur kabhi 3 ya 4 din baad jaati thi. Mehboob ki beti jo Primary school jaati thi, wo bhi Abhi se hamesha baatein karti thi, chhoti thi, aur jiss din Shweta aur Farzina(Mehboob ki beti) saath khelte to kaafi shor hote the aangan mein…. Donn ladkiyan khelte waqt kayi baar Abhi ke paas aate uss se baatein karte, ussko cherrte, chhute etc…. Aur Ruhi kadhi donon ko dekhti. Kabhi kabhi to koyi baat kehna hota to Ruhi Farzina ko kehti jaakar Abhi se kehne ke liye.

Phir aaye school ki chhutiyon ke din. Der mahina school, college sab bandh, aur saare bache at home. Ruhi ka bhai Mahesh bhi ab har roz at home. Abhi ko ab fikar hone laga ke ussko kitne ache mauke mile the Ruhi se apne dil ki baat kehne ko magar ussne nahin kaha aur ab der mahina aur wait karna padega, aur bus ke upar wale frames bhi weld ho chuke the aur ab bus aisa dikhne laga tha takriban:


bus-frame-manufacture-2.jpg


Ye photo ek example hai aur yeh ek garage ke andar hai, magar wahan Abhi wala chasis par tha aur aangan mein tha peyr ke niche tha.
Abhi aise hi weld karta tha, aur itna ooncha bus ki body ban gaye the ek mahine mein, sab ho gaya tha….

Aur Abhi ko ab lagne laga ke agle der mahinon mein bus ko complete kar diya jaega. To ussko bada fikar hua ke ab der mahina bacha hai usske paas Ruhi se apne dil ki baat kehne ke liye, ya ussko propose karne ke liye… agar der mahine mein kaam end hua to matlab schools resume hone tak bus road par chalne lagega. Abhi ko ab waqt kum dikhne laga…. Ussko fikar hua aur socha ab to Ruhi se kehna padega sab kuch….. magar ussko pata nahin kyun darr sa lag raha tha, ussko darr tha ke Ruhi naah nah karde. Aur yeh bhi soch raha tha Abhi ke yeh bhi ho sakta hai ke Ruhi intezaar kar rahi ho ke kab Abhi ussko propose karega. Abhi ki saansein phul rahe the yeh sab sochte hue. Ussko himmat nahin ho rahi thi Ruhi se yeh kehne ke liye ke wo uss se pyar karta hai.

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Sab mamool par chal rahe the aur ek din kaam karte waqt har roz ki tarah Abhi ne Ruhi ko kapde dhote hue dekha. Takriban har subha ke 10 baje Ruhi uss pathar par kapde dhote hue nazar aati hi thi aur Abhi uss se isharon mein baat karta tha aur Ruhi bhi thodi chanchal adaa se Abhi ko dekhti aur baat karti. Kabhi kabhi usski maa bhi karib hoti thi Ruhi ke aur wo bhi dekhti un donon ko ishaare se baat karrte hue aur wo buss hanssti aur Ruhi se puchti ke kia keh raha hai Abhi. Abhi ko achchi tarah se pata tha ke Ruhi ki maa ko sab pata hai aur wo encourage karti thi jaise apni beti ko Abhi se weise baat karne ko. Ussko koyi problem nahin thi ke usski beti Abhi ke close jaaye, baat kare ya kuch bhi.

Phir kuch der baad Ruhi dhoe hue kapdon ko sukhne ke liye daal rahi thi taar par aur usski maa andar chali gayi thi to Abhi ka mann kiya ke wo Ruhi se jaakar baat kare…. Aur gaya bhi.

Mehboob bus ke paas hi tha, baaki sab log the. Jab Abhi Ruhi ke paas gaya to Mehboob dekh raha tha. Abhi ne Ruhi ke paas hote hue kaha,

“Ek baat kehni hai tumse Ruhi.”

Ruhi ne bus ke taraf dekhte hue kaha,

“Aap kyun Mehboob chacha ke presence mein yahan aaye ho? mujhko problems hogi jaao nah please!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Ari mere khayal se to ab sabko pata hai hamaare baare mein nah? Aur tumhari mummy bhi yahin hai nah?”

Ruhi muskuraayi aur kaha,

“kia pata hai sabko hamaare baare mein?”

Abhi: “yeh bhi kehna padega Ruhi?!”

Ruhi: “haan kehna to padega hi nah?

Abhi: “main ne kaha tha nah ke ishara kaafi hota hai to ek mahina ho gaya aur tumko pata nahin kia ab tak?”

Ruhi ne bus ke taraf dekha kapde taar par taangte hue aur weise hi muskuraate hue kaha,

“Ek mahine mein kia hota hai ek saal bhi aisa hi chal sakta hai kyun? Aap ko nahin passand jaisa chal raha hai”

Abhi: “phir usske baad kia hoga?”

Ruhi: “kuch bhi nahin kyun kia hona chahiye?”

Abhi: “Ruhi shaayad der mahinon mein bus complete ho jaega, kaam khatam ho jaega, yahan se main chala jaunga!”

Ruhi ne kuch aisa jawaab diya jiss se Abhi ke dil ko choat pahuncha.

Ruhi ne hansste hue kaha,

“Oh! chale jaoge aap? Uff matlab bala tal jaegi phir”

Ye jawaab sunkar Abhi ka dil baith gaya aur usske paas koyi bhi jawaab nahin tha Ruhi ko dene ke liye. Thoda ghussa bhi aya aur turant wahan se laut gaya bus ke paas.

Ab pata nahin Ruhi ne mazaak kiya tha ya serious thi. Ussne muskuraate, hansste hue kaha tha wo baat, shaayad Ruhi ne hi nahin socha tha ke Abhi wahan se laut jaega. Aur Shayad Abhi ko bina kuch bole wapas lautte hue dekh kar Ruhi ko apni ghalati ka ehsaas hua ke ussne kuch ghalat keh diya aur usski muskurahat udaas chehre mein badal gayi jiss waqt Abhi ke kadam wahan se bus ke taraf badhne lage the.

Abhi bus ki frame ke andar kaam kar raha tha to andar chala gaya, chehra utra hua tha to Mehboob ne pucha,

“kia hua Abhi? Chehra kyun achanak utra hua hai kissi ne kuch kaha kia tujhe?!”

Abhi ne nah kaha aur apne kaam karne laga to Mehboob ne mudhkar Ruhi ko dekha, to iss liye ke Abhi ko pata tha ke wo Ruhi ko dekh raha hoga kyun ke ussne donon ko baat karte hue dekha tha to Abhi ne bhi Ruhi ko dekha aur paaya ke Ruhi ka bhi chehra utra hua tha aur bahot hi sad face se Abhi ke taraf dekh rahi thi kapde tangte hue.

Abhi kaam karte hue badbadaata gaya ghusse mein,

“Main bala hoon? Bala tal jaegi mere chale jaane se? To kyun mere saath hanss hanss kar baat karti hai? Kyun mera intezar karti hi, kyun mujhse baat karti hai?! Achah matlab ussko Khushi hogi mere chale jaane se yeh baat hai!!”

Tony ne pucha,

“are kia ho gaya? Kaun khush hoga tere jaane se?”

Abhi ne Tony se kaha,

“Mere jaane se bala tal jaegi yaar main yahan ziada hoon, kissi ko Khushi hogi jab mera yahan aana band ho jaega!”

Tony ne pucha,

“What? Kia Ruhi ne tujhe aisa kaha kia?!”

Abhi ne Ruhi ke taraf dekhte hue haan kaha Tony ko. To Tony ne bhi Ruhi ke taraf dekha aur kaha,

“are dil pe mat le yaar ussne zaroor mazaak kiya hoga tere se!”

Abhi: “mazaak mein bhi koyi aisa kehta hai kia Tony? Mere dil ke andar ghussi wo baat, bahot takliff hua mujhe usski yeh baat sunkar. Laga ke ek khajar bhonk diye seene mein mere”

Tony ne kaha:

“are bhai dekh wo kitni udaas dikh rahi hai, usska chehra to dekh….”

Abhi ne Ruhi ke taraf dekha, usski aankhon mein dekha ke sach mein bahot udaasi thi, jaise Abhi se sorry keh rahe the usski nazrein,

Tony ne kaha,

“Sun mujhe exactly bata kia hua baat kaise shuru hui aur end kaise hui tab main tujhe bataunga ke ussne mazaak kiya ke nahin bata mujhe!”

Jab Abhi ne puri wakiya sunaya Tony ko to Tony ne kaha,

“Are paagal wo 100% mazaak kar rahi thi, aur tumne ussko koyi jawaab bhi nahin diya bina kuch kahe laut aaye to issi liye wo itni udaas hai dekh to, lagta hai rone wali hai… kia yaar jhagra bhi shuru ho gaye tum donon ke?!”

Abhi ne phir Ruhi ke chehre mein dekha to iss baar shaayad Ruhi bhi khafa hui aur andar chali gayi Abhi ko teerchi nazar se dekh kar!”

Lunch time tak Ruhi nahin dikhi, aur nah Abhi ne ussko dhunda. Ab pata nahin ke ghar ke andar se Ruhi Abhi ko kahin se jhank rahi thi ke nahin yeh sirf Ruhi ko pata hai.

Thik lunch lene jaane se pehle bus ke andar se ek baar Abhi ne Ruhi ke uss khidki ke taraf dekha, to Ruhi khidki par apne donon elbow teke hue nazar aaye bus mein dekhte hue. Abhi ne seedha usske chehre mein dekha, Ruhi ne gaalon ko phulaate hue jaise Abhi ko mock kiya, phir turant apne jeeb nikaal kar Abhi ko mock kiya Ruhi ne…. yeh Abhi ko bahot hi achcha laga, aur kayi baar Abhi ko weise mock karti gayi apne jeeb se… lag raha tha jaise wo Abhi ko manaane ki koshish kar rahi thi….

Lunch ke liye Abhi washroom ke taraf gaya aur Ruhi wahin rahi apne khidki par teke hue. Abhi ko pata tha ke Ruhi wahan usska wait karegi kyunke har roz lunch ke baat Abhi wahan uss se baat karne jaata hai. Magar aaj Abhi nahin gaya usske paas! Ruhi wait karti rahi aur ek baar Abhi aur Tony donon nikle, bus ke paas se guzre, Ruhi khush hui ke Abhi usske paas araha hai magar Abhi aur Tony seedhe chale gaye main road ke taraf, Ruhi wait karti rahi magar Abhi nahin aya lunch time ki break khatam hone tak. Jab 12.45 ho gaye Ruhi ne time dekha to ussko pata tha ke ab work resume karega Abhi to uss se baat nahin karega….. ussne Abhi ko main road se wapas aate dekha, Abhi ne usske taraf sirf ek baar dekha, Ruhi wahi rahi apne kamre ke andar se khidki par lean hote hue, aur Abhi bus ke andar chala gaya aur kaam start kar diya, Ruhi dekhti rahi….. ab jitna ghussa Abhi ko aya tha kuch der pehle uss se ziada ghussa Ruhi ko aayi to ussne khidki bandh kar liya, parde khinch liye, wahan se lounge mein aayi aur saare parde khinch diye aur sone chali gayi….. Abhi ne sab dekha aur chup chap kaam karta gaya kyunke ussko pata tha ke ab Ruhi sone chali gayi hai….

Magar shaam ko kaam khatam karne ke baad jab Abhi washroom gaya to Ruhi nahin dikhi, ghar wapas jaane bhi laga to Ruhi saamne nahin aayi, Abhi wait karta raha magar Ruhi nahin nikli stairs par aur Abhi ko bina Ruhi ko dekhe wapas jaana pada. Ussko ek bhaaripan mehsoos hone laga tha, saans lene mein takliff hone lagi thi, ussne socha lunch time mein ussko Ruhi se baat karne jana chahiye tha tab sab clear kar leta usske saath… Abhi ne kaha ke Ruhi grudge rakhti hai…..

Abhi uss raat ko der tak beer peeta raha Tony se Ruhi ke baare mein baat karte hue, ghar bilkool nashe mein pahuncha tha uss raat ko.

To be continued…. (2610 words)

Kia bhai? Abhi pyar parwaan chadha bhi nahin k ladaayi ho gayi? Ye kia ho gaya apne lovers k bich?
Isse misunderstanding kehte hai bhai. Ghalatfaimiyan bahot nuksaande hote hein.
Hamare Abhi aur Ruhi ko milkar ek saath shanti se baat karni chahiye. Magar donon mein se kissi ko to jhukna padega tab nah?
Sab update hai bhai. Casi bhai ghalatfaimiyan door karwado yaar. Mat ladao donon ko yaar. Pyar se rehne do nah bhai.
Sabko pata ho gaya k donon premee hai to mila do nah bhai.
 

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Do hafte baad bus ki base ki frame work ho gaya aur Manoj ne photo liya to aisa tha:

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Ab iss frame se lekar upar tak baaki ke lohe ko weld karna tha bus ki complete frame banana ke liye…..

Ek mahine tak kuch aisa hi chala Abhi aur Ruhi ke beech. Abhi Ruhi ko paagalon ki had tak pyar karne laga tha. Usske bina jina naamumkin ho gaya tha Abhi ke liye ab. Subha shaam, raat din Abhi ke khayaalon mein ab sirf Ruhi rehti thi. Jaise Ruhi Abhi ki saans lene ki zarya thi, Abhi ki oxygen thi wo. Ghar mein apni behen se sirf Ruhi ki baatein karta, diary mein 100 pages likh chuka tha “The Days I Spent At Ruhi’s Place” wale diary mein. Aur Naina, Abhi ki chhoti behen sab padhti thi uss diary mein. Jitna kuch guzra tha Ruhi ke saath uss ek mahine mein sab likha hua tha uss diary mein, aur Naina ko sab pata tha.

Naina ne Abhi se Ruhi ki ek photo laane ke liye kaha. Abhi khud kayi dinon se Ruhi se usski ek photo mang raha tha magar Ruhi dene se inkaar kar rahi thi. Aaj ke zamaane mein yeh sab hua hota to seikhron pics le liya hota Abhi ne Ruhi ki hai nah dosto?

Iss ek mahine mein Abhi kuch aur bhi close ho gaya tha Ruhi se. Aksar usski maa saath hoti jab Abhi Ruhi se baat karta. Wo shayad iss liye usski maa weisa karti thi, taake Mehboob ko kehne ka mauka nah mile ke Abhi aur Ruhi akele mein baatein kar rahe the. Aisa Abhi soch raha tha. Magar kabhi kabhi Abhi akele bhi baat karta tha Ruhi se chhup chhupa kar. Kabhi Ruhi normal rehti, Abhi ki har baat ko maanti, shaam ko present rehti Abhi ke jaane ke waqt to kabhi bilkool nahin aati jaise jaan bujh kar Abhi ko tarpaane ke liye. Kissi din Abhi behad khush dikhta to kissi din udaas kaam karta kyun ke Ruhi saamne nahin aati.

Har Saturdays ko kaam 2 se 2.30 ko end hote aur sabhi Saturdays ko Ruhi apni course ke liye jaati aur Abhi ussko bus ke jagah se main road tak ya kabhi bus stop tak chorrne jaata aur usski maa donon ko dekh kar hanssti. Magar jiss Saturday ko Mehboob hota aangan mein tab to Abhi nahin jaa paata Ruhi ke saath, magar ek trick karta abhi, cigarrte kharidne ke bahane jaldi se jata Ruhi se bus stop par milne aur baat karne.

Har Saturdays ko Ruhi ek alag dress pehenti jiss mein wo behad khubsurat dikhti aur Abhi machal jata, aur bhi paagal hota usski khubsurti ko dekh kar. Hona bhi tha har roz Ruhi ghar par apne gharelu kapdon mein Abhi ke samne hoti thi, to jab saj sanwar kar acchhi kapdon mein nikalti to 100 gunah ziada khubsurat to lagni hi thi….

Abhi ko apne dil ki baat kehne ko mann kiya Ruhi se… thoda ghabra bhi raha tha Abhi ke sahi waqt hai kahein ya nahin, ya thode din aur wait karen…. Phir khud se kehta ke nahin aur kuch din intezaar karte hein….. kaam jaldi aage badh raha tha aur ab lagne laga tha ke 4 mahine se pehle hi kaam pura ho jaega, iss liye Abhi ko ab jaldi tha Ruhi se baat karne ke liye….

Uss aagan mein takriban sab ko pata lag chuka tha ke Abhi aur Ruhi ke bich kuch chal raha hai…. Saeed team ke charon ko pata chal gaya tha ke Abhi Ruhi se behad pyar karta hai. Saeed ko bhi pata tha aur Mehboob ko bhi pata tha magar wo anjaan banne ka naatak karta tha. Usski biwi Rahima ko pura yakeen tha ke Abhi Ruhi se pyar karta hai kyunke ussne kayi baar Abhi ko Ruhi se isharon mein baat karte hue dekh liya tha washroom se, aur Rahima ne Ruhi ko isharon se jawaab dete hue bhi dekha tha.

Ab itna pata nahin chala tha ke kia Rahima ne wo sab Mehboob ko bataya tha ya nahin isske baare mein waqt aane par pata chalega.

Shweta weekends mein aati thi aur kabhi 3 ya 4 din baad jaati thi. Mehboob ki beti jo Primary school jaati thi, wo bhi Abhi se hamesha baatein karti thi, chhoti thi, aur jiss din Shweta aur Farzina(Mehboob ki beti) saath khelte to kaafi shor hote the aangan mein…. Donn ladkiyan khelte waqt kayi baar Abhi ke paas aate uss se baatein karte, ussko cherrte, chhute etc…. Aur Ruhi kadhi donon ko dekhti. Kabhi kabhi to koyi baat kehna hota to Ruhi Farzina ko kehti jaakar Abhi se kehne ke liye.

Phir aaye school ki chhutiyon ke din. Der mahina school, college sab bandh, aur saare bache at home. Ruhi ka bhai Mahesh bhi ab har roz at home. Abhi ko ab fikar hone laga ke ussko kitne ache mauke mile the Ruhi se apne dil ki baat kehne ko magar ussne nahin kaha aur ab der mahina aur wait karna padega, aur bus ke upar wale frames bhi weld ho chuke the aur ab bus aisa dikhne laga tha takriban:


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Ye photo ek example hai aur yeh ek garage ke andar hai, magar wahan Abhi wala chasis par tha aur aangan mein tha peyr ke niche tha.
Abhi aise hi weld karta tha, aur itna ooncha bus ki body ban gaye the ek mahine mein, sab ho gaya tha….

Aur Abhi ko ab lagne laga ke agle der mahinon mein bus ko complete kar diya jaega. To ussko bada fikar hua ke ab der mahina bacha hai usske paas Ruhi se apne dil ki baat kehne ke liye, ya ussko propose karne ke liye… agar der mahine mein kaam end hua to matlab schools resume hone tak bus road par chalne lagega. Abhi ko ab waqt kum dikhne laga…. Ussko fikar hua aur socha ab to Ruhi se kehna padega sab kuch….. magar ussko pata nahin kyun darr sa lag raha tha, ussko darr tha ke Ruhi naah nah karde. Aur yeh bhi soch raha tha Abhi ke yeh bhi ho sakta hai ke Ruhi intezaar kar rahi ho ke kab Abhi ussko propose karega. Abhi ki saansein phul rahe the yeh sab sochte hue. Ussko himmat nahin ho rahi thi Ruhi se yeh kehne ke liye ke wo uss se pyar karta hai.

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Sab mamool par chal rahe the aur ek din kaam karte waqt har roz ki tarah Abhi ne Ruhi ko kapde dhote hue dekha. Takriban har subha ke 10 baje Ruhi uss pathar par kapde dhote hue nazar aati hi thi aur Abhi uss se isharon mein baat karta tha aur Ruhi bhi thodi chanchal adaa se Abhi ko dekhti aur baat karti. Kabhi kabhi usski maa bhi karib hoti thi Ruhi ke aur wo bhi dekhti un donon ko ishaare se baat karrte hue aur wo buss hanssti aur Ruhi se puchti ke kia keh raha hai Abhi. Abhi ko achchi tarah se pata tha ke Ruhi ki maa ko sab pata hai aur wo encourage karti thi jaise apni beti ko Abhi se weise baat karne ko. Ussko koyi problem nahin thi ke usski beti Abhi ke close jaaye, baat kare ya kuch bhi.

Phir kuch der baad Ruhi dhoe hue kapdon ko sukhne ke liye daal rahi thi taar par aur usski maa andar chali gayi thi to Abhi ka mann kiya ke wo Ruhi se jaakar baat kare…. Aur gaya bhi.

Mehboob bus ke paas hi tha, baaki sab log the. Jab Abhi Ruhi ke paas gaya to Mehboob dekh raha tha. Abhi ne Ruhi ke paas hote hue kaha,

“Ek baat kehni hai tumse Ruhi.”

Ruhi ne bus ke taraf dekhte hue kaha,

“Aap kyun Mehboob chacha ke presence mein yahan aaye ho? mujhko problems hogi jaao nah please!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Ari mere khayal se to ab sabko pata hai hamaare baare mein nah? Aur tumhari mummy bhi yahin hai nah?”

Ruhi muskuraayi aur kaha,

“kia pata hai sabko hamaare baare mein?”

Abhi: “yeh bhi kehna padega Ruhi?!”

Ruhi: “haan kehna to padega hi nah?

Abhi: “main ne kaha tha nah ke ishara kaafi hota hai to ek mahina ho gaya aur tumko pata nahin kia ab tak?”

Ruhi ne bus ke taraf dekha kapde taar par taangte hue aur weise hi muskuraate hue kaha,

“Ek mahine mein kia hota hai ek saal bhi aisa hi chal sakta hai kyun? Aap ko nahin passand jaisa chal raha hai”

Abhi: “phir usske baad kia hoga?”

Ruhi: “kuch bhi nahin kyun kia hona chahiye?”

Abhi: “Ruhi shaayad der mahinon mein bus complete ho jaega, kaam khatam ho jaega, yahan se main chala jaunga!”

Ruhi ne kuch aisa jawaab diya jiss se Abhi ke dil ko choat pahuncha.

Ruhi ne hansste hue kaha,

“Oh! chale jaoge aap? Uff matlab bala tal jaegi phir”

Ye jawaab sunkar Abhi ka dil baith gaya aur usske paas koyi bhi jawaab nahin tha Ruhi ko dene ke liye. Thoda ghussa bhi aya aur turant wahan se laut gaya bus ke paas.

Ab pata nahin Ruhi ne mazaak kiya tha ya serious thi. Ussne muskuraate, hansste hue kaha tha wo baat, shaayad Ruhi ne hi nahin socha tha ke Abhi wahan se laut jaega. Aur Shayad Abhi ko bina kuch bole wapas lautte hue dekh kar Ruhi ko apni ghalati ka ehsaas hua ke ussne kuch ghalat keh diya aur usski muskurahat udaas chehre mein badal gayi jiss waqt Abhi ke kadam wahan se bus ke taraf badhne lage the.

Abhi bus ki frame ke andar kaam kar raha tha to andar chala gaya, chehra utra hua tha to Mehboob ne pucha,

“kia hua Abhi? Chehra kyun achanak utra hua hai kissi ne kuch kaha kia tujhe?!”

Abhi ne nah kaha aur apne kaam karne laga to Mehboob ne mudhkar Ruhi ko dekha, to iss liye ke Abhi ko pata tha ke wo Ruhi ko dekh raha hoga kyun ke ussne donon ko baat karte hue dekha tha to Abhi ne bhi Ruhi ko dekha aur paaya ke Ruhi ka bhi chehra utra hua tha aur bahot hi sad face se Abhi ke taraf dekh rahi thi kapde tangte hue.

Abhi kaam karte hue badbadaata gaya ghusse mein,

“Main bala hoon? Bala tal jaegi mere chale jaane se? To kyun mere saath hanss hanss kar baat karti hai? Kyun mera intezar karti hi, kyun mujhse baat karti hai?! Achah matlab ussko Khushi hogi mere chale jaane se yeh baat hai!!”

Tony ne pucha,

“are kia ho gaya? Kaun khush hoga tere jaane se?”

Abhi ne Tony se kaha,

“Mere jaane se bala tal jaegi yaar main yahan ziada hoon, kissi ko Khushi hogi jab mera yahan aana band ho jaega!”

Tony ne pucha,

“What? Kia Ruhi ne tujhe aisa kaha kia?!”

Abhi ne Ruhi ke taraf dekhte hue haan kaha Tony ko. To Tony ne bhi Ruhi ke taraf dekha aur kaha,

“are dil pe mat le yaar ussne zaroor mazaak kiya hoga tere se!”

Abhi: “mazaak mein bhi koyi aisa kehta hai kia Tony? Mere dil ke andar ghussi wo baat, bahot takliff hua mujhe usski yeh baat sunkar. Laga ke ek khajar bhonk diye seene mein mere”

Tony ne kaha:

“are bhai dekh wo kitni udaas dikh rahi hai, usska chehra to dekh….”

Abhi ne Ruhi ke taraf dekha, usski aankhon mein dekha ke sach mein bahot udaasi thi, jaise Abhi se sorry keh rahe the usski nazrein,

Tony ne kaha,

“Sun mujhe exactly bata kia hua baat kaise shuru hui aur end kaise hui tab main tujhe bataunga ke ussne mazaak kiya ke nahin bata mujhe!”

Jab Abhi ne puri wakiya sunaya Tony ko to Tony ne kaha,

“Are paagal wo 100% mazaak kar rahi thi, aur tumne ussko koyi jawaab bhi nahin diya bina kuch kahe laut aaye to issi liye wo itni udaas hai dekh to, lagta hai rone wali hai… kia yaar jhagra bhi shuru ho gaye tum donon ke?!”

Abhi ne phir Ruhi ke chehre mein dekha to iss baar shaayad Ruhi bhi khafa hui aur andar chali gayi Abhi ko teerchi nazar se dekh kar!”

Lunch time tak Ruhi nahin dikhi, aur nah Abhi ne ussko dhunda. Ab pata nahin ke ghar ke andar se Ruhi Abhi ko kahin se jhank rahi thi ke nahin yeh sirf Ruhi ko pata hai.

Thik lunch lene jaane se pehle bus ke andar se ek baar Abhi ne Ruhi ke uss khidki ke taraf dekha, to Ruhi khidki par apne donon elbow teke hue nazar aaye bus mein dekhte hue. Abhi ne seedha usske chehre mein dekha, Ruhi ne gaalon ko phulaate hue jaise Abhi ko mock kiya, phir turant apne jeeb nikaal kar Abhi ko mock kiya Ruhi ne…. yeh Abhi ko bahot hi achcha laga, aur kayi baar Abhi ko weise mock karti gayi apne jeeb se… lag raha tha jaise wo Abhi ko manaane ki koshish kar rahi thi….

Lunch ke liye Abhi washroom ke taraf gaya aur Ruhi wahin rahi apne khidki par teke hue. Abhi ko pata tha ke Ruhi wahan usska wait karegi kyunke har roz lunch ke baat Abhi wahan uss se baat karne jaata hai. Magar aaj Abhi nahin gaya usske paas! Ruhi wait karti rahi aur ek baar Abhi aur Tony donon nikle, bus ke paas se guzre, Ruhi khush hui ke Abhi usske paas araha hai magar Abhi aur Tony seedhe chale gaye main road ke taraf, Ruhi wait karti rahi magar Abhi nahin aya lunch time ki break khatam hone tak. Jab 12.45 ho gaye Ruhi ne time dekha to ussko pata tha ke ab work resume karega Abhi to uss se baat nahin karega….. ussne Abhi ko main road se wapas aate dekha, Abhi ne usske taraf sirf ek baar dekha, Ruhi wahi rahi apne kamre ke andar se khidki par lean hote hue, aur Abhi bus ke andar chala gaya aur kaam start kar diya, Ruhi dekhti rahi….. ab jitna ghussa Abhi ko aya tha kuch der pehle uss se ziada ghussa Ruhi ko aayi to ussne khidki bandh kar liya, parde khinch liye, wahan se lounge mein aayi aur saare parde khinch diye aur sone chali gayi….. Abhi ne sab dekha aur chup chap kaam karta gaya kyunke ussko pata tha ke ab Ruhi sone chali gayi hai….

Magar shaam ko kaam khatam karne ke baad jab Abhi washroom gaya to Ruhi nahin dikhi, ghar wapas jaane bhi laga to Ruhi saamne nahin aayi, Abhi wait karta raha magar Ruhi nahin nikli stairs par aur Abhi ko bina Ruhi ko dekhe wapas jaana pada. Ussko ek bhaaripan mehsoos hone laga tha, saans lene mein takliff hone lagi thi, ussne socha lunch time mein ussko Ruhi se baat karne jana chahiye tha tab sab clear kar leta usske saath… Abhi ne kaha ke Ruhi grudge rakhti hai…..

Abhi uss raat ko der tak beer peeta raha Tony se Ruhi ke baare mein baat karte hue, ghar bilkool nashe mein pahuncha tha uss raat ko.

To be continued…. (2610 words)

What I like the most in this story is that each update is greater than the other. One after one you are continuously giving us super updates and its a pleasure to read and enjoy them.
Wonderful story, great emotional and heart touching update.
Grear narrations and impeccable descriptions.
This one is the first update which jumps a month ahead. Otherwise we were getting a day to day events of Abhi and Ruhi confrontations, love, feelings and all.
We were like watching the coach of that bus getting built little by little and we suddenly missed a month and found it almost in another form. The chasis is already being covered by the frames.
Regarding Abhi and Ruhi hah!! Had never thought they will ever even get a quarrel before their love blossoms. Yet it happened and that was a silly one indeed.
Ego problem from both sides I can see. Both are to be blamed for the situation they are in. However I am sure it will not last long because their is love in between.
Just want to know and see how Casinar get them reconciled. I am sure there will be something special to reunite them. What situation will you create for the reconciliation Casi bro? Will that not get both much more closer now?
I am sure that will happen in the following update and now I keep wondering then what will cause such thing to get us the title of the story? This is the great question.
Fabulous update my friend. I will say you are a genius in writing, creating, narrating and describing a story. Hats off and thank you very much for giving us a GEM. :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause:
 

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Update 3 A new turn in Abhi’s Life

Ek jaana maana bus owner tha Mehboob Jaan naam ka. Usske 4 buses running already the roads par. Magar usski nazar ek puraane sade hue bus par padi kahin ek jangal mein jo kissi bus owner ne dump kar diya tha. Uss par ghaans phuss, pawde bhi ug uthe the. Mehboob Jaan ne uss bus ka moaena kiya to paaya ke usski chassi bilkool mazbut aut achchah hai, magar engine tha hi nahin bus mein sirf chasis samet sada hua coach tha uss par. Mehboob jaan ne socha ke 50,000 mein ek second hand engine to mil hi jaega, chasis sahi hai to sirf coach building karna padega aur bus wapas road par chalaya jaa sakta hai. Chasis ka number note kiya ussne aur legal matter ke liye road traffic branch walon ke contact se pata kar liya ke sab legally banaya jaa sakta hai agar wo bus ko wapas road par lana chaahe to.

To ussko ab Saeed se milna baaki tha jo ussne kiya. Saeed ko lekar wo bus dikhaane legaya. Uss bus mein kaam wohi karna tha jo bilkool ek naye bus mein kiya jaata hai shuru se ant tak. Matlab chasis se shuru karna hoga aur end tak coach building karni hogi. Eise kaam ke liye garage mein 20 laakh rupay lag jata hai. Aur agar naye bus par coach building karna hota hai tab 40 se 50 laakh lagta hai. Yeh sab Mehboob ko bhi pata tha aur Saeed ko bhi. Mehboob ne Saeed se pucha ke kitne ki material takreeban kharidne padenge? Aur bus ko pura banaane mein kitna time lagega?

Saeed ke dimaagh mein kayi batein chal rahe thee uss waqt. Wo soch raha tha garage ke hisaab se kitna paisa lagta mehbob ko aur ab saeed garage wala kaam pura karne wala tha to kitna paisa lena chahiye ussko Mehboob se ek pura bus ki coach banaane ke liye. Saeed ne socha ke Abhi se milkar decision lena padega ussko, to ussne Mehboob se kaha,

“Mujhe apne workers se baat karna hoga pehle, yeh unn ke haath mein hein ke kitne dinon mein kaam pura ho sakta hai aur materials ke liye ek quotation banwa kar dunga aap ko, bahot saare sheets of alluminium kharidne honge, bahot metals kharidne honge pura frame ke liye aur bus ke tamaam seats ke liye alag se metals lene honge aur saare seats bhi banana hein, tamaam shishe bus ke kharidne hein….sab kuch from zero start karna hai….. upar se saare rivets, floorings, ceilings ke pannels, sides ke frames, sab kuch shuru se start karna hai bilkool jaise ek naya bus banta hai weise karna hai….”

Mehboob ne kaha ke wo sab karne ko tayyaar hai ussko wo bus wapas road par chahiye hi chahiye!

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Saeed jaakar Abhi se mila aur ussko lekar uss jangal mein bus dikhaane legaya aur donon milkar discuss karne lage ke kitna cost hoga saare meterials ka aur kitna paisa lena padega Mehboob se bus ko road par laane ke liye aur kitne dinon mein kaamm pura ho sakta hai.

Saeed aur Abhi phir usske ghar par mile aur kagaz kalam lekar baithe donon sab kuch likhne ke liye.

Saare materials ko soch soch kar likha gaya ek ek karke, sab yaad karte hue ke bus ki coach banaane ke liye kia kia istemaal hota hai, ek kil se lekar alliminium sheets tak sab kuch likha gaya aur daam ek kone mein note kiya gaya.

Ek pura quotation tayaar kiya abhi ne. kyunke wo padha likha tha to iss liye Saeed ne Abhi par count kiya wo sab tayyaar karne ke liye. Sab kuch kalam aur kaagaz par kiya gaya computer to tha nahin tab.

Usske baad ab donon ne discuss kiye ke kitna paisa lena hoga Mehboob se uss kaam ke liye. Saeed aur Abhi ne milkar discuss kiya ke company ki garage mein to uss kaam ke liye kum se kum do ya teen laakh liye jaate aur 3 mahinon mein kaam pura kiya jaata…. To baat yeh hui ke garage mein aur bhi kayi mulaazim kaam karte tab 3 mahinon mein kaam pura hota, yahan to 4 mulazim hein to ziada din to lagenge hi…… 6 mahine socha donon ne… phir socha ke Mehboob ko 6 mahine bahot ziada lagenge, to 4 se 5 mahine kehne ko socha donon ne. Tab baat aayi paise ki, labour ki, matlan mazdoori ki….. Saeed ne kaha ke 75,000 mangega. Aur kaha ke wo 50,000 lega aur Abhi ko 25,000 dega.

Abhi ne kaha,

“75,000? Aap paagal ho kia saeed ji? 3 laakh ka kaam aap 75 hazaar rupay mein karoge? Aur do workers ke bhi payment karne honge to keise mujhko 25 aur aap 50 loge unn mein se? Main kehta hoon do laakh mangna hai Mehboob ji se iss kaam ke liye.”

Abhi door ka sochta tha. Saeed ji ke liye 75 hazaar bahot bada rakam tha iss liye ussko ziada maangna ajeeb lag raha tha, magar Abhi ko pata tha ke Mehboob ji agar garage ko 3 laakh ki payment kar sakte hein to 2 laakh to de paega iss kaam ke liye. To Saeed ji ne kaha,

“Dekho Abhi, mujh mein himmat nahin hai Mehboob ji se itna bada rakam maangne ki, ek kaam karte hein, tum mere saath chalo, main tumko apne assistant kehkar milwaunga uss se aur tum price discuss karna unnke saath dekhte hein kia hota hai.”

Abhi maan gaya. Aur donon mile Mehboob ji ke ghar par. Abhi ne quotation de diya Mehboob ji ko. Derr laakh ki materials kharidne the Mehboob ji ko. Tab ussne Saeed ji se pucha ke kitna lenge iss kaam ke liye aur kitne dinon mein kaam pura hoga. To Saeed ne Mehboob se kaha,

“Ussi se puchiye nah janaab, yeh Abhi hai nah wohi sab accounting karta hai. Wo sahi figures dega aap ko.”

Mehboob ke yahan aane se pehle to baat 2 laakh ki hui thi magar yahan Abhi ne Mehboob se 3 laakh ki farmaayish kiye! Saeed ji ko jhatka laga 3 laakh sunkar! Magar Mehboob ji ne abhi se pucha,

“3 laakh kuch ziada nahin hai barkhurdaar? Garage mein bhi to utna hi lagta nah?”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Kia aap ke yahan garage hai janaab? Ya aap ke yahan hum khule hawa mein kaam karenge, dhoop mein tapte hue saare kaam karne honge, inn sab ko khayal mein rakhte hue hi nah humne sab kuch socha hai? Aur phir do aur mulaazim honge hamaare saath, unnke bhi to payments karne honge, travellings ka bhi socha hai humne saare mulazim ke travelling ka khayal bhi to karna padta hai nah?”

Mehboob ji ne muskuraate hue wapas Saeed ji ko dekha aur kaha,

“Are saeed bhai aap to apne finance manager ko lekar saath aaye ho ya yeh aap ka HR hai?!” aur wo hanss pade.

Mehboob ji ne 3 laakh ko Manzoor kiya jiss se Saeed ji ko zabardast jhatka laga, ussne to sapne mein bhi nahin socha tha ke life mein kabhi kissi se 3 laakh maangega kaam karne ke liye.

Saeed chup chaap baitha raha aur Abhi ko sab deal pura karne diya.

Mehboob ji ne pucha ke kitne dinon mein kaam pura hoga. Abhi ne kaha 5 se 6 mahine to lag jaega, aur Mehboob ji ko mechanics wale kaam alag se karwane honge engine ko lekar aur paintings bhi alag se wo karwaega apne taraf se. Mehboob ji raazi hue aur pucha ke payment kaise karega sab ek saath kaam pura hone ke baad ya advance payment chahiye?

Bina Saeed ko dekhe ya puche Abhi ne kaha,

“Agar aap 1 laakh de dete hamein kaam shuru hone se pehle to hamaare liye asaan hota baaki ke mulazimon ki payment karne ke liye kyunke unn logon ko weekly payment karte hein hum.”

Saeed ji ko ek aur jhatka laga abhi ki baat ko sunkar. Ussne to life mein kabhi 1 lakh rupay nah liya tha nah dekha tha. Aur 22 saal ki umar ka Abhi 1 lakh rupay maang raha tha ek bus owner se, wo bhi advance aur 2 lakh kaam pura hone ke baad milne wala tha….. Saeed soch raha tha ke sala ussne to 75 hazaar pura kaam ke liye maangne wala tha! aur yahan abhi advance 1 lakh mang raha hai aur Mehboob dene ko tayyaar tha!

Mehboob ji ne ek cheque kata 1 laakh rupay ki aur Abhi ko thama diya Saeed ko dekhte hue. Phir pucha ke kaam shuru kab hoga. To Abhi ne kaha kaam kal se hi shuru hoga, bus ko tow kiya jaega unnke aangan mein aaj hi.

Wahan se nikle to Saeed ne abhi se kaha,

“kamaal karte ho tum abhi? Sala 2 laakh ki baat hui thi aur tumne 3 laakh mang liya?”

Abhi ne zor se hansste hue kaha,

“Yeh ek laakh mera apna kamaayi hai saeed ji. Iss mein se main aap ko kuch nahin dene wala” aur zoron se hanssta gaya. Saeed ji khamosh rahe.

Kuch der baad Abhi ne pucha,

“yeh cheque aap apne account mein debit karoge ya main apne account mein daal dun?”

Saeed ne kaha,

“are beta mera to aaj tak koyi bank account hai hi nahin! To tumhi dalo apne account mein nah!”

Uss din life mein pehli baar Abhi ki bank account mein 1 lakh rupay deposit kiya gaya! Jiss bande ko 10 rupay ke liye tarasna padta tha, ek cigarette pine ke liye doston se maangna padta tha aaj 1 lakh rupay deposit kiya gaya usske account mein ussko khud yakeen nahin ho raha tha!

Shaam ko bus tow kiya gaya aur Mehboob ji ke aangan mein ek bade se peyr ke niche rakha gaya. Saeed aur Abhi wahin maujood the. Bus ko dekh kar log hanss rahe the. Pados ke log aakar bus ko dekhne lage jiss par ghanns phuss uge hue the, itna mayla tha, ganda tha, gande hare rang ke paani kayi jaga jama hua tha bus mein, jo ek do sheeshe bache hue the sab dark green gande iss kadar dikh rahe the ke ghin araha tha… kuch log Mehboob ji ko paagal keh rahe the ke ek sade hue bus ko jangal se uthakar apne aanagn mein laa rakha tha….

Abhi sun raha tha sabhi ke comments ko aur apne dil mein kaha,

“saalo, teen mahine baad tumhi log taarif karne aoge iss bus ki….”

Aur yahan par shuru hoti hai Abhi ki Romantic kahani… Abhi ne achanak kissi mahila ki awaaz ko kuch yun phukaarte hue suna;

“Ari oh Ruhi kia kar rahi hai aa dekh tere Mehboob chacha ne kia laya hai aangan mein!”

To be continued………..
mehant jivan ki takdeer badal deti hai , abhi ke pas kabiliyat bhi hai aur mehnagt karne ka houshala bhi isliye takdeer bhi uska sath de rahi hai ..
ab ruhi bhi uski jindagi me aa gayi ..:good:
 

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Update 4 Ruhi Comes in Abhi’s Life Once More

“saalo, teen mahine baad tumhi log taarif karne aoge iss bus ki….”

Aur yahan par shuru hoti hai Abhi ki Romantic kahani… Abhi ne achanak kissi mahila ki awaaz ko kuch yun phukaarte hue suna;

“Ari oh Ruhi kia kar rahi hai aa dekh tere Mehboob chacha ne kia laya hai aangan mein!”

Ab aaguey….

Jab Abhi ne kissi ko Ruhi naam phukaarte suna to usska dil zoron se dhadka, usska chehra thoda sa laal hua aur usski nazar bus se hatkar uss awr dekhne laga jahan se ussne uss awaaz ko Ruhi naam phukaarte hue suna…. Ussko aisa feel hua ke ussko saans lene mein takliff hone laga tha uss pal ko, mushkil se ek lamba saans liya aur aankhon ko wahin jamaaye rakha iss intezaar mein ke koyi Ruhi naam wali udhar aaye….. tab ek oonche stair par khadi ek aurat ko dekha Abhi ne; aur andaza lagaya ke ussi aurat ne Ruhi ke naam ko phukara, aur sochne laga kia yeh uss Ruhi naam wali ladki ki maa hogi kia? Apni beti ko bus dekhne ke liye bula rahi hogi? To kia bus owner Mehboob uss Ruhi ka chacha hai? Matlab yahan Ruhi ek muslim girl hai, magar Abhi wala Ruhi to hindu thi…. Phir bhi dharm aur jaat ko bhool kar iss pal ko Abhi ne yeh dekhna chaha ke yeh Ruhi kaisi hogi? Khubsurat hogi aur apni Ruhi ki tarah adaon ki maalkin hogi? Chanchal hogi? Modern hogi, ya gharelu hogi? English bolna ata hoga? Padhi likhi hogi? Usski umar kia hogi? Kahin koyi bachi to nahin hogi? Aur agar shaadi shuda already hogi to? Usski baal keise honge, apni Ruhi jaisi hogi? Aur sabse pyare 2 chiz jo Abhi apni Ruhi mein ziada passand karta tha wo the usski muskurahat, aur usski meethi awaaz, to kia iss Ruhi ki bhi weisi muskurahat aur awaaz hogi kia?

Abhi ka dhyaan ab bus par bilkool nahin tha. Wo to wahan nazrein gadaaye khada tha jahan se yeh nayi Ruhi aane wali thi. Saeed ji ne Abhi se pucha,

“kia khayal hai, kaam kitne dinon tak chalega?!”

Abhi ne Saeed ji ko suna hi nahin, usska dhyaan to kahin aur hi tha uss waqt. Saeed ji ne tab Abhi ke chehre mein dekha, phir usski nazron ko follow karte hue saeed ji ne bhi wahan dekha jahan abhi ke nazrein thehre hue the aur ek aurat ko dekha khada hokar unn donon ke taraf bus ko dekhte hue. Faasla koyi 3 metres ke the jiss jagah bus tha aur jahan wo aurat khadi thi.

Saeed ji ne Abhi ki kehuni ko apne kehuni se takraate hue kaha,

“kyun miyan auraton ko taadne lage aate hi?”

Tab Abhi ka dhyaan wapas wahan aaya aur chahunkte hue kaha,

“nahin bhai main buss aise hi….. kuch soch raha tha….”

Aur tabhi uss aurat ne phir kaha,

“Ari Ruhi aah nah dekh to!”

Aur andar se awaaz aayi jissko Abhi ne bade dhyaan se suna,

“ofo maa, tum bhi nah, yeh chulhe par tarkaari kaun dekhega agar main tumhaare paas aa khadi hui to? Sab jal jaega yahan, dekh nahin rahi main paka rahi hoon!”

Abhi ke dil ka dhadakna jaise ruk sa gaya uss awaaz ko sunkar, jitni meethaas aur komalta uss awaaz mein suna Abhi ne, aur jiss adaa se uss ladki ki awaaz suna Abhi ne, wo machal gaya ab usski ek jhalak dekhne ke liye. Magar usske samajh mein nahin araha tha ke kaise ussko dekhein…. Abhi dil hi dil mein praathna karne laga ke wo ladki at least ek baar apni maa ki baat maan le aur ek baar bus ko dekhne aajaaye….

Tab tak Saeed ji ne phir Abhi se pucha ke kitne dinon mein kaam pura ho sakta hai. Abhi ko dar tha ke kahin idhar udhar dekhte waqt wo ladki aakar wapas bhi nah chali jaaye to usski nazrein wahi jami rahe aur Saeed ko jawaab diya jaise hawa mein baat kar raha tha, “PATA NAHIN BAI!”

Ab to Abhi yeh chahne laga ke yahan ka kaam kabhi khatam hi nah ho, kyunke usska yahan kaam karne ka ek aur maksad mil gaya tha….

Abhi tarapne laga ussko dekhne ke liye, kaash wo ladki ek baar apni maa ke paas aakar khadi ho jaati, eisa soch raha tha abhi, aur achaanak uss aurat ne mehboob ji se kuch kaha jo sunaayi nahin diya Abhi ko, magar abhi unn donon ko hi dekh raha tha tab tak Saeed ji buss ke dusre taraf chale gaye the moaena karne bus ki. Aur abhi ki nazar wahi tikke hue the uss stair par, aur ladki ki maa ne phir se kaha,

“Ruhi aakar dekh to sahi nah!”

Aur andar se awaaz aayi,

“uff aati hoon wait karo, karhaayi ko utaar to doon!”

Jiss stair par wo aurat khadi thi wo kitchen mein daakhil hone wali stairs the. Uss makaan ka aakhri hissa tha aur jahan bus tha uss garden ki saamne wale hisse ke bilkool nazdeek tha. bus left hand side mein tha aur wo ghar right hand side mein tha. Chalo ek plan bana deta hoon taake aap sab ko samajh mein ajaaye sab kaisa tha wahan….

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To yeh raha plan. Bus ek badi si darkhat ke niche tha jiss se aadha din chaon hota tha bus ke niche, baad mein kada dhoop mein kaam karna padta tha. Jahan Ruhi ki kitchen hai wahan ek jagah stair likha hua hai wahin par usski maa khadi dekh rahi thi aur Abhi jahan tap one likha hai wahan opposite bus ke paas khada uss stairs ke taraf dekh raha tha ke kab Ruhi naami ladki saamne dikhe ussko. Bus ka front side Mehboob ke ghar ke taraf tha aur back side Ruhi ke cousin ke ghar ke taraf. Bus ki right side Ruhi ke ghar ke taraf, balke tap 1 aur tap 2 jahan Ruhi kapde dhoti hai, uss taraf tha. Aur Mehboob ke ghar ke piche washroom tha jahan fresh hona jata tha, kapde change karte the workers aur toilet bhi wahin the. Mehboob aur Ruhi ke ghar ke beech ka jo space tha wahan ziada tar kaam kiya jaata tha jaise, alliminium sheets ka kaatna, measurements lena, aur bahot saare lohe ka samaan rakha gaya tha aur kuch kaam karne ka samaan add hota gaya din ba din. Matlab jab bhi Abhi uss space mein hota to Ruhi ke ghar ke ziada kareeb hota. Bus se Ruhi ka ghar ka fasla buss der metre ka tha, usski kitchen, aur stairs 2 metres ki doori par the.

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Abhi besabri se wait karta raha ke kab wo Ruhi naam wali ladki stairs par aaye taake wo ussko dekh sake, usski awaaz to sun liya tha aur bekaraar tha ussko dekhne ke liye. Usski awaaz se Abhi ko samajh mein aaya; ya yun kahen ke uss patli, narm awaaz se andaza lagaya jaa sakta tha ke uss awaaz ki maalkin kaisi dikhti hogi. Matlab Abhi ne apne dimaagh mein seikron tasvirein bana liye the usski, apne tassavur mein iss Ruhi ki tasveer ko utaar liya tha ussne ab intezaar tha ussko dekhne ko aur natija kia niklega isska wait kar raha tha Abhi.

Abhi ko laga ek bahot khubsurat, naazuk, kamsin si ladki hogi, yeh usski awaaz se pehchana ya andaza lagaya tha Abhi ne… usski bekaraari badhne lagi thi aur mann mein hulchal paida ho gaye the, bechain ho raha tha Abhi usski ek jhalak dekhne ke liye.

Abhi ka Ruhi naam se gehra Rishta tha yeh sirf Abhi ko pata tha aur kissi ko bhi nahin uss waqt. Iss Ruhi naam se usska kia naata raha hai pichle kayi saalon se, kia ehmiyat thi usskki life mein Ruhi naam ka kissi ko kia pata tha usske siwa. Aur abhi sochne laga ke kismat kia khel khel raha tha usske saath ke ussi naam ki ladki se phir milwa raha tha ussko, aisa kyun tha? Kia yeh wala Ruhi Abhi ki life mein khushian laegi? Kia Abhi ki life mein jo kami hai wo ab puri hogi? Jo khaalipan abhi ko aaj tak apne viraan dil ke andar mehsoos ho rahi thi wo ab gulzaar hone wala tha?

Abhi ne ek gehri saans lete hue uss kitchen ki stair par apne nazron ko jamaaye rakha…. Aur ussko ek nili dress nazar aayi kitchen ke darwaze ke paas, dress uss ladki ki maa ki dress ko chhuh rahe the, magar dress pehnne wali nazar nahin arahi thi, phir ladki ki ek tang dikhi abhi ko, dress usski ghutnon tak thi, hawa se dress lehra rahi thi….

Abhi dil hi dil mein sochne laga kia kar rahi hai, kyun dikh nahin rahi hai, usska chehra kidhar chhupi hui hai?! Phir abhi ne ghaur se dekha to samjha ke ladki khule hue darwaze aur deewaar ke beech se bus ke taraf dekh rahi thi; Wo jab ek darwaza full khula hota hai aur khul kar deewaar se chipak jaati hai phir uss khule hue hisse aur deewaar ke beech ke hisse se baahar dekha jaa sakta hai nah? Ruhi ussi hisse se bus ko dekh rahi thi..….

Usska gora chehra aur ek aankh dikha Abhi ko, aur Abhi ka dil bade zoron se dhadakne laga… Ruhi apni maa se dhire dhire baat kar rahi thi yeh maa ki response se samajh mein araha tha…. bus ke taraf dekhte hue donon maa beti baatein kar rahe the, Abhi pray karne laga ke kaash wo ladki stair par ek baar aajaati to Abhi usskko pura dekh paata….

Mehboob apne ghar se nikla to ladki ki maa ne Mehboob se zor se kaha,

”Yeh kia gandagi khada kar diya aap ne aangan mein? Kitna ganda aur sada hua bus hai, aap kia karoge iss sade hue gande lohe se?!”

Apni maa ki baat sunkar wo ladki khilkhila kar hanssi. Abhi ne sab suna aur usski taraf dekhta raha. Aur ladki ne kuch ahiste se kaha apni maa ko jaise daantte hue. Abhi ke samajh mein aya ke ladki ne apni maa se kaha ke bus ki marammat karne wale log sab sun rahe hein, unnko acha nahin lagega….

Aur aakhir mein buss ek pal ke liye, koyi 2 seconds ke liye ladki stair par aayi, wo bhi jaise khud ko ek tang par sambhalte hue jaise stair par ana nahin chahti thi magar ek peyr fissal gayi iss liye majbooran ana pada, phir turant wapas piche chali gayi aur ussi darwaze aur deeewar ke beech se dekhne lagi.

Jiss pal wo nikli thi stair par Abhi ne bahot kuch dekha, aur uss par kia beeta, kia feel hua, kaise sambhala ussne khud ko yeh bayaan karna mushkil hai. Abhi ki nazrein tike rahe uss ek pal ke liye unn stairs par aur ussko to laga ke ek ghante bhar dekh liya uss ladki ko. Usske baal khule hue the jo hawa se lehra rahe the, kaale ghane baal, aur baal bhi bilkool weisi jaisi Abhi ko passand tha aur jaise baal usski Ruhi ke the, uss ladki ka rang bhi bilkool usski apni Ruhi ka rang tha, bilkool gori thi, chehra maan lo chand ka ek tudka dikh gaya Abhi ko, usski dress ek midi type thi, jo usski ghuton ko dhanke hue the, par talwe se thoda upar usski gori tang dikhe Abhi ko aur usski baazuwon par bhi nigahein pade the Abhi ke… Abhi ne khud se kaha,

“Haan komal dikhi mujhe wo, kamseen bhi hai, naazuk bhi lagi….”

Aur chehra? Muskurahat? Aankhen? Inn sab ko dekhne ka mauka hi nahin mila sahi se abhi ko, kyunke tab tak wo wapas chhup gayi thi…sirf ek jhalak dikha tha buss….. Abhi ne mann mein bassa liya ussko ussi pal…..

Uss din wahan se ghar lautne ke baad Abhi ne apni diary mein likha ke muddat baad aaj ussko apni Ruhi ki jhalak dikhi kissi mein, aur taahjub ki baat yeh thi ke ladki ka naam bhi Ruhi hi tha.

To be continued…… (2100 words)
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aapne to naksha bhi daal diya :superb:
ruhi ka chahra bhi dekhna bechare ko nashib nahi ho raha hai , bade hi suspnese ke sath story aage badhte hue , lag raha hai baal spin hone wali hai :lol:
 

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Update 13 The Work Accelerated

Do hafte baad bus ki base ki frame work ho gaya aur Manoj ne photo liya to aisa tha:

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Ab iss frame se lekar upar tak baaki ke lohe ko weld karna tha bus ki complete frame banana ke liye…..

Ek mahine tak kuch aisa hi chala Abhi aur Ruhi ke beech. Abhi Ruhi ko paagalon ki had tak pyar karne laga tha. Usske bina jina naamumkin ho gaya tha Abhi ke liye ab. Subha shaam, raat din Abhi ke khayaalon mein ab sirf Ruhi rehti thi. Jaise Ruhi Abhi ki saans lene ki zarya thi, Abhi ki oxygen thi wo. Ghar mein apni behen se sirf Ruhi ki baatein karta, diary mein 100 pages likh chuka tha “The Days I Spent At Ruhi’s Place” wale diary mein. Aur Naina, Abhi ki chhoti behen sab padhti thi uss diary mein. Jitna kuch guzra tha Ruhi ke saath uss ek mahine mein sab likha hua tha uss diary mein, aur Naina ko sab pata tha.

Naina ne Abhi se Ruhi ki ek photo laane ke liye kaha. Abhi khud kayi dinon se Ruhi se usski ek photo mang raha tha magar Ruhi dene se inkaar kar rahi thi. Aaj ke zamaane mein yeh sab hua hota to seikhron pics le liya hota Abhi ne Ruhi ki hai nah dosto?

Iss ek mahine mein Abhi kuch aur bhi close ho gaya tha Ruhi se. Aksar usski maa saath hoti jab Abhi Ruhi se baat karta. Wo shayad iss liye usski maa weisa karti thi, taake Mehboob ko kehne ka mauka nah mile ke Abhi aur Ruhi akele mein baatein kar rahe the. Aisa Abhi soch raha tha. Magar kabhi kabhi Abhi akele bhi baat karta tha Ruhi se chhup chhupa kar. Kabhi Ruhi normal rehti, Abhi ki har baat ko maanti, shaam ko present rehti Abhi ke jaane ke waqt to kabhi bilkool nahin aati jaise jaan bujh kar Abhi ko tarpaane ke liye. Kissi din Abhi behad khush dikhta to kissi din udaas kaam karta kyun ke Ruhi saamne nahin aati.

Har Saturdays ko kaam 2 se 2.30 ko end hote aur sabhi Saturdays ko Ruhi apni course ke liye jaati aur Abhi ussko bus ke jagah se main road tak ya kabhi bus stop tak chorrne jaata aur usski maa donon ko dekh kar hanssti. Magar jiss Saturday ko Mehboob hota aangan mein tab to Abhi nahin jaa paata Ruhi ke saath, magar ek trick karta abhi, cigarrte kharidne ke bahane jaldi se jata Ruhi se bus stop par milne aur baat karne.

Har Saturdays ko Ruhi ek alag dress pehenti jiss mein wo behad khubsurat dikhti aur Abhi machal jata, aur bhi paagal hota usski khubsurti ko dekh kar. Hona bhi tha har roz Ruhi ghar par apne gharelu kapdon mein Abhi ke samne hoti thi, to jab saj sanwar kar acchhi kapdon mein nikalti to 100 gunah ziada khubsurat to lagni hi thi….

Abhi ko apne dil ki baat kehne ko mann kiya Ruhi se… thoda ghabra bhi raha tha Abhi ke sahi waqt hai kahein ya nahin, ya thode din aur wait karen…. Phir khud se kehta ke nahin aur kuch din intezaar karte hein….. kaam jaldi aage badh raha tha aur ab lagne laga tha ke 4 mahine se pehle hi kaam pura ho jaega, iss liye Abhi ko ab jaldi tha Ruhi se baat karne ke liye….

Uss aagan mein takriban sab ko pata lag chuka tha ke Abhi aur Ruhi ke bich kuch chal raha hai…. Saeed team ke charon ko pata chal gaya tha ke Abhi Ruhi se behad pyar karta hai. Saeed ko bhi pata tha aur Mehboob ko bhi pata tha magar wo anjaan banne ka naatak karta tha. Usski biwi Rahima ko pura yakeen tha ke Abhi Ruhi se pyar karta hai kyunke ussne kayi baar Abhi ko Ruhi se isharon mein baat karte hue dekh liya tha washroom se, aur Rahima ne Ruhi ko isharon se jawaab dete hue bhi dekha tha.

Ab itna pata nahin chala tha ke kia Rahima ne wo sab Mehboob ko bataya tha ya nahin isske baare mein waqt aane par pata chalega.

Shweta weekends mein aati thi aur kabhi 3 ya 4 din baad jaati thi. Mehboob ki beti jo Primary school jaati thi, wo bhi Abhi se hamesha baatein karti thi, chhoti thi, aur jiss din Shweta aur Farzina(Mehboob ki beti) saath khelte to kaafi shor hote the aangan mein…. Donn ladkiyan khelte waqt kayi baar Abhi ke paas aate uss se baatein karte, ussko cherrte, chhute etc…. Aur Ruhi kadhi donon ko dekhti. Kabhi kabhi to koyi baat kehna hota to Ruhi Farzina ko kehti jaakar Abhi se kehne ke liye.

Phir aaye school ki chhutiyon ke din. Der mahina school, college sab bandh, aur saare bache at home. Ruhi ka bhai Mahesh bhi ab har roz at home. Abhi ko ab fikar hone laga ke ussko kitne ache mauke mile the Ruhi se apne dil ki baat kehne ko magar ussne nahin kaha aur ab der mahina aur wait karna padega, aur bus ke upar wale frames bhi weld ho chuke the aur ab bus aisa dikhne laga tha takriban:


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Ye photo ek example hai aur yeh ek garage ke andar hai, magar wahan Abhi wala chasis par tha aur aangan mein tha peyr ke niche tha.
Abhi aise hi weld karta tha, aur itna ooncha bus ki body ban gaye the ek mahine mein, sab ho gaya tha….

Aur Abhi ko ab lagne laga ke agle der mahinon mein bus ko complete kar diya jaega. To ussko bada fikar hua ke ab der mahina bacha hai usske paas Ruhi se apne dil ki baat kehne ke liye, ya ussko propose karne ke liye… agar der mahine mein kaam end hua to matlab schools resume hone tak bus road par chalne lagega. Abhi ko ab waqt kum dikhne laga…. Ussko fikar hua aur socha ab to Ruhi se kehna padega sab kuch….. magar ussko pata nahin kyun darr sa lag raha tha, ussko darr tha ke Ruhi naah nah karde. Aur yeh bhi soch raha tha Abhi ke yeh bhi ho sakta hai ke Ruhi intezaar kar rahi ho ke kab Abhi ussko propose karega. Abhi ki saansein phul rahe the yeh sab sochte hue. Ussko himmat nahin ho rahi thi Ruhi se yeh kehne ke liye ke wo uss se pyar karta hai.

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Sab mamool par chal rahe the aur ek din kaam karte waqt har roz ki tarah Abhi ne Ruhi ko kapde dhote hue dekha. Takriban har subha ke 10 baje Ruhi uss pathar par kapde dhote hue nazar aati hi thi aur Abhi uss se isharon mein baat karta tha aur Ruhi bhi thodi chanchal adaa se Abhi ko dekhti aur baat karti. Kabhi kabhi usski maa bhi karib hoti thi Ruhi ke aur wo bhi dekhti un donon ko ishaare se baat karrte hue aur wo buss hanssti aur Ruhi se puchti ke kia keh raha hai Abhi. Abhi ko achchi tarah se pata tha ke Ruhi ki maa ko sab pata hai aur wo encourage karti thi jaise apni beti ko Abhi se weise baat karne ko. Ussko koyi problem nahin thi ke usski beti Abhi ke close jaaye, baat kare ya kuch bhi.

Phir kuch der baad Ruhi dhoe hue kapdon ko sukhne ke liye daal rahi thi taar par aur usski maa andar chali gayi thi to Abhi ka mann kiya ke wo Ruhi se jaakar baat kare…. Aur gaya bhi.

Mehboob bus ke paas hi tha, baaki sab log the. Jab Abhi Ruhi ke paas gaya to Mehboob dekh raha tha. Abhi ne Ruhi ke paas hote hue kaha,

“Ek baat kehni hai tumse Ruhi.”

Ruhi ne bus ke taraf dekhte hue kaha,

“Aap kyun Mehboob chacha ke presence mein yahan aaye ho? mujhko problems hogi jaao nah please!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Ari mere khayal se to ab sabko pata hai hamaare baare mein nah? Aur tumhari mummy bhi yahin hai nah?”

Ruhi muskuraayi aur kaha,

“kia pata hai sabko hamaare baare mein?”

Abhi: “yeh bhi kehna padega Ruhi?!”

Ruhi: “haan kehna to padega hi nah?

Abhi: “main ne kaha tha nah ke ishara kaafi hota hai to ek mahina ho gaya aur tumko pata nahin kia ab tak?”

Ruhi ne bus ke taraf dekha kapde taar par taangte hue aur weise hi muskuraate hue kaha,

“Ek mahine mein kia hota hai ek saal bhi aisa hi chal sakta hai kyun? Aap ko nahin passand jaisa chal raha hai”

Abhi: “phir usske baad kia hoga?”

Ruhi: “kuch bhi nahin kyun kia hona chahiye?”

Abhi: “Ruhi shaayad der mahinon mein bus complete ho jaega, kaam khatam ho jaega, yahan se main chala jaunga!”

Ruhi ne kuch aisa jawaab diya jiss se Abhi ke dil ko choat pahuncha.

Ruhi ne hansste hue kaha,

“Oh! chale jaoge aap? Uff matlab bala tal jaegi phir”

Ye jawaab sunkar Abhi ka dil baith gaya aur usske paas koyi bhi jawaab nahin tha Ruhi ko dene ke liye. Thoda ghussa bhi aya aur turant wahan se laut gaya bus ke paas.

Ab pata nahin Ruhi ne mazaak kiya tha ya serious thi. Ussne muskuraate, hansste hue kaha tha wo baat, shaayad Ruhi ne hi nahin socha tha ke Abhi wahan se laut jaega. Aur Shayad Abhi ko bina kuch bole wapas lautte hue dekh kar Ruhi ko apni ghalati ka ehsaas hua ke ussne kuch ghalat keh diya aur usski muskurahat udaas chehre mein badal gayi jiss waqt Abhi ke kadam wahan se bus ke taraf badhne lage the.

Abhi bus ki frame ke andar kaam kar raha tha to andar chala gaya, chehra utra hua tha to Mehboob ne pucha,

“kia hua Abhi? Chehra kyun achanak utra hua hai kissi ne kuch kaha kia tujhe?!”

Abhi ne nah kaha aur apne kaam karne laga to Mehboob ne mudhkar Ruhi ko dekha, to iss liye ke Abhi ko pata tha ke wo Ruhi ko dekh raha hoga kyun ke ussne donon ko baat karte hue dekha tha to Abhi ne bhi Ruhi ko dekha aur paaya ke Ruhi ka bhi chehra utra hua tha aur bahot hi sad face se Abhi ke taraf dekh rahi thi kapde tangte hue.

Abhi kaam karte hue badbadaata gaya ghusse mein,

“Main bala hoon? Bala tal jaegi mere chale jaane se? To kyun mere saath hanss hanss kar baat karti hai? Kyun mera intezar karti hi, kyun mujhse baat karti hai?! Achah matlab ussko Khushi hogi mere chale jaane se yeh baat hai!!”

Tony ne pucha,

“are kia ho gaya? Kaun khush hoga tere jaane se?”

Abhi ne Tony se kaha,

“Mere jaane se bala tal jaegi yaar main yahan ziada hoon, kissi ko Khushi hogi jab mera yahan aana band ho jaega!”

Tony ne pucha,

“What? Kia Ruhi ne tujhe aisa kaha kia?!”

Abhi ne Ruhi ke taraf dekhte hue haan kaha Tony ko. To Tony ne bhi Ruhi ke taraf dekha aur kaha,

“are dil pe mat le yaar ussne zaroor mazaak kiya hoga tere se!”

Abhi: “mazaak mein bhi koyi aisa kehta hai kia Tony? Mere dil ke andar ghussi wo baat, bahot takliff hua mujhe usski yeh baat sunkar. Laga ke ek khajar bhonk diye seene mein mere”

Tony ne kaha:

“are bhai dekh wo kitni udaas dikh rahi hai, usska chehra to dekh….”

Abhi ne Ruhi ke taraf dekha, usski aankhon mein dekha ke sach mein bahot udaasi thi, jaise Abhi se sorry keh rahe the usski nazrein,

Tony ne kaha,

“Sun mujhe exactly bata kia hua baat kaise shuru hui aur end kaise hui tab main tujhe bataunga ke ussne mazaak kiya ke nahin bata mujhe!”

Jab Abhi ne puri wakiya sunaya Tony ko to Tony ne kaha,

“Are paagal wo 100% mazaak kar rahi thi, aur tumne ussko koyi jawaab bhi nahin diya bina kuch kahe laut aaye to issi liye wo itni udaas hai dekh to, lagta hai rone wali hai… kia yaar jhagra bhi shuru ho gaye tum donon ke?!”

Abhi ne phir Ruhi ke chehre mein dekha to iss baar shaayad Ruhi bhi khafa hui aur andar chali gayi Abhi ko teerchi nazar se dekh kar!”

Lunch time tak Ruhi nahin dikhi, aur nah Abhi ne ussko dhunda. Ab pata nahin ke ghar ke andar se Ruhi Abhi ko kahin se jhank rahi thi ke nahin yeh sirf Ruhi ko pata hai.

Thik lunch lene jaane se pehle bus ke andar se ek baar Abhi ne Ruhi ke uss khidki ke taraf dekha, to Ruhi khidki par apne donon elbow teke hue nazar aaye bus mein dekhte hue. Abhi ne seedha usske chehre mein dekha, Ruhi ne gaalon ko phulaate hue jaise Abhi ko mock kiya, phir turant apne jeeb nikaal kar Abhi ko mock kiya Ruhi ne…. yeh Abhi ko bahot hi achcha laga, aur kayi baar Abhi ko weise mock karti gayi apne jeeb se… lag raha tha jaise wo Abhi ko manaane ki koshish kar rahi thi….

Lunch ke liye Abhi washroom ke taraf gaya aur Ruhi wahin rahi apne khidki par teke hue. Abhi ko pata tha ke Ruhi wahan usska wait karegi kyunke har roz lunch ke baat Abhi wahan uss se baat karne jaata hai. Magar aaj Abhi nahin gaya usske paas! Ruhi wait karti rahi aur ek baar Abhi aur Tony donon nikle, bus ke paas se guzre, Ruhi khush hui ke Abhi usske paas araha hai magar Abhi aur Tony seedhe chale gaye main road ke taraf, Ruhi wait karti rahi magar Abhi nahin aya lunch time ki break khatam hone tak. Jab 12.45 ho gaye Ruhi ne time dekha to ussko pata tha ke ab work resume karega Abhi to uss se baat nahin karega….. ussne Abhi ko main road se wapas aate dekha, Abhi ne usske taraf sirf ek baar dekha, Ruhi wahi rahi apne kamre ke andar se khidki par lean hote hue, aur Abhi bus ke andar chala gaya aur kaam start kar diya, Ruhi dekhti rahi….. ab jitna ghussa Abhi ko aya tha kuch der pehle uss se ziada ghussa Ruhi ko aayi to ussne khidki bandh kar liya, parde khinch liye, wahan se lounge mein aayi aur saare parde khinch diye aur sone chali gayi….. Abhi ne sab dekha aur chup chap kaam karta gaya kyunke ussko pata tha ke ab Ruhi sone chali gayi hai….

Magar shaam ko kaam khatam karne ke baad jab Abhi washroom gaya to Ruhi nahin dikhi, ghar wapas jaane bhi laga to Ruhi saamne nahin aayi, Abhi wait karta raha magar Ruhi nahin nikli stairs par aur Abhi ko bina Ruhi ko dekhe wapas jaana pada. Ussko ek bhaaripan mehsoos hone laga tha, saans lene mein takliff hone lagi thi, ussne socha lunch time mein ussko Ruhi se baat karne jana chahiye tha tab sab clear kar leta usske saath… Abhi ne kaha ke Ruhi grudge rakhti hai…..

Abhi uss raat ko der tak beer peeta raha Tony se Ruhi ke baare mein baat karte hue, ghar bilkool nashe mein pahuncha tha uss raat ko.

To be continued…. (2610 words)

Majedar update bhai.
Ek mahina beet gaya? :hmm: fast nahin ho gaya?
Bus bhi kaafi aage tak ban gaya hai. School ki chhuti bhi ho gaye. Bachche bhare pare rahenge ab har roj.
Iss update ki sabse badi key hai Abhi aur Ruhi ki ladaayi. Yeh bhi ho gaya donon mein? Socha hi nahin tha ke yeh bhi hoga pyar se pehle.
Misunderstandings jaldi end ho donon k bich bhai.
Superb update.
 

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Update 13 The Work Accelerated

Do hafte baad bus ki base ki frame work ho gaya aur Manoj ne photo liya to aisa tha:

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Ab iss frame se lekar upar tak baaki ke lohe ko weld karna tha bus ki complete frame banana ke liye…..

Ek mahine tak kuch aisa hi chala Abhi aur Ruhi ke beech. Abhi Ruhi ko paagalon ki had tak pyar karne laga tha. Usske bina jina naamumkin ho gaya tha Abhi ke liye ab. Subha shaam, raat din Abhi ke khayaalon mein ab sirf Ruhi rehti thi. Jaise Ruhi Abhi ki saans lene ki zarya thi, Abhi ki oxygen thi wo. Ghar mein apni behen se sirf Ruhi ki baatein karta, diary mein 100 pages likh chuka tha “The Days I Spent At Ruhi’s Place” wale diary mein. Aur Naina, Abhi ki chhoti behen sab padhti thi uss diary mein. Jitna kuch guzra tha Ruhi ke saath uss ek mahine mein sab likha hua tha uss diary mein, aur Naina ko sab pata tha.

Naina ne Abhi se Ruhi ki ek photo laane ke liye kaha. Abhi khud kayi dinon se Ruhi se usski ek photo mang raha tha magar Ruhi dene se inkaar kar rahi thi. Aaj ke zamaane mein yeh sab hua hota to seikhron pics le liya hota Abhi ne Ruhi ki hai nah dosto?

Iss ek mahine mein Abhi kuch aur bhi close ho gaya tha Ruhi se. Aksar usski maa saath hoti jab Abhi Ruhi se baat karta. Wo shayad iss liye usski maa weisa karti thi, taake Mehboob ko kehne ka mauka nah mile ke Abhi aur Ruhi akele mein baatein kar rahe the. Aisa Abhi soch raha tha. Magar kabhi kabhi Abhi akele bhi baat karta tha Ruhi se chhup chhupa kar. Kabhi Ruhi normal rehti, Abhi ki har baat ko maanti, shaam ko present rehti Abhi ke jaane ke waqt to kabhi bilkool nahin aati jaise jaan bujh kar Abhi ko tarpaane ke liye. Kissi din Abhi behad khush dikhta to kissi din udaas kaam karta kyun ke Ruhi saamne nahin aati.

Har Saturdays ko kaam 2 se 2.30 ko end hote aur sabhi Saturdays ko Ruhi apni course ke liye jaati aur Abhi ussko bus ke jagah se main road tak ya kabhi bus stop tak chorrne jaata aur usski maa donon ko dekh kar hanssti. Magar jiss Saturday ko Mehboob hota aangan mein tab to Abhi nahin jaa paata Ruhi ke saath, magar ek trick karta abhi, cigarrte kharidne ke bahane jaldi se jata Ruhi se bus stop par milne aur baat karne.

Har Saturdays ko Ruhi ek alag dress pehenti jiss mein wo behad khubsurat dikhti aur Abhi machal jata, aur bhi paagal hota usski khubsurti ko dekh kar. Hona bhi tha har roz Ruhi ghar par apne gharelu kapdon mein Abhi ke samne hoti thi, to jab saj sanwar kar acchhi kapdon mein nikalti to 100 gunah ziada khubsurat to lagni hi thi….

Abhi ko apne dil ki baat kehne ko mann kiya Ruhi se… thoda ghabra bhi raha tha Abhi ke sahi waqt hai kahein ya nahin, ya thode din aur wait karen…. Phir khud se kehta ke nahin aur kuch din intezaar karte hein….. kaam jaldi aage badh raha tha aur ab lagne laga tha ke 4 mahine se pehle hi kaam pura ho jaega, iss liye Abhi ko ab jaldi tha Ruhi se baat karne ke liye….

Uss aagan mein takriban sab ko pata lag chuka tha ke Abhi aur Ruhi ke bich kuch chal raha hai…. Saeed team ke charon ko pata chal gaya tha ke Abhi Ruhi se behad pyar karta hai. Saeed ko bhi pata tha aur Mehboob ko bhi pata tha magar wo anjaan banne ka naatak karta tha. Usski biwi Rahima ko pura yakeen tha ke Abhi Ruhi se pyar karta hai kyunke ussne kayi baar Abhi ko Ruhi se isharon mein baat karte hue dekh liya tha washroom se, aur Rahima ne Ruhi ko isharon se jawaab dete hue bhi dekha tha.

Ab itna pata nahin chala tha ke kia Rahima ne wo sab Mehboob ko bataya tha ya nahin isske baare mein waqt aane par pata chalega.

Shweta weekends mein aati thi aur kabhi 3 ya 4 din baad jaati thi. Mehboob ki beti jo Primary school jaati thi, wo bhi Abhi se hamesha baatein karti thi, chhoti thi, aur jiss din Shweta aur Farzina(Mehboob ki beti) saath khelte to kaafi shor hote the aangan mein…. Donn ladkiyan khelte waqt kayi baar Abhi ke paas aate uss se baatein karte, ussko cherrte, chhute etc…. Aur Ruhi kadhi donon ko dekhti. Kabhi kabhi to koyi baat kehna hota to Ruhi Farzina ko kehti jaakar Abhi se kehne ke liye.

Phir aaye school ki chhutiyon ke din. Der mahina school, college sab bandh, aur saare bache at home. Ruhi ka bhai Mahesh bhi ab har roz at home. Abhi ko ab fikar hone laga ke ussko kitne ache mauke mile the Ruhi se apne dil ki baat kehne ko magar ussne nahin kaha aur ab der mahina aur wait karna padega, aur bus ke upar wale frames bhi weld ho chuke the aur ab bus aisa dikhne laga tha takriban:


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Ye photo ek example hai aur yeh ek garage ke andar hai, magar wahan Abhi wala chasis par tha aur aangan mein tha peyr ke niche tha.
Abhi aise hi weld karta tha, aur itna ooncha bus ki body ban gaye the ek mahine mein, sab ho gaya tha….

Aur Abhi ko ab lagne laga ke agle der mahinon mein bus ko complete kar diya jaega. To ussko bada fikar hua ke ab der mahina bacha hai usske paas Ruhi se apne dil ki baat kehne ke liye, ya ussko propose karne ke liye… agar der mahine mein kaam end hua to matlab schools resume hone tak bus road par chalne lagega. Abhi ko ab waqt kum dikhne laga…. Ussko fikar hua aur socha ab to Ruhi se kehna padega sab kuch….. magar ussko pata nahin kyun darr sa lag raha tha, ussko darr tha ke Ruhi naah nah karde. Aur yeh bhi soch raha tha Abhi ke yeh bhi ho sakta hai ke Ruhi intezaar kar rahi ho ke kab Abhi ussko propose karega. Abhi ki saansein phul rahe the yeh sab sochte hue. Ussko himmat nahin ho rahi thi Ruhi se yeh kehne ke liye ke wo uss se pyar karta hai.

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Sab mamool par chal rahe the aur ek din kaam karte waqt har roz ki tarah Abhi ne Ruhi ko kapde dhote hue dekha. Takriban har subha ke 10 baje Ruhi uss pathar par kapde dhote hue nazar aati hi thi aur Abhi uss se isharon mein baat karta tha aur Ruhi bhi thodi chanchal adaa se Abhi ko dekhti aur baat karti. Kabhi kabhi usski maa bhi karib hoti thi Ruhi ke aur wo bhi dekhti un donon ko ishaare se baat karrte hue aur wo buss hanssti aur Ruhi se puchti ke kia keh raha hai Abhi. Abhi ko achchi tarah se pata tha ke Ruhi ki maa ko sab pata hai aur wo encourage karti thi jaise apni beti ko Abhi se weise baat karne ko. Ussko koyi problem nahin thi ke usski beti Abhi ke close jaaye, baat kare ya kuch bhi.

Phir kuch der baad Ruhi dhoe hue kapdon ko sukhne ke liye daal rahi thi taar par aur usski maa andar chali gayi thi to Abhi ka mann kiya ke wo Ruhi se jaakar baat kare…. Aur gaya bhi.

Mehboob bus ke paas hi tha, baaki sab log the. Jab Abhi Ruhi ke paas gaya to Mehboob dekh raha tha. Abhi ne Ruhi ke paas hote hue kaha,

“Ek baat kehni hai tumse Ruhi.”

Ruhi ne bus ke taraf dekhte hue kaha,

“Aap kyun Mehboob chacha ke presence mein yahan aaye ho? mujhko problems hogi jaao nah please!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Ari mere khayal se to ab sabko pata hai hamaare baare mein nah? Aur tumhari mummy bhi yahin hai nah?”

Ruhi muskuraayi aur kaha,

“kia pata hai sabko hamaare baare mein?”

Abhi: “yeh bhi kehna padega Ruhi?!”

Ruhi: “haan kehna to padega hi nah?

Abhi: “main ne kaha tha nah ke ishara kaafi hota hai to ek mahina ho gaya aur tumko pata nahin kia ab tak?”

Ruhi ne bus ke taraf dekha kapde taar par taangte hue aur weise hi muskuraate hue kaha,

“Ek mahine mein kia hota hai ek saal bhi aisa hi chal sakta hai kyun? Aap ko nahin passand jaisa chal raha hai”

Abhi: “phir usske baad kia hoga?”

Ruhi: “kuch bhi nahin kyun kia hona chahiye?”

Abhi: “Ruhi shaayad der mahinon mein bus complete ho jaega, kaam khatam ho jaega, yahan se main chala jaunga!”

Ruhi ne kuch aisa jawaab diya jiss se Abhi ke dil ko choat pahuncha.

Ruhi ne hansste hue kaha,

“Oh! chale jaoge aap? Uff matlab bala tal jaegi phir”

Ye jawaab sunkar Abhi ka dil baith gaya aur usske paas koyi bhi jawaab nahin tha Ruhi ko dene ke liye. Thoda ghussa bhi aya aur turant wahan se laut gaya bus ke paas.

Ab pata nahin Ruhi ne mazaak kiya tha ya serious thi. Ussne muskuraate, hansste hue kaha tha wo baat, shaayad Ruhi ne hi nahin socha tha ke Abhi wahan se laut jaega. Aur Shayad Abhi ko bina kuch bole wapas lautte hue dekh kar Ruhi ko apni ghalati ka ehsaas hua ke ussne kuch ghalat keh diya aur usski muskurahat udaas chehre mein badal gayi jiss waqt Abhi ke kadam wahan se bus ke taraf badhne lage the.

Abhi bus ki frame ke andar kaam kar raha tha to andar chala gaya, chehra utra hua tha to Mehboob ne pucha,

“kia hua Abhi? Chehra kyun achanak utra hua hai kissi ne kuch kaha kia tujhe?!”

Abhi ne nah kaha aur apne kaam karne laga to Mehboob ne mudhkar Ruhi ko dekha, to iss liye ke Abhi ko pata tha ke wo Ruhi ko dekh raha hoga kyun ke ussne donon ko baat karte hue dekha tha to Abhi ne bhi Ruhi ko dekha aur paaya ke Ruhi ka bhi chehra utra hua tha aur bahot hi sad face se Abhi ke taraf dekh rahi thi kapde tangte hue.

Abhi kaam karte hue badbadaata gaya ghusse mein,

“Main bala hoon? Bala tal jaegi mere chale jaane se? To kyun mere saath hanss hanss kar baat karti hai? Kyun mera intezar karti hi, kyun mujhse baat karti hai?! Achah matlab ussko Khushi hogi mere chale jaane se yeh baat hai!!”

Tony ne pucha,

“are kia ho gaya? Kaun khush hoga tere jaane se?”

Abhi ne Tony se kaha,

“Mere jaane se bala tal jaegi yaar main yahan ziada hoon, kissi ko Khushi hogi jab mera yahan aana band ho jaega!”

Tony ne pucha,

“What? Kia Ruhi ne tujhe aisa kaha kia?!”

Abhi ne Ruhi ke taraf dekhte hue haan kaha Tony ko. To Tony ne bhi Ruhi ke taraf dekha aur kaha,

“are dil pe mat le yaar ussne zaroor mazaak kiya hoga tere se!”

Abhi: “mazaak mein bhi koyi aisa kehta hai kia Tony? Mere dil ke andar ghussi wo baat, bahot takliff hua mujhe usski yeh baat sunkar. Laga ke ek khajar bhonk diye seene mein mere”

Tony ne kaha:

“are bhai dekh wo kitni udaas dikh rahi hai, usska chehra to dekh….”

Abhi ne Ruhi ke taraf dekha, usski aankhon mein dekha ke sach mein bahot udaasi thi, jaise Abhi se sorry keh rahe the usski nazrein,

Tony ne kaha,

“Sun mujhe exactly bata kia hua baat kaise shuru hui aur end kaise hui tab main tujhe bataunga ke ussne mazaak kiya ke nahin bata mujhe!”

Jab Abhi ne puri wakiya sunaya Tony ko to Tony ne kaha,

“Are paagal wo 100% mazaak kar rahi thi, aur tumne ussko koyi jawaab bhi nahin diya bina kuch kahe laut aaye to issi liye wo itni udaas hai dekh to, lagta hai rone wali hai… kia yaar jhagra bhi shuru ho gaye tum donon ke?!”

Abhi ne phir Ruhi ke chehre mein dekha to iss baar shaayad Ruhi bhi khafa hui aur andar chali gayi Abhi ko teerchi nazar se dekh kar!”

Lunch time tak Ruhi nahin dikhi, aur nah Abhi ne ussko dhunda. Ab pata nahin ke ghar ke andar se Ruhi Abhi ko kahin se jhank rahi thi ke nahin yeh sirf Ruhi ko pata hai.

Thik lunch lene jaane se pehle bus ke andar se ek baar Abhi ne Ruhi ke uss khidki ke taraf dekha, to Ruhi khidki par apne donon elbow teke hue nazar aaye bus mein dekhte hue. Abhi ne seedha usske chehre mein dekha, Ruhi ne gaalon ko phulaate hue jaise Abhi ko mock kiya, phir turant apne jeeb nikaal kar Abhi ko mock kiya Ruhi ne…. yeh Abhi ko bahot hi achcha laga, aur kayi baar Abhi ko weise mock karti gayi apne jeeb se… lag raha tha jaise wo Abhi ko manaane ki koshish kar rahi thi….

Lunch ke liye Abhi washroom ke taraf gaya aur Ruhi wahin rahi apne khidki par teke hue. Abhi ko pata tha ke Ruhi wahan usska wait karegi kyunke har roz lunch ke baat Abhi wahan uss se baat karne jaata hai. Magar aaj Abhi nahin gaya usske paas! Ruhi wait karti rahi aur ek baar Abhi aur Tony donon nikle, bus ke paas se guzre, Ruhi khush hui ke Abhi usske paas araha hai magar Abhi aur Tony seedhe chale gaye main road ke taraf, Ruhi wait karti rahi magar Abhi nahin aya lunch time ki break khatam hone tak. Jab 12.45 ho gaye Ruhi ne time dekha to ussko pata tha ke ab work resume karega Abhi to uss se baat nahin karega….. ussne Abhi ko main road se wapas aate dekha, Abhi ne usske taraf sirf ek baar dekha, Ruhi wahi rahi apne kamre ke andar se khidki par lean hote hue, aur Abhi bus ke andar chala gaya aur kaam start kar diya, Ruhi dekhti rahi….. ab jitna ghussa Abhi ko aya tha kuch der pehle uss se ziada ghussa Ruhi ko aayi to ussne khidki bandh kar liya, parde khinch liye, wahan se lounge mein aayi aur saare parde khinch diye aur sone chali gayi….. Abhi ne sab dekha aur chup chap kaam karta gaya kyunke ussko pata tha ke ab Ruhi sone chali gayi hai….

Magar shaam ko kaam khatam karne ke baad jab Abhi washroom gaya to Ruhi nahin dikhi, ghar wapas jaane bhi laga to Ruhi saamne nahin aayi, Abhi wait karta raha magar Ruhi nahin nikli stairs par aur Abhi ko bina Ruhi ko dekhe wapas jaana pada. Ussko ek bhaaripan mehsoos hone laga tha, saans lene mein takliff hone lagi thi, ussne socha lunch time mein ussko Ruhi se baat karne jana chahiye tha tab sab clear kar leta usske saath… Abhi ne kaha ke Ruhi grudge rakhti hai…..

Abhi uss raat ko der tak beer peeta raha Tony se Ruhi ke baare mein baat karte hue, ghar bilkool nashe mein pahuncha tha uss raat ko.

To be continued…. (2610 words)

Uttam update Casi ji.
Sab kuch itna thik chal raha tha k achanak donon mein jhagda bhi ho gaya. Ye to soch k baahar tha k pyar thik se hua nahin aur ek ladaayi bhi ho gayi donon mein.
Yeh bhi hona tha jab talaash pyar ki kiya ja raha hai ladaayi bhi baahein fasaare hajir hai. Ajib baat hai.
Mast update Casi ji ab dekhte hein kaise donon ki ladaayi ki end hote hein.
 

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Update 13 The Work Accelerated

Do hafte baad bus ki base ki frame work ho gaya aur Manoj ne photo liya to aisa tha:

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Ab iss frame se lekar upar tak baaki ke lohe ko weld karna tha bus ki complete frame banana ke liye…..

Ek mahine tak kuch aisa hi chala Abhi aur Ruhi ke beech. Abhi Ruhi ko paagalon ki had tak pyar karne laga tha. Usske bina jina naamumkin ho gaya tha Abhi ke liye ab. Subha shaam, raat din Abhi ke khayaalon mein ab sirf Ruhi rehti thi. Jaise Ruhi Abhi ki saans lene ki zarya thi, Abhi ki oxygen thi wo. Ghar mein apni behen se sirf Ruhi ki baatein karta, diary mein 100 pages likh chuka tha “The Days I Spent At Ruhi’s Place” wale diary mein. Aur Naina, Abhi ki chhoti behen sab padhti thi uss diary mein. Jitna kuch guzra tha Ruhi ke saath uss ek mahine mein sab likha hua tha uss diary mein, aur Naina ko sab pata tha.

Naina ne Abhi se Ruhi ki ek photo laane ke liye kaha. Abhi khud kayi dinon se Ruhi se usski ek photo mang raha tha magar Ruhi dene se inkaar kar rahi thi. Aaj ke zamaane mein yeh sab hua hota to seikhron pics le liya hota Abhi ne Ruhi ki hai nah dosto?

Iss ek mahine mein Abhi kuch aur bhi close ho gaya tha Ruhi se. Aksar usski maa saath hoti jab Abhi Ruhi se baat karta. Wo shayad iss liye usski maa weisa karti thi, taake Mehboob ko kehne ka mauka nah mile ke Abhi aur Ruhi akele mein baatein kar rahe the. Aisa Abhi soch raha tha. Magar kabhi kabhi Abhi akele bhi baat karta tha Ruhi se chhup chhupa kar. Kabhi Ruhi normal rehti, Abhi ki har baat ko maanti, shaam ko present rehti Abhi ke jaane ke waqt to kabhi bilkool nahin aati jaise jaan bujh kar Abhi ko tarpaane ke liye. Kissi din Abhi behad khush dikhta to kissi din udaas kaam karta kyun ke Ruhi saamne nahin aati.

Har Saturdays ko kaam 2 se 2.30 ko end hote aur sabhi Saturdays ko Ruhi apni course ke liye jaati aur Abhi ussko bus ke jagah se main road tak ya kabhi bus stop tak chorrne jaata aur usski maa donon ko dekh kar hanssti. Magar jiss Saturday ko Mehboob hota aangan mein tab to Abhi nahin jaa paata Ruhi ke saath, magar ek trick karta abhi, cigarrte kharidne ke bahane jaldi se jata Ruhi se bus stop par milne aur baat karne.

Har Saturdays ko Ruhi ek alag dress pehenti jiss mein wo behad khubsurat dikhti aur Abhi machal jata, aur bhi paagal hota usski khubsurti ko dekh kar. Hona bhi tha har roz Ruhi ghar par apne gharelu kapdon mein Abhi ke samne hoti thi, to jab saj sanwar kar acchhi kapdon mein nikalti to 100 gunah ziada khubsurat to lagni hi thi….

Abhi ko apne dil ki baat kehne ko mann kiya Ruhi se… thoda ghabra bhi raha tha Abhi ke sahi waqt hai kahein ya nahin, ya thode din aur wait karen…. Phir khud se kehta ke nahin aur kuch din intezaar karte hein….. kaam jaldi aage badh raha tha aur ab lagne laga tha ke 4 mahine se pehle hi kaam pura ho jaega, iss liye Abhi ko ab jaldi tha Ruhi se baat karne ke liye….

Uss aagan mein takriban sab ko pata lag chuka tha ke Abhi aur Ruhi ke bich kuch chal raha hai…. Saeed team ke charon ko pata chal gaya tha ke Abhi Ruhi se behad pyar karta hai. Saeed ko bhi pata tha aur Mehboob ko bhi pata tha magar wo anjaan banne ka naatak karta tha. Usski biwi Rahima ko pura yakeen tha ke Abhi Ruhi se pyar karta hai kyunke ussne kayi baar Abhi ko Ruhi se isharon mein baat karte hue dekh liya tha washroom se, aur Rahima ne Ruhi ko isharon se jawaab dete hue bhi dekha tha.

Ab itna pata nahin chala tha ke kia Rahima ne wo sab Mehboob ko bataya tha ya nahin isske baare mein waqt aane par pata chalega.

Shweta weekends mein aati thi aur kabhi 3 ya 4 din baad jaati thi. Mehboob ki beti jo Primary school jaati thi, wo bhi Abhi se hamesha baatein karti thi, chhoti thi, aur jiss din Shweta aur Farzina(Mehboob ki beti) saath khelte to kaafi shor hote the aangan mein…. Donn ladkiyan khelte waqt kayi baar Abhi ke paas aate uss se baatein karte, ussko cherrte, chhute etc…. Aur Ruhi kadhi donon ko dekhti. Kabhi kabhi to koyi baat kehna hota to Ruhi Farzina ko kehti jaakar Abhi se kehne ke liye.

Phir aaye school ki chhutiyon ke din. Der mahina school, college sab bandh, aur saare bache at home. Ruhi ka bhai Mahesh bhi ab har roz at home. Abhi ko ab fikar hone laga ke ussko kitne ache mauke mile the Ruhi se apne dil ki baat kehne ko magar ussne nahin kaha aur ab der mahina aur wait karna padega, aur bus ke upar wale frames bhi weld ho chuke the aur ab bus aisa dikhne laga tha takriban:


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Ye photo ek example hai aur yeh ek garage ke andar hai, magar wahan Abhi wala chasis par tha aur aangan mein tha peyr ke niche tha.
Abhi aise hi weld karta tha, aur itna ooncha bus ki body ban gaye the ek mahine mein, sab ho gaya tha….

Aur Abhi ko ab lagne laga ke agle der mahinon mein bus ko complete kar diya jaega. To ussko bada fikar hua ke ab der mahina bacha hai usske paas Ruhi se apne dil ki baat kehne ke liye, ya ussko propose karne ke liye… agar der mahine mein kaam end hua to matlab schools resume hone tak bus road par chalne lagega. Abhi ko ab waqt kum dikhne laga…. Ussko fikar hua aur socha ab to Ruhi se kehna padega sab kuch….. magar ussko pata nahin kyun darr sa lag raha tha, ussko darr tha ke Ruhi naah nah karde. Aur yeh bhi soch raha tha Abhi ke yeh bhi ho sakta hai ke Ruhi intezaar kar rahi ho ke kab Abhi ussko propose karega. Abhi ki saansein phul rahe the yeh sab sochte hue. Ussko himmat nahin ho rahi thi Ruhi se yeh kehne ke liye ke wo uss se pyar karta hai.

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Sab mamool par chal rahe the aur ek din kaam karte waqt har roz ki tarah Abhi ne Ruhi ko kapde dhote hue dekha. Takriban har subha ke 10 baje Ruhi uss pathar par kapde dhote hue nazar aati hi thi aur Abhi uss se isharon mein baat karta tha aur Ruhi bhi thodi chanchal adaa se Abhi ko dekhti aur baat karti. Kabhi kabhi usski maa bhi karib hoti thi Ruhi ke aur wo bhi dekhti un donon ko ishaare se baat karrte hue aur wo buss hanssti aur Ruhi se puchti ke kia keh raha hai Abhi. Abhi ko achchi tarah se pata tha ke Ruhi ki maa ko sab pata hai aur wo encourage karti thi jaise apni beti ko Abhi se weise baat karne ko. Ussko koyi problem nahin thi ke usski beti Abhi ke close jaaye, baat kare ya kuch bhi.

Phir kuch der baad Ruhi dhoe hue kapdon ko sukhne ke liye daal rahi thi taar par aur usski maa andar chali gayi thi to Abhi ka mann kiya ke wo Ruhi se jaakar baat kare…. Aur gaya bhi.

Mehboob bus ke paas hi tha, baaki sab log the. Jab Abhi Ruhi ke paas gaya to Mehboob dekh raha tha. Abhi ne Ruhi ke paas hote hue kaha,

“Ek baat kehni hai tumse Ruhi.”

Ruhi ne bus ke taraf dekhte hue kaha,

“Aap kyun Mehboob chacha ke presence mein yahan aaye ho? mujhko problems hogi jaao nah please!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Ari mere khayal se to ab sabko pata hai hamaare baare mein nah? Aur tumhari mummy bhi yahin hai nah?”

Ruhi muskuraayi aur kaha,

“kia pata hai sabko hamaare baare mein?”

Abhi: “yeh bhi kehna padega Ruhi?!”

Ruhi: “haan kehna to padega hi nah?

Abhi: “main ne kaha tha nah ke ishara kaafi hota hai to ek mahina ho gaya aur tumko pata nahin kia ab tak?”

Ruhi ne bus ke taraf dekha kapde taar par taangte hue aur weise hi muskuraate hue kaha,

“Ek mahine mein kia hota hai ek saal bhi aisa hi chal sakta hai kyun? Aap ko nahin passand jaisa chal raha hai”

Abhi: “phir usske baad kia hoga?”

Ruhi: “kuch bhi nahin kyun kia hona chahiye?”

Abhi: “Ruhi shaayad der mahinon mein bus complete ho jaega, kaam khatam ho jaega, yahan se main chala jaunga!”

Ruhi ne kuch aisa jawaab diya jiss se Abhi ke dil ko choat pahuncha.

Ruhi ne hansste hue kaha,

“Oh! chale jaoge aap? Uff matlab bala tal jaegi phir”

Ye jawaab sunkar Abhi ka dil baith gaya aur usske paas koyi bhi jawaab nahin tha Ruhi ko dene ke liye. Thoda ghussa bhi aya aur turant wahan se laut gaya bus ke paas.

Ab pata nahin Ruhi ne mazaak kiya tha ya serious thi. Ussne muskuraate, hansste hue kaha tha wo baat, shaayad Ruhi ne hi nahin socha tha ke Abhi wahan se laut jaega. Aur Shayad Abhi ko bina kuch bole wapas lautte hue dekh kar Ruhi ko apni ghalati ka ehsaas hua ke ussne kuch ghalat keh diya aur usski muskurahat udaas chehre mein badal gayi jiss waqt Abhi ke kadam wahan se bus ke taraf badhne lage the.

Abhi bus ki frame ke andar kaam kar raha tha to andar chala gaya, chehra utra hua tha to Mehboob ne pucha,

“kia hua Abhi? Chehra kyun achanak utra hua hai kissi ne kuch kaha kia tujhe?!”

Abhi ne nah kaha aur apne kaam karne laga to Mehboob ne mudhkar Ruhi ko dekha, to iss liye ke Abhi ko pata tha ke wo Ruhi ko dekh raha hoga kyun ke ussne donon ko baat karte hue dekha tha to Abhi ne bhi Ruhi ko dekha aur paaya ke Ruhi ka bhi chehra utra hua tha aur bahot hi sad face se Abhi ke taraf dekh rahi thi kapde tangte hue.

Abhi kaam karte hue badbadaata gaya ghusse mein,

“Main bala hoon? Bala tal jaegi mere chale jaane se? To kyun mere saath hanss hanss kar baat karti hai? Kyun mera intezar karti hi, kyun mujhse baat karti hai?! Achah matlab ussko Khushi hogi mere chale jaane se yeh baat hai!!”

Tony ne pucha,

“are kia ho gaya? Kaun khush hoga tere jaane se?”

Abhi ne Tony se kaha,

“Mere jaane se bala tal jaegi yaar main yahan ziada hoon, kissi ko Khushi hogi jab mera yahan aana band ho jaega!”

Tony ne pucha,

“What? Kia Ruhi ne tujhe aisa kaha kia?!”

Abhi ne Ruhi ke taraf dekhte hue haan kaha Tony ko. To Tony ne bhi Ruhi ke taraf dekha aur kaha,

“are dil pe mat le yaar ussne zaroor mazaak kiya hoga tere se!”

Abhi: “mazaak mein bhi koyi aisa kehta hai kia Tony? Mere dil ke andar ghussi wo baat, bahot takliff hua mujhe usski yeh baat sunkar. Laga ke ek khajar bhonk diye seene mein mere”

Tony ne kaha:

“are bhai dekh wo kitni udaas dikh rahi hai, usska chehra to dekh….”

Abhi ne Ruhi ke taraf dekha, usski aankhon mein dekha ke sach mein bahot udaasi thi, jaise Abhi se sorry keh rahe the usski nazrein,

Tony ne kaha,

“Sun mujhe exactly bata kia hua baat kaise shuru hui aur end kaise hui tab main tujhe bataunga ke ussne mazaak kiya ke nahin bata mujhe!”

Jab Abhi ne puri wakiya sunaya Tony ko to Tony ne kaha,

“Are paagal wo 100% mazaak kar rahi thi, aur tumne ussko koyi jawaab bhi nahin diya bina kuch kahe laut aaye to issi liye wo itni udaas hai dekh to, lagta hai rone wali hai… kia yaar jhagra bhi shuru ho gaye tum donon ke?!”

Abhi ne phir Ruhi ke chehre mein dekha to iss baar shaayad Ruhi bhi khafa hui aur andar chali gayi Abhi ko teerchi nazar se dekh kar!”

Lunch time tak Ruhi nahin dikhi, aur nah Abhi ne ussko dhunda. Ab pata nahin ke ghar ke andar se Ruhi Abhi ko kahin se jhank rahi thi ke nahin yeh sirf Ruhi ko pata hai.

Thik lunch lene jaane se pehle bus ke andar se ek baar Abhi ne Ruhi ke uss khidki ke taraf dekha, to Ruhi khidki par apne donon elbow teke hue nazar aaye bus mein dekhte hue. Abhi ne seedha usske chehre mein dekha, Ruhi ne gaalon ko phulaate hue jaise Abhi ko mock kiya, phir turant apne jeeb nikaal kar Abhi ko mock kiya Ruhi ne…. yeh Abhi ko bahot hi achcha laga, aur kayi baar Abhi ko weise mock karti gayi apne jeeb se… lag raha tha jaise wo Abhi ko manaane ki koshish kar rahi thi….

Lunch ke liye Abhi washroom ke taraf gaya aur Ruhi wahin rahi apne khidki par teke hue. Abhi ko pata tha ke Ruhi wahan usska wait karegi kyunke har roz lunch ke baat Abhi wahan uss se baat karne jaata hai. Magar aaj Abhi nahin gaya usske paas! Ruhi wait karti rahi aur ek baar Abhi aur Tony donon nikle, bus ke paas se guzre, Ruhi khush hui ke Abhi usske paas araha hai magar Abhi aur Tony seedhe chale gaye main road ke taraf, Ruhi wait karti rahi magar Abhi nahin aya lunch time ki break khatam hone tak. Jab 12.45 ho gaye Ruhi ne time dekha to ussko pata tha ke ab work resume karega Abhi to uss se baat nahin karega….. ussne Abhi ko main road se wapas aate dekha, Abhi ne usske taraf sirf ek baar dekha, Ruhi wahi rahi apne kamre ke andar se khidki par lean hote hue, aur Abhi bus ke andar chala gaya aur kaam start kar diya, Ruhi dekhti rahi….. ab jitna ghussa Abhi ko aya tha kuch der pehle uss se ziada ghussa Ruhi ko aayi to ussne khidki bandh kar liya, parde khinch liye, wahan se lounge mein aayi aur saare parde khinch diye aur sone chali gayi….. Abhi ne sab dekha aur chup chap kaam karta gaya kyunke ussko pata tha ke ab Ruhi sone chali gayi hai….

Magar shaam ko kaam khatam karne ke baad jab Abhi washroom gaya to Ruhi nahin dikhi, ghar wapas jaane bhi laga to Ruhi saamne nahin aayi, Abhi wait karta raha magar Ruhi nahin nikli stairs par aur Abhi ko bina Ruhi ko dekhe wapas jaana pada. Ussko ek bhaaripan mehsoos hone laga tha, saans lene mein takliff hone lagi thi, ussne socha lunch time mein ussko Ruhi se baat karne jana chahiye tha tab sab clear kar leta usske saath… Abhi ne kaha ke Ruhi grudge rakhti hai…..

Abhi uss raat ko der tak beer peeta raha Tony se Ruhi ke baare mein baat karte hue, ghar bilkool nashe mein pahuncha tha uss raat ko.

To be continued…. (2610 words)

This was the least expected! A fight, a cold war. Love has not yet planted its seed well a fight took place between the lovers. Okay could be this quarrel will bring them closer now.
Very nice update mate. Keep it up.
 
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