Casi bro, first I hv to say that to read an update written by Casinar, the reader need to be cool, relaxed, full at ease and read with concentration.
Bro you write with such intensity that if we want to read it leisurely its impossible. You write and give such deep details and descriptions that you make us glued to the update and forget everything else.
You write so beautifully that the readers acquire a real pleasure during the read.
So was I while I start reading your update. And this update was not different.
You always have something to say which bring my attention to the script and make my mind go wild and think strange things.
The pleasure of reading from you is apart and this pleasure makes me get much eager to wait and the joy I feel to see an update is immence.
So Shweta is now introduced in the story. And you described this cute little girl so pretty well that all readers have loved this cutie pie.
She is like a copy of Ruhi when she was her age.
Many interesting scenes have been created for this update and they are really splendid.
Like Shweta holdind Abhi's pant for support while hiding behind him, Ruhi watching and talking to Shwetha mentioning Abhi's name in presence of all others. And Abhi holding Ruhi's hand for the first time and the most important scene Abhi telling Ruhi that he wishes to hold her in his arms. Wow that was unexpected.
And Ruhi's response to that was as natural as we often get to see in general. Very very interesting bro. Just loved that.
And apart from that all the rest were superb. The conversation at the window of Ruhi during the lunch time was cool too.
Ruhi now seems to hv started loving Abhi. But either she does not want to show or she is waiting for Abhi to do the first step.
Wonderful update bro. Loved it very much
Wanted to read more and more despite u hv written 3000 words I felt it was not enough.
Thanks so very much Casi bro for this lovely story which looks very real and i feel like this must hv really happened in someone's life.
Will very eagerly wait for the next update bro.
wo wala scene fantastic tha. Soch raha hoon uss waqt Ruhi ka chehra kitna laal hua hoga jab Shweta ne itni zor se kaha k aap jhuko mujhe aap ko kissy dena hai Ruhi ne kaha.... hahahaha yeh scene bada majedar laga mujhe bhai