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Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

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bahut bahut bahut hi khubsurat update bhai
bahut romantic update hai, poyar chalak raha hai iss update mein,
aap ne behtareen likha hai, aur donon taraf se pyar dikhaya hai
Abhi ne lagbhag apne dil ka haal bayaan kar hi diya hai ruhi ko
aur wo samajh chuki hai jiss tarah se apni maa se kaha ussne.
magar maa beti ke baaton se aisa lag raha hai ke koyi problem hai ruhi ke taraf se
kuch to hai lagta hai jo rubi ko kehna ya chhupana hai abhi se.
Agar aisi bat hai to Abhi ke liye thik nahin hoga
phir bhi aaj jitna kuch hua wo best tha aur bahut passand aya
aap ne bade hi khubsurti se likha hai bhai
sab aankhon ke saamne dikh raha tha hote hue.
keep it up casi bhai, Wonderful :yourock:

appreciation ke liye bahot shukriya Nayan bhai
 

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If Ruhi walks away from Abhi's eyes for a short time, Abhi becomes depressed and restless, which means that Abhi loves Ruhi immensely. Ruhi is only wandering in Abhi's mind and he doesn't know anything. Everything is going wrong with Abhi, so innocent Abhi is sad, but Ruhi is made for Abhi and he gets a glimpse, and Abhi's impression in front of Ruhi is also good.
Abhi is trying his best to tell and convince Ruhi to make him feel his love and I think Ruhi is also becoming unintelligent by understanding that or else she is having fun with Abhi. Loved the way the two talked, I love the scenes you create.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...:heart::heart::heart:

Thanks very very much for the appreciation Aakash bro
happy that you liked it
 

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Casi bhai aap jadugar ho.
Itni khubsurat kaise likh sakta hai koyi. Wah. Uttam update bhai. Bahut hi acha laga iss update ko padhke.
Abhi bilkool hi diwana ho gaya hai Ruhi ka. Usske bina usska jina mushkil ho jaega lagta hai. Itni diwaangi? Mujhe darr hai k Abhi kaise saamna karega agar Ruhi ussko nah mili to?
Update kaafi bada hai, aap ne jinti detail mein likha hai padhne mein utna hi maja aya.
Chalo filhal Ruhi se baat to kar paya, apne dil ki baat aakhir keh diya Abhi ne k shaam ko Ruhi usske saamne rahe....
FANTASTIC update bhai

tehe dil se shukriya Indian bhai
 

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Kamal hain... abhinav, ruhi ko dekh raha hai aur buddha iss baat ko notice kar muskura raha hain.....hmm kuch jyada hi badi gadbari chal rahi hain yahan pe daya.....

yeh shubha shubha ruhi ko kuch ho jata hain kya... I mean to say shubha first time abhi ko dekhte hi dum daba kar bhag jati hain aur uske thode der baad jab next time milti hain abhi se toh usko dekh muskurati bhi hain aur baate bhi karti hai.. maan li ki first day dar gayi thi lekin aaj kya hua tha ke aise bhag gayi thi .... ajib hain... do din se yahin sab ho raha hain wahan pe..

Ek toh khud itni chai piti rahti hain morning ko... abhi ko toh ek baar bhi chai offer nahin kya...... upor se rahima se jalti hain..
Khair
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update casi sir.... Great going :applause::applause::applause:

bahot bahot shukriya naina dear
 
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