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Fantastic review.
Great analysis. Perfect point of views. But I hv no precise answer to your question.
You may hv deifferent point of view, i can point out someone else, you can point another one. I can say its all due to her father as he had let her wife control all. I can also say its due to Ruhi's freedom during college days. I xan say Gaurav, it can be pointed direct to her mother too.
thanks again.... i think you are right regarding the answer to Vikram's question
 

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I can very well UNDERSTAND Abhi's sudden change in his feelings and this wS bound to happen.
Abhi's MAIN AIM was to make those diaries reach Ruhi and she read and answer them. After that is done. Abhi is also done. This is why he got those feelings.
He is right to say his mission is COMPLETE.
So where is love in all that. Yes love dies. Love MUST BE NURTURED, MUST BE FED. AND LOVE FROM ABHI AND RUHI WAS NOT FED AND NURTURED THAT IS WHY IT DIED.
What remains is an emotional bonding which may remain always if they want it to remain.
Very very good update casinar ji. I agree with this update cent per cent.

thanks very very much Amity dear.... i loved your point of view...
these lines are very beautiful and TRUE: ( Love MUST BE NURTURED, MUST BE FED. AND LOVE FROM ABHI AND RUHI WAS NOT FED AND NURTURED THAT IS WHY IT DIED.)
 

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Sabse pahle to thanks bhai....

Ha actually mai mobile par hee use karta hu xforum or mera phone bhi kaafi purana hai....to sach kahun to mujhe pata nahi tha ki maine kitne words likhe hai....

Dusri baat aapne kaha 3000 ke kareeb....jabki mujhe laga ki jitna maine likha hai us se jyada points to maine chhod hee diye....really....
mujhe laga aap kahoge ki vikram bhai aapne kaafi kuch chhod diya update mai.....lekin aapne to kuch alag hee bola.....

Khair iss baat ko yanhi chhodte hai.....


Baat kare maire sawaal ki to....Mere point of view se or samajh se.....OR jitna bhi story ko maine analyse kiya hai uss hisaab se.....

Saari galati jiski hai wo hai......wo hai.....

RUHI KA BAAP.....

AB IS SE AAGE MAI KUCH NAHI KAHUNGA.....AAPKE REPLY KA WAIT KARUNGA.....

AT LAST
THANKS....
are bhai mujhe to bahot khushi i aap ke review se ... itna likha tha aap ne aur kia maangta main bhala?
 

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Reading now
Mujhe darr tha ke aisa koyi update aega jiss mein ab Abhi kahega ke usske dil mein ab Ruhi k liye wo 25 sala wala pyar hi nahin raha.
Aur lo wo update ahi gaya. To main kia kahun.
Mujhe iss liye ye darr tha kyunke real life mein meri ek cousin sister k saath kuch aisa hua tha. Ek ladka uss se pagalon jaise pyar karta tha.
Fir donon alag hi gaye. Cousin sister ko ek buri bimari ho gayi 15 saal baad donon mile. Donon still single the. Cousin ne tab uss se kaha k ab shadi kar lete hein to ladke ne kaha ab wo pyar
Baaki raha hi nahin!!
tehe dil se dhanyawaad Swathi dear :love:
 

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Are ye kia ho gaya? Jiss pyar ko 25 saal precious samajh kar rakha tha aaj usski death ho gayi :lol: mar gaya sala pyar hich daffan ho gaya :lotpot:
Assal baat yeh thi ke Abhi ne 25 salon tak unn diaries ko sirf iss liye rakha tha ke Ruhi ko dikha sake ke ussne kitne dikh jhela tha Ruhi ke liye aur Ruhi ko saabit kar sake ke Abhi uss se kitna pyar karta tha.
Ab dikha diya, Ruhi ne padh liya aur jawaab de diya to baat khalaas. Buss yehi baat thi aur kuch nahin.
Waise apun ye update bahut badhya laga :thumbup:
bahot bahot shukriya King bhai appreciate karne ke liye
 

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Lol main me ulta socha tha ke Abhi Ruhi se shaadi karega. :laugh:
Magar yeh baat bhi sahi hai k 25 saal ke baad wo pyar baaki nahin rehta kyunke Abhi ki life mein pyar beshumaar hai.
Navina hai, aur ab Ruhi ko jaisi Shweta hai aur ek cute si beti Aruhi bhi hai. To jaahir hai ke Abhi ke dil mein ab Ruhi ke liye wo pyar jo tha 25 saal pehle ghat gayi hai.
Haan ye bhi Abhi ne sahi kaha Navina se ke ussko shayad sirf diaries dena tha Ruhi ko. Wo de diya, Ruhi ne padh liya Abhi ka maksad pura hua. Aisa hi hu hoga.....
Phir bhi mera sawaal an ye hai ke agar itna gehra aur sacha pyar tha to sawal hai k kia pyar kabhi SACHA tha bhi???

bahot bahot shukriya Savi ji apni raae dene ke liye :love:
 

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Meri samajh mein nahin araha ab kia kahun. Abhi k mann mein aise ehsaad aenge socha bhi nah tha. Iss kahani ki shuru se ussne jitni gehraayi dikhaaye apne pyar ke ab lag raha sab behaar the? Jhoot the? Ghalat the kia?
Haan ab samajh sakta hoon k kyun ussko ab waisa feel hone laga.... ye ek badle ki tarah hai. Ab abhi ne apna badla liya Ruhi se. Ussko sab padne ko diya, rulaya, apne tab ki pyar ka ehsaas dilaya....
. ABHI KO KHUSHI HUI, CHAIN AAYA AUR USSKA KAAM TAMAAM HUA. Bhai mujhe to aisa hi laga.
bahot bahot shukriya shambhu bhai appreciation ke liye
 

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Update 78 Navina Answers Abhi

Navina ne Ruhi ke saare replies read kiya. Abhi naha kar wapas aya tab tak wo padh rahi thi to Abhi chala gaya apne study mein.
Kuch der baad Navina gayi ussko Ruhi ke replies lautaane to Abhi ne pucha,

“What do you think? What’s your opinion?”

Navina: “I have nothing to say regarding her answers. It concerns only you. I do not have to interfere in this. What I have to say is regarding your feelings about her and the love you had for her 25 years ago, jaise ke aap ne kaha ke ab aap ke dil mein wo purana wale pyar ka feeling ab nahin baaki raha.”

Abhi baith gaya aur Navina ko baithne ko kaha aur dilchaspi se ussko sunne ke liye tayyaar hua, Abhi jaanna chahta tha ke Navina ko ab usske feelings ke baare mein kia kehna hai. Navina ek bahot intelligent aurat thi, lecturer thi aur wo sahi opinion de sakti thi Abhi ne socha iss liye usski jawaab Abhi ke liye important tha.

Navina ne pehe Abhi ko muskuraate hue dekha aur kaha,

“Aap kyun ek student ki tarah aise baithne lage jaise mujhe koyi lecture deni hai ab?!”

Abhi: “Ari lecturer sahiba, abhi main ek student hi hoon aap se lessons lena hai mujhe aap mujhe wo lesson do nah main bataab hoon aap ki rae jaanne ke liye!”

Navina ne hansste hue kaha,

“Kuch khaas nahin kehna hai mujhe, buss Ruhi ke replies regarding aap ki diaries ke jawaab mein ussne aap ko wo sab bata diya jo aap jaanna chahte the. Aap ko santushti praapt hue usski replies padh kar, kyunke aap ke dil ke andar ek ghussa tha uske liye, ek naraazgi thi itne saalon se kyunke jiss waqt ussko aap ka sahara banna chahiye tha ussne aap ko akela aur tanha chorr diya tha… aur ab jab aap ne padha ke ussko tab aap ke pyar ke baare mein yakeen hua tab aap jaa chuke the usski life se, iss se aap ko Khushi hui kyunke ussko pachtaawa hua, yahan aap ki jeet hui aur usski haar, to aap ko apni jeet par Khushi hui hai. Ruhi ne sab saaf saaf bata diya aap ko ke jab aap chale gaye jab ussne aap ko kho diya tha tab ussko pachtawa hua, kyunke ussko foreign jaane aur amir desh mein ghumne ki ziada khwahish thi aap ke pyar ko ussne secondary samjha tha uss amit ke badle, unn sab ka ghussa tha aap mein aur Ruhi ki replies paakar aap ko acha laga ke ussne wo nahin paaya aur nah hi aap ko paaya…. Aap ne Ruhi se ek badla liya ussko apni diaries dekar, aur jab aap ko usska jawaab mila to aap ka badla pura hua kyunke aap ki jeet hui Ruhi ke replies ko padh kar. Ruhi ke replies mein sirf usski majbooriyan aur usska pachtawaa hai…. Jinn dinon aap uss se pyar karte the wo aap se pyar nahin karti thi, thodi bahot attraction thi ussko aap se, aap ne kiss vaghaira jab kiya tha ussko, ussko gale se lagaya tha wo sab usske liye ek naya Anubhav tha iss liye shaayd enjoy kar rahi thi kyunke real life mein uskso wo sab mauka nahin mila tha kabhi….

Mehboob aur apni maa ki kehne par aap ke close hone to lagi thi, phir bhi pyar ka ehsaas ussko tab hua jiss din aap usski chachi ke ghaar gaye the aur Shweta ne uss par chillaayi thi… tab ussko laga tha ke ussne kia khoya jab ek bachi ko wo ehsaas ho gaya tha aur ussko nahin….. Aap ki love story mein pyar aap ka tha, pyar aap karte the paagalon ki tarah Ruhi se, tab pyar karte the jab wo aap ke saamne thi, jab aap ussko dekh rahe the usski adaaon se, usski jism ki kushbhoo se, usske baal se usski muskurahat se, uss se….. magar Ruhi ne aap se kab pyar kiya? Jab aap chale gaye tab? Tab aap kahan the usske paas? To kaun sa pyar kiya ussne aap se? aap ki parchaayin se? huh? Aap ki yaadon se? aap to the nahin? Aap ko chhuh bhi nahin sakti? Aap ko feel bhi nahin kar sakti thi?

Magar jab aap uss se pyar karte the, aap ussko, usski wajood ko, usski jism ko usski har ek chizz se pyar karte the… iss liye mere khayal se Ruhi ka pyar ek sapna jaisa tha, asli nahin tha… ek khwab tha usska pyar, aap ka pyar tab real tha….. aur aap ko usske, inn replies ko padh kar yeh pata chal gaya ke wo aap se nahin aap ke parchaayin se pyar karti rahi 25 saalon tak aap se nahin…. Aap ko pata chal gaya ke Ruhi ne aap ke uss pyar ke naam ke sahare se apne parents se badla liya, aap ke pyar ko utilise kiya Ruhi ne apne maa aur Mehboob aur manoj se badla lene ke liye…

Aap samajh gaye ke Ruhi ne aap ke pyar ko sif istemaal kiya aap se sach mein pyar kabhi kiya hi nahin…. Aap ka pyar ek zarya tha Ruhi ke liye apne uss ghutan wali life se nikalne ke liye, jab se ussne Shweta ko janam diya tha tabse lekar aap ke jaane tak Ruhi apni maa aur Mehboob ke niche dabbi rahi… ussko unn dinon se bachne ki aur door bhaagne ka koyi raasta hi nahin mila kabhi, ek mauka mila tha wo the aap aur aap ka pyar…..

Ruhi intelligent hai… Shweta ki maa hai, agar Shweta itni intelligent hai to usski maa bhi hogi nah? Ruhi ne bada game khela aap ke pyar ko istemaal karte hue…. Magar ussko yeh nahin pata tha ke uss khel mein wo aap ko kabhi nahin paegi, ussko pehle se hi pata tha ke ussne aap ko kho diya jiss din manoj ne aap ko ghar se nikala tha, tabhi ussko wo sunehra mauka mikla apni bhadaas nikaalne ke liye… wohi sabse bada mauka tha Ruhi ke liye aap ke uss beizzatti ki aur aap ke pyar ko istemaal karte hue apni khud ki ghuttan aur dabaao se nikalne ki…. Ruhi ne wohi kiya….. agar Ruhi ko aap se sacha pyar hota to ussne aap ko contact kiya hota…ussne aap ko ek phone to kiya hota phone lagne ke baad jabke ussne directory mein aap ka naam dekha tha, ek khat to likha hota aap ko ussne…..

Magar yeh sab nahin kiya kyunke ek to aap ko shakal dikhaane ki himmat nahin thi yeh ussne sahi likha hai, magar yeh nahin likha ke tab aap ke sath aajaati, shaadi kar leti aap se to apne ghar mein sabko wo uss tarah se itne saalon tak dominate nahin kar paati…..itne saalon tak ussne til til, pal pal, apni maa se, manoj se, Mehboob se apna badla liya….. sab aap ki pyar ko istemaal karte hue….. THAT’S IT! Period!”

Abhi hakka bakka reh gaya aur zor se seethe bajaya pheeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwww!!! Aur kaha,

“That was a great lecture indeed lecturer Sahiba ppppfffffff!!!”

Navina chhup baith gayi Abhi ke expressions ko dekhte hue ke kahin ussko bura to nahin laga ke ussne Ruhi ke baare mein itna kuch keh diya.

Aur Abhi ne kaha,

“Aur main ne apna bhadaas nikala aaj uss se usski replies aur apne diaries wapas lekar nah? mera bhi bhadaas nikal gaya once jab ussko disries de diya, wo saare khattaapan jo tha itne saalon se sab mit gaye jab ussne sab padh liya, jab main ussko yeh bataane mein kaamyaab hua ke main usske liye kitna kuch jhela tha kitna roya tha etc… mujhe yehi sab pata karaana tha ussko aur aaj sab kar diya to mera bhi bhadaas nikal gaya aisa hi hai nah?!”

Navina: “Mujhko to aisa hi lag raha hai varna aap yeh nah kehte ke ab aap ke dil mein usske liye wo pehle wala feelings baaki nahin rahe!”
Abhi: “main tumhare baton mein se iss baat se bilkool sehmat hoon ke Ruhi ne apni family walon se badla lene ke liye mere pyar aur beizat hone ka faeda uthaya, istemaal kiya uss haalaat ko…. Ussko behtareen mauka mil gaya tha ab uthne ke liye upar jaane ke liye sabke nazron mein upar uthne ke liye wohi mauka tha Ruhi ke liye aur ussne kia khub use kiya uss din ko, 5th January 1986 ko, wah!! Politics kar sakti thi Ruhi to hai nah?!”

Navina: “Full politician hai, honshiyaar hai aap ko askar kehti rehti thi aap bahot tez ho, bahot honshiyaar ho, shayad aap ke hi peintre istemaal kiya ussne bhi hehehehe!”

Abhi: “So? Now what?!”

Navina: “Mujhse kyun puch rahe ho aap? Aur haan aap ko aur iss liye bhi usske liye wo wala pyar nahin feel ho raha kyunke aap ke paas ab usski beti jo hai… same genes, same smell which you loved so much, same body curves which you adored… you have her with you for past 7 years then how will you feel the same for Ruhi now when she is older and you have her younger version with you today? This is another great reason I believe! You lucky man Abhi, my lucky husband….. in fact YOU ARE A VERY LUCKY PERSON REALLY YOU ARE!! THINK ABOUT IT, WHEN YOU LOST RUHI YOU GOT ME, YOU GOT THE GARAGE BACK, YOU GOT GREAT OFFERS FOR YOUR JOB, YOU GOT LAND FROM THE GOVT, YOU GOT OFFERS FROM JAPAN, LATELY YOU GOT SHWETA…. AN YOU ARE LUCKY TO HAVE ME WHO AGREE THAT YOU GET MARRIED TO SHWETA, AND YOU ALSO GOT A DAUGHTER…. ARE YOU NOT A VERY LUCKY PEPRSON ABHI??”

Abhi uth kar Navina ke paas gaya ussko bade zor se baahon mein bharra aur kiss kiya Navina ko, khub pyar kiya ussko aur donon ek dusre ke baahon mein quaid rahe bahot der tak.

To be continued…..
 
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