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Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

Casinar

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Hmmmm
Very good update
And very well written also....

Maine pahle bhi kaha hai....adhikta har chij ki buri hoti hai......phir chahe wo.achchai hee kyo na ho......
Navina ki achchaiya hee use ak din Abhi se dur na kar de.....kyoki agar abhi Shweta ko apnata hai....to phir Ruhi ko kyo nahi.....
OR agar dono ko saath le leta hai....to Navina unn sab se pichad jayegi.....


Dusri baat....Abhi ka reaction to thik tha lekin uski baate doubtful thi.....
Navina ke Shweta se shaadi waali baat par Abhi ne khud ka koi decision nahi bataya....jise use karni hai ya nahi karni ya nahi karega.....
Use bas ye dikkat hai ki agar Ruhi ko pata chal to....matlab wo khud iss ke baare mai sochne sakta hai....

Obviously Shweta to khushi se paagal ho jaayegi...Khushi se....


HA Abhi kitne saalo se ye ichcha apne mann me paale hue tha ki kabhi wo Ruhi ko diaries dene paayega or kya kabhi unn diaries ko Ruhi padh paayegi....
Lekin usne Ruhi ko diaries diye bhi or Ruhi ne use padha bhi...OR replies bhi kar rahi hai....
Dono par kaafi bada bojh ya yun kahe ki khwahish thi ki bas ak bar apna apna dard ak dusre ko bata sake...ab kaafi free feel kiya hoga....


YE baat bhi hai ki agar uss samay hee Ruhi ne sab kuch Abhi ko bata diya hota to aaj shayad bahut kuch alag hota..

Sahi kaha kis muh se Abhi ka sanam karti....halanki Abhi us se iss baare mai kuch nahi kahta lekin uska khud ka jameer isme uska saath nahi deta.....

Ruhi ne manoj ko jo kaha or jiss time or situation me kaha....bilkul perfect tha....May be isi se use apni galati samajh aayi ho...



Ruhi ki maa or mahboob ko unke karmo ki saja mil hee gayi....khud unki zindagi hee unki dushman ban gayi....
Kuch baate kabhi bhulayi nahi jaati....khas kar wo jo dil par lagi ho ya jisse dil tuta ho...

Ruhi ne bilkul sahi kaha ki wo unhe kabhi maaf nahi kar sakti or late bhi to kaise uski hee nahi Abhi or kuch had tak Shweta ki life ko spoil karne mai un 2 ha haath hai.....

Ab Shweta ka jikar aaya hai.....

Khair dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai
Anyways
Very good update
Thanks....

bahot bahot shukriya Vikram bhai
Dusri baat....Abhi ka reaction to thik tha lekin uski baate doubtful thi.....
Navina ke Shweta se shaadi waali baat par Abhi ne khud ka koi decision nahi bataya....jise use karni hai ya nahi karni ya nahi karega.....
Use bas ye dikkat hai ki agar Ruhi ko pata chal to....matlab wo khud iss ke baare mai sochne sakta hai....
yaad hai ek din Abhi ne Shweta se kaha tha ke shadi wo nah uss se nah Ruhi se kabhi karega kyunke wo Navina ko dukh nahin dena chahta? issi liye abhi khamosh tha :D

Obviously Shweta to khushi se paagal ho jaayegi...Khushi se....
beshak :D

HA Abhi kitne saalo se ye ichcha apne mann me paale hue tha ki kabhi wo Ruhi ko diaries dene paayega or kya kabhi unn diaries ko Ruhi padh paayegi....
Lekin usne Ruhi ko diaries diye bhi or Ruhi ne use padha bhi...OR replies bhi kar rahi hai....
Dono par kaafi bada bojh ya yun kahe ki khwahish thi ki bas ak bar apna apna dard ak dusre ko bata sake...ab kaafi free feel kiya hoga....
haan abhi ne to yahan tak kaha tha ke marne se pehle ussko diaries Ruhi tak pahunchana chahiye ek din.... bhari bojh tha uske liye wo...

YE baat bhi hai ki agar uss samay hee Ruhi ne sab kuch Abhi ko bata diya hota to aaj shayad bahut kuch alag hota..
100 % alag baat hoti tab to

Sahi kaha kis muh se Abhi ka sanam karti....halanki Abhi us se iss baare mai kuch nahi kahta lekin uska khud ka jameer isme uska saath nahi deta.....

Ruhi ne manoj ko jo kaha or jiss time or situation me kaha....bilkul perfect tha....May be isi se use apni galati samajh aayi ho...
RIGHT


Ruhi ne bilkul sahi kaha ki wo unhe kabhi maaf nahi kar sakti or late bhi to kaise uski hee nahi Abhi or kuch had tak Shweta ki life ko spoil karne mai un 2 ha haath hai.....

Ab Shweta ka jikar aaya hai.....
aage jo hoga aap ko jhatka lag sakta hai bhai :D
thanks loads vikram bhai
 

Casinar

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I got a little shock thinking about the new feelings coming to Abhi's mind or what he is thinking, I agree that Ruhi is not the same and Abhi too has changed now but love never changes and love always remains until the time of death. According to me, Abhi will soon realize this. There is a difference between love and attraction and the biggest thing is Abhi's first love is Ruhi and I don't think the value of first love should be explained to you. I don't know why it hurts when it comes to Ruhi.
Navina is right that those diaries should not be burnt and Abhi should marry Shweta. Now waiting for Navina's opinion.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...

heartfelt thanks for the appreciative review Aakash bro
 

Casinar

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Hmmmm
Good update

Finally Ruhi ko Shweta ke baare mai bataya hee ya Abhi ne.....sab kuch to nahi lekin kaafi

Halanki Ruhi ko kuch kuch shak hua....lekin abhi ek Ruhi ka dhyaan hota diya uss taraf se....
Lekin ladies log kaafi tez hoti hai aise maamle mai....

Abhi Ruhi ki bimaari ka ilawa karwa sakta hai....it least use aisa hee lagta hai....OR phir Abhi paise wala bhi to hai....wo Ruhi ko ilaz ke liye foreign bhi le jaa skata hai.....

Ak baat thi.....kuch character hai jinka dubara se jikar nahi aaya hai story mai.....

Jaise most important NAINA......phir RAHIMA or FARZINA.....



Khair dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai
Anyways
Good update
Thanks......

tehe dil se dhanyawaad Vikram bhai review ke liye

jinn characters ke baare mein aap ne mention kiya unnke roles ziada to hai nahin magar last update mein sabke baare mein kuch nah kuch zaroor bataya jaega
 

Casinar

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Woooooowww
Very good update
Well written and described

Bahut khoon Ruhi ki situation ka counter ak hee bar mai de diya.....
OR ak alag hee point of view se socha hai....Inn sab ko....brilliant

Abhi bas itna hee kahunga.....

Baaki ka reply baaki readers ke comment ke baad dunga......

Anyways
Thanks

bahot shukriya bhai rarely aap last update tak reach ho jaate ho... aaj reach ho gaye lastupdate tak.... haan par aap ka opinion baaki hai abhi :D weise jo aa kahoge shayad Navina abhi ko wohi sab kahegi ere khayaal se :D
 
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Casinar

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Pyar kabhi marrta nahin aisa suna hai aksar.
Magar main kehta hoon ke marrta hai. Iss kahani se nahin apni khud ki experience se kehta hoon.
Chalo main apni reasons deta hoon kyun aur kaise marrta hai pyar bhi.
Samajh lo kissi se behad pyar hai aur bichadna par gaya.
Bichadne k baad koyi aur life mein aya, uss se pyar hua, usske saath shadi kiye bache ho gaye aur 25 saal baad wo dikhi jiss se bichad gaye the to kia jisske saath 25 saal tak pyar kiya, jiya usske saath wo wala pyar important hota hai ya jiss se bichad gaye the 25 saal pehle wo pyar rehta hai? Kabhi nahin rehta bhai wo marr jata hai completely DEAD. kyunke bich mein jo 25 saal gujare gaye shadi ki hui wife k saath wo uss purane bichde hue pyar ko full cover kar deta hai, daffna deta hai old wale pyar ko.
Bilkool jaise ek zakham hota hai. Purane zakham mit jaate hein, marr jaate hein, naya skin, naya flesh jam jaata hai uss zakham par....
Haan pyar ki baat kare to YAADEIN reh jaate hein. Kabhi wo yaadein tadpa jaate hein magar wo temporary hota hai.
Baat kare Abhi ki to bilkool sahi feelings aya ussko. Pyar hamdardi mein tabdil ho gaya. Rishta nahin tod sakta sahi hai, hamdardi jo baaki reh gaya Ruhi k liye iss liye ek rishta baaki rahega. Magar wo 25 saal wala pyar wapas kabhi aega hi nahin. Abhi k case mein iss liye nahin aega kyunke wohi pyar Abhi ko Shweta se jo mil gaya hai....
Shayad agar 7 saal pehle shweta ki jaga Ruhi mili hoti tab Abhi Ruhi se dobara wo old wala pyar karta ta wapas feel karta.
Magar ab kyunke ek to Navina hai jisske saath wo 25 saal saath jo raha hai. Phir 7 saalon se Shweta ka pyar mila jiss mein Abhi ko Ruhi milta hai, air upar se Aruhi ka pyar mil gaya jo ek beti ke taraf se Abhi ko milna chahiye tha. To bilkool sahi feelings arahe hein Abhi ko ke Ruhi k liye ab usske dil mein wo 25 saal pehle wala pyar baaki nahin raha.
Abhi ko ye bhi lag raha hoga Ruhi ke replies ko padh kar ke ussne Abhi pyar tab kiya jab wo chala gaya tab. Ruhi ne Abhi ki yaadon se pyar kiya. Hab Abhi tha tab to ussko use kiya Mehboob aur usski maa ke liye, tab to Abhi ko dukh aur dard diya tha, tab to naatak bhi kiya tha, tab to yeh bhi nahin bataya tha ke usski ek beti thi..... jhoot jhoot jhoot tha 25 saal pehle. .... abhi ne sahi kaha ke Ruhi ne Abhi ke pyar ko istemaal karke apne parents ko jawaab diya. Ruhi ke liye Abhi ka pyar ek jarya bana Ruhi ko apnon ko sabak dene ke liye. Ruhi ne buss Abhi ke pyar ka istemaal kiya apni personal use ke liye. Haan tab ussko Abhi ka pyar dikha aur wo samjhi ke ussne kia khoya. But it was too late.
Mere khayaal se Abhi ke feelings ghalat nahin hai. Aisa hi hona chahiye tha.
Wonderful and very interesting update hai bhai. Thanks.

are wah Indian bhai aap bi itni achi review likh dete ho? wow
tehe dil se aap ka shukriya yaar :happy:
aap ka opinion se kaafi had tak agree karta hoon indian bhai
 

Casinar

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Mujhe shak tha aisa hoga... main soch raha k kahin Abhi ug nahin jaega ab. Kyunke 3 log hai filhaal usske life mein jiss se ussko bharpur pyar mil raha hai, to 25 saal purana jakham ussko khushi nahin gum dega aisa main ne socha tha.
Magar Abhi ko wo pyar wala feeling marrte dikgaayi diya.
Hota hoga aisa bhi mere khayal se.

Appreciate karne ke liye bahut dhanyawaad Husein bhai
 

Casinar

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Very nice and beautiful update casinar ji. Loved it.
I am 100% sure that Ruhi has already by now guessed that Abhi and Shweta are together past 7 years. I can bet on that. She is a woman and wonen's mind works fast on such things.
The way Abhi was reluctant to answer, his blush and reactions must hv Ruhi guessed all but she also preferred not to embarass Abhi, still she asked eithet Ruhi did not leave the doc because of Abhi. That is enough to understand what is going into Ruhi's mind.
Above all Abhi mentioned that she herself said that Shweta loves him a lot. Indirectly Abhi also already has told her and Ruhi knows it now that Abhi and Ruhi are together.
Great update.

thanks very very much for the lovely appreciation amity ear :love:
 
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