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Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

Casinar

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both update 79 and 74 are super fantastic updates.
very intense, strong, bold updates. I really enjoyed the read casinar ji.
And almost cried reading the torments Ruhi had been through for the past 25 years.
Casinar ji I tend to place my heartfelt thanks for writing such a mega update only regarding Ruhi and her words.
you have written over 6500 words :shocked : :faint: am grateful to you for giving importance to the woes of a lady like Ruhi, showing all her troubles and pains she went through.
Ruhi said all that she had concealed inside her all these days and today was high time she reveals all and she did.... still she has to say things regarding her mother and Mehboob she has written.
I really felt hurt and pained reading her troubles and felt very angry for the mother she has had....
thanks again casinar ji, I really am now speechless..... you have written ALL we are left with no words to say
:applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause:

Thanks very very much for the lovely appreciation Amity ear :love:
 

Casinar

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Hmmmm
Good update.....

Finally Ruhi ne diaries padh liya....or wo unn sab ka reply bhi kar rahi hai....good....

Uss samay ke Abhi ki situation ko.....Abhi ki feeling ko or uski Bechaini ko samajh sabhi jaante hai.....
OR mai hee nahi lagbhag sabhi readers ne isse kaafi achche se describe bhi kiya tha....lr samjha tha....OR isi baat ke liye kaafi jyada replies bhi diye the....

Ab baat kare Abhi ki uss situation ko Ruhi ke point of view se dekhne ki to....maine kuch hadd tak to ise bata diya tha....

Jaisa ki maine pichle kuch comment mai kaha tha ki Ruhi unn diaries ke jariye....25 saal pahle ka zamana jee kar aayi hai.....

Beshak use yaad hoga or usne hazaaro baar socha bhi hoga ki usne kya kya kiya Abhi ke saath.....
Lekin use jo yaad hoga wo uss say ke baad ka hee hoga jab ki abhi or uski bonding start hui thi.....

Lekin us se pahle.....Jo abhi ki harkate thi....ya use dekhne ki Bechaini or uski chahat ya phir Ruhi ko ak jhalak dekhne ka pagal pan....wo Ruhi ko jyada yaad na hoga....OR hoga to bhi dhundla dhundla.....

Jise ki inn diaries ne puri tarah refresh kar diya.....OR kuch baatein to khud Ruhi bhi nahi jaanti thi....

Jaisi ki first time Abhi ka uss aangan mai aana....pr Ruhi ka naam sunkar hee uski taraf attracte ho jana....
Uski pahli jhalak dekhna.....ya phir Ruhi use notice kar rahi hai ya nahi....

Ye saari chije Ruhi ko pata nhi thi....jise ki usne diaries se jana....

Itne arse mai....Ruhi ka ghar pura badal gaya hai... unn diaries mai Ruhi ko Pana purana ghar bhi dikha...
OR wo bhi har ak chij ke saath....

Good morning ko lekar Ruhi ka jawaab ak dum sahi tha....aaj bhi gaanvo mai ya pichle ilaako mai.....yanha tak ki shamrock mai bhi bahut se gharon mai ak dusre ko good morning.....good afternoon ya night kahne ka koi chalana nahi hai.....
Waise dekha jaaye to ye ak achchi aadat hai... lekin hai to formality hee.....

Khair dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai....
Anyways
Good update
Thanks.....

tehe dil se dhanyawaad appreciation ke liye Vikram bhai
 

Casinar

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Hmmmm
Good update.....

Finally Ruhi ne diaries padh liya....or wo unn sab ka reply bhi kar rahi hai....good....

Uss samay ke Abhi ki situation ko.....Abhi ki feeling ko or uski Bechaini ko samajh sabhi jaante hai.....
OR mai hee nahi lagbhag sabhi readers ne isse kaafi achche se describe bhi kiya tha....lr samjha tha....OR isi baat ke liye kaafi jyada replies bhi diye the....

Ab baat kare Abhi ki uss situation ko Ruhi ke point of view se dekhne ki to....maine kuch hadd tak to ise bata diya tha....

Jaisa ki maine pichle kuch comment mai kaha tha ki Ruhi unn diaries ke jariye....25 saal pahle ka zamana jee kar aayi hai.....

Beshak use yaad hoga or usne hazaaro baar socha bhi hoga ki usne kya kya kiya Abhi ke saath.....
Lekin use jo yaad hoga wo uss say ke baad ka hee hoga jab ki abhi or uski bonding start hui thi.....

Lekin us se pahle.....Jo abhi ki harkate thi....ya use dekhne ki Bechaini or uski chahat ya phir Ruhi ko ak jhalak dekhne ka pagal pan....wo Ruhi ko jyada yaad na hoga....OR hoga to bhi dhundla dhundla.....

Jise ki inn diaries ne puri tarah refresh kar diya.....OR kuch baatein to khud Ruhi bhi nahi jaanti thi....

Jaisi ki first time Abhi ka uss aangan mai aana....pr Ruhi ka naam sunkar hee uski taraf attracte ho jana....
Uski pahli jhalak dekhna.....ya phir Ruhi use notice kar rahi hai ya nahi....

Ye saari chije Ruhi ko pata nhi thi....jise ki usne diaries se jana....

Itne arse mai....Ruhi ka ghar pura badal gaya hai... unn diaries mai Ruhi ko Pana purana ghar bhi dikha...
OR wo bhi har ak chij ke saath....

Good morning ko lekar Ruhi ka jawaab ak dum sahi tha....aaj bhi gaanvo mai ya pichle ilaako mai.....yanha tak ki shamrock mai bhi bahut se gharon mai ak dusre ko good morning.....good afternoon ya night kahne ka koi chalana nahi hai.....
Waise dekha jaaye to ye ak achchi aadat hai... lekin hai to formality hee.....

Khair dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai....
Anyways
Good update
Thanks.....

tehe dil se dhanyawaad appreciation ke liye Vikram bhai
 

Casinar

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Woooooowww
So this is the update......
Very beautiful and brilliant update......
Very well written and described......


Iss update ki sabse khaas baat jo hai or jo mujhe sabse jyada pasand aayi hai.....
Wo hai Ruhi ke dwara kahe gaye last lines.....

WAQT KARTA JO WAFA.................

Ruhi ki puri takleef pure dard or dukh ki kahani inn Chand lines ne kaha di.....uski mazburi or bebasi.....

Very extremely emotional and heart touching.....

Iske liye mere pass bhi kuch hai....Jo ki mai likhna chahta hu.....ak gana mera kaafi favourite hai.......uski 2 lines.....

वक़्त ने किया क्या हंसीं सितम
तुम रहे न तुम हम रहे न हम
वक़्त ने किया.

बेक़रार दिल इस तरह मिले
जिस तरह कभी हम जुदा न थे
बेक़रार दिल इस तरह मिले
जिस तरह कभी हम जुदा न थे
तुम भी खो गए, हम भी खो गए
एक राह पर चलके दो क़दम...

वक़्त ने किया क्या हंसीं सितम
तुम रहे न तुम हम रहे न हम
वक़्त ने किया....

Ha to ab baat kat3 baaki chijo ki to.....ab jabki hame Ruhi ki real situation ka pata chal gaya hai to ye kahna sahi hoga ki ham uss samay Ruhi ne aisa sab kyo kaha ya aisa wierd react kiya tha aisa kyo kiya tha....

Ha lekin inn sab par ak chij bhaaripan hai....OR wo ye hai....
Jaisa ki maine hamesha kehta hu.....ki baat karne se duniya ka bade se bade masle ka hal mil sakta hai.....
Agar Ruhi ne uss waqt kuch himmat kar Abi ko apni situation bataayi hoti to I'm sure aaj situation alag hoti...
Kyoki Abhi to use kisi bhi situation mai accept kar raha tha na....

Khair dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai
Anyways
Very good update
Thanks

bahot shukriya Vikram bhai.... hmm waqt word par aise kai gaane hein
aap ke choice bhi behtareen hote hein bhai
 

Casinar

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Dhamekedaar update hai bidu.
Bahut majbut aur jabardast likha hai aap ne.
Ruhi ki unn dinon k baatein jo kissi ko bhi pata nahin tha. Ye sab Ruhi ko hi batana tha kyunke usske taraf se koyi bhi khulassa kabhi hua hi nahin tha. Aaj pata chal raha hai. Ussne Shweta se nafrat ho gayi thi. Haan maanta hai apun aisa hota hai. Ruhi ko Shweta ki vajah se taane sunne ko milte the log ussko hate karte the ke bin bhaayi maa ban gayi to usske dil mein Shweta k liye nafrat si hi gayi.... ya aisa bhi keh kakte hein ke uss se jiada lagao nahin hone ke liye bhi Ruhi Shweta se doorie rakhti thi. Magar bachi ko to feel hua hoga na k Ruhi uss se pyar nahin karti aur baad me jab shweta ko pata chala hoga k wo usski maa hai tab usska dil kitna dukha hoga k Ruhi usski maa hokar bhi uss se bachpan mein nafrat karti thi.
Fantastic update bidu.
tehe dil se dhanyawaad king bhai
 
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